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[ Kantan]

  1. 01:00:368 (96) - try change this note to k, the vocal's pitch is a bit higher than 00:55:437 (87) -
  2. 01:13:519 (120) - ^
  3. 02:14:340 (222) - ^
  4. 02:27:491 (246) - ^
  5. 01:35:710 (156,157) - reverse? seems better for vocal
  6. 01:49:683 (181,182,183,184) - here is a bit different with the first part, try to follow vocal precisely?
  7. 02:50:094 (283) - this note could be removed,though there is drum sound , but it is a bit awkward when i playing
  8. 03:28:725 (345) - move to 03:29:135 - i think this rhythm is more clear
  9. 03:32:834 (1,2,3) - i think you can remove these three notes to make a break, because there is only vocal here, if you remove these notes, it may be better when playing
  10. 03:46:396 (25) - remove and move 03:45:779 (24) - to 03:46:190 - , i think it is better by following vocal, and also make a break after big note



[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:17:629 (39) - try to remove this note? to make consistency with 00:14:341 -
  2. 00:22:971 - add note here? to reflect 00:20:916 (45,46,47) - this pattern
  3. reverse 00:34:067 (73) - and 00:36:533 (79) - ? the drum's power on 00:36:533 (79) - is a bit more than 00:34:889 (75,77) - and the vocal's pitch is also high
  4. 00:57:081 (125) - change to k? more fit the next pattern 00:57:492 (126,127,128) - imo
  5. 01:31:190 (214) - remove? to make a consistency with 01:32:423 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222) -
  6. 02:45:985 (389) - remove? to follow the instrument as you followed on 02:44:752 (387) - and 02:43:108 (384) -
  7. 03:15:574 (29) - remove? to make a consistency with 03:02:834 (3,4,5,6) -
  8. 03:43:930 (25) - this slider is a bit weird to me, try remove slider and add some notes here



[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:10:848 (35) - remove? the instrument has a long tone here
  2. 01:24:820 (288) - ^
  3. 00:33:451 (103) - move to 00:33:245 - is better to me by following drum
  4. 01:47:423 (368) - ^
  5. 01:34:067 (320,322) - reverse? by following vocal's pitch
  6. 01:44:546 (356,357,358) - this triple is occurred suddenly, try to remove 01:44:546 (356,357,359) -
  7. 02:20:916 (492) - move to 02:21:122 - would be better imo
  8. 03:46:396 (45) - ^
  9. 02:42:286 (552,553,554,555,556) - this pattern also occurred suddenly , try to make another pattern
  10. 03:35:916 (10) - ,03:39:204 (21,22) - this part is calm, so remove them to make the note less intensive



[ Oni]

  1. 00:25:848 - add note here? there is an obvious drum sound
  2. 00:30:574 - ^
  3. 00:45:779 (195) - ^
  4. 01:44:546 - ^ also make a consistency with 01:41:259 (469,470,471,472,473) -
  5. 00:45:779 (195) -the drum sound here is not so clear, so i think you can remove it
  6. 02:36:533 - ~ 02:48:040 -this part is calm ,so try to make some 2/1 break
  7. 03:22:971 (97) - remove and move 03:22:560 (94,95,96) - to 03:22:766 - to follow the music precisely
  8. 03:43:930 - same as futsuu


that's all~
good luck~ :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

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[ Kantan]

  1. 01:00:368 (96) - try change this note to k, the vocal's pitch is a bit higher than 00:55:437 (87) - fixed
  2. 01:13:519 (120) - ^ ^
  3. 02:14:340 (222) - ^ ^
  4. 02:27:491 (246) - ^ ^
  5. 01:35:710 (156,157) - reverse? seems better for vocal fixed
  6. 01:49:683 (181,182,183,184) - here is a bit different with the first part, try to follow vocal precisely? The current pattern fits the vocal pitch well.
  7. 02:50:094 (283) - this note could be removed,though there is drum sound , but it is a bit awkward when i playing Okay.
  8. 03:28:725 (345) - move to 03:29:135 - i think this rhythm is more clear I prefer following the vocal at 03:28:725 -
  9. 03:32:834 (1,2,3) - i think you can remove these three notes to make a break, because there is only vocal here, if you remove these notes, it may be better when playing fixed
  10. 03:46:396 (25) - remove and move 03:45:779 (24) - to 03:46:190 - , i think it is better by following vocal, and also make a break after big note The current pattern could follow both the vocal at 03:45:779 - and the piano at 03:46:396 - , so no change here.


[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:10:848 (35) - remove? the instrument has a long tone here fixed
  2. 01:24:820 (288) - ^ ^
  3. 00:33:451 (103) - move to 00:33:245 - is better to me by following drum fixed
  4. 01:47:423 (368) - ^ ^
  5. 01:34:067 (320,322) - reverse? by following vocal's pitch As the vocal pitch is the same, I prefer following the guitar at 01:34:067 (318) - and the increasing trend of vocal pitch among 01:34:889 (320,321,322,323) - by mapping the two notes as k and d respectively.
  6. 01:44:546 (356,357,358) - this triple is occurred suddenly, try to remove 01:44:546 (356,357,359) - I followed the background music there.
  7. 02:20:916 (492) - move to 02:21:122 - would be better imo fixed
  8. 03:46:396 (45) - ^ The current pattern suits the background music more by making 03:46:807 (46) - stand alone.
  9. 02:42:286 (552,553,554,555,556) - this pattern also occurred suddenly , try to make another pattern I followed the piano sound purely in this part.
  10. 03:35:916 (10) - ,03:39:204 (21,22) - this part is calm, so remove them to make the note less intensive I found it a bit weird to break the pattern in this way, so I would like to keep this atm.


that's all~
good luck~ :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)

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qoot8123 wrote:

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[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:17:629 (39) - try to remove this note? to make consistency with 00:14:341 - no, there is a significant sound which different from the previous part
  2. 00:22:971 - add note here? to reflect 00:20:916 (45,46,47) - this pattern OK
  3. reverse 00:34:067 (73) - and 00:36:533 (79) - ? the drum's power on 00:36:533 (79) - is a bit more than 00:34:889 (75,77) - and the vocal's pitch is also high OK
  4. 00:57:081 (125) - change to k? more fit the next pattern 00:57:492 (126,127,128) - imo OK
  5. 01:31:190 (214) - remove? to make a consistency with 01:32:423 (216,217,218,219,220,221,222) - OK
  6. 02:45:985 (389) - remove? to follow the instrument as you followed on 02:44:752 (387) - and 02:43:108 (384) - OK
  7. 03:15:574 (29) - remove? to make a consistency with 03:02:834 (3,4,5,6) - OK
  8. 03:43:930 (25) - this slider is a bit weird to me, try remove slider and add some notes here OK



[ Oni]

  1. 00:25:848 - add note here? there is an obvious drum sound OK
  2. 00:30:574 - ^ OK
  3. 00:45:779 (195) - ^ Contrast with the below one =="
  4. 01:44:546 - ^ also make a consistency with 01:41:259 (469,470,471,472,473) - OK
  5. 00:45:779 (195) -the drum sound here is not so clear, so i think you can remove it OK
  6. 02:36:533 - ~ 02:48:040 -this part is calm ,so try to make some 2/1 break OK
  7. 03:22:971 (97) - remove and move 03:22:560 (94,95,96) - to 03:22:766 - to follow the music precisely OK
  8. 03:43:930 - same as futsuu OK


that's all~
good luck~ :)
Thanks for your mod :)
mingmichael
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]

☞ okay!
☞ okay!
• change 00:52:149 - to be kat. this kat will follow the similar drum hits (00:51:738 - ~ 00:52:766 - actually)

• okay delete this one 01:04:067 - . well yah i know you wanted to add some notes there rather than break. but actually this break is really useful to give a break on those pattern from 01:00:368 - ~ 01:05:916 - (if you delete this). first, the vocal doesn't come out there and actually you follow the vocals during the kiai.
it looks like 00:59:957 - a bit when the vocal doesn't come out there and you gave a break on there

• hah delete this. it's a bit similar like 00:54:204 - and 00:54:615 - and you didn't add any notes before those two notes

• kat too on 02:06:122 -

and also delete 02:18:040 - and 02:34:067 -

• you can add a note (don) on 02:50:916 - and change 02:51:327 - to be don there. a don on 02:51:327 - is for the lower instrument sound (it's just a bittt lower) than 02:50:505 - . so to make it a bit different, i change 02:51:327 - to don

• add a note (don) on 02:57:492 - if you change above ^

• move 03:11:875 - to 03:11:670 - . make it consistent for following the vocal

a missing note on 03:13:108 - . add this with don to follow the vocal there

• move 03:28:725 - to 03:29:135 - so it will be o o o o o. it looks a bit weird for having xx-xxxx pattern there when you mostly map with xxx-x patterns. i remember that i ever mentioned this too in my previous mods before haha. so then just consider about this more

move 03:35:300 - to 03:35:505 - . vocal :c same like 03:38:793 - hue

• well i know that you followed the piano tune on 03:43:519 - by using a note. nice idea but it would be better if you just focus on one thing only. here from 03:34:067 - until 03:47:218 - mostly you follow the vocal but suddenly you add a note on 03:43:519 - when the vocal disappears. well just make it more consistent which pattern that you want to follow

• actually these notes on 03:45:779 - and 03:46:396 - because actually they don't follow any particular sounds (it's just 03:45:779 - follow the instrument hue) and basically you followed the vocal (the proof is you map vocals on 03:44:546 - ; 03:44:957 - ; 03:45:368 - :v). okay try to deleted those notes and add a note on 03:46:190 -


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[Futsuu]

☞ okay!
☞ okay, i am a bit confused when i checked your whole of your futsuu patterns. sometime you follow the vocals and sometime you follow the instrument sounds too and it makes a bit confusing patterns too. well i'll try to help you by giving some suggestion on the Notes box

☞ from 00:39:820 - until 00:49:683 - , try to make some improvement there. as you can see, your patterns are almost same like nardo's Kantan. look here


Kantan~Futsuu

☞same on 01:53:793 - until 02:03:656 - like above
i really recommend you to remove the finisher on 00:05:300 - . well i know that you wanted to emphasize the cymbal sound which is given from the song, didn't you? it's nice~ but after considering again this finisher is quite difficult because the Futsuu players who will play your map will be confused because they must still press 1/2 notes again after it. well it's different if we compare 00:05:300 - with 00:06:944 - . on 00:06:944 - after the finsiher comes out you gave a break there. nah of course the player will be a bit relax and can see the next pattern clearly. but it's different with the finisher on 00:05:300 -

• kat on 00:09:820 - . make it just a normal pattern for the 1/2 triplet. i know that don is for the lower pitch sound, but just ignore it because o o O is more confusing than o o O

• don on 00:10:642 - . the pitch sound is still low (as low as 00:10:231 - actually)

• lets have a break please. try to delete 00:12:492 - . you wanted to follow the violin sound by using that note, but consider again about the breaks. this is such more important

• here again. change 00:25:642 - to be kat and delete 00:26:464 - . you put it suddenly with 1/2 patterns there. actually i was a bit confused when i test played it. so then just change 00:25:642 - to be kat (for having a same colours like 00:25:437 - and 00:26:053 - ) and delete 00:26:464 - for the break again

• don on 00:32:834 - . the vocal is already down and it actually has a similar low pitch sounds like 00:33:040 - and 00:33:245 - which you used dons

• move this note 00:37:149 - to 00:36:327 - and change 00:36:327 - and 00:36:533 - to be dons. don't forget to delete 00:36:944 - . i changed and deleted it to make a similar patterns for the notes like 00:27:492 - ~ 00:29:957 - and 00:30:779 - ~ 00:33:245 -

• nah here. delete 00:50:094 - and 00:51:533 - . change 00:50:916 - and 00:51:122 - to be o O. kay i changed and moved them to give a break again and it flows better IMO

• you can move 00:52:355 - to 00:52:560 -

• from 01:19:067 - ~ 01:20:916 - , try this

it flows better than yours because these dons on 01:19:067 - and 01:19:272 - actually follow the low vocals really well. and then the o o o o pattern on 01:19:683 - ~ 01:20:505 - follow the vocal+instrument really well too (when the snare comes on 01:20:505 - , the kat can emphasize it really well)

• finisher on 01:24:204 - . this finisher will emphasize the strong cymbal sound
you put a finisher too on 00:10:231 - anyway

• move 01:26:875 - to 01:26:670 - . i moved this to follow the drum hit (which comes out on 01:26:670 -) and ofc this note will follow the instrument sound better too

• change 01:35:300 - ~ 01:35:711 - to be o o o. this notes will follow the vocal much better. the vocals actually are high on 01:35:300 - and it drops a bit (becomes a bit lower) on 01:35:505 - . so to make that dropping pitch sound, i change it to be o o

delete 01:37:971 - . don't make a suddent doublet pattern there. actually this's quite confusing since you just use a simple pattern from 01:27:492 - , and suddenly you used 1/2 doublets on 01:37:971 - . i know that you wanted to follow the vocals, but actually it's not a good idea

• how about to delete 01:40:437 - . yeah i know that you wanted to follow the vocals again, but for following the vocal isn't a good way on there because actually the part becomes silence a while (just vocal and the instruments stop)

• 01:43:519 - ~ 01:43:930 - change to be o o o. this pattern will give a good dropping pitch sounds

kat on 01:45:163 - and don on 01:45:574 - . make it consistent for the pattern like you did on 01:41:875 - and 01:48:451 - with kats. it's actually same on 01:45:163 - for the kat

• don on 01:46:807 - . much better to follow the vocal by using o o o

• again, move 01:53:588 - to 01:53:382 - and change 01:53:177 - and 01:53:382 - to be o o. it suits better to follow the snare sound which comes out on 01:53:382 - with a kat (and actually it's not really particular to emphasize the finisher on 01:53:793 - by using a not on 01:53:588 - )

• same like the previous part. delete 02:04:067 - , change 02:04:889 - and 02:05:094 - to be o O and also delete 02:05:505 -

• move 02:06:327 - to 02:06:533 - and change 02:05:711 - until 02:06:738 - to be o o oO

• try to change 02:11:464 - ~ 02:11:875 - to be o o o, like your previous part kiai (00:57:492 - ~ 00:57:903 - ). actually it's much better to follow the pitch sounds (vocals) than using o o o

• move 02:23:998 - to 02:24:820 - and change to be kat. the reason is same like above ^

• don on 02:33:040 - . actually the vocal is already low (and has a same pitch like 02:33:245 - too)

• again here. move 02:34:683 - to 02:34:478 - and change 02:33:656 - ~ 02:34:478 - to be oo oo in 1/2 bsd. here :

it's much better than you put a note on 02:34:683 - to emphasize the finisher on 02:34:889 - . try to follow the snare sound again on 02:34:478 - because it's more interesting too than a note on 02:34:683 -

• you can add a note (kat) on 02:42:903 - to follow the piano sounds there. much better than you just give a 1/1 pattern like nardo's Kantan

• try to add a note (don) on 02:50:916 - . much better than a break there

• add a note on 03:07:560 - and change 03:07:355 - ~ 03:07:766 - to be o o o. actually it'll be much better to follow the vocal (dropping vocals) on there

• delete 03:11:464 - and 03:12:286 - to make the vocals clearly by deleting them

• change 03:22:971 - and 03:23:382 - to be o o. much better to follow the snare sound with kat on 03:23:382 -

• change 03:35:505 - to be kat. a same notes will be much better and avoid the confusing doublets pattern on the calm part

• don on 03:37:355 - (for the low vocal) and change 03:37:766 - to be kat, and also change 03:38:588 - and 03:38:793 - to be o o. the pitch sounds are totally different if we compare it with 03:35:300 - and 03:35:505 - because the vocal is lowerrr on 03:38:588 - and 03:38:793 -

• change 03:40:642 - to be don here. vocal has dropped

• change 03:41:875 - and 03:42:286 - to be o o

• what is the function of the note on 03:43:519 - ? there's not any sounds come out there. okay try to move it to 03:44:341 - and change 03:44:341 - and 03:44:546 - to be o o

• again and again. delete 03:58:519 - and change 03:58:108 - and 03:58:314 - to be o o. i think you know the reason because i have mentioned it twice before

• again too on 04:00:163 - . move it to 03:59:957 - and change 03:59:752 - and 03:59:957 - to be o o

• delete 04:04:067 - to make the break. okay i know that you wanted to follow the instrument sounds again there, but consider again for having the breaks on the patterns

• change 04:05:505 - to be don (because the instrument has dropped here yeah) and delete 04:06:327 - and change 04:06:533 - to be don. okay this is the last part and maybe you wanted to make the patterns a bit denser. okay nice idea but consider again for the Futsuu players who will play your map and they will be a bit shocked when they see the last part which is a bit hard


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[Muzukashii]

☞ okay!
☞ a solid muzukashii :3 really nice job, nardo~
• try to delete 00:25:848 - so it'll give a oo-doublet pattern :P ofc this doublet will follow the drum hits from the song and it's more interesting to be played

i would recommend you to delete this note. well i deleted this one because it would be muchh better to follow those single vocals on 00:58:314 - and 00:58:724 - without any notes in the middle of it. actually there's not any notes come out on 00:58:519 - , so it's just an additional note

same on 01:11:670 - and 01:12:081 - . delete them like above ^

• it feels like something missing note on 01:38:588 - . try to add it with a note and this note will follow the beat of the song which is on 1/1 beatsnapdivisor

• same like the first reason. delete 01:39:820 -

delete 02:12:903 - . the reason is same like the previous kiai part

same on 02:25:642 - and 02:26:053 - ^

• try kat on 02:47:218 - . this kat really really supports the piano sound which becomes a bit higher on there (higher than 02:46:807 -

• this additional note on 02:50:916 - doesn't mean anything and it disturbs the 1/4 drum hit on 02:50:814 - and makes that 1/4 note not clearly anymore. try to focus it with the drum hit on 02:50:814 - . trust me, it'll be much better and interesting than using oo-doublet

• same 02:57:492 - ^

03:51:122 - and 03:51:533 - delete too

• change 04:03:245 - to be kat. the violin sound has increased here (becomes higher than 04:03:040 - )


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i'm going to mod the oni soon
Nardoxyribonucleic

mingmichael wrote:

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Kantan]

☞ okay!
☞ okay!
• change 00:52:149 - to be kat. this kat will follow the similar drum hits (00:51:738 - ~ 00:52:766 - actually) fixed

• okay delete this one 01:04:067 - . well yah i know you wanted to add some notes there rather than break. but actually this break is really useful to give a break on those pattern from 01:00:368 - ~ 01:05:916 - (if you delete this). first, the vocal doesn't come out there and actually you follow the vocals during the kiai.
it looks like 00:59:957 - a bit when the vocal doesn't come out there and you gave a break on there => Okay.

• hah delete this. it's a bit similar like 00:54:204 - and 00:54:615 - and you didn't add any notes before those two notes fixed

• kat too on 02:06:122 - fixed

and also delete 02:18:040 - and 02:34:067 - Fixed the latter. I kinda like to make a slight variation from the 1st kiai.

• you can add a note (don) on 02:50:916 - and change 02:51:327 - to be don there. a don on 02:51:327 - is for the lower instrument sound (it's just a bittt lower) than 02:50:505 - . so to make it a bit different, i change 02:51:327 - to don I would like to keep the part simpler, so no change here.

• add a note (don) on 02:57:492 - if you change above ^ same as ^

• move 03:11:875 - to 03:11:670 - . make it consistent for following the vocal As the vocal appears at both 03:11:464 and 03:11:670 - , following the snare rhythm would be better rather than following either of the vocal.

a missing note on 03:13:108 - . add this with don to follow the vocal there fixed

• move 03:28:725 - to 03:29:135 - so it will be o o o o o. it looks a bit weird for having xx-xxxx pattern there when you mostly map with xxx-x patterns. i remember that i ever mentioned this too in my previous mods before haha. so then just consider about this more changed the note to k instead for following the vocal better.

move 03:35:300 - to 03:35:505 - . vocal :c same like 03:38:793 - hue fixed

• well i know that you followed the piano tune on 03:43:519 - by using a note. nice idea but it would be better if you just focus on one thing only. here from 03:34:067 - until 03:47:218 - mostly you follow the vocal but suddenly you add a note on 03:43:519 - when the vocal disappears. well just make it more consistent which pattern that you want to follow deleted the note.

• actually these notes on 03:45:779 - and 03:46:396 - because actually they don't follow any particular sounds (it's just 03:45:779 - follow the instrument hue) and basically you followed the vocal (the proof is you map vocals on 03:44:546 - ; 03:44:957 - ; 03:45:368 - :v). okay try to deleted those notes and add a note on 03:46:190 - As the music pattern becomes quite different especially the drums after 03:45:368 - , switching the mapping mode to kiai-like would help players get ready for the kiai.


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[Muzukashii]

☞ okay!
☞ a solid muzukashii :3 really nice job, nardo~
• try to delete 00:25:848 - so it'll give a oo-doublet pattern :P ofc this doublet will follow the drum hits from the song and it's more interesting to be played I would like to follow the drum hit at 00:25:848 - as well.

i would recommend you to delete this note. well i deleted this one because it would be muchh better to follow those single vocals on 00:58:314 - and 00:58:724 - without any notes in the middle of it. actually there's not any notes come out on 00:58:519 - , so it's just an additional note fixed

same on 01:11:670 - and 01:12:081 - . delete them like above ^ fixed

• it feels like something missing note on 01:38:588 - . try to add it with a note and this note will follow the beat of the song which is on 1/1 beatsnapdivisor added k there.

• same like the first reason. delete 01:39:820 - same as 00:25:848 -

delete 02:12:903 - . the reason is same like the previous kiai part Similar to Kantan, I would like to make a slight variation from the 1st kiai.

same on 02:25:642 - and 02:26:053 - ^ deleted 02:25:642 - only.

• try kat on 02:47:218 - . this kat really really supports the piano sound which becomes a bit higher on there (higher than 02:46:807 - fixed

• this additional note on 02:50:916 - doesn't mean anything and it disturbs the 1/4 drum hit on 02:50:814 - and makes that 1/4 note not clearly anymore. try to focus it with the drum hit on 02:50:814 - . trust me, it'll be much better and interesting than using oo-doublet It's definitely a good idea. But I still think that the background beat at 02:50:916 - is noticeable that could be mapped as well.

• same 02:57:492 - ^ same as ^

03:51:122 - and 03:51:533 - delete too deleted 03:51:122 -

• change 04:03:245 - to be kat. the violin sound has increased here (becomes higher than 04:03:040 - ) fixed


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i'm going to mod the oni soon
Thanks for your mod michael~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/b9Vs4.rar
Senritsu
hi.
modding because ming asked me to mod the oni only :P

[Oni]
• 00:28:519 (110,115,125) - try changing them to d, follows the drum beat well imo
•00:36:944 (158,159) - swap, follows the music and vocal which has beat at 00:36:944 (158) - , while the vocal is high here 00:37:149 (159) -
• 00:42:183 (181) - change to d also, for following the beat drum.
• 00:53:793 (229,230) - swap, for following the vocal. 00:53:793 (229) - is higher than 00:54:204 (230) - :P
• 00:54:409 (231) - remove this? well i personally don't like this note being here, since it follows nothing. @@
• 00:56:259 (239) - try removing this, you're following the vocal. it stops there
• 00:58:108 (250) - ^
• 00:59:341 ~ 00:59:546 make this kkd, follows the vocal well ww
• 01:00:368 try making it something like this. imo follows the vocal and music more ww
• 01:02:834 (277) - change to d, follows the beat drum well.
• 01:03:656 (282) - sounds weird having it here, since you're following the vocal, and there's nothing can be heard there. suggest removing this note
• 01:03:964 (283) - change to d for following the song, idk if it's piano or string or whatever
• 01:04:478 (286,290,293) - add finish there, the music is pretty strong. should be emphasized with finish :P
• 01:07:252 add a note here, since it's empty, and the music is still playing, which increasing from a low density to a high one
• 01:09:204 ~ 01:10:848 try something like this. 01:10:231 (316,317,318) - and 01:10:642 (319,320,321) - has the same vocal, but different pitch. so making them mirroring like this is better, and sounds good. as for the pattern before it, because the string ends at 01:09:204, so stop it there, and begin another new pattern with following the vocal now.
• 01:12:697 (332) - remove, because vocal ends at 01:12:492
• 01:13:930 (337) - move to 01:14:033 for following the vocal and music
• 01:15:163 (344,349) - remove, because you're following the vocal. >w>
• 01:16:602 (349,350) - swap, then del the 01:16:807 (350) - . no vocal there, and 01:16:396 (348,349) - has the same pitch, and almost the same accent. xD
• 01:20:094 ~ 01:20:711 - try using this as the pattern? well, suits the music and vocal well tho. 01:20:814 (374) - is optional, you may add it or no, but i suggest adding it because leaving it empty is weird :P
• 01:26:978 add d, then remove the finish at 01:27:081 (405) -, doesn't need to be emphasized, the different between 01:26:875 (403,404,405) - itself has identify that the last note is strong and different from the others.
• 01:29:135 (412) - change to k to suits the vocal's pitch, and 01:29:957 (414) - to d for the same reason as that.
• 01:34:889 ~ 01:36:122 i'm sorry i remapped this part www try making it simpler like this, follows the music and vocal :P
• 01:40:026 (455) - change to d, because it has the lower vocal pitch than 01:39:615 (453,454) -
• 01:41:670 (465,466) - swap, to make 01:41:875 (466) - follows the music, as well as for k rhyhtm consistency
• 01:42:183 ~ 01:43:930 - got this pattern by accident, but it sounds actually good. lols https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1972184
• 01:44:957 (482) - change to d for a better pattern.
• 01:49:067 remove the note here, since there's nothing on the music. try changing the pattern to this?
• 01:55:437 (535) - remove, because no music or vocal can be heard making a new sound there
• 01:54:820 ~ 01:55:231 kdd k for following the music and vocal. remove 01:55:437 because nothing can be heard
• 01:58:724 (546) - remove, as the same reason as above
• 01:59:957 (553) - move to 02:00:060 and change to d, as the previous mod aboveee idk where, for following the vocal and music better
• 02:08:382 (583) - remove, same reason as somewhere above
the kiai part is also the same as before, need to emphasize on vocal and music more, not making own forced pattern ww i will leave it to you ;3
• 02:57:800 probably add a d here for following the music? the violin one lols
• 03:05:300 (23) - remove, because no sound can be heard. 03:05:505 (24) - change to k for following the bass. 03:05:916 (26,27) - change both to d for following the bass too.
• 03:07:971 (35) - remove because of the same reason as above
• 03:12:697 (53,54) - swap. on 53, can be heard that the beat is pretty loud, while 54 can be heard that the vocal starts on a high pitch
• 03:22:765 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - change to kkd d k d k k d for bettern pattern, and also follows the music
• 03:29:135 (121) - remove, as the reason is stated almost there
• 03:37:766 (16) - definitely change to k, because it has higher pitch than 03:38:177 (17) -
the following kiai may also look at my mod at the first kiai. too tired to re-mod, i will leave ming with them wwww

good luck!
Topic Starter
meetmeetdee

mingmichael wrote:

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[Futsuu]

☞ okay!
☞ okay, i am a bit confused when i checked your whole of your futsuu patterns. sometime you follow the vocals and sometime you follow the instrument sounds too and it makes a bit confusing patterns too. well i'll try to help you by giving some suggestion on the Notes box

☞ from 00:39:820 - until 00:49:683 - , try to make some improvement there. as you can see, your patterns are almost same like nardo's Kantan. look here


Kantan~Futsuu

☞same on 01:53:793 - until 02:03:656 - like above
i really recommend you to remove the finisher on 00:05:300 - . well i know that you wanted to emphasize the cymbal sound which is given from the song, didn't you? it's nice~ but after considering again this finisher is quite difficult because the Futsuu players who will play your map will be confused because they must still press 1/2 notes again after it. well it's different if we compare 00:05:300 - with 00:06:944 - . on 00:06:944 - after the finsiher comes out you gave a break there. nah of course the player will be a bit relax and can see the next pattern clearly. but it's different with the finisher on 00:05:300 - OK

• kat on 00:09:820 - . make it just a normal pattern for the 1/2 triplet. i know that don is for the lower pitch sound, but just ignore it because o o O is more confusing than o o O OK

• don on 00:10:642 - . the pitch sound is still low (as low as 00:10:231 - actually) OK

• lets have a break please. try to delete 00:12:492 - . you wanted to follow the violin sound by using that note, but consider again about the breaks. this is such more important OK

• here again. change 00:25:642 - to be kat and delete 00:26:464 - . you put it suddenly with 1/2 patterns there. actually i was a bit confused when i test played it. so then just change 00:25:642 - to be kat (for having a same colours like 00:25:437 - and 00:26:053 - ) and delete 00:26:464 - for the break again OK

• don on 00:32:834 - . the vocal is already down and it actually has a similar low pitch sounds like 00:33:040 - and 00:33:245 - which you used dons OK

• move this note 00:37:149 - to 00:36:327 - and change 00:36:327 - and 00:36:533 - to be dons. don't forget to delete 00:36:944 - . i changed and deleted it to make a similar patterns for the notes like 00:27:492 - ~ 00:29:957 - and 00:30:779 - ~ 00:33:245 - OK

• nah here. delete 00:50:094 - and 00:51:533 - . change 00:50:916 - and 00:51:122 - to be o O. kay i changed and moved them to give a break again and it flows better IMO OK

• you can move 00:52:355 - to 00:52:560 - seems better currently due to the more significant sound

• from 01:19:067 - ~ 01:20:916 - , try this

it flows better than yours because these dons on 01:19:067 - and 01:19:272 - actually follow the low vocals really well. and then the o o o o pattern on 01:19:683 - ~ 01:20:505 - follow the vocal+instrument really well too (when the snare comes on 01:20:505 - , the kat can emphasize it really well) seems really better, OK

• finisher on 01:24:204 - . this finisher will emphasize the strong cymbal sound maybe I miss this one, OK
you put a finisher too on 00:10:231 - anyway

• move 01:26:875 - to 01:26:670 - . i moved this to follow the drum hit (which comes out on 01:26:670 -) and ofc this note will follow the instrument sound better too OK

• change 01:35:300 - ~ 01:35:711 - to be o o o. this notes will follow the vocal much better. the vocals actually are high on 01:35:300 - and it drops a bit (becomes a bit lower) on 01:35:505 - . so to make that dropping pitch sound, i change it to be o o OK

delete 01:37:971 - . don't make a suddent doublet pattern there. actually this's quite confusing since you just use a simple pattern from 01:27:492 - , and suddenly you used 1/2 doublets on 01:37:971 - . i know that you wanted to follow the vocals, but actually it's not a good idea OK

• how about to delete 01:40:437 - . yeah i know that you wanted to follow the vocals again, but for following the vocal isn't a good way on there because actually the part becomes silence a while (just vocal and the instruments stop) OK

• 01:43:519 - ~ 01:43:930 - change to be o o o. this pattern will give a good dropping pitch sounds OK

kat on 01:45:163 - and don on 01:45:574 - . make it consistent for the pattern like you did on 01:41:875 - and 01:48:451 - with kats. it's actually same on 01:45:163 - for the kat OK

• don on 01:46:807 - . much better to follow the vocal by using o o o OK

• again, move 01:53:588 - to 01:53:382 - and change 01:53:177 - and 01:53:382 - to be o o. it suits better to follow the snare sound which comes out on 01:53:382 - with a kat (and actually it's not really particular to emphasize the finisher on 01:53:793 - by using a not on 01:53:588 - ) OK

• same like the previous part. delete 02:04:067 - , change 02:04:889 - and 02:05:094 - to be o O and also delete 02:05:505 - OK

• move 02:06:327 - to 02:06:533 - and change 02:05:711 - until 02:06:738 - to be o o oO OK

• try to change 02:11:464 - ~ 02:11:875 - to be o o o, like your previous part kiai (00:57:492 - ~ 00:57:903 - ). actually it's much better to follow the pitch sounds (vocals) than using o o o OK

• move 02:23:998 - to 02:24:820 - and change to be kat. the reason is same like above ^ OK

• don on 02:33:040 - . actually the vocal is already low (and has a same pitch like 02:33:245 - too) OK

• again here. move 02:34:683 - to 02:34:478 - and change 02:33:656 - ~ 02:34:478 - to be oo oo in 1/2 bsd. here :

it's much better than you put a note on 02:34:683 - to emphasize the finisher on 02:34:889 - . try to follow the snare sound again on 02:34:478 - because it's more interesting too than a note on 02:34:683 - OK

• you can add a note (kat) on 02:42:903 - to follow the piano sounds there. much better than you just give a 1/1 pattern like nardo's Kantan OK

• try to add a note (don) on 02:50:916 - . much better than a break there OK

• add a note on 03:07:560 - and change 03:07:355 - ~ 03:07:766 - to be o o o. actually it'll be much better to follow the vocal (dropping vocals) on there OK

• delete 03:11:464 - and 03:12:286 - to make the vocals clearly by deleting them OK

• change 03:22:971 - and 03:23:382 - to be o o. much better to follow the snare sound with kat on 03:23:382 - OK

• change 03:35:505 - to be kat. a same notes will be much better and avoid the confusing doublets pattern on the calm part OK

• don on 03:37:355 - (for the low vocal) and change 03:37:766 - to be kat, and also change 03:38:588 - and 03:38:793 - to be o o. the pitch sounds are totally different if we compare it with 03:35:300 - and 03:35:505 - because the vocal is lowerrr on 03:38:588 - and 03:38:793 - OK

• change 03:40:642 - to be don here. vocal has dropped OK

• change 03:41:875 - and 03:42:286 - to be o o OK

• what is the function of the note on 03:43:519 - ? there's not any sounds come out there. okay try to move it to 03:44:341 - and change 03:44:341 - and 03:44:546 - to be o o OK

• again and again. delete 03:58:519 - and change 03:58:108 - and 03:58:314 - to be o o. i think you know the reason because i have mentioned it twice before OK

• again too on 04:00:163 - . move it to 03:59:957 - and change 03:59:752 - and 03:59:957 - to be o o OK

• delete 04:04:067 - to make the break. okay i know that you wanted to follow the instrument sounds again there, but consider again for having the breaks on the patterns OK

• change 04:05:505 - to be don (because the instrument has dropped here yeah) and delete 04:06:327 - and change 04:06:533 - to be don. okay this is the last part and maybe you wanted to make the patterns a bit denser. okay nice idea but consider again for the Futsuu players who will play your map and they will be a bit shocked when they see the last part which is a bit hard OK


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i'm going to mod the oni soon
Thanks for your detail mod :)

I will check Senritsu's mod soon

Senritsu wrote:

hi.
modding because ming asked me to mod the oni only :P

[Oni]
• 00:28:519 (110,115,125) - try changing them to d, follows the drum beat well imo OK
•00:36:944 (158,159) - swap, follows the music and vocal which has beat at 00:36:944 (158) - , while the vocal is high here 00:37:149 (159) - OK
• 00:42:183 (181) - change to d also, for following the beat drum. OK
• 00:53:793 (229,230) - swap, for following the vocal. 00:53:793 (229) - is higher than 00:54:204 (230) - :POK
• 00:54:409 (231) - remove this? well i personally don't like this note being here, since it follows nothing. @@ OK
• 00:56:259 (239) - try removing this, you're following the vocal. it stops there no, I am not preferring a break here
• 00:58:108 (250) - ^ ^
• 00:59:341 ~ 00:59:546 make this kkd, follows the vocal well ww not really fit imo
• 01:00:368 try making it something like this. imo follows the vocal and music more ww I can't see it
• 01:02:834 (277) - change to d, follows the beat drum well. nope, I use k to represent the drum here
• 01:03:656 (282) - sounds weird having it here, since you're following the vocal, and there's nothing can be heard there. suggest removing this note I beat can be heard here
• 01:03:964 (283) - change to d for following the song, idk if it's piano or string or whatever I prefer a k here
• 01:04:478 (286,290,293) - add finish there, the music is pretty strong. should be emphasized with finish :POK
• 01:07:252 add a note here, since it's empty, and the music is still playing, which increasing from a low density to a high one OK
• 01:09:204 ~ 01:10:848 try something like this. 01:10:231 (316,317,318) - and 01:10:642 (319,320,321) - has the same vocal, but different pitch. so making them mirroring like this is better, and sounds good. as for the pattern before it, because the string ends at 01:09:204, so stop it there, and begin another new pattern with following the vocal now.
• 01:12:697 (332) - remove, because vocal ends at 01:12:492 OK
• 01:13:930 (337) - move to 01:14:033 for following the vocal and music No, missing a beat if I remove it
• 01:15:163 (344,349) - remove, because you're following the vocal. >w> Indeed, I am not really following the vocal
• 01:16:602 (349,350) - swap, then del the 01:16:807 (350) - . no vocal there, and 01:16:396 (348,349) - has the same pitch, and almost the same accent. xD OK
• 01:20:094 ~ 01:20:711 - try using this as the pattern? well, suits the music and vocal well tho. 01:20:814 (374) - is optional, you may add it or no, but i suggest adding it because leaving it empty is weird :Pok
• 01:26:978 add d, then remove the finish at 01:27:081 (405) -, doesn't need to be emphasized, the different between 01:26:875 (403,404,405) - itself has identify that the last note is strong and different from the others. ok
• 01:29:135 (412) - change to k to suits the vocal's pitch, and 01:29:957 (414) - to d for the same reason as that. current one is fine imo
• 01:34:889 ~ 01:36:122 i'm sorry i remapped this part www try making it simpler like this, follows the music and vocal :POK
• 01:40:026 (455) - change to d, because it has the lower vocal pitch than 01:39:615 (453,454) - OK
• 01:41:670 (465,466) - swap, to make 01:41:875 (466) - follows the music, as well as for k rhyhtm consistency OK
• 01:42:183 ~ 01:43:930 - got this pattern by accident, but it sounds actually good. lols https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1972184 OK
• 01:44:957 (482) - change to d for a better pattern. OK
• 01:49:067 remove the note here, since there's nothing on the music. try changing the pattern to this? OK
• 01:55:437 (535) - remove, because no music or vocal can be heard making a new sound there OK
• 01:54:820 ~ 01:55:231 kdd k for following the music and vocal. remove 01:55:437 because nothing can be heard OK
• 01:58:724 (546) - remove, as the same reason as above OK
• 01:59:957 (553) - move to 02:00:060 and change to d, as the previous mod aboveee idk where, for following the vocal and music better OK
• 02:08:382 (583) - remove, same reason as somewhere above OK
the kiai part is also the same as before, need to emphasize on vocal and music more, not making own forced pattern ww i will leave it to you ;3
• 02:57:800 probably add a d here for following the music? the violin one lols OK
• 03:05:300 (23) - remove, because no sound can be heard. 03:05:505 (24) - change to k for following the bass. 03:05:916 (26,27) - change both to d for following the bass too. OK
• 03:07:971 (35) - remove because of the same reason as above OK
• 03:12:697 (53,54) - swap. on 53, can be heard that the beat is pretty loud, while 54 can be heard that the vocal starts on a high pitch OK
• 03:22:765 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - change to kkd d k d k k d for bettern pattern, and also follows the music
• 03:29:135 (121) - remove, as the reason is stated almost there
• 03:37:766 (16) - definitely change to k, because it has higher pitch than 03:38:177 (17) -
the following kiai may also look at my mod at the first kiai. too tired to re-mod, i will leave ming with them wwww

good luck!
Thanks for you mod :)
MidSoul
hiy from taiko modding queue, thanks!
and sorry for this late ;w;

[Nardo's kantan]
really good diff but I think it could be futsuu diff.
00:54:204 (85) - del
02:08:176 (209) - del
・from vocals.. but its not neccecery?

[Taiko Futsuu]
00:35:711 (76,77,78,79) - d_kdd > kkd_d or kkk d
・from back guitar, or and vocal.

00:50:916 (106) - del ?
02:04:889 (284) - del ?
・for difficulty, its good for Oni, better for Muzu, but in futsuu..

01:06:327 (146,147,148) - kkd
03:45:779 (29,30,31) - kkd
・for vocal pitch, and some pattern.

03:28:930 (55) - k
-1 03:29:546 (56) - d
-2 03:30:368 (58) - k
・for drum and vocal.

03:51:327 (44) - k ?

03:59:752 (4) - del
・I think its better for this scilence.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:56:259 (186) - move to 00:56:464 - .
・like 00:59:546 - , for this 1/1 step.

02:10:231 (449) - same as ^

01:04:889 (215,216) - kd
(-1 01:05:505 (217) - d?)
-2 01:05:916 (218) - k
・for vocal tone.

[Taiko Oni]
00:08:896 (33) - move to 00:08:690 - .
・because clearly sound on 00:08:690 -.
or pick this warmer sound here, try 00:08:588 (31) - k.

00:26:464 (100) - del
・its from vocal, but delete for good accente,

01:10:026 (316,317,318,319) - k kkd ?
・for piano, vocal fall.

01:10:642 (320) - k ?
-1 01:10:745 (321) - move to 01:10:951 - .

01:17:115 (356) - d
・there're many long tone but its no pitch change, so this dkk is not recommenede

01:20:197 - add k
or 01:20:403 (375) - del

01:46:807 (499) - k
・as equals to 01:47:012 (500) -.

01:48:656 (508,509) - kd ?

01:51:738 (524,525) - kd ?

02:06:019 - add d?

02:14:546 (623) - move 1/4 >

02:17:731 (642) - del

02:42:903 (756) - k ?

good map~~ ☆ GLL))
Nardoxyribonucleic

MidSoul wrote:

hiy from taiko modding queue, thanks!
and sorry for this late ;w;

[Nardo's kantan]
really good diff but I think it could be futsuu diff.
00:54:204 (85) - del
02:08:176 (209) - del
・from vocals.. but its not neccecery? Both are fixed.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
00:56:259 (186) - move to 00:56:464 - .
・like 00:59:546 - , for this 1/1 step. It seems nice, fixed.

02:10:231 (449) - same as ^ ^

01:04:889 (215,216) - kd
(-1 01:05:505 (217) - d?)
-2 01:05:916 (218) - k
・for vocal tone. The current pattern could result in a better flow of notes imo. Moreover, don at 01:05:916 (218) - could show a sharper contrast to the higher-pitched 01:06:327 (219,220,221) -

good map~~ ☆ GLL))
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/brNdq.rar
Topic Starter
meetmeetdee

MidSoul wrote:

hiy from taiko modding queue, thanks!
and sorry for this late ;w;

[Taiko Futsuu]
00:35:711 (76,77,78,79) - d_kdd > kkd_d or kkk d I use kkk d
・from back guitar, or and vocal.

00:50:916 (106) - del ? I think it is acceptable
02:04:889 (284) - del ? ^
・for difficulty, its good for Oni, better for Muzu, but in futsuu..

01:06:327 (146,147,148) - kkd kdk seems better following the vocal pitch
03:45:779 (29,30,31) - kkd ^
・for vocal pitch, and some pattern.

03:28:930 (55) - k no, it is different in pitch with 03:28:725 (54) -
-1 03:29:546 (56) - d ^
-2 03:30:368 (58) - k no, want to show the decrease in pitch
・for drum and vocal.

03:51:327 (44) - k ? OK

03:59:752 (4) - del fine for me
・I think its better for this scilence.

[Taiko Oni]
00:08:896 (33) - move to 00:08:690 - . No, the current one is better
・because clearly sound on 00:08:690 -.
or pick this warmer sound here, try 00:08:588 (31) - k. OK

00:26:464 (100) - del not for now
・its from vocal, but delete for good accente,

01:10:026 (316,317,318,319) - k kkd ? OK
・for piano, vocal fall.

01:10:642 (320) - k ? No as it is in relatively low pitch
-1 01:10:745 (321) - move to 01:10:951 - . No

01:17:115 (356) - d OK
・there're many long tone but its no pitch change, so this dkk is not recommenede

01:20:197 - add k
or 01:20:403 (375) - del Fine for me now

01:46:807 (499) - k OK
・as equals to 01:47:012 (500) -.

01:48:656 (508,509) - kd ? OK

01:51:738 (524,525) - kd ? there is a drum sound in 01:51:738 -

02:06:019 - add d? no, the stream seems too long at that part

02:14:546 (623) - move 1/4 > OK

02:17:731 (642) - del no

02:42:903 (756) - k ? No, there is a change in pitch

good map~~ ☆ GLL))
Thanks for your mod :)
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