IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. You should replace the soft-sliderslide.wav with this blank .wav according to the ranking criteria. Furthermore, copy that file and rename it to soft-sliderslide2.wav as the noises are quite obvious when it comes to 00:11:195 (1) . OK I did but I'm not quite sure what was wrong with my current slider-slide. it was already blank

[Insane]

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:22:239 - lol I dont understand the intention of speeding up here. Well I felt that the 1/4 reverse at the same speed looks too short and it would look better if it was longer.Since most people would just hold it, it won't make a difference in terms of gameplay
3. 00:27:387 (1,4) - You may want to fix the stack here. Same for 00:34:843 (2,7,8,1) .
4. 00:29:517 - Volume is too high that hitsounds dominates the music, lower it to 60%?
5. 00:35:730 (5,6) - Try a triplet here. http://puu.sh/cfvTs.jpg
6. 00:52:772 (5) - It doesn't make sense to have this gaining a higher volume of hitsound than 00:52:594 (4) if you compare the heaviness of these two in the music. I am quite sure (5) is softer than (4). So, I suggest 00:52:594 (4) using drum finish and 00:52:772 (5) only drum sampleset.
7. 01:14:606 - As mentioned above, lower the volume to 50% please. Drum samples are just acting like ornaments instead of main-dish. Also, same for 01:15:316.
8. 01:24:991 - Adding a circle here sounds more comfortable to me as there is a heavy drum. Also, delete 01:25:168 (5) as the stream of drums starts at 01:25:257 .

[Hard]

1. 00:59:695 - Missing whistle.
2. 01:18:156 (1,2) - Blanket.

[Normal]

1. 01:15:139 - Redundant green line.
2. 00:35:198 (4) - 142,170 for polishing the stack with 00:34:133 (2) .
3. 00:44:784 (1) - 395,151 for polishing the blanket.
4. 01:01:115 (4) - Try 469,346 for consistent distance snap.

IamKwaN wrote:

Gratz for your first rank! Keep it up!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Yay! :3 Gratz ^3^

CelsiusLK wrote:

Gratz first rank \:D/
I failed to ninja this lol lol whoops

handsome wrote:

kwan4president 2014 grats

Tatch wrote:

Grats

Koxeida wrote:

GRATS!!!!

Yuzu- wrote:

Good to see you've managed to get this ranked

Congratulations, Rtyzen! o3o

Haneure wrote:

Gratz~ o/

Rtyzen wrote:

Thanks

omg finally passed qualified no more stress

neonat wrote:

Rtyzen wrote:

Thanks

omg finally passed qualified no more stress

Stress is from your next map

Modem wrote:

Congratz ♡

SenseiAnimelove wrote:

Nice Beatmap I like it maybe could use a little bit of a fix on the beats in the beginning but great beatmap man I liked it so far aside from that