suzumu - Usotsuki PeterPan

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HabiHolic
As per your request

[Normal]

00:05:754 (5) - I may add here that I think the NC.
00:11:004 (5) - ^ (Same)
00:43:254 - hmm. If you add three more drum sampleset think look good.
00:49:254 (5) - NC?
01:07:255 (5) - ^
01:20:754 (6) - ^
01:29:379 - drum sampleset here. Feeling so empty without empty.

[Hard]

00:12:691 - It's also a good idea to add a spinner I think 00:14:754 - end is here
01:12:129 (8) - Ctrl + g

Good Map Gu~
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No_Gu

Rotte wrote:

M$M

[General]


  1. 谷子你的图里面怎么这么多的红线啊,好奇怪,重音问题
    建议offset-8好像不用


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[Normal]

  • Rhythm
  1. 01:33:504 (7) - Blanket啊,有瑕疵k
    02:49:254 (1) - Blanket.好像还可以

[Hard]

  1. 谷子你这个难度感觉超级奇怪啊,打起来怪怪的感觉,但是又不知道怎么说,梗也没啥说的,但是好憋屈<_<确实做的有点蛋疼。。
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:16:066 (1) - 这里超级容易miss,个人觉得原因就是前面都慢这里突然节奏上来了但是距离更远了,然后节奏还处于蓝线上,非常容易错过节奏,外加这个slider后面啥都没有。我觉得还行。。比较喜欢这样的
    00:53:941 (7,8) - 这个跳好大啊,有点太大了,建议让8的弧度变大一些,不然移动轨迹极其容易出轨。我感觉还好。。
    00:56:754 (5,6) - 这里flow感觉有点小问题,跳过去容易miss。k
    01:12:129 (8) - 这个建议再顺时针转一点点就能好点,有点太直了。k
    02:04:254 (1) - 挪到88|320就好多了,以前的有点高。k
    02:52:254 (1,2,1) - 这个节奏和构思好赞。谢谢o.o/

☆┏ (゜ω゜)=☞

HabiHolic wrote:

As per your request

[Normal]

00:05:754 (5) - I may add here that I think the NC.
00:11:004 (5) - ^ (Same)
00:43:254 - hmm. If you add three more drum sampleset think look good.not necessary for me
00:49:254 (5) - NC?
01:07:255 (5) - ^
01:20:754 (6) - ^
01:29:379 - drum sampleset here. Feeling so empty without empty.k
2 downbeat 1 NC so no NC stuff changes

[Hard]

00:12:691 - It's also a good idea to add a spinner I think 00:14:754 - end is herehmm...want a empty here
01:12:129 (8) - Ctrl + gnot so beautiful imo

Good Map Gu~

revive
moonlightleaf
[Hard]

00:04:254 (4) - 感觉原地2单点吧?

00:11:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - 中心旋转-30° 然后放在(232,168)

00:16:254 - 00:40:254 太长break了吧,map一点

00:49:254 (7,8) - flow 不是很好

01:11:754 (4,5) - ^

02:59:004 (2,3) - ^

00:50:754 (1,2) - 或许这样? 之前的短链有点那啥= =

01:25:816 (5,6) - 提高半个直滑条的距离?

01:29:566 - 加note

01:41:754 (1) - 后接break 总感觉怪怪的

01:53:754 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 有点懒

02:07:629 (4,5) - blanket 还有 02:07:816 加note 或者不加 02:08:566 (6)删掉

02:09:504 (3) - 不觉得好啊 这种, 毕竟大钢琴音比这个嗞~~的连续低音强烈 不如3单点

02:18:316 - 对于前面567连起来的话 这边加个note感觉打击感好一些

02:26:754 (1) - 似乎有点远了,往左靠点

02:29:191 (5) - remove clap

02:44:566 (3,4) - 比起02:44:754 这个音小的多啊 打击感也不够 ,45很不连贯

02:52:816 加note

03:20:004 (3) - 缩短从后面红线开始 这边单点

03:27:129 (3,4) - 试试3单点 4往前移到白线

03:41:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这什么结尾= =

感觉是不是没做完 还是什么 :?:
alacat
Hi! from your Queue! long time no see Noguuu :)

[Hard]
  1. StackLeniency to 0.7? It doesn't work to me.
  2. 00:04:629 - How about adding a whistle to here ? I feel that sound is a little strong.
  3. 00:06:504 (3,4) - try to move like this picture! te flow would be better to me.
  4. 00:16:254 (4) - I prefer to use a new combo from here because it is on red line. and I think it's better to use a little jump on here since it's really strong sound. try to do like this ~
  5. 00:51:879 (4) - I recommend you to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.
  6. 01:22:629 (5,6,1) - I feel this part looks crowded for playing. Please use more spacing to here.
  7. 01:29:566 - You should consider adding a note to here. Because you took the vocal sounds on this kiai part.
  8. 03:07:816 - ^ Same.
  9. 03:43:254 (1,2,3,4) - all stacking is a little boring for players in my opinion. try to move these 4 notes to somewhere.


Great partterns and flow!
btw you have to delete this .OSB file "Suzumu feat.Hatsune Miku - Usotsuki Peter Pan (No_Gu)" Good luck!
Topic Starter
No_Gu

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Hard]

00:04:254 (4) - 感觉原地2单点吧?没太懂。。

00:11:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - 中心旋转-30° 然后放在(232,168)考虑考虑

00:16:254 - 00:40:254 太长break了吧,map一点间奏就这么长啊。。。

00:49:254 (7,8) - flow 不是很好

01:11:754 (4,5) - ^

02:59:004 (2,3) - ^这些其实都挺常见的啊。。

00:50:754 (1,2) - 或许这样? 之前的短链有点那啥= =

01:25:816 (5,6) - 提高半个直滑条的距离?结尾有压音的

01:29:566 - 加notek

01:41:754 (1) - 后接break 总感觉怪怪的间奏放break有什么怪怪的。。

01:53:754 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 有点懒习惯了。。

02:07:629 (4,5) - blanket 还有 02:07:816 加note 或者不加 02:08:566 (6)删掉这边都是跟鼓的

02:09:504 (3) - 不觉得好啊 这种, 毕竟大钢琴音比这个嗞~~的连续低音强烈 不如3单点^我比较习惯跟鼓

02:18:316 - 对于前面567连起来的话 这边加个note感觉打击感好一些这个难度本来就是凑出来的 不想太难

02:26:754 (1) - 似乎有点远了,往左靠点k

02:29:191 (5) - remove clap仔细听 有的

02:44:566 (3,4) - 比起02:44:754 这个音小的多啊 打击感也不够 ,45很不连贯跟鼓

02:52:816 加note跟伴奏

03:20:004 (3) - 缩短从后面红线开始 这边单点

03:27:129 (3,4) - 试试3单点 4往前移到白线

03:41:004 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这什么结尾= = ..

感觉是不是没做完 还是什么 :?:
节奏观念差挺多。。我习惯跟伴奏和鼓,所以大部分没有改

alacat wrote:

Hi! from your Queue! long time no see Noguuu :)longgggggggggg time no see

[Hard]
  1. StackLeniency to 0.7? It doesn't work to me. ahhh,my habit that non-stack for 1/1
  2. 00:04:629 - How about adding a whistle to here ? I feel that sound is a little strong.i feel noisy when adding whistle too near...will have a consider
  3. 00:06:504 (3,4) - try to move like this picture! te flow would be better to me.k
  4. 00:16:254 (4) - I prefer to use a new combo from here because it is on red line. and I think it's better to use a little jump on here since it's really strong sound. try to do like this ~yes my mistake
  5. 00:51:879 (4) - I recommend you to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.ehh If I do that,00:51:691 (3,4) - this flow becomes strange,and for this one,I think it's a little fun to play like this
  6. 01:22:629 (5,6,1) - I feel this part looks crowded for playing. Please use more spacing to here.seems so
  7. 01:29:566 - You should consider adding a note to here. Because you took the vocal sounds on this kiai part.k
  8. 03:07:816 - ^ Same.will be hard...
  9. 03:43:254 (1,2,3,4) - all stacking is a little boring for players in my opinion. try to move these 4 notes to somewhere. ahh I get used to doing sth like this


Great partterns and flow!ww thanks
btw you have to delete this .OSB file "Suzumu feat.Hatsune Miku - Usotsuki Peter Pan (No_Gu)" Good luck!nice,I forget it
thanks both /
Flask
刪OSB刪OSB刪OSB刪OSB刪OSB刪OSB刪OSB

[Hard]
  1. 01:28:629 (5,6,7,8,1) - 間距怪怪
  2. 02:26:754 (1,2) - 丑
  3. 02:57:504 (5) - 間距
  4. 01:08:566 (4,5) - 01:05:566 (4,5) - 另外全diff這兩個點可以上drumsampleset


現在不確定custom hitsound到底是不是真的要100ms所以保險起見我幫你延長了一下
drum-hitnormal
drum-hitwhistle
直接套上去就行

metadata能有證明的話就貼上來
Miriko
Hi! Posting from your M4M queue~ (Idk if it's still open but at least I hope my mod could help! ^^)

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:254 (4) - Ctrl G here so that the slider will point towards the next slider?
  2. 02:01:254 - Insert a small break here maybe? It feels really empty. ><


I'm not very experienced in modding but I hope my two suggestions helped!
Topic Starter
No_Gu
音效那个没改 别的改了

Edit:a metadata proof
This is a picture from the PV of this song.
since I see 2 maps ranked with the artist "Suzumu".I did some research
neonat showed the BK of the CD in p/4203791.but there is no eng name for スズム
In kemu's CD,it shows suzumu
and in keme's songs' PV,it also shows suzumu
So a correct one should be suzumu
Flask
可以交出真相了
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No_Gu

Flask wrote:

可以交出真相了
才不要
Momochikun
checked a few pattern via irc, sorry for late..
Qualified~ (:3 」∠)
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No_Gu

Momochikun wrote:

checked a few pattern via irc, sorry for late..
Qualified~ (:3 」∠)
Thanks~~
meii18
Congratulations No Gu =w=

Btw welcome back :3/
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No_Gu

ByBy13 wrote:

Congratulations No Gu =w=

Btw welcome back :3/
www thanks
HabiHolic
Gratz No_Gu♥
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No_Gu

HabiHolic wrote:

Gratz No_Gu♥
thanks~
Flask
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No_Gu

Flask wrote:

Mint
Congrats! My feels when I finally saw another No_Gu map in the qualified section (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
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No_Gu

appleeaterx wrote:

Congrats! My feels when I finally saw another No_Gu map in the qualified section (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
wow thanks~~
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