Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
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1. 01:13:597 (3) - change to d nope it's different from 01:10:930 -

• [m1ng's Inner Oni]
  
  Although there is no actual purpose, you may increase the circle size to 4 so that the whole set has the same CS, thereby making the set more consistent. still keep mine here (well yah a different CS doesn't matter for taikos) and CS 3 is mys style too same like on this map. mine is using 3 and the owner's of the beatmap is using 5

1. 00:12:264 (1,1) - swap these notes to d k ? The music pitch at 00:12:430 (1) - is much higher than that at 00:12:264 (1) - 00:12:430 - should be a don because of the first beat (you can see from the metronome). it will be a perfect timing to emphasize it with a don. same reason like on 00:07:097 - which i used don on
2. 00:12:930 (2,3,1,2,3) - ddkkd seems to follow the music in a better way, as a relatively high-pitched electronic sound occurs at 00:13:097 - keep mine here since ooo on 00:12:930 (2,3,1) - is match with the instrument sounds
3. 00:28:597 (2) - consider removing the finish here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
4. 00:31:264 (2) - same as ^ it's not overmapped btw. keep mine here
5. 00:49:097 (2,3) - consider deleting these notes ? I think a short break works better here as the vocal pauses. nope for the inner one and those notes which make a stream follow the instrument sounds well too so i keep mine here
   
   Good work michael~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi Akemi and michael, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:21:764 (34) - consider adding finish here ? As the sound is stressed, it needs more emphasis imo.
2. 00:36:430 (59) - same as ^
3. 00:57:430 (28,29) - swap these notes to k d ? This could follow the vocal pitch better.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:21:764 (56) - same as Kantan
2. 00:27:597 (71) - k could follow the vocal pitch in a way better.
3. 00:30:264 (77) - same as ^
4. 00:40:430 (104) - consider adding finish here ? It needs to be emphasized as well.
5. 00:41:597 (108) - k ? It has the same vocal pitch as the previous 00:41:264 (107) -
6. 00:47:430 (14,15) - swap these notes to k d so that both the music pitch and the snare could be followed ?
7. 00:58:097 (47,48) - same as ^
8. 01:02:264 (61) - k ? It has the same vocal pitch as 01:02:097 (60) -

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:597 (29) - move to 00:07:264 - and change to k, then change 00:07:430 (28) - to d ? This could follow the pitch of the electronic sounds more imo.
2. 00:12:430 (53,54,55,56) - same as ^
3. 00:22:264 (95,96,97) - k d k so that both the vocal and the drum beat could be followed in a better way.
4. 00:27:930 (122,123) - adding finish could emphasize the vocal nicely.
5. 00:30:264 (131,132,133) - same as ^
6. 00:36:430 (157) - same as Kantan
7. 00:52:430 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - either k k d d k k d or k d k d k k d could fit the vocal pitch well imo.
8. 00:54:097 (49,50,51,52) - d kkk sounds much better to me, as it could fit the high-pitched vocal.
9. 00:57:597 (67,68,69) - k d k ? Similar to 00:22:264 (95,96,97) -
10. 00:59:264 (74,75,76,77,78) - d k ddd could fit the drum beat well. Consider changing this if you change 00:54:097 (49,50,51,52) -
11. 01:00:430 (81) - d would be better as the vocal pitch drops.
12. 01:02:430 (89) - move to 01:02:597 - ? 1/2 kd dk looks nice to me.

• [Oni]

1. 00:19:680 - add k here ? I feel like something is missing.
2. 00:22:597 (126,127) - swapping these notes to d k seems to fit the instrument better.
3. 00:28:597 (162,163) - swap to d k ? This could follow both the vocal pitch and the drum beat.
4. 00:35:097 (194) - It seems that d could fit the drop in vocal pitch more.
5. 00:46:597 (19,21) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:46:930 (21) - is higher than that at 00:46:597 (19) -
6. 00:50:264 (42) - adding finish here would be great.
7. 00:51:597 (50) - same as ^
8. 00:54:847 (69) - consider changing it to k for more consistent pattern as 00:44:180 (6) - ?
9. 00:57:264 (82,84) - same as 00:46:597 (19,21) -
10. 00:58:097 (86) - change to k if you change ^
11. 01:02:430 (108) - same as Muzukashii
12. 01:04:430 (117) - k here could fit the vocal pitch well.
13. 01:05:180 (121,122) - kd would fit the music better imo.
14. 01:06:597 (128,129) - d k if you want to follow the vocal.
15. 01:08:264 (141) - d would be better as the vocal pitch drops.

That's all and good luck~

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:

General:

Nothing, good now

Oni

00:21:430: change to d drum sound here. '-'
00:30:514: Remove this I think It's changed~
00:49:597(37, 38): change to k fixed.
00:59:430: Remove this, I don't hear any structure that's vocal's echo

Stefan wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:08:097 (1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like these notes should be connected to 00:08:430 (1,1,1,1,1) - . the kdkdk fits well but feels weird to play with the connected kkdd pattern. 00:08:347 (2) - or 00:08:180 (2) - could be removed, ideally both can be removed but I'd tend to say you rather want to go with k ddkdkdk. fixed.
00:09:597 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - wouldn't you do d kkddk? d for consistency with 00:08:930 (1) - and kkddk for the holding sound in the background which is deeper at 00:09:930 - and higher at 00:10:097 - . This is also because 00:11:097 - 00:16:264 - are flipped in the follow so it'd make sense this way. fixed.
00:24:430 (1) - dkddd sounds weird to me.. that's more my view than something objective but I have the idea to change the pattern to dkkdd. It sounds imo by far more intuitive and enjoyable to play. fixed.
00:48:430 (1,2,1,2,1) - With 00:48:264 (1) - as Finisher I find you could remove 00:48:430 (1,2) - and 00:48:680 (2) - and change to 00:48:764 (1) - as Finisher note. this emphasize the song and the usage and connection to 00:48:264 (1) - much better. fixed.
01:15:930 (1,1,1,1,1) - dkdkd isn't really good at this point, at least I don't see why you would use it here. Try dkkkd (preferably) or dkkdd here. fixed.

[Oni]
00:30:264 (170,171,172) - Sounds more like kdd to follow vocals and background music properly. fixed.

[Muzukashii]
Generally, this difficulty doesn't provided many rest times which will be exhausting for players to keep track while playing. Oni uses dozen of 1/2 breaks and isn't too continously mapped - good thing for the Muzukashii so it can use 1/1 breaks.

suggesting removals for following parts:
00:08:097 (31) -
00:13:430 (57) -
00:21:264 (91,92) -
00:29:430 (128) -
00:37:264 (161,162,163,164) -
00:49:264 (27,28) -
00:59:680 (75,76,77) -
01:07:764 (111,112,113) -

These are raw examples, you can make your own and adjust the difficulty so you have breaks but still keeping the flow. your example is best point for break. I agree with your sample. so changed them all.

[Futsuu]
Although the BPM is on 180, I don't find we need to use 1.20x. Just stick with 1.40x (same for Kantan). okay.

00:26:097 (62) - What about a longer break here? After you've adjusted Muzukashii to have more and longer break times you should provide some even longer for Futsuu then. fixed.
00:31:264 (76) - I'd like to see this part as kk, 00:30:264 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - would work as a nice counterpart to 00:27:597 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - . fixed.
00:32:097 (79) - Would remove to shortend the combo lenght to be consistent with the counterpart 00:27:597 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - . fixed.
00:37:764 - 00:41:597 - We should have something easier here since it is a big difficulty spike, my idea was to do this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Nv9H1sbL.png Although it boosts the SR a bit, you should ignore that since SR is pretty garbage and not a good indicator for this case. fixed.
00:49:430 (19) - similar to 00:26:097 (62) - I'd remove this so to have a longer break, do the same for 00:50:764 (23) - and 00:52:097 (27) - too. fixed.
00:59:930 (54) - although the break wouldn't bre really longer I'd say to remove this note as well. fixed.
01:06:097 (74,76,77) - To make this part slightly easier I'd focus on the bgm only and remove 01:06:097 (74) - and 01:06:597 (76,77) - . fixed.

[Kantan]
nearly 3AM.. but whatever, the difficulty itself looks good. I may look closer to it next time. Thank you for your kindness~ :3

Conclusion: Mapset itself is good, I actually like it. However, I wouldn't consider the map to be ready since Inner Oni has some structure problems, and Muzukashii/Futsuu should have some more checks after adding more rest/break times. I am not sure if you're willed to get more mods since this is the first mod after two months. I can get more mod for better quality of this map. and ming is afk for now. idk when he come back. so maybe I can adjust his diff.I don't want to ruin ming's style, but I agree your modding in his diff, so changed them.

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! Mod requested from my queue t/579972/. I hope this can help you ^^

Nice song <3

[General]

• 
  nice job at the spread

1. Add to tags: cute jpop christmas carol xmas (stolen from Volta's mapset lol) Thank you~ add them. lol
2. 00:16:430 - What about adding a 70% volume here? Then 80% in 00:27:097 - 70% 00:32:430 - and 80% back :3 okay.
   Nothing more to point out

[Kantan]

1. 00:03:097 (4) - what about making this K cause pitch is higher than the first one?
2. 00:04:096 (5) - hmm this depends on you but K could work too I think consecutive K is strange, and I want to express little pitch change in this part.
3. 00:34:430 (50) - you could delete this to make a break on this section cause it's kind of slow and I think there are a lot of circles in a row
4. 00:48:097 (7) - what about moving to 00:48:264 (7) - ? I think the current one doesn't fit at all :c
5. 00:58:764 (24) - ^
6. 01:13:764 (47) - 01:16:430 (50) - you could make them K to don't make this so repetitive (and to mark the different pitches through the section change)

[Futsuu]

1. 00:03:097 (4) - same comment as kantan :p
2. 00:10:097 (20,21,22) - you could make this kdk or kkk (fills better imo) change to kdk~
3. 00:22:097 (53) - This one could be don since you're already using d k k on 00:23:097 (55,56,57) - and pitches are not the same (also to give some dinamicity)
4. 00:29:764 (69) - hmm K to set the difference with last D?
5. 00:55:097 - from here you could let some 2/1 break. I think it's kind of too dense (not bad mapped but dense for futsuu players) add some break. :3
6. 01:00:764 (53,61) - these notes are so high for that place (maybe removing or changing to don could help, try it ^^) remove them. :3
7. 01:13:764 (7) - same comment as kantan lol

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:097 (10,11,12,13) - probably make these kat (sorry for being repetitive through the diffs but I think it could be nice). Also I think you could net here cause they're not neccesary to be exactly the same on every diffs I want to make a same this part in muzu & Oni. so no change here~ owo
2. 00:29:764 (124) - K probb?
3. 00:37:097 (155) - unnecesary note imo
4. 00:44:430 - on kiai you could include some triples. I think it's a little strange to use triples out of kiai and only 2 on this :3 add some triplet in kiai. :3
5. 01:13:764 - similar comment (?) same reply. :3 no change for same pattern with Oni diff.

I want to point you're using many quintuples on Oni and just some little triples on Muzu D:

[Oni]
I'm not touching this diff cause objects: 420 blaze it
jk, it's fine

1. 00:19:097 (104) - you could make this don to emphatise next kats
2. 00:21:514 (121) - maybe removing this note?
3. 01:07:597 (135,136,137,138,139) - this pattern is a little strange, I think even kdkkd fills better

[m1ng's Inner Oni]

1. 00:10:264 (1,1,1) - try using d k D instead, fills better imo
2. 00:45:930 (3) - try changing to kat. I think kat fills better and makes something different than 00:56:597 (3) - (they doesn't have the same pitch I think)

Nothing more to point. I think mapset is really good (considering the spread and stuff). I'm sure this will be qualified soon. Best of luck homura!

• 
  
  00:33:097 - Change this note to d --> have same emphasis than previous note.
  
  00:47:097 - missing note? (possible d)
  00:57:764 - other missing note? (possible k)

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  HP=7
  
  00:38:930 - Missing note ... (k)
  
  00:43:264 (1,1) - Delete --> is better a break here to emphatize the kiai time in next point.

• 
  HP/OD = 5
  
  00:25:930 - -->

• 
  00:08:430 - this part seems better as ... ddddk k ddddk k k k d k k k (?)
  00:13:764 - Same here but last note is d
  
  00:26:514 - other k note here ...
  
  00:43:597 - change this section for d k d k k D, deleting 00:44:180-

• 
  
  00:13:764 - repeat kdkdk d kdkdk d --> have same tone.
  
  00:16:264 - Delete this note --> to emphatize the next note (sequence change).
  
  00:29:264 - is better add other note in 00:26:680- and change for kdkdkkkD (?)
  
  00:32:264 - Change this note to k --> same reason above.
  
  00:35:764 - change for kdkkDD D (?)
  
  01:10:764 (1,2,1) - ctrl+g --> have bass sound but in this part seems good follow with blue notes.
  01:15:930 (1,1,1,1,1) - ddkdk --> Same situation ^

Kith190 wrote:

Hi M4M ;D

Kantan

00:03:097 - K to D 00:03:097 is strong sound than 1st D. so no change this :3
00:09:097 - d to k I hope this easy d d kkk pattern for beginners.
00:15:764 - k to d ^

Futsuu

00:03:097 - K to D as in kantan no change like Kantan.
00:38:264 (92,93,94,95,96) - i think it might seem better from kk k kk to kd kd kd (92, 93) accompaniment is same pitch. so maintain for now.
00:50:097 - k to d (?) fixed.
00:51:430 - same thing fixed.
01:02:264 - k to d fixed.

Muzukashii

pretty nice like this ;D

Oni

00:06:430 - d to k (?) I think this consecutive k is unnatural. and (24) pitch is lower than (22, 23). so no change this~
00:10:097 - and 00:10:264 - k to d I feel awkward use d in this point. because music pitch is too high.
00:17:097 - ddk to kkd would be a lot nicer to play ( I'm not talking about the sound but touch feeling) Thank you~ fixed.
00:21:097 - d to k fixed. and other diffs too.

m1ng's oni

m1ng is untouchable <3

there weren't any mistakes, I just suggested things that according to me might sound better, btw gg for the mapset, really nice.
Good luck for ranking ;D

Melanie wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Futsuu]
00:37:764 (91) - add finish, there is a cymbal sound I hope this small note for better flow to play, maybe this sudden finisher hard for newbie.
00:40:430 (99) - ^ same reason.
00:46:764 (10,11,12) - kdk, I think it suits better okay. fixed. and 00:57:430 - changed to kdk for consistency.
[Muzukashii]
00:46:764 (10,11,12) - k change to dkkdk
01:01:097 (82,83,84) - kkd, same as futsuu this triplet focus on accompaniment. (82), (84) has same strong sound. so I hope maintain this for kdk.
01:00:430 (80) - K vocal is downward this point. so I think d is more fit. and K is too consecutive If I change this. :3

hope this serves ;;