Heart of Bitch wrote:

hey CS! 时间不够，只看了ADV.如果觉得改的有道理我再补充其他难度的mod :3
顺便说下，这里说的都是建议，没什么根本错误，自行考虑修改。有的问题没有都列举出来，如果改了，就把同类型的都改了吧！幫了很多:D感謝

[ADVANCED]
00:16:213 (16213|2) - 可以考虑删掉？有音，不加
00:22:213 (22213|3) - 换50%听，应该是从下面的蓝线开始。這邊我抓的不是你聽的那個音，所以暫時保留
00:22:213 (22213|3,22384|3) - 可以都删掉，然后换成从下面蓝线到00:22:384停止的LN同上
00:26:499 可以考虑再加一个note和后面三个音00:26:670 (26670|1,26842|2,27013|3) - 区分开。
我改變了後面三個鍵的排列方式跟前面的階梯做區別
00:41:070 (41070|1) - 移到1 00:41:156 (41156|0) - 移到2 感觉这里的鼓声用乱键比楼梯好接受
01:00:784 (60784|2) - 变成LN，在01:01:813 结束。同时加个LN在1.从01:01:470开始，在01:01:813结束
後面一大段的這種音都沒取，這邊也不取了
01:04:727 (64727|0) - 移到4 听音高
01:04:899 (64899|1) - 移到3 听音高
01:05:070 (65070|0) - 移到2 听音高
01:05:242 (65242|1) - 移到1 听音高
01:07:127 (67127|0) - 考虑换成LN在01:07:470红线结束。这里抓背景音换面条好点。
01:07:813 (67813|1) - 加个LN在2，结束在红线。01:08:156
上面这两条都是因为你抓了01:09:527 (69527|0) - 这里的这个同类型音。
這邊其實我是抓vocal到下一個音的那個尾音，所以這兩個暫時不修
01:11:242 (71242|1) - 同样，这个可以换LN结束在红线。
01:11:927 (71927|2) - 这里也是，可以加一个LN在4，结束在红线。理由同上
01:15:356 (75356|1) - 移到1。听音高
01:15:527 (75527|3) - 移到2。听音高
01:15:699 (75699|3) - 移到4。听音高
01:15:870 (75870|2) - 移到3。
這邊四個都接受了
01:19:899 (79899|0,79984|3,80070|0,80156|3,80242|0,80327|3,80413|0,80499|3,80584|0,80670|3,80756|0,80842|3,80927|0,81013|3,81099|0,81184|3,81270|0) - 这里的1，4交替连打可以换成乱键，因为这样更人性。交替连打其实还是比较卡手的。
這段音樂有特別凸顯出來，我認為是不太超過的
01:24:613 (84613|2,84784|2) - 删掉，然后在01:24:613 (84613|2) - 第三线加一个LN结束在01:24:784。原因是跟人声。
01:27:356 (87356|3,87527|2) - 这里也是。可以根据自己喜好进行修改。跟人声就行了。
這兩段讓我再思考一下，暫時不改
01:31:642 (91642|1,91727|2,91813|1,91899|2,91984|1,92070|2,92156|1,92242|2) - 这里的交替连打也可以改一下。
改成兩小段的交替連打了
01:33:184 (93184|2) - 加个小LN在3然后在白线结束。這邊不是對人聲
01:34:042 (94042|0) - 加一个在2吧？因为这里音很重。 改patterns與後面做區別了
01:36:442 (96442|2) - 移到4？接受

加油:3 感謝HoB的幫忙 請接收kud!

ExPew wrote:

imba fast mod hhhh cause i dont think got many problems hhhhhh imbaPew

General : can you describe of this song? I can describe the Artist "Ray"
This song is telling about future!I think it is a pleasing song to me,so I made it.

[ADVANCED]

00:01:642 (1642|2) - move 4 accept
00:02:327 (2327|3) - move 2 accept
00:02:413 (2413|1) - move 1 accept
00:02:670 (2670|0) - move 2 accept
00:03:013 (3013|3) - move 3 accept

00:32:156 (32156|2) - move 2 Wow!

00:37:470 - add a note ( Okay!>_<

[EXHAUST]

00:26:242 (26242|2,26413|2,26499|3) - how about like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741521
Nice patterns

00:37:470 - add a note added like ADVANCED
01:16:727 - add a note (sfx) added,too
01:17:070 - ^ added,three hhhhhh

pattern looks all fine damn jacks hhhhh Thanks!And jacks.......hmmm

i think SV changes is suggested this diff Your guess is correct,and you know who suggested it :)

ExPew wrote:

ur welcome....all ur lolis are mine now...

victorica_db wrote:

1234
novice
00:03:184 (3184|1,3356|1,3527|2,3699|2,3870|1,4042|1) - stair is better 好，重新修改完成
00:04:556 (4556|2) - change to notes Okay
00:09:870 (9870|0) - main instrument is better so move to 00:10:042 - 這邊我聽錯了:|，fixed
00:13:470 (13470|1) - move to one
00:13:813 - add a note at 2 suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752560
保留LN在2但在1加了顆鍵
00:16:042 (16042|3) - end at 00:16:899 -
這邊感覺有兩層聲音，所以我在00:16:556 - 在加了一個LN
00:16:899 - not suggest to catch vocal but nothing important no change is ok okay,remain
00:25:127 (25127|2) - change to note
00:25:642 (25642|1) - move to 00:25:470 -
00:25:813 - adda note
00:25:984 - ^
00:25:813 (25813|3) - delete
我抓錯音了，上述全部修改
00:33:784 - 00:36:584 - all single note 已修改
01:00:270 (60270|1) - change to note Okay
00:59:927 (59927|0) - end at 01:00:270 - 好
01:04:042 (64042|1) - end at 01:04:899 - 這邊先Fixed，之後可能會再調整
01:17:242 (77242|0,79984|3) - delete
01:17:242 (77242|0,79984|3,89413|1,90099|0) - delete and catch drum here
不太了解意思，如果我這邊修改得跟你希望的感覺不同可以再跟我說
01:30:956 (90956|1,91470|2) - change to note and use stairOkay

advanced
00:27:870 - 00:31:642 - add a note at every redline 我想只抓鼓聲，保留
00:36:784 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752955 詩人擺法
00:40:899 (40899|3,40984|2,41070|0,41156|1) - stairs 好，改回來了
00:41:242 (41242|3) - double修改好了
00:48:270 (48270|1,48270|2,48613|3,48613|0,48956|1,48956|2) - sdvx sound use 3 notesOkay!
00:53:756 - ^ ^
00:58:899 (58899|0,58984|0) - move to 2Okay!
00:59:070 (59070|1,59156|0,59242|3,59327|2) - stair 1234 stair 4321
00:59:413 (59413|3,60784|2) - exchange 修改好了~
01:37:642 - sdvx sound 3 notes同上，已修改~
01:41:927 - catch all the drum https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1761133 改成這樣
01:48:613 - sdvx sound 3 notes好

MX
00:37:127 - no svchange or much more slowSV deleted
00:45:699 - make sv change slowchange 0.25 to 0.5
00:59:070 (59070|3,59156|2,59242|3,59327|0) - deletedeleted but remain00:59:070 (59070|3) -
01:00:784 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1753001Okay
01:00:784 - sv change can be 0.9 ~0.8 ~ 0.7 ~ 0.6 ~ 0.5 it wont be really sudden
一開始的做法是這樣沒錯，已調整
01:10:384 - start the sv change every double white line add 0.1 like 0.6 ~0.7~0.8 ~ 0.9 ~ 1.0
Nice suggestion,fixed
01:44:670 - here i suggest to use all double note it will be fun Add some double notes but not all
01:52:899 (112899|0,112899|2,112984|3,112984|1,113070|0,113070|2,113156|3,113156|1,113242|2,113242|1,113327|3,113327|0,113413|1,113413|2,113499|3,113499|0,113584|3,113584|2,113670|0,113670|1,113756|2,113756|3,113842|1,113842|0,113927|2,113927|1,114013|1,114013|2,114099|3,114099|0,114184|0,114184|3,114270|2,114270|1) - rechange this part - -not this pattern
rechange to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1761170

Spy wrote:

jubeat saucer加上tag Fixed

asd123iii wrote:

|1|2|3|4|

[NOVICE]
00:00:442 - 00:03:013 - 建議只取鼓點 我聽第二遍才發現跟什麼音 原本想取那種特效音的，fixed
00:49:813 (49813|0) - 拉LN到00:50:156 - Okay!

[ADVANCED]
00:16:213 - 這段怪怪的 滿多摸都說這段怪怪的，再度修正
01:01:470 - 01:17:242 - 這段取音有點亂 這邊我是抓鋼琴+vocal

[EXHAUST]
變速比較好了 再次感謝詩人們的建議
01:01:470 - 01:17:242 - 同ADV 這邊當作休息段，所以只抓鋼琴

感謝asd桑的幫忙 ，請收下我的GD和<3

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[General]
- Background image is too small. Please replace it with a better one. Changed

[NOVICE]
00:08:156 (8156|3) Move to 1st or 2nd column. Moved to 2nd column.
00:36:956 (36956|2) Move to 1st column. Moved

[EXHAUST]
- For all SV changes at x0.25, increase to x0.5. Test and changed
- For all SV changes at x1.25, increase to x1.5. ^
00:07:984 Decrease SV change to x0.5. Okay

Thanks for your check,Proguy. I'll work hard

Spy wrote:

This BG do not feel the car does not work

PROGUY wrote:

Spy wrote:

This BG do not feel the car does not work

lol dumb Google translator

But yeah, it's agreeable that the current BG is kinda inappropriate.
Please replace it with something else SFW.

Spy wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

lol dumb Google translator

But yeah, it's agreeable that the current BG is kinda inappropriate.
Please replace it with something else SFW.

Same meaning lol
Original sentence I said is,"This BG must be 「got on transport」"
"Getting on transport" in one Taiwanese forum means ban/delete account lol

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

Hello CrazyStar~! Here's my mod as requested! Wow!!Hina san you still remember my request

Col: 1|2|3|4

[EXHAUST]
01:00:442 (60442|0) - move to 2
01:31:127 - http://puu.sh/aoFo5/c14ecf5dcc.jpg
00:07:984 (7984|3,8156|0) - move to 2 and 3, respectively
00:14:670 (14670|1) - move to 3 moved
00:22:213 (22213|3) - move to 1 moved
00:32:070 (32070|3) - move to 3 moved

Other diffs seems fine for me. Thanks
Good luck~!

PROGUY wrote:

And I'm back again. Current BG is acceptable for rank, but you'll need to compress this picture by resizing (or changing its canvas size) to 1920 x 1080.

PROGUY wrote:

Looks good now. Here's your first bubble.

Good luck.

ExPew wrote:

my idol getting qualified

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