[Metadata]
Artist should be jea.
Discogs has said that M.A.M.A. is by Jea.
There are people on FFR who have the album that can confirm that this is the case as they own the album physically. High Speed Music Team Sharpnel is the collective of Jea, La-Quebrata, Lemmy, MC-JunQ and Quebradora - which is why the album's artist is High Speed Music Team Sharpnel.
[SHD]
Overall decent, though maybe you can change some parts to have a noticeable difficulty discrepancy from ExTra.
00:23:204 - haha this is cruel. Would personally use [12][34] instead here, but this is very much a personal choice.
00:24:575 - Rather rushable stream pattern. Maybe use something like
this instead? Change the jumpstream after it to
this as well, if you're changing the stream.
00:42:747 - The LNs have a layering scheme of either ascending or descending triplets, you should probably follow it for the entire section for consistency. This doesn't apply to this LN section alone. 00:43:432 - , 00:45:490 - , you get the idea.
00:57:490 - 00:58:861 - You could probably follow the same LN scheme as you did from the part before it.
01:07:775 - Same issue as 42.747, since the LN layering scheme is minitrills, you should probably stick with it.
01:42:061 - Pretty spiky compared to the rest of the map, perhaps consider changing it to [134][34][21][34][134]? 01:42:575 - could be [14][23][123].
02:10:175 - Perhaps change this to a [14][23] jumptrill instead, so you can change 02:11:547 - to [43][21] for better transitioning into the stream.
02:12:918 - Insanely insanely rushable pattern, and is potentially harder than ExTra. Remove every 2-note chord from this section and probably make this one long stream. Try to use as easy patterns as possible, something like
this. (up to down) Basically try to avoid as many minitrills and hidden 3 to 4 note 1/4 jacks as possible, while at the same time make sure that the stream changes direction enough for people to not rush.
[ExTra]
I'll beef up the rest of the map if possible.
00:11:890 - Don't have to avoid minijacks here, try something like [123]1[234]4[123] instead.You can do the same for a pretty good portion of the chart.
00:14:632 - ^
00:17:375 - ^
You get the idea. Feel free to use variations like [234]2[134]3, [123]2[134]4 as well to vary it up.
00:36:918 - The chart is extremely convoluted with 3-note chords already, I feel that it'd be fine to differentiate them from cymbal crashes. Perhaps have a minijack to represent cymbal crashes? Your choice.
00:42:747 - Same issue with the SHD, inconsistent LN layering.
01:07:775 - ^
01:26:118 - Can be a 3-note 1/4 jumpjack.
01:28:861 - ^
01:31:604 - ^
01:34:347 - ^
01:37:090 - ^
You get the idea, there are several places where you can do this. Try to avoid jacks where the column of the 3 note jack is the same as the LN right after the jack if the column is outwards (1 or 4). For example, avoid something like [12][12][13]. You CAN add jacks like those if the second chord is the same as the third chord. The main reason for this is that most players would have more issues hitting a jack that changes chords outwards ([13][12]) rather than inwards ([12][13]). The player would probably let go of the 1 for a second and will drop the LN.
02:10:261 - You can change probably change this entire section into a jumpglut section, like
this. You'll notice that in the pic there is a hidden minijack, then no minijack, then a minijack, and repeat. Those are the easiest jumpgluts you can have. Just make sure the last note in this section is a [134].
02:12:918 - You already know what I think of this... I really really don't like this section because of how much it inflates SR. I know you're pretty adamant about changing this section, but if you want to change it - change this to a 1/8 jumpstream with jumps layered to the synth. Patterns don't really matter at this point, just try to avoid 4+ note hidden 1/4 jacks if you do so.
There you go, best of luck.
