Submitted on May 2014 hype
[General]
* Disable Widescreen Support on Easy
* Increase mp3 volume? This one sounds too quiet.
* Try to blanket better. It'll make the map look much more tidy.
[Easy]
* 00:02:718 (1,1,2) - This is really weird. What are you following here? 00:03:180 - This beat is strong and indicates a new section, so you should put a note here. 00:02:718 - is rather not needed. 00:04:103 - now you put a note here, but why not on 00:05:949 - ? Also the NCs are unnecessarily spammed so just do this:
http://puu.sh/mT7SE/978bf4fad1.jpg* 00:06:872 (1,2,3) - Bad flow, 1 is pointing at 3 and they're really close, so new players might get confused by it. And try to blanket better.
* 00:08:718 (3,4,1) - Might as well would be better to make a clean triangle.
* 00:11:949 (3,4) - I don't really recommend 1/2 clicks in this diff. If you want to maintain the 1/2 gap, bind 00:11:487 (2,3) - into a slider. That's easier to play.
* 00:12:180 (4) - I don't know what you want here too. There is no such a long sound like this slider. The vocals have ended on 00:12:641 - and the drums are consistently having 1/2 beats and there is a strong one on 00:13:333 - . Tbh I'm just gonna recommend
http://puu.sh/mT8lF/3a502c485f.jpg this rhythm
* 00:16:103 (3) - Rotate CCW a bit for better flow
* 00:19:795 (2,3) - blanket?
* 00:23:487 (3,4) - No need to emphasize every beats on this part because it's softer. Make this into 1/1 slider to make it easier.
* 00:25:333 (1,2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/mT8J1/38c155416d.jpg* 00:26:949 (3,4) - dat DS
* 00:29:026 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/mT8w1/f52d25f160.jpg[Normal]
* I'd recommend 2 stanza NCs in this diff. 1 stanza NC has too few notes on each combo.
* 00:03:180 (1,2) - Try to put notes where the stronger beats are. Definitely 00:04:333 - has a vocal on it while 00:04:795 - doesn't. So
http://puu.sh/mT8UN/e3d064d97c.jpg this rhythm would be more appropriate.
* And try to make it consistent on 00:05:026 (1,2,3) - 00:06:872 (1,2,3) - as well.
* 00:09:410 (2) - Same. This beat is rather weak so you don't really need to put this here.
* 00:19:564 (3,1,2) - Not a good flow imo and the overlap looks ugly. Try
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4454514* 00:26:026 - Adding a note here wouldn't harm the difficulty of this map.
* 00:29:487 (1,2) -
http://puu.sh/mT9j5/ad1adc1e26.jpg* 00:30:872 (1,1) - This is mostly not allowed in the current mapping meta. The next note is too close to the spinner for a Normal. So maybe just expand the spinner to 00:33:641 - or just fill the spinner out.
[Hard]
* 00:09:641 (3,4,5,6) - This kind of pattern is really hard to read and play. I mean, you can kinda read that those are all 1/2 gaps but the flow doesn't allow you to do it properly. And it's much much harder than all those other "It's about" parts.
* 00:11:256 - I really really wanna put a note here but it's your choice.
* 00:12:872 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - In here, I think 00:13:103 - is very weak while 00:13:564 - is strong. So try
http://puu.sh/mT9ya/1d4f89622e.jpg* 00:14:256 (1,2,3,4) - If you hear this carefully you'll notice that 00:14:949 - has additional strong beat. So it would be good to represent it too.
* 00:16:795 - Neglecting this strong drum also bothers me. at least put a slider end there. Also 00:16:564 (1) - this NC is unnecessary imo.
* 00:25:564 - Neglecting this vocal also feels too empty. This is the hardest diff, so represent things as much as you want.
* 00:30:872 (1,2,3) - These vocals might be the strongest ones, so placing them in the same spot is too boring imo. Furthermore, I don't think it's a good idea to neglect 00:31:103 - this vocal too. Also 00:31:564 - a drum.
* 00:32:026 (1) - This is a really short spinner honestly. I'd recommend to just remove it and make it a slider or something
* 00:19:564 (5) - 00:21:410 (5) - 00:23:256 (4) - 00:26:949 (6) - If I were you I'd put NCs here instead since those beats are the entrance of the next stanza so it's more related to the next one. Also a good way to emphasize them.