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Cool Joke - UNDO

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Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.

[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all

Not modding this until you get it fixed.

[Collab]
Looks good enough.
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Hamuko

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.

[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all

Not modding this until you get it fixed.

[Collab]
Looks good enough.
Done and Done \o
Last edited by Hamuko , edited 1 time in total.
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
MattWin's-
Can't expect much from a one star I guess~
01:19:797 (7) - newcombo please
Remap the last combo please, it throws the the pace you mapped for the rest of the map >:!

Medium-
Lol, please fix what JInxyjem said first, cuz the map's really messed up right now
You resnapped all notes, good, but fix hitsounds.... and....... please move the notes to 1/2 (red and white ticks) beat snap divisor, most of the notes that resnapped went on 1/4 (blue ticks)...

Collab- Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
not constant at all xD, but the insane parts make 13mil work, I guess
Please increase overall diff by 1
The ending Kiai section could use more hitsounds please
Nevertheless, the map's fairly good

I can't mod Taiko >.<
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Hamuko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
Exactly
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Hello there.
Commencing Proto-Bubble checking, go~
Discussing with blissfulyoshi about this.
This color will be things I stated. This color will be things Yoshi pointed out.

~General~
Artist: Yes.
Song: Yes.
Timing: Seems okay.
Tags: Put the guest mapper(s) name(s) in the tags for every difficulty.

Errors
Volume hitsound seems high. Mind lowering it towards the end? (Pointed out by both myself and yoshi)

[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.
01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1

[Medium]
No idea what the combo pattern Medium may be following. Overlapping notes, plays like an easy...
00:40:148 (8) - Spacing
Check using AIMod for crazy spacing errors (Ctrl-Shift-A)
Doesn't really follow a consistent pattern...
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
To fix the consistency, I recommend mapping to the lyrics or doing some combo reflections.


[Collaboration]
Many unneeded timing sections.
The collaboration diff is sort of... weird. It fluctuates everywhere, as everyone else stated.
00:11:025 (8) - New combo.
00:45:410 (1) - Spacing fine, remove the combo for lyrics.
This is all the modding we can do for now. Use all other difficulty mods for examples on how to fix.
Make the last timing section's BPM something that divides into 171.Perferrably, it should be 21.375.


[Fhatti Taiko Oni]
Solo modded by AgnesChan. ...Huh, never witnessed a Taiko Oni map that's four stars...
May want to rename this to"Fhattu Taiko Futsuu." Seems too easy to be a true Taiko Oni map... if you REALLY want it to be Oni, follow the beat, but with intense 1/4 streams. I have never mapped a Taiko map before, but I can tell from Taiko mapping experts this isn't really Taiko Oni.


Overall: This is NOT prepared for proto-bubble. Please, fix the mistakes stated above. Remind myself or Yoshi so we can check over again for the proto-bubble. Proto-bubble delay, star delay...
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I CAN SLEEP NOW. YESSSS

Edit: Star'd for fixes. Yay.
Last edited by Agnes , edited 1 time in total.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Gave volume change for those useless timing sections (that was the point really....). Blame my head
Fixed the spacing error and newcombos
Now I will wait Teara to fix his timing :)
Wish you have a good night, Agnes

P.S. don't know how I should fix those fluctuates....... I'll try to fix it

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Unneeded Timing points deleted~

hitsounds finished 100%

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Fixed some part. Do not upload Teara's version. Mine includes it

Fixed again

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi, Just collab mod requested by bmin.

00:16:286 (3) - unsnapped
01:04:181 (4) - ^
01:05:760 (5) - ^
01:22:602 (3) - ^
01:46:286 (5) - ^
01:46:374 (6) - ^
01:46:637 (8) - ^

00:45:410 (7) - new combo
00:58:918 (6) - spacing

02:39:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no good.. change to (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:44:183 (2) - stack it with 1 correctly
03:22:604 (4) - spacing or new combo


star ;)
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
and again
didn't fixed Teara's part yet

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Yk's mods~

bmin's parts are fix'd~ and mine

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi

AgnesChan wrote:

[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.
01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1
Of course, MattWin's Easy was modded by Teta268. It was meant to be easy, for starters, with easy timing and short lenght.
[attachment=0:64dcc]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:64dcc]
mago104
79 posts
Joined February 2009
mago104
Nice Map :D :idea: :P :!: :x :lol: :roll:
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Map looks good, just delete the .osb folder, there is some useless Storyboarding going on, with the "fail-background" file
make sure u delete the osb, and make the "fail-background" isn't doing anything in edit/design

*star
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
easy has countdown on halftime while the other 3 have no countdowns
fullmetal does not need to be in tags twice
does stack leniency need to be so far to the left on 2 diff's?

easy:
looks fine

medium:
hp drain is very low
00:42:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move onto white ticks to follow lyrics
00:51:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:02:253 (8) - snap endpoint to white tick
01:03:656 (9) - ^
01:05:235 (1) - start at 01:05:060 end at 01:07:867
01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white ticks
01:17:341 (1) - end on white tick
01:23:832 (1,2,3) - white ticks
01:31:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:393 (10) - new combo
01:53:481 (5) - ^
02:02:077 (3,4) - white ticks
02:08:218 (4) - I wouldn't end with clap

taiko:
*meh* no idea about taiko

collab:
looks nice
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
I've made the changes as James2250 said.
[attachment=0:15394]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu[/attachment:15394]

Hope I help~
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
MattWin's Easy
SPOILER

Too short, but no errors here.

Medium
SPOILER

00:40:498 (9) : Put a slider here that ends at 00:41:727.
01:11:025 (9) : One grid-space to the left.
01:50:148 (7) : One tick later, (at 01:50:323.)

Fhatii Taiko Futsuu
SPOILER

00:40:148 (8) : Remove this beat.
00:51:025 (27,28) : Forward by 2 ticks, and make them both DON.
00:51:551 (29) : KAT.

Use less sliders in a taiko map.

Collaboration
SPOILER

good.

*SB the names of the people in the collab
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Another modding for Taiko diff :3

[Fhatii Taiko Futsuu] Taiko mod
00:20:14 ~ 00:32:77 - [Suggestion] I guess this part needs to be Kiai Time part
00:31:37(48) - Set end into 00:32:77
00:34:18 ~ 00:36:99 - [Suggestion] I don't think blank part is good idea... Why don't you add some patterns?
00:40:49(9) - Set end into 00:41:55
00:59:09(44) - Move to 00:58:91
00:59:27(45) - Set end into 01:00:49
01:05:06(55) - Set end into 01:06:28
01:11:37(65) - Set end into 01:12:42
01:39:44(Kiai start) - Move to 01:40:14
02:02:60(167) - Set end into 02:04:35

Okay...
Good luck for you :3
And keep going.

Geez... I gave a star already...
ps. Don't give a kudosu for this reply :3
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Ok, lets get on with this then

  1. Offset: 8,910 (a little eariler than yours)
  2. Like James2250 has already said, you should remove one of the "fullmetal"'s from the tags. having the same word in the tags twice is pointless.
[MATTWIN'S EASY]

No problems, but this is awfully short. You should map more of the song in this diff if you can

[MEDIUM]

-Lower the tickrate to 1. It sounds better that way to me

00:45:937 (8) - Stack this on the start of (9)?
00:54:358 (4) - Stack this on the start of (5)?
01:05:235 (1) - Move this 1/2 earlier? (and if you do this, make it 1/2 longer
01:25:762 (1) - Make this a whole beat shoter?

[FHATTI TAIKO FUTSUU]

I'm no taiko buff, but this seems fine enough, even though there doesn't seem to be many stacks or streams like the sort i normally see in taiko maps. i guess this isn't intended to be a Taiko Oni map then :P

[COLLABORATION]

00:16:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden spacing change feels awkward to me. You can keep it if you want, I just thought I'd throw that out here.
01:34:348 (2,1) - awkward-feeling jump. with all those stacks going on reading a rather sudden jump like this is a bit jarring. Perhaps close this gap up
03:56:804 (4) - Why not just change this slider for a hitcircle?

Nice map. I wasn't expecting much to be honest, so its a nice little surprise. :)

Starred
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
Well okay, as you requested, there is the SB stuff
[attachment=0:645d9]mattwinsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=1:645d9]tearasb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=2:645d9]bminsb.png[/attachment:645d9]

I'll post Teta268 and Fhatii Taiko Futsuu later.

About the .osu files you already have them.
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
[attachment=1:0e460]fhatiisb.png[/attachment:0e460]
[attachment=0:0e460]tetasb.png[/attachment:0e460]

3 attachments per post -.-
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
All fixed. I still don't have the SB you told me before

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Delete the .osb.
Easy and Medium have unrankably low stack leniency.
MattWin's Easy is the only diff with countdown enabled.

[MattWin's Easy]

00:39:095 (2) - I don't think it looks very good to have a hitcircle partially below a slider.

Ends a bit too abruptly, I'd recommend mapping a bit more.

[Medium]

00:30:323 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:02:253 (8) - Move this to the left a bit so that 5,6,7,8 form a diamond?
01:11:025 (9) - Slightly out of line for a square.
01:11:727 - Break seems a bit short; warning arrows appear the instant the break starts. Consider making 10 a slider, and removing the break.
01:25:762 (1) - End this 1/2 later.
01:55:937 - Random break, doesn't fit. Why have breaks in kiai, the most epic part of the song? :P
02:02:604 (4) - Doesn't end neatly on the stack.

[Collab]

00:16:990 (7) - Identical sliders in a row, one of which is 1/2 BPM, makes me sad. :(
00:28:392 (1,2) - This jump is not a likable one. :(
01:03:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought this part just played like and sounded like chaos. It's just so fast and so unreadable.
01:51:376 - Same thing for parts of this kiai section. Maybe I'm just a terrible osu! player.
03:20:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Watch for spacing.
03:34:446 (1) - Move it 1/4 later? Sounds better, plays better.
03:43:305 - End kiai here?

Star~
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Fixed my part. I didn't change the one that you couldn't read. I would consider it if two more people complains about it

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Medium]

01:25:762 (1) - This spinner ends 1/2 too short. Could expand it 1/2 more with a finish.

[Collaboration]

02:36:288 (10) - Ends kinda odd like its 1/2 too short or too long.
02:44:007 (5,1) - Was stacking it like this intentional?

Also, your comboburst is a bit too wide. The max px on the width is 500, but the current one is 512. And don't forget to force default the skin....
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Medium:

01:07:86 There should be a small break between the spinner and the circle imo. A circle right after a spinner is way too difficult in this difficulty. But not a big prob.
01:19:09 ^^

Nice map and the song rocks :D
Star~
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
All mods applied, thanks.

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Detective Tuesday
233 posts
Here since the beginning
Detective Tuesday
Easy
01:00:148 (3) - Slider end is too far from next combo.

01:05:060 (4) - too far from (3)... Mattafack, the spacing of this combo is generally messy. Move the (3) to make an even triangular patten of (1, 2, and 3), and then throw the (4) where the (1) is.

Medium

00:49:972 (4) - Move slider end closer to (5)

01:08:569 (2) - Should be closer to (3)


Collab

00:14:006 (7) - Lower a tick.


3:06:463 - I feel like you should just start the break here. There's no reason to set up a vibe just to leave it hanging for the next 3 measures.

Nice map overall. Star for you. Good luck, your birthday approaches.
barbareela
1 post
Joined December 2009
barbareela
meeeeu otooto-san *-*


Gostei do teu map, ficou bem legal... Só tem algumas partes fora de sync, maas isso tu conserta.
Quando fizer outro, me manda *-*
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Make sure to write every guest mapper's name in the tag section for every map.
Not going to mod the taiko diff.

MattWin's Easy
Change the source to Full Metal Alchemist like the other diffs
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
I did not like the overlapping notes in the diff. (Ex: 00:27:165 (3) and 00:39:095 (2)) They detract from the aesthetic appeal of the map.

Timing section mod:
01:08:218 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Normal
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
Again, I do not like the overlapping notes

Timing section mod:
01:59:797 - move back a quarter note

Collaboration:
I really do not like the difficulty spikes in this diff.

Normal mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this was very hard for me to read

Timing section mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unneeded timing section, please remove

====================
Nice map overall. Contact me again after you fix the map (remember what I post is my sugggestion and opinion, not what I am forcing you to do). I'll consider p-bubbling it then. Star.
penaxo
36 posts
Joined August 2009
penaxo
good beatmap loved
im play in the ctb 8-)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Remapped a big part :>

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Encrypto
128 posts
Joined March 2009
Encrypto
Well,you already have 2 golden stars,so theres nothing more to say.

Great Map,all is working fine,and I want this ranked NOW ^-^

*star*
Mattoi
58 posts
Joined October 2009
Mattoi
All the changes to my difficulty (but it's with the same lenght), I think there are no problems~
[attachment=0:0a01b]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:0a01b]
Don't give kudosu
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Going for pubble now!
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
[collab]

00:24:182 (7) - move closer to 6 or new combo it (jump)
00:28:918 (3) - move closer to 2 or new combo
00:58:918 (6) - move closer to previous number or new combo
01:54:182 (3) - ^
03:32:779 (4) - move away from previous number or new combo
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
Nice map. \(*-*)/
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