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Nekomata Master - Echoes [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Charlotte

snowball112 wrote:

Hey ^^ Thanks for modding my map. Mod from #modreqs

AI Mod stuff:
-set your timing points on the beats
-disable letterboxing in song select->design
Kantan
General:
This feels a bit difficult for a kantan, maybe reduce the length of combos (for example maximum of 5 notes with 1/1 notes in a row).
Slider velocity: possible change to 1
SV multiplier: change to 1x at all times? You have slight changes in these, but it might be more appropriate for kantan to stick to one SV multiplier to make it easier for new players. Maybe start with the SV multiplier changes from futsuu onwards instead of from kantan.
Some of your large notes feel a bit out of place in my opinion.
Maybe decrease the volume more for the non-kiai time further as well? Kiai time vol100% change

00:14:568 (14) - add finish according to the music OK
00:16:567 (18) - move to 00:16:966 (18) OK
00:18:965 (23) - remove to split up the longer combo OK
00:19:365 (24,25) - remove finish - i don't think there is anything to emphasize here OK
00:20:964 (28) - add finish following the music OK
00:22:163 (30) - remove to allow players to prepare for the slider better OK
00:22:963 (32) - remove ^reason as before OK
00:31:759 (46) - add finish and move to 00:33:757 (50) - finish follows the music + spacing before longer pattern OK
00:34:157 (51) - remove to space out the notes a bit more OK

Other than this I'd suggest to break up other longer patterns into smaller sets, for example 00:40:154 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) and 01:37:324 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) small combo change
Futsuu
Similar to my suggestions for kantan, this difficulty is maybe a bit too high for futsuu, mainly because you use a lot of notes with only 1/2 spacing.
Instead, you could use longer patterns of notes with 1/1 spacings like you did in your kantan instead.
In my opinion short patterns of 3 notes with 1/2 spacing might be better to make the difficulty easier, so you could make some of the 5 note 1/2 patterns like 00:40:154 (5,6,7,8,9) shorter.
Maybe use something like this pattern: starting from 00:40:154 (5).
You don't have to change all of the longer patterns, but maybe space them out a bit more so players can prepare for them better.
5 note delete and easy map change
More to follow on other difficulties shortly.

Also, here is a useful Guide that I like if you havn't seen it yet.

That's all from me. Good luck with your map ^^
Thank you Mod :)
TKS
Echoesだ!と思ったら音質が凄い… 音質というかなんか音源自体おかしい気が…
手持ちの音源をエンコしたので良かったらどうぞ… http://puu.sh/9111b.mp3

音源を差し替えたあと、
BPM : 150.5
offset : 580
赤線をもう1本、同じBPMで81111に引いてあげると綺麗かもしれません。

mod集まったら見に来るかも知れませんので、kudosuはいりません。
頑張ってください :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

TKS wrote:

Echoesだ!と思ったら音質が凄い… 音質というかなんか音源自体おかしい気が…
手持ちの音源をエンコしたので良かったらどうぞ… http://puu.sh/9111b.mp3

音源を差し替えたあと、
BPM : 150.5
offset : 580 音源差し替えた後ずれた譜面を修正しました。
赤線をもう1本、同じBPMで81111に引いてあげると綺麗かもしれません。追加しました OK

mod集まったら見に来るかも知れませんので、kudosuはいりません。
頑張ってください :)
Thank you TKS :)
MineC24
From #modreqs ~



Probably, not used letter box in Taiko mode.

Note snap check please.

Kantan
00:32:473 (47) - change to Big d
00:48:420 (21) - remove Big
00:52:407 (28) - change to d or 00:58:788 (38) - change to k (This part of sound is so similar)
01:37:457 (8) - d

Futsuu
00:13:537 (15) - Personally, I'd like to remove this note.
00:18:121 (26,27) - remove Big
00:19:916 (31) - same as 00:13:537 (15)
00:48:420 (32) - remove Big. and If you want, you remove Big with 00:47:623 (31)
00:52:407 (42) - same as Kantan (00:52:407 (28) - change to d or 00:58:788 (38) - change to k (This part of sound is so similar))
01:35:463 - add note d
01:39:452 (17) - change to d and 01:39:848 (18) - change to k

Muzukashii
00:18:121 (31,32) - remove Big
00:20:114 (38) - I'd like to change to d.
00:31:679 (74) - d and 00:32:079 (77) - k
00:34:467 (83) - remove Big or 00:34:467 (83,84,85) - remove Big this.
00:38:054 (2,3,4,5) - change to this -> (00:38:054 -> 00:38:254)
00:42:839 (33,34,35) - remove Big
00:47:623 (60,61) - remove Big
00:50:813 (69) - d
01:06:061 (135) - remove this note and add note by 01:06:261
01:35:463 - add note d

Oni
00:18:127 (17,18) - remove Big
00:34:472 (77,78) - remove Big
00:38:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Muzukashii
00:43:437 (50) - remove Big

Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

MineC24 wrote:

From #modreqs ~



Probably, not used letter box in Taiko mode.

Note snap check please.

Kantan
00:32:473 (47) - change to Big d OK
00:48:420 (21) - remove Big OK
00:52:407 (28) - change to d OK or 00:58:788 (38) - change to k (This part of sound is so similar)
01:37:457 (8) - d OK

Futsuu
00:13:537 (15) - Personally, I'd like to remove this note. OK
00:18:121 (26,27) - remove Big OK
00:19:916 (31) - same as 00:13:537 (15) OK
00:48:420 (32) - remove Big. and If you want, you remove Big with 00:47:623 (31) OK
00:52:407 (42) - same as Kantan (00:52:407 (28) - change to d OK or 00:58:788 (38) - change to k (This part of sound is so similar))
01:35:463 - add note d OK
01:39:452 (17) - change to d and 01:39:848 (18) - change to k OK

Muzukashii
00:18:121 (31,32) - remove Big OK
00:20:114 (38) - I'd like to change to d. OK
00:31:679 (74) - d and 00:32:079 (77) - k OK
00:34:467 (83) - remove Big OK or 00:34:467 (83,84,85) - remove Big this.
00:38:054 (2,3,4,5) - change to this -> (00:38:054 -> 00:38:254) OK
00:42:839 (33,34,35) - remove Big OK
00:47:623 (60,61) - remove Big OK
00:50:813 (69) - d OK
01:06:061 (135) - remove this note and add note by 01:06:261 OK
01:35:463 - add note dOK

Oni
00:18:127 (17,18) - remove Big OK
00:34:472 (77,78) - remove Big OK
00:38:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Muzukashii OK
00:43:437 (50) - remove Big OK

Good luck~ :)
All fixed

Thank you mod :)
Konpaku Sariel
Oni
*many notes aren't snaped

00:04:566 (4) - k
00:06:161 (6,7,8) - dkd
00:13:537 (2,3,4) - kkd
00:14:932 (10) - k
00:19:326 (20) - k
00:20:314 (25) - d
00:21:310 (30) - k
00:29:882 (57,58) - dk
00:30:878 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72) -
delete and add another pattern
for example d kkd d k ddk k

00:38:851 (6) - ~ 00:41:650 (34) -
delete all notes and think again calmly


00:42:841 (44) - k
00:43:437 (48) - k
00:54:402 (102,103) - ctrl + G

00:56:395 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - k k d d d
01:39:844 (21) - k
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

Oni
*many notes aren't snaped

00:04:566 (4) - k OK
00:06:161 (6,7,8) - dkd OK
00:13:537 (2,3,4) - kkd OK
00:14:932 (10) - k OK
00:19:326 (20) - k OK
00:20:314 (25) - d OK
00:21:310 (30) - k OK
00:29:882 (57,58) - dk OK
00:30:878 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72) -
delete and add another pattern
for example d kkd d k ddk k OK change example


00:38:851 (6) - ~ 00:41:650 (34) -
delete all notes and think again calmly OK Easy to beat

00:42:841 (44) - k OK
00:43:437 (48) - k OK
00:54:402 (102,103) - ctrl + G OK

00:56:395 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - k k d d d OK
01:39:844 (21) - k OK
Thank you mod :)
BigWilly
hai

[General]

Letterbox in breaks is not allowed in taiko, turn it off under Song Setup > Design

I also suggest resnapping all notes from the timing menu, as AiMod seems to be a bit angry about snapping :P

[Kantan]

00:06:161 (6) - Maybe change to a k to keep consistant to 00:09:350 (10,11,12) -
00:35:663 (1) - Maybe another slider instead of a spinner, it may make the oncoming notes difficult to see for new players. Same at 01:30:679 (1) - Maybe a slider could be a good substitute
00:46:028 (17) - Finish ? :P

[Futsuu]

00:06:161 (6,7,8) - Reverse Colors? Considering it is the same pitch as 00:06:958 (8) -

[Muzukashii]

[General]

The first kai seems to have a high density, but the 'main' one at the end has nothing compared to it. Consider adding or removing some notes.

00:09:350 (10,11,12) - Reverse for the same reasons as Futsuu


Good Luck
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Hair wrote:

hai

[General]

Letterbox in breaks is not allowed in taiko, turn it off under Song Setup > Design

I also suggest resnapping all notes from the timing menu, as AiMod seems to be a bit angry about snapping :P

[Kantan]

00:06:161 (6) - Maybe change to a k to keep consistant to 00:09:350 (10,11,12) - I have changed a little bit around that have been pointed out
00:35:663 (1) - Maybe another slider instead of a spinner, it may make the oncoming notes difficult to see for new players. Same at 01:30:679 (1) - Maybe a slider could be a good substitute keep
00:46:028 (17) - Finish ? :P No

[Futsuu]

00:06:161 (6,7,8) - Reverse Colors? Considering it is the same pitch as 00:06:958 (8) - I have changed a little bit around that have been pointed out


[Muzukashii]

[General]

The first kai seems to have a high density, but the 'main' one at the end has nothing compared to it. Consider adding or removing some notes keep


00:09:350 (10,11,12) - Reverse for the same reasons as Futsuu I have changed a little bit around that have been pointed out


Good Luck
Thank you mod. :)
Evening

Hair wrote:

Letterbox in breaks is not allowed in taiko, turn it off under Song Setup > Design

I also suggest resnapping all notes from the timing menu, as AiMod seems to be a bit angry about snapping :P

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

*many notes aren't snaped

MineC24 wrote:

Probably, not used letter box in Taiko mode.

Note snap check please.

snowball112 wrote:

-disable letterboxing in song select->design
ww didn't the previous modders tell you about the snapping?



didn't they tell you about the letterbox also? ...

[Oni]

00:33:673 (72,73) - dd > kk | Pitch map

00:47:224 - The transition between a long stream and single notes here is way too drastic, smoothen it out by putting more notes here
00:54:802 (104) - d > k | Pitchmap
00:57:789 - Triplet here?
01:07:561 (170) - d > k OR D | This is to emphasize or pitchmap this note here
01:15:132 (194) - d > k | Pitchmap
01:25:496 - The note density here is pretty uneven, not sure why though, owo
01:37:457 (13) - k > d | Pitch map the low pitch instrument
01:53:009 (58) - d > D | To match the cymbal in the music

[Muzu]

Err more unsnapped notes..
00:26:892 (56,57,62,63) - Pitchmap these notes
00:38:852 - Are you sure this is muzu...? | These patterns are way too hard for muzu players to even read and play properly
00:47:224 - Same as Oni, the transition is way too drastic, you don't just switch the instruments mapped whenever you like, it feels really awkward
01:25:895 - Same as Oni, the density is pretty uneven
01:41:542 - I don't think Muzu players can do this doublet/triplet pattern, feels more like a oni than a muzu
01:53:006 (57) - d > D | Same as Oni

Don't really feel like modding further, you really need to read the other modders' comments
Topic Starter
Charlotte

lZenxl wrote:

Hair wrote:

Letterbox in breaks is not allowed in taiko, turn it off under Song Setup > Design

I also suggest resnapping all notes from the timing menu, as AiMod seems to be a bit angry about snapping :P

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

*many notes aren't snaped

MineC24 wrote:

Probably, not used letter box in Taiko mode.

Note snap check please.

snowball112 wrote:

-disable letterboxing in song select->design
ww didn't the previous modders tell you about the snapping? Fixed



didn't they tell you about the letterbox also? ...

[Oni]

00:33:673 (72,73) - dd > kk | Pitch map OK

00:47:224 - The transition between a long stream and single notes here is way too drastic, smoothen it out by putting more notes here hmm, keep
00:54:802 (104) - d > k | Pitchmap OK
00:57:789 - Triplet here? OK
01:07:561 (170) - d > k OR D | This is to emphasize or pitchmap this note here OK D changed
01:15:132 (194) - d > k | Pitchmap OK
01:25:496 - The note density here is pretty uneven, not sure why though, owo OK. I have changed a little
01:37:457 (13) - k > d | Pitch map the low pitch instrument OK
01:53:009 (58) - d > D | To match the cymbal in the music OK

[Muzu]

Err more unsnapped notes..
00:26:892 (56,57,62,63) - Pitchmap these notes OK. I have changed a little
00:38:852 - Are you sure this is muzu...? | These patterns are way too hard for muzu players to even read and play properly OK patterns changed
00:47:224 - Same as Oni, the transition is way too drastic, you don't just switch the instruments mapped whenever you like, it feels really awkward hmm, keep
01:25:895 - Same as Oni, the density is pretty uneven OK. I have changed a little
01:41:542 - I don't think Muzu players can do this doublet/triplet pattern, feels more like a oni than a muzu OK patterns changed
01:53:006 (57) - d > D | Same as Oni OK

Don't really feel like modding further, you really need to read the other modders' comments Sorry. It did not know the meaning of snap
-Sh1n1-
Hey~~ M4M please :3

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Kantan]

  1. 00:19:716 (27) - change to k
  2. 00:26:892 (36,37) - Ctrl + G
  3. 00:27:689 (38) - move to 00:28:088 - and 00:29:284 (41) - change to d
  4. 00:37:656 (1,2) - delete
  5. 01:17:922 (69) - change to d
  6. 01:18:719 (70,71,72,73) - Ctrl + G
  7. 01:20:314 (74) - delete
  8. 01:39:449 - add d
  9. 01:41:841 - add k
  10. 01:44:633 (21) - delete
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:18:121 (25) - change to k
  2. 00:19:716 (29) - change to K
  3. 00:26:094 (40) - change to k
  4. 00:26:294 (41) - delete
  5. 00:27:888 (45) - move to 00:28:088 - and 00:29:483 (49) - move to 00:29:682 - sounds better and follow the rhythm
  6. 01:24:300 (118) - delete and add k here 01:25:097 -
  7. 01:28:885 (130) - move to 01:29:084 -
[Muzukashii]

  1. Too hard to be Muzukashii
  2. 00:14:234 (20) - delete
  3. 00:19:716 (35) - change to k
  4. 00:20:015 (37) - delete
  5. 00:20:314 (39) - change to k
  6. 00:26:194 (53,54) - delete
  7. 00:26:094 (52) - change to K
  8. 00:27:789 (56) - delete because is not necessary at Muzukashii
  9. 00:29:383 (63) - same hare ^
  10. 00:30:879 (68) - change to d
  11. 00:31:776 (73) - delete... no triplet here
  12. 00:40:845 (20) - change to k
  13. 00:42:639 (32) - change to k
  14. 00:55:895 (86) - delete
  15. 00:56:593 (91) - change to d and 00:57:191 (95) - change to d too.
  16. 00:56:792 (92) - change to k
  17. 00:58:388 (101) - change to k
  18. 00:59:483 (106) - delete
  19. 01:00:281 (110) - delete
  20. 01:34:167 (3) - k
  21. 01:37:157 (12) - delete
  22. 01:37:955 (16) - ^
  23. 01:43:137 (40) - ^
[Oni]

  1. 00:15:729 - add k
  2. 00:16:526 (13) - delete
  3. 01:16:526 - add k
  4. 01:16:727 (201) - move to 01:16:925 -
  5. 01:40:546 - add d and delete this 01:40:745 (27) - , 01:40:346 (23,24) - Ctrl + G -->(Final: kkddk)
  6. 01:40:944 (27) - move to 01:40:845 -
I like the song Good Luck :) STAR >.<
Topic Starter
Charlotte
Update :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Charlotte wrote:

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hey~~ M4M please :3

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[Kantan]

  1. 00:19:716 (27) - change to k OK
  2. 00:26:892 (36,37) - Ctrl + G OK
  3. 00:27:689 (38) - move to 00:28:088 - and 00:29:284 (41) - change to d OK
  4. 00:37:656 (1,2) - delete OK
  5. 01:17:922 (69) - change to d OK
  6. 01:18:719 (70,71,72,73) - Ctrl + G OK
  7. 01:20:314 (74) - delete OK
  8. 01:39:449 - add d OK
  9. 01:41:841 - add k OK
  10. 01:44:633 (21) - delete OK
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:18:121 (25) - change to k OK
  2. 00:19:716 (29) - change to K OK
  3. 00:26:094 (40) - change to k OK
  4. 00:26:294 (41) - delete OK
  5. 00:27:888 (45) - move to 00:28:088 - and 00:29:483 (49) - move to 00:29:682 - sounds better and follow the rhythm OK
  6. 01:24:300 (118) - delete and add k here 01:25:097 - OK
  7. 01:28:885 (130) - move to 01:29:084 - OK
[Muzukashii]

  1. Too hard to be Muzukashii
  2. 00:14:234 (20) - delete OK
  3. 00:19:716 (35) - change to k OK
  4. 00:20:015 (37) - delete OK
  5. 00:20:314 (39) - change to k OK
  6. 00:26:194 (53,54) - delete OK
  7. 00:26:094 (52) - change to K OK
  8. 00:27:789 (56) - delete because is not necessary at Muzukashii OK
  9. 00:29:383 (63) - same hare ^ OK
  10. 00:30:879 (68) - change to d OK
  11. 00:31:776 (73) - delete... no triplet here OK
  12. 00:40:845 (20) - change to k OK
  13. 00:42:639 (32) - change to k OK
  14. 00:55:895 (86) - delete OK
  15. 00:56:593 (91) - change to d and 00:57:191 (95) - change to d too. OK
  16. 00:56:792 (92) - change to k OK
  17. 00:58:388 (101) - change to k OK
  18. 00:59:483 (106) - delete OK
  19. 01:00:281 (110) - delete OK
  20. 01:34:167 (3) - k OK
  21. 01:37:157 (12) - delete OK
  22. 01:37:955 (16) - ^ OK
  23. 01:43:137 (40) - ^ OK
[Oni]

  1. 00:15:729 - add k OK
  2. 00:16:526 (13) - delete OK
  3. 01:16:526 - add k OK
  4. 01:16:727 (201) - move to 01:16:925 - OK
  5. 01:40:546 - add d and delete this 01:40:745 (27) - , 01:40:346 (23,24) - Ctrl + G -->(Final: kk ddk) OK
  6. 01:40:944 (27) - move to 01:40:845 - OK
I like the song Good Luck :) STAR >.< STAR Thanks~
toara_fict
Hi :3 M4M Mod :3

*気に入らない提案はフルシカトで構いませんので嫌ならNoでokです٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. BG Codeの変更 0.0 => 0.-80 位にしてみてはどうでしょう? ( 0.0の時 , 0.-80の時 )
    こちらの変更の仕方はこの画面の状態の左上のFile => 下から3番目のOpen, osu! in notepad にあるEventsのところの数字をいじれば画像の位置が変更されます

    Code
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

    から

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,-80

    (-80ではなくても自分の気に入ったくらいの位置にしてあげるといいです!)


  2. AudioのSamplesetがNormalではなくSoftになっていました。unrank要素なのかはわからないですがどうしても変えたくない場合以外はNormalに変えておきましょう ( ここの'S'の部分 )

  3. Widescreen SupportとLetter boxのチェックは外しておきましょう。( Supportの方はSB(ストーリーボード)のある譜面以外は外しておく、Letter boxはわからないけど外しておく )
    Song SetupからDesignにいけばわかります ( これのMusc. Togglesのチェック2つ )
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:905 (32) - Delete , 00:22:905 - 00:24:500 - にadd note ? ( 初心者にはスライダーの点を全部入れるのはとても難しいのでスライダーを消すことをお勧めします。 )

  2. 00:43:237 (9) - ~ 00:44:832 (13) - ここのFinish5つの意味があまりわからないです(全難易度ここの位置はFinishで構成されてましたが、何か意味はあるのでしょうか? )

  3. 01:04:367 (47) - & 01:43:437 (22) - ここも00:22:905 (32) - 同様の理由でDelete.add note をお勧めします。
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:905 (37) - ( Kantan 同様です Futsuuなのでスライダー自体はあってもいいとは思いますが少し長いかなぁ・・・って感じました。 )

  2. 00:43:237 (18,19,20,21,22) - Kantanと同じく

  3. 00:48:021 - k ? ( 00:48:221 - ここにもいれていいかも ) 理由としては 00:47:623 (31) - ~ 00:49:417 (33) - までの空きの違和感がすごかったから

  4. 00:53:403 (45) - move 00:53:603 (45) - and 00:53:802 (46) - Delete ?
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. MuzuとOniは大雑把に書きます

  2. Muzu :00:38:852 (6) - ~ 00:42:839 (33) - と 00:42:839 (33) - ~ 00:45:231 (45) - と 00:48:420 (61) - ~ 00:51:211 (70) - この辺の差が極端すぎるなぁ・・・と感じました。加速もいらないと思いました

  3. Oni : 00:38:851 (6) - ~ 00:47:224 (77) - と 00:47:224 (77) - ~ の差が↑同様

  4. kiaiも少し差が多いのではないかな?って感じました ( 例: 01:21:110 (220) - ~ 01:23:104 (235) - と 01:23:104 (235) - ~ 01:27:489 (252) - など ) もう少しバランス的に配置してみてはどうでしょうか?

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元々本家か次郎勢の方?かと思いますが、頑張ってください。 譜面自体はいい感じの配置(特に偶数連打の使い方はいい感じだと感じた譜面でした!)

Rankedの道は険しいですが諦めなければ可能だと思うので、ranked目指して頑張ってください! GoodLuck & star~
Topic Starter
Charlotte

toara_fict wrote:

Hi :3 M4M Mod :3

*気に入らない提案はフルシカトで構いませんので嫌ならNoでokです٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. BG Codeの変更 0.0 => 0.-80 位にしてみてはどうでしょう? ( 0.0の時 , 0.-80の時 ) OK
    こちらの変更の仕方はこの画面の状態の左上のFile => 下から3番目のOpen, osu! in notepad にあるEventsのところの数字をいじれば画像の位置が変更されます

    Code
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

    から

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,-80

    (-80ではなくても自分の気に入ったくらいの位置にしてあげるといいです!)


  2. AudioのSamplesetがNormalではなくSoftになっていました。unrank要素なのかはわからないですがどうしても変えたくない場合以外はNormalに変えておきましょう ( ここの'S'の部分 ) OK

  3. Widescreen SupportとLetter boxのチェックは外しておきましょう。( Supportの方はSB(ストーリーボード)のある譜面以外は外しておく、Letter boxはわからないけど外しておく )
    Song SetupからDesignにいけばわかります ( これのMusc. Togglesのチェック2つ ) OK


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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:905 (32) - Delete , 00:22:905 - 00:24:500 - にadd note ? ( 初心者にはスライダーの点を全部入れるのはとても難しいのでスライダーを消すことをお勧めします。 ) OK

  2. 00:43:237 (9) - ~ 00:44:832 (13) - ここのFinish5つの意味があまりわからないです(全難易度ここの位置はFinishで構成されてましたが、何か意味はあるのでしょうか? ) 音に合わせて大音符にしました

  3. 01:04:367 (47) - & 01:43:437 (22) - ここも00:22:905 (32) - 同様の理由でDelete.add note をお勧めします。01:43:437 (22) - ここのスライダーは短いので残しました
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:905 (37) - ( Kantan 同様です Futsuuなのでスライダー自体はあってもいいとは思いますが少し長いかなぁ・・・って感じました。 ) スライダーを少しだけ短くしました

  2. 00:43:237 (18,19,20,21,22) - Kantanと同じく

  3. 00:48:021 - k ? ( 00:48:221 - ここにもいれていいかも ) 理由としては 00:47:623 (31) - ~ 00:49:417 (33) - までの空きの違和感がすごかったから OK

  4. 00:53:403 (45) - move 00:53:603 (45) - and 00:53:802 (46) - Delete ? OK
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. MuzuとOniは大雑把に書きます

  2. Muzu :00:38:852 (6) - ~ 00:42:839 (33) - と 00:42:839 (33) - ~ 00:45:231 (45) - と 00:48:420 (61) - ~ 00:51:211 (70) - この辺の差が極端すぎるなぁ・・・と感じました。加速もいらないと思いました 加速だけカットしkeep

  3. Oni : 00:38:851 (6) - ~ 00:47:224 (77) - と 00:47:224 (77) - ~ の差が↑同様 keep

  4. kiaiも少し差が多いのではないかな?って感じました ( 例: 01:21:110 (220) - ~ 01:23:104 (235) - と 01:23:104 (235) - ~ 01:27:489 (252) - など ) もう少しバランス的に配置してみてはどうでしょうか? keep

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

元々本家か次郎勢の方?かと思いますが、頑張ってください。 譜面自体はいい感じの配置(特に偶数連打の使い方はいい感じだと感じた譜面でした!)

Rankedの道は険しいですが諦めなければ可能だと思うので、ranked目指して頑張ってください! GoodLuck & star~
Mod&Star Thanks :) Generalのほうは全然詳しくなくて、とても参考になりました 8-)
mliencheng
Kantan
00:03:769 d
00:04:566 k
01:03:171 k
01:27:091 k
01:29:881 d
01:30:280 k
01:39:848 k


Futsuu
most same as Kantan

00:46:825 k
01:27:091 k
01:30:280 k


Muzukashii
00:28:885 k
01:08:354 k
01:43:237 k


Oni
00:14:533 k
00:20:613 d
00:22:506 k
00:35:264 k
01:02:872 k
01:02:972 k
01:30:081 k
01:30:280 k

:)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

mliencheng wrote:

Kantan
00:03:769 d OK
00:04:566 k OK
01:03:171 k NO
01:27:091 k NO
01:29:881 d OK
01:30:280 k OK
01:39:848 k NO


Futsuu
most same as Kantan

00:46:825 k NO
01:27:091 k OK
01:30:280 k NO


Muzukashii
00:28:885 k OK
01:08:354 k OK
01:43:237 k NO


Oni
00:14:533 k NO
00:20:613 d NO
00:22:506 k NO
00:35:264 k NO
01:02:872 k OK
01:02:972 k OK
01:30:081 k NO
01:30:280 k NO

:)
Thank you mod. :)
Akiyama Mizuki
From your pm request.

Kantan
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D
00:19:716 (27) - K
00:43:237 (9,10,11,12,13) - just d k k d k
01:39:848 (14) - k

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D
00:34:467 (61,62,63) - d k d
01:29:483 (133) - k
01:42:439 (28) - Move to 01:42:240 -

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D
00:42:839 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - Why big notes?

Oni
SPOILER
OD5 plz
00:00:580 (1) - D
00:47:025 (75,76) - k
01:02:972 (147) - d
Topic Starter
Charlotte

bbj0920 wrote:

From your pm request.

Kantan
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D OK
00:19:716 (27) - K OK
00:43:237 (9,10,11,12,13) - just d k k d k OK
01:39:848 (14) - k OK

Futsuu
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D OK
00:34:467 (61,62,63) - d k d OK
01:29:483 (133) - k OK
01:42:439 (28) - Move to 01:42:240 - OK

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:00:580 (1) - D OK
00:42:839 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - Why big notes? Fnish delete

Oni
SPOILER
OD5 plz OK
00:00:580 (1) - D OK
00:47:025 (75,76) - k OK
01:02:972 (147) - d OK
All fixed
toaraさんに指摘された部分も考え直し修正しました。

Thank you mod. :)
Snowy Heart
``
Snowy Heart

Snowy Heart wrote:

Can I have a M4M?

OK
d is small red
D is Big Red
k is small blue
K is Big Blue

kantan
00:33:669 (50) - k
00:38:852 (1) - D
00:52:407 (26) - k
01:13:138 (61) - k
01:23:901 (80) - k
01:42:240 (19) - delete

Futsuu
00:06:958 (8) - D
00:48:420 (34) - k
00:38:852 (5) - D
00:56:792 (56) - k
01:07:556 (82) - D
01:43:037 (30) - k

Muzukashii
00:06:958 (8) - D
00:16:526 (25,26,27) - kdk
00:38:254 (2) - to 00:47:224 (59) - - I think there may be overmap! you should need a short break!
01:10:347 (148) - k
01:37:257 (12) - k
01:43:237 (38) - k

Oni
00:06:958 (8) - D
00:22:506 (33) - k
Sorry I think this Oni not fit me = =It's too hard!!

Can you mod my map?
My map ishttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3161915/
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Snowy Heart wrote:

Can I have a M4M?

OK
d is small red
D is Big Red
k is small blue
K is Big Blue

kantan
00:33:669 (50) - k keep
00:38:852 (1) - D OK
00:52:407 (26) - k keep
01:13:138 (61) - k OK
01:23:901 (80) - k OK
01:42:240 (19) - delete NO

Futsuu
00:06:958 (8) - D keep
00:48:420 (34) - k keep
00:38:852 (5) - D OK
00:56:792 (56) - k keep
01:07:556 (82) - D OK
01:43:037 (30) - k keep

Muzukashii
00:06:958 (8) - D keep
00:16:526 (25,26,27) - kdk OK
00:38:254 (2) - to 00:47:224 (59) - - I think there may be overmap! you should need a short break! bpm150 so keep
01:10:347 (148) - k keep
01:37:257 (12) - k OK
01:43:237 (38) - k keep

Oni
00:06:958 (8) - D keep
00:22:506 (33) - k OK
Sorry I think this Oni not fit me = =It's too hard!! OK><

Can you mod my map?
My map ishttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3161915/
Thank you mod. :)
wasonz
From my queue

Muzukashii
00:16:128 (24) - k
00:21:310 (40) - k
00:22:905 (44) - :? Maybe add spiner instead
00:25:297 (45,46) - k
00:30:879 (64,65,66) - k
00:34:865 (77,78) - remove finish
00:38:852 (6) ~ 00:42:639 (32) - :o delete some note because that so heavy for muzu
00:45:231 (45) ~ 00:47:224 (59) - ^ :o
00:51:011 (70) - add k
00:57:091 (94) - delete
00:56:991 (93,95) - k
00:57:589 (96) - d
00:57:789 (97,98,99) - ddd
00:58:287 (101) - delete
00:58:587 (102) - d
01:06:759 (137) - d
01:10:347 (149) - k
01:35:263 (7) - add k

Oni
00:13:537 (2) - d
00:20:114 (24) - d
00:20:514 (26,27,28) - kdd
00:25:695 (38) - d
00:29:283 (53,54,55) - kdk
00:30:879 (59) - k
00:37:656 (1) -
from this

to


00:45:230 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - My suggestion FLOW ~


00:56:991 (117,119) - k

01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - My suggestion FLOW ~

Good Luck ~ :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte
From my queue

Muzukashii
00:16:128 (24) - k OK
00:21:310 (40) - k OK
00:22:905 (44) - :? Maybe add spiner instead OK
00:25:297 (45,46) - k OK
00:30:879 (64,65,66) - k OK
00:34:865 (77,78) - remove finish OK
00:38:852 (6) ~ 00:42:639 (32) - :o delete some note because that so heavy for muzu sorry keep
00:45:231 (45) ~ 00:47:224 (59) - ^ :o sorry keep
00:51:011 (70) - add k OK
00:57:091 (94) - delete OK OK
00:56:991 (93,95) - k OK
00:57:589 (96) - d OK
00:57:789 (97,98,99) - ddd keep
00:58:287 (101) - delete OK
00:58:587 (102) - d keep
01:06:759 (137) - d OK
01:10:347 (149) - k OK
01:35:263 (7) - add k OK

Oni
00:13:537 (2) - d OK
00:20:114 (24) - d OK
00:20:514 (26,27,28) - kdd OK
00:25:695 (38) - d OK
00:29:283 (53,54,55) - kdk keep
00:30:879 (59) - k OK
00:37:656 (1) -
from this
keep
to
keep

00:45:230 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - My suggestion FLOW ~ OK


00:56:991 (117,119) - k keep

01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - My suggestion FLOW ~ OK

Good Luck ~ :)
Thank you mod. :)
Soldsaga KunG
Taiko mod :)

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Kantan
00:33:271 (49) - k
01:01:178 (41) - d

Futsuu
00:32:075 (56) - k
00:47:224 (30,31) - > switch

Muzukashii
00:46:427 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - >
01:16:128 (156,157,158) - kkk
01:30:479 (217) - k

Oni For Modder other :) :)

Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

Taiko mod :)

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Kantan
00:33:271 (49) - k OK
01:01:178 (41) - d OK

Futsuu
00:32:075 (56) - k OK
00:47:224 (30,31) - > switch OK

Muzukashii
00:46:427 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - > OK
01:16:128 (156,157,158) - kkk OK
01:30:479 (217) - k OK

Oni For Modder other :) :)

Good Luck :) :)
All fixed Thank you mod. :)
Kagami Yuki
mod as you requested.

[Oni]
  1. 00:27:689 - I would like recommend you use this pattern↓
  2. ...others sounds fine.
[Muzukashii]
  1. I don't know if it's fine.Maybe you should delete more notes in KIAI time.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kagami Yuki wrote:

mod as you requested.

[Oni]
  1. 00:27:689 - I would like recommend you use this pattern↓ I was in reference
  2. ...others sounds fine.
[Muzukashii]
  1. I don't know if it's fine.Maybe you should delete more notes in KIAI time. keep
Good luck~
Thank you mod. :)
Hinsvar
Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. 01:21:111 - Shouldn't you begin the kiai here instead of 01:20:712? You can add an inherited timing point alongside an uninherited one for that.
>Kantan
  1. 00:24:500 (33,34) - Try to swap? I feel that the instrument has a higher pitch at 00:24:500.
  2. 00:26:094 (36) - Make this a big don to follow the cymbal?
>Futsuu
  1. 00:29:682 (48) - Remove this to give a small break? I feel that you went too long at 00:26:892 - 00:33:271 without giving some kind of short breaks, which may make it hard to keep consistency for a typical Futsuu player.
  2. 00:42:440 (15,16) - ^. Also, I think the current overall note density in the kiai time is too high, especially at 150 BPM. You keep adding notes every one beat or so, while typically there are 2/1 gaps once every 2 stanzas or so in your usual Futsuu diffs. Consider removing a few notes to make breaks so this diff will be easier to play. (This applies to the entirety of the Futsuu diff.)
  3. 01:03:171 (74) - Make this a kat since the instrument here sounds as strong as 01:03:570 (75)?
  4. 01:10:347 (88,89) - k D? I think that fits better with the music.
  5. 01:15:131 (95,96) - ^
  6. 01:18:719 (102) - Use a kat since the music here is as powerful as 01:17:922 (101)?
>Muzukashii
  1. 00:26:892 (7,8) - Try to swap? Follows the music more accurately, IMO.
  2. 00:38:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Don't you feel that there are too much 1/4 notes here? There are too much 1/4 patterns in a row, which makes this part pretty hard, close enough to an Oni difficulty. Consider decreasing the usage of notes on the blue ticks. (Applies to similar cases.)
  3. 01:02:972 (114) - Move to 01:02:573 since the instrument is stronger there?
  4. 01:56:194 (55) - Why not use a don for consistency with the other diffs?
>Oni
  1. 00:38:852 - 00:41:643 - Whoa, is a stream like this allowed? I believe you should have a little break here and there, at least. I don't know much about Taiko, but I'm sure something like this only appears on Inner Oni diffs. And this is quite a big difficulty curve from Muzukashii anyway, so it'd be nicer to make this part a little easier.
  2. 01:05:962 (162,163,164,165,166) - Try ddkdk? Fits the song better, I think.
Well yeah... that's it. Not much to say.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. 01:21:111 - Shouldn't you begin the kiai here instead of 01:20:712? You can add an inherited timing point alongside an uninherited one for that. OK
>Kantan
  1. 00:24:500 (33,34) - Try to swap? I feel that the instrument has a higher pitch at 00:24:500. OK
  2. 00:26:094 (36) - Make this a big don to follow the cymbal? OK
>Futsuu
  1. 00:29:682 (48) - Remove this to give a small break? I feel that you went too long at 00:26:892 - 00:33:271 without giving some kind of short breaks, which may make it hard to keep consistency for a typical Futsuu player. OK
  2. 00:42:440 (15,16) - ^. Also, I think the current overall note density in the kiai time is too high, especially at 150 BPM. You keep adding notes every one beat or so, while typically there are 2/1 gaps once every 2 stanzas or so in your usual Futsuu diffs. Consider removing a few notes to make breaks so this diff will be easier to play. (This applies to the entirety of the Futsuu diff.) All right. Was easily
  3. 01:03:171 (74) - Make this a kat since the instrument here sounds as strong as 01:03:570 (75)? OK
  4. 01:10:347 (88,89) - k D? I think that fits better with the music. OK
  5. 01:15:131 (95,96) - ^ OK
  6. 01:18:719 (102) - Use a kat since the music here is as powerful as 01:17:922 (101)? OK
>Muzukashii
  1. 00:26:892 (7,8) - Try to swap? Follows the music more accurately, IMO. OK
  2. 00:38:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Don't you feel that there are too much 1/4 notes here? There are too much 1/4 patterns in a row, which makes this part pretty hard, close enough to an Oni difficulty. Consider decreasing the usage of notes on the blue ticks. (Applies to similar cases.) All right. Was easily
  3. 01:02:972 (114) - Move to 01:02:573 since the instrument is stronger there? OK
  4. 01:56:194 (55) - Why not use a don for consistency with the other diffs? OK
>Oni
  1. 00:38:852 - 00:41:643 - Whoa, is a stream like this allowed? I believe you should have a little break here and there, at least. I don't know much about Taiko, but I'm sure something like this only appears on Inner Oni diffs. And this is quite a big difficulty curve from Muzukashii anyway, so it'd be nicer to make this part a little easier. keep for now
  2. 01:05:962 (162,163,164,165,166) - Try ddkdk? Fits the song better, I think. OK
Well yeah... that's it. Not much to say.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Thank you mod. :)
Senritsu
Sorry for lateness >_<
i guess no need to kd this until i do full mod..nvm lols.

[General]
SPOILER
◘ Check AImod. It says the first kiai isn't snapped.

[Kantan]
SPOILER
00:16:925 (21,22) - swap, then remove the don. imo 1/1 stream like this is too hard if you make it after and before a stream.
00:19:317 (25) - remove, for the same reason as above
00:22:108 (28) - change to kat? it has higher pitch than 00:22:506 (29) -
00:33:669 (48) - move to 00:34:068. duplet all of sudden which following nothing seems out of place
my suggestion on this first kiai
00:40:048 (4) - remove? much more better with triplet than 4plet >_<
00:40:845 (4) - move to 00:40:447 (4) -
00:42:440 (7) - move to 00:42:041
00:44:832 (12) - move to 00:45:231 and add finish. i have an explanation for this. yes, you're following the piano. but what about 00:45:231 that has louder drum? add a note, and it will be a very long stream. so that's why i suggest this
with this, you will be following the piano or whatever it is.
00:47:623 (17) - remove finish, because it's same with 00:46:825 (15) - , which you don't add finish at. but still, no need for adding finish there, because the music isn't strong when heard.
00:56:792 (31) - move to 00:56:393 for following the music
01:03:171 (45) - remove, it's weird to have this here.
01:03:570 add a note here, for following the music. suggesting kat, to make pattern easier.
01:15:132 (64) - change to k, it even has higher pitch than 01:15:531 (65) -
01:24:699 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - too long for a kantan. suggest removing 01:26:293 (85) -
01:29:483 (91) - move to 01:29:084 for following the music.
01:37:457 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - too long. remove 12 >w>
01:40:247 add a don here because drum there, then remove 01:40:646 (14) - to break the stream.
01:41:044 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - too long. my suggestion is kdk dk
01:52:207 (28) - change to don, it's lower than 01:52:606 (29) -
i don't get with the finish placements, especially on the 2nd kiai. 01:23:503 (79,82,85,87) - why adding finishes there, meanwhile you don't add some at the next part or the first kiai

[Futsuu]
SPOILER
00:13:935 (15) - remove this, not a single music is playing there. and change 00:16:128 (21) - to kat, for higher music
00:20:314 (29) - remove this too for same reason as above. the music starts 00:20:114, not 0:20:314. therefore, adding note at 00:20:114 is out of option too, since there would be no break for the stream.
00:31:875 (52) - whoa. remove this, 2 triplets constantly is a no no at 185 bpm for futsuu. change 00:31:676 (51) - to don too, because lower pitch than 00:31:277 (50) - . in addition to those, move 00:32:872 (54) - to 00:33:669 to make a break.
00:39:251 (6) - remove this for 1/1 break. it's ok to remove this even tho it has music playing.
00:40:247 (8) - any strong reason to add this note? i personally don't hear anything that can be the reason (music or others; tho if you're saying you're following the violin or something that long, you may want to reconsider it since it's playing non-stop). instead of triplet there, suggesting add a k 00:41:842, because the constant lowing pitch. it suits there imo
00:42:839 (14) - try moving it to 00:43:437, as reflection of the music that starts 00:43:038. it's not possible to start it there, because it will make 4plet instead of 3plet.
00:47:224 (25) - remove this to make a break between the triplets
00:53:802 (41,42,43,44) - this is actually allowed at futsuu, but it has the wrong placement lols probably move 00:54:400 (44) - to 00:54:599 to make it following the music. or if you have a better idea, that would be good.
00:55:795 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - try to avoid double triplets like this. it's usually too hard to play for beginner. removing 50 will help
00:57:988 (53) - try adding finish here for the strong music >-<
00:59:981 (57,58,59) - i hope there's a strong reason to make a triplets here, i don't find one though. i suggest removing the stream, and making the next pattern follows the song with 1/2
01:01:975 (62,63,64) - same as above, i don't know why are you using triplet here when the music doesn't support imo.
01:19:118 (95) - remove this, since the piano starts at 01:19:317
01:20:314 (98) - any obvious reason why this note placed here? i heard nothing on the music, so i suggest removing this, and give the finish to 01:21:111 (100) -
01:29:283 (118) - same as above, remove this, since ddk on the middle of the 1/1 really freaks beginner out and sounds out of place
01:37:057 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - definitely no for this >_< try changing it to somtehing much more easier than double triplets like this and don't forget to give 1/1 break there~
01:40:446 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ^. you may keep the 3plets at the back though, if you're using 1/1 for the notes before
Needs more finishers at some points to emphasize the music.

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
First part before the kiai is fine, for me at least but 00:14:134 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - just my opinion, but these are too boring and too crowded. try giving some spaces for the player to take a break and prepare self for the next notes >-<
Okay, but the first kiai part is way too hard than Futsuu. ddk is allowed, but it's not allowed to be freely used at muzukashii. example is this 00:38:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - without break and only 1/4 triplets at muzukashii, it's hard to play, not to mention that it's ddk not other simple pattern like ddd or kkk. i suggest you used either ddd or kkk at muzukashii than ddk or kkd. this 00:40:447 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - too, and the next pattern ;w; i can't mod it like this, or i will really changed your first kiai. i hope you have some ideas of how to change them >-<
00:53:404 (72) - remove it, since the flute or whatever it's stopped before it.
00:54:400 (76) - change to don, because its pitch is lower than 00:54:599 (77) -
00:55:795 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - this is ok, but i personally don't like a muzukashii with triplet like this without break. i don't know about other modders though
01:03:370 (112,113,114,115,116,117) - no. this isn't recommended at muzukashii. 3plets must have breaks often so it will be easier to play.
01:05:562 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - too. triplets like this must have at least 1/1 break >-<
same comment for the second kiai time. even though it's duplet, it's still 1/4 and need breaks oftenly.

[Oni]
SPOILER
00:13:637 (3) - no need for a kat here, the music is still mellow, so take it easy at the beginning part.. and i don't see anything that can probably be the source of this kat.
00:20:015 (23) - ^
I agree with Hinsvar at this point. 00:38:852 - 00:41:643 AND 00:45:231 - 00:47:224. Have some spacings to give players a little rest moment or to emphasize certain parts/patterns. This kind of streams usually found at Inner Oni not Oni.
00:42:041 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - this too.
01:21:110 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237) - this is still too long for me, give some breaks, even though not 100% streams, but it's almost the same.
01:23:503 - 01:27:091 can be mapped with various patterns, so it won't make an unbalanced mapping on the kiai time.
Though it's weird to find some parts of the kiai empty, while the others are full, even though they have the same melodies and musics. Try to balance them, so it won't looks weird to when played.
The third kiai also looks very empty, except for the 1/4 stream which you should change because it's too difficult.
Too many 1/4 streams here. You should've considered some spaces for player to take a break. And try to follow the music. Stop when there's no music, and map when there's music, but don't make it overmapped. Don't forget to balance the diffspread between Oni and Muzukashii. i will really lose my sanity if i should mod 5 maps like this omg lols just kidding really

if i keep this up i will got into changing your mapping style very much lols. i maybe an average modder, i respect your mapping style, but if i feel it's too hard i won't keep silence. you may accept all (which will change your mapping style) or accept some (which you can make your own pattern, but not too far from my suggestions, or change it on your own will) or ignore some or ignore them all. but if you ignore them, please do tell the reason 'why would you ignore that.' keep in mind that i'm not a pro modder or a paranormal, that knew why wouldn't you accept my mod. don't be so stressed with what i wrote, it actually applies to all mapper lols. i just want to leave it here.
will edit this post for the rest mods. done!
And about recheck, probably the (best) answer is no for now. Modding this took me 2 days.. But if you want me to do it sometime in the future when you have more modder, i will gladly do it.
Good luck for rank~ :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Senritsu wrote:

Sorry for lateness >_<
i guess no need to kd this until i do full mod..nvm lols.

[General]
SPOILER
◘ Check AImod. It says the first kiai isn't snapped. fixed

[Kantan]
SPOILER
00:16:925 (21,22) - swap, then remove the don. imo 1/1 stream like this is too hard if you make it after and before a stream.
00:19:317 (25) - remove, for the same reason as above
00:22:108 (28) - change to kat? it has higher pitch than 00:22:506 (29) -
00:33:669 (48) - move to 00:34:068. duplet all of sudden which following nothing seems out of place
my suggestion on this first kiai
00:40:048 (4) - remove? much more better with triplet than 4plet >_<
00:40:845 (4) - move to 00:40:447 (4) -
00:42:440 (7) - move to 00:42:041
00:44:832 (12) - move to 00:45:231 and add finish. i have an explanation for this. yes, you're following the piano. but what about 00:45:231 that has louder drum? add a note, and it will be a very long stream. so that's why i suggest this
with this, you will be following the piano or whatever it is.
00:47:623 (17) - remove finish, because it's same with 00:46:825 (15) - , which you don't add finish at. but still, no need for adding finish there, because the music isn't strong when heard.
00:56:792 (31) - move to 00:56:393 for following the music
01:03:171 (45) - remove, it's weird to have this here.
01:03:570 add a note here, for following the music. suggesting kat, to make pattern easier.
01:15:132 (64) - change to k, it even has higher pitch than 01:15:531 (65) -
01:24:699 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - too long for a kantan. suggest removing 01:26:293 (85) -
01:29:483 (91) - move to 01:29:084 for following the music.
01:37:457 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - too long. remove 12 >w>
01:40:247 add a don here because drum there, then remove 01:40:646 (14) - to break the stream.
01:41:044 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - too long. my suggestion is kdk dk
01:52:207 (28) - change to don, it's lower than 01:52:606 (29) -
i don't get with the finish placements, especially on the 2nd kiai. 01:23:503 (79,82,85,87) - why adding finishes there, meanwhile you don't add some at the next part or the first kiai
All fixed

[Futsuu]
SPOILER
00:13:935 (15) - remove this, not a single music is playing there. and change 00:16:128 (21) - to kat, for higher music
00:20:314 (29) - remove this too for same reason as above. the music starts 00:20:114, not 0:20:314. therefore, adding note at 00:20:114 is out of option too, since there would be no break for the stream.
00:31:875 (52) - whoa. remove this, 2 triplets constantly is a no no at 185 bpm for futsuu. change 00:31:676 (51) - to don too, because lower pitch than 00:31:277 (50) - . in addition to those, move 00:32:872 (54) - to 00:33:669 to make a break.
00:39:251 (6) - remove this for 1/1 break. it's ok to remove this even tho it has music playing.
00:40:247 (8) - any strong reason to add this note? i personally don't hear anything that can be the reason (music or others; tho if you're saying you're following the violin or something that long, you may want to reconsider it since it's playing non-stop). instead of triplet there, suggesting add a k 00:41:842, because the constant lowing pitch. it suits there imo
00:42:839 (14) - try moving it to 00:43:437, as reflection of the music that starts 00:43:038. it's not possible to start it there, because it will make 4plet instead of 3plet.
00:47:224 (25) - remove this to make a break between the triplets
00:53:802 (41,42,43,44) - this is actually allowed at futsuu, but it has the wrong placement lols probably move 00:54:400 (44) - to 00:54:599 to make it following the music. or if you have a better idea, that would be good.
00:55:795 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - try to avoid double triplets like this. it's usually too hard to play for beginner. removing 50 will help
00:57:988 (53) - try adding finish here for the strong music >-<
00:59:981 (57,58,59) - i hope there's a strong reason to make a triplets here, i don't find one though. i suggest removing the stream, and making the next pattern follows the song with 1/2
01:01:975 (62,63,64) - same as above, i don't know why are you using triplet here when the music doesn't support imo.
01:19:118 (95) - remove this, since the piano starts at 01:19:317
01:20:314 (98) - any obvious reason why this note placed here? i heard nothing on the music, so i suggest removing this, and give the finish to 01:21:111 (100) -
01:29:283 (118) - same as above, remove this, since ddk on the middle of the 1/1 really freaks beginner out and sounds out of place
01:37:057 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - definitely no for this >_< try changing it to somtehing much more easier than double triplets like this and don't forget to give 1/1 break there~
01:40:446 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - ^. you may keep the 3plets at the back though, if you're using 1/1 for the notes before
Needs more finishers at some points to emphasize the music.
I have changed about 90%

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
First part before the kiai is fine, for me at least but 00:14:134 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - just my opinion, but these are too boring and too crowded. try giving some spaces for the player to take a break and prepare self for the next notes >-<
Okay, but the first kiai part is way too hard than Futsuu. ddk is allowed, but it's not allowed to be freely used at muzukashii. example is this OK
00:38:254 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - without break and only 1/4 triplets at muzukashii, it's hard to play, not to mention that it's ddk not other simple pattern like ddd or kkk. i suggest you used either ddd or kkk at muzukashii than ddk or kkd. keep
this 00:40:447 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - too, and the next pattern ;w; i can't mod it like this, or i will really changed your first kiai. i hope you have some ideas of how to change them >-< keep
00:53:404 (72) - remove it, since the flute or whatever it's stopped before it. OK
00:54:400 (76) - change to don, because its pitch is lower than 00:54:599 (77) - OK
00:55:795 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - this is ok, but i personally don't like a muzukashii with triplet like this without break. i don't know about other modders though
01:03:370 (112,113,114,115,116,117) - no. this isn't recommended at muzukashii. 3plets must have breaks often so it will be easier to play. OK
01:05:562 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - too. triplets like this must have at least 1/1 break >-< After the slider break
same comment for the second kiai time. even though it's duplet, it's still 1/4 and need breaks oftenly.

[Oni]
SPOILER
00:13:637 (3) - no need for a kat here, the music is still mellow, so take it easy at the beginning part.. and i don't see anything that can probably be the source of this kat. OK
00:20:015 (23) - ^ OK
I agree with Hinsvar at this point. 00:38:852 - 00:41:643 AND 00:45:231 - 00:47:224. Have some spacings to give players a little rest moment or to emphasize certain parts/patterns. This kind of streams usually found at Inner Oni not Oni. keep
00:42:041 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - this too. keep
01:21:110 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237) - this is still too long for me, give some breaks, even though not 100% streams, but it's almost the same. keep
01:23:503 - 01:27:091 can be mapped with various patterns, so it won't make an unbalanced mapping on the kiai time. keep
Though it's weird to find some parts of the kiai empty, while the others are full, even though they have the same melodies and musics. Try to balance them, so it won't looks weird to when played.
The third kiai also looks very empty, except for the 1/4 stream which you should change because it's too difficult.
Too many 1/4 streams here. You should've considered some spaces for player to take a break. And try to follow the music. Stop when there's no music, and map when there's music, but don't make it overmapped. Don't forget to balance the diffspread between Oni and Muzukashii. i will really lose my sanity if i should mod 5 maps like this omg lols just kidding really

if i keep this up i will got into changing your mapping style very much lols. i maybe an average modder, i respect your mapping style, but if i feel it's too hard i won't keep silence. you may accept all (which will change your mapping style) or accept some (which you can make your own pattern, but not too far from my suggestions, or change it on your own will) or ignore some or ignore them all. but if you ignore them, please do tell the reason 'why would you ignore that.' keep in mind that i'm not a pro modder or a paranormal, that knew why wouldn't you accept my mod. don't be so stressed with what i wrote, it actually applies to all mapper lols. i just want to leave it here.
will edit this post for the rest mods. done!
And about recheck, probably the (best) answer is no for now. Modding this took me 2 days.. But if you want me to do it sometime in the future when you have more modder, i will gladly do it.
Good luck for rank~ :)
Thank you mod. :) I thought a lot of things.
JUDYDANNY
no kds please,
Oniにある、 01:08:354 (175,176,177) - , 01:11:543 (185,186,187) - はdivisor1/3間隔で音が鳴っているので3/4間隔よりも取りやすいと感じました。

しばらくしてお暇がある時に全難易度見に行こうと思います。
Neku Okazaki
[Kantan]
Good ~

[Futsuu]
00:29:284 (47) - d | Is better ~
00:31:078 (51) - Delete | Not is necesary
00:49:815 (33) - k?
00:53:005 (41) - k | Is different to 00:53:204 (42) -
01:21:509 (105) - Delete | Need small breaks ~

[Muzukashii]
00:13:337 - ~ 00:22:506 - Use only 1/2 | 1/4 Is hard for this song
° 00:47:324 - ~ 00:49:317 - Make it more hard | Changing the system suddenly makes it sound weird
°00:53:005 (70,71,72) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad
00:59:184 (96) - Delete
00:59:981 (98) - ^
00:59:981 (98) - ~ 01:20:613 - I say it in the blue point
01:16:128 (148,149,150) - I say it in the red point


[Oni]
I see it good BUT You need to regulate the diff. Is more diferent this 01:08:752 - and this 00:46:227 - . For this, I see it Unrankeable :(
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Neku okazaki wrote:

[Kantan]
Good ~

[Futsuu]
00:29:284 (47) - d | Is better ~ OK
00:31:078 (51) - Delete | Not is necesary OK
00:49:815 (33) - k? keep
00:53:005 (41) - k | Is different to 00:53:204 (42) - OK
01:21:509 (105) - Delete | Need small breaks ~ keep

[Muzukashii]
00:13:337 - ~ 00:22:506 - Use only 1/2 | 1/4 Is hard for this song not only 1/2
° 00:47:324 - ~ 00:49:317 - Make it more hard | Changing the system suddenly makes it sound weird keep
°00:53:005 (70,71,72) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad keep
00:59:184 (96) - Delete OK
00:59:981 (98) - ^ OK
00:59:981 (98) - ~ 01:20:613 - I say it in the blue point keep
01:16:128 (148,149,150) - I say it in the red point keep


[Oni]
I see it good BUT You need to regulate the diff. Is more diferent this 01:08:752 - and this 00:46:227 - . For this, I see it Unrankeable :(
Thank you mod. :)
DakeDekaane
=w=

[General]
If I recall correct, the Source should be pop'n music, not Pop'n music.

Suggested Difficulty Settings:
Kantan: HP3-4/OD3-4
Futsuu: HP4/OD4
Muzukashii: HP5/OD5
Oni: HP6/OD6

00:00:580 - 00:13:337 - Keeping this part the same for all four diffs is a nice detail :)
01:46:625 - 01:57:788 - ^
00:51:609 - You should end the first kiai here.
01:46:625 - And the second kiai here.

[Oni]
This diff is lacking consistency, as in, you have heavy streams in 00:38:852 - 00:47:224 but then you have really easier patterns 00:47:224 - 00:51:211 while the music doesn't change in intensity, and something similar happens in the second kiai. If you're going to focus on a particular rhythm in a part, you should keep following it for the time that rhythm is still playing, I know you did these parts different because in the second part you followed another instrument than in the first, but this really feels awkward to play, which is very weird while playing.
I think you should keep the scroll speed the same in the first kiai would be nice (remove the slow down in the middle).

00:13:337 - 00:24:500 - In this part, patterns like 00:13:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) really stand out, the music is pretty calm here so this doesn't fit too much, you could simplify this to make it fit better, or just follow the flute in this part.
00:26:094 - 00:30:480 - Here you could change a bit your patterns and let the kats emphasize the flute like you did in 00:30:879 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73). Example:

00:32:473 (73) - A big don here wouldn't be bad.
00:32:872 - 00:35:264 - And we have another drastical change in difficulty, some patterns like in the previous part would be nice.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,5) - You could remove this notes to create a break and allow this strong beat 00:38:453 (4) have better emphasis, as it won't be hidden with the other notes.
:!: 00:38:852 (6) - Snap this note properly as it breaks how the speed up is done, moving it somewhere else and putting it back should work.
00:43:636 (49,51,52,53,56) - These big notes are too much in this part as it is not heavier than the previous stream, better keeping them as normal notes. You could add a kat in 00:44:533 and a don in 00:44:732, this would help to keep following this fast instrument while keeping this part not too heavy in notes, allowing
00:53:404 (97) - Remove this note so you keep following that windy instrument cleanly.
00:55:197 (105) - ^, or you could add a slider in 00:54:799 - 00:55:197 for the same purpose.
00:59:184 (127) - Remove this too.
00:59:981 (132,137) - Change these to kats, it'd keep following the flute better (Note that 132 isn't, but it compliments better the whole pattern than a don).
01:01:576 (140) - Remove or add a slider like I suggested in 00:55:197 (105).
01:01:975 (141,142) - Remove these two.
01:02:174 - Here my suggestion is a bit long so I'll better put a image, but this pattern would compliment better the flute here.
01:19:118 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - Here the rhythm is pretty much not in the music itself, you could try a spinner in 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 which would match with the increasing sound there.

01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note.
01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - If you could follow the percusions better here it'd be nicer, this stream feels really out of place, yes, music is intense but doesn't reflect the main rhythm in the music too fine. Removing 01:42:340 (36,41,44) would be enough, you can try a different way though.
01:44:632 (47) - Remove this note and extend the slider here, this allows the slider to cover better the held note and makes 01:45:032 (48) have more emphasis.
01:45:031 - Here you could try a rhythm like this, the constant 1/1 doesn't really represents the music nicely here, as the song has still some variety.
http://puu.sh/avwA7.png

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty has the same difficulty consistency problems Oni has.
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - This part has a higher note density than 00:26:094 - 00:35:663, but it's calmer, and this really breaks how the map feels, you should follow something similar as I suggested in Oni and make the first part follow only the flute, so the second part would be intenser now, matching with the song.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - As in Oni.
00:38:852 - I'm going to suggest a general pattern for this kiai, note that the song begins this 1/4 rhythm on the white ticks, so this section would benefit greatly with the triples beginning in the white ticks, and specially there should be a triple in the downbeat (the large white tick). ddd are highly suggested to use over kkk, something like this, you could try in different colors and put what you feel better.

00:44:234 (35) - You could remove this note so you follow the piano better.
00:51:211 (65,66,67) - k k d -> k ddd, this would emphasize nicely this last note.
00:57:191 (88,90) - Remove these to keep following the flute.
00:57:789 - Something like this for the flute

01:01:576 (104,105) - Remove.
01:03:470 (112,113) - ^
01:03:869 - Add a don and make 01:03:968 (115) a don too.
01:04:566 (118) - Make this slider begin in 01:04:367 along with the held note here.
01:05:364 - Maybe add a note here to keep the flute.
01:06:759 (126) - Remove.
01:09:551 (133,137) - Remove these notes, they feel a bit intrusive with the instrument your following here.
01:18:719 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) - As in Oni.
01:30:679 (1) - As in Oni.
01:43:436 (39,40) - As in Oni.
01:45:032 (41,42,43,44) - Something similar as I suggested in Oni, but simpler.
01:21:211 (163,171) - Looking as you focused a bit on percusions here, deleting this note would do the trick to make this part better, of course, you will have to keep patterns for percusions in the rest of this kiai to fix the inconsistencies I mentioned earlier.

[Futsuu]
This diff is very simple compared with the Muzukashii, there are very few 1/2 patterns, adding a few more would make the spread better.
The first kiai would benefit with some more notes.
I'm going to focus on notes that could be moved to improve the rhythm or follow better the instruments I think you're basing on, don't be scared about the length ;w;
00:14:932 (17) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:18:520 (25) - Remove to make this part calmer than the next.
00:21:709 (32) - ^
00:25:297 (36) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:29:284 (45) - Move to 00:29:682 -
00:37:656 (1,2,3) - Remove them, same reason as in the other diffs.
00:39:251 - You could add a don here.
00:41:443 - Spots like this would be nice to add a note too, here a kat would be nice.
00:43:835 (16) - Move this 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:50:214 (32,33) - Move these 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:56:593 (49) - ^
00:57:590 (52) - Move to 00:56:792.
00:59:981 (57) - Move to 00:59:383.
01:00:181 - Add a don.
01:00:181 - Move 1/2 beat forward.
01:03:570 (65,66) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:04:367 (67) - Make this slider end in 01:04:367 (67) and add a don in 01:05:563.
01:06:759 (70) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:06:958 - Add a don.
01:09:551 (75) - Remove this note.
01:12:938 - Maybe add a don.
01:13:536 - ^
01:18:719 (92,93,94,95) - As in the other difficulties.
01:26:493 - A don would be nice here to make a 1/2 pattern.
01:29:682 - A kat here for the same purpose.
01:30:679 (1) - As in the other difficulties.
01:37:057 (8) - Move this note to 01:39:250.
01:46:227 (29) - Remove the big note, it's too loud here ;w;

[Kantan]
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - If you could simplify a bit this part it'd be better, as this part is calmer than the next.
00:57:589 (32) - Remove this one so you keep notes on the flute only.
00:59:981 (37) - ^
01:01:975 (41) - ^
01:03:570 (44) - Move to 01:03:171.
01:04:766 (47) - Remove
01:05:164 (48) - Move to 01:05:563.
01:09:551 (55) - Remove this one so the big note is more emphasized.
01:18:719 (69,70,71,72) - I think a spinner from 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 would fit better here, as we have this increasing sound instead clear beats in the music.
01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note, and at the same time would allow a tiny break for players.
01:45:031 (21) - Remove this note and extend 01:43:437 (20) until here, it'd make more sense as you'll cover properly this held note.

That'd be all from my part, fixing the difficulty inconsistencies that Oni and Muzukashii have would be a big step ahead, as it's the biggest problem it has, Futsuu only suffer of this a bit in the first kiai.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

DakeDekaane wrote:

=w=

[General]
If I recall correct, the Source should be pop'n music, not Pop'n music. fixed

Suggested Difficulty Settings: all keep
Kantan: HP3-4/OD3-4
Futsuu: HP4/OD4
Muzukashii: HP5/OD5
Oni: HP6/OD6

00:00:580 - 00:13:337 - Keeping this part the same for all four diffs is a nice detail :)
01:46:625 - 01:57:788 - ^
00:51:609 - You should end the first kiai here. fixed
01:46:625 - And the second kiai here. fixed

[Oni]
This diff is lacking consistency, as in, you have heavy streams in 00:38:852 - 00:47:224 but then you have really easier patterns 00:47:224 - 00:51:211 while the music doesn't change in intensity, and something similar happens in the second kiai. If you're going to focus on a particular rhythm in a part, you should keep following it for the time that rhythm is still playing, I know you did these parts different because in the second part you followed another instrument than in the first, but this really feels awkward to play, which is very weird while playing.
I think you should keep the scroll speed the same in the first kiai would be nice (remove the slow down in the middle).

00:13:337 - 00:24:500 - In this part, patterns like 00:13:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) really stand out, the music is pretty calm here so this doesn't fit too much, you could simplify this to make it fit better, or just follow the flute in this part.
00:26:094 - 00:30:480 - Here you could change a bit your patterns and let the kats emphasize the flute like you did in 00:30:879 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73). Example:

00:32:473 (73) - A big don here wouldn't be bad.
00:32:872 - 00:35:264 - And we have another drastical change in difficulty, some patterns like in the previous part would be nice.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,5) - You could remove this notes to create a break and allow this strong beat 00:38:453 (4) have better emphasis, as it won't be hidden with the other notes.
:!: 00:38:852 (6) - Snap this note properly as it breaks how the speed up is done, moving it somewhere else and putting it back should work.
00:43:636 (49,51,52,53,56) - These big notes are too much in this part as it is not heavier than the previous stream, better keeping them as normal notes. You could add a kat in 00:44:533 and a don in 00:44:732, this would help to keep following this fast instrument while keeping this part not too heavy in notes, allowing
00:53:404 (97) - Remove this note so you keep following that windy instrument cleanly.
00:55:197 (105) - ^, or you could add a slider in 00:54:799 - 00:55:197 for the same purpose.
00:59:184 (127) - Remove this too.
00:59:981 (132,137) - Change these to kats, it'd keep following the flute better (Note that 132 isn't, but it compliments better the whole pattern than a don).
01:01:576 (140) - Remove or add a slider like I suggested in 00:55:197 (105).
01:01:975 (141,142) - Remove these two.
01:02:174 - Here my suggestion is a bit long so I'll better put a image, but this pattern would compliment better the flute here.
01:19:118 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - Here the rhythm is pretty much not in the music itself, you could try a spinner in 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 which would match with the increasing sound there.

01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note.
01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - If you could follow the percusions better here it'd be nicer, this stream feels really out of place, yes, music is intense but doesn't reflect the main rhythm in the music too fine. Removing 01:42:340 (36,41,44) would be enough, you can try a different way though.
01:44:632 (47) - Remove this note and extend the slider here, this allows the slider to cover better the held note and makes 01:45:032 (48) have more emphasis.
01:45:031 - Here you could try a rhythm like this, the constant 1/1 doesn't really represents the music nicely here, as the song has still some variety.
http://puu.sh/avwA7.png

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty has the same difficulty consistency problems Oni has.
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - This part has a higher note density than 00:26:094 - 00:35:663, but it's calmer, and this really breaks how the map feels, you should follow something similar as I suggested in Oni and make the first part follow only the flute, so the second part would be intenser now, matching with the song.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - As in Oni.
00:38:852 - I'm going to suggest a general pattern for this kiai, note that the song begins this 1/4 rhythm on the white ticks, so this section would benefit greatly with the triples beginning in the white ticks, and specially there should be a triple in the downbeat (the large white tick). ddd are highly suggested to use over kkk, something like this, you could try in different colors and put what you feel better.

00:44:234 (35) - You could remove this note so you follow the piano better.
00:51:211 (65,66,67) - k k d -> k ddd, this would emphasize nicely this last note.
00:57:191 (88,90) - Remove these to keep following the flute.
00:57:789 - Something like this for the flute

01:01:576 (104,105) - Remove.
01:03:470 (112,113) - ^
01:03:869 - Add a don and make 01:03:968 (115) a don too.
01:04:566 (118) - Make this slider begin in 01:04:367 along with the held note here.
01:05:364 - Maybe add a note here to keep the flute.
01:06:759 (126) - Remove.
01:09:551 (133,137) - Remove these notes, they feel a bit intrusive with the instrument your following here.
01:18:719 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) - As in Oni.
01:30:679 (1) - As in Oni.
01:43:436 (39,40) - As in Oni.
01:45:032 (41,42,43,44) - Something similar as I suggested in Oni, but simpler.
01:21:211 (163,171) - Looking as you focused a bit on percusions here, deleting this note would do the trick to make this part better, of course, you will have to keep patterns for percusions in the rest of this kiai to fix the inconsistencies I mentioned earlier.

[Futsuu]
This diff is very simple compared with the Muzukashii, there are very few 1/2 patterns, adding a few more would make the spread better.
The first kiai would benefit with some more notes.
I'm going to focus on notes that could be moved to improve the rhythm or follow better the instruments I think you're basing on, don't be scared about the length ;w;
00:14:932 (17) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:18:520 (25) - Remove to make this part calmer than the next.
00:21:709 (32) - ^
00:25:297 (36) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:29:284 (45) - Move to 00:29:682 -
00:37:656 (1,2,3) - Remove them, same reason as in the other diffs.
00:39:251 - You could add a don here.
00:41:443 - Spots like this would be nice to add a note too, here a kat would be nice.
00:43:835 (16) - Move this 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:50:214 (32,33) - Move these 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:56:593 (49) - ^
00:57:590 (52) - Move to 00:56:792.
00:59:981 (57) - Move to 00:59:383.
01:00:181 - Add a don.
01:00:181 - Move 1/2 beat forward.
01:03:570 (65,66) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:04:367 (67) - Make this slider end in 01:04:367 (67) and add a don in 01:05:563.
01:06:759 (70) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:06:958 - Add a don.
01:09:551 (75) - Remove this note.
01:12:938 - Maybe add a don.
01:13:536 - ^
01:18:719 (92,93,94,95) - As in the other difficulties.
01:26:493 - A don would be nice here to make a 1/2 pattern.
01:29:682 - A kat here for the same purpose.
01:30:679 (1) - As in the other difficulties.
01:37:057 (8) - Move this note to 01:39:250.
01:46:227 (29) - Remove the big note, it's too loud here ;w;

[Kantan]
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - If you could simplify a bit this part it'd be better, as this part is calmer than the next.
00:57:589 (32) - Remove this one so you keep notes on the flute only.
00:59:981 (37) - ^
01:01:975 (41) - ^
01:03:570 (44) - Move to 01:03:171.
01:04:766 (47) - Remove
01:05:164 (48) - Move to 01:05:563.
01:09:551 (55) - Remove this one so the big note is more emphasized.
01:18:719 (69,70,71,72) - I think a spinner from 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 would fit better here, as we have this increasing sound instead clear beats in the music.
01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note, and at the same time would allow a tiny break for players.
01:45:031 (21) - Remove this note and extend 01:43:437 (20) until here, it'd make more sense as you'll cover properly this held note.

That'd be all from my part, fixing the difficulty inconsistencies that Oni and Muzukashii have would be a big step ahead, as it's the biggest problem it has, Futsuu only suffer of this a bit in the first kiai.

Good luck.
Kantan~Oni All change. Thanks to a lot of mod.Thank you for the image with. I was saved fairly :oops:
Tuxxy_old
Hello

Kantan

00:08:553 kat
00:18:121 don-don-kat-kat-don
00:20:513 kat
00:30:081 kat
00:45:231 can be d-d-k
00:50:015 kat
00:54:001 kat
00:57:988 d-k-d
01:07:556 don finisher
01:25:895 don
01:26:692 kat
01:57:788 kat

Futsuu

00:03:769 kat don kat
00:06:161 kat-don-don
00:19:716 don
00:30:081 kat
00:40:447 don
00:50:413 don
01:08:354 kat
01:11:543 kat
01:25:895 kat
01:26:692 kat
01:27:091 don
01:26:293 no need for a finish here
01:29:483 k-d-k
01:30:280 don
01:37:456 no finisher (don too)
01:39:449 don-don-kat
01:46:625 finish

I'll have to leave it at that, too tired X_X

I will come back for the muzu tomorrow!!
enjoy and good luck
Tuxxy_old
hi again

Muzukashii

00:06:161 kat
00:11:742 kat
00:18:918 kat
00:30:081 kat-don instead of don-kat
00:34:068 don
00:38:852 kat
00:39:251 kat
00:39:450 don
00:39:649 kat
00:40:447 same as last combo of notes
00:44:433 kat
00:45:231 kat
00:56:991 don
01:03:968 kat
01:06:261 kat
01:09:849 kat
01:10:746 don
01:13:138 kat
01:16:327 don
01:21:111 http://puu.sh/aIi40/072c5f3c9a.jpg set up like this
01:23:503 these 2 finishers aren't needed
01:24:300 kat
01:25:496 kat
01:26:891 don
01:27:091 kat
01:28:386 don
01:28:586 don
01:37:257 don
01:37:456 kat
01:38:054 don
01:38:253 kat
01:40:745 don
01:40:944 don
01:41:542 kat
01:41:542 kat
01:41:841 kat

enjoy
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