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[Existence]
00:11:087 (4) - I think it would be cool to increase the slider velocity multiplier on this slider
01:27:451 (4) - ^
00:26:087 (4,5) – Those two sliders look a little messy next to each other like that. Maybe move slider #5 down to here
http://puu.sh/8Xuwo.png or here
http://puu.sh/8XuxB.png00:36:144 (2) – Move this hitcircle to here 00:36:315 – and make a new combo start there
00:40:406 (5) – Make this slider mirror this one? 00:39:894 (4) -
00:41:087 (7) – New combo here to match vocals
00:48:076 (5) – Idk if a slider should end on an important vocal note like this. I would do the combo more like this:
http://puu.sh/8XuYP.jpg01:05:974 (1,2,3) – Make these the same spacing:
http://puu.sh/8Xvp0.jpg01:12:792 (5,6) – Make these sliders parallel maybe.
01:13:474 – I think a slider should start here instead of a hitcircle, because vocals. And a new combo should also be here.
02:23:531 – I think you should have a slider here to go with vocals like what you did here: 02:26:087 (4,5) -
02:32:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Progressively increase the hitsound volume of the stream?
02:49:440 – Should be the start of a slider
02:54:894 – Might sound better with this hit circle removed? Idk...
[Hard]
00:11:087 (7) – Increase slider velocity multiplier on this slider?
00:54:724 (3) - ^
01:27:451 (3) - ^
00:11:940 (2) – It might sound better to remove this slider and put a ½ slider here: 00:12:110 -
00:16:883 (1,2) – Move these so they don't overlap
00:38:019 (6,1,2,3) – A little hard to read but I think its ok
00:41:428 (3,4) – These are not the same distance snap as 00:43:133 (6,7,8) – They are just a LITTLE too close together
00:42:622 (5,6) - ^
^ ^ Actually I see this problem throughout this whole section. Sometimes you are slightly overlapping and others you aren't.
01:00:519 (1,2,3) – Make these the same distance:
http://puu.sh/8Ynmg.jpg01:30:349 (5) – I think this should overlap this one instead 01:29:667 (2) -
01:35:292 (3) – I think you can move this slider up a little. Looks better to me
01:43:474 (7) – This slider should end here 01:43:985 – and you should start a slider or hitcircle here: 01:44:156 -
02:27:451 (6) – I think this should just be a 1/1 slider
02:51:656 (8) – End this slider here: 02:52:167 – and start a slider here?: 02:52:337 -
02:57:110 (4,5) – I don't think you should have these overlap.
02:55:065 (1,2,3,1) – This feels better:
http://puu.sh/8YoBD.jpg[Normal]
00:31:372 (2) – Move this hitcircle to here: 00:31:201 -
00:44:156 (1,2,3) - Move these so the flow doesn't go in a straight line:
http://puu.sh/8Yqwv.jpg00:54:553 (4) – Remove this and add a 1/1 slider here?: 00:54:383 -
01:50:292 (2,3,4) – Would look cooler if you tilted these sliders a little so they aren't perfectly parallel.
02:10:747 (3) – Feels better with the music if you don't make this reverse, and then add a hitcircle here: 02:11:428 -
Hopefully this was somewhat helpful for you.
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