From quheuahuhauefhau
[Oni]
00:04:802 (9) - Remove | I don't think this note is necessary, it feels out of place, I think 00:05:447 (10) - is enough to lead the player into 00:05:769 (11) -
00:47:866 (265,266) - Swap | When I hear the kats here 00:47:544 (262,263,264) - , it feels like it is mapping to the vocals in the music, but the following kat doesn't fall perfectly on the vocal itself, which sounds late
01:11:899 (433,436) - I think you should delete these notes | These notes somewhat links the whole pattern together, which decreases the emphasis created by the finishes since the BPM is rather high, I suggest to give players some breaks in between the emphasis to recover
01:25:286 (518,522,526) - Remove | Same reasoning as above
[Muzu]
01:11:899 (327,330) - Same as Oni ; Remove them | Same reasoning as Oni
01:25:286 (394,401) - Remove | Same reasoning as Oni
Otherwise, the other patterns look fine for playing owo/
[Oni]
00:04:802 (9) - Remove | I don't think this note is necessary, it feels out of place, I think 00:05:447 (10) - is enough to lead the player into 00:05:769 (11) -
00:47:866 (265,266) - Swap | When I hear the kats here 00:47:544 (262,263,264) - , it feels like it is mapping to the vocals in the music, but the following kat doesn't fall perfectly on the vocal itself, which sounds late
01:11:899 (433,436) - I think you should delete these notes | These notes somewhat links the whole pattern together, which decreases the emphasis created by the finishes since the BPM is rather high, I suggest to give players some breaks in between the emphasis to recover
01:25:286 (518,522,526) - Remove | Same reasoning as above
[Muzu]
01:11:899 (327,330) - Same as Oni ; Remove them | Same reasoning as Oni
01:25:286 (394,401) - Remove | Same reasoning as Oni
Otherwise, the other patterns look fine for playing owo/