Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends · forum

Minao

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-06-22T15:41:06+00:00

Congrats! You won my Lottery mod from modding queue!

Here is your ticket.

[General]
I think some combo colors are strange, the red and yellow ones, espacially the yellow. Maybe change it for a medium dark purple?

[Lanturn's Normal]
No real problem on this one

00:16:214 (1) - Maybe make it a little more curve like this: http://puu.sh/9F99M/7758158d67.jpg I think it's more harmonious like this. Same thing for each similar sliders.

The code if you want it

164,224,16214,6,0,B|92:184|99:133|99:133|72:136|40:108,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:53:200 (3) - Check (2)'s hitcircle to make a better blanket.
01:03:885 (4,1) - I don't like this pattern because the 2 sliders seems "in conflict". I made this to solve the problem but it changed the rhythm a little: http://puu.sh/9Fako/ac876ca5c3.jpg

The code if you want it

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01:30:187 (3) - You can improve the blanket if you look at (1)'s hitcicle.
01:48:270 (1,2) - My first comment applies well here, if you curve the sliders a little more it will seem more harmonious

01:54:640 (1) - You can place it at x:276 | y:253 to make it fit with (4)
02:03:886 (2) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (1)'s end.
02:12:927 (1,2) - This pattern seems conflicting too. Maybe you will like this: http://puu.sh/9FbpX/b6a3f1b462.jpg

Code

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02:42:516 (1) - You can remork it a little to make it fit better with (3)'s curve.
02:44:160 (3) - Curve the first part more to make it fit better with (1).

[Hard]
Well you have a mapping style very different than mine so I can't say a lot... sorry ^^"
00:32:652 - Hitsounds are too low in my opinion; 45% is better I think

I can't here anything at 35%
00:49:913 (6) - Maybe curve this slider like this? http://puu.sh/9FctP/50b17a4771.jpg
01:00:187 (4) - You can make a triangle with (2) and (3)'s end; it would seem a less random placement.
01:48:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Even if the sliders are a little curved, I think this part is a little too straight... Try to rework it a little if you have other ideas maybe?
02:26:282 (3) - The blanket can be improved to fit better with (2), check the (2)'s hitcircle
02:31:830 (4) - ^ check (2)'s end
02:36:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make triangles maybe? :3 //I love triangles//
02:40:050 (3) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (2), check the (2)'s end

[Insane]
I'm bad at modding Insanes :<
My only advice is to check again blankets and curve to make sure everything fit well. For exemple:
00:16:830 (4) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (5)

Also at 00:32:652 - Same about hitsounds than Hard.

That's all, I hope it was a little helpful! Good luck for ranking!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-06-22T19:15:40+00:00

Minao wrote:
Congrats! You won my Lottery mod from modding queue! Here is your ticket.

[General]
I think some combo colors are strange, the red and yellow ones, espacially the yellow. Maybe change it for a medium dark purple? I will look at this and see what I can do.

[Hard]
Well you have a mapping style very different than mine so I can't say a lot... sorry ^^"
00:32:652 - Hitsounds are too low in my opinion; 45% is better I think I can't here anything at 35% I think this is only a problem with the first couple of notes, the others you can clearly hear with current volume, so i added a timing point for this part slightly louder hitsound volume.
00:49:913 (6) - Maybe curve this slider like this? http://puu.sh/9FctP/50b17a4771.jpg Done.
01:00:187 (4) - You can make a triangle with (2) and (3)'s end; it would seem a less random placement. here it may seem like random placement, but I did it for the sake of flow, so I dont think I will be moving this.
01:48:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Even if the sliders are a little curved, I think this part is a little too straight... Try to rework it a little if you have other ideas maybe? I dont think this is necessarily a bad thing. it keeps the map from being repetitive. but if more people feel strongly about this, I will see what i can do.
02:26:282 (3) - The blanket can be improved to fit better with (2), check the (2)'s hitcircle Done
02:31:830 (4) - ^ check (2)'s end Fixed
02:36:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make triangles maybe? :3 //I love triangles// lol, I think these are fine.
02:40:050 (3) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (2), check the (2)'s end Fixed

[Insane]
I'm bad at modding Insanes :<
My only advice is to check again blankets and curve to make sure everything fit well. For exemple:
00:16:830 (4) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (5) this one is actually on purpose because of flow.

Also at 00:32:652 - Same about hitsounds than Hard. same as Hard.

That's all, I hope it was a little helpful! Good luck for ranking!

thanks for the mod!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-06-22T20:02:23+00:00

Minao

Minao wrote:
[Lanturn's Normal]
No real problem on this one
00:16:214 (1) - Maybe make it a little more curve like this: http://puu.sh/9F99M/7758158d67.jpg I think it's more harmonious like this. Same thing for each similar sliders. Remade this slider.
00:53:200 (3) - Check (2)'s hitcircle to make a better blanket. Done.
01:03:885 (4,1) - I don't like this pattern because the 2 sliders seems "in conflict". I made this to solve the problem but it changed the rhythm a little: http://puu.sh/9Fako/ac876ca5c3.jpg I don't really have a problem with how it is. Leaving.
01:30:187 (3) - You can improve the blanket if you look at (1)'s hitcicle. Redid this slider.
01:48:270 (1,2) - My first comment applies well here, if you curve the sliders a little more it will seem more harmonious I actually think the smaller 'bump' like feature works well here. Leaving as is.
01:54:640 (1) - You can place it at x:276 | y:253 to make it fit with (4) Prefer not to place it there, also wrecks DS and makes the upcoming note a bit awkward to hit.
02:03:886 (2) - Blanket can be improved to fit better with (1)'s end. Not trying to blanket this.
02:12:927 (1,2) - This pattern seems conflicting too. Maybe you will like this: http://puu.sh/9FbpX/b6a3f1b462.jpg I remade this. Looks much better than before.
02:42:516 (1) - You can remork it a little to make it fit better with (3)'s curve. It's actually properly set from the inside of (1) and outside of (3)'s curve
02:44:160 (3) - Curve the first part more to make it fit better with (1). Sure I guess.

Thanks for the mod.

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Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-06-22T20:20:50+00:00

Hi! From my modding queue.

General

You may have too many combo colors. Try picking out 3 or 4 of the best ones.

Lanturn's Normal

I would suggest sv 1.1 or 1.0 considering the bpm.

I would not suggest having so much slider art. It's unnecessary and doesn't look too nice.

00:27:515 (1) - I would suggest spinner here till 00:27:515 (1) - and a break from 00:27:515 (1) - to 00:27:515 (1) -
00:26:693 (2) - starting a slider on a red tick mark is not recommended in easy and normal.
00:34:091 (3) - ^
00:33:474 (2,3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/9FumN/96a5c3fdea.jpg
00:35:940 (1,3) - these two overlap slightly; doesn't look nice imo...
00:48:269 (4,1) - this might create a flow issue
00:53:200 (3) - fix blanket slightly
00:53:200 (3) - Also I don't understand this slider... there's a strong beat right in the middle of it, and it's sort of weird. Consider making it a 1/1 reverse slider. Do something like: http://puu.sh/9FuHO/44ac4cb471.jpg
00:57:310 (3) - my opinion: doesn't look nice :/
01:06:351 (3,4) - maybe blanket 4 around 3?
01:29:159 (2) - slider on red tick
01:53:407 (3) - slider on red tick
01:51:556 (1,3) - maybe align 3 in a way so as to make it "fit" in the curve of slider 1.
01:59:777 (1,2) - I like this :3
02:12:927 (1,2) - this is awkward flow-wise.
02:19:503 (1) - blanket around 5 nicely
02:26:900 (2,3) - 02:35:119 (4,1) - YASS - i love this too~

02:29:366 (1) - just stop...i am gonna die...this is too god ;^;
02:31:009 (2) - omg another good one :3

Ok wow, this map got SO MUCH BETTER in the last few seconds of the song!

Hard

I would suggest sv 1.4 considering the bpm. I would also suggest DS 1.1. Please keep consistent spacing with DS.

00:19:502 (1) - may sound strange but try blanketing this around 00:18:680 (3) - the end result will be really nice.
00:51:967 (3) - fix blanket slightly
01:03:063 (3,4,5) - try something different for this pattern, maybe something like: http://puu.sh/9FwBA/e71efeda9c.jpg with correct distance snap and flow.
01:27:721 (1,2) - maybe offset the second slider like: http://puu.sh/9FwSL/e5ff60f57f.jpg
01:41:796 (1) - i would recommend ending the spinner here: 01:41:796 (1) - at the strong beat
01:58:337 (1) - fix blanket
02:07:173 (5) - don't hear anything that would require this slider maybe make 02:06:968 (4) - into a slider
02:26:282 (3) - fix blanket
02:52:378 (1,2,3,4) - okay, over here i would recommend having 4 in the stack because it's not consistent with 1, 2, and 3. http://puu.sh/9FxqH/bf6ecc780e.jpg 1, 2, and 3 are 3/2 beats apart whereas 4 is 1/1 beat apart.

Disclaimer: I made the mod for the "Hard" difficulty before the update, so some suggestions/ errors may not apply anymore.

Insane

Maybe use SV 1.5

Nothing egregious here, I'll just suggest some stuff

00:15:803 (7,8,9,10,1) - i feel like this stream is really close to the star pattern and doesn't look too nice.
00:16:830 (4) - blanket nicely
00:24:433 (5) - slightly fix blanket
00:36:556 (5) - i would suggest removing this; i don't hear anything for this hitcircle.
00:44:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - try some new patterns; this star pattern is getting redundant
01:14:228 (1,2,3) - i don't think these really fit the music...consider a spinner?
02:15:803 (6,8) - consider placing 8 in a way so it's not hiding behind 6...

Hope this helped. Good luck!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-06-22T20:48:42+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Hi! From my modding queue.

General

You may have too many combo colors. Try picking out 3 or 4 of the best ones. hmm, I guess I will have to do this.

Hard

I would suggest sv 1.4 considering the bpm. I would also suggest DS 1.1. Please keep consistent spacing with DS. I think that the slider speeds are fine for all my diffs. I am also keeping consistent spacing except for jumps.

00:19:502 (1) - may sound strange but try blanketing this around 00:18:680 (3) - the end result will be really nice. I see what you mean, but I want all the sliders with this sound to have the same shape, if I change this, it will mess that up, and if i copy this slider after blanket, it will mess up spacing. so I dont think i will change this.
00:51:967 (3) - fix blanket slightly Done.
01:03:063 (3,4,5) - try something different for this pattern, maybe something like: http://puu.sh/9FwBA/e71efeda9c.jpg with correct distance snap and flow. I like my current pattern and rhythm, what you suggest puts a strong beat at the tail of a slider.
01:27:721 (1,2) - maybe offset the second slider like: http://puu.sh/9FwSL/e5ff60f57f.jpg I dont think this is good for a hard diff. maybe in an Insane, but not here.
01:41:796 (1) - i would recommend ending the spinner here: 01:41:796 (1) - at the strong beat end the spinner where it starts? im assuming you made a mistake here. but this spinner follows the vocals.
01:58:337 (1) - fix blanket Done.
02:07:173 (5) - don't hear anything that would require this slider maybe make 02:06:968 (4) - into a slider you can hear the bass here.
02:26:282 (3) - fix blanket Done.
02:52:378 (1,2,3,4) - okay, over here i would recommend having 4 in the stack because it's not consistent with 1, 2, and 3. http://puu.sh/9FxqH/bf6ecc780e.jpg 1, 2, and 3 are 3/2 beats apart whereas 4 is 1/1 beat apart. here, i stacked 4 with 3 because they are closer to each other than 1 2 and 3. it just made more sense to me.

Disclaimer: I made the mod for the "Hard" difficulty before the update, so some suggestions/ errors may not apply anymore.

Insane

Maybe use SV 1.5 see hard.

Nothing egregious here, I'll just suggest some stuff

00:15:803 (7,8,9,10,1) - i feel like this stream is really close to the star pattern and doesn't look too nice. this looks fine while playing, and in the editor there arent nasty overlaps or anything.
00:16:830 (4) - blanket nicely this is done on purpose, if i blanket this, the tail of the slider goes past the circle, creating a zig zag motion to the slider after the circle that I do not want.
00:24:433 (5) - slightly fix blanket Done.
00:36:556 (5) - i would suggest removing this; i don't hear anything for this hitcircle. I can hear the guitar.
00:44:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - try some new patterns; this star pattern is getting redundant Star is the cleanest looking jump pattern, its only used 3 times in a 2 and a half minute song, I dont think its too repetitive.
01:14:228 (1,2,3) - i don't think these really fit the music...consider a spinner? these map the harp sound.
02:15:803 (6,8) - consider placing 8 in a way so it's not hiding behind 6... it really isn't hiding... the slider track disappears well before you have to hit the note, due to the AR.

Hope this helped. Good luck!

thanks for the mod!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-06-23T23:07:46+00:00

Kinshara

Kinshara wrote:
General

You may have too many combo colors. Try picking out 3 or 4 of the best ones. RIP my colors with the red missing. Setz, don't go below 6 colors please or I'll have to give up on using different colors during each section. ;_;

Lanturn's Normal

I would suggest sv 1.1 or 1.0 considering the bpm. SV is fine. This is a normal, and easier than most Normals actually.

I would not suggest having so much slider art. It's unnecessary and doesn't look too nice. Lots of the sliders in this song are 3/2, and if I had plain curved sliders, it would be EXTREMELY difficult to tell them apart. This was the first reason. Second. It adds a bit of uniqueness to this map. It really doesn't look that bad. You're probably just too used to seeing straights / curves.

00:27:515 (1) - I would suggest spinner here till 00:27:515 (1) - and a break from 00:27:515 (1) - to 00:27:515 (1) - No thanks. I like my slider, and I don't want to change this.
00:26:693 (2) - starting a slider on a red tick mark is not recommended in easy and normal. Uh what? It fits with the song, and it is slider to slider joining, perfectly acceptable (and recommended) for Normals.
00:34:091 (3) - ^ ^
00:33:474 (2,3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/9FumN/96a5c3fdea.jpg Nope.The vocals are dominant here no matter how you look at it. If I mapped to the piano then many many new players won't be able to hit this properly.
00:35:940 (1,3) - these two overlap slightly; doesn't look nice imo... Nothing wrong with this.
00:48:269 (4,1) - this might create a flow issue The reverse slider makes it a bit less awkward while playing. It plays and feels just fine. If you have a better suggestion then let me know.
00:53:200 (3) - fix blanket slightly Nothing to fix.
00:53:200 (3) - Also I don't understand this slider... there's a strong beat right in the middle of it, and it's sort of weird. Consider making it a 1/1 reverse slider. Do something like: http://puu.sh/9FuHO/44ac4cb471.jpg Following the vocal cues.
00:57:310 (3) - my opinion: doesn't look nice :/ Each bounce has a purpose.
01:06:351 (3,4) - maybe blanket 4 around 3? Nope. Maintains flow better this way.
01:29:159 (2) - slider on red tick Nothing wrong with following vocals. Though I did find a missing whistle on the head lol.
01:53:407 (3) - slider on red tick Nothing wrong with following the beat.
01:51:556 (1,3) - maybe align 3 in a way so as to make it "fit" in the curve of slider 1. Completely changed this slider.
01:59:777 (1,2) - I like this :3
02:12:927 (1,2) - this is awkward flow-wise. It's really fine. If you have a suggestion on how to fix it, then great.
02:19:503 (1) - blanket around 5 nicely Already blanketed fine.
02:26:900 (2,3) - 02:35:119 (4,1) - YASS - i love this too~
02:29:366 (1) - just stop...i am gonna die...this is too god ;^;
02:31:009 (2) - omg another good one :3

Ok wow, this map got SO MUCH BETTER in the last few seconds of the song! It just didn't have any 3/2's minus a couple to make it 'so much better.' I actually find this part boring compared to the rest of it all.

Thanks for the mod.

SPOILER

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Source:Yuru Yuri
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FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2014-07-21T20:36:57+00:00

Not really important but set a bookmark at the first note for the modder

Sorry but i cant mod normals/easy

Lanturn's Normal

Those slider q_____q a little val
Disable widescreen support
00:42:515 (1) - 01:54:639 (1) - note sure about those 1 combos

Hard

OD5 -> OD6 ?
Disable widescreen support
00:34:091 (3,4) - ctrl+g
00:35:940 (3) - move a bit to the right to keep distance to 00:36:556 (4) - and avoiding stack
00:37:584 (6) - move this to x:103 y:19 since thhe slider is pointing in this direction
01:33:063 (1,2,3) - this looks like 1/4 you should change the spacing, its extremly hard to read
02:11:283 (6,2) - avoid stack somehow lol
02:14:159 (1,2,3) - same as above
02:30:598 (1,2,3) - ^
02:43:748 (1,2,3) - ^

Insane

Disable Widescreen support, theres no SB
Change OD8 to OD 7 or 7,5?seems a bit too high for this slow map
00:21:762 (6,7) - fix stack
00:35:940 (4) - move this a bit to the right to keep a bit spacing with 00:35:529 (3) -
00:38:611 - this should be clickable since you are following lyrics
01:03:063 (4) - ctrl+g and 01:03:474 (5,6) - ctrl+g them to emphasize 01:03:885 (1) - ?
Move 00:34:296 (5) - to x:258 y:132 ?
00:36:762 (6) - ctrl+g here? for consistency
00:47:858 (1) - ^
00:51:351 (2,6) - fix stack
01:21:556 (9) - ctrl+g to emphasize 01:21:967 (10) -
01:21:967 (10) - add nc
01:22:378 (1) - remove nc

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-07-21T21:28:54+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Not really important but set a bookmark at the first note for the modder
Sorry but i cant mod normals/easy

Hard
OD5 -> OD6 ? Done, not sure why this was a 5. o.O
Disable widescreen support Done for all diffs.
00:34:091 (3,4) - ctrl+g this messes up the spacing of the jump to the next note. the flow isnt horrible here, so i dont see the need to do this.
00:35:940 (3) - move a bit to the right to keep distance to 00:36:556 (4) - and avoiding stack The distance right now is actually consistent, and the slider blankets the previous note.
00:37:584 (6) - move this to x:103 y:19 since thhe slider is pointing in this direction While i see what you mean, the gap between this note and the slider is long enough to allow re adjustment. Your suggestion makes this part look kinda of ugly with this circle halfway outside of the grid.
01:33:063 (1,2,3) - this looks like 1/4 you should change the spacing, its extremly hard to read its a constant spacing of 1.2. I don't think i can do anything to make this easier, but I am open to suggestions, I did improve the flow slightly by adjusting the position of the notes.
02:11:283 (6,2) - avoid stack somehow lol I dont think this overlap matters much during game play, it is still readable.
02:14:159 (1,2,3) - same as above Same as above, did the same kind of adjustment.
02:30:598 (1,2,3) - ^
02:43:748 (1,2,3) - ^ These 2 I cant improve at all, again im open to suggestions, but I think this is fine.

Insane
Change OD8 to OD 7 or 7,5?seems a bit too high for this slow map this is very much my personal preference, 8 imo is the sweet spot for insanes because people can't just randomly mash. keeping for now unless its a huge issue.
00:21:762 (6,7) - fix stack you linked the wrong notes, but I think I see what you mean, fixed.
00:35:940 (4) - move this a bit to the right to keep a bit spacing with 00:35:529 (3) - Spacing is fine here, its just a .1 difference. aand the 2 sliders aren't overlapping.
00:38:611 - this should be clickable since you are following lyrics Don't see what you mean. if anything it is 00:38:714 that should be clickable. but i chose not to to keep rhythms consistent.
01:03:063 (4) - ctrl+g and 01:03:474 (5,6) - ctrl+g them to emphasize 01:03:885 (1) - ? I think the jumps here are already fine the way they are. ctrl+g makes flow pretty strange, i tried but didnt like it.
Move 00:34:296 (5) - to x:258 y:132 ?
00:36:762 (6) - ctrl+g here? for consistency
00:47:858 (1) - ^ these 2 make flow strange.
00:51:351 (2,6) - fix stack Done.
01:21:556 (9) - ctrl+g to emphasize 01:21:967 (10) - Jump here is already big enough, ctrl+g makes for awkward flow.
01:21:967 (10) - add nc
01:22:378 (1) - remove nc I see what you mean here, but I am actually not sure, i feel like the next part of the song is where the current NC is, i will keep this for now, if more people think i should change this, I will.

thanks for the mod!

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-07-24T21:38:06+00:00

IRC mod as I promised a mod about several months ago lol

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16:25 No Dap: hey
16:25 No Dap: I finally got my tablet so I can testplay :3
16:25 No Dap: got my tablet to work on mac*
16:27 Setz206: oh nice, did you still want to take a look at the map?
16:28 No Dap: sure
16:28 No Dap: can ou np it
16:29 *Setz206 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421038 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends]
16:29 Setz206: you should also take a look at the insane for shiawase gift, see if you have any input before chewin mods it
16:33 No Dap: he still hasnt modded it? lol
16:33 Setz206: nope
16:33 Setz206: im next in line, he ahsnt modded anything in a week
16:34 No Dap: oh my god
16:34 No Dap: this skin i got from a random person doesn't have a trailor..
16:34 Setz206: LOL
16:34 No Dap: better use default skin
16:37 No Dap: plays much better than before
16:37 Setz206: yeah i realized the old one was meh
16:37 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420131 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends [Insane]]
16:37 No Dap: I think
16:37 No Dap: where is my mouse
16:38 No Dap: 00:35:118 (2,3) - 
16:38 No Dap: things like this
16:38 No Dap: would be better if they followed vocal :3
16:38 No Dap: like 00:35:118 (2) - make this to 3/4 slider?
16:39 No Dap: 01:01:625 (4,5,6) - this was a bit hard to play 
16:40 Setz206: should I just stack the double with the slider?
16:41 No Dap: stack everything on where 5 is maybe?
16:41 No Dap: 4 is too close
16:41 No Dap: yeah that plays much beter
16:41 Setz206: ok, will do that then
16:42 No Dap: 01:14:228 (1) - is this an error?
16:43 No Dap: I kinda felt this was off in game too
16:43 Setz206: yeah, i dont know about this, lol all the mods i've gotten say something different about it
16:44 Setz206: i might just do what i did in hard and map the drum beats instead of the harp
16:44 No Dap: 01:27:721 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -  maybe you can
16:45 No Dap: shape it a lil better lol?
16:45 No Dap: unless you intended to make it shape like deformed circle
16:45 Setz206: lol, i can make it into a perfect arc, but then it kinda messes up spacing with the previous note
16:46 No Dap: 01:03:063 (4) - also forgot to mention, maybe crtl +g?
16:47 Setz206: ok, yeah that makes more sense
16:47 No Dap: 01:33:063 (1) - I think this is 1/6
16:47 No Dap: realy sounded weird to me in game :3
16:47 Setz206: also ,the reason behind the first thing you said, the 3/4 slider makes sense, but you can hear a strong beat in the music at 00:35:529 (3) - so i was torn on what to do
16:48 No Dap: I meant you can extened this by 1/4 00:35:118 (2) - 
16:48 No Dap: 02:28:543 (4,5) - like this
16:48 No Dap: plays so much better imo
16:49 Setz206: ohhh
16:49 Setz206: i see what you mean
16:49 No Dap: yeah
16:49 Setz206: ok ok
16:49 Setz206: i will do that
16:49 No Dap: well my personal opinion but kinda expected to see a lot of 3/4 
16:49 No Dap: since I heard this song lol
16:51 No Dap: alo 01:08:200 (4,5,6) - stack ? 
16:51 No Dap: plays better for me
16:52 Setz206: yeah i will probably stack all of these
16:55 No Dap: 02:26:488 (2) - maybe move a bit to the left
16:55 No Dap: for smoother flow?
16:56 No Dap: i mean right
16:56 No Dap: 288:52 or soemthing
16:57 Setz206: ok, i wil ldo that and curve the 1 i nthat combo
16:57 Setz206: in*
16:58 No Dap: 02:55:461 (6) - this is my personal taste in flow
16:58 No Dap: move to 292 : 360?
16:59 Setz206: ok, that makes the pattern look nicer too
16:59 No Dap: yeah 
16:59 No Dap: I think the rest are nazi so I will skip lol
16:59 *No Dap is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/422025 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends [Hard]]
17:02 No Dap: lol I noticed you did the same ending pattern
17:03 No Dap: maybe you can fix for this diff too
17:03 Setz206:  lol, yeah i got lazy at the end and copy pasta same end
17:03 Setz206: hahaha
17:03 Setz206: yeah i will
17:03 No Dap: I think you're missing 
17:03 No Dap: farily a large amount of whistles here
17:04 No Dap: e.g 00:20:118 - 
17:04 No Dap: 00:16:830 -  here too
17:04 No Dap: 00:18:474 - 
17:04 No Dap: 00:23:406 -  on and on
17:05 Setz206: yeah i see now, thats strange, i used the hit sound copy thing, but it didnt get them all
17:05 Setz206: i'll do it manually :p
17:05 No Dap: 00:27:926 (1,2,3,4)  they are kind of too close imo- 
17:05 No Dap: lol
17:05 No Dap: use 1.3 spacing there?
17:06 Setz206: alright
17:06 No Dap: also considering you have a mini jump here 00:27:310 (4,5) - 
17:06 No Dap: `probably make the spacing larger here 00:27:515 (5,1) - 
17:07 Setz206: ok
17:07 No Dap: 00:34:707 - from this part to 00:41:899 -  I could not read the rhythm
17:07 No Dap: again, I was expecting 3/4 :3
17:08 No Dap: 00:35:426 - poor vocal
17:08 Setz206: yeah i will remap this part on both diffs
17:08 No Dap: probably the best idea.
17:08 No Dap: 3/4 would provide more rhythm variety and keep things interesting :3
17:09 No Dap: 00:42:515 (4,5) - too close, space em out a bit?
17:09 Setz206: yeah
17:09 Setz206: ok
17:11 Setz206: 01:14:570 (1,2) -  do you think i should just do this in insane too?
17:11 No Dap: 01:03:063 (3) - http://puu.sh/apBn6/bd4d516c83.png maybe this?
17:11 No Dap: hmm
17:12 No Dap: I think this rhythm would be easier to play http://puu.sh/apBuv/56c380f57c.png
17:13 Setz206: hm
17:13 No Dap: 01:14:570 (1,2) - for this btw 
17:14 Setz206: yeah, what would the end of the reverse slider map? vocal?
17:14 No Dap: lol maybe
17:14 No Dap: but that sure plays better
17:15 Setz206: hmm
17:15 No Dap: 01:23:200 (2) - crtl + g if you want 
17:15 Setz206: ok
17:16 No Dap: 01:03:063 (3) - did you follow my suggestion here?
17:16 No Dap: you can leave it like that but the overlap with 01:03:680 (5) - bothered me lol
17:16 No Dap: 01:04:296 (6,7,8) - consistent spacing maybe
17:17 Setz206: lol, yeah all the mods have said something about this
17:17 No Dap: as in spacing between slider bodies 
17:17 No Dap: not tail to head DS
17:18 Setz206: i see, alright i will fix that
17:18 No Dap: `01:06:762 (4) - move this a bit to the left for more interesting movement? 
17:18 No Dap: around 20 : 180 looks ok for me
17:18 Setz206: ok
17:19 Setz206: i think my problem is im too afraid to break distance snap to fix placements
17:19 No Dap: maybe you can rotate these a bit 
17:19 No Dap: http://puu.sh/apC0P/99d3500f44.png 
17:19 No Dap: 01:06:967 (5) - 
17:19 No Dap: lol breaking distance snap is ok
17:19 No Dap: as long as plays fine and flow works
17:20 Setz206: yeah
17:21 Setz206: ok, i rotated them like you showed
17:22 No Dap: 02:03:885 (3,4,5,6) - maybe these too
17:22 No Dap: http://puu.sh/apCki/991e15205e.png
17:23 Setz206: ok
17:23 No Dap: 02:17:036 (1) - move this a little bit to the right? http://puu.sh/apCql/e6061d14ec.png
17:24 No Dap: lol sorry  I just don't like straight line flow 
17:25 Setz206: 02:17:447 (2) -  how about moving this to the left instead
17:25 No Dap: I really think you should delete this note 02:25:872 - too hard too play and is not that importnat imo
17:25 No Dap: that would work too
17:25 No Dap: but I still prefer if you rotate 1 a bit
17:25 No Dap: like the pic i showed you
17:25 Setz206: ok
17:25 Setz206: and yeah i deleted that note
17:26 No Dap: 02:34:091 (4,5,6) - how about this shape  http://puu.sh/apCEi/c41c6ba0af.png
17:28 Setz206: ok
17:28 No Dap: 02:38:406 (4,5,1) - I think these would look better this way http://puu.sh/apCNd/904c212a85.png
17:29 No Dap: 02:42:721 (5,6) -  add some curve for more interesting shape? http://puu.sh/apCQO/50534af5d7.png
17:30 Setz206: ok
17:30 No Dap: 02:45:803 (6,7) -  how about this http://puu.sh/apCZV/3d924bde5f.png
17:31 Setz206: lol you really hate straight sliders :p i will rotate them though, it looks nicer
17:32 No Dap: 02:48:269 (7,8,9) - this maybe? http://puu.sh/apD5l/08e385f090.png
17:32 No Dap: lol yeah I just think they make your map look like 2009 maps :3
17:33 Setz206: lol puush just died
17:33 Setz206: cant see your last image
17:33 Setz206: nm its back
17:34 No Dap: 02:54:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know why but this just plays better imo lol  http://puu.sh/apDgu/c2ac529b26.png
17:34 Setz206: lol i might makea  new pattern for this part
17:35 Setz206: the laziness is too abvious
17:35 No Dap: that would also be ncie lol
17:35 No Dap: well thats about it
17:35 No Dap: and make sure to hitsound those missed ones

3 Lazy to mod Lanturn's diff but just a few things

00:42:515 (1) - should shorten by 1/2 because it sounds more correct
01:54:229 (4,1) - Why not blanket?
01:55:872 - missing a hitsound, whistle, clap whatever you want to use

Good luck~

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-07-25T11:11:29+00:00

No Dap wrote:
3 Lazy to mod Lanturn's diff but just a few things
00:42:515 (1) - should shorten by 1/2 because it sounds more correct
01:54:229 (4,1) - Why not blanket?
01:55:872 - missing a hitsound, whistle, clap whatever you want to use
Good luck~

Fixed all 3 of these. thank you No Dap <3

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Those slider q_____q a little val not really. The sliders are to help distinguish between 3/2 and 1/1 sliders. Otherwise this song would be hard to play for a normal. I didn't have val in mind at all when I was making this.
Disable widescreen support I guess Setz did this for me already.
00:42:515 (1) - 01:54:639 (1) - note sure about those 1 combos First one is fine. but I removed the second one, thanks.

Thanks guys :3

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144,144,77036,2,0,B|96:192|92:252|92:252|108:280|104:312,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,64,78680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,79091,1,0,1:0:0:0:
380,244,79502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,324,79913,2,0,P|352:360|462:334,2,180,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,81556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,136,81967,6,0,B|104:116|60:116|36:148|36:148|36:180|60:212|120:224,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,83200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,136,83611,2,0,B|376:116|420:116|444:148|444:148|444:180|420:212|360:224,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,84844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,136,85255,54,0,B|92:76|133:29|133:29|160:48|216:36,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,86283,2,0,P|328:36|360:16,2,60,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,120,87104,2,0,P|440:100|456:72,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,172,87926,2,0,P|272:196|260:224,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,88543,6,0,P|148:336|90:321,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
44,284,89159,2,0,B|81:221|48:171|48:171|84:168|112:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,56,90187,2,0,B|232:24|300:52|300:52|320:36|360:32,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,164,91830,6,0,P|288:192|368:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,92447,2,0,B|448:216|402:268|402:268|368:264|336:280,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,93474,2,0,P|176:344|112:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,228,94296,2,0,B|36:184|36:184|36:140,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,95118,54,0,P|168:184|236:216,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,95940,2,0,P|381:286|446:248,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,161,96762,2,0,P|356:104|380:51,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,117,97995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,51,98406,6,0,B|313:37|269:79|269:79|233:69|196:90,1,180,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,99228,2,0,P|184:176|152:232,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,100051,6,0,P|156:344|224:324,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,272,100872,2,0,P|376:260|424:276,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101694,12,0,104571,0:0:0:0:
304,192,108270,38,0,B|308:264|355:295|355:295|352:336|392:360,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,109914,2,0,B|420:124|373:93|373:93|376:52|336:28,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,92,111147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,196,111556,54,0,B|120:268|120:268|116:328|44:344,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,112996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,72,113407,2,0,L|152:12,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,114229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,244,114640,2,0,P|364:168|356:80,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,160,116488,22,0,P|116:224|144:284,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,316,117105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,296,117516,2,0,P|356:284|416:308,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,118338,2,0,P|444:112|484:32,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,264,119777,54,0,B|392:296|341:267|341:267|280:284,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,120804,2,0,B|207:255|207:255|222:217|264:207,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,168,121626,2,0,B|440:164|481:124|481:124|504:152|492:196,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,144,123064,6,0,P|252:132|196:144,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,188,123886,2,0,P|132:236|188:252,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,124503,2,0,B|307:214|358:237|358:237|392:236|424:200,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,124,125530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,44,125941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126352,12,2,128612,0:0:0:0:
380,120,129640,22,0,P|316:144|272:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,130256,2,0,B|264:144|222:191|222:191|228:224|256:244,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,131284,2,0,B|409:278|462:307|462:307|488:280|520:288,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,356,132927,6,0,P|176:312|156:256,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,133544,2,0,B|244:236|294:190|294:190|312:224|356:236,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,134571,2,0,P|432:144|378:105,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,48,135393,2,0,P|256:60|208:44,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,136215,6,0,P|376:94|354:141,1,120,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,160,137037,2,0,L|316:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,308,137653,2,0,B|280:336|280:336|232:312|232:312|200:324|172:312,1,180,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,244,138681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,124,139092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,60,139503,54,0,B|227:126|204:177|204:177|252:224,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,140325,2,0,P|348:276|416:256,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,176,141146,6,0,P|468:112|496:64,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,32,141968,2,0,P|324:44|276:28,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142790,12,0,145256,0:0:0:0:
392,96,146078,54,0,L|332:228,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,146900,2,0,P|191:262|136:280,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,381,147722,2,0,P|15:280|76:177,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,164,148955,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,236,149366,54,0,B|248:280|192:280|192:280|120:280,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,156,151009,2,0,P|408:228|400:280,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,151831,2,0,B|488:128|432:80,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,40,152653,6,0,B|284:92|224:56|224:56|164:92|116:40,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,153886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,240,154297,2,0,P|128:292|184:296,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,155119,2,0,P|232:188|176:184,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,155941,6,0,P|63:184|144:300,2,300,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
240,140,158407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,108,158818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,196,159229,54,0,B|376:300|376:300|356:328|312:332,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,108,160872,2,0,P|264:92|240:104,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,180,161694,2,0,P|156:240|200:292,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,376,162516,6,0,P|36:276|56:148,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,57,163749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,132,164160,2,0,B|239:173|302:154|302:154|340:176|344:224,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,40,165804,6,0,P|380:53|455:143,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,167037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,328,167448,2,0,P|288:324|232:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
332,212,168270,2,0,P|292:166|289:90,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,112,169092,54,0,B|460:164|454:219|454:219|416:240|420:288,1,180,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,169914,2,0,P|332:332|276:312,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,170735,2,0,B|148:180|148:180|144:124|144:124|96:72,2,180,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172378,12,0,175461,0:0:0:0:

Oops. forgot to change combo color. Fixed now :3

oh and. 1500

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-07-25T18:45:56+00:00

updated.

also, 1500 hype

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-14T13:09:14+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kds

Insane

00:20:118 (3) - the track's a bit offscreen
01:26:899 (1) - ctrl+g?
actually i think u can discover ur style by urself... it's just like a immature version, but i'm too weak to point out what it is indeed... sry for that poor mod ;w;
and also i still don't know how to mod random composed map like this orz

other two diff's r fine to me, especially hard diff lol

beautiful song!

good luck

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-14T17:25:00+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kds

Insane
00:20:118 (3) - the track's a bit offscreen Fixed
01:26:899 (1) - ctrl+g? this makes the flow here kind of strange, going to keep what i have for now.
actually i think u can discover ur style by urself... it's just like a immature version, but i'm too weak to point out what it is indeed... sry for that poor mod ;w;
and also i still don't know how to mod random composed map like this orz
other two diff's r fine to me, especially hard diff lol

beautiful song!

good luck

thank you for the mod!

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2014-08-18T06:21:49+00:00

sorry for late
from paper mod team
nokds

[Insane]

01:11:283 (5,6,7,8,1) - i think this flow not well,you can exchange 5 6

02:02:241 (2,3,4,5) - why not make it better? looks not well like tihs ↓

=w=

[Hard and easy]

Fine for me ,good works!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-18T08:24:14+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
sorry for late
from paper mod team
nokds

[Insane]

01:11:283 (5,6,7,8,1) - i think this flow not well,you can exchange 5 6

02:02:241 (2,3,4,5) - why not make it better? looks not well like tihs ↓

=w=

[Hard and easy]

Fine for me ,good works!

fixed both, thank you for the mod!

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2014-08-28T22:35:14+00:00

Hello, mod from my queue

Lanturn's Normal

00:27:515 (1,1) - The distance between the slider and the spinner is too short for a Normal, beginners will not have the time to react, so maybe you can start the spinner at 00:29:776 ?
01:13:748 (2,1) - Just a suggestion, but maybe you could make a blanket here ? It'll looks prettier imo
01:52:996 (2) - I suggest to use a slider for the 1/2, it'll be easier for beginners

Wonderful difficulty \:D/

Hard

00:34:707 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's a bit hard, these kinds of patterns are for Insane. I suggest to use a 1 beat slider with a reverse
00:37:995 (1,2,3) - Same as above, and same for 00:41:283 (1,2,3).
02:52:173 (7,1) - I think the distance between these 2 circles is too huge, it doesn't follow the distance snap you made for the whole diff.

Insane

I really don't see anything for this diff ;w;

I'm so sorry for the short mod ;_;
As I said in my queue, take a star :3

Good luck for rank \:D/

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-08-28T22:45:22+00:00

Kenterz

Kenterz wrote:
Hello, mod from my queue

[notice]
Lanturn's Normal
00:27:515 (1,1) - The distance between the slider and the spinner is too short for a Normal, beginners will not have the time to react, so maybe you can start the spinner at 00:29:776 ? This is actually standard spacing for a spinner in Easy/Normal. most people actually start a spinner 1/4 after. I don't think this will be a problem.
01:13:748 (2,1) - Just a suggestion, but maybe you could make a blanket here ? It'll looks prettier imo I had a choice between stacking it on where the previous slider before these was, or I guess the blanketing like you suggested. right now I'm content with keeping it stacked over blanketing. This is meant to be a standalone slider anyways.
01:52:996 (2) - I suggest to use a slider for the 1/2, it'll be easier for beginners I have a few other spots in the map where I use 1/2 spacing with circles, and because the bpm isn't high, this shouldn't be a problem for any new player to hit.

Not really any changes, but I appreciate the suggestions and concerns you had on this map. If other people start heavily mentioning any of them then I will make changes.

Thanks for the mod!

Setz

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-28T22:52:51+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Hello, mod from my queue

Hard
00:34:707 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's a bit hard, these kinds of patterns are for Insane. I suggest to use a 1 beat slider with a reverse
00:37:995 (1,2,3) - Same as above, and same for 00:41:283 (1,2,3). I feel that the beats at 00:35:529 (3) - and 00:38:817 (3) - are very strong and should be clicked, instead of being on the tail of a slider. your suggestion doesn't really offer a way to keep this, though i see your point, this cna be kind of difficult to play. I will have to see what i can come up with, but for now, no change here.
02:52:173 (7,1) - I think the distance between these 2 circles is too huge, it doesn't follow the distance snap you made for the whole diff. Fair enough, i reduced this some, but I do still want this to be a jump, because the 1 is a strong beat with a finish.[

Insane
I really don't see anything for this diff ;w;

I'm so sorry for the short mod ;_;
As I said in my queue, take a star :3

Good luck for rank \:D/

ty for the mod and star <3

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2014-08-31T22:03:20+00:00

^^

22:53 Setz206: hey, if you are there, or whenever you get back, i reworked the hard for that map, let me know what you think
22:53 *Setz206 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/422025 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends]
22:53 A Mystery: that fast?
22:54 Setz206: i didnt change many of the rhythms, but the map should look better
22:54 A Mystery: xD
22:54 A Mystery: alright
22:58 A Mystery: not bad
22:59 A Mystery: i am not sure about this
22:59 A Mystery: 00:34:707 (1,2,3) -
23:00 A Mystery: personally i don't think it fits
23:00 Setz206: yeah thats something i ahve been struggling with, because if you listen to 00:35:529 (3) -
23:01 Setz206: there's a strong beat there
23:01 Setz206: on the head
23:02 A Mystery: hmm
23:02 A Mystery: that's true
23:03 A Mystery: you should try something out for the first slider then, using that rhythm 2 times in a row is.. meh
23:04 A Mystery: but you can try to do the same as here 00:47:858 (1,2,3) -
23:04 A Mystery: doesn' that sound better?
23:04 Setz206: hmm
23:05 A Mystery: nothing is forcing you to let it end on the blue tick
23:05 A Mystery: it's just a suggestion though
23:05 Setz206: 00:34:707 (1) - the vocals are differenmt though
23:05 Setz206: in that part, and this
23:06 A Mystery: doing this seems no problem to me http://puu.sh/bfWXv/7516ca5197.jpg
23:06 A Mystery: i think it sounds better
23:07 Setz206: yeah you are right actually
23:08 Setz206: ok yeah i am changing them both to that
23:08 A Mystery:

23:15 Setz206: i will have to see what i can do with the insane now, if it comes down to it, i will just get rid of it
23:15 A Mystery: still kinda too bad
23:15 A Mystery: if it comes to that
23:15 A Mystery: hmm
23:16 A Mystery: i don't want to be a blanket whore
23:16 A Mystery: but pls check them a second time
23:16 Setz206: like which ones
23:16 A Mystery: 01:02:241 (1) - just an example
23:17 A Mystery: and you can also see it when playing, though it is just a little bit off
23:17 Setz206: ok yeah im usually pretty careful with my blankets, dunno what happened there
23:18 A Mystery: xD
23:18 A Mystery: then it's ok
23:18 A Mystery: i also see a lot of people who just don't care about them
23:18 A Mystery: they make them, but not properly, so why even bother trying then >.>
23:18 A Mystery: and I mean a lot worse than that one
23:19 A Mystery: 01:28:954 (2) - another one, it's not very obvious or something, but you are able to see that it is just a little bit too flat
23:20 A Mystery: but I have to say that the hard looks way better now
23:20 Setz206: yeah
23:20 A Mystery: 01:49:913 (6) - ^ (you don't mind me pointing them out right? :s)
23:21 Setz206: lol not at all
23:21 A Mystery: some people get angry about it
23:21 A Mystery: LOL
23:21 A Mystery: xD
23:23 A Mystery: 01:51:556 (1) - hmm i don't think it looks very good
23:23 A Mystery: i think it's better to just let the slider blanket the next one
23:24 Setz206: hmm
23:25 A Mystery: just a little bit further away so the slider doesn't have to be curved so much, just a suggestion
23:26 Setz206: http://puu.sh/bfYLa/dc5802893d.png
23:28 A Mystery: i imagined something like this http://puu.sh/bfYTW/a2a8225d8a.jpg but that is fine as wlel
23:28 A Mystery: well*
23:28 Setz206: see you suggestion makes for inconsistent spacing
23:28 Setz206: same problem you had with your map last night
23:29 A Mystery: the spacing is actually the same
23:29 A Mystery: perfectly following the distance snap
23:29 Setz206: 1.2?
23:29 A Mystery: yes
23:29 A Mystery: i just had to move both sliders a tiny bit
23:30 Setz206: that looks super close
23:30 A Mystery: that's true
23:30 A Mystery: but you can use what you made of course
23:30 Setz206: http://puu.sh/bfZ7M/b3cb218c84.png gonna go with this
23:31 A Mystery: my point was that with the previous slider the slider would even have to be closer
23:31 A Mystery: yh that's great
23:32 A Mystery: 02:10:871 (5) - blanket
23:33 Setz206: k
23:35 A Mystery: 02:12:926 (3) - ^
23:36 Setz206: k
23:36 A Mystery: 02:28:543 (2,3) - doesn't look good, but I think that is just me
23:37 A Mystery: 02:34:707 (6) - you CAN make this a blanket but it doesn't have to be, and it will probably change the spacing as well so see for yourself
23:38 A Mystery: 02:47:858 (6) - the stack isn't perfect 1 pxl up and to the left
23:38 A Mystery: idk about the ending as well, but i can't say what could be there so...
23:39 A Mystery: That's all I can see

I think it's very nice
23:39 Setz206: ok, i fixed the stack, and blanketed without changing spacing
23:39 A Mystery: alright

23:40 Setz206: http://puu.sh/bfZTs/d0c3baa044.png
23:40 A Mystery: nice
23:40 Setz206: oops, need to ctrl g that 5
23:40 Setz206: lol
23:41 Setz206: thanks for the suggestions
23:41 A Mystery: np

23:41 A Mystery: you should add a spinner in the end maybe, like in the normal
23:42 Setz206: hmm
23:42 A Mystery: because I feel like those circles don't really work out, could be just me of course
23:43 Setz206: i want to keep them, since the drums at the very end are the same rhtythm as the start
23:43 A Mystery: alright
23:44 Setz206: i wanted to map the outro too, but apparently the timing is retarded
23:44 Setz206: you would need a red line per note
23:44 A Mystery: yh indeed
23:45 Setz206: insane will need alot of work if i am to salvage it i think
23:45 Setz206: not all of it is bad though
23:45 A Mystery: yh
23:54 A Mystery: i can post the chat log maybe, but you never seem to need the star prio haha
23:55 Setz206: up to you
23:56 A Mystery: alright :p

Go for it <3

Setz

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-08-31T22:27:17+00:00

thank you for the mod on the hard sir, and the star

Dex-OW9

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Joined August 2014

Dex-OW9 2014-09-10T01:24:50+00:00

Lanturn's Normal:

No Problem

Hard :

No Problem

Insane:

00:35:838 so Far

01:19:964 I recommend using a short slide

Setz

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-10T02:11:20+00:00

Dex-OW9 wrote:
Lanturn's Normal:

No Problem

Hard :

No Problem

Insane:

00:35:838 so Far this distance is consistent with the other jumps in this section.
01:19:964 I recommend using a short slide streams are fine in insane.

no change, sorry, but thank you for taking a look

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

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Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2014-09-12T23:08:43+00:00

Hi~ Random mod from #modreqs.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- Insane :

00:16:214 (1) - Rotate it by 10°. Atm it's like you break the curve of the stream with your slider.
00:44:981 (5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern looks messy compared to 00:44:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Maybe do a double star ?
00:47:447 (6,1) - Flow could be better if you move 00:47:858 (1) - to 276:252.
01:03:063 (4,5,6) - Improve flow like this http://puu.sh/bwrZf/98db83fb53.jpg.
01:16:214 (4,5) - Something like this http://puu.sh/bwsj9/26ccfd79f1.jpg could improve flow and play.
01:37:584 (3,4,5,6,7) - To improve flow, move 01:37:584 (3,4,5) - to 336:304 and move 01:37:995 (6,7) - to make it like this http://puu.sh/bwsFG/4770d36641.jpg.
02:47:447 (1,2) - This not looks good. Make it symmetrical.
02:50:118 (1,2) - Blanket no ?

- Hard :

01:34:296 (3,4,5) - I don't like flow here.
01:40:871 (3,4) - You can deminitly find a way to improve flow here.
02:12:926 (1) - Rotate it by -20° to improve flow.

- Lanturn's Normal :

00:41:693 (4) - Move it at 144:84 for the flow.
01:51:556 (1,2) - Honestly it would be better if they was stack. Atm he looks like he was put here randomly.
02:13:544 (2,3) - Blanket maybe ?

That's all. Hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

Setz

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-12T23:48:08+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Hi~ Random mod from #modreqs.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

[notice]- Insane :
00:16:214 (1) - Rotate it by 10°. Atm it's like you break the curve of the stream with your slider. I tried your suggestion, but I actually like the current flow here. not that your suggestion is bad, but this is my persona preference when it comes to streams into sliders.
00:44:981 (5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern looks messy compared to 00:44:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Maybe do a double star ? done on purpose, so the map is not so repetitive, there's already many star patterns in it.
00:47:447 (6,1) - Flow could be better if you move 00:47:858 (1) - to 276:252. ok, i did this and reworked the following few notes as well.
01:03:063 (4,5,6) - Improve flow like this http://puu.sh/bwrZf/98db83fb53.jpg. ok
01:16:214 (4,5) - Something like this http://puu.sh/bwsj9/26ccfd79f1.jpg could improve flow and play. this eliminates the jump to 01:17:036 (1) - which i want, i think this part plays fine as is.
01:37:584 (3,4,5,6,7) - To improve flow, move 01:37:584 (3,4,5) - to 336:304 and move 01:37:995 (6,7) - to make it like this http://puu.sh/bwsFG/4770d36641.jpg. I ddin't do exactly this, but I changed the flow from the slider into the triple so that it is better to play.
02:47:447 (1,2) - This not looks good. Make it symmetrical. fixed.
02:50:118 (1,2) - Blanket no ? fixed.
- Hard :
01:34:296 (3,4,5) - I don't like flow here. changed this part around, hopefully plays better now.
01:40:871 (3,4) - You can deminitly find a way to improve flow here. stacked the 2 circles in the middle.
02:12:926 (1) - Rotate it by -20° to improve flow. done.
That's all. Hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

thank you for the mod sir. II keep getting lucky with you in #modreqs

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2014-09-13T00:26:20+00:00

Setz206 wrote:
II keep getting lucky with you in #modreqs

Looks like yes XD
I'll be kind, and give you a star

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-09-13T01:00:07+00:00

Nozhomi

Nozhomi wrote:
- Lanturn's Normal :
00:41:693 (4) - Move it at 144:84 for the flow. Stacked on the (2) and readjusted the next slider after.
01:51:556 (1,2) - Honestly it would be better if they was stack. Atm he looks like he was put here randomly. I don't like stacking notes under on normal diffs, especially since this is the easiest one in the set so I'm going to leave it as is.
02:13:544 (2,3) - Blanket maybe ? Sure. Done.
[/notice]

That's all. Hope it help you.
Good luck Mukyu~

Thanks <3

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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-09-13T06:10:45+00:00

Memes for miles

Insane:
00:16:214 (1) - Raise this up to complete the curve
00:39:228 (5) - but this jump like why like what
01:25:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this a pretty pattern pls
01:58:543 (1) - but this slowdown like what

Hard:
B)

Dankurn:
B)

Yeeee. the main issue I have with this map is that I don't understand a lot of jumps in insane, but other than that its fine. Get like 2 more mods then call me back

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-13T07:00:44+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Memes for miles

Insane:
00:16:214 (1) - Raise this up to complete the curve done.
00:39:228 (5) - but this jump like why like what I will get reduce the distance of the jumps in this slow section i suppose.
01:25:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this a pretty pattern pls ok.
01:58:543 (1) - but this slowdown like what this was to build momentum for the next set of jumps, but people dont seem to like it, so its gaing to 1x speed now.

Hard:
B)

Dankurn:
B)

Yeeee. the main issue I have with this map is that I don't understand a lot of jumps in insane, but other than that its fine. Get like 2 more mods then call me back

thanks for the mod, I will try to get the mods and get a hold of you again. it might be a bit since its hard to get mods for longer maps

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2014-09-13T20:21:42+00:00

setz y u mak mi do dis

Lanturn's Normal

3 PERFECT 5 ME (Lanturn teach me how to map pls)

Hard

00:45:187 (4,5) - Move to x308 y320, just to be OCD lol
01:20:529 (2,3) - IMO could be blanketed better
02:32:652 (5) - NC
You can "copy pasta" 01:07:995 (1,2) to where 01:08:817 (3,4) is

Insane

00:45:803 (1,2) - Looks like it's blanketed wrong lol
00:49:091 (5) - NC
01:54:022 (3,4,5) - Make it so that these are spread apart?
02:08:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make like 3 beats of these a reverse slider, as streaming at slow BPM is weird for some people.
02:38:406 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ but maybe 4 or 5 beats instead?

kbai

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-13T20:59:19+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
Hard
00:45:187 (4,5) - Move to x308 y320, just to be OCD lol ok
01:20:529 (2,3) - IMO could be blanketed better had to pull out the microscope for this one, tweaked very slightly.
02:32:652 (5) - NC ok.
You can "copy pasta" 01:07:995 (1,2) to where 01:08:817 (3,4) is Yeah I noticed this was slightly off, fixed.

Insane
00:45:803 (1,2) - Looks like it's blanketed wrong lol another microscope blanket fix.
00:49:091 (5) - NC no need here, these combos are consistent.
01:54:022 (3,4,5) - Make it so that these are spread apart? stack is fine, especially for AR8 and this kind of BPM.
02:08:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make like 3 beats of these a reverse slider, as streaming at slow BPM is weird for some people. Most people will be DTing this anyway, I think this is fine for an insane as well.
02:38:406 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ but maybe 4 or 5 beats instead? see above

kbai

thanks for the mod

Last edited by Setz 2014-09-13T21:45:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

tewbs

42 posts

Joined August 2013

tewbs 2014-09-13T21:15:54+00:00

First time modding. Hopefully im doing this right

I have no experience mapping/modding normal and hard diffs but it looked fine to me

Insane

00:38:406 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest you move 4 to make it go straight up with 3 for better flow
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - plays a bit weird IMO, try moving 4 down for better flow into the slider
01:06:967 (5,1) - I suggest giving 1 a little curve and maybe rotate it because the movement is a bit forced into the slider. http://puu.sh/bxGwb.jpg
01:56:488 (1,2) - this jump might be a bit too big?
02:36:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i suggest moving the first 1,2,3(purple) to the right a bit and the second 1,2,3(blue) to the left and stack the 2's kind of like this http://puu.sh/bxGZu.jpg for better flow into the stream.

That's all i found. Hope these helps.
Good luck with getting this ranked!

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-13T21:43:55+00:00

tewbs wrote:
First time modding. Hopefully im doing this right

I have no experience mapping/modding normal and hard diffs but it looked fine to me

Insane
00:38:406 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest you move 4 to make it go straight up with 3 for better flow I think this is fine.
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - plays a bit weird IMO, try moving 4 down for better flow into the slider lowered the 4 and moved up slider some, hopefully this plays better now.
01:06:967 (5,1) - I suggest giving 1 a little curve and maybe rotate it because the movement is a bit forced into the slider. http://puu.sh/bxGwb.jpg I like this, done.
01:56:488 (1,2) - this jump might be a bit too big? I think this is fine, you get plenty of time to react and recover.
02:36:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i suggest moving the first 1,2,3(purple) to the right a bit and the second 1,2,3(blue) to the left and stack the 2's kind of like this http://puu.sh/bxGZu.jpg for better flow into the stream. ended up centering the 2s of both combos just for aesthetics, and the flow into the stream is still better than before.

That's all i found. Hope these helps.
Good luck with getting this ranked!

ty for the mod sir

Don

218 posts

Joined December 2012

Don 2014-09-14T19:49:41+00:00

Hey! PM request from mutual friendship. Because I accept mutual modding reqs.

I'm trying to mod the best that I can taking your style in consideration. It would mean the world to me if you could reply to my mod. That way, I'll become a better modder!

[Lanturn]
Let me start out by saying that I really love your maps.

00:26:077 (1) - Make the red tick fall in the middle of the slider so that it'll look more beautiful.
00:27:515 (1) - Here as well, try to land the red ticks on the drum beats. Nitpicky, but it can indeed be improved.
00:44:776 (2) - ^
01:03:063 (3,4) - Make the blanket perfect between these sliders
01:54:640 (5,1) - Nitpicky, but maybe try and blanket this.
01:59:777 (1,2) - Once again, this blanket can be improved.
02:19:092 (5,1) - ^
02:28:955 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]
sorry for the short mod here
00:56:899 (7,2) - Stack leniency fucks this up, consider manual stacking to make this look better while disabling stack leniency
01:27:721 (1,2) - You might want to reconsider the position/rotation of these sliders, right now, it doesn't look too good I feel.
02:38:406 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:27:104 (5) - NC to accommodate for the long pause and to get rid of followpoint
00:56:488 (5) - Make the hit object at this time start in 4, right now it doesn't flow well.
01:14:570 (1,2) - Consider changing the rhythm to something like this, this makes it more fit with the difficulty and play better (more than 1 repeat feels very unfitting when used like this in an insane)
01:28:337 (7,8,1) - Make the spacing consistent, there's no reason for it to be like this right now
01:31:009 (4,5) - This jump is unfittingly large. Try something else! No idea what though. Your call.
01:37:995 (6,7) - Press control G for more fun jumps!
02:00:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - Talked about this in PM.

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-14T21:26:25+00:00

Don wrote:
Hey! PM request from mutual friendship. Because I accept mutual modding reqs.

I'm trying to mod the best that I can taking your style in consideration. It would mean the world to me if you could reply to my mod. That way, I'll become a better modder!

[Hard]
sorry for the short mod here
00:56:899 (7,2) - Stack leniency fucks this up, consider manual stacking to make this look better while disabling stack leniency we discussed this in IRC, I ddin't want to get rid of stack leniency because it would mess with other stacks in the map, so instead, I made a new rhythm here.
01:27:721 (1,2) - You might want to reconsider the position/rotation of these sliders, right now, it doesn't look too good I feel. I think these are fine, and flow into each other. I used to have them in straight line, but it looked and played boring honestly.
02:38:406 (4,5) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:27:104 (5) - NC to accommodate for the long pause and to get rid of followpoint not a fan of small combos like this because they tend to ruin the map's drain, but this suggestion actually makes sense. done.
00:56:488 (5) - Make the hit object at this time start in 4, right now it doesn't flow well. new rhythm for this part, hopefully plays nicer.
01:14:570 (1,2) - Consider changing the rhythm to something like this, this makes it more fit with the difficulty and play better (more than 1 repeat feels very unfitting when used like this in an insane) I played around with this, but I didn't like it. I think its hard enough that 2 starts on a blue tick, so im going to leave this alone.
01:28:337 (7,8,1) - Make the spacing consistent, there's no reason for it to be like this right now hmm, not sure how this happened. the problem was earlier in this stream where spacing became inconsistent, fixed.
01:31:009 (4,5) - This jump is unfittingly large. Try something else! No idea what though. Your call. changed pattern here so the jump isnt as big.
01:37:995 (6,7) - Press control G for more fun jumps! dont want jump here.
02:00:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - Talked about this in PM.

thanks for the mod! it made me take a second look at a few things to improve them.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-09-15T20:07:27+00:00

Don

Don wrote:
[Lanturn]
Let me start out by saying that I really love your maps. <3 thank you!

00:26:077 (1) - Make the red tick fall in the middle of the slider so that it'll look more beautiful. Fixed. Good eye!
00:27:515 (1) - Here as well, try to land the red ticks on the drum beats. Nitpicky, but it can indeed be improved. Readjusted these.
00:44:776 (2) - ^ Alright. Done.
01:03:063 (3,4) - Make the blanket perfect between these sliders Nudged the tail down slightly I guess? Idk if that made it any better though.
01:54:640 (5,1) - Nitpicky, but maybe try and blanket this. No room, and it doesn't need a blanket.
01:59:777 (1,2) - Once again, this blanket can be improved. This is fine as is.
02:19:092 (5,1) - ^ Changed around slightly.
02:28:955 (4,1) - ^ Not needed. The (1) is blanketing the previous (3) on its tail.

Thanks for the mod :3

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219,331,45392,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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16,184,52789,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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172,316,117105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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76,244,138681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,124,139092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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356,108,158818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-09-15T23:14:18+00:00

Hii, mod from my queue. My mods are usually just personal preference so just take whatever you want.

Insane

00:29:365 (3) - Move to (275,194) to place at the center of the pentagon.
00:33:269 (2,3) - The flow from (2,3) feels really nasty for me to play. I'd move (3) up a little or angle it differently.
00:44:776 (4) - A drum finish/clap sounds better.
00:45:598 (8) - Move this to somewhere like (248,155) to get rid of the overlap.
00:48:577 - You could possibly start a 1/4 slider here to follow the vocals.
00:51:865 - ^
00:58:132 (5) - Drum finish/clap sounds better.
01:09:022 (2) - Pretty nazi but this should be moved up a little to make a straight line if that's what you were going for.
01:12:515 (2) - I'd split this into two circles instead of a slider because I feel it'd emphasize those instruments more.
01:23:611 (1) - Remove finish
01:24:433 (3) - ^
01:28:337 (7,8) - Maybe switch these two out for a 1/4 slider for the vocals.
01:55:461 (3) - Maybe add a drum sample set for more feedback.
02:12:926 (1) - Remove finish
02:17:652 (5,4,5,6,1) - I don't even know what this flow is.
02:51:967 (4) - Why not just stack this onto (3)?
02:55:461 (6) - Move to (285,367)
02:56:693 - I'd just add a circle around here because it felt weird to end at 02:55:461 when it's building up.

Hard

Pretty clean but there's an overuse of finishes and it doesn't sound nice. If you don't notice them then I guess it's fine
02:56:693 - Same as Insane

Lanturn's Normal

So clean I used it to wipe my hands.
02:56:693 - Same as Insane

Good luck!

Best girl pls

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Setz 2014-09-16T00:30:27+00:00

Knotts wrote:
Hii, mod from my queue. My mods are usually just personal preference so just take whatever you want.

Insane
00:29:365 (3) - Move to (275,194) to place at the center of the pentagon. I wanted this note to be in the center of the spinner, so no change.
00:33:269 (2,3) - The flow from (2,3) feels really nasty for me to play. I'd move (3) up a little or angle it differently. flows fine to me honestly
00:44:776 (4) - A drum finish/clap sounds better. I did this in Hard, because I was specifically mapping the drums. in insane, I am mapping piano with these jumps, so I think the whistle makes more sense.
00:45:598 (8) - Move this to somewhere like (248,155) to get rid of the overlap. fixed
00:48:577 - You could possibly start a 1/4 slider here to follow the vocals.
00:51:865 - ^ did this in hard, didnt do it in insane by choice.
00:58:132 (5) - Drum finish/clap sounds better. again, for the rhythm I am trying to highlight here, i think whistle makes more sense.
01:09:022 (2) - Pretty nazi but this should be moved up a little to make a straight line if that's what you were going for. on purpose, i wanted 01:09:022 (2,4) - to be on the same axis.
01:12:515 (2) - I'd split this into two circles instead of a slider because I feel it'd emphasize those instruments more. I like this, done.
01:23:611 (1) - Remove finish
01:24:433 (3) - ^ done for both
01:28:337 (7,8) - Maybe switch these two out for a 1/4 slider for the vocals. rather keep stream going instead of suddenly changing what i am mapping during it, just seems confusing.
01:55:461 (3) - Maybe add a drum sample set for more feedback. done
02:12:926 (1) - Remove finish ok
02:17:652 (5,4,5,6,1) - I don't even know what this flow is. huh? you linked a bunch of random notes.
02:51:967 (4) - Why not just stack this onto (3)? ruins spacing.
02:55:461 (6) - Move to (285,367) done
02:56:693 - I'd just add a circle around here because it felt weird to end at 02:55:461 when it's building up. this also feels weird, there is really no good way to deal with this. I wanted to map this ending but the timing for it is incredibly complex, you need a red line per object, so decided to go with whats there.
Hard
Pretty clean but there's an overuse of finishes and it doesn't sound nice. If you don't notice them then I guess it's fine you have a point, I removed some of them finishes.
02:56:693 - Same as Insane

Good luck!

thanks for the mod!

and best girl is akari, pls.

Lanturn

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-09-16T02:45:23+00:00

Going to follow Setz on this. thanks though for the suggestion :3

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-01T02:22:53+00:00

Precious bros B)

Also, fixed one stack in hard, but other than that, it's fine

EDIT: god dammit setz

Setz

1,419 posts

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Topic Starter

Setz 2014-10-01T02:30:36+00:00

Thanks, and I am sorry senpai, forgive me

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