-Bakari- wrote:

[Yomi's Easy]

1. 00:19:207 (1,2) - your pattern here goes of the music a bit. From 00:19:207 - and untill 00:20:288 - there's a reptive sound + some instrument at 00:20:828 - which feels VERY different from the instrument before. So, try to emphasize it with a 2/1 slider and a circle. Example just a kind of undermap, you can't [resent everything in easy
   Note: alternatively, you can just swap them on the timeline by pressing Ctrl+G, but it'll requere some changes in your flow.
2. 00:31:639 (3) - I'm pretty sure that you can avoid using 1/2 beats in this diff. The slider looks so short and it may confuse/trouble some beginners. Anyway, 1/2 patterns are not really recommended. Just replace 00:31:639 (3) - with a circle at 00:31:639 and see if you like it!
   Note: 00:40:288 (3) - pretty much the same here. Try to avoid using 1/2 beats as much as possible to make your diff more playable for the beginners!
3. 00:34:342 (1,2) - both of these sliders can be shotened and finished at the white ticks. (00:34:882 - and 00:35:964 - respectively). It will give you more consistent rhythm and it will also be more fitting and playable!
   i think 1/2 rhythm is fine since BPM is so low
4. 01:21:910 (3,1) - the diff is meant to be playable in all modes. (since there're no taiko/o!m specifix diffs). The 1/4 pattern will not be playable in o!m r taiko. which means that you should not use this pattern here. It is also overmapped, so.. Why don't you go with something like this? It seems to be more playable and fits with the song pretty good, too!
   ok, move it to 01:24:342
   I disagree with some of your 1/2 patterns but everything else seems to be quite alright. You did a good job with the diff!

captin1 wrote:

[Yomi's Easy]

1. 00:56:504 (1,2) - perhaps you could raise the volume on these two notes gradually (30% for the first, 40% for the second) to fit the build up into the kiai

ok :3

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