Xgor wrote:

Sorry for being late..... anyways.

To keep this brief...
All your text png images has gigantic chunks of unused transparency. skyrocketing up the SB load to unacceptable levels.
You really need to crop all the unused transparency out.

All your images doesn't support full widescreen as they are 700x480. If you really want to support full widescreen use 854x480

This is a mania only map yet the SB doesn't feel like it's made with mania with mind.
The text you add for the images just keep getting covered up behind the mania playing field right now aand that just looks off. Even the intro text is covered.
To make it better for mania, put all the images slightly to the right.


Also right now to hide your BG you use a black image. That is not recommended. Instead disable your background image. (Tutorial how to do it here t/55177 )
If you disable the background the background will be black automatic so using a black image isn't needed.

Well, this SB really need some more fixing before it's ready to go.

Aphrodena wrote:

[Aphrodena's Modding Queue]
|0|1|2|3|

[General]
<3 Touhou

Mod

[05:42:946 - to 07:18:298]
05:57:055 (357055|1,357136|0) - Ctrl+G for PR done
06:04:352 (364352|2) - Add note because of cymbal done
06:05:973 (365973|3) - (Optional) use LN for buildup sound no change
06:10:757 (370757|3) - Move to |2| and then: done
06:10:838 (370838|0,370919|1,371000|2,371082|3,371163|2,371163|0) - Ctrl+H for PR since it builds down done
06:14:082 (374082|1) - Add note for cymbal done
06:14:730 (374730|3) - ^ for cymbal done
06:33:298 (393298|2) - ^ you missed a piano added
06:42:622 (402622|2) - ^ for cymbal no change
06:47:811 (407811|2) - ^ for cymbal no change
06:58:028 (418028|2) - http://puu.sh/e5NXX/6c3f49e438.jpg Reconstruction
07:08:892 (428892|1) - Change to LN that ends where the next LN start no change

Xgor wrote:

Sorry for being late..... anyways.

To keep this brief...
All your text png images has gigantic chunks of unused transparency. skyrocketing up the SB load to unacceptable levels.
You really need to crop all the unused transparency out.

All your images doesn't support full widescreen as they are 700x480. If you really want to support full widescreen use 854x480

This is a mania only map yet the SB doesn't feel like it's made with mania with mind.
The text you add for the images just keep getting covered up behind the mania playing field right now aand that just looks off. Even the intro text is covered.
To make it better for mania, put all the images slightly to the right.


Also right now to hide your BG you use a black image. That is not recommended. Instead disable your background image. (Tutorial how to do it here t/55177 )
If you disable the background the background will be black automatic so using a black image isn't needed.

Well, this SB really need some more fixing before it's ready to go.

Spy wrote:

Uhh I remember write Nico Nico Douga in Artist is unrankable U_U

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Spy wrote:

Uhh I remember write Nico Nico Douga in Artist is unrankable U_U

hm…Artist name change : Nico Nico Douga → Senpi- ?

Spy wrote:

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hm…Artist name change : Nico Nico Douga → Senpi- ?

Maybe,I need to find the rule then..

Xgor wrote:

Sorry for being late..... anyways.

To keep this brief...
All your text png images has gigantic chunks of unused transparency. skyrocketing up the SB load to unacceptable levels.
You really need to crop all the unused transparency out.
sharpened the portion of the transparent

All your images doesn't support full widescreen as they are 700x480. If you really want to support full widescreen use 854x480
change…

Flandle.jpg
Flandle Remilia.jpg
koishi satori.jpg
koishi.jpg
mokou keine1.jpg
mokou keine2.jpg
nue ran.jpg
nue suwako.jpg
nue.jpg
nue3.jpg
nue4.jpg
ran cyen.jpg
ran.jpg
suwako sanae.jpg
suwako.jpg

This is a mania only map yet the SB doesn't feel like it's made with mania with mind.
The text you add for the images just keep getting covered up behind the mania playing field right now aand that just looks off. Even the intro text is covered.
To make it better for mania, put all the images slightly to the right.
thus…↓ (800×600 default skin)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2473953
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2474179
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2474201 → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2474205 (move )



Also right now to hide your BG you use a black image. That is not recommended. Instead disable your background image. (Tutorial how to do it here t/55177 )
ok
use 'Top-Left' ,delete BG 1.jpg(black image)

If you disable the background the background will be black automatic so using a black image isn't needed.

Well, this SB really need some more fixing before it's ready to go.

LordRaika wrote:

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue

osuu~
Here is my mod as request :
(sry i jst have the time to got here ;w; , too much HM request XD )

Hitsound Mod

[Hitsound]

• Remember, you can control the volume on timing if u think the hitsound is too low....

1. Download and Rename into normal-hitclap5.wav and replace yours
   where u use this is for every kick sound , and just simply add CLap on them.... for example it does a really good job here :
   02:54:447 (174447|3,174488|2,174529|1,174569|0) - add clap,
   02:55:096 (175096|0,175420|1,175745|0,176069|2) - add clap, u can add double if u want , and do this... well for all ^^ , its worth it....
2. Next, rename this into normal-hitwhistle5.wav and put it inside song folder.
   00:59:474 (59474|2,59799|1,60123|1,60447|1) - just add a whistle there, and so on... on similar part ^^ , it fits perfectly
3. Then this can replace your normal-hitfinish5.wav here is where u can put them :
   01:36:934 - , 01:42:123 - and lots of cymbal part, by simply adding finish on them.... ^^ good luck
4. Finally a very nice effect by simply replace your normal-hitnormal5.wav with this...
   All hitsound download and put it inside song folder
   
   sounds really awesome , i swear >w<

That's all, feel free to adjust the timing volume, since i like the hitsound, i might use a bit more higher %
ok, well… 5%→10%, 10%→15%, 15%→20%…　I'm going to adjust them later><

That's all ^^b
nice SB thou.... as mania mapper... i dont see any problem as well , GL for approval ^^
thanks >w</

1 more last thing... i hate to say, but ... i kind a dislike the flandle.jpg
maybe because it stretch too much.... try to use or search a better one? ^^
hm…ok, I look for the image of Flandre ><

こんにちは私とVINXIS改造·キューから!

私はこんなに遅く助けたことを非常に申し訳ありません！私はすべてができるだけ早く片付けるてみました ;w;
ストーリーボードのテキストファイルを表示するには、こちらをクリックしてください!

1. 私はそれが曲のジャンルに適しているだろうと思ったので、私はすべてのkiai当時の「フェージングパルス」アニメーションとすべてのバックグラウンドトランジションを追加しました ^^
2. 新しい遷移を伴うために、私はまた、それぞれのバックグラウンドとの間でフェードするのにかかる時間を修正した
3. 高解像度の写真がよく見えると思うので、私はあなたが使用している各画像の高解像度バージョンのリストを作成しようとしています！編集（サイズ変更およびトリム）これらのイメージを、あなたのストーリーボードでそれらを使用している場合、私はそれが良く見えると思います。許容可能なファイルサイズに画像を取得する助けたいなら、私に連絡してください！=w=

[Chisaki-san] wrote:

こんにちは私とVINXIS改造·キューから!

私はこんなに遅く助けたことを非常に申し訳ありません！私はすべてができるだけ早く片付けるてみました ;w;
ストーリーボードのテキストファイルを表示するには、こちらをクリックしてください!
[storyboard]

1. 私はそれが曲のジャンルに適しているだろうと思ったので、私はすべてのkiai当時の「フェージングパルス」アニメーションとすべてのバックグラウンドトランジションを追加しました ^^
2. 新しい遷移を伴うために、私はまた、それぞれのバックグラウンドとの間でフェードするのにかかる時間を修正した

ありがとうございます！Chisakiさんのテキストファイルを入れました。

高解像度の写真がよく見えると思うので、私はあなたが使用している各画像の高解像度バージョンのリストを作成しようとしています！編集（サイズ変更およびトリム）これらのイメージを、あなたのストーリーボードでそれらを使用している場合、私はそれが良く見えると思います。許容可能なファイルサイズに画像を取得する助けたいなら、私に連絡してください！=w=

Image list (画像をストレッチは避けてください！代替として、それらをトリミングしてください ;w;)

1. Flandle Remilia
2. Flandle
3. Koishi Satori
4. Koishi
5. Mokou Keine1
6. Mokou Keine2
7. Mokou
8. Nue Koishi Flan
9. Nue Mokou
10. Nue Ran
11. Nue Suwako
12. Nue
13. Nue2
14. Nue3
15. Nue4
16. Ran Cyen
17. Ran
18. Suwako Kanako
19. Suwako Sanae Kanako これだけ変更なしです
20. Suwako Sanae
21. Suwako

私は、これらの画像の一部を検索することができませんでした ;__;
高解像度の画像をありがとうございます！大きさが合わないもの、maniaのカラムに被るものは編集して適応させます

上記のすべてのもの以外に、私はストーリーボードが好きで、私はあなたがこのマップに多くの労力を置くことを見ることができます！:>

承認を得るとの幸運は、私はあなたに私の次のスターを与える！! (^˃ᆺ˂^)ﾉ彡

Xgor wrote:

The SB looks much better now. There is some parts when you have the images moving and during most of them a part of the screen isn't filled up. Some only during widescreen but some appear no matter the resolution. Might wanna fix that as it looks ugly.
ok, I'll be looking for a new image

Other than that the SB should be good to go for ranking!

HOST wrote:

hi ruberusu. mod from queue

column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4


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[BOSS RUSH !]

03:37:420 (217420|1) - this LN end at 03:37:906 done
03:38:393 (218393|2) - move 2 done

03:44:393 (224393|1) - move 1 done
03:44:393 (224393|3) - move 3, change LN, end at 03:44:555 done
03:44:474 (224474|2) - remove
03:44:798 - add 1
03:44:879 (224879|0) - remove, add 4 03:44:879 (224879|0) - remove and 03:44:879 (224879|2) - start to 03:44:879 -
03:45:204 (225204|3) - move 2 no change

04:18:609 - add 4 done
04:19:906 - add 4 done
04:19:906 - add 4
04:21:285 (261285|3) - move 3 done
04:22:501 - add 4 done

04:49:929 - add 1 done
04:51:227 - add 4 done
04:52:524 - add 4 done
04:53:821 - add 4 done

05:10:524 - add 3 no change
05:20:902 - add 2 no change

06:19:119 - add 4 no change

06:31:605 (391605|3) - remove done
06:32:173 - add 3 done

07:55:884 (475884|3) - remove done
07:55:569 (475569|3) - change LN, end at 07:56:200 - done
07:55:884 - add 2 done

08:46:884 - add 1 done
08:47:516 - add 2 done
08:48:148 - add 3 done
08:48:306 (528306|2) - move 4 done
08:48:791 - add 2 done
08:49:411 - add 3 done
08:49:411 - add 1 done
08:50:674 - add 3 done
08:50:674 - add 4 done
08:51:937 - add 3 done
08:52:569 - add 3 done
08:53:832 - add 2 done
08:54:463 - add 1 done
08:55:095 - add 2 done

10:27:462 (627462|3,627502|2,627541|1,627581|0) - ctrl + H no change
10:27:620 (627620|3) - move 3 no change
10:27:660 (627660|2) - move 2 no change
10:27:699 (627699|1) - move 1 no change
10:27:739 (627739|0) - move 2 no change
10:27:778 (627778|1) - move 1 no change


[]

thx for request.

good luck~

Spy wrote:

Moved to Pending.

Spy wrote:

I feel sorry that I'm busy irl,if still no one take it,maybe you need to wait till May,and I'll handle it

Ichigaki wrote:

Mod Requested via Shiren

Column setup

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

General

1. Song Setup :
   
   1. Metadata : I'll leave this, but i'm sure it's right
   2. Other : Clear
2. Music and background :
   
   1. Music : Clear
   2. Background : Clear
3. Timing :
   
   1. Kiai : Clear
   2. Audio preview point : Already okay, but i suggest to put this on the middle part (Just up to you) preview point set 05:53:335 -
   3. BPM and Offset : Clear

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

BOSS RUSH !

SPOILER

Single = one note
Double = two notes
Triple = three notes

I'm gonna use 'not too detailed' mod to help you answer it

1. Since this map is marathon, please make HP and OD +0.5 . It's okay for this 4 stars mapset. Just consider it. hmm…ok, HD&OD + 0.5
2. 00:16:378 (16378|3,16694|2) - Ctrl + G maybe? I think it's followed the pitch done
3. 00:54:934 - 00:55:259 - Add one 00:54:934 - add 2 , but, 00:55:259 - no change
   
   1. 01:05:961 (65961|2,65961|1,66286|2,66286|1) - Remove one no change
   2. 01:11:150 (71150|2,71150|1) - Remove one no change
   3. 01:15:367 (75367|3) - Add one add 2
   4. 01:16:340 (76340|1,76340|2) - Remove one no change
4. 01:32:637 - Add note add 2 , and 01:32:718 (92718|2) - delete
   
   1. 01:37:826 - ^ add 1
   2. 01:40:826 (100826|1) - Move to 1 done
   3. 01:41:961 - Add note add 4
5. 01:50:961 - Add note to 3 no change
   
   1. 01:51:042 (111042|2) - Move to 1 no change
   2. 01:51:123 - Add note to 2 no change
6. 01:57:042 (117042|2,117123|1) - Double please this part is 'U.N. Owen was Her?' piano sound and 'Septette for the Dead Princess' main sound… no change
7. 01:58:015 (118015|0) - Move to 01:57:853 - ^
8. 02:01:826 - Add note ^
   
   1. 02:02:069 - ^ ^
   2. 02:02:394 - ^ ^
9. 02:23:637 - 02:31:421 - Why the double gone? oh…02:23:637 - i forgot hitsound ' finish ' . The same pattern is many, so … I changed
10. 02:42:610 (162610|2) - Move to 1 done
11. 02:44:069 - 02:44:232 - 1/4 note no change
12. 02:46:745 (166745|0) - Remove this no change
13. 02:49:583 - Add note for cymbal add 4
    
    1. 02:54:610 - Add note no change
    2. 03:04:988 - Add note no change
    3. 03:06:286 (186286|2) - Remove done
    4. 03:08:475 - and 03:08:637 - Add note 03:08:475 - add 3 , and 03:08:637 - add 4
    5. 03:15:367 - Add note no change
14. 03:19:664 - Add note no change
15. 03:36:123 (216123|1,216123|3,216123|2,216123|0) - Overnote, please change to the proper one (just 1~2 LNs) ok, 2 and 3 delete
16. 04:28:177 - Add note no change
17. 05:10:686 (310686|0,310686|1,310767|0,310767|1,311010|2,311010|3,311092|3,311092|2) - Should be single 05:10:686 (310686|0,310767|0,311010|3,311092|3) - delete
18. 05:21:065 (321065|3,321065|2,321146|2,321146|3,321389|0,321389|1,321470|0,321470|1,321713|0,321713|2,321794|2,321794|0) - ^
    05:21:065 (321065|3,321146|3,321389|0,321470|0,321713|0,321794|0) - delete
    
19. 05:38:902 (338902|2) - Move to 05:38:740 - 05:38:740 - add 2
20. 08:00:384 - Add note no change

I can't continue, as i already told you via PM. So, i'm going to mod hs anyway

1. 00:02:799 - until 00:23:270 - Add whistle each double. Tho it's doesn't affect much, but still okay to hear umm…sorry, I do not think that it is fit… but, 00:02:799 - to 00:21:314 - Modification
2. 01:41:840 (101840|2,101880|1,101921|0) - Remove clap no change
3. 01:52:502 (112502|3) - Move finish/clap to the other note (hope you already know what i've already mentioned before in PM) delete clap
4. 01:52:502 - until 02:02:880 - Add whistle each double added whistle
5. 02:03:042 (123042|1,123205|1,123367|1,123529|1,123772|2,124015|1) - Add whistle on here, to follow the piano. Do it until this part ended (Hope you get this too) this part is drum and piano sound… no change
6. 02:10:988 (130988|3) - Add clap, missed clap oh…thanks ! done
7. 02:39:042 (159042|1) - Better add clap 02:39:042 (159042|2) - change whistle → clap
8. 02:49:096 (169096|2) - Move whistle to the other note delete whistle
9. 03:12:610 (192610|2) - Add clap 03:12:610 (192610|0) - change whistle → clap
10. 04:15:852 - until 04:17:961 - Add whistle each row done
11. 04:28:583 (268583|1,268797|0) - Maybe whistle done
12. 04:59:173 (299173|1) - Remove clap done
13. 05:01:443 - 05:20:902 - I think, it's good to add clap each white lines (I mean to follow the drum instead) piano sound only
14. 05:25:119 (325119|2) - Add clap done
15. 05:26:578 (326578|3) - ^ add whistle
16. 05:30:632 (330632|2,330956|1) - ^ 05:30:632 (330632|3,330956|1) - add clap , and 05:30:794 (330794|2,331119|2) - add whistle
17. 05:55:605 (355605|0,355646|1,355686|2,355727|3,355767|0,355808|1,355848|2,355889|3) - Add whistle good idea >w</ done
18. 06:20:416 (380416|3) - Add clap (and add note) no change
19. 06:36:146 (396146|2,396794|1,397443|0) - Seperate it delete clap
20. 06:50:578 - 06:53:010 - Whistle maybe? done
21. 06:56:902 (416902|0,417145|3,417388|2,417631|0,417874|2) - Seperate it celete clap
22. 07:07:279 (427279|0) - Remove clap done
23. 07:08:576 (428576|1) - Add finish no change , but 07:08:576 (428576|2) - delete
24. 07:37:727 (457727|2,457963|2,458200|2) - Add finish no change
25. 07:39:937 (459937|1,460174|1,460411|1) - ^ no change
26. 07:42:148 (462148|1,462384|1,462621|1) - ^ no change
27. 07:44:358 (464358|2,464595|2,464832|2) - ^ no change
28. 08:06:306 - 08:16:411 - Add clap each white lines (for drums) this part is Hartmann's Youkai Girl and Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye main sound … no change
29. 08:31:095 (511095|2,511174|1,511253|2,511411|1) - Add clap as you did it always done
30. 08:16:411 - 08:36:621 - Add whistle for piano part maybe, this part lack of hitsound done
31. 08:56:516 (536516|0,536556|1,536595|2,536634|3,536674|0,536713|1,536753|2,536792|3) - Add whistle done
32. 08:56:832 (536832|0) - Seperate done
33. 09:25:253 - Add finish (and add a note) no change
34. 10:15:778 (615778|0) - Remove clap done
35. 10:20:831 (620831|3) - Add finish done
36. 10:30:620 (630620|0) - Add clap done
37. 11:05:989 (665989|2) - ^done
38. 11:08:515 (668515|2) - ^ add 1 and add clap

Overall

Nice song, Touhou ftw. This song is too complex, but good anyway. This map have good potential, good luck

Zan - wrote:

SB is also created by [Chisaki-san] ?
why dont you add her/him to tags? ._.

wow 11mins, longest mania map if it get approved, good luck!

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_ Modding Queue.

Mod

1. 01:19:907 (79907|1,79988|0,80069|3,80069|2,80069|1) - Move 01:19:907 (79907|1,79988|0) - to 2-1 01:20:069 (80069|1) - to 0, I think it's better. done
2. 01:20:556 (80556|0) - Move to 3 done
3. I suggest to add a LN in parts like 02:34:988 - to 02:35:150 - no change

Until 8:36 these are what I found