1. Easy (1.56 stars, 89 notes)
2. Hard (3.02 stars, 209 notes)
3. Insane (3.37 stars, 225 notes)
4. Normal (1.91 stars, 142 notes)

Samah wrote:

Righto.
So you fixed the offset/bpm, but the notes didn't snap to the right positions. I've taken a guess as to the positions you wanted them.
For now I'll just give some very generic pointers. That weird Aimod didn't tell me the notes didn't snap
Also, don't kudosu this post. Modders are only supposed to receive kudosu once per map, and you've already given me some.

[General]
You need to go through all your difficulties and add some interesting hitsounds!
Try to keep the rhythm and new combos falling exactly on the start of every other bar. For a song like this you probably need to aim for 2 bars (8 beats) per combo. OK
You might want to change the combo colours too. To me, using the default ones tends to leave a map feeling... unfinished.I added two more colour.Is it OK now?
If you're going to put "arpeggio of blue steel" in the tags, change the source to be the Japanese title.Changed it
Aim for perfect distance snap everywhere unless you want to accentuate the eccentric flow of a certain part of the song.I will
If an average player can play your map and full combo it first shot, you know you have your spacing right.OK

[Easy]
00:19:351 (1) - 00:19:573 to 00:21:351.Done
00:22:017 (1) - Move to 00:22:240.Done
00:23:795 (2,3) - Move to 00:23:573 and 00:24:017.Done
00:49:795 - Add a note here.Done
01:02:684 (1) - Extend this to 01:03:573.Done
01:08:462 (1) - Shrink this to 01:09:351.Done
01:10:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bring these all back one beat to start on 01:10:240.Done
01:18:906 (1) - Change this to be 01:19:1278 to 01:20:906.Done
01:21:128 (2) - Move to 01:21:351.Done
01:22:017 (3) - Move to 01:21:795.Done
01:22:462 - Add a note here.Done
01:23:351 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240. Keep the final spinner the same on all difficulties.OK

[Normal]
00:19:461 (1) - 00:19:573 to 00:20:906.Done
00:23:573 (5,1) - Try to avoid small slider overlaps like this unless it's intentional and makes the map more fun.I put too much emphasis on spacing too much so I forget about overlap thing
00:24:906 (1,2) - This is bad for a Normal difficulty.Changed (2) to slider
00:27:129 (5,6) - Also bad for Normal. You could do it for a harder difficulty, but you would need to make sure the (6) is perfectly stacked on the end of the slider. At the moment it's slightly below it.Moved (6) away from end of slider
00:31:129 (5,1) - Bad overlap for Normal.Moved it
00:32:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - This half beat offset doesn't fit the rhythm of the song. Bring them all back half a beat to start at 00:32:017.Done
00:34:683 (5) - After moving it, shrink this to be one beat (end on 00:35:128).Done
00:35:573 - Add a note here.Done
00:56:906 (2,3) - Bad overlap for Normal.Moved it
01:07:129 (7,1) - ^Moved it
01:12:906 (3,5) - ^Moved it
01:20:906 (4,5,6) - Bad overlap for any difficulty. Also try to keep the rhythm of this section consistent.Moved it
01:23:573 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

[Hard]
00:13:351 (6,1) - This doesn't play well.(6) should end here 00:13:573 - my bad
00:19:351 (6,1) - Too many repeats, and the overlap with (1) is bad.Fixed it
00:27:795 (9) - Starting a bar on the end of a slider doesn't always work, especially if it's a repeat slider. It fits some songs and styles, but not this one, I think.I shortened this slider 00:27:573 (9) - and added a note here 00:28:240 -
00:34:795 (1) - Starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad (and probably unrankable). Bring it back 1/4 of a beat to 00:34:684.I didn't know that anyway moved it
00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is ok, but you need to make sure the slider notes are perfectly stacked or it looks messy.Fixed it.Now it look perfectly stacked now , I think
00:38:684 (5,6) - Slider is too close to (5). Bend it out a bit more.Done
00:46:017 (1) - Move this to 00:46:240 and make it shorter so it doesn't bounce off the blue tick, then add a note here at 00:46:017.Done
00:49:795 (1) - This combo is way too long!Oh my bad
00:52:240 (9) - New combo here.Done
00:52:240 (9,10) - Bad overlap.I put too much emphasis on spacing
00:57:795 (1,3) - Move (1) down a bit and (3) up a bit.Done
01:02:684 (4,5) - Don't overlap these.Fixed it
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^Fixed it
01:10:906 (4) - Too many repeats.I shortened it by two notes and add a note here 01:11:573 -
01:16:017 (3) - Get rid of one of the control points on this slider to make it a nicer curve.Done
01:22:906 (10) - Change from a slider to a note.OK
01:23:462 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

[Insane]
00:13:351 (5,1) - Don't overlap these.Changed this slider 00:13:351 (5) - position
00:19:573 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - New combo, and make this a nicer curve.Done I think it look nice now
00:24:017 (9) - Delete this.OK
00:24:128 (10) - Don't start a slider on a blue tick. Change it to be 00:24:017 to 00:24:462.I guess blue tick is a bad tick for mapping XD anyway done
00:27:128 (5,6) - Too close together.Moved it
00:30:462 (4,5) - Don't overlap.Moved this slider 00:30:462 (4) - away
00:32:240 (1) - This looks bad. Just make it a nice 3-point arc instead.Fixed it
00:34:795 (1) - Change to 00:34:684 to 00:35:573.Done
00:36:906 (5,6,7,8) - See my comments in [Hard] about stacking sliders like this.Made it look perfectly now,I think
00:49:573 (1) - Delete this note, and move the next one down and away from the previous slider 00:48:462 (8).OK
00:51:573 (1) - New combo.Done
00:58:240 (8,9,10,11) - The notes are too close together for this pattern.Moved them a little.I scared that it may be too hard
01:02:684 (11) - New combo.Done. So I need to make a new combo when I start a stream
01:03:684 (20,22) - Delete these and move (21) and (23) somewhere else.OK
01:04:462 (2,3,4,5) - Again, these need to be stacked perfectly, and shouldn't overlap with 01:04:240 (1).Moved (1) .I think the stacks look perfect now
01:12:684 (5) - Move this so it's not in the middle of that square (1-4).Moved it
01:18:240 (7,8) - ^Moved them
01:21:795 (6,7,8,9,1) - Try to keep the rhythm of this the same in all difficulties.OK
01:22:684 (9) - Remove the repeats so this ends at 01:22:906.Done
01:23:684 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

がんばって！

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
すごくいいの歌だ！
from my modding queue
[General]

Add "Anime" to the Tag~

Added
[Easy]

1. 00:12:462 (4) - Move this to x :276 , y : 104 Moved
2. 00:16:906 (3) - This slider is too far away from the previous object. I suggest to make it like this : http://puu.sh/8WQU9.PNG OK
3. 00:22:240 (1,2,3) - The spacing is really messy at here. I really suggest you to remapping this part.Accepted
4. 00:24:906 (1,2,3,4) - Same like the above~Accepted
5. 00:30:240 (2,3,4) - Use 1.0x Distance Snap~ . Recommended Pattern : http://puu.sh/8WQX6.PNGFixed
6. 00:42:684 (3) - Move this to x:292 , y:244 , following the next slider 00:44:462 (1) - to x:268 , y:116Moved
7. 00:48:462 (1) - Changing SV Speed (Using SV's Multiplier) is really not recommended for easy. OK changed back to x1.00 SV
8. 00:48:462 (1,2,3,4) - The Spacing is really messy here too. (Remapping this with 1.0x Distance snap would be better)Fixed
9. 01:00:462 (3,1,2,3) - Same like above~Fixed
10. 01:10:240 (2) - Move this too x:348 , y:212Moved
11. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, The spacing really messy (Remapping with 1.0x distance snap)Fixed
12. Did you put "finish" on all objects? It's not good in my opinion~I will try to not overuse it
    
    Use distance snap for mapping an "Easy" diff. (Recommended is 1.0x for me)

[Normal]

1. 00:21:795 (2) - Move this to x:268, y:196, and rearrange the slider position, so it would be looks like this : http://puu.sh/8WSFI.PNG Fixed
2. 00:23:128 (4) - Object is too far away from the previous one~Fixed
3. 00:25:795 (2) - Move this too x:152 , y:60.Moved
4. 00:27:129 (4) - ^^^ x:104 , y :276Moved
5. 00:49:795 (1) - ^^^ x:412 , y:92Moved
6. 00:58:240 (3,4,5) - Fix the spacing here~Fixed
7. 01:03:129 (2,1) - ^^^Fixed
8. 01:07:129 (5) - ^^^, move this to x:316 , y:272Moved
9. 01:20:017 (2) - ^^^, to x:96 , y:176Moved
10. 01:22:240 (5) - This object is too far away from the previous one~Moved
11. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" one, don't overuse hit sounding please~

[Hard]

1. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Overuse of "Clap" I will try to fix that
2. 00:08:906 (1,2,3,4) - Overuse of "Finish" I will try to fix that
3. 00:13:795 (1) - to x:204 , y:156 for better spacing.Moved
4. 00:14:684 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/8WSIS.PNG , for make this better.OK
5. 00:19:129 (6) - This one should be changed. Using a repeat slider like that is just....It look weird now for me XD OK fixed
6. 00:34:351 (1) - Spinner should start from here.Changed to 00:34:462 - to 00:35:573 -
7. 00:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - Consider remapping this part. looks bad in my opinion.Hmm..OK removed (4) slider
8. 00:42:017 (5) - This long slider didn't fit the song~OK Changed
9. 00:53:573 (4) - http://puu.sh/8WSKU.PNG , looks betterFixed
10. 00:59:351 (6) - This repeat should be changed~Fixed
11. 01:03:351 (5) - Didn't fit with the song.Fixed
12. 01:05:128 (3) - Ctrl + G OK
13. 01:05:795 (4) - ^^^ OK
14. 01:16:017 (3) - Didn't fit with the song in my opinion.My bad I forgot to follow the vocal
15. 01:18:017 (3) - This repeat slider should be changed too~Fixed
16. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" and "Normal" diff. Don't overuse it~

[Insane]

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Didn't fit with the song I follow the vocal but fixed a little
2. 00:36:906 (5) - New ComboOK
3. 00:42:240 (8) - Didn't fit with the songFixed
4. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" , "Normal" and "Hard" diff. I suggest to remap this.

Just wanted to remind you, player may won't able to listen to the song because you covered the entire map with Hitsound. You shouldn't use too many hitsound.
Consider to remapping all diff so it will more enjoyable to play.
Hope this help and good luck!

1. in whole, straight sliders are too many. it's better to use curved sliders more
2. mp3 volume sounds small, doesn't it?
3. I suggest to end kiai-time at 01:16:017-

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing). I recommend to set DistanceSnap consistently
2. 00:32:017 (1) - the whistle at the middle of slider is not good
3. 00:38:240 (2,1) - for easy-diff, the stack like this should be avoided
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - swap NC
5. 01:00:462 (3,1) - this overlap is not good. rotate more~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:02:684 (1,2) - swap NC
7. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for beginner. just a suggetion
   
8. 01:23:351 (1) - soft-hitsound is better (applied to all-diff)

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible. for example, 00:10:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - is hard to find rhythm
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - in this case, symmetric position is better (Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:906 (2) - for normal, you sould not change SV(Slider Velocity)
4. 00:58:684 (4,1) - in this case, stack is better for good looking
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:462 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this
6. 01:05:795 (2,5) - ^
7. 01:20:906 (4,5,6,7,1) - rhythm suggetion~
   

1. decrease SV less than insane-diff
2. 00:08:017 (3) - it is better not to use reverse more than twice like this as far as possible. that's confusing to play
3. 00:13:795 (1,2) - in this case, it is better to blanket each other (Ctrl+< or > x2)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:018 (1) - awkward shape...
5. 01:18:017 (3) - I prefer to delete

1. 00:14:017- add a note
2. 00:14:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in this case, "create poligon circles" is useful (Ctrl+Shift+D). for example, how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   211,170,14240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   301,170,14462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,255,14684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   255,309,14906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15128,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15240,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15351,1,10,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:23:573 (5,6,7,8) - stream is not suitable. 1/2 rhythm is better, imo

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]

1. in whole, straight sliders are too many. it's better to use curved sliders moreI will try to make more
2. mp3 volume sounds small, doesn't it?I will consider it
3. I suggest to end kiai-time at 01:16:017-

I will go retiming to make my map more enjoyable
[Easy]

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing). I recommend to set DistanceSnap consistently OK used x1.00 DS on all notes in easy
2. 00:32:017 (1) - the whistle at the middle of slider is not good Removed
3. 00:38:240 (2,1) - for easy-diff, the stack like this should be avoided Moved (1)
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - swap NC Swaped
5. 01:00:462 (3,1) - this overlap is not good. rotate more~
   
   SPOILER

   
   Okay
6. 01:02:684 (1,2) - swap NC Swap
7. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for beginner. just a suggetionFixed
   
8. 01:23:351 (1) - soft-hitsound is better (applied to all-diff)

I will retiming
[Normal]

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible. for example, 00:10:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - is hard to find rhythm Fixed(4)
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - in this case, symmetric position is better (Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G) Considered it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:906 (2) - for normal, you sould not change SV(Slider Velocity)I will retiming
4. 00:58:684 (4,1) - in this case, stack is better for good looking (1) stacked with (4)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:462 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this Fixed
6. 01:05:795 (2,5) - ^ (5) stacked with (2)
7. 01:20:906 (4,5,6,7,1) - rhythm suggetion~Fixed the slider
   

[Hard]

1. decrease SV less than insane-diffI will retiming
2. 00:08:017 (3) - it is better not to use reverse more than twice like this as far as possible. that's confusing to playFixed
3. 00:13:795 (1,2) - in this case, it is better to blanket each other (Ctrl+< or > x2)Considered it
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:018 (1) - awkward shape...Fixed
5. 01:18:017 (3) - I prefer to delete

Considered it
[Insane]

1. 00:14:017- add a noteAdded
2. 00:14:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in this case, "create poligon circles" is useful (Ctrl+Shift+D). for example, how about regular pentagon?Thanks but I remapped this part awhile ago
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   211,170,14240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   301,170,14462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,255,14684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   255,309,14906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15128,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15240,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15351,1,10,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:23:573 (5,6,7,8) - stream is not suitable. 1/2 rhythm is better, imo

Deleted (6) and(7)

you can make hitsound more organized. let's try!Thank you I'm gonna do it
~Good Luck~

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there! From modding queue! Please keep in mind that these are just suggestions, and that you don't need to follow them!

Anyways, let's get started.

[Easy]
01:20:017 (1) - Move this repeater to avoid the stack from 1~2 No I try to keep spacing

[Normal]
00:36:462 (2) - Consider moving this note to X=160 Y=232 for consistent spacing. Example: http://gyazo.com/a268bb0e3cdb5daa44a42686c406864b
No I want to keep the spacing so it not too hard for beginner
00:39:573 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern here. Example: http://gyazo.com/baf22012eca8e2aa6d0838cea079f774 It's already triangle but smaller
01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - Make a rhombus shape here. Exmaple: http://gyazo.com/52fa6445b92d2a227297b0ece541940a Nice suggestion accetped

[Hard]
Seems ok.

[Insane]
00:32:240 (8) - New combo I Forgot to new combo there XD thanks
00:32:906 (9,10,11,12) - Make it look like this: http://gyazo.com/aee224aca6565ac9e67e43a34a77df75 It's a triangle shape of (9) (10) (11) then jump to (12) so no

That's it from me. Good luck!

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
2. Recommend this Image for Background image. http://www.zerochan.net/1650014 Or http://www.anime-desu.com/wp-content/up ... 0x1920.jpg
3. Remove Checking on Count-Down, Widescreen support(You don't used SB), Letterbox during breaks(You don't have break time).
4. you used Normal, soft, drum hitsound. it's not have consistency. Please use one hitsound. At least, Using drum hitsound is not feat!
5. Recommend this KiAi formation First KiAi 00:49:795 ~ 01:02:240 Second KiAi01:04:017 ~ 01:16:240

1. 00:18:684 (4) - Finish sound is not good. remove it.
2. 00:35:573 (1) - finish on head of slider
3. 00:41:795 (2,3) - blanket and add NC (3)
4. 00:44:462 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:23:351 (1) - decrease volume on end.

1. 00:33:794 (3,1) - stack perfectly
2. 00:35:573 (6) - finish than clap
3. 00:46:240 (5) - NC
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - remove finish. it just loud.
5. 00:49:795 (1) - finish.
6. 01:00:462 (1) - this too. remove finish
7. 01:23:573 (1) - same to Easy mod

1. 00:09:128 (2) - make one repeat. and add note on 00:09:795
2. 00:11:573 (2) - ^
3. 00:50:684 (3,4) - placing on arrow slider may make hard.
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC

TaMul wrote:

hi~ From My M4M Queue!

[General]

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
2. Recommend this Image for Background image. http://www.zerochan.net/1650014 Or http://www.anime-desu.com/wp-content/up ... 0x1920.jpgI will take the first one thanks
3. Remove Checking on Count-Down, Widescreen support(You don't used SB), Letterbox during breaks(You don't have break time).Removed
4. you used Normal, soft, drum hitsound. it's not have consistency. Please use one hitsound. At least, Using drum hitsound is not feat!OK I will reconsider it
5. Recommend this KiAi formation First KiAi 00:49:795 ~ 01:02:240 Second KiAi01:04:017 ~ 01:16:240

Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:18:684 (4) - Finish sound is not good. remove it.Removed
2. 00:35:573 (1) - finish on head of slider OK
3. 00:41:795 (2,3) - blanket and add NC (3) NC(3) but no blanket
4. 00:44:462 (1) - remove NC Accepted
5. 01:23:351 (1) - decrease volume on end.

Accepted

[Normal]

1. 00:33:794 (3,1) - stack perfectlyOK
2. 00:35:573 (6) - finish than clap Accepted
3. 00:46:240 (5) - NC Accepted
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - remove finish. it just loud.Removed
5. 00:49:795 (1) - finish. Accepted
6. 01:00:462 (1) - this too. remove finish Removed
7. 01:23:573 (1) - same to Easy mod

OK

[Hard]
You almost used white, red line. it's so boring. try to make more blue line Blue line will make some notes look awkward so I try to avoid blue line as much as possible

1. 00:09:128 (2) - make one repeat. and add note on 00:09:795 Accepted
2. 00:11:573 (2) - ^ Accepted
3. 00:50:684 (3,4) - placing on arrow slider may make hard.OK moved
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC

Accepted

You really need lots of mod! Good Luck!

1. hitsounds isnt good i think,this song not suit for that hitsound,maybe you'd better find another hitsounds.wav(search your beatmaps,there is so many)
2. there is two .osb files in you map,you may changed your map's artist or something makes that happen,one of them may useless,delete it
3. the rhythm is too simple,too few rhythm changes

1. 00:07:128 (1) - if there just is a slider,this is ok,but if seeing with followings,its bad look 00:07:128 (1,2) - this is better looking
   
2. 00:16:906 (3) - too casual，makes it look like this
   
3. 00:26:684 (2,3,4) - dont useing this 3circles too many with this rhythm,you can change some of it with this
4. 00:32:017 (1,2) - not good looking,blanket like this
   
5. 00:35:573 (1) - stack00:33:795 (2) - perfect
6. 00:41:795 (2,1) - blanket like this
   
7. 00:47:128 (2) - too ugly
   
8. 00:58:684 (2) - ^

1. 00:08:906 (4) -
   here is yours,if the angle of 00:08:906 (4) - more small，like this,the flow and looking will be better
2. 00:10:684 (1) - try to make it flw more suit with 00:10:239 (6) - and 00:11:572 (2) -
3. 00:41:351 (4) - try stack 00:39:573 (1) - ,and make 00:41:795 (5) - Symmetric with 00:40:462 (3) -
4. 00:23:128 (4,5) - what about this rhythm
5. 00:26:684 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:30:240 (3,4) - change use this
7. 00:31:795 - add a circle
8. 00:34:239 (4,5) - better follow voice like this
9. 00:46:240 (1,2) - this is more suit the rhythm
10. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^
11. 00:52:462 (4,1) -
    and many like this in KIAI time, find them and change them more suit
12. 01:08:462 (1) - bad look
13. 01:12:906 (3,4) - blanket
14. 01:15:573 (2) -
    
15. 01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - make it different feeling with kiaitime such as[img]puu.sh/91XMH.jpg[/img]

1. 00:10:240 (5) - i think its not so suit,miss a beat here 00:10:462 -
2. 00:10:906 (1) - ^
3. 00:14:795 - this circle better using in this time 00:14:573 -
4. 00:17:018 (6) - move it time to 00:16:351 -
5. 00:18:128 - add a circle if you feel good
6. 00:19:906 - ^
7. 00:23:351 (5) - this is better
8. 00:27:351 (4,5) - ctrl+G ,then fix the ds
9. 00:30:240 (2) - make this slider only one return then,delete 00:31:129 (3,4) - ,new slider start at 00:30:906 - ,end at 00:31:351 -
10. 00:32:018 (1) - end at 00:32:462 - ,add a circle at 00:32:684 -
11. 00:33:572 (5,6,7) - what about this
12. 00:48:462 (7) - nc,to show this slider is faster
    the same with normal,the rhythm isnt good enough

1. 00:13:351 (5) - make the end of this slider stack 00:12:684 (2) -
   
2. 00:27:573 (6) - stack 00:26:462 (2) -
3. 00:31:128 (5) - stack 00:30:017 (2) -
4. 00:26:462 (2,6,2) - make this stack one place
5. 00:48:462 (8) - NC,same reason with hard diff
   .....

LZCSC wrote:

( ^0^)/from BMT\(^0^ )
my english isnt good enogh, so i useing more pic to show what i mean,sorry;w;
General

1. hitsounds isnt good i think,this song not suit for that hitsound,maybe you'd better find another hitsounds.wav(search your beatmaps,there is so many)OK
2. there is two .osb files in you map,you may changed your map's artist or something makes that happen,one of them may useless,delete it OK
3. the rhythm is too simple,too few rhythm changes

Easy

1. 00:07:128 (1) - if there just is a slider,this is ok,but if seeing with followings,its bad look 00:07:128 (1,2) - this is better looking
   
   Fixed
2. 00:16:906 (3) - too casual，makes it look like this
   
   Fixed
3. 00:26:684 (2,3,4) - dont useing this 3circles too many with this rhythm,you can change some of it with thisFixed
4. 00:32:017 (1,2) - not good looking,blanket like this
   
   OK
5. 00:35:573 (1) - stack00:33:795 (2) - perfectStacked
6. 00:41:795 (2,1) - blanket like this
   
   Fixed
7. 00:47:128 (2) - too ugly
   
   Moved (1) a little
8. 00:58:684 (2) - ^

Maked it better now

Normal

1. 00:08:906 (4) -
   here is yours,if the angle of 00:08:906 (4) - more small，like this,the flow and looking will be better
   Fixed
2. 00:10:684 (1) - try to make it flw more suit with 00:10:239 (6) - and 00:11:572 (2) - Fixed
3. 00:41:351 (4) - try stack 00:39:573 (1) - ,and make 00:41:795 (5) - Symmetric with 00:40:462 (3) - OK
4. 00:23:128 (4,5) - what about this rhythm Fixed
5. 00:26:684 (3,4) - ^Fixed
6. 00:30:240 (3,4) - change use this No
7. 00:31:795 - add a circleAdded
8. 00:34:239 (4,5) - better follow voice like this Fixed
9. 00:46:240 (1,2) - this is more suit the rhythm Chaged only (2)
10. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
11. 00:52:462 (4,1) - Fixed
    and many like this in KIAI time, find them and change them more suit
12. 01:08:462 (1) - bad look Fixed
13. 01:12:906 (3,4) - blanket Fixed
14. 01:15:573 (2) -
    
    Fixed
15. 01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - make it different feeling with kiaitime such as[img]puu.sh/91XMH.jpg[/img]

Fixed

Hard

1. 00:10:240 (5) - i think its not so suit,miss a beat here 00:10:462 - Changed to repeat slider
2. 00:10:906 (1) - ^Changed to repeat slider
3. 00:14:795 - this circle better using in this time 00:14:573 - No
4. 00:17:018 (6) - move it time to 00:16:351 - Moved
5. 00:18:128 - add a circle if you feel goodConsidered
6. 00:19:906 - ^Added
7. 00:23:351 (5) - this is better Fixed
8. 00:27:351 (4,5) - ctrl+G ,then fix the dsFixed
9. 00:30:240 (2) - make this slider only one return then,delete 00:31:129 (3,4) - ,new slider start at 00:30:906 - ,end at 00:31:351 - Fixed
10. 00:32:018 (1) - end at 00:32:462 - ,add a circle at 00:32:684 - Fixed
11. 00:33:572 (5,6,7) - what about this Fixed
12. 00:48:462 (7) - nc,to show this slider is fasterFixed
    the same with normal,the rhythm isnt good enough

Insane

1. 00:13:351 (5) - make the end of this slider stack 00:12:684 (2) - Stacked
   
2. 00:27:573 (6) - stack 00:26:462 (2) - Stacked
3. 00:31:128 (5) - stack 00:30:017 (2) -Stacked
4. 00:26:462 (2,6,2) - make this stack one placeStacked
5. 00:48:462 (8) - NC,same reason with hard diffFixed
   .....

you need more mod
Good Luck!

1. 00:41:795 (2,1) - you can improve blanket here so that every point on the slider is equidistant from the circle
2. 00:54:240 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:12:462 (1,2) - ^
2. 00:16:017 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:14:240 (4,1) - ^
4. 00:23:128 (2,3) - never break time-distance spacing rule in easy/normals
5. 00:26:684 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:33:350 (1,2) - swap new combos so it can be on long white tick
7. 00:35:573 (5,1) - ^

1. 00:13:795 (1,2) - swap new combo to stay consistent and start new combo at long white ticks
2. 00:15:573 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:17:351 (1) - remove this new combo
4. 00:22:017 (1) - remove this new combo and add NC to 00:22:684 (3) and add new combo 00:24:906 (3)
5. 00:23:128 (4) - blanket 00:22:684 (1,2,3) better and
6. 00:23:573 (5) - blanket 00:23:128 (4)
7. 00:28:239 (1,2) - blanket better
8. 00:30:906 (3) - extend to 1/2 slider
9. 00:31:573 (6) - blanket something; just don't make it so short like that
10. 00:48:462 (1,1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one.
11. 01:02:684 (1) - ^
12. 01:06:018 (5) - add NC here and remove from 01:07:128 (1) -

1. 00:23:573 (5,6,7) - looks like 1/4 hits; either stack them or space them as far as the previous notes
2. 00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - possibly overmapped; i turned playback speed to 25% and can't hear any drums or other instruments playing this fast at this time.
3. 00:33:795 (6,7) - make these the exact same by copying/pasting one of them and rotating/flipping it.
4. 00:48:462 (1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one.
5. 00:50:462 (3,4,5,6,7) - same thing i mentioned earlier; i mean it's fun but not part of the music.
6. 00:52:240 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
7. 00:53:906 (2) - 1/2 beat before and after; space accordingly
8. 00:57:795 (2,3) - new combo is unnecessary
9. 00:59:795 (1) - dont' need new combo here
   

xxdeathx wrote:

hi, from my m4m queue:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:795 (2,1) - you can improve blanket here so that every point on the slider is equidistant from the circle Fixed
2. 00:54:240 (1,2) - ^

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:12:462 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
2. 00:16:017 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:14:240 (4,1) - ^ Improved
4. 00:23:128 (2,3) - never break time-distance spacing rule in easy/normals OK
5. 00:26:684 (1,2) - ^ OK
6. 00:33:350 (1,2) - swap new combos so it can be on long white tick Done
7. 00:35:573 (5,1) - ^

Done

[Hard]

1. 00:13:795 (1,2) - swap new combo to stay consistent and start new combo at long white ticks Done
2. 00:15:573 (1,2) - ^ Done
3. 00:17:351 (1) - remove this new combo Done
4. 00:22:017 (1) - remove this new combo and add NC to 00:22:684 (3) and add new combo 00:24:906 (3) Done
5. 00:23:128 (4) - blanket 00:22:684 (1,2,3) better and Done
6. 00:23:573 (5) - blanket 00:23:128 (4) Done
7. 00:28:239 (1,2) - blanket better Done
8. 00:30:906 (3) - extend to 1/2 slider Done
9. 00:31:573 (6) - blanket something; just don't make it so short like that OK extended
10. 00:48:462 (1,1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one. Made it slow a little bit
11. 01:02:684 (1) - ^ Made it slow a little bit
12. 01:06:018 (5) - add NC here and remove from 01:07:128 (1) -

Done

[Insane]

1. 00:23:573 (5,6,7) - looks like 1/4 hits; either stack them or space them as far as the previous notes Fixed
2. 00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - possibly overmapped; i turned playback speed to 25% and can't hear any drums or other instruments playing this fast at this time. They overmapped
3. 00:33:795 (6,7) - make these the exact same by copying/pasting one of them and rotating/flipping it. Done
4. 00:48:462 (1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one. Fixed
5. 00:50:462 (3,4,5,6,7) - same thing i mentioned earlier; i mean it's fun but not part of the music. Yes I want my map to be fun
6. 00:52:240 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I want my map to be fun
7. 00:53:906 (2) - 1/2 beat before and after; space accordingly Fixed
8. 00:57:795 (2,3) - new combo is unnecessary Fixed
9. 00:59:795 (1) - dont' need new combo here Fixed

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q
As this is your first map, I'll explain some basic structure more instead of blindly pointing out mistakes like you'd do with more experienced mappers

[General]

1. Holy shit this bg <3
2. Do you really need 7 combo colours? 4 are usually enough Try to follow the colour of ships in this anime Use only 5 colours now

[Easy]

1. 00:12:462 (4) - Either curve this one or move 00:14:240 (1) - to X400. OR: move to 456/204 and 00:15:128 (2) - somewhere where it'd fit to the small curve the cursor will make. You can also curve 00:15:128 (2) - a little bit (not too much!) while you're at it (http://puu.sh/9aspI/34ce81330a.jpg). DOnt forget to fix the combo after it! Curved (4) ,moved (1) to x=400,curved (2)
2. 00:28:462 (1) - I'd say that you keep your hands off such "extremely" curved sliders. Sliders with a slight curve have a better effect and a better flow in lower difficulties as Easy and Normal. Sliders like this can feel chunky, which should not happen Fixed
3. 00:30:684 (3) - move this one either up or down to have a nicer flow (your mouse has to aim up or down with it, not just straight right, which can be boring) Moved up
4. 00:33:795 (2) - Try to make a blanket out of this (Have the slider "hug" the circle (quick example: http://puu.sh/9asGF/ce9890fc24.jpg&#41; To do that, you can use the approach circle of the circle to see, if it fits into the slider's trail (the white in the picture) Fixed
5. 00:38:240 (2,1) - Here you can either: Have both sliders on the same x coord or have each other be a blanket for the other one.
   For the first: you can use ctrl+g to see where the exact endtick for a slider is (hover your mouse over the last tick and check the coords on the top right) Then basically move the other slider to the same x or y coord. (click on the coors in the top right to place them even without the grid) I chose blanket
   For the second: It should look somewhere like this http://puu.sh/9asUA/5676e77856.jpg
6. 00:42:351 (2,1) - Try to make a better blanket out of this. The Sliderhead is slightly off (http://puu.sh/9asXV/4d001e0c80.jpg). Dont be scared of turning off grid snap for this, just make sure that you place everything correct later on agsin Blanketed
7. 00:44:462 (2) - curve this one slightly

Done

[Normal]

1. 00:08:906 (1) - missing clap on tail Fixed
2. 00:14:240 (1) - from here on, claps seem to be off. I think continuing them like you did before is a better idea Fixed
3. 00:33:350 (1) - remove this NC (while we're at it, I think this sounds better, as the "Na" starts 1/2 tick later as your slider does http://puu.sh/9atuP/ceddba6de9.jpg&#41; Fixed
4. 00:35:573 (1) - remove NC Fixed
5. 00:38:240 (5) - try to keep a constand spacing. the nest slider is .10 more away than the rest OK
6. 00:42:684 (1) - NC, remove 00:43:573 (3) - Fixed
7. 01:10:240 (3) - This overlap is wrong, move it to y 123

Moved

[Hard]

1. 00:10:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have alot of space towards the upper left corner, yet you go back towards where the combe before came from. This can be messy and difficult to read if the player uses hitburst (50, 100, 300 blah). You have alot of space there, try to make use of it :> Fixed
2. 00:27:128 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved Litltle fixed
3. 00:32:017 (7) - This jump seems kinda random and it's only there for the overlap. Either adjust the slider before or move this one Moved
4. 00:43:351 (3) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:55:129 (3) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:34:240 (6) - same here, but the other way around. The player would think that this is a 1/2 hitr as well, but its a 1/1 actually. Miss incoming. Try to avoid stuff like this Fixed
7. 00:38:906 (6) - this slidertick sounds very random, dont do that :< Fixed
8. 00:45:351 (4) - snapped incorrectly, ends on a blue tick. fix this one Fixed
9. 00:49:462 (2) - remove this one, as the sound's only on the first circle Fixed
10. 00:54:018 (1) - Wrong overlap, the end should be on x220 I saw space at NW so I moved to there
11. 00:56:684 (2,2) - Wrong overlap as well. 00:57:795 (2) - 's end should be on 280/68 Fixed overlap , end of 00:57:795 (2) - already x=280 y=68
12. 01:07:684 (1) - The actual tick stars at the tail of this slider, so a simple circle on 01:07:795 (1) - Same goes for the slider after that Fixed
13. 01:08:462 (3) - starts at 01:08:462 (3) - and ends either one tick after or before, depending where you'd like to have it

Fixed

[Insane ]

1. 00:12:684 (2,5) - Overlap is off. find the correct coords by ctrl+g'ing :> Fixed
2. 00:22:684 (1,2,3,4) - Spread those a bit so that they dont touch each other as much (1 and 3, 2 and 4) Fixed
3. 01:09:128 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:38:906 (4) - remove the slidertick here Fixed
5. 00:55:795 (4) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:48:462 (1) - I like that slowdown :3 Thank you

In general, there's still a lot to learn (obviously, as this is your first map) so I'd recommend you to check other (ranked) maps to see what they're doing, so maybe you'll be able to pick up something from there. Try to use a set spacing as well. It might not be the most difficult map to play then (if you're aiming for this) but it'll be a smooth map - and that's more fun than random stuffs everywhere :>

Gl with your mapset!

neonat wrote:

General

The hitsounds are different, very different on all difficulties, that is not good and shows inconsistency in the mapset. The use of the hitsounds seem random as well and doesn't follow any pattern and doesn't fit I will fix it

Normal

Hitsounds are very random and inconsistent

00:12:462 (1) - make it consistent with the start, whistle on the start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:13:794 (3) - remove whistle Done
00:14:239 (1) - remove clap Done
00:14:683 (2) - clap on start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:15:572 (3) - clap Done
00:16:017 (1) - whistle on start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:16:905 (2) - whistle Done
00:17:350 (3) - remove clap Done
00:24:906 (1) - remove whistle on start of slider and put whistle on end of slider Done
00:25:795 (2) - remove whistle on start of slider Done
00:35:573 (1) - position it nicer Done

SPOILER

00:52:462 (4) - ^ Fixed

SPOILER

01:14:240 (4,1) - blanket nicely Fixed
01:20:906 (4) - that clap was very sudden and out-of-the-blue Fixed

Hard

The claps and whistles are very random, why isn't consistent with the other difficulties anyway? Sorry I try to follow hitsounds with the music too much

00:14:240 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done
00:17:129 (6) - remove whistle Done
00:17:351 (7) - add clap on start of slider Done
00:17:795 (1) - remove clap Done
00:18:240 (2) - clap Done
00:26:683 (2) - remove clap on end of slider Done
00:27:128 (3,4) - blanket nicely Fixed
00:45:351 (4) - end slider at 00:45:573 as that's where the vocal is Fixed
00:54:018 (1) - the repeat arrow is quite hidden, you should shift the slider away so the they don't overlap Fixed
00:58:907 (4,6) - don't overlap Fixed
01:06:905 (3) - object end not snapped Fixed
01:08:351 (3) - slider should start at 01:08:462 - it's currently too early Fixed
01:12:906 (1) - remove clap on start of slider, add clap on end of slider Done
01:19:573 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done

Insane

00:13:351 (5) - remove clap on end of slider Done
00:24:017 (7) - remove whistle on start of slider Done
00:30:017 (2,3,4,5,1) - suddenly empty of whistles, unlike the previous part, this is an example of why your hitsounds are very inconsistent and doesn't follow any pattern or music properly Fixed
00:56:462 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done
00:56:906 (2) - remove whistle, use clap Done
00:56:906 (2,3) - remove clap on start of slider, if you really want clap, it should be on the end of slider, where it fits better Fixed
00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - why the sudden emptiness of hitsounds, another example of inconsistency without really any notice or feel of music which would require it Fixed
01:21:351 (5) - clap on start of slider Done
01:21:795 (6) - remove clap Done

Please do something about the hitsounds, good luck

• 
  • 00:08:906(2) — You could curve it more to make more flow
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:16:906(3) — Could be a bit higher than where it is currently (like 80,268 for instance)
  • 00:24:906(1) — Could be shaped differently.
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:26:684(2) — You should imo either curve it more, or not curve it at all because we can barely see it is curved.
  • 00:30:240(2,3,4) — Try to be more symmetrical by putting them below the middle of 1 :
  
  Like so for instance

  
  -> 00:33:795(2) — If you followed the previous •, don't forget to overlap 4 of previous combo.
  • 00:35:573(1) — So close from being at the center !
  • 00:42:684(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.
  • 00:47:128(2) — ^
  • 00:48:462(1) — ^
  • 00:48:462(1) — You can place it at (380,292) for a better flow
  • 01:02:684(1) — (396,204) for a better flow.
  • 01:04:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.
  • 01:07:573(3) — You can make a triangle with 1 and 2.
  • 01:08:462(1) — The tail can overlap 1 of the previous combo.
  • 01:12:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.

• 
  • 00:08:906(1) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (340,288) for a better lining.
  • 00:12:462(1) — You can rotate it by +12° for a better lining (don't forget to replace 2 then).
  • 00:16:017(1) — ^
  • 00:16:017(1) — Same with -12°
  • 00:23:128(2) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (256,282) for a better lining.
  • 00:42:684(1) — Why is it not snapped ?
  • 00:44:462(4,5,6,1) — Try to make a perfect square.
  • 00:54:684(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle here to have (3,4,5,1) making a diamond.
  • 01:02:240(3,1,2) — Try to make a perfect triangle here.
  • 01:04:462(1,2,3) — ^
  • 01:12:462(2,3) — Try to make a perfect triangle with 2 and Head&Tail of 3 .
  • 01:21:795(5) — Consider moving to (352,272) for a better lining.

• 
  • 00:08:017(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:10:240(5) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 2.
  • 00:10:906(6) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 3.
  • 00:15:573(1) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider.
  • 00:20:240(4) — The snapping from 3 and 5 is not the same.
  • 00:20:240(4,5,6) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:27:351(4) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider.
  • 00:34:240(6) — Isn't the symmetrical of 5.
  • 00:42:906(2) — Consider moving it to (216,308) for a better lining.
  • 00:50:906(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:54:017(1) — Try not to overlap 5.
  • 01:05:128(3) — Make it aligned and having the same shape direction as 2.
  • 01:08:017(2,3,4) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 01:20:017(2) — You can move it at (416,144) for a better flow.

Gunsillie wrote:

Hello, from my mod queue.
I am sorry for being that late, long story short I had issues with my computer...

• = Important
• = Recommended
• = Suggestion

_______

[Easy]

• 
  • 00:08:906(2) — You could curve it more to make more flow Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:16:906(3) — Could be a bit higher than where it is currently (like 80,268 for instance) Fixed
  • 00:24:906(1) — Could be shaped differently. Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:26:684(2) — You should imo either curve it more, or not curve it at all because we can barely see it is curved. Fixed
  • 00:30:240(2,3,4) — Try to be more symmetrical by putting them below the middle of 1 : Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  -> 00:33:795(2) — If you followed the previous •, don't forget to overlap 4 of previous combo. No I keep spacing
  • 00:35:573(1) — So close from being at the center ! Little fixed
  • 00:42:684(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed
  • 00:47:128(2) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:48:462(1) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:48:462(1) — You can place it at (380,292) for a better flow Fixed
  • 01:02:684(1) — (396,204) for a better flow. Fixed
  • 01:04:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed
  • 01:07:573(3) — You can make a triangle with 1 and 2. Triangle shape (3),end of (1),(2)
  • 01:08:462(1) — The tail can overlap 1 of the previous combo. No
  • 01:12:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed

[Normal]

• 
  • 00:08:906(1) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (340,288) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:12:462(1) — You can rotate it by +12° for a better lining (don't forget to replace 2 then). Fixed
  • 00:16:017(1) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:16:017(1) — Same with -12° OK
  • 00:23:128(2) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (256,282) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:42:684(1) — Why is it not snapped ? Fixed
  • 00:44:462(4,5,6,1) — Try to make a perfect square. Fixed
  • 00:54:684(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle here to have (3,4,5,1) making a diamond. Fixed
  • 01:02:240(3,1,2) — Try to make a perfect triangle here. Fixed
  • 01:04:462(1,2,3) — ^ Fixed
  • 01:12:462(2,3) — Try to make a perfect triangle with 2 and Head&Tail of 3 . I blanketed them
  • 01:21:795(5) — Consider moving to (352,272) for a better lining. No I want to keep spacing

[Hard]

• 
  • 00:08:017(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:10:240(5) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 2. Fixed
  • 00:10:906(6) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 3. Fixed
  • 00:15:573(1) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider. I don't see shaping dot
  • 00:20:240(4) — The snapping from 3 and 5 is not the same. Fixed
  • 00:20:240(4,5,6) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:27:351(4) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider. Fixed
  • 00:34:240(6) — Isn't the symmetrical of 5. Fixed
  • 00:42:906(2) — Consider moving it to (216,308) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:50:906(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:54:017(1) — Try not to overlap 5. Fixed
  • 01:05:128(3) — Make it aligned and having the same shape direction as 2. Fixed
  • 01:08:017(2,3,4) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 01:20:017(2) — You can move it at (416,144) for a better flow. Fixed

[Conclusion]

As you may have noticed, I focused only on shapes for your maps because they are already well polished thanks to all the previous mods. I hope you will find some help in my advices. I wish you the best of luck for getting ranked !
~Gunsillie

P.S. : I apologize for the boycott of the Insane diff^^

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue! Sorry for late mod..

[Easy]

1. 00:22:240 (1) - Make this slider smoothly like the slider on 00:24:906 (1) - , for better flow. Fixed
2. 00:26:684 (2) - Instead of making this straight slider just for the rhythm, try curving it like this > http://puu.sh/9eGmj/d9164cd860.png Fixed
3. 00:30:240 (2,3,4) - Not a great pattern for circle just to make a blanket, try balancing it with 00:28:462 (1) - for a better one > http://puu.sh/9eGzq/0f15ab71c1.png Fixed
4. 00:39:351 - Unused Inherit point, Remove it Removed
5. 00:48:462 (1,1) - DS looks wrong. Fixed
6. 01:02:684 (1) - Since the HP of this diff is at ease, remove this slider's NC. Fixed
7. 01:16:017 - Same as 00:39:351 - Fixed
   
8. - Nothing to say in this diff...

[Normal]

1. 00:14:683 (2) - Move this slider to x:176|y:324 for a diamond formation > http://puu.sh/9eH4C/d0d07a6ded.png Fixed
2. 00:17:795 (1) - Curve this slider for symmetry > http://puu.sh/9eHaR/311f636b5d.png Fixed
3. 00:24:906 (1,2) - These two sliders are almost nearby the healthbar, which is unrankable, change its placement. Fixed
4. 00:31:129 (4,5,1) - Looks ungrateful to me, Try this at least > http://puu.sh/9eHuM/bbc516e691.png Fixed
5. 00:35:573 (1) - Remove NC, same reason in Easy. Fixed
6. 00:40:462 (3,5) - Make these two curvy for better flow > http://puu.sh/9eHGH/88527d0b11.png Fixed
7. 00:56:906 (2) - Make this slider blanketing on 00:56:462 (1,1) - Fixed
   
8. - This diff needs a little improvement somehow...

[Hard]

1. 00:22:795 (2) - Remove note, it doesn't sound good with the song track. Or you're trying to make on your own track?
2. 00:36:017 (1,2,3) - It looks boring when it's stacked like that, Give space a little.
3. 00:40:906 (3,4) - Fix DS.
4. 00:42:462 (1) - Make a blanket on 00:42:239 (5) - for better pattern, and better flow with 00:42:906 (2) -
5. 01:21:795 (7) - Add NC, New track.
   All fixed
6. - Same as Normal, but just fix the DS where they're too far and close. Or it may not be a "Hard" diff.

Cannot mod Insane diff due to a little... overmapped, Sorry...

But this is all i can find in your map, Nice CHs btw. GL ~

• Easy

  00:23:573 (2,3) - combine into a slider. i'm not suggest this rhythm on Easy
  00:30:240 (2,3) - ^
  00:31:128 (3,2) - try overlap
  00:44:462 (2,1) - blanket better
  00:49:795 (1,2) - combine into a slider
  
  
  

  • Normal

    00:28:906 (2,1) - blanket?
    00:31:795 (5,1) - Ctrl + G
    00:37:351 (4,6) - make to same shape
    00:50:684 (2) - confuse. move to other side
    01:00:017 - add circle
    01:08:459 (1,3) - better overlap
    
    Hard & Insane is good to me

From my queue!

Easy
00:23:573 (2,3) - combine into a slider. i'm not suggest this rhythm on Easy Fixed
00:30:240 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:31:128 (3,2) - try overlap No
00:44:462 (2,1) - blanket better Fixed
00:49:795 (1,2) - combine into a slider Fixed

Normal
00:28:906 (2,1) - blanket? Blanket
00:31:795 (5,1) - Ctrl + G Fixed
00:37:351 (4,6) - make to same shape Fixed
00:50:684 (2) - confuse. move to other side Fixed
01:00:017 - add circle Added
01:08:459 (1,3) - better overlap Fixed

Hard & Insane is good to me

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take?
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle?
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather?
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward.

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following.
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) -
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle?
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle.
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish.
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
N/A

[Insane]
Feel that many sliders are curved a bit too much. I would suggest that you standardize the curved sliders a bit, looks a bit too inconsistent atm. Just personal opinion though. Maybe I will take some times to fix all slider dots cause I was still newbie at that time

00:07:573 (3,6) - avoid overlapping? Curved (6)
00:09:128 (2,3) - Not a fan over such stacking, as the music is progressing smoothly and there is no sensible pause. Moved
00:10:240 (5) - missing clap? Whistle looks good to me
00:11:573 (4) - Less curvature? And maybe ctrl+G Fixed
00:13:351 (5) - There are four notes in the duration of this slider so this plays a bit too awkwardly for me. (Could try a 3/4 slider follow by a 1/2 one) I think like you too,fixed
00:15:128 (4,5,6) - personally I prefered a triplet after 3 instead of 4 No this rhythm look good to me
00:19:128 (5) - too curved Fixed
00:19:573 (1,2,3,4) - these are really confusing. would suggest decrease spacing or simply stacking Stacked
00:21:795 (3) - move this to the left a bit Fixed
00:23:573 (5,6) - fix blanket Fixed
00:28:684 (2,3,4) - ^ and perhaps making a triangle Fixed
00:39:573 (1,2,3) - why not centering this? Also better blanket for 2 and 3 with 1 Fixed
00:42:240 (7) - missing a vocal on the red line makes it werid Fixed
00:44:240 (4) - ctrl + g? Okay
00:45:128 (6,7,1) - fix spacing Fixed
00:46:906 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing gradually to fit the music? Changed pattern
00:53:128 (7) - move this to the left Moved (6) instead
00:53:573 (8) - make this a slider until the white line. Otherwise 9 is really confusing to read Okay
00:54:240 (3,1) -

SPOILER

Fixed
00:57:795 (5,6) - blanket Fixed
01:02:462 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:04:017 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
01:07:795 (2,3,4,5) - doesn't play well Fixed , I shouldn't mess with blue line too much
01:21:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - consider follow this part of the music?

SPOILER

I listen to music at 25% speed but didn't hear any instrument on 01:22:684 - and 01:23:128 - so fixed

Well many spacing looks random... Try to make things a bit more consistent unless you are making some patterns out of it.

Guess I will skip other diffs. Fell free to ask me to recheck them when it's a bit more polished

eINess wrote:

From my Queue.

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

I don't have break time XD

[Insane]

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take? 1.5x DS on 1,2,4 x2.0 DS for 3
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle? No
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G No It's jump between end of (6) and head of (7)
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather? No I prefer this
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg Fixed
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward. Fixed

[Hard]

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following. Fixed
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg Accetped
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg No

[Normal]

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) - Little fixed
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle? Added
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg Fixed

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle. No
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg Fixed
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish. Whistle look fine and soft to me
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg Fixed

GL ~