Neru - Lost One no Goukoku [OsuMania]

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puxtu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 Juli 2014 at 23:21:43

Artist: Neru
Title: Lost One no Goukoku
Tags: [ Mee ] justhow0615 lordraika Ajeemaniz Kagamine Rin Vocaloid
BPM: 162
Filesize: 7482kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. ajee's EZ - 4Key (1,49 stars, 750 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2,59 stars, 1629 notes)
  3. justhow's MX - 4Key (3,65 stars, 2060 notes)
  4. LordRaika's NM - 4Key (2,03 stars, 1121 notes)
  5. Mee's SC - 4Key (4,27 stars, 2639 notes)


Download: Neru - Lost One no Goukoku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- [ S o r a ] -
hi~ :3 mod by your request

4K - 7K Column 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7
If you create 4K and 7K mapset
you should create 4K MX / 7K NM / 7K HD
please read the rules first :3

[General]
- BG must be 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768

[4K NM]
HP: 7 OD: 8
00:01:956 (1956|0) - should end at white line (1/4)
00:02:697 (2697|3,3437|0) - ^
00:03:808 (3808|2) - remove because 1 note is the same sound as the first pattern
00:04:548 - Why did you miss loud sound here? <3 add note at 1 and 4 (add 2 note)
00:07:141 (7141|1) - move to 1
00:10:474 - loud sound here. add note at 1
00:13:067 (13067|1) - move to 1
00:15:660 (15660|0) - end at 00:16:400
00:16:585 ~ 00:26:956 - do as i said all before ^^^^^ ***
00:22:326 - loud sound add note at 1
00:28:623 (28623|1,28993|1,29363|2,29734|2,30104|1) - remove 1 note is enough for 4K NM because> 2 note = loud sound Include cymbal - 1 note = normal sound Include main drum sound
00:30:474 ~ 00:33:808 - remove 1 from all 2 note here as i say ^
00:34:548 ~ 00:38:252 - ^
00:42:697 (42697|1) l 00:48:623 (48623|1) - move to 1
00:46:030 - loud sound add note at 1
00:52:326 (52326|2,52696|1,53066|1,53437|2,53807|1) - remove cause it's diffculty (NM) as i say
00:54:178 ~ 00:57:511 l 00:58:252 ~ 01:03:067 l 01:16:030 ~ 01:21:215 l 01:21:956 ~ 01:26:771 l 01:27:882 ~ 01:33:067 l 01:33:808 ~ 01:38:252 - remove one note of two note from these all 2 note pattern reduce difficult and 1 note is enough for main drum sound
01:09:734 - loud sound add note at 4
01:47:882 (107882|1) - move to 1
02:08:993 - add note at 4 for cymbal sound
02:14:919 - add note at 1 and 02:14:919 (134919|2) - move to 3 for hand balance
02:15:289 ~ 02:20:474 l 02:21:215 ~ 02:26:030 l 02:27:141 ~ 02:32:326 l 02:33:067 ~ 02:36:771 - remove one note from two notes of all two notes pattern 1 note = drum sound
02:44:548 (164548|1,164919|2,165289|1,165660|2,166030|1,166400|2,166771|1,167141|2,167511|1,167882|2,168252|1,168623|2) - remove reduce it's difficult because it is NM 1 note for main drum
02:50:474 - add note at 1 and 02:50:474 (170474|2) - move to 4
02:50:845 ~ 02:56:030 l 02:56:771 ~ 03:01:956 - as i say 1 note for main drum remove one note from two notes
03:06:585 (186585|1) - move to 1
03:12:511 (192511|1) - ^
03:14:919 (194919|0) - this LN should end at here 03:15:660
03:18:252 (198252|1) - move to 1
03:09:734 - add note at 4 for cymbal sound
03:15:660 - add note at 2
03:21:585 - ^ at 1
03:24:178 (204178|1) - move to 1
03:27:326 (207326|1) - this note not jack sound move to 3
03:27:882 (207882|0,208622|3) - end at white line (1/4)
03:29:362 (209362|0) - ^
03:30:844 (210844|0,211585|3) - ^
03:32:326 (212326|0) - ^
03:32:696 (212696|3) - remove
03:29:734 (209734|2) - ^

[4K HD]
SV look cool :3
and seem nice
try to add note on the loud sound like cymbal
00:16:400 - add note at 2
00:34:178 - add note at 1
00:40:104 - cymbal sound add note at 4
00:46:030 - add note at 1
and if you found pattern like this
add note as i say
after this is the same problem :P

sorry i can't mod 7K MX because it seem too difficult :o

Good Luck~ :3

EDIT: all diff is look the same pattern make me boring
try to make different~
Topic Starter
puxtu

vocaloid1anime2 wrote:

hi~ :3 mod by your request
thank you sensei!
here, take my kudos~
R e x 1 0 0
[4K NM]
00:54:178 (54178|2,54178|1,54548|3,54548|2,54919|2,54919|1,55289|0,55289|1,55660|2,55660|1,56030|3,56030|2,56400|1,56400|2,56771|0,56771|1,57141|2,57141|1,57511|3,57511|2,58252|2,58252|1,58623|0,58623|1,58993|2,58993|1,59363|3,59363|2,59734|2,59734|1,60104|0,60104|1,60474|2,60474|1,60845|3,60845|2,61215|2,61215|1,61585|0,61585|1,61955|2,61955|1,62326|0,62326|1,62697|2,62697|1,63066|2,63067|3) - Try to change some of these parts because they are too boring to play D:
01:39:178 - Add note 1
01:39:271 - Add note 2
01:39:363 - Add note 3
01:39:919 - Add notes 1 and 3
02:00:104 (120104|3,120104|0) - Make these LNs finish here 02:01:215 -
02:01:400 - Add note 2
02:01:678 - Add note 4
02:01:863 - Add note 1
02:02:141 - Add note 2
02:02:326 - Add note 3
02:02:419 - Add note 1
02:02:511 - ^
03:32:882 - Add notes 1,2 and 4
[4K HD]
This diff still good but you have to change the rhythm in some parts of the map for a funny gameplay
Topic Starter
puxtu

R e x 1 0 0 wrote:

[4K NM]
00:54:178 (54178|2,54178|1,54548|3,54548|2,54919|2,54919|1,55289|0,55289|1,55660|2,55660|1,56030|3,56030|2,56400|1,56400|2,56771|0,56771|1,57141|2,57141|1,57511|3,57511|2,58252|2,58252|1,58623|0,58623|1,58993|2,58993|1,59363|3,59363|2,59734|2,59734|1,60104|0,60104|1,60474|2,60474|1,60845|3,60845|2,61215|2,61215|1,61585|0,61585|1,61955|2,61955|1,62326|0,62326|1,62697|2,62697|1,63066|2,63067|3) - Try to change some of these parts because they are too boring to play D:
01:39:178 - Add note 1
01:39:271 - Add note 2
01:39:363 - Add note 3
01:39:919 - Add notes 1 and 3
02:00:104 (120104|3,120104|0) - Make these LNs finish here 02:01:215 -
02:01:400 - Add note 2
02:01:678 - Add note 4
02:01:863 - Add note 1
02:02:141 - Add note 2
02:02:326 - Add note 3
02:02:419 - Add note 1
02:02:511 - ^
03:32:882 - Add notes 1,2 and 4
[4K HD]
This diff still good but you have to change the rhythm in some parts of the map for a funny gameplay
wow, thank you sir!
kudos given :)
Evening
ww posting here first so that I don't forget
Evening
Aye mod by request:

[SB]

Smooth and nice SB, really like it

00:15:660 - The music cuts very abruptly here, while your scaling is pretty smooth, I suggest to remove some tweening, you might also want to play with "Fade" and "Move" here a bit more

03:14:919 - May want to do something with the SB here


[7K MX]

... this is unrankable, well, not entirely unrankable, but some parts cannot be accepted for rank
00:01:956 (1956|6,2002|5,2048|4,2095|3,2141|2,2187|1,2234|0) - Why did you use a stream to replace the 1/4s? | I know it's fun to play but using a pattern made for fast streams shouldn't be put on strong 1/4s.
I suggest this pattern in replacement :


Some LNs are not snapped properly, I suggest to snap them by bulk/snap using "Resnap all notes" with the right Beat Snap Divisor ( They do not show up on AiMod for some reason )


00:16:400 - These patterns are rather repetitive, I suggest to change some to something else, for example:

00:36:030 - Did you miss out a note here?
00:38:623 - TO 00:40:104 - Unrankable
... and other similar notes

... You just pretty much copy-pasted the pattern again and again and again

I honestly will get bored playing this due to the unchanging patterns, but the scrolling SB is pretty amazing even though it is simple

02:03:067 - This is MX, you should add more notes here

The 3note-1note-3note-1note pattern is pretty nice for hitsounding but, you really need to vary them, they are way too symettrical, you need to have more types of chords in here to make it interesting

The SV is pretty nice, I really like it, however, this particular SV, 00:04:178 - should never be 0.5x, it looks as if all 3 00:04:178 (4178|2,4548|4,4734|5) - sliders are of the same speed, which is rather confusing
02:02:697 - This SV doesn't allow enough time for the player to react


AiMod : Preview Time conflict

Just going to breifly check through the other difficulties

[Abyssus-'s 4K SC]

The hitsound is somewhat inconsistent, I can't get the pattern in the hitsounds

00:15:706 (15706|3,15706|0,15891|3,16076|3,16261|1,16261|3) - Snap all to 1/2s, it is timed wrongly
00:26:516 (26516|0) - Snap to 1/4
00:27:859 (27859|2) - ^
02:01:447 (121447|2) - Why is there a note here?
02:01:585 (121585|2,121840|1,122164|0,122164|3,122488|2) - Snap all to 1/4s
02:08:113 (128113|1) - ^
02:11:076 (131076|1) - ^
02:50:474 - Change this to a kiai time, apply for all difficulties

00:04:178 - Change the SV here to something other than x0.5, it looks too similar to 00:04:548 (4548|2,4734|3) - , thus confusing the player

Don't think I can't mod these patterns, ask someone who specializes in 4K for this i guess

[Dee-'s 4K MX]

00:03:923 (3923|1,3923|0) - Why is there a chord here?
00:05:822 (5822|1,5891|0) - Snap to 1/4s
00:22:905 (22905|3) - Snap to 1/2
00:27:095 (27095|1,27187|2,27257|3,27326|2,27396|1,27465|2,27535|3,27604|2,27697|1) - Snap to 1/4s
00:30:312 (30312|3) - Snap to 1/2
00:32:141 (32141|0,32141|2,32141|1) - Not sure if this chord is intentional, it sounds like it's placed wrongly
00:34:155 (34155|2) - Snap to 1/1
00:34:224 (34224|3) - Remove | I don't think there's any instrument that follows this note
00:38:623 (38623|0,38692|1,38761|2,38831|3,38900|2,38970|1,39039|0,39109|1,39155|2,39224|3,39294|2,39363|1,39433|2,39502|3,39572|2,39641|1,39710|0,39780|1,39849|2,39919|3,39988|2) - Snap to 1/4s
00:50:127 (50127|3,50220|2,50312|0) - Snap to 1/4s
01:06:238 (66238|2) - Snap to 1/2
01:17:349 (77349|1) - Snap to 1/2
01:27:141 (87141|3,87210|2,87280|1,87349|0,87419|1) - Snap to 1/4s
01:39:803 (99803|1,99803|2) - Snap to 1/1s
01:43:345 (103345|2) - I don't think this note is needed?
01:44:085 (104085|1) - ^
01:45:636 (105636|0,105729|2,105822|3) - Snap to 1/4s
01:46:354 (106354|2,106447|1,106539|0) - Snap to 1/4s
01:46:632 (106632|1) - Remove
02:00:104 (120104|1,120104|3,120382|2,120613|1,120868|2,120868|3,121215|1) - I don't get what are these mapped to? Convert all of them into 3 sliders
02:02:697 (122697|3,122720|2,122743|1,122766|0,122789|3,122812|2,122835|1,122859|0,122882|3,122905|2,122928|1,122951|0) - ... This is MX, you shouldn't have 1/16 streams.. | Furthermore, the drums are mapped to 1/4s
02:37:511 (157511|0,157511|3,157882|2,157882|1) - Snap the ends to 1/2 | It is easier to read
02:48:993 (168993|0,168993|3,169132|1,169132|2) - Snap to 1/2
02:51:377 (171377|2) - Snap to 1/2
03:02:789 (182789|2) - Remove | I think you should just map to the drums, it follows the music more
03:10:498 (190498|2) - Snap to 1/1
03:11:146 (191146|3,191238|1,191331|0) - Snap to 1/4
03:14:572 (194572|0) - Snap to 1/4
03:15:035 (195035|1,195035|2,195243|2,195243|1,195451|1,195451|2) - Snap to 1/2
03:16:910 (196910|3,197002|1,197095|3) - Snap to 1/4
03:23:831 (203831|2) - Snap to 1/1
03:25:960 (205960|1,206076|0,206076|2) - Snap to 1/4
02:50:474 - Change this to a kiai time

[4K HD]
The front part looks good, no problems there

02:02:697 - Give the player more time to react to these notes

[Abyssus-'s 7K HD]

00:07:141 (7141|0) - You might not want to hide a note behind a LN here, the player may not notice it, especially due to this being a HD
00:11:724 (11724|0) - Snap to 1/2
00:15:706 (15706|0,15706|6) - Snap to 1/2
00:16:261 (16261|2,16354|3) - Remove | Why are there notes here?
....
I don't feel like modding this, the notes are just... really wrongly snapped

[4K NM]
00:54:178 - The same pattern over and over and over again for 10 straight seconds.., vary it
02:14:919 - Just chords over and over again? I suggest to add more notes or just vary it with 1/2s
02:50:474 - Same thing here..
02:50:474 - Change this to a kiai time, apply for all difficulties

No other problems here, you really need to vary patterns

This whole mapset still needs a lot of work before rank, I suggest to call a BAT only after 10 mods
Aii-
hi Puxtu~
[General]
Resnap all notes

[NM]
00:28:623 - add note
00:29:363 - ^
00:30:104 - ^
00:30:845 - ^
00:31:585 - ^
00:32:326 - ^
00:33:067 - ^
00:40:104 - add note di col 1
01:42:141 - move ke 3
01:45:289 - add note
03:21:585 - add note

[Abyssus-'s 7K HD]
00:16:261 - delete
00:16:354 - ^
00:31:585 (31585|4) - ^
00:32:326 (32326|4) - ^
00:36:030 (36030|0) - move ke col 7
00:36:030 (36030|0) - add note
01:59:548 (119548|2) - delete
02:12:696 (132696|4,132789|2) - delete gak butuh LN ganti normal note
02:54:178 - add note
03:02:511 (182511|2,182604|4) - delete
03:03:437 (183437|5) - LN sampai 03:03:437 (183437|5) - dan add 1 note
03:03:714 (183714|0) - Delete
03:03:714 (183714|0) - LN mulai dari sini
03:03:714 (183714|0) - add note

[4K HD]
00:39:548 - add note
02:01:585 (121585|1,121585|2) - delete, gk ada suara intrument

[Dee-'s 4K MX]
00:03:900 - resnap
00:27:789 - add note di col 3
00:50:127 (50127|3,50220|2,50312|0) - Resnap
02:02:697 (122697|3,122720|2,122743|1,122766|0,122789|3,122812|2,122835|1,122859|0,122882|3,122905|2,122928|1,122951|0) - terlalu over
03:02:326 (182326|3) - Check sini sampai 03:03:160 (183160|0) - Stairsnya gk cocok
03:03:160 (183160|0) - add note

[Abyssus-'s 4K SC]
02:08:113 (128113|1,128160|0) - Delete, kalo ikut vocalnya gk usah delet
02:11:076 (131076|1,131123|3) - ^
02:14:826 (134826|1) - move di col 1
02:14:826 (134826|1) - add note
02:48:993 - gk butuh LN, change normal note

[7K MX]
00:29:919 (29919|2) - move ke col 4
00:29:919 (29919|2) - ini perlu di ubah sampai 00:29:919 (29919|2) - terlalu over
00:29:919 (29919|2) - ^ 00:29:919 (29919|2) -
00:29:919 (29919|2) - add note
00:29:919 (29919|2) - sampai 00:29:919 (29919|2) - terlalu over
00:29:919 (29919|2) - LN hapus, gk butuh

Nice chart :) i wish this map can rank xD
*don't forget my kudos :c
Topic Starter
puxtu
first of all, I removed some diff that has lot of issues and now, I NEED MORE MOD

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

[4K HD]
EDIT: all diff is look the same pattern make me boring
try to make different~
done.

R e x 1 0 0 wrote:

[4K HD]
This diff still good but you have to change the rhythm in some parts of the map for a funny gameplay
done.

lZenxl wrote:

[SB]

Smooth and nice SB, really like it

00:15:660 - The music cuts very abruptly here, while your scaling is pretty smooth, I suggest to remove some tweening, you might also want to play with "Fade" and "Move" here a bit more

03:14:919 - May want to do something with the SB here
about the SB.. sory, I'm not going to change anything because if the SB is changed, people have to redownload my map, right? :)

lZenxl wrote:

02:50:474 - Change this to a kiai time
done.

lZenxl wrote:

[4K HD]
02:02:697 - Give the player more time to react to these notes
done.

lZenxl wrote:

This whole mapset still needs a lot of work before rank, I suggest to call a BAT only after 10 mods
roger that.

Aii- wrote:

[General]
Resnap all notes

[4K HD]
00:39:548 - add note
02:01:585 (121585|1,121585|2) - delete, gk ada suara intrument

Nice chart :) i wish this map can rank xD
*don't forget my kudos :c
done. done. and done.
Remillion Cross
biar ga ngerepotin, saya nanti ngemod kalau semua diffnya udah ready for mods. kalau cuma tinggal 4 begini jadi rasanya ganjil wkwk
Topic Starter
puxtu

Remillion Cross wrote:

biar ga ngerepotin, saya nanti ngemod kalau semua diffnya udah ready for mods. kalau cuma tinggal 4 begini jadi rasanya ganjil wkwk
makanya dibantuin dong nambah diffnya ;)
LordRaika
Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~ :)

Column |1-4|

Full mod usually points out something important to HELP your beatmap improve, pls dont mistake it as modders
trying to comment or pointing out your mistake or giving bad comment, its jst a suggestion to help mapper :)
[General]
IMPortant note... u might want to check your SB again..
its doesnt works on 4K SC..

for both dif, i think the first kiai should end at this 01:39:734 -

[4K SC]

the SV timing point, u set D:C1(Drum custom hit set 1) and D:C5(set 5) , but u didnt have any custom hitsound
also i didnt hear any particular special hitsounding, might wnt to consider reduce the volume percentage????
its kind a loud for lots of chord here... XD

the pattern is good , yes it is BUT ... XD
its seems repetitive, to be honest, it seems like u copy most of the previous pattern for this repeating part...
might wnt to consider change some pattern?
for the amount of the notes itself, seems fine with me ^^

'try adding hitsound on some major notes. (jst use default one will do)'

03:02:326 - try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1684149
or this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1684153
the point is the stairs pattern doesnt seems suit it...

03:16:030 (196030|1,196215|1) - move to 1 and 3
this part is totally suits stairs pattern style
03:16:771 (196771|2,196956|2) - to 4 and 2
03:17:604 (197604|0,197697|0) - 2 and 3
llike u did from 03:17:604 (197604|0,197697|0) - seems better than hammer this XD

03:26:956 (206956|1,207234|2,207326|1) - delete this normal notes, JUST do remove it then replace it with new notes at the same place,
now it becames drum notes, then 03:26:771 (206771|1,206863|2,206956|1,207048|2,207141|1,207234|2) - add clap and last one with finish...

03:27:882 (207882|0,207882|1,207974|0,207974|1,208066|1,208067|0,208159|0,208160|1) - turn them into normal drum and add clap sound on them
03:28:623 (208623|2,208623|3,208715|3,208715|2,208807|2,208808|3,208899|3,208900|2) - ^
and to the rest if u did so, or jst add new hitsound ^^ tht will make it much more interesting rather than all normal hitsound


[4K HD]
00:01:956 (1956|3,2048|2,2141|1,2234|0) - i suggest half hammer this part, rather than stairs...
ex : 1 4 1 4 , or 1 2 1 2

00:16:771 - from here, yes this pattern is good, but u might wnt to change it into something else? since...
well for a long run ppl might got bored with this pattern...

03:14:919 - this point, perhaps u forgot to add scale effect like u did on... 00:15:660 -


add a quick fading white flash here(on SB)
02:37:141 -
02:37:511 -
02:37:882 -
02:38:252 -

'try adding hitsound on some major notes. (jst use default one will do)'



oh my its Rin~ ^^
nice song, good luck~
ask me anything about hitsound if there are smthg u dont understand...
Topic Starter
puxtu

lordraika wrote:

oh my its Rin~ ^^
nice song, good luck~
ask me anything about hitsound if there are smthg u dont understand...
oh my~
i'm working on it now~
Bruce
Hello.puxtu.Here is Mod
[4K HD]
00:07:141 (7141|0) - Move to 3 or 4.In my opnion here pitch is Gradually become low

00:10:289 (10289|3) - Move to 1 or 2 ^

00:15:660 (15660|0) - Here hasn't long sound.I know you what means but here i suggest you set Notes follow pitch

00:39:548 - Here has sound.Add a Note at 4

01:03:808 - ~ 01:12:697 - Here has a little problem.You did not complete catch long sound.
My suggestion is this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691384

01:14:363 - ~ 01:15:660 - Feel a little boring.My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691389

01:39:363 - You need catch sound completely.Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691395

02:03:623 - ~ 02:11:771 - Here's suggestion likes 01:03:808 - ~ 01:12:697 -

03:14:919 (194919|0) - Here's suggestion likes 00:15:660 (15660|0) -

That's all~
Topic Starter
puxtu

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello.puxtu.Here is Mod
[4K HD]
00:07:141 (7141|0) - Move to 3 or 4.In my opnion here pitch is Gradually become low

00:10:289 (10289|3) - Move to 1 or 2 ^

00:15:660 (15660|0) - Here hasn't long sound.I know you what means but here i suggest you set Notes follow pitch

00:39:548 - Here has sound.Add a Note at 4

01:03:808 - ~ 01:12:697 - Here has a little problem.You did not complete catch long sound.
My suggestion is this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691384

01:14:363 - ~ 01:15:660 - Feel a little boring.My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691389

01:39:363 - You need catch sound completely.Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1691395

02:03:623 - ~ 02:11:771 - Here's suggestion likes 01:03:808 - ~ 01:12:697 -

03:14:919 (194919|0) - Here's suggestion likes 00:15:660 (15660|0) -

That's all~
thank you.
BSHFT BADT GMBH
Heyyy~

My suggestions for you~!

[4K HD]

00:10:937 move 2 to 3
00:11:030 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

00:11:585 move 4 to 3
00:11:678 move 3 to 4 Guitar / Play variations

00:12:419 move 2 to 3
00:12:511 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

00:13:900 move 2 to 4 Guitar Pitch

00:24:919 move 4 to 3
00:25:011 move 1 to 4
00:25:104 move 3 to 2 To prevent Jackhammer for upcoming Guitar sustain notes

00:25:289 move 4 to 3
00:25:474 move 3 to 4 Guitar Pitch

00:48:623 move 3 to 2
00:48:715 move 1 to 4 To prevent Jackhammer for upcoming Guitar sustain notes

00:48:993 move 4 to 3
00:49:178 move 3 to 4 Guitar Pitch

01:12:511 add 1
01:12:604 add 2
01:12:697 move to 4 or stay at 1 Vocal

01:38:530 add 3
01:38:623 maybe remove 1 (?)
01:38:715 add 4 Drum fill

01:39:363 move 1 to 2
01:39:456 move 2 to 1 Play feel

02:01:678 SV rework/remove - It's a bit too sudden for HD difficulty, I think, especially HD sightreads.

02:48:993 switch 4 and 2 When the slider stop it fits perfectly with the drum toms that are very quietly hearable and slowly build up.

02:53:067 remove 2+3; add 1
02:53:160 add 3
02:53:252 add 2
02:53:345 add 3 Set Vocal Highlight

03:00:937 add 2 Drum fill

03:03:437 add 1 Drum and Guitar Unison note

03:10:197 move 2 to 3
03:10:289 move 3 to 2
03:10:845 move 4 to 3
03:10:937 move 3 to 4
03:11:585 move 1 to 2
03:11:678 move 2 to 4
03:11:956 move 4 to 1
03:12:141 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

Hope you like them.
Topic Starter
puxtu

SM_Bluefusion wrote:

Heyyy~

My suggestions for you~!

[4K HD]

00:10:937 move 2 to 3
00:11:030 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

00:11:585 move 4 to 3
00:11:678 move 3 to 4 Guitar / Play variations

00:12:419 move 2 to 3
00:12:511 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

00:13:900 move 2 to 4 Guitar Pitch

00:24:919 move 4 to 3
00:25:011 move 1 to 4
00:25:104 move 3 to 2 To prevent Jackhammer for upcoming Guitar sustain notes

00:25:289 move 4 to 3
00:25:474 move 3 to 4 Guitar Pitch

00:48:623 move 3 to 2
00:48:715 move 1 to 4 To prevent Jackhammer for upcoming Guitar sustain notes

00:48:993 move 4 to 3
00:49:178 move 3 to 4 Guitar Pitch

01:12:511 add 1
01:12:604 add 2
01:12:697 move to 4 or stay at 1 Vocal

01:38:530 add 3
01:38:623 maybe remove 1 (?)
01:38:715 add 4 Drum fill

01:39:363 move 1 to 2
01:39:456 move 2 to 1 Play feel

02:01:678 SV rework/remove - It's a bit too sudden for HD difficulty, I think, especially HD sightreads.

02:48:993 switch 4 and 2 When the slider stop it fits perfectly with the drum toms that are very quietly hearable and slowly build up.

02:53:067 remove 2+3; add 1
02:53:160 add 3
02:53:252 add 2
02:53:345 add 3 Set Vocal Highlight

03:00:937 add 2 Drum fill

03:03:437 add 1 Drum and Guitar Unison note

03:10:197 move 2 to 3
03:10:289 move 3 to 2
03:10:845 move 4 to 3
03:10:937 move 3 to 4
03:11:585 move 1 to 2
03:11:678 move 2 to 4
03:11:956 move 4 to 1
03:12:141 move 3 to 2 Guitar / Play variations

Hope you like them.
wow, thank you! :D
[FX] AEM
*I will focus the critical errors only.

[4K HD]
i prefer not to insert any SV changes in this diff. Anyway, up to you.

00:01:586 - try this http://puu.sh/9m38C/ea9d1caa21.png : keep the same pattern is better, no need to spread it like that.
02:48:993 (168993|3,168993|2,168993|0,168993|1) - delete : keep on repeat like previous pattern, it's too awkward here.
02:50:289 (170289|2,170289|0,170289|3,170289|1,170474|0,170474|2,170474|3,170474|1) - delete one of them in each row. : too awkward.
03:01:493 - add a note here : make it fun for fingers.
03:27:511 - same as 00:01:586 -
03:30:104 (210104|2,210104|1) - delete : too awkward.
03:30:474 - same as 00:01:586 - and don't forget to select all and CTRL+H.


[Mee's 4K SC]
Renamed it as Mee's 4K SC, [ ] << insert this thing may occurs an error.

it's pretty rough chart, random notes everywhere, i guess it's your own mapping style but i will notice some errors you need to change.

00:04:548 - try this http://puu.sh/9m1zf/f762d7183e.png, : Too many LNs in this part.
00:12:789 (12789|2,12974|0,13345|1,13530|1,13715|1,14085|2,14271|3,14456|0,14826|2,15011|0) - delete : it's overmapped here and nonsense too.
00:15:660 (15660|0) - delete : focus only a short beat here, no need to insert a LN like that.
00:26:863 (26863|1) - delete : it's confused and there is no beat here.
01:14:456 - try this http://puu.sh/9m2wR/29f70cee70.png : random notes here, i think this is better.
02:13:623 - same as ^
Heart of Bitch
Sorry, don't have lots of time. anyway , here is my short mod :3

[4K HD]
1|2|3|4
Since your note is focus on drum sound, and most of them are same rhythm. so i cant find some rhythm mistake.all here is just suggestion.
same with [FX] AEM i don't think u really need speed change in this diff

00:15:660 (15660|3,15660|0,15845|3,16030|3,16215|3) -if you del sv try add note at 00:15:660 00:15:845 00:16:030 00:16:215 4th column
00:51:215 (51215|0,51400|1,51585|3,51956|2,51956|1) - try this Follow the pitch of the sound.00:51:215 (51215|2) - Highest 00:51:400 (51400|0) - lowest
01:15:660 (75660|2) - add 1 here
02:48:993 (168993|1,168993|0) - DEL. Focus on your drum sound
than 02:49:178 (169178|1,169178|0) - Add here 1&2
02:50:474 (170474|3,170474|1,170474|2,170474|0) - change to 3 note
bilqiscutee
hallo partner gw :p
Mod by request

-oh iya ini 4k mapset? kalo iya hapus 4k dari diff namenya
-kiai harusnya berenti di sini pe 01:39:363
-kiai ketiga harusnya brenti di sini juga 03:03:437
-Tags nya harus sama antara HD and SC pe itu conflict gtu must fix :P
-btw itu kiai antar HD sama SC ko beda2 gtu?

[HD]

01:14:919 - 01:15:289 kenapa ga sama aja kek gini http://puu.sh/9mUJb/78aac9c470.jpg
01:31:585 - 01:32:326 biar ga terlalu monoton ctrl + H
01:28:252 - 01:28:993 ctrl + H
01:53:808 jadiin kek gini -> http://puu.sh/9mVzg/402c49099d.jpg
02:18:993 - 02:19:734 ctrl + H
02:30:845 - 02:31:405 ctrl + H

i've an idea for this drum part, try this sv, if you dont like you can reject it
-02:43:663 2.00
-02:43:715 0.25
-02:43:844 2.00
-02:43:993 0.25
-02:44:155 2.00
-02:44:271 0.25
-02:44:548 1.00

*for HD notenya udah rapih cuman patternya coba jngn terlal bnyk yg sama, biar ga mudah ketebak sama player >,<

[SC]


start 02:49:363 - 02:50:104 can u re-edit this part? i think its not matching with the rhyme, the fourth finger pressed
at same time, it not too fun ._.
why in the end so many jackhammer o.o

Good luck puxtu :);)
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