rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from my queues !! heres my mod !!
[box=XeoN - Thor ~ Deepin' Absonant Mix ~ [OsuMania:1337]]
[General]
This mapset needs at least 1 Easy/Normal diff.

[HD(Lv. 13)]
00:15:329 (15329|0) - MOVE 1
00:19:614 (19614|3) - MOVE 4
00:26:145 (26145|3) - MOVE 4

[MX(Lv. 15)]
00:06:961 (6961|3) - ADD LN 4 ENDED AT 00:07:165
00:08:186 (8186|3) - ADD LN 4 ENDED AT 00:08:798
00:09:410 (9410|3) - ADD LN 4 ENDED AT 00:10:227
00:10:227 (10227|3) - REMOVE !
00:10:227 (10227|2) - REMOVE !
00:10:227 (10227|2) - ADD LN 3 ENDED AT 00:10:839
00:10:839 (10839|2) - REMOVE !
00:10:839 (10839|0) - REMOVE !
00:10:839 (10839|0) - ADD LN 1 ENDED AT 00:11:451
00:11:451 (11451|0) - MOVE 3
00:11:451 (11451|1) - REMOVE !
00:11:451 (11451|3) - ADD LN 4 ENDED AT 00:12:063

lZenxl wrote:

Finally decided to go through my messages and mod everything


Column : 1234
[MX]

00:12:486 (12486|2) - Remove | According to your patterning, there shouldn't be a chord here since there's no piano ←Done~
00:15:956 (15956|1,15956|3,16160|2,16160|0) - Ctrl + H | pitch relevancy ←Done~
00:25:140 (25140|3,25344|0) - Move to 1 and 3 respectively | This is so that 00:25:548 (25548|1,25548|3) - doesn't look the same as the previous chord ←Done~
00:59:221 (59221|3,59629|1,60037|2,60446|0) - Maybe add drum-hitfinish to the 1/1s after the kiai time? ←not done...
01:04:935 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1882342 | Use this pattern, it's more suitable for the bass here | The highlighted notes are drum-hitfinishes ←i didn't sync on drum sound here........
02:16:874 (136874|3,136976|2,137078|3) - Use drum-hitfinishes here? ←^
02:33:507 (153507|3) - You missed a finish here ←Done...i'm so careless....
02:55:752 (175752|0,175956|1,176058|1,176262|1,176364|1) - Holding down an LN and hammering is rather awkward I suggest to change the patterning here ←Done~
03:09:425 (189425|3,189425|0) - Change one to normal-hitfinish and one to soft-hitfinish for the cymbal in the music ←Done~
03:13:711 - Might want to lower the volume even more here ←Done~

Kiai isn't snapped ←????

Beautiful hitsounding ←

[HD]

00:14:323 (14323|2,14731|3) - Swap Columns | Pitch relevancy ←Done~
00:17:997 (17997|1) - Move 1 column to the right | It's the same pitch as 00:16:772 (16772|2) - ←Done~
00:27:793 (27793|2,28405|1,29017|0) - Move to 2 3 4 respectively | Pitch relevancy ←Done~
00:51:976 (51976|2,52078|1,52180|2) - Change all to finish? ←Done~
01:05:037 (65037|2,65140|3,65242|2) - ^ ←Done~
01:12:691 (72691|0) - Remove 1 finish ←Done...i'm so careless × 2......
01:22:384 (82384|0) - You missed a finish here ←Done...i'm so careless × 3......
01:59:425 (119425|0) - Move to 3 | It's the same pitch as 02:00:037 (120037|2) - ←Done~
02:01:976 (121976|0,122282|1) - Move to same column | They are of the same pitch ←Done~
02:43:099 (163099|2,163201|3) - Change to finishers? ←Done~
03:13:711 - Might want to lower the volume even more here ←Done~

Kiai isn't snapped ←????

[NM]

00:14:731 (14731|3,15344|1) - Move to 2 1 respectively | Pitch relevancy ←Done~
02:01:976 (121976|0,122282|1) - Move to same column | ^ ←Done~
01:59:425 (119425|0) - Move to column 3 | ^ ←Done~
02:14:119 (134119|2) - Move to the right most column | ^ ←Done~
03:09:425 (189425|3) - Change to normal-hitfinish? ←Done~

03:13:711 - Might want to lower the volume even more here ←Done~
Kiai isn't snapped ←????
[EZ]
00:22:486 (22486|2,22691|3) - Move 1 column to the left | Pitch relevancy ←Done~
00:35:752 (35752|1,35956|2) - Finishers? ←not done...
00:45:752 - Add finisher to every 2/1? ( e.g 00:45:752 (45752|0,46568|0) - ) ←not done...
02:29:731 (149731|3) - Move 1/4 earlier ←Done~
03:09:425 (189425|3) - Change to normal-hitfinish? ←Done~

03:13:711 - Might want to lower the volume even more here ←Done~
Kiai isn't snapped ←????

Kiai isn't snapped ←????

lZenxl wrote:

Kiai isn't snapped ←????

Simple_Star wrote:

建议你把 Lv. 4中间的那个空格给去掉比较好 变成Lv.4 etc.

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi here is check

这么晚了居然还在.....
额....改了的就不再提了...只提没改的....

SPOILER

[Lv.4]
00:45:752 - ~ 00:58:813 - 其实这边的音都十分的不明显 这对于Easy来说是十分不利的 我建议你只抓清晰地Drum Beat

01:14:323 (74323|1,74731|2) - 其实这边这两个也可以变成Hold 也是长音 而且是1/1 并不是比较影响手感的1/2 所以变成Hold较好

01:15:140 (75140|3) - 应该在 01:16:364 - 结束并且加一个Note 仔细听的话你会发现其实音断开过 ←TECHNIKA Q的原谱没有断....所以我也就没断......

01:20:854 (80854|1,81262|2) - 和 01:14:323 (74323|1,74731|2) - 道理一样并且不会增加什么难度 而且这边如果不变成Hold的话我一开始还以为你抓得是别的音 看了一下子才知道是长音Note

01:49:221 (109221|3,109425|0,109731|1,110037|2,110344|3) - Ctrl+H 这边两次都是1~4可是音高完全不一样 至少做一些变化

02:07:589 (127589|2) - 有两个方案
1.02:07:589 (127589|2) - 移到4
2.02:08:813 (128813|3) - 移到3 对称一下 你考虑看看

02:16:976 (136976|2) - 反复听了几遍感觉还是很有违和感 所以如果不想加Note的话移到 02:16:874 -

02:17:180 - Kiai段大致说一下 你跟主音是很好 但是考虑到新手的适应性 全场的1/4蓝线是不是过于难了些呢?我建议你跟一些鼓点在Kiai里面 ←个人觉得...还好吧?.....

03:08:201 - 强调重音虽然和之前的音不一样 但是还是加一个Note比较好

还有一点 貌似现在Volume 必须高于30% 所以所有Diffculty的最后一根线我觉得保守起见删掉比较好

[Lv.9]
开头抓的1/4音实在是很不明显

00:32:691 - ~00:34:323 - 我推荐的抓音方式: 只留 00:32:895 (32895|2,33201|0,33507|0) -
然后再00:33:813 - 00:34:119 - 00:34:221 - 其余全部删去 接下来的pattern都是按照这样的 当然如果你不接受的话也没有关系 我只是感觉抓的音实在是不明显 打起来也不太舒服 一直到 00:45:752 - 为止 ←未改

00:45:752 - 紧接着这边强调重音Bass 多加一个Note

00:58:813 - 也是一样的 加一个Note在2

01:16:364 - Hold这边就该停了 然后加个Note

01:20:854 (80854|1,81262|2) - 和Easy一样 变成Hold的建议

01:59:017 (119017|3) - 移到1

02:17:180 - 这边开始也是很有问题的..你是在抓大幅度在蓝线出没的音和鼓点 可是有些地方你没有抓完整 有些地方抓错了 嗯..重新思考一下如何? ←再次确认....没问题啊.....除了鼓点,跟EZ一样的音
打比方说 02:17:997 (137997|2) - 这个Note应该是在 02:17:895 - 的

03:08:201 - 还是和Easy一样的 加个Note

[Lv.13]
00:47:078 (47078|3) - 仔细听你会发现这里是完全没有音的 反而 00:47:180 - 00:47:282 - 有 [/color] *

00:50:344 (50344|2) - 一样^ [/color] *

00:53:609 (53609|0) - 一样^ [/color] *

00:55:242 (55242|0) - 一样^ [/color] *

00:56:874 (56874|1) - 这个不一样 这个只有 00:56:976 - 有音 * ←TECHNIKA Q的原谱就这样.....

00:58:303 - 这个是漏音 请加上啦 ←真没有.......

01:19:629 (79629|2) - 移到3

01:20:446 (80446|2) - 这个移到4 谱面多样性一些 嗯 虽说规律谱子也挺好的 但是我的观点是多一点花样更好

01:49:629 - 漏音了 这边的音和 01:49:731 (109731|0) - 有一个一样的音 但是被覆盖掉了

02:40:650 - 02:40:956 - 02:41:262 - 别客气了都是鼓点 全部加上去吧 也不差这点难度的 ←我对了鼓点的说....左键点击可以看到FINISH被激活~

02:41:670 - ~ 02:42:895 - 只是想说一下 一直右手连打很影响手感 在注重谱面美观的时候也要顺带关注一下手感才对

[Lv.15]
有*号的都是在这个Diff里面也需要看的

02:04:323 - ~ 02:16:670 - 只是想说 特别单调 我建议你至少要搞得比HD要丰富一点才行 ←抱歉.....实在想不出什么更好的方法了....

02:42:486 (162486|2,162589|1) - 这边开始的Note全部往左右靠拢 嗯正好形成了连点以及变换一下打法 连续13 24很不舒服

就这些 好了请找我recheck

完成!

Rumia- wrote:

ah , sorry for the delay , suggestion before get this to qualifed ,
[Generals]
00:00:038 - change to 30% volume , the hitsound kinda too loud , it overrides the beautiful piano notes
03:09:425 - all greenlines start from this time change it to 30% volume too
in all diffs

[EZ]
00:35:344 (35344|0) - move it to here 00:35:140 - , follows piano is better , kinda confusing to switch instrument here
01:15:140 (75140|3) - end at here 01:16:364 - and add a note on collumn 3
01:24:935 (84935|3) - change to normal note ? its kinda confusing for easy player i think with mixture of 1/4 and 1/2 beats here
or just add a note on 1st collumn and move this hold to 01:26:568 -
01:31:976 (91976|2) - move to 1 for pitch
01:35:854 (95854|0,96160|3) - ctrl + h for pitch
01:38:507 (98507|1,98813|3) - move to 3 and 2 instead ?
02:19:833 (139833|0,140242|2) - i think its better to move this down by 1/2 to emphasis the high pitch synth , because this note
is kinda vague.
02:33:303 (153303|0) - delete ? since you are focusing on synths not change.....
02:46:364 (166364|3) - ^

[NM]
00:25:548 (25548|0,25752|2) - move to right and 00:25:956 (25956|1,26160|3) - move to left , according to the right pitch
00:42:486 (42486|3,42691|2,42793|1) - suggestion : http://puu.sh/bRbZm.jpg
01:01:874 (61874|1,61976|2) - ctrl + j , pitch
01:15:140 (75140|1) - end it at here 01:16:364 - and add a note
01:28:201 - add a note ? you were following the instrument not change.....
01:34:731 - ^
01:37:997 - ^
01:41:262 - ^
01:47:793 - ^
01:50:956 (110956|1) - move this to 01:51:058 - is more clearly define , since the synth is overlapped with other instrument. not change.....
02:34:629 (154629|1,154731|3) - move 1/4 down ? not change.....

[HD]
00:34:221 - add a note , piano not change.....
00:37:486 - ^
00:50:548 - ^
01:21:670 (81670|1,81772|2,81874|1,81976|2) - ctrl + h looks more organised ,
01:34:323 (94323|0,94527|1) - ctrl + j , pitch
01:37:997 - add a note not change.....
01:41:262 - ^
01:47:793 - ^

[MX]
00:37:486 - add a note , piano not change.....
00:56:976 - add a note , synth not change.....
00:58:813 - change greenline volume to 45% , 65% is too loud imo
01:18:405 - add a greenline with 65% volume
01:26:976 - add 1 more note , strong beat not change.....
01:33:507 - ^
01:40:037 - ^
01:46:568 - ^
02:04:119 - add a note or 2 , cymbal sound not change.....
02:16:466 - add 2 notes , bass sound like 02:16:670 (136670|1,136670|2) - not change.....
02:42:997 (162997|3) - delete , better focus on the piano only here , also neating the streams
02:43:303 - 45% volume greenline , also greenline after this time use 35% volume for piano
03:08:609 (188609|2) - delete ? keep consistent density with 03:08:915 (188915|2,188915|3,188915|0,189221|0,189221|1,189221|3) -