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Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-08T09:20:02+00:00

Update on N a s y a's part and LunarSakuya's part <3 Thanks!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2016-03-09T17:35:07+00:00

[Collab]

01:07:258 (1) - 02:49:452 (1) - 1/6と1/4だと思う
04:21:581 (1,2,3) - こういうのどうですか？

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2016-03-12T15:17:13+00:00

senya - Satete no Kotoba

[LunarSakuya's part]

03:12:387 (6,7) - whistle?
01:34:742 (3) - change straight slider ?
because, 01:33:194 (3,6,6) - this slider is straight.

[Narcissu's part]

03:57:194 (3) - x:160 y:308

[Satellite's pantsu]

05:43:258 (3) - x:216 y:41

very good
せやな～

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-13T02:27:29+00:00

LunarSakuya part and my part all fixed thank you for mod!

and add Name SB. please reDL. thank you eLy

Haruru

215 posts

Joined May 2010

Haruru 2016-03-13T06:08:05+00:00

初投稿です。
遅くなってすみません体調崩してました

01:44:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make quintuple and triplet like http://i.imgur.com/dZonMe4.png ?
03:42:097 (7) - NC here ?

譜面最高すぎて言うことなかったです。
以上です。頑張ってください。

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-13T10:35:08+00:00

Fixed Haruru's mod on LunarSakuya part !

All diff upload. and Thank you everyone

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-03-15T01:08:54+00:00

fix all √

SPOILER

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Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-15T09:05:45+00:00

Upload ! :>

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-15T11:01:33+00:00

yo

General:

¨Collab¨ diff name is not something that I'd use, because it doesn't tell me the lvl of difficutly, since there can be Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Extra collabs. So please consider using something else ¨Collab Insane¨ or ¨Collab insert special diff name¨

Collab

Hitsounds:

01:10:742 - 01:13:839 - 01:23:129 - 01:26:226 - 02:52:936 - 03:08:420 - slider-ticks with the same volume as normal hitsounds (circles, slider head/tail) sounds bad and can be confused for players, so I highly suggest you to reduce the volume for 10% or 15% at those places
00:43:258 - to 01:08:033 - have much volume changes, but 02:25:452 - to 02:50:226 - have no volume changes, take in consideration both places are the same in the music, hitsouning have to be consistent as well
00:55:645 (1) - mising finish on head
03:29:710 (1,2) - almost inaudible, tbh I have hard time to hear this, use like 40% or 50% here.

Satellite:

00:06:484 (3,4) - please follow vocal instead, since is louder (even your hitsounding feels better if you do), try:
00:21:581 (2) - Should be a NC here, since the gap is so far from 00:20:033 (1) -
00:37:452 (3,1) - don't overlap this for better design, also you didn't at 00:40:162 (3) -
01:12:678 (5) - missing NC
01:20:033 (1) - remove this NC and add one at 01:20:420 (5) - according to the music and your previous pattern at 01:18:291 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
02:49:452 - same suggestion as LunarSakuya part in 01:07:258 -
05:41:323 (1) - don't need to NC here, but in 05:42:484 (5) - , if you notice the fun bell sound start at 05:42:484 (5) - which are the same in the music with 05:42:871 (1,2,3,4) - so add NC in 05:42:484 (5) - and remove from 05:42:871 (1) -

Lunarsakuya

00:50:807 (4,1) - nazi, fix blanket
00:47:420 (6,7) - don't overlap this? since you didn't overlap at 00:59:516 (3,4) -
01:03:387 (4) - missing NC
01:07:258 (1) - btw the snap isn't correct, here is like 4 am, but I only can hear a 1/8 triplet and a 1/4s after it, try:
01:44:420 (9) - add NC like satellite did at 00:39:387 (1) -
02:52:742 (3,4,1) - so weird to play, use more spacing please >:
03:08:226 (5,6,1) - same ^

Narcissu

04:07:258 (1) - remove NC, it doesn't follow nothing and don't represent anything in the song

Nasya:

04:10:355 - don't ignore this sound in the music, is super important and loud, try something like:
04:14:613 (3) - this slider is missing 1 repeat, remember to fix the spacing when you apply this
04:16:162 this sound is really important in the music, shouldn't be ignored, just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of 1/1 at 04:15:968 (4) -
04:43:258 (1,2) - use a slider instead of circles, since a slider fit the vocals and music better, also is consistent with 04:43:645 (3,4,5) -
04:46:936 (2,3) - ctrl G rhythm fit better the strong sounds in the music
04:47:516 (1) - similar as above, but here use 1/2 slider + a circle

Let me know

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-03-15T11:43:19+00:00

@Satellite: help me remove the NC and change vomule

N a s y a

510 posts

Joined March 2012

N a s y a 2016-03-15T12:20:13+00:00

Thank(´･ω･)(´_ _)you♪

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240,268,247645,5,6,0:1:0:0:
266,257,247742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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189,110,248226,1,2,0:1:0:0:
164,96,248323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,83,248420,2,0,L|75:50,2,40,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,197,248807,1,2,0:1:0:0:
110,329,249000,1,2,0:1:0:0:
110,329,249097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,329,249194,6,0,P|169:325|197:313,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
310,163,249581,2,0,P|261:162|210:180,1,80,2|0,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
98,82,249968,1,2,3:1:0:0:
148,282,250162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,282,250258,2,2,P|214:282|271:252,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
381,180,250742,5,2,0:1:0:0:
371,153,250839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,126,250936,2,0,L|341:66,2,40,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,224,251323,1,2,0:1:0:0:
199,251,251420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,278,251516,2,0,L|183:350,2,40,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,174,251903,1,2,3:1:0:0:
119,35,252097,1,2,0:1:0:0:
119,35,252194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,35,252291,6,2,B|162:72|162:72|224:64|269:90,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
429,237,252871,2,2,L|320:255,1,80,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:1:0:0:
150,174,253258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,338,253452,1,2,0:1:0:0:
205,338,253549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,338,253645,1,2,0:1:0:0:
205,338,253742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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219,86,254613,2,0,L|170:76,2,40,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,189,255000,2,2,L|459:173,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
336,72,255387,5,4,0:0:0:0:
247,193,255581,1,2,0:1:0:0:
341,303,255774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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290,39,256549,1,2,0:1:0:0:
263,211,256742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,129,256936,6,2,L|181:110,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
342,195,257226,2,2,L|229:219,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
220,325,257516,1,2,0:1:0:0:
49,194,257710,2,2,P|102:199|170:166,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
245,176,258097,2,0,L|228:66,1,80,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
143,6,258484,5,6,0:0:0:0:
97,129,258678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,203,258871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,128,259065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,289,259258,5,0,3:0:0:0:
341,298,259355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,308,259452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,317,259549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,327,259645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
202,336,259742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,346,259839,2,0,L|121:360,1,40,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,329,260033,6,0,L|50:153,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,204,260807,2,0,B|257:224|210:228|210:228|176:284,2,120
216,134,261581,5,4,0:0:0:0:
278,327,261774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,295,261968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,295,262355,2,2,L|101:162,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,64,263129,6,0,L|129:48,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,165,263516,2,0,P|229:173|293:145,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,158,263903,2,0,L|381:74,1,80
224,224,264291,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,264,264678,6,0,P|360:280|328:308,1,120
268,352,265065,2,0,L|176:336,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,265452,1,2,3:2:0:0:
104,213,265839,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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272,364,266613,2,0,L|284:268,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,112,267000,2,0,P|156:132|132:148,1,80
48,64,267387,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,252,267774,6,0,P|124:232|184:236,1,120
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440,156,268549,1,2,3:2:0:0:
488,304,268936,1,10,0:0:0:0:
440,156,269323,6,0,L|452:56,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,24,269710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,164,269903,2,0,P|144:160|108:112,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,12,270484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,84,270678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,364,271258,2,0,L|215:276,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,271645,2,0,P|344:168|428:152,1,160,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,162,272420,6,0,L|384:266,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,356,272807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,268,273000,2,0,L|176:292,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,213,273387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,267,273581,1,10,0:0:0:0:
93,331,273774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,215,273968,6,0,P|239:151|231:111,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,29,274355,1,10,0:0:0:0:
87,141,274549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,253,274742,2,0,L|357:233,1,80,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,105,275129,2,2,L|47:137,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,212,275516,6,0,P|68:212|132:252,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,308,275903,1,10,0:0:0:0:
386,333,276291,2,0,L|374:221,1,80
342,95,276678,2,0,P|270:135|214:135,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,92,277065,6,0,L|145:184,2,80,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,284,277839,2,0,P|320:292|228:312,1,80,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,195,278226,2,0,P|122:179|186:179,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,316,278613,6,0,L|388:339,1,120
462,288,279000,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,128,279387,2,0,P|216:128|156:172,1,120
96,100,279774,2,0,L|108:12,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,280162,6,0,L|264:88,1,120
308,36,280549,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,280,280936,2,0,P|248:308|328:312,1,120,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,344,281323,2,0,L|404:240,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,100,281710,5,6,0:0:0:0:
290,223,281903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,113,282097,2,0,P|144:117|93:138,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,264,282484,2,0,L|32:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,375,282871,2,0,L|208:281,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,283258,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,176,283452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,280,283645,2,0,P|132:268|100:244,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,120,284420,2,0,L|176:216,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,367,284903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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445,325,285387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,300,285484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,288000,12,0,290226,0:0:0:0:

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Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2016-03-15T12:22:13+00:00

Natsu is moe

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-15T14:00:21+00:00

Natsu wrote:
yo

General:

¨Collab¨ diff name is not something that I'd use, because it doesn't tell me the lvl of difficutly, since there can be Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Extra collabs. So please consider using something else ¨Collab Insane¨ or ¨Collab insert special diff name¨
Changed

Collab

Hitsounds:

01:10:742 - 01:13:839 - 01:23:129 - 01:26:226 - 02:52:936 - 03:08:420 - slider-ticks with the same volume as normal hitsounds (circles, slider head/tail) sounds bad and can be confused for players, so I highly suggest you to reduce the volume for 10% or 15% at those places
Changed
00:43:258 - to 01:08:033 - have much volume changes, but 02:25:452 - to 02:50:226 - have no volume changes, take in consideration both places are the same in the music, hitsouning have to be consistent as well
No changed. I think 00:43:258 - this part not much Finish.
00:55:645 (1) - mising finish on head
same as above. this song part not much finish sound.
03:29:710 (1,2) - almost inaudible, tbh I have hard time to hear this, use like 40% or 50% here.
Changed

Satellite:

00:06:484 (3,4) - please follow vocal instead, since is louder (even your hitsounding feels better if you do), try:

ahh yes. you are right. but sorry i follow this part on back rhythm ;w;
00:21:581 (2) - Should be a NC here, since the gap is so far from 00:20:033 (1) -
Changed
00:37:452 (3,1) - don't overlap this for better design, also you didn't at 00:40:162 (3) -
ah yes. pattern you are right. but i think it's fine ;w;
01:12:678 (5) - missing NC
Changed
01:20:033 (1) - remove this NC and add one at 01:20:420 (5) - according to the music and your previous pattern at 01:18:291 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
Other part add Nc. place here 01:21:194 (1) -
02:49:452 - same suggestion as LunarSakuya part in 01:07:258 -
done
05:41:323 (1) - don't need to NC here, but in 05:42:484 (5) - , if you notice the fun bell sound start at 05:42:484 (5) - which are the same in the music with 05:42:871 (1,2,3,4) - so add NC in 05:42:484 (5) - and remove from 05:42:871 (1) -
I think following melody this song ;w;
Let me know

All diff upload ~ thank you for mod Natsu!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-15T17:01:06+00:00

02:52:742 (3,4,1) - 03:08:226 (5,6,1) - this stacks are so hard to notice in game, take a look:

SPOILER

Just do something like:

SPOILER
Can you change the combo Color 1, is hard to read at some sectors of your background

let me know once you fix this and I'll

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-15T18:44:57+00:00

Fixed all ~

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-15T18:51:48+00:00

Me gusta

#1

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-03-15T19:21:45+00:00

wrath of Lunar★Sakuya

#2

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2016-03-15T19:23:54+00:00

wa!

thank you Natsu and lfj <3

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2016-03-15T19:48:31+00:00

wow~ gogogogo!

-Yukarii-

-Yukarii- 2016-03-16T14:54:00+00:00

OSU! NEED MORE SENYA <33333 AND TOUHOU :3
PD: Great map

Giralda

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Joined August 2012

Giralda 2016-03-17T02:59:48+00:00

hype? :O

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-17T03:00:26+00:00

Giralda wrote:
hype? :O

seems so

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-03-17T03:42:47+00:00

Modded via IRC.

Log

2016-03-16 20:30 Satellite: Hello Gero san :D Can I qualify request
2016-03-16 20:30 Satellite: ~ ? o.o
2016-03-16 20:30 Gero: yes you can
2016-03-16 20:30 Gero: which mapset?
2016-03-16 20:31 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/174417
2016-03-16 20:31 Satellite: #1 #2 now =w=
2016-03-16 20:31 Gero: dling
2016-03-16 20:31 Gero: wanna IRC mod?
2016-03-16 20:31 Satellite: if you want >< I'm free ww lol
2016-03-16 20:31 Gero: alright then, I'm dling it =3=
2016-03-16 20:32 Satellite: want to add tag lol
2016-03-16 20:32 Gero: sure you can add them once we finished with the IRC modding tho
2016-03-16 20:32 Gero: just let me know what you wanna add in?
2016-03-16 20:33 Satellite: "yuuhei" to tag lol
2016-03-16 20:33 Satellite: mean circle name "yuuhei Satellite" Satellite is my name so ignore lol just only "yuuhei" to tag :D
2016-03-16 20:34 Gero: oh alright, it's okay for me 
2016-03-16 20:35 Gero: metadata is fine right?
2016-03-16 20:35 Satellite: fine!
2016-03-16 20:35 Satellite: Saihate no Kotoba "最果てのコトバ" source please wait
2016-03-16 20:35 Satellite: http://www.yuuhei-satellite.jp/1392
2016-03-16 20:35 Satellite: :D
2016-03-16 20:36 Satellite: ah i forgot some tag "yuuhei" "ikuo" "onryo" "音霊" to tag lol
2016-03-16 20:37 Satellite: http://puu.sh/nJlSm/f56d474d2f.png
2016-03-16 20:38 Gero: sure
2016-03-16 20:38 Satellite: Can i update =w= ?
2016-03-16 20:39 Gero: sure go ahead
2016-03-16 20:39 Gero: we can start the mod after that 
2016-03-16 20:39 Satellite: k =w=
2016-03-16 20:41 Satellite: upload ~
2016-03-16 20:41 Gero: already? alright
2016-03-16 20:41 Gero: I'll redl it again
2016-03-16 20:42 Satellite: Thank you ;w;
2016-03-16 20:43 Gero: damn it, my internet is so fucking slow hahahaha
2016-03-16 20:43 Satellite: file size rip
2016-03-16 20:44 Satellite: 8.92mb 030
2016-03-16 20:45 Gero: QAQ
2016-03-16 20:45 Gero: finally xD
2016-03-16 20:45 Gero: damn it wait a second let me relog
2016-03-16 20:46 Gero: could you np it again?
2016-03-16 20:47 Satellite: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/905424 senya - Saihate no Kotoba [Ghostly]]
2016-03-16 20:47 Satellite: :D
2016-03-16 20:48 Gero: wait a bit please, my PC is being troll with me xD
2016-03-16 20:49 Satellite: it's oka =w=
2016-03-16 20:49 Gero: can you update it again?
2016-03-16 20:49 Gero: it doesn't export to my osu! after downloading again
2016-03-16 20:49 Gero: dunno why
2016-03-16 20:50 Satellite: download bug ?
2016-03-16 20:50 Gero: yes
2016-03-16 20:50 Satellite: kk
2016-03-16 20:51 Satellite: done!
2016-03-16 20:51 Gero: ty =v=
2016-03-16 20:52 Gero: dling once again xD 
2016-03-16 20:52 Gero: I'm sorry for it QAQ
2016-03-16 20:52 Satellite: No problem ~ :3
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: ah
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: i
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: forgot again
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: tag www
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: update ok =w= ?
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: ah
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: sorry
2016-03-16 20:54 Gero: update it once we finish the mod if is okay for you xD
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: No problem mistake :D
2016-03-16 20:54 Satellite: baka ... ><
2016-03-16 20:56 Gero: btw add Collaboration too
2016-03-16 20:56 Satellite: ah okay :D
2016-03-16 20:56 Gero: I think you forgot that as well
2016-03-16 20:56 Gero: okay let's start it
2016-03-16 20:56 Satellite: add
2016-03-16 21:00 Gero: 00:15:774 (2,2) - both sliders are okay but somehow the strong beat is at the tail of these two so I'd like to short it by 1/2 and adding one circle at the white tick if is possible, something like [http://gero.s-ul.eu/TSxCNquA this*]
2016-03-16 21:01 Satellite: okay I'll changed
2016-03-16 21:02 Gero: 00:32:420 (1) - is not off-screen but could you move it a little bit up since it's so out from the mapping area
2016-03-16 21:02 Satellite: yeah I know. but want to keep this place [http://puu.sh/nJndl/14d822b183.jpg ;w;]
2016-03-16 21:03 Gero: alright it's fine
2016-03-16 21:03 Satellite: thank you =w=
2016-03-16 21:03 Gero: 00:51:774 (3) - whistle at the head of the slider?
2016-03-16 21:03 Gero: 00:53:323 (3) - same as above, feels empty without something there
2016-03-16 21:03 Gero: 00:55:645 (1) - finish instead whistle due the change of the stanza and due the strong beat at here
2016-03-16 21:04 Satellite: add whistle but finish pattern keep. because this part about 00:43:258 - ~ 01:08:033 -  not much finish sound
2016-03-16 21:05 Satellite: I not changed Natsu mod too :D Natsu says this =w=
2016-03-16 21:05 Satellite: whistle is nice :D
2016-03-16 21:06 Gero: 01:18:097 (5) - how about to add a new combo here? it's way too long for it, anyways you also added one finish so that's quite obvious that it needs a new combo
2016-03-16 21:06 Satellite: 00:43:258 (1) - and 00:55:645 (1) - i know strong beat
2016-03-16 21:06 Satellite: but finish < whistle better :D
2016-03-16 21:06 Satellite: kk
2016-03-16 21:06 Satellite: add ~
2016-03-16 21:06 Gero:  sure is okey about the whistles and finishers, up to you anyway becase it's not a big deal at all
2016-03-16 21:07 Gero: 01:32:033 (6) - same as above, about the combos
2016-03-16 21:07 Gero: if you keep them as, it gonna be quite inconsistent if you ask me
2016-03-16 21:07 Satellite: changed =
2016-03-16 21:07 Satellite: add nc :D
2016-03-16 21:08 Satellite: 01:32:033 (1,2,3,4,5) - and move x313 y325
2016-03-16 21:08 Satellite: is okay ?
2016-03-16 21:08 Satellite: stack slider end http://puu.sh/nJnwU/aeff41260a.jpg
2016-03-16 21:08 Satellite: http://puu.sh/nJnwU/aeff41260a.jpg
2016-03-16 21:08 Gero: sure is fine
2016-03-16 21:09 Satellite: ty :D
2016-03-16 21:09 Gero: update it if you want
2016-03-16 21:09 Satellite: k
2016-03-16 21:09 Satellite: k upload
2016-03-16 21:09 Satellite: and sorry
2016-03-16 21:10 Satellite: 00:15:774 (2,2) - this is you are right. i know. but sorry i want to keep this ;w;
2016-03-16 21:10 Gero: hmm..
2016-03-16 21:10 Gero: okay
2016-03-16 21:10 Satellite: same pattern 00:18:871 (2) - :D
2016-03-16 21:10 Satellite: thank you ;w;
2016-03-16 21:10 Satellite: other all fixed ~
2016-03-16 21:11 Satellite: i forgot add whistle 01:00:871 (2) - here
2016-03-16 21:11 Satellite: sorry update ~
2016-03-16 21:12 Satellite: done :3
2016-03-16 21:15 Gero: 02:10:742 (5) - Add NC due the change of spacing and rhythm
2016-03-16 21:15 Satellite: k
2016-03-16 21:16 Gero: 01:42:871 (4) - same as above
2016-03-16 21:16 Satellite: k
2016-03-16 21:16 Gero: 03:00:678 (7) - same
2016-03-16 21:16 Gero: 03:01:839 (5) - ^^
2016-03-16 21:20 Gero: 04:16:936 (1,2) - This is not readable at all and I'm pretty sure that everybody they will fail in this part the first time they played at this, so I highly suggest you move them closer each other at the least
2016-03-16 21:20 Gero: the spacing is way too much
2016-03-16 21:21 Gero: 05:13:452 (5) - same reason about the new combo
2016-03-16 21:21 Satellite: 03:00:678 (7) - i think not need nc here :D
2016-03-16 21:21 Gero:  okay
2016-03-16 21:21 Satellite: 03:01:839 (5) - same as ><
2016-03-16 21:22 Satellite: 04:16:936 (1,2) - okay
2016-03-16 21:22 Gero:  that's all
2016-03-16 21:22 Gero: why 8.8 as AR?
2016-03-16 21:22 Gero: why not just 9? lol
2016-03-16 21:22 Satellite: 05:13:452 (1) - add
2016-03-16 21:22 Satellite: 9 is high
2016-03-16 21:22 Satellite: 8.5 is slow :D so 8.8 better :D
2016-03-16 21:22 Gero: increase the HP by 1 tick at the least
2016-03-16 21:23 Satellite: ah sorry 02:10:742 (5) -  and 05:13:452 (5) - not need Nc imo so keep other fixed!
2016-03-16 21:23 Gero: ok
2016-03-16 21:23 Gero: that's all, update it
2016-03-16 21:24 Satellite: okay please wait :D
2016-03-16 21:29 Satellite: uupload!
2016-03-16 21:32 Gero: no more changes now right?
2016-03-16 21:32 Satellite: Yeah :D
2016-03-16 21:32 Satellite: thank you for modding =w=
2016-03-16 21:32 Satellite: really helpful hitsound and placement pattern 030/
2016-03-16 21:34 Satellite: Thanks for check <3