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Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite
Thank you Sellenite ! and - H i N a - ! star support ~ :3

/me happy

=w=
MangakaMoka
63 posts
Joined March 2012
MangakaMoka
Hey, just played the updated vers of saihate. Nice. I wanna ask one thing: Why not make the stream on 01:59:129 (1) longer, maybe til 02:00:678 (1)? :o I feel more beat there like that :v

Still, really gj on there! Keep up the collab pls <3
remi5
54 posts
Joined March 2011
remi5
楽しみです！頑張って！ :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite

MangakaMoka wrote:

Hey, just played the updated vers of saihate. Nice. I wanna ask one thing: Why not make the stream on 01:59:129 (1) longer, maybe til 02:00:678 (1)? :o I feel more beat there like that :v

Still, really gj on there! Keep up the collab pls <3
Thank you check :3


rem1rya wrote:

楽しみです！頑張って！ :)
Thank you Support. I'll do my best ~ :3
Satellite
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Topic Starter
Satellite
Thank for Star support everyone Dx

my body is ready
Momovely
Momovely
☆彡
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
wmtokok
☆ support www :)
Satellite
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Satellite

Momovely wrote:

☆彡

wmtokok wrote:

☆ support www :)
Thank you Star support =w=/ I'll do my best :3 /me happy ww
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined December 2012
-Mo-
Shooting a ☆, good luck :)
Satellite
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Topic Starter
Satellite

-Mo- wrote:

Shooting a ☆, good luck :)
Thank you star support =w=
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
love the map take a ☆ <3
Satellite
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Topic Starter
Satellite

Its Depths wrote:

love the map take a ☆ <3
Thank you star support =o=
ramadwipa
ramadwipa
put this Kiai☆Time, Satellite-senpai
at 01:48:291 until 02:13:065
at 03:30:484 until 03:55:258
at 04:51:000 until 05:15:387 and then kiai again at 05:15:774 until 05:28:162
by the way, is the map not finish yet? at 04:07:645
i'll give 2 kudosu now, okay ;)
Satellite
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Topic Starter
Satellite
Thank you advice :3

Changed
wav file . combo color . setup
Pituophis
859 posts
Joined January 2015
Pituophis
is this dead or is this still being worked on?
Magic Girl
224 posts
Joined August 2013
Magic Girl
I THOUGHT YOU WOULD NEVER MAP THIS SONG THEN I FIND IT'S BEEN HERE FOR 2 YEARS FIBRGIOSFWOFB

Have some tags
Touhou Eiyashou Toho Arrange Album Yuuhei Recluse Satellite Words of the Farthest Ends Iceon Autobahn HiZuMi かませ虎 甘党 音霊 ikuo 幻視の夜　～ Ghostly Eyes Illusionary Imperishable Night Stage 1 Theme Vocal Trance LATEa* dairi 様 Mayumi Morinaga moimoi

And a star pew pew

I am a Touhou metadata freak please help these aren't even all the tags I put in my map of it

please rank bai
Pituophis
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Pituophis
:D
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
This is back, nice map satellite san :33

senya forever <3

☆
LigerZero
2,429 posts
Joined August 2013
LigerZero
Aorry i'm can't check tags...

But here i'm support with my support (i'm not have star sorry)



^ support version me
Satellite
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Joined June 2012
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Satellite
sorry for late! I'll do my best :3

thank you for star support! and some comment! xd
PEPOTTI
195 posts
Joined May 2010
PEPOTTI
軽く見て気になったとこだけ少し書いてみました。



[Collab]
01:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 6分の1スライダーの後、間髪おかずに連打が来るのが難しい気がしました
02:49:452 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^
03:51:774 (4) - Ctrl + G? 好みレベルで、スルーでいいと思います
04:07:645 (1) ~ 04:20:033 (1) - 連打が多く、またキックスライダーのDSも広く難しすぎる印象です。
04:20:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 上記の難しいゾーンが終わった後のこれは対応しづらいと思います。スライダー折り返しで代用するなど初見でも叩きやすい方がうれしいです。



Good luck~　プレイして楽しい譜面でした！！
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis
SPOILER
21:53 Delis: コラボメンバーころころかわってるしSBいれて
21:54 Satellite: わかる
21:54 Satellite: 作れないから誰かに頼むｗ
21:59 Delis: 01:21:774 (10) -
21:59 Delis: もうちょっと小さい感じがいい
22:00 Satellite: どのへん？
22:00 Delis: 01:21:774 (10) -
22:00 Delis: ここ
22:01 Delis: 思ったイメージーーよりジャンプが大きい
22:01 Satellite: どのへんにおけばいいかんじ？
22:01 Delis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4661681
22:01 Delis: こんぐらい
22:03 Satellite: 悩みどころ
22:05 Satellite: senya - Songs Compilation 2 いくか
22:05 Delis: 03:45:581 (8) - 流れが悪い
22:06 Satellite: ここは
22:06 Satellite: Narccisuみたいなひと
22:06 Delis: え
22:06 Delis: がいじん？
22:06 Satellite: そうｗ
22:06 Delis: じゃあ
22:06 Delis: postにかく
22:06 Satellite: skip is ok w
22:06 Satellite: ok!

03:29:710 (1) - I understand the drum clap is for the drum sound at music, though this doesn't sound really good for it imo. I would decrease the volume by a lot or just remove it, I don't honestly think this fits here.
03:45:581 (8) - flows bad, this should've been similar flow to 03:44:807 (4) - at least you could make this a decent curve slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4661721
03:55:258 (1) - if you stack this on the tail of 03:54:484 (9) - you will be pretending a pro mapper :D
04:13:839 (1) - 池沼だからよくわかんないけど1/2のほうが曲に合いそう、04:14:033 - の音が他のどの1/3の音より強いから、どうしても今の音取りが曲に対して一番良いように聴こえません。
04:50:807 - 何も思いつかないけど音が切れてるここに何かしらあってもいいかも、スピンのばすとか
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Homura-
a

[LunarSakuya]
  1. 03:09:581 (3) - 1,2のスライダーと同じように少し左に曲げませんか？ 個人的な意見ですが、曲げたほうが次のサークルに自然に流せる気がします
[Narcissu]
  1. 03:27:387 (7) - add soft-finish?
[N a s y a]
  1. 04:09:968 (7,8) - この音取り違和感ある　こうしない？

    or

  2. 04:20:807 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ムズイ
Last edited by Homura- , edited 1 time in total.
Cellina
1,004 posts
Joined March 2013
Cellina

Collab

  1. 00:08:420 (3) - ctrl g?
  2. 01:48:097 (5) - maybe try some larger ds
  3. 02:04:936 (4) - imo i think its overlap
  4. 02:30:871 (3,4,5,6) - ds is too small if you compare with 02:27:774 (3,4,5,6) -
  5. 03:10:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this is overmapping
  6. 05:14:807 (3) - larger ds between 05:15:000 (4,5,6) - ?
This map is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome, so I will shoot the star :3
Giralda
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Joined August 2012
Giralda
Applied the spacing suggestion from Reana~

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Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite
Update on Giralda part
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
Late M4M ,

莉格露·奈特巴格

For it is the collab diff , so


Satellite:

00:01:839 (3) - i perfer ctrl+g

00:05:710 (4,5,1,2) - how about this flow?
SPOILER

00:15:194 (9) - how about (308|184) flow like 00:16:936 (1,2) -

00:21:581 (2) - NC

00:39:774 (2) - why no ctrl+g ?

01:11:516 (2) - curved will be better

05:40:549 (3,4) - make them in a straight line



LunarSakuya:

00:46:742 (3,4,5) - this flow , next 5 at(272,324)will better than now(since i like pentagon-jump),maybe try this?
SPOILER

00:49:258 (3,4,1) - 4put on 00:49:839 (2) 's head? i think 4,1 should jump no 3,4

01:01:645 (5) - put(278,335)

01:04:162 (6) - curved will be better

01:07:065 (6) - reduce DS? (252,208)

01:56:807 (2) - ctrl+g

02:57:581 (4) - try (304,136)?

03:07:065 (7) - curved



Narcissu:

03:22:355 (4,1) - consider 03:23:516 (3,4) , this 4,1 each one ctrl+g will be better to play

03:27:000 (4,5,6) - try map like you do at 01:43:258 (8,9,1)



N a s y a:

04:47:129 finish bad here remove it

04:47:903 remove the Drum from Additions ,juse change to Auto

04:58:742 (1) - i perfer ctrl+g , for me i like map like this ,
SPOILER

sorry , if it is no so useful , star :)
zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
[Hentaillite]
00:15:387 (1) - slider tail forgot whistle?
01:16:936 (5,1) - maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4667199
01:32:033 (6) - NC pls! (

[LunarSakuya]
01:49:839 (5) - NC pls

fk no idk how to mod sorry
good luck ;w;
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
@PEPOTTI : i wish same direction

@Delis: same DS with slider head better than stack imo ↓↓↓

SPOILER

@Reana : can't map without overmap Orz , too many repeat rhythm

@moonlightleaf: i wish same direction

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other no reply = fix

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Satellite
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Update on Narcissu part! Thanks :3

and add some green line!
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Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite
Update on N a s y a's part and LunarSakuya's part <3 Thanks!
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Erisan
[Collab]
  1. 01:07:258 (1) - 02:49:452 (1) - 1/6と1/4だと思う
  2. 04:21:581 (1,2,3) - こういうのどうですか？
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Lecana
senya - Satete no Kotoba

[LunarSakuya's part]
  1. 03:12:387 (6,7) - whistle?
    01:34:742 (3) - change straight slider ?
    because, 01:33:194 (3,6,6) - this slider is straight.
[Narcissu's part]
  1. 03:57:194 (3) - x:160 y:308
[Satellite's pantsu]
  1. 05:43:258 (3) - x:216 y:41

very good
せやな～
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite
LunarSakuya part and my part all fixed thank you for mod!

and add Name SB. please reDL. thank you eLy
Haruru
215 posts
Joined May 2010
Haruru
初投稿です。
遅くなってすみません体調崩してました

01:44:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make quintuple and triplet like http://i.imgur.com/dZonMe4.png ?
03:42:097 (7) - NC here ?

譜面最高すぎて言うことなかったです。
以上です。頑張ってください。
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Satellite
Fixed Haruru's mod on LunarSakuya part !

All diff upload. and Thank you everyone :D
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
fix all √

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160,308,237194,1,10,0:0:0:0:
388,252,237387,2,0,P|416:180|392:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,44,237968,2,0,L|208:36,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,106,238355,6,0,B|50:118|50:118|164:108,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,168,238936,2,0,P|44:240|84:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,239516,2,0,P|260:116|248:56,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,239903,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,192,240097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,108,240291,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,304,240484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,192,240678,2,0,L|364:88,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,252,241065,2,0,L|464:356,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,241452,6,0,P|308:292|384:316,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,242226,2,0,P|88:284|12:260,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,21,243000,6,0,P|176:98|196:176,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,243581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,208,243678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,208,243774,2,0,B|332:260|332:260|320:388,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,268,244355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,244549,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,240,244645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,240,244742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,152,244936,2,0,L|184:144,2,40,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,245323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,120,245420,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,120,245516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,268,245710,2,0,L|184:272,2,40,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,246097,5,0,3:0:0:0:
292,70,246194,1,0,3:0:0:0:
263,57,246291,1,0,3:0:0:0:
231,53,246387,1,0,3:0:0:0:
200,58,246484,1,0,3:0:0:0:
171,72,246581,1,0,3:0:0:0:
148,94,246678,1,0,3:0:0:0:
132,121,246774,1,0,3:0:0:0:
125,152,246871,6,0,P|136:196|132:248,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
24,212,247258,1,0,3:0:0:0:
24,212,247355,1,0,3:0:0:0:
24,212,247452,1,0,3:0:0:0:
Satellite
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Natsu
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General:

  1. ¨Collab¨ diff name is not something that I'd use, because it doesn't tell me the lvl of difficutly, since there can be Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Extra collabs. So please consider using something else ¨Collab Insane¨ or ¨Collab insert special diff name¨
Collab

Hitsounds:

  2. 01:10:742 - 01:13:839 - 01:23:129 - 01:26:226 - 02:52:936 - 03:08:420 - slider-ticks with the same volume as normal hitsounds (circles, slider head/tail) sounds bad and can be confused for players, so I highly suggest you to reduce the volume for 10% or 15% at those places
  3. 00:43:258 - to 01:08:033 - have much volume changes, but 02:25:452 - to 02:50:226 - have no volume changes, take in consideration both places are the same in the music, hitsouning have to be consistent as well
  4. 00:55:645 (1) - mising finish on head
  5. 03:29:710 (1,2) - almost inaudible, tbh I have hard time to hear this, use like 40% or 50% here.
Satellite:

  1. 00:06:484 (3,4) - please follow vocal instead, since is louder (even your hitsounding feels better if you do), try:
  2. 00:21:581 (2) - Should be a NC here, since the gap is so far from 00:20:033 (1) -
  3. 00:37:452 (3,1) - don't overlap this for better design, also you didn't at 00:40:162 (3) -
  4. 01:12:678 (5) - missing NC
  5. 01:20:033 (1) - remove this NC and add one at 01:20:420 (5) - according to the music and your previous pattern at 01:18:291 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
  6. 02:49:452 - same suggestion as LunarSakuya part in 01:07:258 -
  7. 05:41:323 (1) - don't need to NC here, but in 05:42:484 (5) - , if you notice the fun bell sound start at 05:42:484 (5) - which are the same in the music with 05:42:871 (1,2,3,4) - so add NC in 05:42:484 (5) - and remove from 05:42:871 (1) -
Lunarsakuya
  1. 00:50:807 (4,1) - nazi, fix blanket
  2. 00:47:420 (6,7) - don't overlap this? since you didn't overlap at 00:59:516 (3,4) -
  3. 01:03:387 (4) - missing NC
  4. 01:07:258 (1) - btw the snap isn't correct, here is like 4 am, but I only can hear a 1/8 triplet and a 1/4s after it, try:
  5. 01:44:420 (9) - add NC like satellite did at 00:39:387 (1) -
  6. 02:52:742 (3,4,1) - so weird to play, use more spacing please >:
  7. 03:08:226 (5,6,1) - same ^
Narcissu
  1. 04:07:258 (1) - remove NC, it doesn't follow nothing and don't represent anything in the song
Nasya:

  1. 04:10:355 - don't ignore this sound in the music, is super important and loud, try something like:
  2. 04:14:613 (3) - this slider is missing 1 repeat, remember to fix the spacing when you apply this
  3. 04:16:162 this sound is really important in the music, shouldn't be ignored, just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of 1/1 at 04:15:968 (4) -
  4. 04:43:258 (1,2) - use a slider instead of circles, since a slider fit the vocals and music better, also is consistent with 04:43:645 (3,4,5) -
  5. 04:46:936 (2,3) - ctrl G rhythm fit better the strong sounds in the music
  6. 04:47:516 (1) - similar as above, but here use 1/2 slider + a circle
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