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Amamiya Sora - Kanade ~TV size ver.~

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YoshinoSakura
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月29日 at 0:00:59

Artist: Amamiya Sora
Title: Kanade ~TV size ver.~
Source: 一週間フレンズ。
Tags: 615915887 One_Week_Friends kamisamaaa ending
BPM: 75
Filesize: 18582kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.06 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Forever Friend (3.28 stars, 181 notes)
  3. Kami's Normal (1.54 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Amamiya Sora - Kanade ~TV size ver.~
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Thx kshr for his source
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CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
shafa shuo hao de afk ne XD


Easy

觉得你没有认真做这个难度呢= =
01:09:407 这里有2条时间线
00:26:207 (1) - 觉得这里好像不用NC
00:27:807 (2) - 弯滑条 00:29:407 (1) - 直滑条 觉得接下来的 00:31:007 (2) - 弯 00:32:607 (1) - 直 比较整齐
00:38:607 (4) - 觉得放到 x 376 y 256 比较直
00:42:207 (1) - 00:45:407 (1) - 用和00:48:607 (1) - 一样的滑条如何？ 我觉得这样比较整齐
01:03:007 (2,3,1) - 不知道为什么从一开始玩osu就不喜欢这种梗


Normal

觉得AR5好像有点高
00:30:207 (2,3,4) - 这个- - 00:30:207 (2) - ctrl+h 00:31:807 (4) - 用00:30:207 (2)- ctrl+j 分别放在00:31:407 (3) - 两边如何？
00:35:807 (1) - 觉得这个往下移一点更flow
00:44:207 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的排列觉得可以改进
01:17:407 (3,4) - 和 01:24:607 (5,1) - 觉得01:24:607 (5,1) - 更好看点


Forever Friend

01:09:407和easy一样有2条时间线
00:32:607 (1) - 开始的几个note觉得按布局均衡原则应该出现在左上角呢
01:02:607 (4,5) - 用和01:02:007 (2,3) - 一样的形状如何？
01:04:207 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种一长串的毛毛虫不能忍= =
01:07:807 (1) - 的尾巴 01:08:407 (2,3) - 觉得都可以加上clap 01:08:807 (4) - 加个finish
01:28:407 (8) - 觉得好像偏向01:28:607 (1) - 了点

觉得可以适当不用DS 有时DS会抹杀创造力



噢啦GL ~
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa

CET 6 wrote:

shafa shuo hao de afk ne XD

Normal

觉得AR5好像有点高 因为我感觉这歌基本可以当成150BPM 所以就用ar5了
00:30:207 (2,3,4) - 这个- - 00:30:207 (2) - ctrl+h 00:31:807 (4) - 用00:30:207 (2)- ctrl+j 分别放在00:31:407 (3) - 两边如何？
00:35:807 (1) - 觉得这个往下移一点更flow 改了
00:44:207 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的排列觉得可以改进
01:17:407 (3,4) - 和 01:24:607 (5,1) - 觉得01:24:607 (5,1) - 更好看点

剩下那三条 因为我整体改节奏了（为了增加难度额 因为之前本来要NH两个难度rank） 所以这些东西都没了就没改

觉得可以适当不用DS 有时DS会抹杀创造力

噢啦GL ~
这里是代码
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68807
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 25207,42207,55007
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kanade (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:奏 (TV Size)
Artist:Amamiya Sora
ArtistUnicode:雨宮 天
Creator:Yoshino-Sakura
Version:Kami's Normal
Source:一週間フレンズ。
Tags:615915887 One_Week_Friends kamisamaaa
BeatmapID:425054
BeatmapSetID:176339

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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感谢mod了啊 :)
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

CET 6 wrote:

shafa shuo hao de afk ne XD


Easy

觉得你没有认真做这个难度呢= = 这个是临时加的难度啦
01:09:407 这里有2条时间线 一条红线一条绿线是可以的
00:26:207 (1) - 觉得这里好像不用NC 这里是重音
00:27:807 (2) - 弯滑条 00:29:407 (1) - 直滑条 觉得接下来的 00:31:007 (2) - 弯 00:32:607 (1) - 直 比较整齐 其实还好
00:38:607 (4) - 觉得放到 x 376 y 256 比较直 fixed
00:42:207 (1) - 00:45:407 (1) - 用和00:48:607 (1) - 一样的滑条如何？ 我觉得这样比较整齐
01:03:007 (2,3,1) - 不知道为什么从一开始玩osu就不喜欢这种梗 [strike]因为这是偷懒常用梗[/strike]


Forever Friend

01:09:407和easy一样有2条时间线 同上
00:32:607 (1) - 开始的几个note觉得按布局均衡原则应该出现在左上角呢 这样要顺一点啦
01:02:607 (4,5) - 用和01:02:007 (2,3) - 一样的形状如何？柑橘差不多
01:04:207 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种一长串的毛毛虫不能忍= = 改了一下
01:07:807 (1) - 的尾巴 01:08:407 (2,3) - 觉得都可以加上clap 01:08:807 (4) - 加个finish 改成了whistle
01:28:407 (8) - 觉得好像偏向01:28:607 (1) - 了点 那是因为sv改变了，不过还是改了下

觉得可以适当不用DS 有时DS会抹杀创造力



噢啦GL ~
谢mod啦
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Normal]
00:25:207 (1,2) - 有點違和感 試試00:23:007 - 這裡放個spinner, 到00:25:207 - 停, 最後把00:25:207 (1,2) - 刪掉
01:10:207 (2) - 間距?
01:31:807 - finish
01:33:407 (3) - ^

[Insane]
01:41:376 (1) - 在01:41:587 - 開始

沒了
其餘很好
為何這麼善良
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
好
[General]
clap难听
[Easy]
你先开aimod 点上check ds
01:20:207 (2) - 统一一下前后间距 低难度明显的很
00:25:407 (1) - 你这个圈很违和的 跟鼓点又跟不上 建议你把这个删了试试
01:33:407 (1) - 这里的finish感觉有点吵 不合曲 实在要的话音量搞小点
[Normal]
00:30:207 (2,3) - 可以弧度大点blanket一下 要是想统一前后滑条的话把前面那个弧度也弄大一点感觉好些
00:40:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这么一串我不知道怎么说 反正不好 既然你不想空就搞整齐点弄两个折返两次的滑条就可以了这样感觉有点乱
01:20:607 (3,4,5,1) - normal里搞这种遮挡也是几把 反正建议移开后面应该也有其他mod会说
建议和ez一样做到97.7%
[Hard]
00:29:407 (1) - 向左边凸起感觉flow好些 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1630959
01:05:807 (1) - 往右移点和前面弄成正三角形会好看点
01:31:807 (1,2) - 建议去掉1的圈把滑条从长白线开始 因为这里vocal不再鼓点上你2这个滑条没跟上vocal其实 仔细听可以发现滑条比vocal提前 不如去把长白线的鼓点放滑条头上让打击感好一些
01:41:587 - 这里可以加个折返后面接转盘像我那个校园ed一样 反正是最高难度这样感觉好一些
美丽
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:207 (1,2) - 有點違和感 試試00:23:007 - 這裡放個spinner, 到00:25:207 - 停, 最後把00:25:207 (1,2) - 刪掉 这个考虑一下 主要我觉得这几个音比较重不想空
01:10:207 (2) - 間距? 改了 失误额
01:31:807 - finish 加了感觉有点吵
01:33:407 (3) - ^

ZZHBOY wrote:

好
[General]
clap难听 我用的normal-hitnormal听起来如何

[Normal]
00:30:207 (2,3) - 可以弧度大点blanket一下 要是想统一前后滑条的话把前面那个弧度也弄大一点感觉好些 这个感觉无所谓
00:40:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这么一串我不知道怎么说 反正不好 既然你不想空就搞整齐点弄两个折返两次的滑条就可以了这样感觉有点乱 好改了
01:20:607 (3,4,5,1) - normal里搞这种遮挡也是几把 反正建议移开后面应该也有其他mod会说 嗯 你书的对
建议和ez一样做到97.7% 这个感觉没必要 毕竟GD时间是可以不一样的

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F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
来骗kd~
你还没和我MU！sad~

[General]
  1. 在EZ和HD中的文件代码里都有mv的代码，但是其实你把mv删掉了。大概会Unrankable~
  2. 有人会吐槽数字里面的7有点像17吗，反正在这里说了
皮肤里的数字好萌~

[EZ]
EZ专业户23333
  1. 00:55:007 (1) - 这种地方我个人觉得改一下好。。。因为beginner读slider的时候有时候会读反，一种情况就是这种Ctrl+G之后就完全顺flow而且距离更近的情况。
  2. 01:03:007 (2) - ^
  3. 01:15:807 (1) - ^ 其实后面这两种倒还无所谓，毕竟后面有1/2的note，比较难读反
[NM]
  1. 00:29:407 (1) - 去掉尾部whistle，还有就是这么直干哈，blanket
  2. 00:30:207 (2) - blanket（真素一群直男，滑条都那么直。。。）
  3. 01:23:007 (2) - ^
  4. 01:24:607 (5) - ^
  5. 自己看看还有哪些地方的blanket没做好吧，我反正是一遍过的。。。
  6. 01:21:807 (4,5,1) - 读图梗在NM中吧，个人觉得略尴尬，坑新手干啥。
[FF]
  1. 00:27:007 (2) - 我一般用不规则滑条要么是for special sense of music, 要么是for pattern。在这样一个音乐毫无特色的地方用这样一个滑条还没东西与其相呼应，我觉得突兀。（2ha那种map干脆全不规则，也不突兀，你又不是全图不规则滑条）
    建议再做个不规则滑条与其相呼应，不一定要pattern，但是最好放在相同的节奏上，证明你是用心放滑条的。
  2. 00:51:607 (7,1) - 就是这个地方的数字，吓哭。。。
  3. 00:53:407 (3) - 红点后部分弧度大点好看些
  4. 00:58:207 (1) - 噗，为何红点？
  5. 01:08:407 (2,3,4,5,6) - 啥，random jump？在Hard里？为何？（其实完全是ok的，尽管槽点满满）
  6. 01:35:007 (1,2,3,4,5) - 明明是2个正三角，却不把1，5摆在同一个y轴真的好么
  7. 01:15:807 (1) - Head缺了Finish
  8. 01:28:607 (1,2) - 01:15:807 (1) - 01:19:007 (1) - 与01:22:207 (1) - 01:25:407 (1) - ，对比一下，到底哪些跳哪些不跳你应该要有一个定的线，不要为了梗的完整度来选择跳还是不跳。
[At Last]
嘛，慢图的话flow应该都没什么问题，对于Hard的01:05:207 (2,3,4) - 表示保留意见，还有就是有些梗，比如01:17:207 (1,4) - （Hard），导致了Overlap，虽然说不是什么大问题，但是如果是out of your design purpose的话，你可以改一改。
然后就是距离问题了，Consistency是一个很重要的东西，虽然对于音效我持好听就行的意见。。。

加油，Good luck~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

ZZHBOY wrote:

[General]
clap难听 窝觉得挺好
[Easy]
你先开aimod 点上check ds
01:20:207 (2) - 统一一下前后间距 低难度明显的很 fixed
00:25:407 (1) - 你这个圈很违和的 跟鼓点又跟不上 建议你把这个删了试试 前面两个都去掉了
01:33:407 (1) - 这里的finish感觉有点吵 不合曲 实在要的话音量搞小点 我觉得还好啊

[Hard]
00:29:407 (1) - 向左边凸起感觉flow好些 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1630959 改了下
01:05:807 (1) - 往右移点和前面弄成正三角形会好看点 为了统一间距
01:31:807 (1,2) - 建议去掉1的圈把滑条从长白线开始 因为这里vocal不再鼓点上你2这个滑条没跟上vocal其实 仔细听可以发现滑条比vocal提前 不如去把长白线的鼓点放滑条头上让打击感好一些 fixed
01:41:587 - 这里可以加个折返后面接转盘像我那个校园ed一样 反正是最高难度这样感觉好一些 还是看歌吧

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Insane]
01:41:376 (1) - 在01:41:587 - 開始 fixed

F D Flourite wrote:

[General]
在EZ和HD中的文件代码里都有mv的代码，但是其实你把mv删掉了。大概会Unrankable~ 其实是有video的，只是黄瓜的难度没加
有人会吐槽数字里面的7有点像17吗，反正在这里说了 那也差的太远

皮肤里的数字好萌~ >////<

[EZ]
EZ专业户23333
00:55:007 (1) - 这种地方我个人觉得改一下好。。。因为beginner读slider的时候有时候会读反，一种情况就是这种Ctrl+G之后就完全顺flow而且距离更近的情况。但是distance是一样的啊
01:03:007 (2) - ^ 新人也没那么弱吧
01:15:807 (1) - ^ 其实后面这两种倒还无所谓，毕竟后面有1/2的note，比较难读反

[FF]
00:27:007 (2) - 我一般用不规则滑条要么是for special sense of music, 要么是for pattern。在这样一个音乐毫无特色的地方用这样一个滑条还没东西与其相呼应，我觉得突兀。（2ha那种map干脆全不规则，也不突兀，你又不是全图不规则滑条）
建议再做个不规则滑条与其相呼应，不一定要pattern，但是最好放在相同的节奏上，证明你是用心放滑条的。我还真心·没看出什么名堂来
00:51:607 (7,1) - 就是这个地方的数字，吓哭。。。 ...
00:53:407 (3) - 红点后部分弧度大点好看些 改了下
00:58:207 (1) - 噗，为何红点？ fixed
01:08:407 (2,3,4,5,6) - 啥，random jump？在Hard里？为何？（其实完全是ok的，尽管槽点满满）改小了一点
01:35:007 (1,2,3,4,5) - 明明是2个正三角，却不把1，5摆在同一个y轴真的好么 好吧。。失误
01:15:807 (1) - Head缺了Finish 音乐没有，不用加
01:28:607 (1,2) - 01:15:807 (1) - 01:19:007 (1) - 与01:22:207 (1) - 01:25:407 (1) - ，对比一下，到底哪些跳哪些不跳你应该要有一个定的线，不要为了梗的完整度来选择跳还是不跳。 所以这才是随机跳

[At Last]
嘛，慢图的话flow应该都没什么问题，对于Hard的01:05:207 (2,3,4) - 表示保留意见，还有就是有些梗，比如01:17:207 (1,4) - （Hard），导致了Overlap，虽然说不是什么大问题，但是如果是out of your design purpose的话，你可以改一改。
然后就是距离问题了，Consistency是一个很重要的东西，虽然对于音效我持好听就行的意见。。。
谢谢mod
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa

F D Flourite wrote:

来骗kd~
你还没和我MU！sad~

[General]
  1. 在EZ和HD中的文件代码里都有mv的代码，但是其实你把mv删掉了。大概会Unrankable~
[NM]
  1. 00:29:407 (1) - 去掉尾部whistle，还有就是这么直干哈，blanket okay 这个whistle去掉
  2. 00:30:207 (2) - blanket（真素一群直男，滑条都那么直。。。）
  3. 01:23:007 (2) - ^
  4. 01:24:607 (5) - ^
  5. 自己看看还有哪些地方的blanket没做好吧，我反正是一遍过的。。。 本来就不是要做blanket啊 我觉得直一点比较柔和 比较符合曲子 而且这样子挺好看的
  6. 01:21:807 (4,5,1) - 读图梗在NM中吧，个人觉得略尴尬，坑新手干啥。 这个之前已经改掉了 不过615没更新而已
加油，Good luck~

615啊 你帮我吧哪个whistle以去掉就行了 顺便视频你帮我加一下 我下载的no vedio。。
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi.615.來還債了.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. 最後一個widescreen沒勾。
Diff check part : Placement / Rhythm / Hitsound
[Easy]
01:29:807 (2,3,4,5) - 在這難度沒什麼槽點，只是這樣的2連不太喜歡，或許能不stack也可以。
[Kami's Normal]
Placement
  1. 00:28:607 (4,5) - 或許能避免個overlap?
Rhythm
  1. 00:25:207 (1) - 因為是從藍線開始的音，而且1點到2點的有點不太舒服，所以我覺得00:25:207 (1,2) 這兩個節奏可以合在一起，就一次折返到底，這樣也玩得比較順。
  2. 00:41:407 (4) - 開頭沒有音呢，看看能不能試這個節奏，還是玩得容易些吧 :
    SPOILER
  3. 01:35:007 (1) - 確定這轉盤後不放任何節奏嗎 ? 再加一個轉盤也好呢。
Hitsound
  1. 00:48:207 (5) - 藍線加whistle有點吵雜，好像破壞了規律，remove it?
  2. 00:49:207 (2) - ^
  3. 01:02:007 (2) - 這邊也是覺得加藍線whistle不太搭，建議可刪去。
  4. 01:04:207 (6) - ^
[Forever Friend]
Placement
  1. 00:46:607 (1) - 我覺得用ctrl+g比較順一點? 現在用這樣有點扭。
  2. 01:00:607 (2,3,4) - 別stack了，最好能來個變化使符合song?
  3. 01:08:407 (2,3) - 2到3有個大跳，或許你可以再放開些間距符合音樂。
  4. 01:15:007 (5) - 這邊part也可以跳，這個用Ctrl+g跳一些吧。
  5. 01:17:807 (2,3,4) - 聽vocal明顯是可跳大，可是這邊跳好小，不放開一些?
Rhythm
  1. 01:11:807 (3) - 往後移一格，然後01:11:807 (3) 加note，我覺得這樣順著vocal還不錯玩，可試試。
Hitsound
  1. 00:27:807 (1) - 我覺得加藍線whistle有點違和，還是取消吧。
  2. 00:31:007 (3) - ^
[Other]
Good Luck. 眼皮在打架先去睡了。
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

smallboat wrote:

Hi.615.來還債了.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. 最後一個widescreen沒勾。
Diff check part : Placement / Rhythm / Hitsound
[Easy]
01:29:807 (2,3,4,5) - 在這難度沒什麼槽點，只是這樣的2連不太喜歡，或許能不stack也可以。 不放二连就太简单了。。

[Forever Friend]
Placement
  1. 00:46:607 (1) - 我覺得用ctrl+g比較順一點? 現在用這樣有點扭。 怎么柑橘更别扭了
  2. 01:00:607 (2,3,4) - 別stack了，最好能來個變化使符合song? 厚
  3. 01:08:407 (2,3) - 2到3有個大跳，或許你可以再放開些間距符合音樂。怎么没看懂
  4. 01:15:007 (5) - 這邊part也可以跳，這個用Ctrl+g跳一些吧。好
  5. 01:17:807 (2,3,4) - 聽vocal明顯是可跳大，可是這邊跳好小，不放開一些?其实已经够大了
Rhythm
  1. 01:11:807 (3) - 往後移一格，然後01:11:807 (3) 加note，我覺得這樣順著vocal還不錯玩，可試試。好
Hitsound
  1. 00:27:807 (1) - 我覺得加藍線whistle有點違和，還是取消吧。有个音
  2. 00:31:007 (3) - ^ ^
[Other]
Good Luck. 眼皮在打架先去睡了。
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Really nice map, i like it pretty much!
If you don't mind taking some opinions from a novice, i'd like to give some to your map (not in chinese tho, sorry :( ) .

[Easy]
Nothing noteworthy.

[Normal]
It feels a bit 'sleepy' with 1.2x DS, 1.4x DS fits better i think.

[Hard]
You are really generous with the difficulty parameters. I'd go with HP 7, AR 8 and OD 7.
01:36:607 (5) - A slider to the next white tick would fit to the bass note.
01:39:897 (5) - ^, I don't really like the long gap to the spinner.

Good luck with your map! Hope it gets ranked soon. :)
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
看毛 把(TV Size)给我去了先
泡了再来找我吧
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
恩...我来了
提前祝你现充开心

[General]

01:38:207 - 这里offset有点太快了...+20会比较好

[Forever Friend]

00:25:207 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点nazi...建议把排列排好.
00:42:207 - 这里开始的音效好小声...建议加10%
01:07:607 (5) - 这个看起来有点挤, 换成Note?
01:30:207 (5) - 这里头部也加个finish吧?

[Kami's Normal]

00:26:207 (1) - 头部加finish?
00:29:407 (1) - 这个blanket 00:28:807 (5) - 这个, 然后 00:30:207 (2) - 这个blanket 00:31:407 (3) - 这个?
00:48:207 (5,1,2,3,4) - 这里whistle太多了有点乱...建议去掉几个
01:06:207 (4) - 头部加finish?
01:28:607 - 这里开始到 01:34:607 - 去掉一些note吧? (...好产量的感觉)
outro和615不同...
其实有很多blanket nazi, 不过感觉没什么就不提了.

Easy 没什么...
加油!
UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
\o/
Just some suggestions.

[General]
  1. Is pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png used for something new? I don't think I've seen those skin files before and AI-BAT is saying they are unused.
[Forever Friends]
  1. 00:27:807 (1) - Remove NC? Seemed extra to me.
  2. 00:38:807 - Imo a lower volume is better for the spinner like 30% or so. Then again 50% at 00:40:407 if you'd like.
  3. 00:41:807 (7) - How about drum finish instead, sounds nicer imo.
  4. 00:53:407 (3,4) - Try a drum finish on the end of 3 instead of whistle, and drum clap on 4.
  5. 01:05:807 (1) - Seems kind of like you ran out of room here of the right side. Maybe if you can move 01:04:207 (3,4,1) to the left a bit you can make this pattern instead:
    Example
  6. 01:07:407 (4,5) - I thought you could reduce this jump a bit since I felt it's too much of a push. You can arrange 01:06:607 (2,3,4) to cover more spacing, maybe it would play nicer for you:
    Example
  7. 01:12:407 (5,1) - Maybe you can try a jump here with a pattern like this which might feel nicer than your current pattern. See what you think:
    Example
  8. 01:18:207 (3,4,1) - Seems like this could all be spaced out a bit more to make it more like 1.6x spacing like the rest of the section.
  9. 01:19:607 - Add a note? I think it could be nice since I hear a hit in the percussion here and it will make the gap between 01:19:807 (2,3) feel more expressive.
  10. 01:23:407 (4) - Try ctrl+G. I like it to go in the same direction as 01:24:207 (2) and is nicer flow from 01:23:007 (3) with a nice jump onto 1 imo.
  11. 01:26:607 (3,4,5) - Maybe it can flow more smooth into 6 if you change the order of these like this:
    Example
  12. 01:34:607 (5) - I thought it might play more smoothly if you blanket here:
    Example
  13. 01:42:432 - Imo the spinner should start decreasing in volume here. It gets too loud over the first 2 beats.
  14. 01:44:122 - Does spinner get louder here on purpose? I think it should keep getting softer.
[Kami's Normal]

  1. 00:27:807 (3,5) - Space these out a bit more, the notes seem too cluttered here.
  2. 00:37:407 (2) - You can try some drum hitsounds on the repeat and tail if you'd like.
  3. 01:11:807 (4) - Imo it should be curved like the 3 before it and blanket 01:12:607 (1):
    Example
  4. 01:20:607 (3,4,5) - You can try this rhythm instead to make the transition more special:
    Example
  5. 01:29:007 (2) - Since the music gets softer here, I thought you could maybe reflect that by extending this slider to be 1/1. The current rhythm feels too similar to the previous section imo. Like this:
    Example
  6. 01:33:407 (3,4,5) - I feel that this rhythm is difficult to follow because the music is so soft here, mostly just vocals. I recommend you to try using a slider with repeat like this to end the map smoothly:
    Example
  7. 01:35:007 (1) - The end isn't snapped. I think you should end the spinner at 35:007 (1) since it's a downbeat and will feel more natural to end on. Also you should reduce the volume and do a decrescendo like in the other diffs imo since it fits the music nicely.
    You can also consider ending the spinner at 01:37:472 and adding another spinner at 01:38:207. Play around with it. :)
  8. 01:37:407 - Timing section unsnapped.
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:807 (1) - Reduce the volume if you liked the suggestion in Hard.
  2. 00:53:407 (3) - Maybe you'd like a drum finish on the end instead of the whistle.
  3. 01:19:007 (1,2,3) - Since you repeat this rhythm over and over in the kiai, maybe you can try something different to make the transition special. For example, a 1/2 slider at 01:21:407. Something like that to accent a transition can make it really special for the player.
    Example
  4. 01:33:007 - I thought you could try adding a note here since in this 1/2 beat before 01:33:407 the music is very active.
  5. 01:41:587 (1) - Same issues with the spinner volumes as the Hard diff.
Hope it's useful to you.
Cute mapset. Goodluck with ranking it. :)
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
[General]
better to add "." after One_Week_Friends due to the original title has it
consider to change combo color, the current ones are too similar imo
please use "SliderBorder" instead of the current one in .osu files, or the sliderborder doesn't work


[Easy]
01:44:122 - the section should be S:C2 not S:C20 here, right?

[Kami's Normal]
01:37:472 - unsnapped spinner end
00:29:207 - how about ending the slider here? would fit the song better imo
00:39:407 - silence the tick? sounds odd to me..
01:29:407 - use soft hitsond here or turn the volume down a bit? it sounds too loud imo


[Forever Friend]
01:44:122 - same here?

you need to remove TV Size from the current title unless it's the original one
call me back then
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

UnitedWeSin wrote:

\o/
Just some suggestions.

[General]
  1. Is pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png used for something new? I don't think I've seen those skin files before and AI-BAT is saying they are unused.
[Forever Friends]
  1. 00:27:807 (1) - Remove NC? Seemed extra to me. fixed
  2. 00:38:807 - Imo a lower volume is better for the spinner like 30% or so. Then again 50% at 00:40:407 if you'd like.
  3. 00:41:807 (7) - How about drum finish instead, sounds nicer imo. nice idea
  4. 00:53:407 (3,4) - Try a drum finish on the end of 3 instead of whistle, and drum clap on 4. fixed
  5. 01:05:807 (1) - Seems kind of like you ran out of room here of the right side. Maybe if you can move 01:04:207 (3,4,1) to the left a bit you can make this pattern instead:
    Example
  6. 01:07:407 (4,5) - I thought you could reduce this jump a bit since I felt it's too much of a push. You can arrange 01:06:607 (2,3,4) to cover more spacing, maybe it would play nicer for you:
    Example
  7. 01:12:407 (5,1) - Maybe you can try a jump here with a pattern like this which might feel nicer than your current pattern. See what you think:
    Example
  8. 01:18:207 (3,4,1) - Seems like this could all be spaced out a bit more to make it more like 1.6x spacing like the rest of the section.fixed
  9. 01:19:607 - Add a note? I think it could be nice since I hear a hit in the percussion here and it will make the gap between 01:19:807 (2,3) feel more expressive. yeah,but add slight difficulty to DT
  10. 01:23:407 (4) - Try ctrl+G. I like it to go in the same direction as 01:24:207 (2) and is nicer flow from 01:23:007 (3) with a nice jump onto 1 imo.ok then
  11. 01:26:607 (3,4,5) - Maybe it can flow more smooth into 6 if you change the order of these like this:
    Example
  12. 01:34:607 (5) - I thought it might play more smoothly if you blanket here:
    Example
  13. 01:42:432 - Imo the spinner should start decreasing in volume here. It gets too loud over the first 2 beats.
  14. 01:44:122 - Does spinner get louder here on purpose? I think it should keep getting softer. just a mistake
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:807 (1) - Reduce the volume if you liked the suggestion in Hard.
  2. 00:53:407 (3) - Maybe you'd like a drum finish on the end instead of the whistle.
  3. 01:19:007 (1,2,3) - Since you repeat this rhythm over and over in the kiai, maybe you can try something different to make the transition special. For example, a 1/2 slider at 01:21:407. Something like that to accent a transition can make it really special for the player.
    Example
  4. 01:33:007 - I thought you could try adding a note here since in this 1/2 beat before 01:33:407 the music is very active.
  5. 01:41:587 (1) - Same issues with the spinner volumes as the Hard diff. fixed
Hope it's useful to you.
Cute mapset. Goodluck with ranking it. :)
Unfortunately I can't reach puush D: ,I may fix things when pictures works right.

mintong89 wrote:

恩...我来了
提前祝你现充开心

[General]

01:38:207 - 这里offset有点太快了...+20会比较好

[Forever Friend]

00:25:207 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个有点nazi...建议把排列排好. hao
00:42:207 - 这里开始的音效好小声...建议加10% 柑橘还可以
01:07:607 (5) - 这个看起来有点挤, 换成Note? 好
01:30:207 (5) - 这里头部也加个finish吧? 好

Easy 没什么...
加油!

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
better to add "." after One_Week_Friends due to the original title has it i copied it from my ranked op though
consider to change combo color, the current ones are too similar imo same as above,imo
please use "SliderBorder" instead of the current one in .osu files, or the sliderborder doesn't work fixed


[Easy]
01:44:122 - the section should be S:C2 not S:C20 here, right? fixed

[Forever Friend]
01:44:122 - same here? fixed

you need to remove TV Size from the current title unless it's the original one i'm finding the source
call me back then
鞋鞋mod
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa

mintong89 wrote:

恩...我来了
提前祝你现充开心

[General]

01:38:207 - 这里offset有点太快了...+20会比较好

[Kami's Normal]

00:26:207 (1) - 头部加finish? 加了
00:29:407 (1) - 这个blanket 00:28:807 (5) - 这个, 然后 00:30:207 (2) - 这个blanket 00:31:407 (3) - 这个? 这个不改了 我比较喜欢这样子 不是完全包的那样 而是滑条有点直额
00:48:207 (5,1,2,3,4) - 这里whistle太多了有点乱...建议去掉几个 好 去掉了一个
01:06:207 (4) - 头部加finish? 嗯 加了并且后面那个滑条也加了
01:28:607 - 这里开始到 01:34:607 - 去掉一些note吧? (...好产量的感觉) 啊？感觉不需要去掉note啊。
outro和615不同...
其实有很多blanket nazi, 不过感觉没什么就不提了. 这些都跟上面那个一样 故意做成这样的额

Easy 没什么...
加油!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

\o/
Just some suggestions.

[General]
  1. Is pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png used for something new? I don't think I've seen those skin files before and AI-BAT is saying they are unused.
[Kami's Normal]

  1. 00:27:807 (3,5) - Space these out a bit more, the notes seem too cluttered here. okay fix
  2. 00:37:407 (2) - You can try some drum hitsounds on the repeat and tail if you'd like. good idea~
  3. 01:11:807 (4) - Imo it should be curved like the 3 before it and blanket 01:12:607 (1): okay~look better now
    Example
  4. 01:20:607 (3,4,5) - You can try this rhythm instead to make the transition more special: actually I dont want to make transition special. because its a normal diff I want to make them at the same rhythm and easy to play >.<
    Example
  5. 01:29:007 (2) - Since the music gets softer here, I thought you could maybe reflect that by extending this slider to be 1/1. The current rhythm feels too similar to the previous section imo. Like this: you are right but if i use this rhythm I will miss a hitsound 01:29:407 here.
    Example
  6. 01:33:407 (3,4,5) - I feel that this rhythm is difficult to follow because the music is so soft here, mostly just vocals. I recommend you to try using a slider with repeat like this to end the map smoothly: okay~change as your suggestion
    Example
  7. 01:35:007 (1) - The end isn't snapped. I think you should end the spinner at 35:007 (1) since it's a downbeat and will feel more natural to end on. Also you should reduce the volume and do a decrescendo like in the other diffs imo since it fits the music nicely.
    You can also consider ending the spinner at 01:37:472 and adding another spinner at 01:38:207. Play around with it. :) okay~end spinner at 01:37:472
  8. 01:37:407 - Timing section unsnapped. fix

Hope it's useful to you.
Cute mapset. Goodluck with ranking it. :)

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
better to add "." after One_Week_Friends due to the original title has it
consider to change combo color, the current ones are too similar imo
please use "SliderBorder" instead of the current one in .osu files, or the sliderborder doesn't work

[Kami's Normal]
01:37:472 - unsnapped spinner end fix
00:29:207 - how about ending the slider here? would fit the song better imo I want to keep this. because I dont want to use so many 1/4 in normal diff
00:39:407 - silence the tick? sounds odd to me.. fix
01:29:407 - use soft hitsond here or turn the volume down a bit? it sounds too loud imo change to soft here


you need to remove TV Size from the current title unless it's the original one
call me back then
一拳打死615
osu file format v13

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429,300,88607,5,10,0:1:0:0:
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256,192,95212,12,0,97472,0:0:0:0:

thanks all you guys for mod >.<
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hi. Found some things while glancing this map haha!

[Normal]
01:35:007 (1) - Try ending the spinner at 01:37:472. Also the green timing section at 01:37:407 is unsnapped! :P

Also do you really need these files? pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png
They don't seem to be used in the mapset itself.
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