1. Hard (2.86 stars, 509 notes)
2. Insane (5.43 stars, 905 notes)
3. Normal (1.58 stars, 233 notes)

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Mod Reqs~

FIRST HA!~

Normal

00:14:090 : make it Straighter

00:16:272 : ^ same

00:18:454 : should be like this

00:46:818 : Bad Overlapping , Should be fix

01:22:000 : More Sexier Please

01:24:181 : ^ same XD

01:31:545 : Note Here~

01:33:727 : ^ same

01:35:909 : ^ same^

01:38:090 : ^^same^^

02:51:181(1,1,1,1) : Remove NC

03:09:727 : Same^

Not Modding Hard and Insane xxxxxxxx___________xxxxxxxx

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue Sorry I'm really, really, REALLY late !!! :'(
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- General :

1. You should add some tags (sorry I tried to find some but i failed because i'm baaaaaad ;w;) <add label and composer
2. Seems you didn't have SB, so disable Widescreen Support. <fix

- Insane :

1. HP=7 maybe ? <fix
2. 00:05:772 (2,3)- Have a 1/1 pause and restart at same place break rhythm you create. You should not stack them. <fix
3. 00:06:863 (6,7)- Blanket this correctly. <fix
4. 00:08:090 (3,4,1)- You should keep same spacing for (4,1) than (3,4). It's hard to read and anti-fun. <fix
5. 00:10:272 (3,4,5,6)- Make them all like (5) and add 20° to (6). <fix
6. 00:19:000 (4,1)- Blanket <fix
7. 00:20:500 (1,2)- ^ same for 00:21:181 (3,4)- <fix
8. 00:23:363 (4,1)- That kind of overlap is horrible. Change slider shape or revome it and add circles. <change slider shape
9. 00:30:590 (5,6)- Blanket <fix
10. 00:36:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- Try to keep a constant spacing here. There is no point to have it like this. <fix
11. 00:38:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6)- ^ same for other like 00:40:545- or 01:07:818- <fix
12. 00:39:181 (1,2,3)- ^ <fix
13. 00:54:318 (6,8)- You can avoid this overlap, you have space for it. <fix
14. 00:54:727 (8,9)- Blanket <fix
15. 01:01:818- Remove NC here. <fix
16. 01:44:636 (1,2,3,4)- like 00:10:272- <fix
17. 01:50:500 (4,5)- Why spacing change suddenly here ? Make it constant. <fix same spacing
18. 01:52:818 (7)- CTRL+G to get a better flow. <fix
19. 01:53:090 (8,1)- Reduce a little this jump. There's no reason to have it here and restart from same location is weird. <fix
20. 02:01:409 (5)- CTRL+J and H to improve flow. <fix
21. 02:02:636 (1,2,3,4,5)- Keep constant spacing. <fix
22. 02:12:727 (7,1)- Horrible overlap. <fix
23. 02:24:727 (8,9,10,11,1)- Rework this part. It's unreadable and looks awful. <fix
24. 02:44:636 (1,2,3)- This part is anti-flow. Rethink about this pattern. <fix
25. 03:01:272 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- I understand you want a 3 parts stream to follow rhythm but like it's construct it just looks bad, there's no a real pattern to put them together. <fix
26. 03:39:181 (1,2)- Overlap. <fix
27. 03:42:454 (6,7)- Bad flow. <fix

- Hard :

1. 00:05:363 (1,2)- You could make this overlap better. <fix
2. 00:089:454 (3,1)- It's better to not stack them, you didn't do it after. <fix
3. 00:20:500 (1,2,3)- This pattern is messy ! Overlap and no flow. Rework it. <fix
4. 00:34:818 (2,3)- Overlap <fix
5. 00:45:181 (2,3)- ^ <fix
6. 00:46:818 (2,3,4)- Blanket them properly. <fix
7. 00:57:181 (4,5,1)- This spacing is incoherent with rest of the part. Chance it for all Kiai pls. <fix all this pattern
8. 01:01:545 (5,1)- Blanket <fix
9. 01:06:454 (1,2)- ^ <fix
10. 01:09:727 (1,2)- ^ <fix
11. 01:22:000 (1,2)- ^ <fix
12. 01:28:272 (1,2,3)- Overlap with no flow. Rework it pls. <fix
13. 01:59:636 (3)- CTRL+H ? <fix
14. 02:47:363 (2)- Why not make it like 02:46:818 (1)- ? <fix
15. 02:57:727 (1,2,3)- Maybe try to get some symetry on this pattern ? <fix symmetry
16. 03:33:727 (4,5,6)- Bad overlap. <fix
17. 03:35:909 (4,5,6)- ^ <fix
18. 03:45:181 (7,1)- ^ <fix
19. 03:49:545 (1)- You should reduce by 1/2 this reverse slider and add a circle of last note, because she'll be more *pronounced* like this <fix

- Normal :

1. Maybe you should start to map like other diff ? It's strange like that. <fix to match start time of other diffs
2. Check AiMod -> you got some inconsistant spacing on your diff. Spacing need to be constant on normal diff. <I make this map DS=0.6. But this AiMod points out DS=0.6 is too close and DS=0.6 is too far. I cant fix these, so skip this section.
3. 00:17:363 (2)- Avoid more than one arrow for reverse slider, to not *pertubate* news players. <fix all
4. 00:25:000 (4)- ^ <fix
5. 00:42:454 (1,2)- Blanket them. <fix
6. 01:09:727 (2,3)- Bad stacking. <fix
7. 01:43:545 (1,2)- Blanket. <fix
8. 01:46:818 (4)- Like 00:17:363-. Think to check them all. <fix
9. 01:48:454 (1,2)- Blanket. <fix
10. 02:08:636 (2,3)- Bad blanket. <fix
11. 02:52:272 (6,1)- Avoid overlap like this. <fix
12. 02:55:545 (3,4,1)- This one is worst ! <fix
13. 03:04:272 (3)- Make it like 03:02:090 (1)- <fix
14. 03:06:454 (3,1)- Blanket. <fix
15. 03:10:272 (4)- GTRL+G and readjust DS ? <fix

These diffs are messy and get a lack of flow. You need to work on these two points.
Good luck.

1. 00:03:045 - Should have another circle
2. 00:06:045 - Should have another circle
3. 00:04:272 (5) - Slider should be longer
4. 00:10:272 (3,4,5,6) - Slider velocity is too low, the velocity change should probably start at 00:09:181 (3)
5. 00:22:000 (2,3,4) - 00:22:068 (3) Isnt needed, just space 00:22:000 (2) to be 1 beat away from 00:22:136 (4)
6. 01:22:204 - The break feels weird because its in the middle of the map, you could start the break after the spinner at 01:10:954 (1) or map the break section
7. 01:31:272 (4,5,6) - 01:31:477 (5) Is making it sound weird due to the spacing between the two silders, make it so that 01:31:272 (4) ending overlaps 01:31:272 (4,6) or remove just 01:31:477 (5) and leave it as is
8. 01:39:454 (1) - Move it away from 01:39:045 (4) - its a bit confusing since 01:39:454 (1) on the same spot as 01:39:045 (4)
9. 01:41:227 - Should have another circle
10. 01:42:454 - Should have another circle
11. 01:44:500 - Should have another circle, the pause is really awkward
12. 01:46:681 - More awkward pauses
13. 01:47:363 (5) - The slider doesnt feel like it should be there
14. 01:51:181 - Another weird pause
15. 01:53:500 - Missing a note
16. 02:10:681 (10,11,12) - Should switch places with 02:10:545 (9) because the triplet should start earlier
17. 02:43:681 (3) - The slider could be a little bit longer
18. 02:47:636 (7) - Could be a repeating slider
19. 02:48:863 - 02:50:227 - Could be a stream instead of a short slider or have a longer repeating slider
20. 02:50:772 - Needs another note inbetween
21. 02:54:863 (1,2,3) - The timing is off, it should be moved to 02:54:658 and make the slider a little bit longer and add a circle after
22. 03:19:750 - Should probably map this area instead of a break
23. 03:28:477 - Should also map this area too

Owntrolf wrote:

-Insane:

1. 00:03:045 - Should have another circle <not change
2. 00:06:045 - Should have another circle <not change
3. 00:04:272 (5) - Slider should be longer <fix
4. 00:10:272 (3,4,5,6) - Slider velocity is too low, the velocity change should probably start at 00:09:181 (3) <hmm... putting on hold...
5. 00:22:000 (2,3,4) - 00:22:068 (3) Isnt needed, just space 00:22:000 (2) to be 1 beat away from 00:22:136 (4) <fix
6. 01:22:204 - The break feels weird because its in the middle of the map, you could start the break after the spinner at 01:10:954 (1) or map the break section <not change. but I want to change, the more unpopular too
7. 01:31:272 (4,5,6) - 01:31:477 (5) Is making it sound weird due to the spacing between the two silders, make it so that 01:31:272 (4) ending overlaps 01:31:272 (4,6) or remove just 01:31:477 (5) and leave it as is <fix
8. 01:39:454 (1) - Move it away from 01:39:045 (4) - its a bit confusing since 01:39:454 (1) on the same spot as 01:39:045 (4) <fix
9. 01:41:227 - Should have another circle <fix
10. 01:42:454 - Should have another circle <not change. i prefer stop
11. 01:44:500 - Should have another circle, the pause is really awkward <same as above
12. 01:46:681 - More awkward pauses <not change. i dont think so
13. 01:47:363 (5) - The slider doesnt feel like it should be there <fix
14. 01:51:181 - Another weird pause <fix
15. 01:53:500 - Missing a note <lyrics trace
16. 02:10:681 (10,11,12) - Should switch places with 02:10:545 (9) because the triplet should start earlier <fix
17. 02:43:681 (3) - The slider could be a little bit longer <fix
18. 02:47:636 (7) - Could be a repeating slider <fix
19. 02:48:863 - 02:50:227 - Could be a stream instead of a short slider or have a longer repeating slider <not change
20. 02:50:772 - Needs another note inbetween <fix
21. 02:54:863 (1,2,3) - The timing is off, it should be moved to 02:54:658 and make the slider a little bit longer and add a circle after <fix
22. 03:19:750 - Should probably map this area instead of a break <add mapping
23. 03:28:477 - Should also map this area too <not change

Note: AiMod is complaining about your Klai Time from 02:53:363

You should probably enable your Klai Time from 02:56:636 which is currently one of your timing points

i think ok in this state. because it is a common pattern

*This is my first modding so it might be a little bad
Nice map overall, the only thing I have a problem with is the pauses because I'm paranoid of missing beats

Thanks for modding! Im very helpful!