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Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)

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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Blaze it and praise it

Insane:
00:01:206 (2) - Add whistle on end of slider?
00:07:296 (10) - aaaa this is almost a star but its not pls make it a star ;3;
00:17:672 (5,6,7) - Move this a LOT northwest so it's parallel to (4) and makes a nice arc pattern.
00:19:251 (3) - any way to avoid this overlap?
00:22:635 (3) - This is weird because most other patterns like this aren't spaced out ;w;. Consistency is fun~. Make this note for all other patterns like this
00:28:048 (3) - ^
00:40:905 (5) - This placement is weird and a little bit cramped.
00:46:883 (4) - This in particular is weird, since it's not really even flowing with the previous slider. I'm sort of picking up on the stylistic choice, but i read it best when it flows right into it, while I read this as being later
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Add hitsounds to make this have more of a point.
00:50:605 (6,7) - Use soft hitsounds so this isn't so heavy?
00:52:635 (1) - spacing consistency! This is a pretty odd jump to read
01:07:748 (2) - Even out the spacing, since this is within the combo?

Hard:
00:08:199 (2) - Add whistle
01:20:154 (1) - This jump is a bit weird since there's no real big imapct, and it isn't a very jumpy map

Pretty cool stuff yay

Sordy:
00:08:875 (3) - This is weird because you have jumps, so I'm expecting (3) to follow suit, but I just get an awkward blank space before hitting (3)
00:16:319 (4) - This slider will look nicer if it's a copy-paste of (2)
00:17:898 (7) - Have this start below (6) for flow
00:16:996 (5) - spacing inconsistencyo h no
00:33:687 (3) - This curve is really lopsided and it's not kawaii ;3;
00:51:958 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
00:53:537 (6) - Curve is lopsided~
01:24:214 (1) - This jump is a bit unexpected since my arm doesn't naturally flow towards there

Normal:
00:23:086 (2) - Move this down to create an arc shape
01:27:146 (1,2,3,4) - This seems super cramped compared to the rest of the map

Easy:
mlg
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
Hi, From my queue~

☆ Easy

  1. 00:54:214 (5) - Clap
  2. 01:10:905 (1) - Clap on the tail?
  3. 01:27:146 (1) - I consider to use SC2 whistle here on the head

    Nice~

☆ alacat's Normal

  1. 00:43:612 (7) - add a note here
  2. 01:04:815 (3) - ^ I think two 1/2 sliders are more suitable for the music here
  3. 01:25:342 (1) - Im confusing about this repeat slider. How about change a 1/1 slider?

☆ S o r d a's Hard

  1. 00:06:845 (7) - Clap
  2. 00:08:199 (2) - Consider to reduce the spacing. There is no need to do a jump here. Moreover, 00:08:875 (3) - a normal space here will misdirect players.
  3. 00:09:101 (4,5,6,7) - The rhythm sounds bad, and it covers the drum sound here 00:10:003 -
  4. 00:10:905 (1,2,3) - I can't feel any proper with this triplet. Please remove 00:11:018 (2) -
  5. 00:14:063 (4,5,6) - ^ remove 00:14:176 (5) - please
  6. 00:15:417 (2) - Clap on the tail
  7. 00:16:319 (4) - ^
  8. 00:17:221 (6) - Clap both the head and the tail
    Lack of many Clap sound on the following notes.
  9. 00:26:920 (2,3,4,5) - Well I can't feel any association with the music here
  10. 00:30:981 (5,6) - Reduce some 1/2 sliders beginning at the red line please... it plays a bad feeling (1/1 slider is ok)
  11. 00:40:229 (1) - You should add a drum hit here like other diffs
  12. 00:55:342 (2) - Uh, a not proper jump

    Umm... There are many Messy and unreasonable hitsounds, triplets and jumps in this diff.
    I don't like that a bit.

☆ Hard

  1. 00:19:477 (3) - a nazi issue, move to 360,136, but I still feel a bit awkward with the flow
  2. 00:36:620 (1) - I think move a bit over will be better
  3. 00:40:680 (2) - Ctrl +G, since you make a jump here 00:42:033 (1,2) -
  4. 00:49:702 (2) - this slider is not fit. Clap should be 00:49:928 - here and you covered it. Consider to change another rhythm
  5. 01:01:432 (4) - Make a blanket?
  6. 01:10:905 (1) - 352,200 is better for the flow
  7. 01:15:417 (4) - change another trend
    SPOILER

☆ Captin's Insane

  1. Conflicting Title
    [Metadata]
    TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
  2. 00:13:387 (1,2,3) - space is a little large here
  3. 00:43:838 (1) - Oh... why use a Normal sampleset here! so Noisy lol
  4. 01:10:229 (8,9) - 2.47 is too much, consider about 2.10

    Funny diff, but I think too much jumps for this lively song.

That's all.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
fixed everything on your mods owo/

Thanks for modding ww
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
thank you
http://puu.sh/8SmGs.osu
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated! o3o/
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1

CDFA wrote:

Blaze it and praise it

Insane:
00:01:206 (2) - Add whistle on end of slider? added a couple others instead
00:07:296 (10) - aaaa this is almost a star but its not pls make it a star ;3; it's not supposed to be a star
00:17:672 (5,6,7) - Move this a LOT northwest so it's parallel to (4) and makes a nice arc pattern.
00:19:251 (3) - any way to avoid this overlap?
00:22:635 (3) - This is weird because most other patterns like this aren't spaced out ;w;. Consistency is fun~. Make this note for all other patterns like this
00:28:048 (3) - ^ they're spaced out because they're 1/4 sliders, but i moved them a bit closer
00:40:905 (5) - This placement is weird and a little bit cramped. I really like the pattern here
00:46:883 (4) - This in particular is weird, since it's not really even flowing with the previous slider. I'm sort of picking up on the stylistic choice, but i read it best when it flows right into it, while I read this as being later hm moved in a bit
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Add hitsounds to make this have more of a point.
00:50:605 (6,7) - Use soft hitsounds so this isn't so heavy? lowered volume
00:52:635 (1) - spacing consistency! This is a pretty odd jump to read I think it reads fine
01:07:748 (2) - Even out the spacing, since this is within the combo? didn't do exactly even but it's a bit closer

Sharlo wrote:

Hi, From my queue~

☆ Captin's Insane

  1. Conflicting Title
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    TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
  2. 00:13:387 (1,2,3) - space is a little large here I think it's fine
  3. 00:43:838 (1) - Oh... why use a Normal sampleset here! so Noisy lol I like the heavier sounds
  4. 01:10:229 (8,9) - 2.47 is too much, consider about 2.10

    Funny diff, but I think too much jumps for this lively song. well as you just said, it's a lively song, so using more open spacing seems fine to me

That's all.
thanks!
SPOILER
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Version:captin's Insane
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256,316,42146,2,0,L|172:332,1,47.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,368,42484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,42710,2,0,P|80:144|56:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,304,43161,2,0,L|100:284,1,47.5
172,336,43387,2,0,L|244:356,1,47.5
280,264,43612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,43838,5,12,0:2:0:0:
228,148,44063,2,0,L|160:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,148,44514,2,0,P|288:116|412:144,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,312,45191,2,0,P|352:280|328:240,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,45642,6,0,L|156:188,2,47.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,46093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,200,46319,2,0,B|264:240|264:240|336:276|396:212,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,46883,2,0,L|432:276,1,47.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,47221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,47447,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,212,47672,2,0,L|72:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,48123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,304,48349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,296,48462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,48575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,144,48800,2,0,P|328:92|328:48,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,49139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,20,49251,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,49477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,56,49702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,172,49928,2,0,P|152:236|192:312,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,50379,2,0,L|316:352,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,364,50605,2,0,L|436:344,3,23.75,10|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,300,50830,2,0,L|422:273,3,23.75,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,236,51056,6,0,P|372:196|380:144,1,95,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,51507,2,0,P|268:88|264:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,236,51958,2,0,L|164:284,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,52184,2,0,L|58:239,1,47.5
96,176,52409,2,0,L|149:172,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,52635,6,0,P|300:288|364:268,1,95,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,124,53086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,53311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,200,53537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,53763,2,0,L|232:72,1,95,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,54214,2,0,L|228:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,54665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,296,54890,2,0,L|260:348,2,47.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,55342,2,0,L|100:337,2,47.5
56,184,55793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,55905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,56018,2,0,L|60:68,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,56244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,96,56357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,56469,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,256,56695,2,0,L|156:300,2,47.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,57146,2,0,P|428:208|500:212,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,57597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,160,57823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,260,58048,1,10,0:2:0:0:
400,268,58161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,58499,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,252,58725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,104,58951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,59176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,128,59627,6,0,L|440:108,11,15.8333333333333
452,160,60078,6,0,P|452:220|432:264,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,60529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,332,60755,2,0,P|124:320|164:284,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,152,61206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,336,61432,2,0,P|312:282|312:212,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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156,232,62334,2,0,P|142:187|112:152,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,63011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,200,63462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,63687,6,0,P|360:80|388:40,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,64139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,72,64364,2,0,P|176:88|136:140,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,328,64815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,65041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,65266,6,0,P|71:330|117:335,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,65717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,65943,2,0,L|496:376,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,66394,2,0,L|368:168,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,66845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,88,67071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,67296,6,0,P|408:200|396:256,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,67748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,150,67973,2,0,P|167:111|208:88,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,239,68424,2,0,P|250:259|204:256,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,68875,2,0,P|384:100|404:76,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,69552,2,0,P|170:253|155:297,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,356,70003,2,0,L|328:340,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,248,70229,2,0,L|392:200,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,188,70454,2,0,P|488:132|472:96,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,70905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,248,71131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,192,71357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,112,71582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,80,71695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,40,71808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,72033,2,0,L|192:260,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,72259,2,0,L|316:328,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,284,72484,2,0,P|428:216|464:184,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,72936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,80,73161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,192,73387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,73612,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,88,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,352,74289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,100,74514,6,0,P|34:46|60:9,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,74966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,298,75191,2,0,P|163:226|185:174,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,75642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,75868,2,0,P|120:96|112:24,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,40,76319,6,0,L|48:144,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,76770,1,10,0:0:0:0:
132,232,76996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,328,77221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,320,77334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,77447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,276,77560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,244,77672,2,0,P|384:196|364:156,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,78123,6,0,P|136:120|96:112,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,78462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,78575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,196,78800,2,0,P|228:240|236:292,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,356,79251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,184,79477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,332,79702,6,0,P|376:344|396:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,80154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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208,132,81733,5,6,0:0:0:0:
416,112,81958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,82184,2,0,P|200:232|160:216,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,82522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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36,216,82860,2,0,L|45:262,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,240,83537,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,83763,2,0,L|260:84,2,47.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,296,84214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,144,84439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,84665,2,0,P|168:232|116:216,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,64,85116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,148,85342,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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412,248,86018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,86244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,44,86920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Suimya
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Suimya
updated o3o/
alacat
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alacat

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
00:23:086 (2) - Move this down to create an arc shape okey
01:27:146 (1,2,3,4) - This seems super cramped compared to the rest of the map yes ... fixed it.

Sharlo wrote:

☆ alacat's Normal

  1. 00:43:612 (7) - add a note here It's better to use 1/1 rhythm for beginners here
  2. 01:04:815 (3) - ^ I think two 1/2 sliders are more suitable for the music here Same.
  3. 01:25:342 (1) - Im confusing about this repeat slider. How about change a 1/1 slider? prefer to use 1/2 slider to follow this sound 01:25:567 - well, I don't think the players are confusing here.
Thanks ~

http://puu.sh/8TFXH.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
updated alacat's diff :3
Rare
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Rare
from my modding queue

[Setup]
i think that it is awkward for the player that there are too many similar colors.

[Easy]
00:07:296 (4) - pref clap. drum's whistle is not fit to music.
00:10:905 (3) - not hit to music too. pref use sampleset-soft.
00:11:357 (4) - NC
00:12:710 (5,6) - try this pattern. http://puu.sh/8TUw3.jpg
01:28:499 (2) - remove whistle to head.

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。

[Sorda's Hard]
00:06:169 - 00:06:845 (7) - whistleはつけないんですか？
00:08:650 - note欲しいです
00:13:612 (2,5) - finish?
00:14:853 - ノート追加して連打の音拾いたいです
00:28:499 (1,2,3) - ここに連打じゃなくて00:28:387 - ここに連打いれたほうが音に合うと思います。
00:36:169 (2) - なぜ始点にwhistleを入れたんでしょう？ここでパターンから外れると違和感があるのでclapがいいと思います。
00:40:905 (3) - 1/2のほうがあってると思います。
00:41:808 (6) - と00:42:484 (2) - の終点にwhistleが欲しいです。
00:43:387 (4,1) - この音取りのほうがマッチしてません？ http://puu.sh/8TWWI.jpg
00:43:838 (1,2) - 00:45:642 (1,2) - ここの2か所finishで繋げてるので00:47:447 (1,2) -00:49:251 (4,6) - この2つもどっちもfinishにしてみてはどうでしょうか。

[Hard]
00:16:770 (1,2) - pref increase spacing a bit.
00:20:379 (1) - i want whistle.
00:49:702 (2,3) - switch to clap.
01:04:139 (2,3) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:13:612 (4) - want whistle!!
01:15:868 (5,1) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:23:988 (2,3) - same as above
01:28:499 (4) - pref switch to whistle head and end.

[Insane]
i don't like very much your diff. Because there is too much overmap, i point out only the pattern that i can't permit.
00:15:304 (2) - pref remove
00:43:161 (5,6,7,8,1) - try this http://puu.sh/8TXU6.jpg
00:51:958 (3,4,5) - use 1/2 pattern.
00:55:793 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZlF.jpg
01:12:033 (7,8,9) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:17:221 (4,5,6,7,8) - remove (7)
01:21:281 (5,6,1) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:22:184 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above.
01:25:567 (2,3,4) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZuJ.jpg

Sinch's Testplay
[alacat’s Normal] 00:25:342 (6) - 場所に違和感ある。

looks good.
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks for modding Rare :3

Fixed everything on my Easy and Hard diff owo
S o r d a
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S o r d a
fixed everything
http://puu.sh/8UFSE.osu thanks!
alacat
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alacat

Rare wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。ok!
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。 (5) clapに変えて、(6)はちょっと違う音あるからwhistleにした！
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg ここね～いろんな音合って悩みどころ。。。他の人の意見も聞いてみたいからこのままで。
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。つけすぎた ;o; removed
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。 連続してるところ消した！
ありがとう！ 8-)

http://puu.sh/8V0qm.osu
Suimya
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updated both diffs owo/
Trust
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Trust
manaka best girl ~☆

gogo
Suimya
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Thanks for your star Trust >w</
RandF
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RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. combocolors are too similar to distingish them. (especially, combocolor 1, 2, 3)
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:905 (3) - x:364 y:84 for good flow
  2. 00:18:575 (1) - blanket correctly
  3. 00:51:056 (1,2) - you can make better flow. how about moving 00:51:507 (2) - to x:180 y:31 ?
[Hard]
  1. how about this rhythm?
  2. 00:18:349 (4,2) - stack?
  3. 00:44:627 (3) - I prefer to delete
  4. 01:19:702 (7,1) - DS 1.0x is better, imo
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:41:357 (3) - 1/2rhythmのつながるところで少し慌ててしまうので、このsliderは右に傾けてflowを良くした方が良いかもしれません
    SPOILER
[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:16:319 (4) - 長いsliderが多すぎる気もするので、このような音とりはどうでしょう？
  2. 00:28:951 (5,1) - 微妙に角度がついているように見えるのですが、一直線上に配置した方がきれいだと思います
  3. 00:49:251 (4,5) - ここも一直線にした方がgood flowになって良いかもです
    SPOILER
  4. 01:10:229 (5,6,7) - ５が01:09:101 (3) - とstackされてないのであまりきれいな配置に見えませんでした。いっそ01:09:101 (3) - とのoverlapを避けた方が良いかもしれません
  5. 01:26:244 (6,7) - きちんとblanket
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:43:612 (7,8,1) - I prefer curved pattern
    SPOILER
  2. 01:19:702 (1) - upward slider is better, imo
nice flower skin!!! kawaii~ :)
suit to this song~☆
~Good Luck~
captin1
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captin1

Rare wrote:

from my modding queue

[Insane]
01:17:221 (4,5,6,7,8) - remove (7) removing 5 is much better to play
the rest kept as is

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:43:612 (7,8,1) - I prefer curved pattern nice!
    SPOILER
  2. 01:19:702 (1) - upward slider is better, imo i agree
nice flower skin!!! kawaii~ :)
suit to this song~☆
~Good Luck~
thanks!

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Suimya
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Suimya
Fixed everything on your mod Random owo

Thanks for modding and updated captin's diff!
S o r d a
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S o r d a
http://puu.sh/8Y3VM.osu
some fixed ~ ty!
Suimya
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Suimya
updated!
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis

Trust wrote:

manaka best girl ~☆

gogo
yeah
kaname best chara though
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks Delis for your star www
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

  • General

    Try to change Combo colour 4. It seems to be similar to the color of the background.


    • Easy

      00:07:296 (4,1) - blanket?
      00:12:710 (2,3) - I think this rhythm is hard for beginners.
      00:33:011 (1,3) - blanket better
      00:58:274 (4,1) - ^
      01:25:342 (1,1) - ^
      01:16:770 (3,1) - try blanket
      01:28:499 (2) - move to (248,212)
      ┖ move the square on the tail to (288,260)


      • alacat's Normal

        00:13:838 (5,6) - ctrl + G. maybe this rhythm is easy for beginners.
        00:42:710 (5,6) - ^
        00:48:575 (2) - end on 00:49:026 -


        • S o r d a's Hard

          00:05:717 (4) - reduce slightly that it bent.
          00:16:319 (4,5) - try blanket
          00:28:951 (5,1) - avoid overlap
          ┖ same as 00:50:605 (7,1)
          00:52:635 (4,6) - make to same shape

          • Hard

            00:00:530 (1,2,3) - blanket better
            00:20:830 (4,5,6) - place in the same distance.
            00:28:951 (6) - move the square on the tail to (440,172)
            00:44:627 (3,4) - not good flow. move to (148,56)
            01:04:590 (3,4) - blanket better

            Sorry, I suck at modding on Insane ;w;
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thanks mod!
http://puu.sh/93Gne.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks for modding [ Raphael ] fixed everything and updated Sorda's diff =w=b
Shurelia
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Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!
すごくいいの歌！
from my queue (Sorry, for the lateness i was sick a few days ago~)
[General]
If this song comes from an anime add "Anime" to the tag then~
[Easy]
  1. 01:05:943 (3) - Move this to x:156 ,y:124, and adjust 01:04:590 (2) - a little to make a perfect blanke but not make the distance broken
  2. 01:14:966 (1) - ^^^ to x:164 , y:100 ~
  3. 01:28:499 (2) - How about to use 10% sound at this timing point? Sounds better in my opinion

[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:46:319 (3) - Shorten this slider so it'll be a 1/3 and a circle at 00:46:996 (4) - it fit the song better~ , should be looks like this :
  2. 00:56:018 (3) - Make this a repeat slider , and move it back at the timeline a bit, should be looks like this

[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:45:191 (3) - How about to move this to x:236 , y:220 for making a good blanket? w
  2. 00:50:605 (7) - Anti Jump ? , how about move this to x:424 , y:284, to fix the distance (and to looks prettier w)

[Hard]
  1. Already good!

[captin's Insane]
  1. 01:28:499 (4,5) - Stack this?


This mapset is really good! I hope this will got ranked soon :3

Huup! *Throw Star*
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks Shurelia for your mod and star :3

fixed almost everything in it owo/
Arlecchino
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Arlecchino
Hi!
From my Queue

[General]
add "risou maeda" , "anko chatou" , "mari okada" , "and a lull in the sea" to tag coloum.. :3


[captin's Insane]
00:19:928 (5,6) - wanna some cookie..??
Cookie for You.. :3
00:23:086 (4,5,6) - follow the flow.. to get more cookie.. :3 and make them keep 1.0x ds
flow
00:26:244 (3,4) - more cookie for you..
second cookie
00:47:672 (2) - ctrl + g ?
01:04:139 (2,3) - i dunno if it's better blanket or not.. but how about this..,also you can make them more blanket..
:3
01:27:372 (2,3) - for hold the sound in 01:27:597 - i likes.. circle>slider>circle :3
last cookie

[Hard]
00:01:883 (3,4) - sekai.. want cookie too ?
Gives
00:31:432 (1) - blanket ?
00:31:657 (2,3,4) - follow the flow and i'll give more cookie
:3
01:26:920 (4) - change to 1/2 slider... and remove the circle.. at 01:27:146

[Sorda's hard]
like i say in my Queue.. i just mod one diff.. if you have two diff with same difficulty..
and i choose hard by owner.. :3 sorda you can sleep now.. :3

[Normal]
looks already good.. :3
just suggest for normal : slider tick rate 2 ?

[Easy]
Lazy to mod easy :3
01:19:928 (2) - move it 2 grid to down.. for keep the ds :3

soko made de..
de wa arigatou gozaimasu..
hope this.. helped.. sry if my mod not helped
and please write.. Fix,change.or add
so i can more learning about modding from that.. :D

Good luck with.. your Raaayyy.... Map..
and -_-)9 take my star...

EDIT : Noticed the Mod..
Suimya
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Suimya

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi!
From my Queue

[Hard]
00:01:883 (3,4) - sekai.. want cookie too ? I don't think i will change this, since i followed the melody here so i think 1/1 slider fits here so much o.o
Gives
00:31:432 (1) - blanket ? I think it's fine, i didn't plan to make a blanket here =3=
00:31:657 (2,3,4) - follow the flow and i'll give more cookie well it looks great but i wanted to make some symmetric rhythm here, so no i'll keep this as it is for now o3o
:3
01:26:920 (4) - change to 1/2 slider... and remove the circle.. at 01:27:146 I think the 2 notes fits much better here then 1/2 slider imo, and they follow the music here. And i don't feel like adding 1/2 slider here, so yeah no changes orz


[Easy]
Lazy to mod easy :3 lol
01:19:928 (2) - move it 2 grid to down.. for keep the ds :3 ok
Thanks for mod and star Asuna :3
S o r d a
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S o r d a
all fixed for Shurelia's mod thanks!
http://puu.sh/95SNf/4054987610.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
updated :3
captin1
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captin1

Shurelia wrote:

[captin's Insane]
  1. 01:28:499 (4,5) - Stack this? I think it's fine

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

[captin's Insane]
00:19:928 (5,6) - wanna some cookie..?? I prefer mine, since I follow the vocal echo with the long slider
Cookie for You.. :3
00:23:086 (4,5,6) - follow the flow.. to get more cookie.. :3 and make them keep 1.0x ds that has 4 too close
flow
00:26:244 (3,4) - more cookie for you.. same as before
second cookie
00:47:672 (2) - ctrl + g ? this feels better as is
01:04:139 (2,3) - i dunno if it's better blanket or not.. but how about this..,also you can make them more blanket.. that would make a bad motion to 4, so no thanks
:3
01:27:372 (2,3) - for hold the sound in 01:27:597 - i likes.. circle>slider>circle :3 I prefer my rhythm
last cookie
no changes from mods but fixed a few things on my own

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59402
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:captin's Insane
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no Asukara opening Sekai captin1 alacat Sorda S_o_r_d_a
BeatmapID:424450
BeatmapSetID:176187

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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256,232,87146,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,140,88048,2,0,L|240:96,1,71.2500027179719,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,88499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
109,197,88725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Thanks modding ~ fixed whistle patterns :3

http://puu.sh/9a4rN/3125e4b121.osu
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Hi.
Sorry for late mod, I had final exams.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

alacat's Normal
00:37:071 (2,4) - This is for Normal player confusing.
01:28:951 - Add short slider here.

S o r d a's Hard
00:54:665 (1,2) - This is big jump even for Hard diff. Put them little bit closer to each other.

Everything else seems fine to me.
Jest to dobry mapset. Wiele szczęścia. :D
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for checking Pjecoo :3

and updated alacat's and captin's diffs o3o/
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Minao
Congrats! You won my Lottery mod from modding queue! :) Here is your ticket.

[General]
My ears and my eyes are sooo thankful for this peaceful moment I had playing this map :)
It's very well mapped. I have to use my "nazi-curve mode on" to say something.
/!\ About the skin: In Alacat's Normal at 00:56:469 (1) there is a spinner, but with the recent Peppy's changes with skins, the spinner background doesn't appear well in my computer: http://puu.sh/9oJqO/577e8c942e.jpg (I have a 1920*1080 resolution)

[Easy]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:14:740 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oId0/0034297f04.jpg and the head can fit better with (4): http://puu.sh/9oIgY/c98aba63f1.jpg
00:17:898 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIoC/f666bbdde3.jpg
00:24:552 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIsH/6f90fb109c.jpg
00:43:612 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIvY/f345eec5cf.jpg
00:47:898 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oIyu/88208405e7.jpg
00:53:311 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIAl/fa717dea50.jpg
00:54:665 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIB1/51a51c2053.jpg
01:02:785 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIDb/df5a5aa5f0.jpg
01:13:161 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oIFV/843fc85281.jpg
01:15:417 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oIH1/12f3167d24.jpg
01:15:868 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oIIX/96f6af58fc.jpg
01:21:733 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIKH/469e97c8a5.jpg
01:27:146 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIMW/319684ff93.jpg
... Yup I'm very boring :3

01:28:499 (2) - I would put this at x: 240 | y: 220 and place the end point at x :296 | y: 244. It's only a personnal preference.

[Alacat's Normal]
00:40:905 (2) - Maybe put this at x: 404 | y: 140 so it seems to be better aligned with (1) end.
:cry: I have nothing else to say because there is no imbricated objects in curves :cry: I feel a little useless ~ :?

[Hard]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:01:883 (3) - For this one I'm sure you can improve the curve to fit better with (2)'s curve by removing Grid snap a rework it a little. I made this: http://puu.sh/9oJKD/03656dfc48.jpg for exemple.
00:08:199 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oJRb/f9d70d6bc4.jpg
00:09:101 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJSD/3e820538d3.jpg
00:12:936 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJUw/617523bbae.jpg
00:17:221 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oJVo/0b9cedb7ad.jpg
00:23:537 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJWT/8bc7a7430f.jpg
00:24:890 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJYl/0790c38f97.jpg
00:33:687 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oK0U/9e05db5170.jpg ( a little )
00:38:875 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oK44/e9e8ea2da7.jpg
00:54:665 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oK7x/e8906553fb.jpg
00:57:372 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oK98/4ddbdeca9f.jpg
01:05:041 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oKb1/4d2329e298.jpg
01:20:830 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oKe8/14a78eb1f4.jpg
01:25:567 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oKf5/cadbea5c6c.jpg

01:28:048 (3) - Personnal preference but I would do this: Timeline | http://puu.sh/9oKA9/806a79cfb5.jpg . I place (4) to make a triangle.

[S o r d a's Hard]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:14:966 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oKSf/1ae49e6f02.jpg
00:16:319 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oKTm/b87931c9e0.jpg
00:30:078 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oKZ0/11bd076792.jpg
00:44:514 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oL12/e8f782ca5d.jpg
00:55:003 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oL4b/adb10d0beb.jpg
01:09:552 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oL70/dfcfc1890b.jpg
01:26:244 (6) - http://puu.sh/9oL9a/01060d1fb5.jpg

00:13:838 (3) - I would not put this circle too close to (1) end. A good way to avoid this is to make triangles between objects at least with (2), (3), and (4). It makes something like this: http://puu.sh/9oKP8/0d6429cd28.jpg
00:26:920 (2) - Maybe put this to x: 243 | y: 90 so it makes like a line with (1) end.

[captin's Insane]
00:05:717 (4) - Maybe make it fit with (3) like this? (5 is 3) http://puu.sh/9oLgH/964321114b.jpg
I'm not going to suggest other "make it fit" things because I feel it's not a part of your modding style. And because I'm particulary bad at modding insanes.

That's all! A mod mostly about details and curves but I hope it was a little helpful. Then take my star!
Good luck for ranking (but it shouldn't be that difficult :D )
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Minao for your mod and star :3

fixed everything in easy but nothing on hard since it's all nazi xD

and i think it's fine as it :3
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Modding this map soon.
PS: On Easy, you have inconsistent spacing at 01:02:334 (3) *runs*
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya

BeatofIke wrote:

Modding this map soon.
PS: On Easy, you have inconsistent spacing at 01:02:334 (3) *runs*
lol i didn't notice it, oh well fixed it now =w=/
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