c36098651 wrote:

[EXHAUST ]

00:32:899 (32899|2,32956|3) - 這裡好像是1/8 Fixed

[ADVANCED]

00:16:384 ~ 00:16:556 這音就沒詮釋 看是要
在 00:16:384 ~ 00:16:556 多加LN
或是 00:16:556 (16556|3) - 乾脆就從 00:16:384 開始 00:16:899 結束 這邊我選擇加鍵在00:16:213 和00:16:384 上

00:32:899 (32899|3,32956|0) - 一樣 1/8 Fixed
01:00:013 這邊有音 就看你怎麼處理吧 這邊我只是想把1/4用LN呈現 所以就不改

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod来了~
[NOV]
HP7 or OD7 HP7 感覺OD7稍微嚴格了些
开头我就不知道你在抓什么了..開頭那一大段我在抓電音，只是我不小心把一些音弄成LN了
如果是抓鼓点00:00:956 (956|2) - 就把这个移到00:01:042 - 不过我觉得多半你不是抓这个的

00:01:813 (1813|0) - 应该是这个条子抓错了 删掉然后再00:01:984 - 加个Note

00:07:299 (7299|1) - 如果是这种抓法那么要把00:07:813 (7813|2) - 删了
00:07:642 - 然后在这里加个Hold.老位子结束

00:13:127 - 和前面一样的解决方法^

從開頭到這邊 我把一些短LN修改成兩顆鍵在原本LN的頭尾，如果還是覺得有問題可以再跟我說!

00:25:813 (25813|3) - 不太可行 我建议在00:26:156 - 结束 原本這LN是打算是對vocal的 已經修改

00:26:499 - 在这里加个Note在4 感覺跟前面的音比較，沒有比較重，就不加note了

00:27:870 - ~00:37:470 - 这个Part抓Vocal不太好 抓背景鼓点 用1Note和2Notes区分轻重音是良策
而且那样子Note也会减少一些 主要是我看你Kiai也在抓Vocal.全程Vocal有些...
這一大段re掉了，不過我有些怕2notes的地方下錯，那地方就給之後的mod改了
00:36:784 - 最后这里开始原分不动 我稍微移動了位置到3 感覺打起來帶感些

01:34:042 - ~ 01:44:670 - 这个Kiai抓鼓点吧..全程人声我个人不太推荐
跟前一大段一樣 已經修改，如果2notes的地方有抓錯，一樣再請後面的mod抓錯

01:52:899 (112899|0,113070|1,113242|3,113413|2,113584|1,113756|0) - 位置不变 全部变成Note 这个Part对Novice来说比较可怕
deleted掉了在1/2開頭的LN

這個難度比較翔 辛苦小星姐了:oops:
[ADV]
00:16:384 (16384|2) -变成Hold在00:16:556 - 结束 這邊C桑的mod也有提出來，接受

00:19:642 - ~00:21:013 - 这里改成23连打OK

00:23:756 - ~00:24:784 - 一排14一排23的交错双键我改成13跟24的交錯雙鍵，維持著前面14與23分開的情形

01:26:670 - 很明显的音效 加个Note在3漏聽了，已經修改

[EXH]
00:32:842 - 不是说不好 只是说后面的人肯定会吐槽这个键位 这边稍微警示一下
這段算個人的惡趣味吧 ，之後如果真的太多人提，我再修改

00:51:356 - 音没断才对 一樣漏聽了，已修改

01:22:727 - 这里可以插一根x0.6的变速绿线 因为这里给我的感觉和之前0.5x还是有些区别的插了x0.63的

01:31:984 - ~ 01:32:327 - Double Notes 正好你这里可以形成双键对称感覺只有與前面的1/4相同的音效，維持原樣

01:33:699 - 01:33:870 - 这里再来个变速 改了

01:54:784 (114784|1) - 这里变成Hold在01:55:642 - 结束所以删掉那个Note 這邊在做的時候就有考慮過，已修改

01:55:127 - 给我的感觉已经出变速的音效了所以这里加个Hold在01:55:299 - 结束我還是希望LN頭下在聲音最明顯的地方，維持原樣

CS加油~ 感謝鼓勵<3

感謝小星姐 點出了很多的問題 尤其是那張NOVICE

Spy wrote:

Hello mod by request

Column : 1 2 3 4

[General]
Tags : 源屋 SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH →unnecessary because already in title or source. Okay

[NOVICE]
00:03:184 (3184|1,3527|2,3870|3) - Change to like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1712939 改成了跟你的圖片大同小異的樣子
00:07:984 (7984|3,8156|0) - Same pitches,suggest to put in same columnOkay
00:09:870 (9870|0,10213|2) - Remove and change catch these ?
00:09:870 (9870|0,10213|2,10727|1,10899|0) - Remove,00:10:042 and 00:10:384 add a note,then change 00:10:556 (10556|3) - to LN and end at 00:11:413 ?(00:11:070 (11070|2) have to remove)
這段我應該是沒有抓錯的，所以只delete掉00:10:727
00:14:156 (14156|3,14499|2,14842|1) - Change to normal notes are better已修改
00:24:270 (24270|0,24442|3,24613|2,24784|1,24956|0) - Weird,rethink here做成了與前面的拍子一樣的patterns
00:33:013 (33013|1,33184|2) - Uncomfortable while playing,change to normal notes,or change to other column已修改
01:17:070 (77070|3,77242|0) - Well,I don't suggest that.改成note了
01:17:242 (77242|0,79984|2,80327|1) - End at 01:21:356已修改
About KIAI 1 and KIAI 2,already told you how to improve via irc 綜合你和小星姐的mod，大幅修改這兩段的抓音

[ADVANCED]
00:03:184 (3184|3,3184|0,3356|1,3527|2,3699|3,3870|0,4042|1) - Same beats,if you want to use 2 notes,I suggest you all change to 2 notes here,and follow the pitches,seems not like stair here
已修改，因為這邊放2notes的關係 前面的音有些我也修成2notes了
00:07:984 (7984|3,8156|0) - Same pitches,why not add a note on 00:07:984 and 00:08:156 again ?
我抓的不是和00:07:984相同的音 remain
00:17:242 (17242|0,17584|3,17927|0,18270|3,18613|0,18956|3,19299|0,19642|2,19984|1,20327|2,20670|1,21013|2,21356|1,21699|2,22042|1) - Weird,already discuss about these via irc 已修改，如果還有問題之後再等其它人提出
00:31:984 (31984|0,32070|1,32156|2,32242|3,32327|0,32413|1,32499|2,32584|3,32670|0,32756|1,32842|2,32884|3,32927|0,32970|1,33013|2) - Change patternsOkay!
00:43:984 - You still can add notes here有音，可是我不是抓這個
00:58:727 (58727|3,58813|2,58899|1,58984|0,59070|3,59156|2,59242|1,59327|0) - Same,change patterns
把前面四顆修改成2連鍵，後面4顆打亂
01:07:642 (67642|3,67813|3) - ?前面的修改了，後面的remain
01:28:213 - You can change your sampleset back to normal from here已修改!這段改回Normal真的好很多
01:41:927 (101927|0) - End at 01:42:442接受
01:42:442 (102442|1) - End at 01:42:956接受
01:43:470 (103470|1,103813|3,104327|3) - Change to catch vocal嗯，這邊抓人聲真的比較好

[EXHAUST]
00:31:984 (31984|3,32070|2,32156|3,32242|2,32327|3,32413|2,32499|3,32584|2,32670|3,32756|2,32842|3,32884|2,32927|3,32970|2,33013|3) - Change your patterns 多人反應 accept
Not too much problem in this diff,good job Thanks!

Just these,hop these are helpful 辛苦了 一樣在NOVICE的地方幫了我大忙^^，不過我還是沒有用英文回應
Here is a star for encourage you ! Thank you for cheering<3

richardfeder wrote:

General:
怎么感觉BG分辨率不够啊lol 朦朧美(X

Exh

00:09:870 (9870|1,9870|2,10213|1,10213|0,10556|3,10556|2) - 我觉得可以考虑三键啊 强调多了出来的一个finish
之前有想過這邊可以改成三鍵，Okay
00:37:984 (37984|3) - 好像没音 是的!接受

01:05:413 - 01:05:584 - 有音的 可以补上 補上了!

01:14:670 - ^ 一樣也補上了!

01:33:184 (93184|1) - add 這邊加了跟前後抓得音好像不一樣，暫不採用

这要mod吗...? lol 肯定是還需要的:)
顺带说一下排列好诗hhh 估计连点要点到傻了其實連鍵原本是更兇的!

Adv

HP7 好
00:59:242 (59242|3,59327|2) - 往左挪一格 影響不太大 就不移了

01:00:099 (60099|0) - 应该是前面一个红线开始 是不是拉错了? 是的 我拉錯了 已更正

01:10:213 - 很棒的排法啊 ，Okay

01:13:127 - 这里取vocal我觉得有点奇怪啊
改成取琴聲了，不過前面我大多對vocal，之後如果有問題可能還最再回來看一次

88213的绿线删掉 好像完全没有作用 應該是漏看了，Sampleset有差別
这个也是没啥问题啊錯覺

Nov

OD7 OD6.5
00:10:899 (10899|0,11070|1) - 放在同一个轨道上 Okay!都改在第2軌了

00:13:813 (13813|2) - add 已經增加我好像在這附近很容易沒抓好

00:20:327 (20327|3) - 应该是长度短了点 拉到上面那根红线這邊我應該是沒抓錯的，remain

00:33:956 (33956|3,33956|2,34213|0,34213|1,34727|0,34727|1,35327|2,35327|3,35584|0,35584|1) - 我看你前面后面都是单键写的这种鼓点 为啥这里就用双note呢?
因為與背景音樂比起來，這裡的鼓點與別點的比相對比較明顯

00:25:127 (25127|2,25642|1) - 接起来 嗯，是該連起來的，接受

00:41:242 (41242|2) - 我建议加一个這邊的音的確比較明顯，加了

00:58:556 (58556|3) - 我建议这里变成一个note 然后00:58:727 (58727|3) - 拉一根条子到00:59:070 -
考慮了一下之後，已修改

01:46:042 (106042|2,112213|3) - 这两个我觉得有点意义不明...
真的意義不明了...兩段分別修改成不同樣子了
其他的都还好/o/辛苦了

GJ 顺带射颗星w 加油!感謝PC詩人的mod <3<3 受益良多!!

Heart of Bitch wrote:

hey CS! 时间不够，只看了ADV.如果觉得改的有道理我再补充其他难度的mod :3
顺便说下，这里说的都是建议，没什么根本错误，自行考虑修改。有的问题没有都列举出来，如果改了，就把同类型的都改了吧！幫了很多:D感謝

[ADVANCED]
00:16:213 (16213|2) - 可以考虑删掉？有音，不加
00:22:213 (22213|3) - 换50%听，应该是从下面的蓝线开始。這邊我抓的不是你聽的那個音，所以暫時保留
00:22:213 (22213|3,22384|3) - 可以都删掉，然后换成从下面蓝线到00:22:384停止的LN同上
00:26:499 可以考虑再加一个note和后面三个音00:26:670 (26670|1,26842|2,27013|3) - 区分开。
我改變了後面三個鍵的排列方式跟前面的階梯做區別
00:41:070 (41070|1) - 移到1 00:41:156 (41156|0) - 移到2 感觉这里的鼓声用乱键比楼梯好接受
01:00:784 (60784|2) - 变成LN，在01:01:813 结束。同时加个LN在1.从01:01:470开始，在01:01:813结束
後面一大段的這種音都沒取，這邊也不取了
01:04:727 (64727|0) - 移到4 听音高
01:04:899 (64899|1) - 移到3 听音高
01:05:070 (65070|0) - 移到2 听音高
01:05:242 (65242|1) - 移到1 听音高
01:07:127 (67127|0) - 考虑换成LN在01:07:470红线结束。这里抓背景音换面条好点。
01:07:813 (67813|1) - 加个LN在2，结束在红线。01:08:156
上面这两条都是因为你抓了01:09:527 (69527|0) - 这里的这个同类型音。
這邊其實我是抓vocal到下一個音的那個尾音，所以這兩個暫時不修
01:11:242 (71242|1) - 同样，这个可以换LN结束在红线。
01:11:927 (71927|2) - 这里也是，可以加一个LN在4，结束在红线。理由同上
01:15:356 (75356|1) - 移到1。听音高
01:15:527 (75527|3) - 移到2。听音高
01:15:699 (75699|3) - 移到4。听音高
01:15:870 (75870|2) - 移到3。
這邊四個都接受了
01:19:899 (79899|0,79984|3,80070|0,80156|3,80242|0,80327|3,80413|0,80499|3,80584|0,80670|3,80756|0,80842|3,80927|0,81013|3,81099|0,81184|3,81270|0) - 这里的1，4交替连打可以换成乱键，因为这样更人性。交替连打其实还是比较卡手的。
這段音樂有特別凸顯出來，我認為是不太超過的
01:24:613 (84613|2,84784|2) - 删掉，然后在01:24:613 (84613|2) - 第三线加一个LN结束在01:24:784。原因是跟人声。
01:27:356 (87356|3,87527|2) - 这里也是。可以根据自己喜好进行修改。跟人声就行了。
這兩段讓我再思考一下，暫時不改
01:31:642 (91642|1,91727|2,91813|1,91899|2,91984|1,92070|2,92156|1,92242|2) - 这里的交替连打也可以改一下。
改成兩小段的交替連打了
01:33:184 (93184|2) - 加个小LN在3然后在白线结束。這邊不是對人聲
01:34:042 (94042|0) - 加一个在2吧？因为这里音很重。 改patterns與後面做區別了
01:36:442 (96442|2) - 移到4？接受

加油:3 感謝HoB的幫忙 請接收kud!

ExPew wrote:

imba fast mod hhhh cause i dont think got many problems hhhhhh imbaPew

General : can you describe of this song? I can describe the Artist "Ray"
This song is telling about future!I think it is a pleasing song to me,so I made it.

[ADVANCED]

00:01:642 (1642|2) - move 4 accept
00:02:327 (2327|3) - move 2 accept
00:02:413 (2413|1) - move 1 accept
00:02:670 (2670|0) - move 2 accept
00:03:013 (3013|3) - move 3 accept

00:32:156 (32156|2) - move 2 Wow!

00:37:470 - add a note ( Okay!>_<

[EXHAUST]

00:26:242 (26242|2,26413|2,26499|3) - how about like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741521
Nice patterns

00:37:470 - add a note added like ADVANCED
01:16:727 - add a note (sfx) added,too
01:17:070 - ^ added,three hhhhhh

pattern looks all fine damn jacks hhhhh Thanks!And jacks.......hmmm

i think SV changes is suggested this diff Your guess is correct,and you know who suggested it :)

ExPew wrote:

ur welcome....all ur lolis are mine now...

victorica_db wrote:

1234
novice
00:03:184 (3184|1,3356|1,3527|2,3699|2,3870|1,4042|1) - stair is better 好，重新修改完成
00:04:556 (4556|2) - change to notes Okay
00:09:870 (9870|0) - main instrument is better so move to 00:10:042 - 這邊我聽錯了:|，fixed
00:13:470 (13470|1) - move to one
00:13:813 - add a note at 2 suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752560
保留LN在2但在1加了顆鍵
00:16:042 (16042|3) - end at 00:16:899 -
這邊感覺有兩層聲音，所以我在00:16:556 - 在加了一個LN
00:16:899 - not suggest to catch vocal but nothing important no change is ok okay,remain
00:25:127 (25127|2) - change to note
00:25:642 (25642|1) - move to 00:25:470 -
00:25:813 - adda note
00:25:984 - ^
00:25:813 (25813|3) - delete
我抓錯音了，上述全部修改
00:33:784 - 00:36:584 - all single note 已修改
01:00:270 (60270|1) - change to note Okay
00:59:927 (59927|0) - end at 01:00:270 - 好
01:04:042 (64042|1) - end at 01:04:899 - 這邊先Fixed，之後可能會再調整
01:17:242 (77242|0,79984|3) - delete
01:17:242 (77242|0,79984|3,89413|1,90099|0) - delete and catch drum here
不太了解意思，如果我這邊修改得跟你希望的感覺不同可以再跟我說
01:30:956 (90956|1,91470|2) - change to note and use stairOkay

advanced
00:27:870 - 00:31:642 - add a note at every redline 我想只抓鼓聲，保留
00:36:784 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752955 詩人擺法
00:40:899 (40899|3,40984|2,41070|0,41156|1) - stairs 好，改回來了
00:41:242 (41242|3) - double修改好了
00:48:270 (48270|1,48270|2,48613|3,48613|0,48956|1,48956|2) - sdvx sound use 3 notesOkay!
00:53:756 - ^ ^
00:58:899 (58899|0,58984|0) - move to 2Okay!
00:59:070 (59070|1,59156|0,59242|3,59327|2) - stair 1234 stair 4321
00:59:413 (59413|3,60784|2) - exchange 修改好了~
01:37:642 - sdvx sound 3 notes同上，已修改~
01:41:927 - catch all the drum https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1761133 改成這樣
01:48:613 - sdvx sound 3 notes好

MX
00:37:127 - no svchange or much more slowSV deleted
00:45:699 - make sv change slowchange 0.25 to 0.5
00:59:070 (59070|3,59156|2,59242|3,59327|0) - deletedeleted but remain00:59:070 (59070|3) -
01:00:784 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1753001Okay
01:00:784 - sv change can be 0.9 ~0.8 ~ 0.7 ~ 0.6 ~ 0.5 it wont be really sudden
一開始的做法是這樣沒錯，已調整
01:10:384 - start the sv change every double white line add 0.1 like 0.6 ~0.7~0.8 ~ 0.9 ~ 1.0
Nice suggestion,fixed
01:44:670 - here i suggest to use all double note it will be fun Add some double notes but not all
01:52:899 (112899|0,112899|2,112984|3,112984|1,113070|0,113070|2,113156|3,113156|1,113242|2,113242|1,113327|3,113327|0,113413|1,113413|2,113499|3,113499|0,113584|3,113584|2,113670|0,113670|1,113756|2,113756|3,113842|1,113842|0,113927|2,113927|1,114013|1,114013|2,114099|3,114099|0,114184|0,114184|3,114270|2,114270|1) - rechange this part - -not this pattern
rechange to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1761170

Spy wrote:

jubeat saucer加上tag Fixed

asd123iii wrote:

|1|2|3|4|

[NOVICE]
00:00:442 - 00:03:013 - 建議只取鼓點 我聽第二遍才發現跟什麼音 原本想取那種特效音的，fixed
00:49:813 (49813|0) - 拉LN到00:50:156 - Okay!

[ADVANCED]
00:16:213 - 這段怪怪的 滿多摸都說這段怪怪的，再度修正
01:01:470 - 01:17:242 - 這段取音有點亂 這邊我是抓鋼琴+vocal

[EXHAUST]
變速比較好了 再次感謝詩人們的建議
01:01:470 - 01:17:242 - 同ADV 這邊當作休息段，所以只抓鋼琴

感謝asd桑的幫忙 ，請收下我的GD和<3

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there.
Here's my check as requested.

[General]
- Background image is too small. Please replace it with a better one. Changed

[NOVICE]
00:08:156 (8156|3) Move to 1st or 2nd column. Moved to 2nd column.
00:36:956 (36956|2) Move to 1st column. Moved

[EXHAUST]
- For all SV changes at x0.25, increase to x0.5. Test and changed
- For all SV changes at x1.25, increase to x1.5. ^
00:07:984 Decrease SV change to x0.5. Okay

Thanks for your check,Proguy. I'll work hard

Spy wrote:

This BG do not feel the car does not work

PROGUY wrote:

Spy wrote:

This BG do not feel the car does not work

lol dumb Google translator

But yeah, it's agreeable that the current BG is kinda inappropriate.
Please replace it with something else SFW.

Spy wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

lol dumb Google translator

But yeah, it's agreeable that the current BG is kinda inappropriate.
Please replace it with something else SFW.

Same meaning lol
Original sentence I said is,"This BG must be 「got on transport」"
"Getting on transport" in one Taiwanese forum means ban/delete account lol

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

Hello CrazyStar~! Here's my mod as requested! Wow!!Hina san you still remember my request

Col: 1|2|3|4

[EXHAUST]
01:00:442 (60442|0) - move to 2
01:31:127 - http://puu.sh/aoFo5/c14ecf5dcc.jpg
00:07:984 (7984|3,8156|0) - move to 2 and 3, respectively
00:14:670 (14670|1) - move to 3 moved
00:22:213 (22213|3) - move to 1 moved
00:32:070 (32070|3) - move to 3 moved

Other diffs seems fine for me. Thanks
Good luck~!

PROGUY wrote:

And I'm back again. Current BG is acceptable for rank, but you'll need to compress this picture by resizing (or changing its canvas size) to 1920 x 1080.

PROGUY wrote:

Looks good now. Here's your first bubble.

Good luck.

ExPew wrote:

my idol getting qualified

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