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Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size)

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Suimya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 May, 2014 at 12:04:09 PM

Artist: Asumi Kana
Title: Hanagonomi (TV Size)
Source: ニセコイ
Tags: Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
BPM: 111
Filesize: 14329kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hana (4.65 stars, 181 notes)
  2. K.Penguin's Normal (3.16 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Yomi's Easy (1.94 stars, 84 notes)
Download: Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size)
Download: Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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mp3/Video taken from Andrea's mapset. Thanks <3

Diffs:
Hard/Hana --- Done
Normal ---- by koreapenguin Done
Easy ----- by Tsukuyomi Done
koreapenguin
i'm working for baka
Kinomi
done
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Yomi's easy
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Tags:Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending ED4 Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
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Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for the nice diff Yomi :3

Added it!
koreapenguin
K.Penguin's Normal
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:ニセコイ
Tags:Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending ED4 Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
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452,204,66784,6,0,L|324:212,1,120,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,308,67865,2,0,L|140:300,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,260,68676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,204,68947,2,0,P|120:140|72:76,2,120,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,70568,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,316,70838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,316,71109,6,0,L|216:304,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,71649,2,0,L|315:345,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,340,72190,2,0,P|404:292|400:220,2,120,0|8|4,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,73811,6,0,L|232:272,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,74352,2,0,P|136:236|76:264,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,320,75163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,320,75433,6,0,L|48:196,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,92,76514,2,0,B|184:48|256:104|256:104|336:80,2,240,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,192,79217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,192,79487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,72,81379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,56,81920,6,0,P|220:148|468:260,1,480,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84217,12,2,86109,0:0:0:0:

done :3
Topic Starter
Suimya
Added! thanks baka penguin-san >w</

now it's ready for mods <3
Akemi_Homura
Hi~~! Sekai~! :3
From your request~!

  • [General]
  1. Fine~! :3

  • [Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:35:433 (4) - I think this slider should end 00:35:974. because vocal is end here.
  2. 00:42:190 (2) - remove this slider and just add note 00:42:460. I think It's more follow to easy for beginners.
  3. 01:24:217 (1) - Please change this spin end 01:26:109. like other diffs.

  • [K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. HP 4, AR 5, OD 4은 어떠신지요. Hana 난이도랑 차이가 너무 많이나는것 같네요~
  2. 00:08:946 - 여기에 노트가 있어요 실수로 안지우신듯..
  3. 00:19:217 (1) - 사소하지만 블랭킷을 좀더 완벽하게 할수 있을것 같네요~ㅎ 귀찮으시면 이 코드 복붙하세요~
    304,288,19217,6,0,P|416:268|460:156,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:51:649 (1) - 슬라이더 끝부분이 00:50:028 (2). 이 슬라이더 시작부분이랑 좀더 완벽하게 겹쳐주세요!

  • [Hana]
  1. 00:20:298 (2) - (nazi) move this note to 246,236. make perfect overlap~ :P
  2. 00:32:730 (1) - clap here~ (end of slider). to make consistency of clap.
  3. 00:37:055 - clap~!
  4. 00:38:136 - ^
  5. 00:47:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is more fit to vocal~

It's already nice map~!
I can't find anymore.. orz
GL to Rank~!
Lanturn
Quickie~

[General]
Tags: I don't think ED4 is really needed for a tag. When people search for this. I think they would just use "Ending" like you already have to find it easy enough.

Combo color 7: how about a lighter shade of red instead of brown? Maybe something close to this:
Combo7 : 64,193,255


[Tsukuyomi]
  1. 00:08:406 (3,4) - How about following the chimes a bit better? Try something like this. Since this is a low 111bpm song. Red ticks won't be much of an issue for newer players. http://puu.sh/8KYwf.jpg | If you don't want to follow the red tick, a 3/2 slider would even fit nicely. Note the first slider starts where the (3) circle was.
  2. 00:17:055 (4) - Move this to x495 y188 so it properly matches the slider from (2).
  3. 00:19:217 (1,2) - I highly recommend a pattern change here. Try making a slider from (1) to 00:20:298 - (where the reverse is) and leaving 00:20:838 - empty.
  4. 00:21:379 (3) - You should consider breaking your Consistency on combos here. This part marks the start of a new rhythm and is obviously very different. Because of doing this. you'll have to change ALL of the NCs on the upcoming notes (such as NCing on 00:25:703 (3) - and removing the NC from 00:23:541 (1) - ). Please consider this, as I really recommend it.
  5. 00:43:001 (3) - Consider changing this to a slider that lasts until 00:43:811 - ?
  6. 00:45:163 (1) - Maybe move this with distance snap to the left a bit to flow better? If you draw a slider with the same curve as the previous, it's pretty far off. | Try somewhere around x264 y171 or near it.
  7. 00:47:865 (2,3,4) - If you do the above, consider curving these a bit more as well. Instead of stacking (2) where the tail of (4) was, put it off to the left more, then adjust the (3,4) to fit.
  8. 00:50:568 (2) - A bit nazi, but you should consider moving this up a bit to accommodate the curve from the previous slider.
  9. 00:53:811 (1) - extend this by 1/2? Since nothing plays on the tail but there is some noticable lyric and music sounds on 00:54:622 -
  10. 01:19:757 (5) - Missing NC.
  11. 01:17:595 (3,7) - Consider removing the whistle from the end of (3) and the reverse of (7) as these aren't really powerful parts compared to the other whistles. It breaks consistency but I think it overall supports the song better (mostly because of following vocals I guess)
[K.Penguin]
  1. 00:08:946 (2,3) - TWO NOTES PLACED IN THE SAME SPOT. REMOVE THE CIRCLE! I think Akemi mentioned this, but I can't read Korean ;_;
  2. 00:14:622 (3) - I think this circle supports the music much better at 00:13:541- Consider moving it there!
  3. 00:18:947 (4) - Consider lowering the volume of this normal hit. Maybe by about 20%?
  4. 00:21:379 (1,2,1,3) - I find it a little strange you start with a drum sampleset but immediately go to the Normal sampleset on the next combo. Maybe stick to the drums for a little longer? Not really sure how you decided to use this.
  5. 00:26:784 (3) - I believe you are missing a whistle here. According to your patterns anyways.
  6. 00:38:676 (1,2) - You should consider making this a 3/4 slider instead of two 1/1 notes. http://puu.sh/8L0Sa.jpg
  7. 00:40:838 (5) - Another possible rhythm idea. Try reducing the length of this slider so that the reverse happens on 3/4 instead of 1/1. Then add a circle (or join to (6) with a slider) | http://puu.sh/8L10t.jpg | PS. NC here ;)
  8. 00:52:460 - maybe consider adding a circle? There is a bit of a beat here, and the lyrics are pretty heavy. It just seems to be a perfect spot for one.
  9. 00:53:811 (3) - NC to keep your NC every big white tick patterns?
  10. 01:00:028 (5) - Maybe try x145 y269 for better flow?
  11. 01:06:784 (1) - move to x454 y206 for a better tail stack.
[Hana]
  1. 00:10:433 (2) - Try moving this (2) to 00:10:163 - so it adapts the drums better instead of a lead-in which I don't think it really exists at this point.
  2. 00:14:082 (5) - How about a curve so it flows smoothly into (6)? It feels like it would match up with the nice slider you had at 00:12:730 (1) - for looks. Since the next section is mostly straight sharp sliders.
  3. 00:17:055 (1) - Add a finish on the head here? It fits well with the cymbal crash in the background.
  4. 00:26:649 (3) - It might be fine, but I really don't feel anything playing or singing at this note. It might suit the song better with this deleted.
  5. 00:32:190 (1) - hit control+g twice on this since the shape got changed slightly when you used control+G on the (3)
  6. 00:27:865 (7) - and 00:36:514 (7) - Optional NC's depends if you want to maintain consistency or not.
  7. 00:40:838 (1) - Consder moving the red tick a bit to the left. So that it the ball hits clean in the center when you are at 00:41:109 - | Example: http://puu.sh/8L3nR.jpg
  8. 00:48:947 (4) - Blanket? :D | Right now you have http://puu.sh/8L3wr.jpg (I just dragged the (4) back a bit so I could use the approach circles to show. make sure to move it back if you decide to do something similar XD)
  9. 00:53:271 (1) - Normal sample, and soft addition? It just sounds kind of strange the normal hits start 1/4 later instead of on this key.
  10. 01:04:622 (9) - Same as 27 seconds. This combo actually does get a bit long, so consider doing it here, even if you didn't on the previous ones.
  11. 01:17:595 (6) - ^
  12. 01:21:920 (1) - consider removing this whistle. Since the bell chime happens 1/4 later, or extend this spinner by 1/4 and shorten the next by 1/4.
Just a quick mod. Sorry if it feels a bit rushed.

Good luck. Have a
Nichiyouki


Hi :3

[General]
  1. You forget to add video in K.Penguin's Normal diff xD
[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
  2. 00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
  3. 00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
  4. 00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
  5. 01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.
  6. 01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.
    182,133,76514,6,0,P|212:110|260:103,1,79.9999999999999
    328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle on slider end to follow the melody, which it would be better than no have hitsound.
  2. 00:04:082 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:05:163 (2,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 00:06:784 (2) - The reason same with 00:01:920 (1) - Add whistle here, too.
  5. 00:08:947 (2,3) - Have 2 notes here. So you must remove a circle, and I suggest that move last point of this slider like this picture would be better imo.
  6. 00:21:379 (1,2) - You use regular drum hitsound in following the rhythm, which different with next notes. So please change these are normal sampleset in slider repeat of (1) and slider begin of (2).
  7. 00:37:325 (2,3,4) - Make these notes like this picture would more fit with the vocal and melody than. Then add NC on 00:39:217 (2) - if you fix these.
  8. 01:00:028 (5) - This flow and pattern is so weird. Please move this to x:148 y:272 would be better.
  9. 01:24:217 (1) - I thought this spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .
[Hana]
  1. 00:04:082 (1,2,3,4) - I thought these are look better if you add a circle at 00:06:109, and make these like these picture.
  2. 00:10:298 (1,2) - I thought putting note (2) here doesn't good idea. So I suggest that move (2) at 00:10:163 instead, because it would more fit with the rhythm than, and please add drum-finish in both note to follow the rhythm. Then if you fix it, please switch NC between 00:10:298 (1) - and 00:10:568 (3) - .
  3. 00:17:055 (1) - Please add finish in slider begin, to follow the cymbal sound of song.
  4. 00:34:892 (4,5,6) - Make this slider to pattern 00:34:082 (1,2,3) - and use Ctrl+G in (5,6) like this picture. Then please don't forget to check the hitsound in slider (5,6) after use it.
  5. 00:52:190 (1) - Normal sampleset doesn't fit in slider repeat. Please change is soft sampleset.
  6. 01:00:028 (1,2,3) - Move these to left a bit to blanket slider end of 00:59:217 (3) - that better.
  7. 01:09:487 (4) - Move thios to down 2 grids and left 1 grid. It would look better about pattern of (4,5,6,7,8).
  8. 01:12:325 (4,5) - move both to down like this picture would be look better imo.
  9. 01:21:920 (1,1) - First spinner should end at 01:24:082. So you should move second spinner, too. By start at 01:24:217 instead. Another one, I thought that second spinner end at 01:26:244 would be better, because that has heavier sound than 01:26:109 - .
I think this map want more mods yet, but however, it also nice mapset :3 Give a star ;)

Good luck~
koreapenguin
thanks mod
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: moemoemoe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58136
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11649,86244
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hanagonomi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:K.Penguin's Normal
Source:ニセコイ
Tags:Nisekoi False Fake Love Ending ED4 Tachibana Marika Sekai Tsukuyomi baldrace koreapenguin
BeatmapID:421748
BeatmapSetID:174429

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"k.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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if come mods fix plz about my normal, sekai nyan :D
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks so much for modding guys >w</ Fixed everything on your mods <3

and updated baka penguin's normal! =w=
Kinomi
Akemi_Homura

Akemi_Homura wrote:

  • [Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:35:433 (4) - I think this slider should end 00:35:974. because vocal is end here. if you listen carefully, vocal ends at 00:36:244.
  2. 00:42:190 (2) - remove this slider and just add note 00:42:460. I think It's more follow to easy for beginners.
    i think it is fine for newbiie, BPM is really low
  3. 01:24:217 (1) - Please change this spin end 01:26:109. like other diffs.k

Lanturn

Lanturn wrote:

[Tsukuyomi]
  1. 00:08:406 (3,4) - How about following the chimes a bit better? Try something like this. Since this is a low 111bpm song. Red ticks won't be much of an issue for newer players. http://puu.sh/8KYwf.jpg | If you don't want to follow the red tick, a 3/2 slider would even fit nicely. Note the first slider starts where the (3) circle was. i think pattern i use now fit the song better, actually i follow the sound on white line
  2. 00:17:055 (4) - Move this to x495 y188 so it properly matches the slider from (2). k
  3. 00:19:217 (1,2) - I highly recommend a pattern change here. Try making a slider from (1) to 00:20:298 - (where the reverse is) and leaving 00:20:838 - empty. nope, i can hear sound like soft hitnormal on whitle line like 00:08:406 (3,4),that's why i put this slider here
  4. 00:21:379 (3) - You should consider breaking your Consistency on combos here. This part marks the start of a new rhythm and is obviously very different. Because of doing this. you'll have to change ALL of the NCs on the upcoming notes (such as NCing on 00:25:703 (3) - and removing the NC from 00:23:541 (1) - ). Please consider this, as I really recommend it.k
  5. 00:43:001 (3) - Consider changing this to a slider that lasts until 00:43:811 - ? umm.. i try it but sounds not very good, so i keep the pattern now
  6. 00:45:163 (1) - Maybe move this with distance snap to the left a bit to flow better? If you draw a slider with the same curve as the previous, it's pretty far off. | Try somewhere around x264 y171 or near it. change a bit lol
  7. 00:47:865 (2,3,4) - If you do the above, consider curving these a bit more as well. Instead of stacking (2) where the tail of (4) was, put it off to the left more, then adjust the (3,4) to fit.
  8. 00:50:568 (2) - A bit nazi, but you should consider moving this up a bit to accommodate the curve from the previous slider. k
  9. 00:53:811 (1) - extend this by 1/2? Since nothing plays on the tail but there is some noticable lyric and music sounds on 00:54:622 - nope, sounds bad
  10. 01:19:757 (5) - Missing NC. added
  11. 01:17:595 (3,7) - Consider removing the whistle from the end of (3) and the reverse of (7) as these aren't really powerful parts compared to the other whistles. It breaks consistency but I think it overall supports the song better (mostly because of following vocals I guess) k
Nichiyouk

Nichiyouki wrote:



[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:12:730 (3,4,1) - You can move (3) to x:156 y:228. Then move (4,1) to make these are equilateral triangle like this picture.
    looks not very good for me
  2. 00:19:757 (2) - Add whistle on slider repeat, because I heard melody sound of song that, and if you think this is too loud, you can reduce volume.
    k
  3. 00:45:163 (1,2) - This flow is weird for me. I suggest that make like this picture. Then move (2) to x:144 y:140 to cause 00:44:082 (3) blanket this circle would be flow better?
    i prefer current shape xD
  4. 00:52:730 (5,1) - I thought that making like this picture would be better imo.
    ok
  5. 01:13:271 (1,1) - Draining Time between this spinner until next note was too short, which it may difficult for newbie player to reading. So I suggest that remove slider (1). Then move end of spinner at 01:15:433 instead. After that, don't forget to add a NC in 01:16:514 (2) - too.
    i think it's fine..
  6. 01:16:514 (2,3,4) - You can make these pattern to look better by may make like this picture, which you can copy this code.
    182,133,76514,6,0,P|212:110|260:103,1,79.9999999999999
    328,148,77595,2,0,P|340:184|332:232,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    ok
  7. 01:19:757 (4) - Please add NC here.added before
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Hanagonomi (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:はなごのみ (TV Size)
Artist:Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Yomi's Easy
Source:ニセコイ
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Sylphi
Sorry for short mod. but i really don't know how to mod DX

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:21:379 (1,2) - 다른곳은 노말 힛사를 사용하셨는데, 여기만 드럼으로 사용해서 뭔가 매치가 안되는 느낌이네요
00:32:190 (4) - 큰 흰색틱마다 NC 넣으시는것 같은데, 여기엔 NC 안되어있네요
00:53:811 (3) - 일관성을 위해서 NC
01:08:947 (4) - 동일한 이유의 NC

[Hana]
00:40:838 (1) - Add drum finish on slider's start
00:49:487 (4) - Add new combo for consistency
01:21:649 (6) - It would be better to remove this or change 01:20:838 (5) to repeat slider imo
Vicho
little irc mod<3
22:54 *Sekai-nyan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421464 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size)]
22:54 Vicho: oh lol
22:56 Vicho: haven't play your version though o.o
22:57 *Vicho is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421156 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) [Hana]]
22:57 Sekai-nyan: my ver is kawaii!
22:57 Vicho: VIDEO OFFSET IS 1600
22:57 Vicho: GOSH
22:57 Sekai-nyan: omg
22:57 Sekai-nyan: i'll fix it asap xD
22:58 Vicho: FIX IT PLS
22:58 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:58 Vicho: it kinda bothers me lol
22:58 Vicho: I told the same to Andrea btw
22:58 Vicho: xD
22:58 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:58 Sekai-nyan: omg
22:58 Sekai-nyan: i didn't know you play with video xD
22:58 Vicho: ofc <3
22:59 Vicho: but if it gives me lag I disable it xD
22:59 Vicho: but yeah, I like playing with video <3
23:00 Sekai-nyan: =w=
23:00 Sekai-nyan: loli Marika <3
23:00 Sekai-nyan: so cute...
23:00 Vicho: she looks like Rin-chan ww
23:00 Sekai-nyan: yeah kinda xD
23:01 Sekai-nyan: i still need to watch ep3
23:01 Sekai-nyan: orz
23:01 *Vicho is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421156 Asumi Kana - Hanagonomi (TV Size) [Hana]]
23:01 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed and updated =3=
23:02 Vicho: this ending is so cute <3
23:02 Vicho: love it
23:03 Vicho: also, the map is so good
23:03 Sekai-nyan: =w=
23:04 Sekai-nyan: make it perfect \:D/
23:04 Vicho: 00:38:676 - this triple kinda bothers me o-o
23:04 Vicho: it doesn't fit very well
23:04 Vicho: I would do this http://puu.sh/8Lwlh.jpg
23:04 Sekai-nyan: why xD
23:06 Sekai-nyan: ok =3=
23:07 Vicho: also, why you follow the vocals here 00:47:595 - and not here 00:51:649 - o.o?
23:07 Sekai-nyan: i guess it fixed other wise
23:07 Sekai-nyan: i followed the music here
23:07 Sekai-nyan: lol
23:07 Sekai-nyan: finishs
23:08 Vicho: lol
23:08 Sekai-nyan: and it fits xD
23:08 Vicho: it feels like you first followed vocals, because those "sharara sharara" xD
23:08 Sekai-nyan: oh well
23:09 Vicho: well, yeah it kinda fits xD
23:09 Sekai-nyan: Vicho pls
23:11 Vicho: sure
23:12 Sekai-nyan: i'm so evil lol
23:12 Vicho: anyways, the last thing I would do is moving 00:51:649 (1,1,1) - to 00:51:920 -
23:12 Vicho: and then add a single note here 00:51:649 -
23:14 Sekai-nyan: but the stream D:
23:14 Vicho: hmm
23:14 Vicho: you're right
23:14 Vicho: hmm
23:14 Vicho: damn
23:14 Sekai-nyan: lol
23:16 Sekai-nyan: ok
23:16 Sekai-nyan: i think i fixed the last slider with a single note
23:16 Sekai-nyan: it also fit
23:16 Vicho: yay
23:16 Vicho: then, this is perfect now =w=
23:16 Vicho: perfect map <3
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks bakaflow for your mod and Vicho for the nice irc mod :3

fixed everything on my hard, and updated Yomi's diff o3o/
-Teina-
hey~ nyan-san.

From as request.

Black : suggestion

[General]
  1. Colours : left two colours which is similar?

Hana ( flower ? )
  1. 01:12:325 (4) - move to X:236 Y:162. You used straight triple except here. I think it is strange.
  2. 01:26:244 - change volume more lowly? around 15%~20%

    Some tips.
  3. About the Stack Leniency. 00:09:217 (3,4,5) -

    You can move right and down one grid. I may be move smooth.

K.Penguin's Normal
  1. 00:50:028 (2,1) - Do you want to overlap that?
  2. 00:52:460 - add note? this part is feel up and down (in the rhythm). But I think it is not same to 00:47:325 (1,2,3,4) - . I feel that 00:51:649 (1,2) - is faster that 00:47:325 (1,2,3,4) - .Do you like to add note here or you can make this two part different.
  3. 01:06:784 (1) - move to X:453 Y:206 to overlap with 01:04:622 (1) - ?
  4. 01:26:244 - change volume lowly? around 15%~20%

Yomi's Easy
  1. Video offset 0 > 1600
  2. Remove Widescreen Support
  3. 01:26:244 - change volume more lowly? around 15%~20%

Nice map~
(╯°□°)╯彡
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Teller for your mod and star <3

Fixed everything on hard and normal owo/
Satellite
Hi again.

[General]
  1. fine
[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:19:757 (2) - add whistle on return? and volume down -10%
  2. 00:22:460 (4) - remove whistle and 00:23:001 (5) - add whistle better?
  3. 00:38:676 (3) - add whistle on end.
  4. 01:06:784 (1) - add Finish. same as other diff.
  5. 01:19:757 (5) - Missed New combo on purpose? I think a New combo fits better anyhow.
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:37:325 (2) - Try an arrange like this. I think more fit this song.
  2. 00:43:001 (1) - why stop blue line? It's not fit. Please change different patterns.
[Hana]
  1. 00:04:082 (1,2,3) - More better placement~
    188,156,4082,6,0,P|152:124|96:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    192,244,4622,2,0,P|237:228|272:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    112,204,5163,2,0,P|102:251|123:303,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:30:433 (3) - overmap? remove note better.
  3. 01:01:379 (6) - add Sampleset : N ?
Nice mapset ~ owo/ Good luck.
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Satellite for your mod <3

fixed everything on normal and hard!
Delis
I'm here for NISEKOI

[General]
  1. The BG looks low quality a bit :| however okay for me and that was my avatar on skype for a while
  2. The current offset is kind of early, try out offset: 1910 (-10) this offset better for None and DT to me, but I suppose this is not perfect offset for the song, you need few opinions about the offset from others.
[Hana]
00:10:153 (7) - add drum-clap at here, and add drum-finish at 00:10:163 (7) - , these will follow back sound of drums, it sound better=3=.
00:13:947 (4) - you can add clap or something to follow the sound of ....drum? I don't know what this sound is, anyway ignore this if you want to keep the consistency of hitsounds, or don't want to add clap and whistle at same point.
00:20:298 (2) - the stack doesn't comfortable to play for me, move to about x:392 y:340 with spacing x1.0, it feels better now!
00:40:838 (1) - I guess you forgot to add finish here :P .
00:49:487 (4) - You have to add NC here, make a consistent with other 2 reverses sliders.
00:54:622 (2) - add Sampleset : Normal?, I guess forgot to add here too.
00:54:892 (4) - add a drum-clap or finish on the tail, to follow the drum sound. both are match to the sound, I think.
01:04:612 (9) - ...was okay to play, I suggest you to reduce one reverse though. it seems will not cause to hard to read, but it would better if you make following back sound from 01:05:693 -. I mean, try out like this:
or make a triple at 01:06:379, both would nice for here=w=, if you apply above mod,add Sampleset : Normal on the tail and at 01:05:828 (10,12,13) - and add NC at 01:04:612 (9) -.
01:12:720 (6) - now this looks and flow to 01:12:720 (6) - from here is bad a bit, you can improve this like an image of below, sorry I'm really not good at make blanket orz.
01:14:207 (3) - you can add Sampleset : Normal here, since here is kind of similar sound as 01:14:072, it would be fit here!
01:14:082 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - personally don't like these 3 triplets, better to make 2 of streams of 5 if follow the back sound perfectly, but it will be quite hard for this diff, so I recommend this:

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:07:325 (3,4) - I recommend you to make a square for Normal diff, hah I personally don't like look randomly circles pattern, just a suggestion.
00:08:947 (2) - I'm not sure, add a drum-clap on reverse arrow? there's a similar sound as drum clap, but it louds for quiet part, reduce the volume by10 - 20 if you add it.
00:21:379 (1) - why Sampleset : Drum on the reverse and on the head at 00:23:001 (2) - ? only these were setting Sampleset : Drum in this part, maybe change them to Sampleset : Normal! and, make a symmetrical stright slider as 00:23:001 (2) -
00:37:325 (2) - add a whistle on the tail, nothing to say to add it, just i feel sound good!
00:43:001 (1) - you can make a same rhythm as 00:39:217 (2,3) - for consistency, and I prefer that one!
01:13:811 (1) - add Sampleset : Normal on the tail, it would match to drum sound here.
01:15:163 (3) - same as above.

[Yomi's Easy]
00:49:487 (1) - add a whistle on the head.
00:53:811 (1) - why 1/1 slider here, it slider's end should be at 00:54:622 -, it follows the vocal and drum sound, you can add Sampleset : Normal on the end if you change this
01:19:757 (5) - add NC

go
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks so much for the mod Delis :3

Fixed everything on it for normal and hard www
Meg
hi nyan :3
I'M NOT BAKA :cry:

General
  1. remove widescreen support only Easy
Yomi's Easy
  1. 00:21:369 (3) - NC?
  2. 00:30:018 (3) - ^
  3. 00:34:342 (3) - ^
  4. 00:34:342 (3) - ^
  5. 00:38:666 (3) - ^
  6. 00:42:450 - add clap
  7. 00:51:639 (3) - NC?
  8. 01:06:774 (1) - add finish
  9. 01:19:747 (5) - NC
  10. 01:21:910 - add finish?
K.Penguin's Normal
  1. 00:40:018 - add note
  2. 00:55:693 (6,1) - make spacing
  3. 01:14:882 - add clap
Hana
  1. 00:17:045 (1) - make beautiful blanket with 00:15:964 (3)
  2. 00:47:315 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:47:585 (2) - NC
  4. 00:52:450 (1) - remove NC?
  5. 01:04:612 (1) - how this rhythm?
kawaii song!
good luck~
Asagi
Hello Sekai-nyan :3
in-game PM req

[Hana]
  1. 00:09:882 - try to add a circle here, i can hear a drum sound on that blue tick, and it fits the drum roll
  2. 00:14:612 (6) - why this circle isnt on the center? wwww
  3. 00:16:774 (4) - ^
  4. 00:17:045 (1) - nazi, better blanket here
  5. 00:25:693 (1) - i think this slider is kinda bit off? let say it that, maybe you can move this more on left, for smoother flow, and just adjust the other circles next to it
  6. 00:34:882 (4) - nazi, better blanket
  7. 00:35:423 (5,6) - try curving this slider, it looks nice and better flow for me
  8. 00:36:504 (1) - this slider can improve more, try to put the red anchor and tail anchor on the center of the grid
  9. 00:48:126 (1,1) - try to remove NC here? since they are on the same stanza, better not to overuse NC ,try to consider it
  10. 00:52:450 (1,1) - ^same as here
  11. 00:48:937 (3) - nazi, poor blanket
  12. 00:49:477 (1) - ^
  13. 00:54:882 (4) - why dont you make it symmetrical with 00:53:801 (1) - ? i think it has a better flow that the straight slider you have
  14. 00:55:964 - try to add note here with NC, to emphasize the spinner well, dont forget to readjust the spinner
  15. 01:17:585 (1,1,2,3) - looks like the pattern here is forced to put here, i know you can make a better pattern here
  16. 01:22:180 (1) - if this spinner is following the vocals put the spinner start here, 01:22:045 , dont forget to adjust

I checked the other diffs, just a very minor stuff and i didnt mind to point out www
ヾ(・ω・*)ノ
Good Luck :D
Chirony
Hi~
from PM request!

[Hana]
  1. 00:05:693 (4) - add whistle (tail)
  2. 00:34:882 (4) - better to use same DS before.
  3. 00:46:234 (3) - change sampleset to auto and use normal sampleset to 00:46:369 (4)
  4. 00:49:477 (1) - blanket use is good 00:48:937 (3)
  5. 01:22:045 - spinner start is here?
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:52:450 (2) - sampleset is normal?
  2. try this. I think flow is better
[Yomi's Easy]
  1. try this
  2. 00:42:180 (2) - add whistle (head)?
  3. 01:19:747 (5) - NC?
short mod sorry...
I hope the mod helps you!
good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding guys, so much helpful suggestions <3

fixed most of the stuff on normal and hard =w=b
Laurier
yo

General
you should use more many "moe" to name of mp3.

Easy
00:11:639 (2,3,4) - try symmetrical pattern. like this http://puu.sh/8LQla.jpg
00:21:369 (3) - add NIC to here. and you should change NC pattern. like this http://puu.sh/8LQCU.jpg
00:40:828 (1) - add clap with Drum Additions.
01:11:099 (1) - a little strange flow. try another one. http://puu.sh/8LQMR.jpg
01:13:261 (1,1) - too near with spinner. try this one. http://puu.sh/8LRe5.jpg
01:19:747 (5) - NC from your patterns

Normal
00:13:531 - add note to follow the vocal ?
00:32:180 (4) - add NC from your patterns
00:32:180 (4) - move to x148y321 . it makes perfect stack with 00:50:018 (2) -
00:59:747 (4,5,1) - try this flow ? http://puu.sh/8LREZ.jpg
01:06:774 (1) - move to x454y206 same issue as 00:32:180 (4) -

Hard
00:06:234 (1) - how about this form ? those curves are pretty fit to song. http://puu.sh/8LROi.jpg
00:12:720 (1) - make a blanket with 00:11:369 (2) - . it will be good art for your map. http://puu.sh/8LRSZ.jpg
00:14:882 (1) - same as 00:06:234 (1) - It looks better if you arrange something. http://puu.sh/8LS0x.jpg
00:19:207 (1) - blanket issue. move to 1~2 grid right.
00:52:991 (4) - use sampleset normal ?
00:54:882 (4) - end at 00:55:693 - with follow the vocal ? http://puu.sh/8LScv.jpg
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Laurier o3o/

Fixed everything on your mod! on hard and mostly on normal too =w=/

And yes i should've used more moe on the mp3 ;w; orz
Genkishi
Yo Sekai-nyan :3

From in-game pm request


[General]

-I don't see any problem here

[Yomi's Easy]

01:05:964 (5) - Add a clap at the head of the slider? Like it's a clap clap sound
01:15:433 (x) - I think the volume here seems a bit loud. Try copying the volume in this timing point 00:21:379, it's more relaxing to hear for me since the song is about to end.
01:15:423 (x) - This part is like the sound in 00:01:910, so why don't you put whistle on all the notes and sliders just like you did on 00:01:910?

[K.Penguin's Normal]
-Why don't you put Penguin's Normal instead? it's much cuter haha :D ..Well it's up to you, just a suggestion.

00:17:855 (2) - Move this to the middle line so it aligns with circle (4)
00:53:801 (4) - Add new combo here
00:40:288 (5) - I think it's bad to have a spacing problem if it's easy or normal..so i guess use distance snap for this
01:05:964 (2) - Just like i said in yomi's easy diff, put a clap on the head of the slider?

[Hana]

01:01:639 (7) - Add clap here just like i said on the other diffs
01:14:882 (1) - Remove new combo here then add one on 01:15:423 (5)


That's All i can find! :D

GoodLuck Sekai~! :)
Lust
[General]
  1. Looks fine to me
[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:01:910 (1,2,3) - Blanket can be improved. Use 00:03:531 (2) - 's approach circle to help you in fixing this
  2. 00:13:261 (4,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved. Use 00:14:882 (1) - 's approach circle to assist you in fixing this
  3. 00:19:747 (2) - Flow is a bit awkward with this reverse slider, try this to improve the flow and make way for some nice structure as well
  4. 00:23:531 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 00:25:153 (2) - 's approach circle to help you fix this
  5. 00:58:126 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:11:099 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with the next combo?
  7. 01:24:207 (1) - I would use the default whistle here
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 00:21:369 (1) - This object goes up pretty high, to improve flow I would try something like this as well as avoid any potential overlap with the lifebar. The reverse makes a sling in to the next pattern, and I found it plays really nicely!
  2. 00:32:180 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Use 00:33:801 (2) - 's approach circle to fix this
  3. 00:39:207 (2,3) - I would try to avoid the stack. There is a lot to read here, and the stack will make it significantly more difficult for players to well, hit accurately. This is put in consideration with 00:40:018 (4,5) - . Also you rarely have stacking in the difficulty, so to keep consistency its best to unstack
  4. 01:24:207 (1) - Same hitsound suggestion as in Easy
[Hana]
Really clean hard at this point, nothing much to say!
  1. 00:04:072 (1,2,3,4) - I really like how this pattern plays with this song!
  2. 01:24:207 (1) - Same hitsound suggestion as in Easy
Good luck with the speed rank ;o
Hinsvar
Hello; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Yomi's Easy
  1. 00:06:234 (1,2) - These notes look kinda messy... at least for me. Try moving (2) to (352,140) to make them look like this? Looks neater and creates a better flow. You might need to rearrange the objects after this a lot, though.
  2. 00:21:369 - Don't you think you should restart the combo pattern here (by NC-ing 00:21:369 (3), removing the NC at 00:23:531 (1), then NC 00:25:693 (3) and so on; basically, start to use NCs every two stanzas from 00:21:369 (3) instead of 00:19:207 (1))? It's hard to explain (I keep using this line...), but I think the rhythm of the music is also restarting here, so it would make more sense for the combo to follow it.
  3. 00:41:910 - Add a whistle here since the instrument on this tick is similar as the one at 00:40:828, and that one has a whistle too? This tick also feels empty without any hitsounding, IMO...
  4. 00:49:477 - Add a whistle to continue following the piano's sound like 00:47:855 (2,3,4)? I can't see why should you break the pattern here.
  5. 00:58:666 - Add a whistle to emphasize the instrument other than the one you've emphasized with a clap?
  6. 01:02:991 - ^ (Applies to similar cases.)
  7. 01:19:747 (5,6,7) - Not too important, but you might want to make a cool blanket pattern like this instead of the current pattern, which looks kinda dull compared to the patterns that you've made before.
>K.Penguin's Normal
  1. 00:08:937 - I think using the Drum's whistle is too much to emphasize the instrument here. Just remove the whistle and keep the Drum sampleset?
  2. 00:11:639 - Use Soft addition and add a whistle? I just think that it fits with the instruments here very well, alongside the Normal sampleset.
  3. 00:13:261 - Add a whistle? Kinda the same reason as the suggestion above.
  4. 00:14:882 - ^
  5. 00:47:315 - 00:53:261 - Try to use Soft addition with whistles for every object on the white ticks? Again, I think they fit the instruments nicely. Up to you, though.
>Hana
  1. 00:05:693 (4) - Try to change the slider to three circles like this? A triplet at 00:05:964 (5,6,1) fits with the song well. It just feels weird to leave 00:06:099 out for some reason...
  2. 00:25:693 (1) - Make it curved like this for a better flow from 00:25:423 (6)? You only need to move the node in the middle of (1) to (36,200).
  3. 00:38:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you try to make a triangle like this? Looks neater, I think.
  4. 00:47:855 - 00:53:261 - Replace all finishes on the white tick (except 00:51:639) with a whistle? I feel that a finish is too heavy compared to the sound of the instruments that are being played here. Whistles would fit better.
  5. 00:53:801 (1,4) - Make them look like this for neatness (again)?
  6. 01:03:261 (4) - Move to (476,148) for a better flow from 01:02:450 (3)? You'll definitely have to rearrange a few objects to do this, though.
  7. 01:14:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move them to (224,100) so the spacing at 01:14:612 (5,1,2,3,4,5) will be consistent while playing? Because of the stacking effect at 01:14:882 (1,2,3,4,5), 01:14:612 (5,1) is too close to each other right now.
...This is why I don't want to mod unmotivated; even when I'm feeling like it, my mod is still crappy lol

Well, that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thank you guys for your great mods <3 owo/

fixed everything on hard and normal =w=b
ShiraKai
hello=~=

[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:29:477 (2) - add whistle?
  2. 01:05:964 (5) - add clap ? same as Normal diff.
  3. 01:19:747 (5) - add NC
[K.Penguin's Normal]
nice diff :D

[Hana]
  1. 00:35:423 (5,6) - change to Smooth form? (http://puu.sh/8N4ZU.jpg)
  2. 00:48:666 (1,2,3) - move it x207,y201 ?
  3. 00:48:937 (3) - add whistle on end? follow the vocal ;)
very very very cute song & nice mapset!!!
Good Luck :oops:
P A N
[Hana]

00:09:477 (5) - make a bit curve for better flow? http://puu.sh/8N4Mg.jpg
00:19:207 (1) - don't make this slider slow like 00:17:045 (1) too? 0.0
00:51:910 (2,3) - I think triple circle is more fit with vocal like you did earlier.
00:55:964 - what about this rhythm. add whsitle on 1 2 3 and clap on 4, I think it's more fit than spinner ;w; http://puu.sh/8N57z.jpg example pattern: http://puu.sh/8N5aP.jpg
01:04:072 (8) - better blanket?
01:09:477 (4,5,6,7,8) - what about make it more symmetry? http://puu.sh/8N5pA.jpg
01:13:261 (1) - better blanket? D:
01:14:612 (5) - 1 grid right? spacing here feel not balance.
01:22:450 (6,7) - add this instead of first spinner? http://puu.sh/8N5JZ.jpg

[Penguin]

00:13:531 (2,3) - hmm move to 496|164 , 464|116? to make a bit curve for better flow.
00:32:180 (1) - remove NC? the combo will too short imo.
00:40:288 (5) - make it parallel with 3? looks a bit weird :X

[Yomi]

00:19:747 (2) - whistle on reverse and clap on tail?
00:22:450 (4,5) - swap whistle?
00:23:531 (1) - add whistle on reverse?
00:25:153 (2) - add whistle?
00:54:882 - add another 1/1 slider and start the spinner on the next 1/1 beat instead? it's more fit imo.
01:19:747 (5) - NC? it's almost end and the combo is too long so I think it's not a problem.

that's all good luck!
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