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I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
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[insane]
00:47:011 (6) - remove this clap. kiai have no clap on the last red line in every part. remove all of them because not suit for music >.<
00:47:696 (2) - miss a clap
00:48:039 (4) - miss a clap
00:48:554 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:49:068 (3) - add clap on the head
00:49:411 (4) - add clap
00:49:754 (6) - remove clap
00:52:496 (6) - remove clap
00:53:696 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:55:068 (5) - remove clap on the tail
00:57:982 (6) - remove clap
00:58:154 (1) - add clap on the head
01:00:725 (6) - remove clap
01:03:468 (6) - remove clap
01:04:668 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:50:954 (4) - wrong hitsound. should be normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
01:06:039 (6) - remove clap and use normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
01:06:382 (1) - remove clap here
01:14:954 (2) - add default soft-whistle on the head
01:17:182 miss a note here
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist
01:50:096 (6) - remove this clap
01:51:639 (1) - miss a clap on the tail
01:52:839 (6) - remove clap
01:55:582 (6) - remove clap
01:56:782 (1) - add clap on the tail
01:58:154 (5) - remove clap on the tail
02:00:382 (4) - remove clap on the tail
02:01:068 (7) - remove clap
02:03:811 (6) - ^
02:06:554 (7) - ^
02:07:754 (1) - add clap on the tail
02:09:296 (7) - remove clap
02:11:868 (5) - remove clap on the tail
02:14:782 (1,2) - use normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
From 02:17:696 to 02:25:925 suggest use some default soft-whistle to follow the high-pitched voice
I have to go for exam. have no time check the othe part and all soft-hitwhistllt....sorry for this >.<
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kamisamaaa wrote:

I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
No KD for this post

[insane]
00:47:011 (6) - remove this clap. kiai have no clap on the last red line in every part. remove all of them because not suit for music >.< my bad! fixed
00:47:696 (2) - miss a clap
00:48:039 (4) - miss a clap
00:48:554 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:49:068 (3) - add clap on the head
00:49:411 (4) - add clap
00:49:754 (6) - remove clap
00:52:496 (6) - remove clap
00:53:696 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:55:068 (5) - remove clap on the tail
00:57:982 (6) - remove clap
00:58:154 (1) - add clap on the head
01:00:725 (6) - remove clap
01:03:468 (6) - remove clap
01:04:668 (1) - add clap on the tail
00:50:954 (4) - wrong hitsound. should be normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
01:06:039 (6) - remove clap and use normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
01:06:382 (1) - remove clap here
01:14:954 (2) - add default soft-whistle on the head
01:17:182 miss a note here
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal there's a snare drum hit though?
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part it is exactly the same i think ;3
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist there's nothing that plays there so i won't add anything
01:50:096 (6) - remove this clap
01:51:639 (1) - miss a clap on the tail
01:52:839 (6) - remove clap
01:55:582 (6) - remove clap
01:56:782 (1) - add clap on the tail
01:58:154 (5) - remove clap on the tail
02:00:382 (4) - remove clap on the tail
02:01:068 (7) - remove clap
02:03:811 (6) - ^
02:06:554 (7) - ^
02:07:754 (1) - add clap on the tail
02:09:296 (7) - remove clap
02:11:868 (5) - remove clap on the tail
02:14:782 (1,2) - use normal-Sampleset and soft-Additions
From 02:17:696 to 02:25:925 suggest use some default soft-whistle to follow the high-pitched voice
I have to go for exam. have no time check the othe part and all soft-hitwhistllt....sorry for this >.<
thanks for checking! I've fixed everything else aside from what i wrote in red, i'll try fixing the parts ahead and in my other diffs

not sure what hitsound to put for:
01:06:211 (7) -
02:09:296 (7) -
03:15:125 (7) -
03:37:068 (7) -
posted

[Vincent] wrote:

kamisamaaa wrote:

I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
No KD for this post

[insane]
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal there's a snare drum hit though?
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part it is exactly the same i think ;3
00:33:468 in this part you all use clap with no normal-hitnormal. but 01:41:525 (3) - here and 01:38:782 (5) - here you use normal-hitmormal. it not same hitsound in these two part
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist there's nothing that plays there so i won't add anything
just because I feel add a note here will feel better tham current one >.< both in play and hitsound
thanks for checking! I've fixed everything else aside from what i wrote in red, i'll try fixing the parts ahead and in my other diffs

not sure what hitsound to put for:
01:06:211 (7) - you can add finish here and chang to Drum-Additions like this. and change 01:06:039 (6) - this to normal-Sampleset and Drum-Additions . add clap and remove whistle like this
02:09:296 (7) -
03:15:125 (7) -
03:37:068 (7) -
posted

kamisamaaa wrote:

[Vincent] wrote:

I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
No KD for this post

[insane]
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal there's a snare drum hit though?
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part it is exactly the same i think ;3
00:33:468 in this part you all use clap with no normal-hitnormal. but 01:41:525 (3) - here and 01:38:782 (5) - here you use normal-hitmormal. it not same hitsound in these two part
there are normal-hitnormals in 00:33:468 (1) - it's at the tail of 00:35:696 (5) - and 00:38:439 (3) -
Also it's in the song that's why i used it
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist there's nothing that plays there so i won't add anything
just because I feel add a note here will feel better tham current one >.< both in play and hitsound
I'll leave it since i actually really like the way it plays currently
thanks for checking! I've fixed everything else aside from what i wrote in red, i'll try fixing the parts ahead and in my other diffs

not sure what hitsound to put for:
01:06:211 (7) - you can add finish here and chang to Drum-Additions like this. and change 01:06:039 (6) - this to normal-Sampleset and Drum-Additions . add clap and remove whistle like this done!
02:09:296 (7) -
03:15:125 (7) -
03:37:068 (7) -
posted
don't kudos this

metadata must be same according source

Artist : yuiko (Primary are circle)
Title : fragile garden (all lowercase)

i love meis clauson <3
posted

Reikosaka wrote:

don't kudos this

metadata must be same according source

Artist : yuiko (Primary are circle)
Title : fragile garden (all lowercase)

i love meis clauson <3
Alright changing this for the 2nd time :lol:
posted
I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
No KD for this post

[insane]
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal there's a snare drum hit though?
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part it is exactly the same i think ;3
00:33:468 in this part you all use clap with no normal-hitnormal. but 01:41:525 (3) - here and 01:38:782 (5) - here you use normal-hitmormal. it not same hitsound in these two part
there are normal-hitnormals in 00:33:468 (1) - it's at the tail of 00:35:696 (5) - and 00:38:439 (3) -
Also it's in the song that's why i used it
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist there's nothing that plays there so i won't add anything
just because I feel add a note here will feel better tham current one >.< both in play and hitsound
I'll leave it since i actually really like the way it plays currently
not sure what hitsound to put for:
01:06:211 (7) - you can add finish here and chang to Drum-Additions like this. and change 01:06:039 (6) - this to normal-Sampleset and Drum-Additions . add clap and remove whistle like this done!
02:09:296 (7) -
03:15:125 (7) -
03:37:068 (7) -
thanks for checking! I've fixed everything else aside from what i wrote in red, i'll try fixing the parts ahead and in my other diffs

actually its just some my own suggestions~ you can choose the way you like 8-)
good luck and starred~ hope you can rank this
posted

kamisamaaa wrote:

I found your hitsound is finished. and I will check them
No KD for this post

[insane]
01:38:782 (5) - here should use clap on the tail. not the normal-hitnormal there's a snare drum hit though?
01:41:525 (3) - ^ this part you should use same hitsound like 00:33:468 this part it is exactly the same i think ;3
00:33:468 in this part you all use clap with no normal-hitnormal. but 01:41:525 (3) - here and 01:38:782 (5) - here you use normal-hitmormal. it not same hitsound in these two part
there are normal-hitnormals in 00:33:468 (1) - it's at the tail of 00:35:696 (5) - and 00:38:439 (3) -
Also it's in the song that's why i used it
01:46:325 (1,2,3,4) - these three suggest use default Drum-hitclap. btw suggest add a note 01:46:839 here and add Drum-hitfinish
the secomd kiai part hitsound should same as the frist there's nothing that plays there so i won't add anything
just because I feel add a note here will feel better tham current one >.< both in play and hitsound
I'll leave it since i actually really like the way it plays currently
not sure what hitsound to put for:
01:06:211 (7) - you can add finish here and chang to Drum-Additions like this. and change 01:06:039 (6) - this to normal-Sampleset and Drum-Additions . add clap and remove whistle like this done!
02:09:296 (7) -
03:15:125 (7) -
03:37:068 (7) -
thanks for checking! I've fixed everything else aside from what i wrote in red, i'll try fixing the parts ahead and in my other diffs

actually its just some my own suggestions~ you can choose the way you like 8-)
good luck and starred~ hope you can rank this
Thanks a lot for fixing up my hit sounds! much appreciated :D:D:D
and thanks for the star :oops:
posted
AaaAAAAAaaa my this song is so long ;-;

[Easy]
  1. 00:32:096 (2) - add reverse arrow to this? for 2/1 spacing to next note. will need to fix spacing. something liek this?
  2. im too tired from other diffs ;-; skimmed over this. pretty sure everything else is fine lol


[Normal]
  1. 00:21:125 - i think you misplaced some notes here. the strongest vocal is here and shouldnt be ignored for the drums imo. refer to 01:23:525 (2,3,4) - ?


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:839 (5) - whistle at head to follow previous whistle patterns for intro
  2. 00:11:182 (6) - whistle. same reason ^
  3. 00:50:611 (3) - youre putting a pretty strong vocal on the tail. normally this would be fine for longer sliders following a stronger vocal but theres also no follow up. as in theres a pause after the strong vocal which can be a bit misleading since it's expected for there to be something immediately afterwards, especially after you had 00:44:439 (1,2,3) - where the circle (2) continues off the vocal tail. so you may want to add a circle at 00:51:125 - and uh change up the rhythm. the next two points below is also related
  4. 00:50:611 (3) - strong vocal here. represent by using slider head?
  5. 00:51:811 - skipped right over a vocal here soooo for all 3, i suggest another rhythm. that is only if you want to change for all three above
  6. 01:01:582 (3,4) - point (3) at (4) more directly?
  7. 01:21:468 (5) - change the direction it's pointing for better flow?
  8. 01:54:554 (7) - similar to the one above, the pause isnt expected and can confuse some people. aaanddd below
  9. 01:54:382 - strongest vocal is here but it's not really standing out in any way like a slider head. maybe try this rhythm? delete 01:54:382 (6) - and move the reverse slider to where that circle was. then add a circle at 01:54:896 - and stack it ontop of the head of slider at 01:55:239 - for an antijump. this way the an antijump will represent the pause instead of a slider tail
  10. 00:53:696 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider? this note is long and drawn out for both the vocal and the guitar instead of a hit and pause
  11. 01:56:782 (4) - ^^^^
  12. 03:02:611 (4) - same ^
  13. 03:24:554 (4) - ^


[Insane]
  1. hp drain -1? 7 seems a bit brutal for its jumps and low hit object density
  2. 00:05:696 (4,5) - the sound that starts at 4 is very strong and is the same kind of note as 00:05:354 (3) - . for consistency and for more emphasis on this noise ( i dont know what instrument is making this sound ;-;) which youve been following nicely with sliders is to replace those two with a slider
  3. 00:07:239 (4) - this feels really uncomfortable to play. i cant describe it. its too... rotational following the previous 2 parts. like i know rotation is good but in this part it feels off. maybe because its a tiny bit repetitive. try ctrl-g this slider and see if you like it better yourself. i think it feels more smooth and natural
  4. 00:16:668 (5,6) - ctrl g for better flow? in a sort of star formation
  5. 00:26:096 (3) - fully stack with 00:27:125 (3) -
  6. 00:46:668 (4,5,6) - the vocals here are on (4) and (5) but (5) is stacked with (6) 1/2 beats away, which, in my mind, tells me theyre connected. but theyre not o3o you could stack (5) with (4) or stack (6) with the next (1) slider instead if you want the jump between the two vocals
  7. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - same^
  8. 00:57:639 (4,5,6) - ^ D:
  9. 01:03:125 (4,5,6) - ^ o.
  10. ill just list them all out of you want to change them :/ 01:49:754 (4,5,6) - 01:55:239 (4,5,6) - 02:00:725 (5,6,7) - but you probably wont anyways b/c it seems very much intentional 02:06:211 (5,6,7) - 03:01:068 (5,6,7) - 03:06:554 (5,6,7) - more later on but ah w/e
  11. 00:50:611 (3) - ctrl-g to better prepare for the back and forth jumps in this section?
  12. 01:05:696 (5,6,7,1) - lower distance a bit? the bigger jumps fit the ending but i its a bit too sudden and too far compared to the previous jumps. its mostly the jump between 01:05:696 (5,6) - that should be lowered imo
  13. 02:20:268 (5,1) - turn into 1/2 slider? reason similar to 00:05:696 (4,5) -
  14. 02:47:868 (1) - why is this slider ending here? o-o i can hear a light cymbal at the end but i think it would be more fitting to end it at the second cymbal at 02:48:554 - for timeline spacing and to capture both cymbals orrrrrrrrrr at the end of the vocal at 02:48:725 -
  15. 03:24:039 (2,3,4) - this jumps pretty huge o_o lower distance a bit?
  16. 03:33:296 (2,3) - ctrl-g these two sliders for better flow? (and fix where the heads of each slider starts if the change is made)
  17. 03:37:068 (7,1) - at 03:36:039 (2,3,4,5) -, you have counterclockwise rotation going on. i think if you ctrl-g (7) and (1) and keep the counterclockwise rotation that itll flow better
  18. nice diff :o only thing that reaaally bugs me (and it really bugs me) is the intentional stacking of the 2nd vocal and guitar that i talk about at 00:46:668 (4,5,6) - >< maybe its just my personal preference and im the only one who thinks so. your choice


good luck x.x i think i need a lower drain time limit lol
posted

Kihhou wrote:

AaaAAAAAaaa my this song is so long ;-; Love long songs ;D

[Easy]
  1. 00:32:096 (2) - add reverse arrow to this? for 2/1 spacing to next note. will need to fix spacing. something liek this? rather have it ending on the finish in the song orz
  2. im too tired from other diffs ;-; skimmed over this. pretty sure everything else is fine lol


[Normal]
  1. 00:21:125 - i think you misplaced some notes here. the strongest vocal is here and shouldnt be ignored for the drums imo. refer to 01:23:525 (2,3,4) - ?
done

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:839 (5) - whistle at head to follow previous whistle patterns for intro yep
  2. 00:11:182 (6) - whistle. same reason ^
  3. 00:50:611 (3) - youre putting a pretty strong vocal on the tail. normally this would be fine for longer sliders following a stronger vocal but theres also no follow up. as in theres a pause after the strong vocal which can be a bit misleading since it's expected for there to be something immediately afterwards, especially after you had 00:44:439 (1,2,3) - where the circle (2) continues off the vocal tail. so you may want to add a circle at 00:51:125 - and uh change up the rhythm. the next two points below is also related changed
  4. 00:50:611 (3) - strong vocal here. represent by using slider head?
  5. 00:51:811 - skipped right over a vocal here soooo for all 3, i suggest another rhythm. that is only if you want to change for all three above
  6. 01:01:582 (3,4) - point (3) at (4) more directly? okeh
  7. 01:21:468 (5) - change the direction it's pointing for better flow? did something similar
  8. 01:54:554 (7) - similar to the one above, the pause isnt expected and can confuse some people. aaanddd below changed
  9. 01:54:382 - strongest vocal is here but it's not really standing out in any way like a slider head. maybe try this rhythm? delete 01:54:382 (6) - and move the reverse slider to where that circle was. then add a circle at 01:54:896 - and stack it ontop of the head of slider at 01:55:239 - for an antijump. this way the an antijump will represent the pause instead of a slider tail
  10. 00:53:696 (4) - replace with a 1/1 slider? this note is long and drawn out for both the vocal and the guitar instead of a hit and pause I like it the current way it is, provides a somewhat relaxing feel before the 1.6x ds jumps ahead of it
  11. 01:56:782 (4) - ^^^^
  12. 03:02:611 (4) - same ^
  13. 03:24:554 (4) - ^


[Insane]
  1. hp drain -1? 7 seems a bit brutal for its jumps and low hit object density lets try 6.5 for a new change ;D
  2. 00:05:696 (4,5) - the sound that starts at 4 is very strong and is the same kind of note as 00:05:354 (3) - . for consistency and for more emphasis on this noise ( i dont know what instrument is making this sound ;-;) which youve been following nicely with sliders is to replace those two with a slider makes sense alright
  3. 00:07:239 (4) - this feels really uncomfortable to play. i cant describe it. its too... rotational following the previous 2 parts. like i know rotation is good but in this part it feels off. maybe because its a tiny bit repetitive. try ctrl-g this slider and see if you like it better yourself. i think it feels more smooth and natural Feels pretty natural to me the way it currently is
  4. 00:16:668 (5,6) - ctrl g for better flow? in a sort of star formation did something else
  5. 00:26:096 (3) - fully stack with 00:27:125 (3) - think i fixed it
  6. 00:46:668 (4,5,6) - the vocals here are on (4) and (5) but (5) is stacked with (6) 1/2 beats away, which, in my mind, tells me theyre connected. but theyre not o3o you could stack (5) with (4) or stack (6) with the next (1) slider instead if you want the jump between the two vocals haha i was staying super consistent with that, i'll make it so that 4 and 5 are stacked for all
  7. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - same^
  8. 00:57:639 (4,5,6) - ^ D:
  9. 01:03:125 (4,5,6) - ^ o.
  10. ill just list them all out of you want to change them :/ 01:49:754 (4,5,6) - 01:55:239 (4,5,6) - 02:00:725 (5,6,7) - but you probably wont anyways b/c it seems very much intentional 02:06:211 (5,6,7) - 03:01:068 (5,6,7) - 03:06:554 (5,6,7) - more later on but ah w/e
  11. 00:50:611 (3) - ctrl-g to better prepare for the back and forth jumps in this section? play fine the way it currently is imo
  12. 01:05:696 (5,6,7,1) - lower distance a bit? the bigger jumps fit the ending but i its a bit too sudden and too far compared to the previous jumps. its mostly the jump between 01:05:696 (5,6) - that should be lowered imo lowered 6 to 7, i think 5 to 6 is fine
  13. 02:20:268 (5,1) - turn into 1/2 slider? reason similar to 00:05:696 (4,5) - just realised the rhythm was weird, changed it around
  14. 02:47:868 (1) - why is this slider ending here? o-o i can hear a light cymbal at the end but i think it would be more fitting to end it at the second cymbal at 02:48:554 - for timeline spacing and to capture both cymbals orrrrrrrrrr at the end of the vocal at 02:48:725 - hmm changed, i dunno it felt natural to me to have it at start when i originally made it, but now i look at it again, it is somewhat weird
  15. 03:24:039 (2,3,4) - this jumps pretty huge o_o lower distance a bit? just a little ;)
  16. 03:33:296 (2,3) - ctrl-g these two sliders for better flow? (and fix where the heads of each slider starts if the change is made)
  17. 03:37:068 (7,1) - at 03:36:039 (2,3,4,5) -, you have counterclockwise rotation going on. i think if you ctrl-g (7) and (1) and keep the counterclockwise rotation that itll flow better I used 03:36:382 (3,4,5) - to switch the rotation to kind of give a signal that it's finishing ;3 so i'll leave it as a clockwise finish :)
  18. nice diff :o only thing that reaaally bugs me (and it really bugs me) is the intentional stacking of the 2nd vocal and guitar that i talk about at 00:46:668 (4,5,6) - >< maybe its just my personal preference and im the only one who thinks so. your choice fixed all makes a lot of sense for that double vocal to be stacked ;)


good luck x.x i think i need a lower drain time limit lol
Thanks a lot for helping me out XD
posted
OK Here I am
From BMT.
I will mainly concentrate on pattern and rhythm (for kamisamaaa had mod the sound).



[Insane]
First check all life-bar-touching sliders and circles

00:02:268 (1,2,3,1) - make those four notes a parallelogram to make this part much clearer. Move 00:03:296 (1) - to (344,320) can do it
00:10:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - the end of 1 and 2 3 4 5 should form a star. But now apparently 00:11:011 (4,5) - and 00:10:325 (1,3) - is not parallel. You should realign these notes to keep beauty.
00:14:096 (4) - This could be the most weird part among the whole song because that where a downbeat sits (00:14:268 -) is completely hidden in the slider.
I know you are trying to follow the vocal, but 00:12:039 (2) - like the note here still exists. So this will only lead to confuse players because of they don't know when to follow the vocal and when to follow the drums
I highly recommend you change the rhythm here to↓

And if I were you, I would use pattern

to stress 00:14:268 (5) - . And stack 00:14:268 (5,3) - for beauty. And of course this will avoid ruining the DS of 1.60
00:23:182 (2,3,4) - The distance gap makes this whole pattern looks ugly.
And whats more, the sudden DS change at 00:24:039 (1,2,3,4) - is just so sharp.You don't do this in the other part of the song. Get the 1.60 back will be better.
00:49:925 (1,3) - Rotate this one to get 00:49:754 (6,3) -
01:14:954 (2,3,4) - inconsistent DS here. Move 01:15:468 (3) - down to keep the DS without breaking the blanket
03:12:039 (4,5,2) - stack

I think this one need some work on pattern more
It is not considerate to scatter notes here and there. They should create a system
Some stack does not fit the flow, maybe you can try throw away those stack and make a new flow at those place
Most DS-keeping is not necessary for the Insane diff. You don't need to hold DS so tightly
like this 01:54:382 (1,6) - You can easily stack them by moving 01:55:582 (6) -

That's all my suggestions. Hope this could get ranked
posted

sammy711 wrote:

OK Here I am
From BMT.
I will mainly concentrate on pattern and rhythm (for kamisamaaa had mod the sound).



[Insane]
First check all life-bar-touching sliders and circles

00:02:268 (1,2,3,1) - make those four notes a parallelogram to make this part much clearer. Move 00:03:296 (1) - to (344,320) can do it done
00:10:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - the end of 1 and 2 3 4 5 should form a star. But now apparently 00:11:011 (4,5) - and 00:10:325 (1,3) - is not parallel. You should realign these notes to keep beauty. fixed (rotate it 17 degrees and it's pretty much a star
00:14:096 (4) - This could be the most weird part among the whole song because that where a downbeat sits (00:14:268 -) is completely hidden in the slider.
I know you are trying to follow the vocal, but 00:12:039 (2) - like the note here still exists. So this will only lead to conf use players because of they don't know when to follow the vocal and when to follow the drums agreed!
I highly recommend you change the rhythm here to↓

And if I were you, I would use pattern

to stress 00:14:268 (5) - . And stack 00:14:268 (5,3) - for beauty. And of course this will avoid ruining the DS of 1.60
00:23:182 (2,3,4) - The distance gap makes this whole pattern looks ugly.
And whats more, the sudden DS change at 00:24:039 (1,2,3,4) - is just so sharp.You don't do this in the other part of the song. Get the 1.60 back will be better. changed
00:49:925 (1,3) - Rotate this one to get 00:49:754 (6,3) - did a few changes
01:14:954 (2,3,4) - inconsistent DS here. Move 01:15:468 (3) - down to keep the DS without breaking the blanket fixed
03:12:039 (4,5,2) - stack done

I think this one need some work on pattern more
It is not considerate to scatter notes here and there. They should create a system
Some stack does not fit the flow, maybe you can try throw away those stack and make a new flow at those place
Most DS-keeping is not necessary for the Insane diff. You don't need to hold DS so tightly
like this 01:54:382 (1,6) - You can easily stack them by moving 01:55:582 (6) - thing is that 6 stacks with 2 01:55:582 (6,2) -

That's all my suggestions. Hope this could get ranked
thanks! I'll reconsider some of my patterns
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Hello, from my Queue~

[General]

When I first opened the map, all I saw was little green lines xD Are all of those inherited timing points necessary? Also, I think only during Kiai time should the audio be at 80% or above, since it is the most powerful part of the song. Also, more than 1/3 of your map is in Kiai time, consider changing that.

[Easy]

  • Change CS to 2
    00:01:925 (2,1) - blanket these, like [ur=http://puu.sh/9AMkX.jpg]this?[/url]
    00:08:782 (1,2) - blanket
    00:46:496 - add a circle here, feels kinda empty
    00:51:296 (4,1) - blanket
    00:58:154 (1,2,3) - could blanket these
    01:24:725 (4) - I see what you were going for, but I think starting a slider on a red tick is a little too hard for an easy map.
    01:35:696 (4) - same thing here
    01:42:039 (1,1) - could blanket these
    01:57:468 (2,1) - blanket, like this
    02:06:725 (1,2) - blanket
    02:17:696 - this whole part here doesn't really need to be in Kiai time, it's not the chorus of the song and doesn't feel powerful enough.
    03:08:439 (3,1) - blanket


[Normal]

  • Change AR to 4
    Change SV to 1.00, it's too fast for a Normal difficulty.
    You'll have to resnap your sliders to account for change in SV.
    I'm not sure I can really mod this because everything just feels too fast, I'll try though.
    00:16:496 (5) - this would feel better as a 1/2 reverse slider, but that may be too hard for a normal.
    01:29:011 (2,3) - blanket
    01:54:039 (3,4) - blanket
    02:17:696 - Again, Kiai time is not needed here.
    02:27:982 (4,1) - blanket these better
    02:46:496 (3) - move to the left for more symmetry
    03:28:668 (5,1) - blanket


[Hard]

  • 01:47:182 (3,4,5,6) - make this into a 1/4 reversing slider, streams are a little too much for a hard difficulty, even if it's small.
    02:05:696 (7,8) - could blanket these better
    02:17:696 - Kiai time not needed.
    02:23:182 (1,2,3) - blanket these better
    02:26:268 - here you could use a smaller sv, not too much, maybe .90? it's softer here and would have a nice effect
    02:36:896 - you could go back to normal sv here, if you implement that^ change
    03:07:068 (1,2,3) - blanket


[Insane]

  • This difficulty is made very nicely, the only thing I have to add is the Kiai time here 02:17:696 is not needed.
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Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue~

[General]

When I first opened the map, all I saw was little green lines xD Are all of those inherited timing points necessary? Also, I think only during Kiai time should the audio be at 80% or above, since it is the most powerful part of the song. Also, more than 1/3 of your map is in Kiai time, consider changing that.
Most green lines are necessary for changing the volume and for the fact that i used multiple hitsounds QQ, I think the kiai time is currently fine.
[Easy]

  • Change CS to 2 that would introduce a lot of overlaps, so no
    00:01:925 (2,1) - blanket these, like [ur=http://puu.sh/9AMkX.jpg]this?[/url] since it's a new chord, i rather keep it as it currently is
    00:08:782 (1,2) - blanket hmm??
    00:46:496 - add a circle here, feels kinda empty changed
    00:51:296 (4,1) - blanket forced it ;3
    00:58:154 (1,2,3) - could blanket these nah I like it the way it is atm
    01:24:725 (4) - I see what you were going for, but I think starting a slider on a red tick is a little too hard for an easy map. Will consider it
    01:35:696 (4) - same thing here
    01:42:039 (1,1) - could blanket these nope
    01:57:468 (2,1) - blanket, like this broke the flow intentionally as it is a new stanza
    02:06:725 (1,2) - blanket would ruin the blanket with 02:07:068 (2,3) -
    02:17:696 - this whole part here doesn't really need to be in Kiai time, it's not the chorus of the song and doesn't feel powerful enough. I think it works fine and is definitely powerful enough since it is the guitar solo/the bridge of the song which i tend to like having in kiai time. (applies to all diffs)
    03:08:439 (3,1) - blanketnew stanza, so no


[Normal]

  • Change AR to 4 ar5 is fine (I used other maps for reference)
    Change SV to 1.00, it's too fast for a Normal difficulty.
    You'll have to resnap your sliders to account for change in SV. No this, will require way too much effort for little benefit. I think sv 1.2 fits fine for the normal (used other songs as references). Also easy makes up for the easier difficulty out of this mapset, so i'll be leaving it as it currently is.
    I'm not sure I can really mod this because everything just feels too fast, I'll try though.
    00:16:496 (5) - this would feel better as a 1/2 reverse slider, but that may be too hard for a normal. nah
    01:29:011 (2,3) - blanket was intentional again, read up^^^
    01:54:039 (3,4) - blanket ^
    02:17:696 - Again, Kiai time is not needed here.
    02:27:982 (4,1) - blanket these better already is?
    02:46:496 (3) - move to the left for more symmetry fixed
    03:28:668 (5,1) - blanketnope


[Hard]

  • 01:47:182 (3,4,5,6) - make this into a 1/4 reversing slider, streams are a little too much for a hard difficulty, even if it's small. had complaints about hard not being hard enough on previous maps. I honestly think this 5 note stream is fine and you can definitely hear it in the song
    02:05:696 (7,8) - could blanket these better agreed, but i like the way it plays atm~soz
    02:17:696 - Kiai time not needed.
    02:23:182 (1,2,3) - blanket these better would ruin the current flow that i used ;3
    02:26:268 - here you could use a smaller sv, not too much, maybe .90? it's softer here and would have a nice effect Was thinking about it when i was mapping it, but i wanted to stay consistent at the same time ;_;. Will consider it.
    02:36:896 - you could go back to normal sv here, if you implement that^ change
    03:07:068 (1,2,3) - blanket would break the flow~


Changed hp to 5.5 after seeing people die in multiplayer on this

[Insane]

  • This difficulty is made very nicely, the only thing I have to add is the Kiai time here 02:17:696 is not needed.
Thank you for modding my map :):):)
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forgot to savelog. :cry:
  1. 00:54:039 - add note ? it can keep the rhythm.
  2. 00:54:896 (7,8,9) - should be smooth.like with 03:03:811 (7,8,9) -
  3. 03:02:954 - add note ?
  4. 03:24:896 - add note ?
  1. 01:17:182 - add note ? because it is faster than 01:15:296 (2,3) - (rhythm)
  1. 00:04:668 (3) - end at 00:05:696 - may be well.
  2. 00:11:182 - add note ?
  3. 02:46:496 (3) - try this.
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tellertheworld wrote:

forgot to savelog. :cry:=P
  1. 00:54:039 - add note ? it can keep the rhythm. nothing in the music plays there ;_;, rather keep it as it currently is to provide emphasis on the voice
  2. 00:54:896 (7,8,9) - should be smooth.like with 03:03:811 (7,8,9) - true, but i think the way it currently plays is good and i like stacking the 00:54:896 (6,8) - on the previous slider
  3. 03:02:954 - add note ? same reason as above
  4. 03:24:896 - add note ?
  1. 01:17:182 - add note ? because it is faster than 01:15:296 (2,3) - (rhythm) Will consider it. Don't exactly want a note there since it may be a bit difficult to hit that note since it's on a red tick for normal
  1. 00:04:668 (3) - end at 00:05:696 - may be well. There's a small finish sound or something there which i wanted that slider to emphasise. Similar to 00:15:639 (2,1) -
  2. 00:11:182 - add note ? Okay -too bad it's an overlap though :(-
  3. 02:46:496 (3) - try this. Hmmm I will also consider this, I really want to follow the vocals for that, dunno why lol
Thanks! :):):)
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I still gotta mod the other diffs, remind me sometime ^^
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Bloodmoon wrote:

I still gotta mod the other diffs, remind me sometime ^^
You can do them whenever you want :):):)
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Nice Map and Song :)
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xpshh wrote:

Nice Map and Song :)
Thanks!
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