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Maybe you should discuss it to other BATs just to make sure that the set is rankable
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LexiaLovesU wrote:


Xin chan its not unrankable its more for spread wise since the difficulty is already below 2 stars lol
uwaa my savior <3

edit: I don't wanna get sinchan in trouble or anything so i changed Easy's CS to 2.4 so the star diff drops to 1.49 :D
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Xinely asked me to mod this so i'm here
Apparently it's also my first BAT mod...
@Lexia: i think the current spread is fine as is (N*2), while it's always better to improve something!

bold=highly recommended/important stuff
red=unrankable issue
Others are all suggestions. Feel free to reject!

General
  1. you're having inconsist offset throughout the set which is unrankable. easy and hard diffs have 1805 while other diffs are using 457. I suggest keeping them consist on 1805 and remove everything else.
  2. as I told you in-game. the volume of intro is really way too loud. I'd prefer someting 25%. Xinely agreed with me too. Her suggestion is 30%.
  3. combo colors throughout the diffs are inconsist. make sure they're exactly the same!


Easy
  1. 00:01:805 (2) - prefer NC here for the downbeat.
  2. 00:04:501 (1) - missing a whistle on slider end
  3. 00:10:906 (2) - whistle?
  4. 00:30:119 (3) - I'd prefer a whistle on the reverse instead of clap. there's no clap on red ticks!
  5. 00:35:513 (3) - ^
  6. and probably many more. Not listing them all but i hope you could find them yourself.
  7. 00:55:737 (1,2,3) - rearrange the placement? i mean something like this:
  8. 01:07:872 (1) - i suggest a finish on slider head



Normal
  1. 00:05:344 (3,4) - suggesting something like this so you could catch the piano on 00:05:849 - as you did all the way through :
  2. 00:24:052 (2,3,4,5) - this is confusing to read... can you at least change 00:24:558 (3,4) - into a slider?
  3. with many missing whistle & finish too. as i mentioned in easy diff x.x. You could fix them if you want!
  4. rhythm consistency is rather random in this diff... I hope it's safe enough for a normal.



Hard
  1. 00:58:265 (1,2,3) - I was expecting similar movement as previous patterns 00:56:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - . all you need to do is to adjust 00:58:434 (2) - a bit.
  2. 01:07:872 (1) - finish!!
  3. 01:09:389 (6) - NC here to spilt the combo
  4. 01:17:310 (8) - NC
  5. 01:22:704 (1,2) - I think finish on these 2 would be cool.
  6. Liked how it's mapped.



Asagi's Insane HELLOOOO
  1. 00:00:794 (1,2,3) - have no idea why these are sliders instead of notes. slider tails are not landing on anything in the song ;w;
  2. 00:43:603 (1,2) - i'd prefer a jump rather than antijump here. You're using a lot of jumps on the previous normal parts so logically I was expecting a even larger jump here.
  3. 00:49:670 (5,6,7,8) - I'd follow the 1/3s on this part of the song
  4. 00:56:580 (3,2,3,2,3) - use normal sampleset on these instead.
  5. 00:59:782 (2,3) -
  6. 01:07:872 (1) - I suggest a finish on slider head.
  7. 01:10:569 (1,3) - on slider head:
  8. 01:22:872 (2) - finish?



Insane
  1. 00:11:580 - 0.63x? let's set it to something not that weird...like 0.65x.
  2. 00:33:153 (3,4) - a bit too forced...
  3. 00:43:603 (1) - use circles to emphasize this part:
  4. 00:49:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could use reverse sliders instead. 1/3 streams are quite annoying. they didn't got positive feedback from the ranked version(the mapper told me himself)...
  5. 00:59:782 (6) - NC
  6. 01:01:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one as well
  7. 01:03:827 (6) - ^
  8. 01:06:524 (7) - ^
  9. 01:09:220 (7) - ^
  10. 01:10:232 (1,2) - switch NC
  11. 01:14:614 (6) - NC
  12. 01:15:878 (1,2) - switch NC
  13. 01:17:310 (9) - NC
  14. your combos in kiai are too long!


I guess that's all i could offer. Not bad for a new mapper!
Best of luck!
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Oracle wrote:

Asagi's Insane HELLOOOO ~Hi Oraoraora :3/
  1. 00:00:794 (1,2,3) - have no idea why these are sliders instead of notes. slider tails are not landing on anything in the song ;w;
  2. 00:43:603 (1,2) - i'd prefer a jump rather than antijump here. You're using a lot of jumps on the previous normal parts so logically I was expecting a even larger jump here.~the anti jump fits better on the rhythm itself, as you can hear, the rhythm suddenly stopped
  3. 00:49:670 (5,6,7,8) - I'd follow the 1/3s on this part of the song ~i prefer following the drums
  4. 00:56:580 (3,2,3,2,3) - use normal sampleset on these instead. ~i dont get why i should use normal sampleset there, ill just keep it as that
  5. 00:59:782 (2,3) -
  6. 01:07:872 (1) - I suggest a finish on slider head.
  7. 01:10:569 (1,3) - on slider head:
  8. 01:22:872 (2) - finish?


Thanks Ora ;3

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144,216,52535,2,0,L|28:224,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,52872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,240,53041,6,0,L|348:236,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,53378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,168,53546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,53715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,276,53883,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,152,54052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,324,54220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,324,54305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,323,54389,6,0,P|251:328|200:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,252,54726,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,144,54895,2,0,L|244:244,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,55232,2,0,P|251:116|171:80,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,252,55737,5,6,0:0:0:0:
154,172,55906,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,156,56243,5,0,0:0:0:0:
91,258,56411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,269,56580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,287,56917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,262,57086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,145,57254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,135,57591,5,0,0:0:0:0:
59,264,57760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,307,57928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,329,58265,5,0,0:0:0:0:
43,263,58434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,127,58603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,120,58940,5,0,0:0:0:0:
27,259,59108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,351,59277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,373,59614,5,0,0:0:0:0:
12,253,59782,1,2,0:2:0:0:
228,116,59951,1,2,0:2:0:0:
136,64,60456,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,24,60625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,60794,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,60962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,61131,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,212,61299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,352,61468,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,308,61636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,61805,6,0,L|92:344,2,30,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,236,62142,2,0,L|164:268,2,30
152,127,62479,6,0,P|213:67|298:85,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,62985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,63153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,144,63322,2,0,P|248:192|265:230,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,352,63659,6,0,P|312:304|212:352,1,180
160,236,64164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,332,64333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,124,64501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,64670,2,0,L|280:240,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,336,65007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,65176,6,0,L|360:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,28,65513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,132,65681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,136,65850,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,32,66018,2,0,L|228:24,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,164,66355,6,0,P|208:186|277:133,1,180
136,64,66861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,188,67029,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,24,67198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,164,67367,2,0,L|120:260,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,348,67704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,240,67872,6,0,B|234:230|234:230|258:242|258:242|312:196|376:224,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,68378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,292,68546,2,0,L|330:381,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,300,68883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,196,69052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,69220,6,0,L|509:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,20,69558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,177,69726,2,0,P|271:159|351:196,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,70232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,304,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,70569,6,0,L|284:12,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,70906,2,0,L|124:380,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,140,71243,2,0,L|268:20,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,187,71580,6,0,L|184:180,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,72086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,72254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,80,72423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,72591,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,224,72676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,224,72760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,208,72844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,72928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,140,73013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,100,73097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,72,73181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,52,73265,6,0,L|336:64,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,16,73603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,172,73771,2,0,L|244:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,74108,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,136,74277,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,320,74445,6,0,P|334:359|253:326,1,180
432,220,74951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,368,75119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,272,75288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,356,75456,2,0,L|158:266,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,75794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,75878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,75962,6,0,L|256:192,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,76299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,160,76468,2,0,L|60:164,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,76805,2,0,L|360:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,224,77142,6,0,L|320:208,1,180
248,284,77647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,120,77816,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,288,77985,2,0,L|112:384,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,180,78322,2,0,L|20:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,52,78659,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,188,78827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,78996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,56,79164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,208,79333,2,0,P|379:213|334:208,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,132,79670,6,0,P|517:212|476:288,1,180,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,368,80176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,188,80344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,360,80513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,80681,2,0,L|165:269,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,81018,2,0,L|148:164,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,81355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,120,81524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,332,81692,2,0,P|465:294|474:250,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,40,82029,5,2,0:0:0:0:
472,40,82198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,256,82367,2,0,P|344:263|280:244,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,296,82704,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,120,82872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,120,83209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
180,296,83378,2,0,L|60:292,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,160,83715,2,0,L|152:168,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,217,84052,6,0,P|336:201|368:140,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,84726,2,0,L|353:284,1,144
408,348,85232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,252,85400,6,0,L|464:180,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,85737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,85906,2,0,L|284:144,1,72
180,64,86243,2,0,L|252:60,1,72
264,224,86580,6,0,P|160:272|48:227,1,216
40,156,87254,1,8,3:0:0:0:
40,156,87591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,64,87760,2,0,L|176:164,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,313,88097,6,0,L|264:224,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,132,88434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,272,88603,2,0,P|447:283|491:277,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,95,88940,6,0,P|353:48|288:168,1,270,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89530,12,0,92142,0:0:0:0:


@Madoka: dont forget to change the offset and other general stuff
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Oracle wrote:

Xinely asked me to mod this so i'm here
Apparently it's also my first BAT mod...
@Lexia: i think the current spread is fine as is (N*2), while it's always better to improve something!

bold=highly recommended/important stuff
red=unrankable issue
Others are all suggestions. Feel free to reject!

General
  1. you're having inconsist offset throughout the set which is unrankable. easy and hard diffs have 1805 while other diffs are using 457. I suggest keeping them consist on 1805 and remove everything else. done
  2. as I told you in-game. the volume of intro is really way too loud. I'd prefer someting 25%. Xinely agreed with me too. Her suggestion is 30%. i think it's fine the way it is, it's not a HUGE problem, I don't think of it as a problem anyways hehee
  3. combo colors throughout the diffs are inconsist. make sure they're exactly the same! done


Easy
  1. 00:01:805 (2) - prefer NC here for the downbeat. done
  2. 00:04:501 (1) - missing a whistle on slider end done
  3. 00:10:906 (2) - whistle? done
  4. 00:30:119 (3) - I'd prefer a whistle on the reverse instead of clap. there's no clap on red ticks! done!
  5. 00:35:513 (3) - ^ done!
  6. and probably many more. Not listing them all but i hope you could find them yourself. fixed.
  7. 00:55:737 (1,2,3) - rearrange the placement? i me an something like this:
    changed
  8. 01:07:872 (1) - i suggest a finish on slider head i think it's fine hehe..



Normal
  1. 00:05:344 (3,4) - suggesting something like this so you could catch the piano on 00:05:849 - as you did all the way through :
    I'll just leave it hehe.
  2. 00:24:052 (2,3,4,5) - this is confusing to read... can you at least change 00:24:558 (3,4) - into a slider? changed
  3. with many missing whistle & finish too. as i mentioned in easy diff x.x. You could fix them if you want! fixed as many as i could find!
  4. rhythm consistency is rather random in this diff... I hope it's safe enough for a normal. yeah ;w; crappiest diff i've made yet i think



Hard
  1. 00:58:265 (1,2,3) - I was expecting similar movement as previous patterns 00:56:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - . all you need to do is to adjust 00:58:434 (2) - a bit.
    done!
  2. 01:07:872 (1) - finish!!
  3. 01:09:389 (6) - NC here to spilt the combo done
  4. 01:17:310 (8) - NC done
  5. 01:22:704 (1,2) - I think finish on these 2 would be cool. i think it's good as it is xD
  6. Liked how it's mapped. thanks! got a lot of inspiration from Guy's and Fycho's Hard mapping style, this difficulty.



Asagi's Insane HELLOOOO
  1. 00:00:794 (1,2,3) - have no idea why these are sliders instead of notes. slider tails are not landing on anything in the song ;w;
  2. 00:43:603 (1,2) - i'd prefer a jump rather than antijump here. You're using a lot of jumps on the previous normal parts so logically I was expecting a even larger jump here.
  3. 00:49:670 (5,6,7,8) - I'd follow the 1/3s on this part of the song
  4. 00:56:580 (3,2,3,2,3) - use normal sampleset on these instead.
  5. 00:59:782 (2,3) -
  6. 01:07:872 (1) - I suggest a finish on slider head.
  7. 01:10:569 (1,3) - on slider head:
  8. 01:22:872 (2) - finish?



Insane
  1. 00:11:580 - 0.63x? let's set it to something not that weird...like 0.65x. done
  2. 00:33:153 (3,4) - a bit too forced... changed.. hope that's better.
  3. 00:43:603 (1) - use circles to emphasize this part:
    done! you can really tell from this one my mapping skills are still quite bad when it comes to tapping the stronger rhythm xD
  4. 00:49:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could use reverse sliders instead. 1/3 streams are quite annoying. they didn't got positive feedback from the ranked version(the mapper told me himself)... oh it's cloud xD, alright i'll change :D
  5. 00:59:782 (6) - NC done
  6. 01:01:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one as well ok :c xD I was mean so i made a 1/3 stream, but idc about that anymore. changed.
  7. 01:03:827 (6) - ^
  8. 01:06:524 (7) - ^
  9. 01:09:220 (7) - ^
  10. 01:10:232 (1,2) - switch NC
  11. 01:14:614 (6) - NC
  12. 01:15:878 (1,2) - switch NC
  13. 01:17:310 (9) - NC
  14. your combos in kiai are too long! oops, all fixed :D


I guess that's all i could offer. Not bad for a new mapper!
Best of luck!
thanks for the mod!! :D and congrats for BAT \( ' w ' )/

and Asagi's changes has been applied too, along with his combo color and offset fix! for the offset fix, I had to change your repeat slider that was originally there to circles since the offset starts later :C sorry for interfering with your diff a bit but you're free to change anything if you want or disagree with it!
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Hi madoka ~




  • General
  1. remove all custom drum sounds here. they have same sounds with default ones..
  2. Same go for Normal-hitnormal and normal-hitnormal2
  3. same go for soft-hitfinish and soft-hitfinish2. (correct me if i'm wrong Q_Q)

  • Easy
  1. 00:03:153 (3) - i would say to make blanket here so the design would look better here. http://puu.sh/bgC0k/bede565d52.jpg, if you follow this one, you can copy paste from 00:03:153 (3) - for 00:01:805 (2) - this slider so the flow would be better
  2. 00:09:895 (1) - nazi, inconsistency (1,14x) spacing here, fix the spacing pls C:
  3. 00:13:940 (1) - change the clap here with finish (or add finish) on head. because i heard cymbal sound here (agak samar2 sih tp ada)
  4. 00:24:726 (3) - how about extend the slider repeat to for following the violin sound 00:25:231 - here? if you do this one, 00:25:737 (4) - remove this circle
  5. 00:30:119 (3) - add whistle on head too for emphasize piano here?
  6. 00:38:209 (3) - i know there is drum sound on repeat but imo it would be better to use default soft whistle here to follow piano instead.. if you add whistle on repeat, add for tail too
  7. 00:43:603 (3) - how about drum finish here instead Normal hit-normal? imo the drum finish feels better and normal hit-normal feels kinda loud here
  8. 00:49:333 (2) - nazi, but imo flow could be more neutral by move the tail to 252,56
  9. 00:54:389 (3) - try add whistle on repeat to emphasize the vocal? i prefer to hitsound vocal too rather than skip it :P
  10. 00:55:737 (1) - add finish? i hear cymbal sound clearly here o.o
  11. 01:09:220 (3) - inconsistency spacing here. move to 244,216 to keep consistency, and move 01:10:569 (1) - 148,232 for keep consistency too
  12. 01:11:243 (2) - the flow becomes weird for me. i would say to make like http://puu.sh/bLk9c/cafd58de68.jpg and placed at 164,64
  13. 01:29:614 (1) - i will use indonesian for this one. gw rasa sih ini kan musiknya makin lama makin jadi pelan/ilang jadi volume nya juga harus kek gtu buat spin ini 01:32:142 - disini harus 5% and no hitsound krn udh bener2 ilang (boleh contoh diff nya Hinsvar)

  • Normal
  1. 00:00:793 (1,2,3) - hmm stack pattern seems bad here for me. i would say to unstack this one or make (1) and (2) become one slider
  2. 00:02:647 (2) - how about add whistle here since i hear the music in pitch? o.o
  3. 00:04:501 (2,4) - for me the design could improve a lot here with use symmetrical instead, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2068644
  4. 00:07:872 (2) - try add whistle here since it has a music same as 00:07:198 -
  5. 00:11:917 (2,1) - i know inconsistency spacing still can acceptable but i would say consistent spacing here since i don't get why need inconsistency here
  6. 00:13:940 (2) - finish on head. i hear the cymbal sound altho the sound is a little bit faint
  7. 00:20:681 (1) - imo the hitsound is quite empty here. at least add whistle at head too for emphasize the violin?
  8. 00:22:029 (3) - ^
  9. 00:25:232 (4) - ^ (the music is piano here)
  10. 00:30:119 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm could improve here. try map the piano sound at 00:30:625 - since that's the main music here. i would say http://puu.sh/bMzT1/f503eb4bfe.jpg something like this
  11. 00:32:816 (3) - aaa for this one use indonesian again. ini flownya tiba2 ngebreak dari (2) ke (3).. q harap tau sendiri lha krn cuma bisa dirasain pas main. menurut gw sih mendingan main simetris https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2068687, ngefix spacing setelah itu gak panjang kok. gw udh coba
  12. 00:35:344 (5) - add whistle on head and tail for emphasize the piano sounds
  13. 00:34:670 (3) - gw rasa ritme dari (1) sampe (5) disini agak panjang sih. gw lebih prefer remove ini buat jaga2
  14. 00:36:524 (1) - i got heart attack here. the sampleset normal feels too loud. i would say to change it with drum instead. it sounds better for me
  15. 00:38:546 - i'm still wondering here why change to S:C1 when the clap sound of S:C2 same as S:C1 here
  16. 00:40:569 (2,3) - it would be better if you make the flow become a diagonal line flow here http://puu.sh/bMAST/9e9a5a6ba7.jpg
  17. 00:53:041 (5,1) - should be swap NC here. hear the music pattern and see your NC patterns :C
  18. 00:58:265 (5,1) - ^
  19. 00:58:940 (6,7,1) - actually i kinda disagree with the rhythm but i guess musics are forcing you to do this one. if you want keep this rhythm i would say to change placement instead since their flow a little bit bad for me http://puu.sh/bMBdV/a0a0226509.jpg
  20. 01:09:220 (3) - the sound of red tick quite faint here for me. i would say to change this slider into 1/1 slider
  21. 01:27:760 (3) - i'm sure this rhythm is really long for Normal. at least i would to remove this one and change with circle in 01:27:760 - only
  22. 01:29:108 (6,1) - also you can improve the flow too here. if i were you i will do something like http://puu.sh/bMBxX/78fa61b8ef.jpg
  23. 01:29:614 (1) - same as Easy

  • Hard
  1. hmm imo the CS 4 suddenly feel too small here. how about CS 3,7 instead?
  2. and for AR, imo the gap from AR 5 to AR 8 is too big. i would say AR 7,5 instead
  3. 00:11:580 (1,1,1) - give NC for all of them to mark them have SV change/increase here
  4. 00:13:939 - same as Normal
  5. owait.. i feel the SV is too high here. i would say use 1,45x SV actually.. see the SV of Normal is 1,10x. Hard suddenly become 1,60x also to Hard become 1,80x. the gap from normal to hard is too high here but just my own taste here
  6. also i would say to avoid huge jump which don't have cymbal example 01:03:490 (4) - etc

  • Asagi's Insane
  1. i saw your Insane diff easier than Madoka's one so please reduce AR around 8,5 here to make better spread
  2. 00:30:119 - omg please map this one, as you hear it has loud piano sound here
  3. 01:00:456 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - naah, i would say spacing from small spacing first and then increasing to a normal spacing here. i don't have internet connection at this time so sorry can't give Screenshot to you
  4. 01:29:445 - use whistle S:C2 instead. whistle on S:C10 doesn't give any sense Q_Q

  • Insane
  1. 00:09:220 - why dont map this one when it has a music sound here? feel empty imo
  2. 00:12:254 (5) - NC here. the different of SV with previous slider is too high
  3. 00:13:939 - same as Easy
  4. 00:24:558 (6) - nazi but please stack this slider with 00:23:378 (1) - , after that you can move 00:24:220 (4) - to keep the blanket
  5. 00:33:827 (7) - the flow feels a little bit rigid here. i would say move to 28,208 for better flow
  6. 00:37:872 (6) - what a force jump when the music is really calm here D; , move to 256,280 instead please
  7. 00:39:895 (2) - nah another rigid flow. i would like to remove this note and make 00:39:558 (1) - slider repeat instead for here
  8. 00:46:636 (2) - hmm i don't think stack is the best way for this part. i prefer to move this circle 36,136 actually
  9. 00:54:726 (2) - i feel the jump from this circle to (3) is too huge, feel a little bit forced. i would say move (2) to 392,112 here
  10. 01:14:614 (1) - according your curve on previous slider. the circle should be on leftside of the slider here. how about move to 292,128
  11. 01:29:614 (1) - same as Easy

hmmm i feel the Insane diffs still can improvement here.. try find more mods for them and we'll see (i will recheck by my own self)
but i'm quite impressive with your first map here C:
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Xinely wrote:

Hi madoka ~




  • General
  1. remove all custom drum sounds here. they have same sounds with default ones..
  2. Same go for Normal-hitnormal and normal-hitnormal2
  3. same go for soft-hitfinish and soft-hitfinish2. (correct me if i'm wrong Q_Q)

that's basically most of the hitsounds though.. I'd like to keep hitnormal for normal and soft hitsounds :c


  • Easy
  1. 00:03:153 (3) - i would say to make blanket here so the design would look better here. http://puu.sh/bgC0k/bede565d52.jpg, if you follow this one, you can copy paste from 00:03:153 (3) - for 00:01:805 (2) - this slider so the flow would be better i just moved it a bit. changed.
  2. 00:09:895 (1) - nazi, inconsistency (1,14x) spacing here, fix the spacing pls C: done
  3. 00:13:940 (1) - change the clap here with finish (or add finish) on head. because i heard cymbal sound here (agak samar2 sih tp ada) i like clap better ;w;
  4. 00:24:726 (3) - how about extend the slider repeat to for following the violin sound 00:25:231 - here? if you do this one, 00:25:737 (4) - remove this circle done.
  5. 00:30:119 (3) - add whistle on head too for emphasize piano here? done
  6. 00:38:209 (3) - i know there is drum sound on repeat but imo it would be better to use default soft whistle here to follow piano instead.. if you add whistle on repeat, add for tail too i like it the way it is ;w;
  7. 00:43:603 (3) - how about drum finish here instead Normal hit-normal? imo the drum finish feels better and normal hit-normal feels kinda loud here done.
  8. 00:49:333 (2) - nazi, but imo flow could be more neutral by move the tail to 252,56 done
  9. 00:54:389 (3) - try add whistle on repeat to emphasize the vocal? i prefer to hitsound vocal too rather than skip it :Pdone
  10. 00:55:737 (1) - add finish? i hear cymbal sound clearly here o.o i can't hear it .-.
  11. 01:09:220 (3) - inconsistency spacing here. move to 244,216 to keep consistency, and move 01:10:569 (1) - 148,232 for keep consistency too done
  12. 01:11:243 (2) - the flow becomes weird for me. i would say to make like http://puu.sh/bLk9c/cafd58de68.jpg and placed at 164,64 itu keatas dikit gr2 vocalnya juga gitu o.o so i think i'll keep mine
  13. 01:29:614 (1) - i will use indonesian for this one. gw rasa sih ini kan musiknya makin lama makin jadi pelan/ilang jadi volume nya juga harus kek gtu buat spin ini 01:32:142 - disini harus 5% and no hitsound krn udh bener2 ilang (boleh contoh diff nya Hinsvar) tapi vocalnya volumenya datar ._. so i'll keep this one the same

  • Normal
  1. 00:00:793 (1,2,3) - hmm stack pattern seems bad here for me. i would say to unstack this one or make (1) and (2) become one slider slider gk bisa.... offset lagunya masih didepanan lagi jadi kalo slider rhythmnya ngaco.
  2. 00:02:647 (2) - how about add whistle here since i hear the music in pitch? o.o naaah..
  3. 00:04:501 (2,4) - for me the design could improve a lot here with use symmetrical instead, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2068644 done
  4. 00:07:872 (2) - try add whistle here since it has a music same as 00:07:198 - nah..
  5. 00:11:917 (2,1) - i know inconsistency spacing still can acceptable but i would say consistent spacing here since i don't get why need inconsistency here because the music gets louder. Ike said it's good ;w; (on the old thread)
  6. 00:13:940 (2) - finish on head. i hear the cymbal sound altho the sound is a little bit faint too faint.
  7. 00:20:681 (1) - imo the hitsound is quite empty here. at least add whistle at head too for emphasize the violin? i think it's fine (?)
  8. 00:22:029 (3) - ^i changed the tail here.
  9. 00:25:232 (4) - ^ (the music is piano here)
  10. 00:30:119 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm could improve here. try map the piano sound at 00:30:625 - since that's the main music here. i would say http://puu.sh/bMzT1/f503eb4bfe.jpg something like this done.. hope it's ok now..(?)
  11. 00:32:816 (3) - aaa for this one use indonesian again. ini flownya tiba2 ngebreak dari (2) ke (3).. q harap tau sendiri lha krn cuma bisa dirasain pas main. menurut gw sih mendingan main simetris https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2068687, ngefix spacing setelah itu gak panjang kok. gw udh coba ._. err..
  12. 00:35:344 (5) - add whistle on head and tail for emphasize the piano sounds ok
  13. 00:34:670 (3) - gw rasa ritme dari (1) sampe (5) disini agak panjang sih. gw lebih prefer remove ini buat jaga2 but the song..
  14. 00:36:524 (1) - i got heart attack here. the sampleset normal feels too loud. i would say to change it with drum instead. it sounds better for me lol pls. i think it's ok.
  15. 00:38:546 - i'm still wondering here why change to S:C1 when the clap sound of S:C2 same as S:C1 here just in case if someone turns off the custom hitsounds ._.
  16. 00:40:569 (2,3) - it would be better if you make the flow become a diagonal line flow here http://puu.sh/bMAST/9e9a5a6ba7.jpg osn't it like that ._.
  17. 00:53:041 (5,1) - should be swap NC here. hear the music pattern and see your NC patterns :C ok
  18. 00:58:265 (5,1) - ^ ok
  19. 00:58:940 (6,7,1) - actually i kinda disagree with the rhythm but i guess musics are forcing you to do this one. if you want keep this rhythm i would say to change placement instead since their flow a little bit bad for me http://puu.sh/bMBdV/a0a0226509.jpg ok.
  20. 01:09:220 (3) - the sound of red tick quite faint here for me. i would say to change this slider into 1/1 slider
  21. 01:27:760 (3) - i'm sure this rhythm is really long for Normal. at least i would to remove this one and change with circle in 01:27:760 - only is there a rule against it long consecutive 1/2 sliders on normals?
  22. 01:29:108 (6,1) - also you can improve the flow too here. if i were you i will do something like http://puu.sh/bMBxX/78fa61b8ef.jpg done
  23. 01:29:614 (1) - same as Easy same answer

  • Hard
  1. hmm imo the CS 4 suddenly feel too small here. how about CS 3,7 instead? I'll keep 4.
  2. and for AR, imo the gap from AR 5 to AR 8 is too big. i would say AR 7,5 instead ok.
  3. 00:11:580 (1,1,1) - give NC for all of them to mark them have SV change/increase here ok
  4. 00:13:939 - same as Normal
  5. owait.. i feel the SV is too high here. i would say use 1,45x SV actually.. see the SV of Normal is 1,10x. Hard suddenly become 1,60x also to Hard become 1,80x. the gap from normal to hard is too high here but just my own taste here
  6. also i would say to avoid huge jump which don't have cymbal example 01:03:490 (4) - etc

  • Asagi's Insane
  1. i saw your Insane diff easier than Madoka's one so please reduce AR around 8,5 here to make better spread
  2. 00:30:119 - omg please map this one, as you hear it has loud piano sound here
  3. 01:00:456 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - naah, i would say spacing from small spacing first and then increasing to a normal spacing here. i don't have internet connection at this time so sorry can't give Screenshot to you
  4. 01:29:445 - use whistle S:C2 instead. whistle on S:C10 doesn't give any sense Q_Q

  • Insane
  1. 00:09:220 - why dont map this one when it has a music sound here? feel empty imo ok
  2. 00:12:254 (5) - NC here. the different of SV with previous slider is too high done
  3. 00:13:939 - same as Easy
  4. 00:24:558 (6) - nazi but please stack this slider with 00:23:378 (1) - , after that you can move 00:24:220 (4) - to keep the blanket fixed
  5. 00:33:827 (7) - the flow feels a little bit rigid here. i would say move to 28,208 for better flow done
  6. 00:37:872 (6) - what a force jump when the music is really calm here D; , move to 256,280 instead please i moved it to 304,280. fixed.
  7. 00:39:895 (2) - nah another rigid flow. i would like to remove this note and make 00:39:558 (1) - slider repeat instead for here done
  8. 00:46:636 (2) - hmm i don't think stack is the best way for this part. i prefer to move this circle 36,136 actually moved to 24,136.
  9. 00:54:726 (2) - i feel the jump from this circle to (3) is too huge, feel a little bit forced. i would say move (2) to 392,112 here ok.
  10. 01:14:614 (1) - according your curve on previous slider. the circle should be on leftside of the slider here. how about move to 292,128 changed
  11. 01:29:614 (1) - same as Easy

hmmm i feel the Insane diffs still can improvement here.. try find more mods for them and we'll see (i will recheck by my own self)
but i'm quite impressive with your first map here C:
Thanks for modding sinchan >:3 and it's not my first map ;w; it's my like... 6th map, this is just the first one i focused on ranking.... and I know it's not that good but, i've improved a lot ;w; considering this was mapped a long time ago :c
posted

Xinely wrote:


  • Asagi's Insane
  1. i saw your Insane diff easier than Madoka's one so please reduce AR around 8,5 here to make better spread ~reducing AR makes it harder and really weird to play with that kind of jump and stuffs
  2. 00:30:119 - omg please map this one, as you hear it has loud piano sound here ~ok
  3. 01:00:456 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - naah, i would say spacing from small spacing first and then increasing to a normal spacing here. i don't have internet connection at this time so sorry can't give Screenshot to you ~As you can hear the rhythm, the audio is getting lower and lower so i make it like that
  4. 01:29:445 - use whistle S:C2 instead. whistle on S:C10 doesn't give any sense Q_Q~my current hitsound totally makes sense, but whatever, changed
Thanks :3

Changed some stuff myself
Dont forget to change the offset
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176,308,38378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,240,39052,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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264,88,76805,2,0,L|360:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,368,80176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,188,80344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,360,80513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,120,81355,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,120,81524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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472,40,82198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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we did so many rechecks in game (i can't remember actually how much i rechecked this map lol)

we removed unnecessary hitsounds and greenlines

Blab (ノ>∨<)ノ
wtf my second bubble today



apple by Spectator : t/212500/start=45

@ To Next BAT : Don't rank it 1 week from now since KantoKun's version got qualified today
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Xinely wrote:

we did so many rechecks in game (i can't remember actually how much i rechecked this map lol)

we removed unnecessary hitsounds and greenlines

Blab (ノ>∨<)ノ
wtf my second bubble today



apple by Spectator : t/212500/start=45
kawaii~ <3

thanks for bubble sinchan :3
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wooooo
hype for 1st rank
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hype
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WOOOOOOOOOO /.O./
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Lol u guys xD
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RANK!! GOOOOOOOOOO :D:D:D:D
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God damn this like like a doujin personified it's like "HI WE ARE IN LOVE LOL WE LOVE EACH OTHER <333 LOL LESBIAN xddDDDDD"

Insane:
00:21:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - My main issue with this is that the jumps come REALLY suddenly, after a slowed down section. Especially with the direction of the note, I'm focusing primarily downward, but (3) is above me. It's also a dull combo color so I am not attracted to it.
00:52:147 (1,2,3,4) - Ok so I've been super nice about the jumps so far. Like, if I wasn't bubble-checking this map, I'd be totally ranting, but yeah. These jumps, too big for a part that shouldn't have it. Try to prove what in the music justifies this.
01:02:091 (1) - Is this intentionally not stacked right?
01:12:035 (1,2,3) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
01:28:720 (3) - LIKE REALLY LIKE WHY

A lot of the other jumps totally suck in this map, but since I'm doing a bubble check, I'm not being too nitpicky. Still though, your jumps need to have meaning.

Other Insane:
00:30:069 (1) - whistle pls

Still a bit jumpy, but not as bad as madoka insane.

Hard:
00:42:203 (1,2,3,4,1) - but like why

Normal:
00:00:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This spacing may be confusing for normal players. I get what you're doing because I understand the game, but normal players may not get it so easily.

Easy:
Fine

Fix these pls and I might bubble maybe (I still have to think if I'm morally able to rank with Insane being how it is :P)
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CDFA wrote:

God damn this like like a doujin personified it's like "HI WE ARE IN LOVE LOL WE LOVE EACH OTHER <333 LOL LESBIAN xddDDDDD"

Insane:
00:21:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - My main issue with this is that the jumps come REALLY suddenly, after a slowed down section. Especially with the direction of the note, I'm focusing primarily downward, but (3) is above me. It's also a dull combo color so I am not attracted to it. uuh.. so how can I make it better? lol o.o
00:52:147 (1,2,3,4) - Ok so I've been super nice about the jumps so far. Like, if I wasn't bubble-checking this map, I'd be totally ranting, but yeah. These jumps, too big for a part that shouldn't have it. Try to prove what in the music justifies this. ok changed, distance has been decreased for this part.
01:02:091 (1) - Is this intentionally not stacked right? huh? it's on the same coordinate o.o
01:12:035 (1,2,3) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA wat, I think the jump is nice ;-; jumps are win
01:28:720 (3) - LIKE REALLY LIKE WHY ok DS for 3's been decreased, but 4 is inreased since the vocal rises.

A lot of the other jumps totally suck in this map, but since I'm doing a bubble check, I'm not being too nitpicky. Still though, your jumps need to have meaning. it's just my mapping style back then, however I do understand coming from your point of view though. But jumps are win! ;-;

Other Insane:
00:30:069 (1) - whistle pls done

Still a bit jumpy, but not as bad as madoka insane. CDFA WHY PLS ;-;

Hard:
00:42:203 (1,2,3,4,1) - but like why err why not xD

Normal:
00:00:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This spacing may be confusing for normal players. I get what you're doing because I understand the game, but normal players may not get it so easily. changed

Easy:
Fine

Fix these pls and I might bubble maybe (I still have to think if I'm morally able to rank with Insane being how it is :P)
;-; CDFA pls.
thank you for modding! :D

riperino in pepperoni bubble chan ;-;
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Timing requests!

BPM : 178

You are correct on that one.

Offset : 408


Good luck!
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Tari wrote:

Timing requests!

BPM : 178

You are correct on that one.

Offset : 408


Good luck!
thank you!!
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Have to rebubble because of offset change :(. Butwill hopefully ranks soon!
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