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Sakamoto Maaya - Okaerinasai (tomatomerde Remix)

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Azer

CloudSplash16 wrote:



y-your mods are so good i assumed you were a bat

Hello, pro mappers =w=
All just suggestions, feel free to ignore them if they don't suit you.

[General (@Azer)]
  1. 02:59:221 - Waaa the combo colour is the same as the storyboard background colour, and it's making it difficult to see the objects. changed combo colors throughout the whole map and fixed this
  2. 01:08:766 - Does this inheriting section serve any purpose? If not, then remove it. RIP green bar
[Azer]
  1. 00:35:357 (1) - I don't think a new combo is necessary here for distinguishing the pattern. I think it'd be better to just remove it and keep combo consistent with musical phrasing. done
  2. 01:58:710 (5,6) - This doesn't really fit in with the smooth flow you have going in this section. Here's my suggestion: i think its fine as it is and in my eyes this wouldnt really fix the flowhttp://puu.sh/bQDNz/4dfce8751f.jpg
  3. 02:07:744 (2,3) - Just a suggestion, I don't really have a reason, except that I like this: http://puu.sh/bQDSp/66eac25eea.jpg yeaaaah no
  4. 03:24:363 - Add a circle here? I think triple fits with the music, and with the rest of your map.done, not sure wwhy there wasnt one here
Nice map and SB. Sorry if my mod is useless. it's been the most useful yet haha

[Update Status]
Azer - RLC - those - Frostmourne - 11t


those
Hey, thanks! There won't be any changes from me, but for future reference, the main importance of 00:51:380 (2) - is to maintain the spacing while placing it just at the right place to the right (similarly 00:45:244 (3) - ). 01:01:607 (3,1) - is a motif seen also at 03:53:255 (5,6) - and 04:50:528 (5,6) - ; jumps in one direction while keeping spacing on the next object in the same general direction.
11t

CloudSplash16 wrote:

02:59:221 - Waaa the combo colour is the same as the storyboard background colour, and it's making it difficult to see the objects.
Changed to a green bg instead. I liked the pink bg much better here, but I guess it can't be helped.

http://puu.sh/bRcns/7ce601cfe4.rar
Kyubey

Frostmourne wrote:

05:32:630 (6,7) - straight vertical/horisontal sliders are usually looking like... sliders from 2007? how about curving them a little?
05:36:550 (2,3) - here too
2014 doesn't allow linear sliders anymore?
I didn't say that, do not forget that mods are usually depends on opinions and i just showed my opinion about this, but apply/consider it or not — that is your decision.
RLC
fixed the hitsound iyasine pointed out
01:11:323 (1,2) - changed as suggested
01:22:232 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - i like how this plays currently :(

additionally, killed the spinner in my part that was at 05:27:857 - so that 11t has some more flexibility with storyboarding

thanks!

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Topic Starter
Azer



cannot update anything, ill try later

Azer wrote:

BSS is a box full of surprises, gets stuck at different places each and every day



everything but the sb up to date
69653863
morning guise
random mod because swag
please more quality maps like this!

[map]
  1. Azer
    1. 02:01:352 - add note here to gave out some variation to the pattern? you know, since previous patterns had like triplets and 1/2s only
    2. 04:16:778 (8,1) - idk but for me, if this got swapped (ctrl+g) it would play better since players assume these placement resembles triangle combo not back & forth combo
    3. 04:39:789 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I kinda question these tbh, what do you think if these got removed?
    4. 04:45:244 (1,2,3,4,5) - what if http://puu.sh/bTnAR.jpg try it!
  2. those
    1. 00:45:244 (3) - maybe 5 grid up right so it doesn't look too close
    2. 00:48:994 (6,7) - somehow plays better if combined to slider?
    3. 00:54:107 (2,3,4) - please unstack (2) it's pretty confusing since approach circle blends with bg
    4. 03:46:437 (6,1) - i'm afraid the repeat arrow might be covered by the hitburst
    5. 03:51:210 (2,3) - merge into a slider? would play better I guess
    6. 04:46:948 (1,2) - merge into 2/1 slider (long slider) so it would gave out better transition from calm break into this kiai?
    7. 05:00:073 (6,7) - swap place and see if it might play better?
    8. 05:01:948 (1) - try ctrl+g?
  3. RLC
    1. 01:16:778 (8) - what if you put it like this http://puu.sh/bTm8x.jpg looks better ain't it?!?!
    2. 02:41:153 (7) - maybe you meant sampleset:soft?
  4. Frostmourne
    1. 01:40:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - too low I guess, try to fiddle around with stream placement
    2. 01:39:107 (5) - 01:39:107 (5,6,7) - to maintain consistency with previous patterns what if you were to map this like 01:33:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?
    3. 03:08:255 (2) - what about this http://puu.sh/bTmTV.jpg stacked 1/2 plays meh imo :/
    4. 03:21:550 (3) - looking at the surge of the sb I'd suggest not to stack this, instead put it into a jump like for example, stack this with 03:22:403 (1) - head and see if it plays better;
    5. 05:31:948 (4) - stacked 1/2 plays weird imo, what if you were to stack this with 05:31:096 (2) - head instead and see if it would play better?
cool
i'll be back if the storyboard is updated
Frostmourne
@Azer replace this code to my part please (at 201550 ms)
212,184,201550,1,12,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Azer

inverness wrote:

morning guise
random mod because swag
please more quality maps like this!
the world needs more invernesses

[map]
  1. Azer
    1. 02:01:352 - add note here to gave out some variation to the pattern? you know, since previous patterns had like triplets and 1/2s only i dont think its that important and i cant think of a way to implement it without destroying current pattern
    2. 04:16:778 (8,1) - idk but for me, if this got swapped (ctrl+g) it would play better since players assume these placement resembles triangle combo not back & forth combo youre right, done
    3. 04:39:789 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I kinda question these tbh, what do you think if these got removed? discussed with 11t, it's better to leave them here
    4. 04:45:244 (1,2,3,4,5) - what if http://puu.sh/bTnAR.jpg try it! i think thats a little too spiky :[ the placement now is fine
cool
i'll be back if the storyboard is updated
ill let you know!
thanks for the random mod :D

Frostmourne wrote:

@Azer replace this code to my part please (at 201550 ms)
212,184,201550,1,12,0:0:0:0:
Are you sure you sent the right line? It's identical to the one there already

[Update Status]
Azer - RLC - those - Frostmourne - 11t
Frostmourne
1st part
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384,184,190471,2,0,P|374:225|376:292,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,190812,2,0,P|348:161|283:143,1,85,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,191153,2,0,P|179:126|244:144,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,64,191494,6,0,P|48:156|80:228,1,170,6|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,304,192005,2,0,L|224:324,1,170,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,284,192516,2,0,P|288:240|256:204,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,284,192857,2,0,P|360:226|388:150,1,170,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,68,193369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,172,193539,2,0,P|476:218|496:272,2,85,2|0|10,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,88,194050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,108,194221,6,0,B|264:108|264:108|204:124|204:124|140:124,1,170,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,108,194732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,44,194903,2,0,L|208:44,1,85,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,188,195244,2,0,L|276:188,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,188,195585,6,0,P|164:252|188:368,1,170,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,196096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,356,196266,2,0,P|368:361|420:347,1,85,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
456,280,196607,1,10,0:0:0:0:
392,224,196778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,196948,6,0,P|286:157|308:76,2,170,2|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,326,197800,1,0,1:0:0:0:
225,326,197971,2,0,P|208:279|217:234,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,198312,2,0,P|169:143|160:188,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,252,198653,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,168,198823,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,252,198994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,199164,1,2,1:0:0:0:
225,326,199335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,168,199505,1,2,1:0:0:0:
361,294,199675,5,4,1:2:0:0:
281,279,200016,1,0,1:0:0:0:
202,265,200357,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,252,200698,2,0,P|111:215|110:166,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,100,201039,6,0,P|263:116|291:157,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,184,201380,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,96,201550,1,12,0:0:0:0:
36,268,201721,2,0,P|23:224|29:179,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,336,202062,2,0,P|137:338|180:322,1,85,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

My self-adjustment for both parts~~ :)
those
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2091995

Many of the suggestions conflict with the overall arrangement (bigger picture of the section). Stuff like how 05:01:948 (1) - is meant to be star and 05:00:073 (6,7,8) - is meant to be triangle contrasting with 04:59:221 (1,2,3) - . I do agree with the slider at the beginning of the last Kiai section, and it shall be replaced

422,226,286948,6,0,P|406:135|368:49,1,187.000005706787,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,85,287460,1,0,3:0:0:0:
281,85,287545,1,0,3:0:0:0:
281,85,287630,1,0,0:0:0:0:

SB won't have to be touched here. Thanks!
Topic Starter
Azer
Everything updated
captin1
after best mod 2014™ this looks good to go for me
#1
box thing
2014-10-02 18:25 captin1: most of it is yours so can i just throw them at you real quick and then we'll go
2014-10-02 18:25 Azer: uh
2014-10-02 18:25 Azer: and 11t probably
2014-10-02 18:25 Azer: for sb
2014-10-02 18:26 captin1: i don't think they'll affect anything in the sb
2014-10-02 18:26 Azer: if its NC or position change it requires him to rerun code
2014-10-02 18:26 Azer: we'll see
2014-10-02 18:26 Azer: shoot
2014-10-02 18:26 captin1: 00:36:039 (1,3,4,5) - cause of the automatic stacking, this ends up touching a bit
2014-10-02 18:27 Azer: oh
2014-10-02 18:27 Azer: ok fixedf
2014-10-02 18:27 captin1: 00:41:153 (7) - I'd reduce the spacing on this note just a bit, since the melody line is decreasing just a bit and the current placement feels a little awkward, something more like x128 y304 ish might work
2014-10-02 18:28 Azer: b-but muh symettry
2014-10-02 18:28 captin1: o
2014-10-02 18:28 captin1: i didn't notice it LOL my bad
2014-10-02 18:28 captin1: np np
2014-10-02 18:28 Azer: well its not really noticeable in gameplay
2014-10-02 18:28 Azer: since it fades so quick
2014-10-02 18:29 captin1: nah now that i see it it's cool so you're fine
2014-10-02 18:29 captin1: 01:58:880 (6) - moving the endpoint to the left a bit to line up this slider with 5 would look nicer
2014-10-02 18:29 captin1: top tier mod
2014-10-02 18:30 Azer: hmm
2014-10-02 18:30 Azer: done
2014-10-02 18:30 captin1: k that's really it, i had like one opinion on something in rlc's part but it's not important
2014-10-02 18:31 captin1: sht's good

feel free to poke me whenever this needs to get moved to pending again
jonathanlfj
after best map check 2014™ this looks good to go for me
#2
Topic Starter
Azer
wooo
Fycho
[General]
  1. Unsanpped kiai time: 01:30:585 -
[Collab]
  1. 04:17:119 (1) - the volume of the spinner is too low for me, how about trying 20%?
  2. 04:36:039 (1) - maybe you need to add whistle to emphasize the piano.

Approved!
those

Frostmourne wrote:

hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
Frostmourne

those wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
hype hype hype :)
captin1
whooooooop
lazercats
I wish I didn't suck so much so I can complete this map instead of just fail in the middle
Unsfamiliar
ah grats you guys~
Little
Grats
Love
Holy shit I'm gone for a day and it's approved :< gratz everyone!
Toy
2 BATS, 1 Elite mapper, 1 Pro player, 1 Elite storyboarder = 1 amazing map
Giralda
Grats~
Satellite
yay! congrats !!
Topic Starter
Azer
Thanks guys <3
Oracle
congrats!!!
Asphyxia
lol I was planning to mod this but got approved already, grats!
Meg
Great map :)

gratz~
Secretpipe

Asphyxia wrote:

lol I was planning to mod this but got approved already, grats!

Me too! It was approved when I was sleeping PLZ

EDIT : this really look dnb and it's not even in the tags. I watched the artist's soundcloud , there's a lot of chances it's dnb owo
Flask
Yes Yes Yes
Topic Starter
Azer
Sorry T_T
Too many people offering their help to rank this D:
Proxy
Grats! ;)
wendao
Wikipedia said it should be benvenuti instead of bienvenuti, I don't know about this one, since another source said it's bienvenuti :/

nah... välkommen

selamat in Malay = safe / secure
selamat in Indonesian = congrats / congratulation; it should be selamat datang which meaning welcome


CMIIW
69653863
........I haven't even m odded the sb yet
well too baaaaad
maybe later
Dainesl
oh wow this got ranked congratulations!
Natteke desu
congrats!
TKS
that SB \^o^/
10nya
420/10 thanks
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