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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 5월 30일 금요일 at 오전 10:33:22

Artist: BRIGHT
Title: Ichinen Nikagetsu Hatsuka
BPM: 119
Filesize: 21210kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.92 stars, 512 notes)
  2. TaMul's Normal (2.62 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Zzz's Hard (4.42 stars, 243 notes)


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나중에 모딩해드릴테니까

혹시 제가 안오면 불러주세요
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Jehyeon wrote:

나중에 모딩해드릴테니까

혹시 제가 안오면 불러주세요
이것도 모딩해야지 ㄷ
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Jehyeon wrote:

나중에 모딩해드릴테니까

혹시 제가 안오면 불러주세요
네~ 알겟습니다~
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[Insane]
00:20:779 (1,2,3) - 추천 :arrow:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1657723
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5eania wrote:

[Insane]
00:20:779 (1,2,3) - 추천 :arrow:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1657723
Thanks ~ 음 하지만 모라도 조금이라도 잡아주시지 ㅋㅋ ㅠ
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[General]

1. 태그에 게스트 매퍼이름과 출처인 "TaMul [_Zzz_] sao sword art online lizbeth kirito mad bilibili" 를 추가해주세요
2. 프리뷰 타임 설정을 00:39:687 - 이곳으로 하는게 어떠신가요
3. Insane 난이도만 letterbox 체크가 되어있네요 체크 해제바랍니다

[TaMul's Normal]

OD -1 가장 쉬운 난이도같은데 어려울수 있으니 내리시는걸 추천드립니다.

00:44:477 (1,2) - 콤보를 바꾸는게 맞아보입니다
00:54:309 (1) - 여기에는 뉴콤이 필요 없을듯요
01:05:149 (5) - 여기에 뉴콤추가요 보컬 시작부분이기 때문 피니쉬도 강조하실수 있음요
01:13:216 (1,1) - 초보자가 치기에는 너무 적합하지 않습니다. 01:15:233 (1) - 이 노트를 지우고 스피너를 01:15:233 - 여기까지 넣는것이 좋아보입니다.
01:18:258 (1) - 왜 노트가 있는지는 모르겠습니다. 그냥 지우시고 01:15:359 - 여기에 브레이크 타임 넣는게 어떠신가요
01:24:813 - 이곳에 노멀 샘플셋을 사용하셨는데 어색하네요
01:26:830 - ^
01:28:846 - ^
01:48:258 (1,2,3) - 이상한 리듬이네요 보컬하고도 맞지 않는것같아요 차라리 이런 리듬이 나은듯요 패턴은 님이 알아서 하시고 리듬만 참고하세요 :arrow:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661383
01:59:098 (1) - 제안입니다만 스피너말고 긴 슬라로 하나 만드시는게 어떤가요
02:01:115 - 여기 보컬을 빼먹으신건가요 일부러 안넣으신건가요? 여기에 노트 추가하는게 좋을듯요
02:15:737 - 피니쉬 추가
02:48:006 (4) - 점프인가요? 노멀인데 점프가 있는건 아닌것 같네요 Ctrl + g 하세요

[Zzz's Hard]

00:21:157 (6) - Ctrl + g 하시는게 어떠신가요 치기에도 편할것같은데
00:54:309 (3) - 박자가 어색하네요 1/2 슬라로 반복을 추가하시거나 1/2 슬라 만드신 후 00:54:813 - 여기에 노트를 추가해주시길 바랍니다.
01:07:166 (7) - 머리부분 피니쉬 추가

집을건 없지만. 하나는 짚고 넘어가야 할게 있네요. 전에는 이런 느낌이 안들었었는데 요세 쿨쿨님 하드난이도가 좀 부정확한 점프가 많이 보였고 하드에 적합하지 않는 패턴들도 눈에 많이 띄었습니다. 조만간 맵 손질 하셔야할것같네요

[Insane]

OD -1 < 느린곡이기도 하니.. 내려도 괞찮을듯요

00:27:712 (4) - 이건 삭재가 나을듯요
00:30:863 (1,2) - 디스턴스 줄이시는걸 추천합니다. 너무 멀어요
00:32:376 (6,1) - 어느 소리에 맞춘건지 모르겠네요 보컬에 맞추는걸 추천드려요
00:50:527 (5) - Ctrl + g
00:56:830 - 휘슬을 제거해주세요 딱히 안들어가도 될거같아요
01:04:897 - ^
01:30:989 (1) - 뉴콤제거하세요 적합하지 않습니다.

불필요한 키아이타임이 많은것같고 하드랑 비교했을때 별 차이 안나는듯 합니다.
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[Insane]

OD -1 < 느린곡이기도 하니.. 내려도 괞찮을듯요

00:27:712 (4) - fix
00:30:863 (1,2) - fix
00:32:376 (6,1) - fix
00:50:527 (5) - fix 확실히 저렇게 바꾸는게 훨씬 하기가 편하네여~~
00:56:830 - fix
01:04:897 - fix
01:30:989 (1) - fix
불필요한 키아이타임이 많은것같고 하드랑 비교했을때 별 차이 안나는듯 합니다.[/quote]

모딩 감사드림니다~
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HabiHolic wrote:

[TaMul's Normal]

OD -1 가장 쉬운 난이도같은데 어려울수 있으니 내리시는걸 추천드립니다. ok

00:44:477 (1,2) - 콤보를 바꾸는게 맞아보입니다 fixed!
00:54:309 (1) - 여기에는 뉴콤이 필요 없을듯요 다른 보컬 소리 있잖아요 코러스..라고해야되나..?
01:05:149 (5) - 여기에 뉴콤추가요 보컬 시작부분이기 때문 피니쉬도 강조하실수 있음요 no
01:13:216 (1,1) - 초보자가 치기에는 너무 적합하지 않습니다. 01:15:233 (1) - 이 노트를 지우고 스피너를 01:15:233 - 여기까지 넣는것이 좋아보입니다. 랭크맵 중에 이런 리듬으로 있는 맵이 있습니다. 무엇보다 스핀 정중앙에 노트를 놓았으니 괜찮다고봅니다
01:18:258 (1) - 왜 노트가 있는지는 모르겠습니다. 그냥 지우시고 01:15:359 - 여기에 브레이크 타임 넣는게 어떠신가요 혼또와~하는 부분 있잖아요 :P
01:24:813 - 이곳에 노멀 샘플셋을 사용하셨는데 어색하네요
01:26:830 - ^
01:28:846 - ^ 어색하지 않습니다. 클랩 소리가 훤히 들리는 걸요
01:48:258 (1,2,3) - 이상한 리듬이네요 보컬하고도 맞지 않는것같아요 차라리 이런 리듬이 나은듯요 패턴은 님이 알아서 하시고 리듬만 참고하세요 :arrow:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661383 ...? 맞는데요?
01:59:098 (1) - 제안입니다만 스피너말고 긴 슬라로 하나 만드시는게 어떤가요 싫어요~ :P
02:01:115 - 여기 보컬을 빼먹으신건가요 일부러 안넣으신건가요? 여기에 노트 추가하는게 좋을듯요 스핀 앞 리듬과 동일화 시켰습니다.
02:15:737 - 피니쉬 추가 ok
02:48:006 (4) - 점프인가요? 노멀인데 점프가 있는건 아닌것 같네요 Ctrl + g 하세요 ㄴㄴ 1.4정도는 괜찮습니다 노말이라고 점프를 넣지 말라는 법은 없습니다
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: moe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 21535
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ichinen Nikagetsu Hatsuka
TitleUnicode:Ichinen Nikagetsu Hatsuka
Artist:BRIGHT
ArtistUnicode:BRIGHT
Creator:[ Kuro Usagi ]
Version:TaMul's Normal
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:431610
BeatmapSetID:176937

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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52,56,116577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,117082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,80,118594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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500,156,126409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,168,127670,6,0,P|232:108|128:68,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,128678,2,0,P|36:132|40:208,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,236,129435,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,248,129687,6,0,P|176:240|244:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,130695,2,0,P|400:272|480:248,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,140,131704,2,0,P|456:120|284:188,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,133216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,324,133720,6,0,P|92:324|0:176,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,135233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,28,135737,2,0,P|196:28|288:176,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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504,120,140779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,24,141283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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108,56,142796,2,0,P|108:104|64:160,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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  1. 00:38:678 (6) - 슬라끝부분 휘슬
  2. 00:44:729 (6) - 휘슬
  3. 00:48:510 (7) - 끝부분 휘슬
  4. 00:52:544 (6) - ^
  5. 01:00:611 (5) - ^
  6. 01:08:678 (5) - ^
    음..휘슬을 중간중간 잘 넣으셨는데 필요한 자리에만 없는것같아요..일부러 안넣으신건지 몰라서,,패스할게요
  7. 00:38:300 (5) - 강한비트가 슬라꼬리에 묻혀있기도 하고..박자도 뭔가 좀 애매하게 느껴지는 부분이에요. 차라리 (4)에 리버스를 하나넣고 이 슬라를 1/4박자 뒤로 빼는게 어울리는것 같아요
  8. 00:41:451 (2) - 별로 차이는 없지만 그냥 (1)처럼 굽혀주는게 예쁠꺼같아요
  9. 00:43:720 (5) - 앞뒤 디스때문에 살짝 애매한부분인것 같아요. 차라리 같게 만들어주거나 앞의 3연타를 (256|224)정도로 옮기는게 (5)~(1)이 자연스러울듯해요
  10. 00:45:989 (4,1,2,3) - 앞의 00:41:830 (3,1,2,3,4) - 얘들이랑 뉴콤 배치가 다른데 같게 해주는게 좋을것같아요
  11. 01:06:914 (6) - 솔직히 보컬로 봐서는 겹놋보단 점프가 어울리지 않을까요?
  12. 01:23:300 (1,1,1) - 문제는 없는 부분인데 그냥 개인적으로는 이런식의 리듬도 괜찮다고 생각해요 각 (2)노트들에 클랩,클랩,휘슬로..
  13. 01:47:502 (1) - 딱히 스핀이 필요한 자리는 아니라고 생각되는 부분이에요. 끝부분 불륨 30%슬라를 넣고 브래이크타임을 당기는것도 괜찮지 않을까요?
  14. 02:12:964 (3) - 앞 키아이의 이 리듬에는 다 휘슬이 들어갔는데 여기도 넣는게 좋을꺼같아요
  15. 02:27:838 (1) - 얘는 보컬따라 1/2슬라로 바꾸는게 좋을것같아요
  16. 02:52:166 (1) - 얘는 끝부분 소리가 들리는데 5%는 너무 낮지 않을까요?

음..저퀄모딩 죄송여 ㅋㅋ
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