1. Lv.12 - 4Key (3.65 stars, 885 notes)
2. Lv.5 - 4Key (1.93 stars, 366 notes)
3. S.Star's Lv.9 - 4Key (2.56 stars, 686 notes)

victorica_db wrote:

hi
Do you love my map ?

richardfeder wrote:

victorica_db wrote:

hi
Do you love my map ?

hi
yes I do

DE-CADE wrote:

~ Hi From My Queue ~

~ Below are my suggestion feel free to ignore it ~

Vic n S.S >///<

[box=ModBox]You are Experienced mapper so, maybe my mod wont much help, but since you request to me well there you are

[General]

I See some problem on AiMod, you may check it ~

Audio : 10%

[Lv.5]

OD : 6 HP : 6

I never see 1,5+ Star on any ranked "lv.5" diff

00:20:283 (20283|0,20520|1) - I think the right timing is 1/6ok
00:21:507 (21507|0) - Move to 2ok

00:22:454 (22454|2) - using 1/6 move one line up
00:22:770 (22770|0) - ^
00:23:007 (23007|1) - ^
00:22:296 (22296|1) - Delete
00:25:454 (25454|3,25533|2,25612|1,25691|0) could be easier if you delete all this and add LN on 3 at 00:25:454 end 00:25:770
00:26:401 (26401|1) - Just like the other move it to 1
00:26:717 (26717|3) Move it to 00:26:875 - Cymbal sound here
00:31:138 (31138|3) - Move it here 00:30:822
00:43:454 - Following Vocal, well okay
00:54:191 (54191|1) - Move to 3
00:58:612 (58612|3,58770|3) - I dont think we need these, since this is easy diff so , Delete
00:59:085 (59085|3,59243|3) - ^
00:59:559 (59559|0) - ^
01:01:138 - Same Trouble from here
01:08:559 (68559|2) - 3 is enough, Delete
01:09:664 (69664|3) - Well same problem like before, using 1/4 BSD move it to red line above
01:10:928 (70928|3) - ^
01:13:454 (73454|0) - ^
01:12:191 (72191|3) - Delete for this one
01:22:138 (82138|0) - Move to 4
01:28:296 - Well that LN stair very hard for this diff, my suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783729
01:36:507 - This Pattern too, my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1783732


Love this one, Good Luck ~

Spy wrote:

奉命來水

[General]
Hitsound呢
預覽點呢
音效不要低於5%

[Lv.5]
00:47:401 - 加
01:33:349 (93349|0) - 這個拆了，01:33:664分界點 ......

[S.Star's Lv.9]
00:08:243 - 漏音
00:18:822 和 00:19:138 - 加上吧

[Lv.12]
真的沒啥好摸的，都塞滿了。。

asd123iii wrote:

|1|2|3|4|
[Lv.5]

00:47:480 (47480|0) - 這裡沒有音吧 是不是下錯了错了 应该在白线的。。
01:06:664 (66664|3) - end at 01:07:296 - ok
01:07:770 - add 1 or 2 notes ok
01:16:296 (76296|2) - end at 01:16:612 - ok
01:33:980 - add a note at 4 ? ok

[S.Star's Lv.9]

00:22:507 (22507|0) - 換個hitsound吧, 這樣頗怪的
00:29:401 (29401|3) - 沒音
00:30:033 (30033|3) - ^
00:31:296 (31296|0) - ^
00:32:559 (32559|3) - ^
00:33:191 (33191|0) - ^
00:33:822 (33822|0) - ^
00:34:454 (34454|2) - ^
這些地方雖然打起來不怪但是沒音

[Lv.12]
沒啥問題 (有音的地方都有note)

victorica_db wrote:

asd123iii wrote:

|1|2|3|4|
[S.Star's Lv.9]

00:22:507 (22507|0) - 換個hitsound吧, 這樣頗怪的
00:29:401 (29401|3) - 沒音
00:30:033 (30033|3) - ^
00:31:296 (31296|0) - ^
00:32:559 (32559|3) - ^
00:33:191 (33191|0) - ^
00:33:822 (33822|0) - ^
00:34:454 (34454|2) - ^
這些地方雖然打起來不怪但是沒音

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

request from queue
狂三欸

Column: 1-4

[LV.5]
00:19:138 (19138|1) - 移到第4，然後把00:19:454 (19454|3) - 移到第2
00:19:928 (19928|1) - 移到第4
01:09:822 - 這裡好像和01:08:559 - 一樣所以應該在第2加音
01:11:085 - 第3加音
01:16:296 - 加音
01:18:664 - ^
01:19:928 - ^
01:21:191 - ^


[LV.12]
00:01:928 (1928|1) - 這個音比 00:02:085 (2085|1) - 低，所以移到第1吧ok
00:48:507 - 這裡真的要4個音嗎?

Good luck!

RemiFlan wrote:

Alright. Going to be kinda harsh about this, because it shouldn't have been qualified in the first place (in it's current state).

I'm not going to go over the LNs, since I don't like playing them, but I will say that they could use a little bit of work.
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

Lv.12

00:20:283 (20283|0) - resnap to 00:20:296
00:20:520 (20520|0) - resnap to 00:20:507this is my mistake
00:22:809 (22809|3,22809|1,22928|1,22928|3,23046|3,23046|2,23243|3) - try doing what's on the left side of screenshot http://puu.sh/c05AN/065dbba6fb.png i think mine is much more fit music here is 3 stress drums,i use this pattern to emphasis it
00:25:454 (25454|0,25454|2,25533|3,25612|1,25691|2,25770|1) - change to this http://puu.sh/c06tU/f68e195a0d.pngno yours distory the handfeeling
00:30:664 (30664|2) - move to column 0
00:30:822 (30822|0) - Remove
00:30:507 (30507|0) - Removethis is the whole part .i dont want to ruin it
00:35:243 (35243|0,35296|1,35349|2,35401|3,35401|0,35454|2,35507|1,35559|0,35559|3,35612|1,35664|2,35717|1,35770|0,35770|3,35822|1,35875|3,35875|0) -
Highly suggest redoing this to not be a 1/6 burst. There's nothing really matching to the notes to be a hit except for the notes on columns 0 and 3.use your earphone carefully
01:06:033 (66033|0) - move to column 3no too much for the right hand
01:06:112 (66112|2) - move to column 0dnt want to add jacks
01:06:191 (66191|0) - removeone drum one crash no mistake
01:07:191 (67191|1,67243|2) - Removebuy a new earphone plz.

RemiFlan wrote:

I only wanted to put in my input. Thanks for considering I guess?

Also I'm not the only one complaining about the 1/6 burst section. Keep that in mind.

victorica_db wrote:

RemiFlan wrote:

I only wanted to put in my input. Thanks for considering I guess?

Also I'm not the only one complaining about the 1/6 burst section. Keep that in mind.

im not the one who care about that. see your all maps' quality keep that in mind thanks .

razlteh wrote:

you don't care about your map's quality and then you tell another mapper to look at their maps' quality? you basically ignored the entire mod as well, this map is absolutely horrible to play i don't know what kind of drugs you're on

remiflan's one and only map is better than this pile of crap

razlteh wrote:

you don't care about your map's quality and then you tell another mapper to look at their maps' quality? you basically ignored the entire mod as well, this map is absolutely horrible to play i don't know what kind of drugs you're on

remiflan's one and only map is better than this pile of crap

KSHR wrote:

Disqualifying due to the following issues.

1. Metadata issue
   Both unicode title and romanized one: Trust in you (TV Size)
   For more detail, p/3266920
   
2. 00:20:520 (20520|0) - An unsnapped object in Lv.12

This map will be handled by mania BATs from now on. Good luck.