1. Думаю, уменьшить громкость хс до 60~70%
2. Кажется, что между Medium и Heavy небольшая яма по сложности. Может на Heavy убавить HP и OD чутка?

1. OD +0.5
2. 00:58:774 (3) - Я бы сдвинул на x:100 y:216, думаю, так лучше смотрится
3. 02:47:941 (1) - Может в ХП бар заезжать
4. 01:11:970 - Можно добавить Finish
5. 02:57:538 - Можно добавить Whistle
6. 02:53:939 - ^
7. 01:23:966 (1) - Попробуй повернуть на 90* по часовой, думаю, так будет лучше сочетаться с предыдущим и следующим объектом

1. AIMod ругается насчёт спейсинга

   
2. 01:11:970 - то же самое что и в Light
3. 02:57:538 - ^
4. 02:13:151 (2,3) - У тебя спейсинг меняется, до этого видел 01:06:571 (5,6,1) другой
5. 02:22:749 (3,4,5) - ^

1. 00:21:435 (8,1) - Не стакнуто. Попробуй у 00:21:435 (8) по оси Y убавить 1 пиксель
2. 00:30:132 - Вот тут можно сёркл впихнуть, думаю. Потому что, когда я играл, по интуиции тыкнул триплет, но промазал
3. 02:32:796 (2) - Я бы заменил слайдер на сёркл
4. 01:11:970 - то же самое что и в Light
5. 02:57:538 - ^

Shadren wrote:

[General]

1. Думаю, уменьшить громкость хс до 60~70% да, можно
2. Кажется, что между Medium и Heavy небольшая яма по сложности. Может на Heavy убавить HP и OD чутка? АР убрала на 0,5 и ОД на 1

[Light]

1. OD +0.5 ага
2. 00:58:774 (3) - Я бы сдвинул на x:100 y:216, думаю, так лучше смотрится действительно
3. 02:47:941 (1) - Может в ХП бар заезжать угу, не замечала
4. 01:11:970 - Можно добавить Finish я тут из-за музыки не ставила финиш, в песне его нет
5. 02:57:538 - Можно добавить Whistle ага
6. 02:53:939 - ^ ^
7. 01:23:966 (1) - Попробуй повернуть на 90* по часовой, думаю, так будет лучше сочетаться с предыдущим и следующим объектом думаю оставить как есть

[Medium]

1. AIMod ругается насчёт спейсинга

   
2. 01:11:970 - то же самое что и в Light уже объяснила
3. 02:57:538 - ^ да
4. 02:13:151 (2,3) - У тебя спейсинг меняется, до этого видел 01:06:571 (5,6,1) другой
5. 02:22:749 (3,4,5) - ^ пофиксила оба вмсесте с аймодом

[Heavy]

1. 00:21:435 (8,1) - Не стакнуто. Попробуй у 00:21:435 (8) по оси Y убавить 1 пиксель ахринеть, КАК ты это заметил? D:
2. 00:30:132 - Вот тут можно сёркл впихнуть, думаю. Потому что, когда я играл, по интуиции тыкнул триплет, но промазал даже не знаю, не хочу ставить серкл туда, где нет четкого звука/удара (хотя на том тике есть скрежет, но его совсем не слышно во время игры)
3. 02:32:796 (2) - Я бы заменил слайдер на сёркл по этому поводу были обсуждения несколькими модами ранее, поэтому я остановилась на слайдере
4. 01:11:970 - то же самое что и в Light ты понял
5. 02:57:538 - ^ ага

Это всё, что я смог найти. Либо я слепой, либо мапсет збс. Удачи с картой

1. 00:58:774 (3) - Just wondering if it was OK to move the middle point to X=52 Y=200, because I have a feeling it'd be a bit better flow.
2. 01:02:073 (4) - Again a stupid thing - maybe move it to Y=140 because now I have a feeling it's a bit too lowered if we compare to another and previous notes.
3. 01:06:871 (4) - I think it'd be cool to lower this circle too for example to Y=336 or something similar.
4. 01:35:063 (3) - Mum, maybe move this circle to X=176 Y=208, because I have a feeling it would improve the flow just a little bit again.
5. 01:39:861 (2) - Call me a beautiful stranger if I'm wrong, but isn't it a good moment for a clap here or I'm just blonde? Oh wait I am an ultimate blonde o3o

1. 00:19:486 (2) - Call me a beautiful stranger again, but I have a feeling there's a missing clap at the very beginning of the slider. Now it feels inconsistent without that hitsound IMO.
2. 00:37:780 (4) - And TBH I think the clap should be included on the very end of this slider too because now it really sounds inconsistent. :<
3. 01:08:971 (5) - I am not sure about this moment... If Krfawy (which is me) well remembers, it's mean to be a Normal+. But to be honest he thinks it'd be better thing to make a full 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 with reversing because it might confuse some less experienced players.

1. 00:20:985 (7) - Why do I have a feeling the clap at the very end of the slider is missing and it's not the very first time when I have that feeling at this moment in every diff I guess. D:
2. 00:46:777 (4) - Just my perverted thing - I don't know why but everytime I play this moment I want to CTRL + G. I don't know how to explain it, but I just have a feeling there's a sneaky sausage here. XD
3. 01:35:363 (5) - Isn't that circle a liiiittle bit far from the previous note? Because for me the spacing is not consistent IMO.

Sieg wrote:

Привет, давай чекнем еще раз.

General

1. BPM должно быть 100.03 т.е. оно у тебя удвоено, после смены бмп увеличь св
   SPOILER

   
   в 2 раза на каждой дифе, больше ничего менять не надо.

Light

1. CS + 0.5 \ AR+ 0.5 для спреда сделано
2. 01:07:171 (1) - я бы сделал тут так Спиннер должен начинаться в начале слова Breeeeeaking, а так он начнется где-то на буквах "е", что по ритму и звучанию не очень будет
   SPOILER

   
   01:07:171 (5) - довольно сильный, а спиннерстарт не очень
3. 02:04:754 (1) - ^ same ^
4. 02:55:439 (1) - и тут^ :с
5. 01:56:356 (3) - не очень нравится флоу тут, может и как я не додумалась D:
   
   SPOILER

   

Medium

1. 00:18:586 (7,1) - я бы немного подвинул, чтоб стакнуть 00:18:286 (6,2) - ну там зрительная, мускульная память все дела угу
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:34:013 (4) - чуть чуть отодвинуть, чтоб было как на 1.1 св 01:07:021 (6) - но дс не позволяет :с
3. 01:47:659 (3,2) - вот их бы тоже стакнуть угу
4. 02:53:639 (2) -вот это вроде должно быть просто серклом да
5. со спиннерами то-же, что и на изе оставлю как есть, пожалуй

Heavy

1. 00:18:436 (1,2,3,4) - давай уберем квадрат? у квадратов слишком мало фанатов сейчас хорошо, но я сделала обычный спейсинг
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:982 (3,4) - а вот это анстакнем, а то все прожмут как 1\2 как у предыдущих эх, хорошо
3. 02:32:796 (2) - давай триплетом может, играется лучше имо да

Так то все отлично. Удачи!

Krfawy wrote:

Bleeding re-check for my dear Mum. :3 <33

Light My Dark Soul, Please

1. 00:58:774 (3) - Just wondering if it was OK to move the middle point to X=52 Y=200, because I have a feeling it'd be a bit better flow.
2. 01:02:073 (4) - Again a stupid thing - maybe move it to Y=140 because now I have a feeling it's a bit too lowered if we compare to another and previous notes.
3. 01:06:871 (4) - I think it'd be cool to lower this circle too for example to Y=336 or something similar.
4. 01:35:063 (3) - Mum, maybe move this circle to X=176 Y=208, because I have a feeling it would improve the flow just a little bit again.
5. 01:39:861 (2) - Call me a beautiful stranger if I'm wrong, but isn't it a good moment for a clap here or I'm just blonde? Oh wait I am an ultimate blonde o3o
   Everything fixed <3

Medium Blond Colour

1. 00:19:486 (2) - Call me a beautiful stranger again, but I have a feeling there's a missing clap at the very beginning of the slider. Now it feels inconsistent without that hitsound IMO.
2. 00:37:780 (4) - And TBH I think the clap should be included on the very end of this slider too because now it really sounds inconsistent. :< no, I want here to be whistles ONLY
3. 01:08:971 (5) - I am not sure about this moment... If Krfawy (which is me) well remembers, it's mean to be a Normal+. But to be honest he thinks it'd be better thing to make a full 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 with reversing because it might confuse some less experienced players.
   Everything else is fixed!

Heavy Bleeding

1. 00:20:985 (7) - Why do I have a feeling the clap at the very end of the slider is missing and it's not the very first time when I have that feeling at this moment in every diff I guess. D:
2. 00:46:777 (4) - Just my perverted thing - I don't know why but everytime I play this moment I want to CTRL + G. I don't know how to explain it, but I just have a feeling there's a sneaky sausage here. XD
3. 01:35:363 (5) - Isn't that circle a liiiittle bit far from the previous note? Because for me the spacing is not consistent IMO.
   Fixed EVERYTHIIIING

RANK HARDER MUM LOVE YOU YOUR SON BLUDDY STAWN

1. As the genre will be set to English/Rock you don't really need to keep the word rock in the tags. I doubt that many people will use "rock" as a keyword in-game to find this map.

1. 00:14:387 (1,1) - a veeeeery minor thing - the stack is uneven and it might get slightly noticeable in game. You might want to fix that.
2. 00:34:781 (3,1) - minor - the transition feels slightly off. In case if you feel like improving that, Here's an example for you.
3. 01:31:764 (3,1,2) - as (2) appears right in front of (1) and it apears quite early, it may confuse some beginners. See fot yourself, but I'm fine with this even if you don't fix that.
4. 02:16:750 (1,3) - minor - since both of these sliders represent pretty much the same part of the vocals, giving them the same shape sounds like a good idea.
   Note: 02:20:349 (3,5) - same here, I guess.
5. 02:35:945 (3) - might be a missed new combo here, it'd fit both with the pattern and with the music.
   
   Just as I've said before, great. You've managed to impove it even more.

1. As the BPM is high, I'd set AR to 5,5 here. It will work a bit better, I think.
2. 01:33:563 (3,4) - minor - normally, you avoid such overlaps because the DS allows you to do so. You might wan to avoid this overlap, as well.
3. 02:28:747 (1,3) - as the overlaps gets visible for ~150ms you miiight want to move the (3) to the right a bit.
4. 02:51:540 (4,5,1) - as the overlap may get a bit tricky/untidy, I would move (4) around, a little bit. Why not, huh?
   
   Neat, well-mapped and nicely-hitsounded.

1. AR 8. Try it, please. If you apply my suggestion for the medium, you get well balanced spread. (3/5,5/8)
   
   Wow, you keep imressing me! I've expected it to be good, but it's almost perfect!

-Bakari- wrote:

Oh my, you've been waiting for so long. Do not kudosu me, by the way,

[General]

1. As the genre will be set to English/Rock you don't really need to keep the word rock in the tags. I doubt that many people will use "rock" as a keyword in-game to find this map.yup

[Light]

1. 00:14:387 (1,1) - a veeeeery minor thing - the stack is uneven and it might get slightly noticeable in game. You might want to fix that. sure
2. 00:34:781 (3,1) - minor - the transition feels slightly off. In case if you feel like improving that, Here's an example for you. fixed!
3. 01:31:764 (3,1,2) - as (2) appears right in front of (1) and it apears quite early, it may confuse some beginners. See fot yourself, but I'm fine with this even if you don't fix that. I don't thin it's a big deal, will keep that
4. 02:16:750 (1,3) - minor - since both of these sliders represent pretty much the same part of the vocals, giving them the same shape sounds like a good idea. yes
   Note: 02:20:349 (3,5) - same here, I guess. will keep that here
5. 02:35:945 (3) - might be a missed new combo here, it'd fit both with the pattern and with the music. you're right!
   
   Just as I've said before, great. You've managed to impove it even more.

[Medium]

1. As the BPM is high, I'd set AR to 5,5 here. It will work a bit better, I think. Oh, okay
2. 01:33:563 (3,4) - minor - normally, you avoid such overlaps because the DS allows you to do so. You might wan to avoid this overlap, as well.
3. 02:28:747 (1,3) - as the overlaps gets visible for ~150ms you miiight want to move the (3) to the right a bit.
4. 02:51:540 (4,5,1) - as the overlap may get a bit tricky/untidy, I would move (4) around, a little bit. Why not, huh?Everything is fixed
   
   Neat, well-mapped and nicely-hitsounded.

[Heavy]

1. AR 8. Try it, please. If you apply my suggestion for the medium, you get well balanced spread. (3/5,5/8) done
   
   Wow, you keep imressing me! I've expected it to be good, but it's almost perfect!

You've been waiting for long enough, check this and call me back.

-Bakari- wrote:

Too many red names. Congratulations!

DexFrild wrote:

Молодецъ! Грацъ :з
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