I applied everything and changed the spacing during the kiai on Platter. File sent to ichia7x in-game.
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Memme - Plasma Gun [OsuMania|CatchTheBeat]
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thanks `Manuxz wrote:
NTR's Overdose
00:11:916 (6,1) - Try this that the tail of (6) finish in x:267, y:268 and move (1) at x:220 --> http://puu.sh/cRVMz/64271fc9ea.jpg xd moved tail of (6)
My humble contribution to your great Overdose NTR o3o
thanks `Vhy wrote:
[NTR8's Overdose]
00:09:999 (3,4) - could you rotate them vertically more? the current is kinda quite wide for a straight stream after a HDash. well i dont really know wether they're easy or hard to catch for pros, but at least it reduce the difficultness a bit
00:10:999 (1) - oh wait. you misplaced this? shouln't this merged with 00:11:083 (1,2,3) instead? if so then remove the NC at 00:11:083 (1) fixed
00:12:166 (1) - x:72? moved at x:216
00:12:666 (1) - remove the finish at end slider okie
00:13:333 - why you leave this empty? this is a big white tick as you know this is a new stanza and it's represent the new music begin here so yea it definitely need a note. and also to emphasize it, you can add a finish on this note and add a HDash on previous note added note
00:15:833 (4,1,2,3,4) - try this pattern instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2256048. it's good to keep having a movement at this section tho
the rest looks acceptable. and nice diff
good luck
osu file format v13
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Hi o/ from my queue gonna mod rain and overdose one 
NTR8's Overdose
Best run : 99.78 % , FC
excellent map I have a lot of pleasure to try it , but there is some part that might be changed thats why I'm here hue hue
00:04:166 (2) - closer to 3 please , thats a PAIN to catch that one
00:04:666 (1) - closer to 3 too , thats the limit and it need an excellent timing well thats a pain too
00:09:166 (1) - here is the transition between spacings , good idea but I think if X=512 it will be more clear and give moar intensity :p
00:13:666 (4) - a little little little little little little litte...closer to 5 and its perfect
00:12:666 (1) - I think it should be smaller but thats a detail in my opinion ^^
the refrain is so good I feel the difficulty the technique the intensity , well job mate
00:23:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think this part is too chaotic in my opinion , what about something like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277245
00:24:999 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacings , yay c:
00:27:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacings...ok whatever
00:30:500 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacings...oh dude thats too repetitive :c (I think you get it the issue lel )
00:33:999 (4) - closer to 3 please , but not too much for the flow
00:34:333 (3,4,5,6,7) - isn't enough clean , distance between circles aren't equal each other or maybe its in purpose I don't know
00:36:666 (3,4) - I think the flow is better like this
00:39:666 (3) - should be smaller , requires a excellent precision there I don't really like it
00:40:166 - lack a circle there
00:49:999 (7) - what about same X as 5 ?
00:51:166 (1,2,3) - closer to 4
00:51:999 (2,3,4,5) - I don't find it very clean meh
00:56:333 (3) - closer to 2 thats a important HD should be catched easily
Rain
Nothing important I noticed thats really a good diff there in my opinion thats already ready for ranking
BUT , I think some HR master will try to fc this on hardrock , I tried with my modest skill and this is what I got
http://puu.sh/d4P1y/998736e699.osr
I suggest you to change some part to make the pattern less ridiculous on hardrock
Thats all I have to say bye o/
Best run : 99.78 % , FC
excellent map I have a lot of pleasure to try it , but there is some part that might be changed thats why I'm here hue hue
00:04:166 (2) - closer to 3 please , thats a PAIN to catch that one
00:04:666 (1) - closer to 3 too , thats the limit and it need an excellent timing well thats a pain too
00:09:166 (1) - here is the transition between spacings , good idea but I think if X=512 it will be more clear and give moar intensity :p
00:13:666 (4) - a little little little little little little litte...closer to 5 and its perfect
00:12:666 (1) - I think it should be smaller but thats a detail in my opinion ^^
the refrain is so good I feel the difficulty the technique the intensity , well job mate
00:23:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think this part is too chaotic in my opinion , what about something like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277245
00:24:999 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacings , yay c:
00:27:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacings...ok whatever
00:30:500 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacings...oh dude thats too repetitive :c (I think you get it the issue lel )
00:33:999 (4) - closer to 3 please , but not too much for the flow
00:34:333 (3,4,5,6,7) - isn't enough clean , distance between circles aren't equal each other or maybe its in purpose I don't know
00:36:666 (3,4) - I think the flow is better like this
00:39:666 (3) - should be smaller , requires a excellent precision there I don't really like it
00:40:166 - lack a circle there
00:49:999 (7) - what about same X as 5 ?
00:51:166 (1,2,3) - closer to 4
00:51:999 (2,3,4,5) - I don't find it very clean meh
00:56:333 (3) - closer to 2 thats a important HD should be catched easily
Nothing important I noticed thats really a good diff there in my opinion thats already ready for ranking
BUT , I think some HR master will try to fc this on hardrock , I tried with my modest skill and this is what I got
http://puu.sh/d4P1y/998736e699.osr
I suggest you to change some part to make the pattern less ridiculous on hardrock
Thats all I have to say
bye o/from my queue
gl~
click
[Usagi's NM]
00:49:166 (49166|0) - move to 2
00:51:666 (51666|2,51999|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
00:56:166 (56166|0) - move to 2
[7K NM]
really. good.
[4K HD]
00:11:999 - add note
00:12:333 - ^
not really suggested:
00:43:666 - add note to 3
00:43:749 - add note to 4
:U
[Shana's 7K HD]
it hould be HD+++
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
00:13:333 (13333|2) - move to 2
[7K MX]
00:33:083 (33083|5) - move to 4
[Kuroichi's Platter]
i only can FC this :U
00:49:166 (49166|0) - move to 2
00:51:666 (51666|2,51999|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
00:56:166 (56166|0) - move to 2
[7K NM]
really. good.
[4K HD]
00:11:999 - add note
00:12:333 - ^
not really suggested:
00:43:666 - add note to 3
00:43:749 - add note to 4
:U
[Shana's 7K HD]
it hould be HD+++
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
00:13:333 (13333|2) - move to 2
[7K MX]
00:33:083 (33083|5) - move to 4
[Kuroichi's Platter]
i only can FC this :U
gl~
Hi ^^, Mod by request.
[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind
[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column
[7K NM]
No issues for the moment
[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column
[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support
Column: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind
[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column
[7K NM]
No issues for the moment
[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column
[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
All fixed, ThanksSkalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.
[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen SupportColumn: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind
[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column
[7K NM]
No issues for the moment
[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column
[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
Update
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: Plasmagun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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Title:Plasma Gun
TitleUnicode:Plasma Gun
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:ichia7x
Version:Shana's 7K HD
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:[Shana_Lesus] Simple_Star ExUsagi Fullerene- lZenxl Kurokami newtoniorock8 collab
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Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column All ok
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
Thanks Skalim~
omg sorry for really long delay
thanks uncle.. ;w; oh man when you'll able to play with us again.. ;w;Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.
[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen Support // lemme ichi handle thisColumn: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind
// all done
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
thanks guys!Zan - wrote:
from my queue
[Usagi's NM]
00:49:166 (49166|0) - move to 2
00:51:666 (51666|2,51999|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
00:56:166 (56166|0) - move to 2
// no change at all.. ^^;
gl~
Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.
[General]
OK!
00:11:999 (11999|1) - Move to 1 for a better pattern flow
00:39:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:49:166 (49166|0) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:999 to 00:57:333 - Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/duMcQ/4dda6f39ba.jpg This incorporates the kicks/finishes with the claps as a < and > pattern for the left and right hand.
[4K HD]
00:15:999 (15999|3) - Move to 2 for the instrument's pitch
00:18:166 (18166|3) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:23:833 (23833|0) - ^
00:31:499 (31499|0) - ^
00:50:833 (50833|2) - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
- Couldn't really find anything to suggest but one.
00:32:833 (32833|3) - Move to 3 so it feels like the pattern is going down with the pitch.
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove?
00:04:166 (4166|0,4333|3,4499|6) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:20:999 (20999|6) - Move to 6 for a better flow of pattern
00:32:666 (32666|6) - Remove? You didn't have 2-chord kicks up until this point.
[Shana's 7K HD]
- This mod is mostly about fixing some chord inconsistencies in the map. You're free to apply or deny any these.
00:17:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:18:666 - Add a note here (preferably at 7) to emphasize the crash
00:19:999 - Add note here for crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:21:999 - And another here
00:22:666 - And here
00:45:333 - Here, too
00:47:833 (47833|4) - Move to 3 since you didn't have a mini-jack earlier
00:50:499 (50499|3) - Move to 7 to avoid shielding and to represent the pitch better
00:51:499 (51499|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:53:333 - Add note on 7 for the crash
[7K MX]
00:05:497 (5497|1,5499|1) - Remove 1 note here for obvious reasons (stacked notes). Also, snap 'em back up.
00:15:666 (15666|2) - Move to 4, the mini-jack doesn't really connect with the sound heard here.
00:28:333 (28333|4,28666|6) - Move both to 6 for a better flow in pattern
00:34:999 (34999|5) - Move to 5 for comfortability
00:45:666 (45666|5) - Move to 4, same reason as above
00:45:833 (45833|0,45916|1) - You could turn this into a mini-jack since it'll match the sound heard quite well.
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:04:999 - Maybe you could add a note at 4 so it can act as a kick. Same suggestion on 00:05:333 -
00:18:666 - Add one note here for the crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:23:999 - Here, too
00:24:499 - Add a note for the kick. Same goes for 00:26:666 - and 00:27:166 - and 00:29:333 - and 00:29:833 -
00:45:333 - Add one note here for the crash
00:47:999 - On here as well
00:56:666 (56666|4,56666|5,56749|1,56749|2,56833|5,56833|4,56916|2,56916|1,56999|5,56999|4) - Ctrl + H so it acts like it's reversing roles for the left and right hand
Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.
[General]
OK!
[Usagi's 4K NM]4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4
00:11:999 (11999|1) - Move to 1 for a better pattern flow
00:39:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:49:166 (49166|0) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:999 to 00:57:333 - Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/duMcQ/4dda6f39ba.jpg This incorporates the kicks/finishes with the claps as a < and > pattern for the left and right hand.
[4K HD]
00:15:999 (15999|3) - Move to 2 for the instrument's pitch
00:18:166 (18166|3) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:23:833 (23833|0) - ^
00:31:499 (31499|0) - ^
00:50:833 (50833|2) - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
- Couldn't really find anything to suggest but one.
00:32:833 (32833|3) - Move to 3 so it feels like the pattern is going down with the pitch.
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove?
[7K NM]7K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
00:04:166 (4166|0,4333|3,4499|6) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:20:999 (20999|6) - Move to 6 for a better flow of pattern
00:32:666 (32666|6) - Remove? You didn't have 2-chord kicks up until this point.
[Shana's 7K HD]
- This mod is mostly about fixing some chord inconsistencies in the map. You're free to apply or deny any these.
00:17:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:18:666 - Add a note here (preferably at 7) to emphasize the crash
00:19:999 - Add note here for crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:21:999 - And another here
00:22:666 - And here
00:45:333 - Here, too
00:47:833 (47833|4) - Move to 3 since you didn't have a mini-jack earlier
00:50:499 (50499|3) - Move to 7 to avoid shielding and to represent the pitch better
00:51:499 (51499|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:53:333 - Add note on 7 for the crash
[7K MX]
00:05:497 (5497|1,5499|1) - Remove 1 note here for obvious reasons (stacked notes). Also, snap 'em back up.
00:15:666 (15666|2) - Move to 4, the mini-jack doesn't really connect with the sound heard here.
00:28:333 (28333|4,28666|6) - Move both to 6 for a better flow in pattern
00:34:999 (34999|5) - Move to 5 for comfortability
00:45:666 (45666|5) - Move to 4, same reason as above
00:45:833 (45833|0,45916|1) - You could turn this into a mini-jack since it'll match the sound heard quite well.
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:04:999 - Maybe you could add a note at 4 so it can act as a kick. Same suggestion on 00:05:333 -
00:18:666 - Add one note here for the crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:23:999 - Here, too
00:24:499 - Add a note for the kick. Same goes for 00:26:666 - and 00:27:166 - and 00:29:333 - and 00:29:833 -
00:45:333 - Add one note here for the crash
00:47:999 - On here as well
00:56:666 (56666|4,56666|5,56749|1,56749|2,56833|5,56833|4,56916|2,56916|1,56999|5,56999|4) - Ctrl + H so it acts like it's reversing roles for the left and right hand
Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.
Thanks modBlocko wrote:
Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.
[General]
OK![S.Star's 4K SHD]4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines All ok
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove? Make a little change
Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.
Change: http://puu.sh/dvsXV/a9275329dc.osu
Thanks for mod Blocko, all fixed
Update
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: Plasmagun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 13333
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.11
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.999999
[Metadata]
Title:Plasma Gun
TitleUnicode:Plasma Gun
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:Ichigaki
Version:Shana's 7K HD
Source:O2Jam U
Tags:ichia7x [Shana_Lesus] Simple_Star ExUsagi Fullerene- lZenxl Kurokami newtoniorock8 collab
BeatmapID:452124
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CircleSize:7
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ApproachRate:5
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/late
THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION
General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention
4K
7K
THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION
General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention
4K
why do you hurt me
Columns are: |1|2|3|4|
[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b
00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - )
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:
00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 -
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^
[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167
00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notes
[thesaltmemeguy's MX]
where's my reference chart you fag
Hitsounds are kinda broken, fix that
Dude nicememe chart, nothing wrong to my eye
[S.Star's MX]
Boost HP to 8,5 maybe? It's quite short song so it won't really hurt
00:23:583 (23583|3,23583|2,23666|1,23666|0) - Wouldn't it be better to Ctrl+H this? Seems a bit weird now
00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3,48083|0,48083|1,48166|2,48166|3) - This needs Ctrl+H tho, 00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3) - isn't the same as 00:47:916 (47916|2,47916|3) -. Optionally you could do something like this:
00:49:499 (49499|0,49499|1,49583|0,49583|1,49666|3,49666|2) - Consider Ctrl+H on this for better hand ballance
00:49:833 (49833|1,49833|3,49916|1,49916|3,49999|0,49999|2) - If you accept this^ then Ctrl+H this for keeping the flow
00:55:749 - Add here
[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b
00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - )
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:
00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 -
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^
[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167
00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notes
[thesaltmemeguy's MX]
where's my reference chart you fag
Hitsounds are kinda broken, fix that
Dude nice
[S.Star's MX]
Boost HP to 8,5 maybe? It's quite short song so it won't really hurt
00:23:583 (23583|3,23583|2,23666|1,23666|0) - Wouldn't it be better to Ctrl+H this? Seems a bit weird now
00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3,48083|0,48083|1,48166|2,48166|3) - This needs Ctrl+H tho, 00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3) - isn't the same as 00:47:916 (47916|2,47916|3) -. Optionally you could do something like this:
00:49:499 (49499|0,49499|1,49583|0,49583|1,49666|3,49666|2) - Consider Ctrl+H on this for better hand ballance
00:49:833 (49833|1,49833|3,49916|1,49916|3,49999|0,49999|2) - If you accept this^ then Ctrl+H this for keeping the flow
00:55:749 - Add here
7K
ayyy lmoa
Good luck! o/Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe?
00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that
[Shana-nyan's HD]
Whoopsy ayyyy lmoa
Same issue as 4K, jump from NM is almost 1,6 star and you have next diff just 0,6 higher. That means you'll have to nerf this diff to around 3,1-3,2 star in order to get a linear spread which is really what you need to rank this.
00:03:999 (3999|0) - I see your idea for keeping pattern on one side, but putting this on 5th will make this pattern flow smoother
00:13:583 (13583|2) - Delete //For all suggestions on this sound: I know it's there, but it's a very little sound and I think it'll be better if you keep rhythm with next triplet in HD diff. Just easier to understand for players
00:16:249 (16249|3) - ^
00:18:749 - Trill is prolonged rather forcefully to my eye. This would be better to play imo:
00:25:499 - Missed a few synths there
00:45:583 (45583|2) - Delete
00:48:249 (48249|2) - Delete
00:50:916 (50916|2) - ^
00:52:666 (52666|4,52999|2) - Imo those LN's are ruining the little double stair pattern. Delete them and make stair more spaced, to make them better to play
00:53:583 (53583|2) - Delete
[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars
For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A;
[xXx_-w33d-_Z3NX3R1N0_-420-_xXx SHD]
The amount of $w3g in this is as expected quite high
whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooopsy
I'll focus on density and consistency on intruments since ExPew said it's the main/only reason your maps are sometimes considered unrankable
00:02:666 - 5 is a bit much, nerf it to 3
00:10:749 - Missed a thing, dunno if intentional, but should be added
00:17:333 - I feel like those beats are a lil' bit overchorded, just normal bass here
00:34:666 - This part is what I don't like about this map. The repetition is fine until you get to 4th, 5th time it's repeated and it repeats itself 8 times. Add more variety in this part //I admit that this is my personal feedback and this fits technically, but I think that it's very painful for players and needs revising
00:42:666 - Nerf to 4 or 5 chords (counting LN's as normal notes since they're basically taps) and add some variation in them //Example below
00:53:833 (53833|6,53833|1,53833|0,53833|5,53916|1,53916|0,53916|5,53916|6) - Only jack in this section lol, to be honest I think you should do more of them on this sound, fits a bit better than what you currently have
00:56:166 (56166|5,56166|4,56249|1,56249|2,56333|4,56333|5) - Ctrl+H
[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe?
00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that
[Shana-nyan's HD]
Whoopsy ayyyy lmoa
Same issue as 4K, jump from NM is almost 1,6 star and you have next diff just 0,6 higher. That means you'll have to nerf this diff to around 3,1-3,2 star in order to get a linear spread which is really what you need to rank this.
00:03:999 (3999|0) - I see your idea for keeping pattern on one side, but putting this on 5th will make this pattern flow smoother
00:13:583 (13583|2) - Delete //For all suggestions on this sound: I know it's there, but it's a very little sound and I think it'll be better if you keep rhythm with next triplet in HD diff. Just easier to understand for players
00:16:249 (16249|3) - ^
00:18:749 - Trill is prolonged rather forcefully to my eye. This would be better to play imo:
00:25:499 - Missed a few synths there
00:45:583 (45583|2) - Delete
00:48:249 (48249|2) - Delete
00:50:916 (50916|2) - ^
00:52:666 (52666|4,52999|2) - Imo those LN's are ruining the little double stair pattern. Delete them and make stair more spaced, to make them better to play
00:53:583 (53583|2) - Delete
[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars
For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A;
[xXx_-w33d-_Z3NX3R1N0_-420-_xXx SHD]
The amount of $w3g in this is as expected quite high
whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooopsy
I'll focus on density and consistency on intruments since ExPew said it's the main/only reason your maps are sometimes considered unrankable
00:02:666 - 5 is a bit much, nerf it to 3
00:10:749 - Missed a thing, dunno if intentional, but should be added
00:17:333 - I feel like those beats are a lil' bit overchorded, just normal bass here
00:34:666 - This part is what I don't like about this map. The repetition is fine until you get to 4th, 5th time it's repeated and it repeats itself 8 times. Add more variety in this part //I admit that this is my personal feedback and this fits technically, but I think that it's very painful for players and needs revising
00:42:666 - Nerf to 4 or 5 chords (counting LN's as normal notes since they're basically taps) and add some variation in them //Example below
00:53:833 (53833|6,53833|1,53833|0,53833|5,53916|1,53916|0,53916|5,53916|6) - Only jack in this section lol, to be honest I think you should do more of them on this sound, fits a bit better than what you currently have
00:56:166 (56166|5,56166|4,56249|1,56249|2,56333|4,56333|5) - Ctrl+H
All fixed, thanks for mod Kaminyan
Update
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329,192,52333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,52333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,52499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,52666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,52666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,52749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,52833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,52833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,52999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,52999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,53083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,53166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,53166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,53333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,53333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,53416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,53499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,53666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,53666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,53666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,53833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,53916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,53999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,53999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,53999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,54083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,54166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,54249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,54333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,54333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,54416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,54499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,54666,128,0,54999:0:0:0:0:
256,192,54666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,54666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,54999,128,0,55333:0:0:0:0:
182,192,54999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,54999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,55499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,55499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,55583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,55666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,55749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,55833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,55999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,55999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,56166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,56249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,56333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,56333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,56499,128,0,57166:0:0:0:0:
36,192,56499,128,0,57166:0:0:0:0:
256,192,56499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,56833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,56999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,57166,128,0,58666:0:0:0:0:
182,192,57166,128,0,58666:0:0:0:0:
36,192,57666,128,0,57833:0:0:0:0:
256,192,57833,128,0,57999:0:0:0:0:
475,192,57999,128,0,58166:0:0:0:0:
-Kamikaze- wrote:
/late
THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION
General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention
4Kwhy do you hurt meColumns are: |1|2|3|4|
[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b
00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - )
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:
00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 -
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^
[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167
00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notes
[thesaltmemeguy's MX]
where's my reference chart you fag
Hitsounds are kinda broken, fix that
Dude nicememechart, nothing wrong to my eye
[S.Star's MX]
Boost HP to 8,5 maybe? It's quite short song so it won't really hurt
00:23:583 (23583|3,23583|2,23666|1,23666|0) - Wouldn't it be better to Ctrl+H this? Seems a bit weird now
00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3,48083|0,48083|1,48166|2,48166|3) - This needs Ctrl+H tho, 00:47:999 (47999|2,47999|3) - isn't the same as 00:47:916 (47916|2,47916|3) -. Optionally you could do something like this:
00:49:499 (49499|0,49499|1,49583|0,49583|1,49666|3,49666|2) - Consider Ctrl+H on this for better hand ballance
00:49:833 (49833|1,49833|3,49916|1,49916|3,49999|0,49999|2) - If you accept this^ then Ctrl+H this for keeping the flow
00:55:749 - Add here
7Kayyy lmoaGood luck! o/Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe?
00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that
[Shana-nyan's HD]
Whoopsy ayyyy lmoa
Same issue as 4K, jump from NM is almost 1,6 star and you have next diff just 0,6 higher. That means you'll have to nerf this diff to around 3,1-3,2 star in order to get a linear spread which is really what you need to rank this.
00:03:999 (3999|0) - I see your idea for keeping pattern on one side, but putting this on 5th will make this pattern flow smoother
00:13:583 (13583|2) - Delete //For all suggestions on this sound: I know it's there, but it's a very little sound and I think it'll be better if you keep rhythm with next triplet in HD diff. Just easier to understand for players
00:16:249 (16249|3) - ^
00:18:749 - Trill is prolonged rather forcefully to my eye. This would be better to play imo:
00:25:499 - Missed a few synths there
00:45:583 (45583|2) - Delete
00:48:249 (48249|2) - Delete
00:50:916 (50916|2) - ^
00:52:666 (52666|4,52999|2) - Imo those LN's are ruining the little double stair pattern. Delete them and make stair more spaced, to make them better to play
00:53:583 (53583|2) - Delete
[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars
For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A;
[xXx_-w33d-_Z3NX3R1N0_-420-_xXx SHD]
The amount of $w3g in this is as expected quite high
whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooopsy
I'll focus on density and consistency on intruments since ExPew said it's the main/only reason your maps are sometimes considered unrankable ayy lmao
00:02:666 - 5 is a bit much, nerf it to 3 i think i'll just nerf to 4, 3 is like eeeh
00:10:749 - Missed a thing, dunno if intentional, but should be added oks fixed
00:17:333 - I feel like those beats are a lil' bit overchorded, just normal bass here nerfed that shit
00:34:666 - This part is what I don't like about this map. The repetition is fine until you get to 4th, 5th time it's repeated and it repeats itself 8 times. Add more variety in this part //I admit that this is my personal feedback and this fits technically, but I think that it's very painful for players and needs revising Hi i realised this pattern is actually disgusting now, i honestly don't know why i mapped this lel ( no sarcarsm btw )
Remapped this whole shit so it's like LN omg short lns hnnng
00:42:666 - Nerf to 4 or 5 chords (counting LN's as normal notes since they're basically taps) and add some variation in them //Example below
00:53:833 (53833|6,53833|1,53833|0,53833|5,53916|1,53916|0,53916|5,53916|6) - Only jack in this section lol, to be honest I think you should do more of them on this sound, fits a bit better than what you currently have Added 2 more jacks in this section and redid some patterns also so they play better
00:56:166 (56166|5,56166|4,56249|1,56249|2,56333|4,56333|5) - Ctrl+H conflicts with brocko's mod lmao, didn't actually ctrl h this though
Blocko wrote:
Yo, ichi!
Sorry for the 2 1/2 week delay, but here's my mod as requested.
[General]
OK![Usagi's 4K NM]4K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4
00:11:999 (11999|1) - Move to 1 for a better pattern flow
00:39:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:49:166 (49166|0) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:999 to 00:57:333 - Pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/duMcQ/4dda6f39ba.jpg This incorporates the kicks/finishes with the claps as a < and > pattern for the left and right hand.
[4K HD]
00:15:999 (15999|3) - Move to 2 for the instrument's pitch
00:18:166 (18166|3) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:23:833 (23833|0) - ^
00:31:499 (31499|0) - ^
00:50:833 (50833|2) - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
- Couldn't really find anything to suggest but one.
00:32:833 (32833|3) - Move to 3 so it feels like the pattern is going down with the pitch.
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:19:833 (19833|0) - Move to 2 for a better pattern synergy
00:35:499 (35499|0) - Move to 3, same reason as above
00:44:499 (44499|2) - Move to 1 so the 3rd column doesn't act as a 'pseudo mini-jack' or something along those lines
00:52:999 (52999|3) - A 4-chord might be a bit much based on density. Remove?[7K NM]7K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
00:04:166 (4166|0,4333|3,4499|6) - Ctrl + H for the pitch
00:20:999 (20999|6) - Move to 6 for a better flow of pattern
00:32:666 (32666|6) - Remove? You didn't have 2-chord kicks up until this point.
[Shana's 7K HD]
- This mod is mostly about fixing some chord inconsistencies in the map. You're free to apply or deny any these.
00:17:999 - Add a note here for the kick
00:18:666 - Add a note here (preferably at 7) to emphasize the crash
00:19:999 - Add note here for crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:21:999 - And another here
00:22:666 - And here
00:45:333 - Here, too
00:47:833 (47833|4) - Move to 3 since you didn't have a mini-jack earlier
00:50:499 (50499|3) - Move to 7 to avoid shielding and to represent the pitch better
00:51:499 (51499|0) - Move to 2 for comfortability
00:53:333 - Add note on 7 for the crash
[7K MX]
00:05:497 (5497|1,5499|1) - Remove 1 note here for obvious reasons (stacked notes). Also, snap 'em back up.
00:15:666 (15666|2) - Move to 4, the mini-jack doesn't really connect with the sound heard here.
00:28:333 (28333|4,28666|6) - Move both to 6 for a better flow in pattern
00:34:999 (34999|5) - Move to 5 for comfortability
00:45:666 (45666|5) - Move to 4, same reason as above
00:45:833 (45833|0,45916|1) - You could turn this into a mini-jack since it'll match the sound heard quite well.
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:04:999 - Maybe you could add a note at 4 so it can act as a kick. Same suggestion on 00:05:333 -
00:18:666 - Add one note here for the crash
00:21:333 - Same suggestion as above
00:23:999 - Here, too
00:24:499 - Add a note for the kick. Same goes for 00:26:666 - and 00:27:166 - and 00:29:333 - and 00:29:833 -
00:45:333 - Add one note here for the crash
00:47:999 - On here as well
00:56:666 (56666|4,56666|5,56749|1,56749|2,56833|5,56833|4,56916|2,56916|1,56999|5,56999|4) - Ctrl + H so it acts like it's reversing roles for the left and right hand Err did everything, do i have to reply to everything ( i like adding notes c: )
Mod's kinda short for each diffs, but I hope it helps!
Good luck.
Thx for mods \o/Skalim wrote:
Hi ^^, Mod by request.
[General]
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
AImod: OK
Song Setup: Optional Widescreen SupportColumn: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7
[Usagi's 4K NM]
00:19:833 (19833|3) - erase this, unnecesary jack for the pitch
00:19:666 - add 1 note for follow the pattern of behind
[4K HD]
00:19:166 (19166|1) - why that jack? move?
00:19:499 (19499|2) - ^
00:19:833 (19833|1) - ^ move to 1° i think
00:20:833 (20833|0) - ^
00:35:416 - add 1 note, here continue the stream
00:35:583 - ^
[Fullerene's 4K MX]
No issues for now
[S.Star's 4K SHD]
00:17:583 - add 1 note in 2° column, i feel a stream sound here
00:17:666 (17666|1) - move this to 3° column
[7K NM]
No issues for the moment
[Shana's 7K HD]
00:17:999 - i suggest add 1 note here, strong pitch here
00:47:333 - you can perfectly add 1 note here, same sound what the next pattern
00:47:833 (47833|4) - move to the 3° column and add 1 note in 1° column
[7K MX]
00:15:499 - add 1 note in 2° column like the patterns of behind
00:15:583 (15583|2) - unnecessary note, no sound here
00:15:833 (15833|1) - move to the 1° column
00:20:166 (20166|1) - move to 3° columnpor jack pitch
00:45:833 (45833|0) - move to the 2° column
00:45:666 (45666|1) - move to the 3° column for no make interference with the next pattern
[lZenxl's 7K SHD]
00:13:833 (13833|1,13833|0) - move all 1 right for jack pitch
00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|3) - move all 1 left, ^ o ok jacked it
ok i think is all for now, a short mod for a short map ^^
Remember, a mod is just a suggerence
Everytime i look at my previous stuff i think that it's rather shit
Updates:
http://puu.sh/dHLI3/235df4992b.osu
btw since i changed my username errr you don't really have to add z3nx to tags if you don't want, and i'm keeping my diff name as lZenxl's 7K SHD since that was the username i used when mapping this hue
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot >w<)-Kamikaze- wrote:
/late
THOSE WHO REQUEST SHALL GET THEIR SALVATION
General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz
Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Post for reference with "linear spread" thing I mention
4Kwhy do you hurt meColumns are: |1|2|3|4|
[HD]
HP 7,5
That's a steep jump from NM. 1,38 stars from it in fact. Also since MX is 4,15, you'd need to make this HD around 3,1 star to make spread linear and rankable
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:000
Object isn't snapped! 00:05:167
Fixed
00:11:249 - Why sudden stop in 1/4? It's still going on
00:11:583 - ^
Change to 1/2 note there, remove 1/4
00:34:833 - Technically this 1/4 stream should start here. Also since you'll have to nerf it a little I suggest following:
1) Either remove any doubles in this stream
2) Or nerf it completely and add some LN's I use this
00:46:333 (46333|1,46416|0,46499|2,46583|1) - No need to LN those, change to normal notesFixed
7Kayyy lmoaGood luck! o/Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[NM]
00:06:999 (6999|1,7166|2) - Whistles?
00:07:833 (7833|4) - ^
00:43:666 - This maybe? Yes, and add note in in last of 1/4
00:44:833 - Add on 4th for faint bass
00:52:666 - I think it's be better/easier to read as stairs - first being 765 and second being 123 or something like that
All fixed
[MX]
Object isn't snapped! 00:23:250
Again, star diff progression is quite bad and considering that SHD is indeed much harder here, you should boost this diff by 0,2 stars Boosted~
For some reason I don't want to touch this diff ;A; ;A;
-Kamikaze- wrote:
[Tertel's NM]
=w=)b
00:02:999 - Why do you map that tick every 4/1 instead of 2/1 (for example 00:03:666 - missing)? I'd say to delete all of those since it's a beginning and would be better if kept simple (notes in question: 00:02:999 (2999|0,4333|0,5666|3,7666|3) - ) // lel keep, since this is NM, and it's still simple
00:08:333 (8333|2,9666|2) - Those LN's fit better into map's flow as normal notes or 2-chords
00:10:833 - Add here
00:11:499 - Add here // rearranged instead
00:11:999 - This fits better with actual sounds imo:// lel keep
00:22:499 (22499|3,22833|2,23166|1,23499|0) - Those LN's feel 1/2 too early for some reason // i made the rhythm like that on purpose.. :3
00:24:499 - Add on 3rd for bass // keep
00:34:999 (34999|3,35333|1) - Notes like these with LN's on NM? Imo it's too confusing to catch // ==a i know, gotta keep some, but most of them is remapped to simpler pattern..
00:44:166 (44166|3) - end on 00:44:833 - // keep
00:45:999 - Kick or something
00:48:666 - ^
00:51:333 - ^
// keep, erm, i like the current rhythm
thanks! http://puu.sh/dNzls.osu
Has this been revived? I just found it today, cool song ^^
If you're still looking for mods, I'll happily go through the CtB diffs and try to give you some suggestions to move this along. Just let me know and I can start on this anytime (:
EDIT: mod is below ^^
General Comments:
Best of luck! (:
If you're still looking for mods, I'll happily go through the CtB diffs and try to give you some suggestions to move this along. Just let me know and I can start on this anytime (:
EDIT: mod is below ^^
General Comments:
- Song Folder: The bitrate of your mp3 is 128kbps, which is the lowest rankable quality. Here's a 192kbps version (I edited it so it matched up to your current mp3 offset as much as possible, but if you decide to use it, do a quick check for unsnapped notes as there might be some tiny differences.
- Song Setup: Combo colours 2 and 3 are kinda similar. It's not a huge deal in CtB, but maybe you could make 2 into a darker blue just to add some aesthetic variety?
- Metadata: No issues
- Timing: No issues
- Hitsounds: You're only using the default hitsounds, which is fine, if a little plain. I feel it would be nice to get some custom hitsounds to give the mapset a more personal touch. If this interests you, try looking through the song folders of similar types of song and picking out the ones you like, or if you're struggling, LordRaika has a huge catalogue of hitsounds on their profile page that's sure to have something you like
- AImod: No issues
Salad
00:11:249 (7,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these two streams a little. Because of the direction change and the 1/4 spacing, it's very easy to miss here
00:17:166 (3) - This slider doesn't really seem to fit to me. I would either make this circle and a a 1/2 slider (if you're following the drums), or a 1/2 slider repeating once (if you want to follow the synth)
00:34:166 - There's a drum roll here, so at the very least I'd put notes on the red ticks to match the intensity in the music here
00:37:333 (1) - 00:37:333 (1) - I'd curve the tail a little more to create a tiny bit of movement here
00:38:666 - Add a note here for the kick drum. it's up to you whether you want more of a jump between 00:37:333 (1) and the new note, or the new note and 00:38:833 (2) since both sounds are prominent and could justify a jump
00:40:666 - ^ and again at 00:41:666
00:42:666 (2) - Drums are more prominent here, so I'd split this into a 1/2 slider and circle, or even make all of 00:42:666 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 sliders with slowly increasing spacing and/or direction change
00:58:666 - Reduce the volume at the spinner end to something like 30-40%, the song starts to fade out a little here so 60% volume feels a bit too loud to me. If you decide to do this, make sure to do it for the other diffs
00:17:166 (3) - This slider doesn't really seem to fit to me. I would either make this circle and a a 1/2 slider (if you're following the drums), or a 1/2 slider repeating once (if you want to follow the synth)
00:34:166 - There's a drum roll here, so at the very least I'd put notes on the red ticks to match the intensity in the music here
00:37:333 (1) - 00:37:333 (1) - I'd curve the tail a little more to create a tiny bit of movement here
00:38:666 - Add a note here for the kick drum. it's up to you whether you want more of a jump between 00:37:333 (1) and the new note, or the new note and 00:38:833 (2) since both sounds are prominent and could justify a jump
00:40:666 - ^ and again at 00:41:666
00:42:666 (2) - Drums are more prominent here, so I'd split this into a 1/2 slider and circle, or even make all of 00:42:666 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 sliders with slowly increasing spacing and/or direction change
00:58:666 - Reduce the volume at the spinner end to something like 30-40%, the song starts to fade out a little here so 60% volume feels a bit too loud to me. If you decide to do this, make sure to do it for the other diffs
Kuroichi's Platter
00:15:666 (6) - Head and tail are both quite prominent notes, so I would split this slider into two circles with slightly higher DS
00:18:333 - There's a 1/4 triplet in the music here you could map if you wanted to - I think it would be cool to have it symmetrical with 00:18:666 (1,2,3) if you decide to do this
00:21:833 - Two more 1/4 notes here could add a little bit of intensity
00:25:333 - Two 1/2 notes here, but I feel this one is more prominent, and more worthy of being mapped, so I'd add a circle here
These are just some minor suggestions based on what I think might work, I really like this map as it is, it's fun to play and flows well (:
00:18:333 - There's a 1/4 triplet in the music here you could map if you wanted to - I think it would be cool to have it symmetrical with 00:18:666 (1,2,3) if you decide to do this
00:21:833 - Two more 1/4 notes here could add a little bit of intensity
00:25:333 - Two 1/2 notes here, but I feel this one is more prominent, and more worthy of being mapped, so I'd add a circle here
These are just some minor suggestions based on what I think might work, I really like this map as it is, it's fun to play and flows well (:
Rain
Well, this is all from me. Hopefully you found some of this useful, but if you need anything more from me, throw me a PM or forum message and I'll try my best to help.00:04:833 (1,2) - Consecutive claps are overbearing for me - I'd just keep them on the tails (white ticks)
00:16:083 and 00:16:583 - consider adding some notes here to make these into 1/4 triplets for the synth pattern. You could stack them under 00:15:999 (1,3) and create a dash to the following sliders
00:21:416 and 00:21:916 - ^
00:23:666 (7) - Consider making this into a short 1/4 stream for the synth sounds in the music. With the increase in pitch, you could slowly increase DS between these to create a fitting climax to the kiai section
00:42:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consecutive whistles this time, but still quite irritating I'm afraid. Personally, I feel it sounds better to have whistles on just 00:42:166 (1,5) but it's up to you
00:16:083 and 00:16:583 - consider adding some notes here to make these into 1/4 triplets for the synth pattern. You could stack them under 00:15:999 (1,3) and create a dash to the following sliders
00:21:416 and 00:21:916 - ^
00:23:666 (7) - Consider making this into a short 1/4 stream for the synth sounds in the music. With the increase in pitch, you could slowly increase DS between these to create a fitting climax to the kiai section
00:42:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consecutive whistles this time, but still quite irritating I'm afraid. Personally, I feel it sounds better to have whistles on just 00:42:166 (1,5) but it's up to you
Best of luck! (:
Topic Starter
Go for it
Big sorry for Z3nx, Simple_Star, and newtoniorock8 because i removed your diffs from my mapset. I'm so sorry for disturbing your time back then
Big sorry for Z3nx, Simple_Star, and newtoniorock8 because i removed your diffs from my mapset. I'm so sorry for disturbing your time back then
[Salad]
[Platter]
[Rain]
- 00:08:666 (2,3,4) - I'd use a smaller distance here, just what I'd do. Try this on x:272.
- 00:11:249 (7,1) - I'll agree with JBH on this one. Your Salad has very little few jumps, even 1/2 ones, so making a 1/4 jump isn't very consistent with difficulty across the map, and, as he said, the direction change + 1/4 spacing makes it easy to miss.
- 00:17:833 (4) - I think this one allows for a bit more distance, I tried x:248 and I liked it. 00:18:499 (5) - can be moved to the left, that way you also won't have the antiflow on 00:18:666 (1) - , which I didn't really like.
- 00:21:666 (1,2) - This one can also have a bit more distance, maybe by Ctrl+H and moving it a bit.
- 00:23:583 (4) - This note can be skipped, IMO. It doesn't add that much to the pattern, since most of the 1/4 sounds are ignored there, and I think it looks cleaner without the 1/4.
- 00:46:666 (1) - I think this note can be closer to the previous object, personal taste.
- 00:49:499 (2,3,4) - I think normal flow would be better here; it would allow you to add more distance. Try the following placement for 00:49:499 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - :
- 00:56:499 (2,3,4,5) - I think you can increase distance a bit, just a tiny bit, to make the "need to dash" more noticeable.
[Platter]
- You may want to update SB as it says "ichia7x" instead of your current nickname
- 00:07:666 (8) - Maybe move this to x:208 for a smaller jump?
- 00:13:333 (1,2,3) - I think these should have a little more spacing (as in 00:23:499 (1,2,3) - ) so the notes follow the movement of the hyperdash a bit longer, making the whole movement easier.
- 00:15:333 (5) - I think you can add one repeat to this one so it also follows the drum at 00:15:499 -
- 00:30:666 (2) - I think it's better if you replace this with a circle in the red tick, since you've been following the guitar.
[Rain]
- 00:04:166 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ctrl+H this whole section just so 00:03:833 (4,5) - isn't stacked (which plays a bit boring and counterintuitive) without destroying any patterns
- 00:11:666 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think this plays better if it's oriented to the right (kinda like this).
- 00:15:999 (1,2) - I think it wouldn't hurt to move this to x:128, to make it a bit easier to catch
- 00:34:499 (5,6,1) - I think a smaller distance between these notes will play better. The sound on 00:34:666 (1) - , although it's on the downbeat, isn't that strong, so I wouldn't have hyperdashed this.
- 00:40:999 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The 1/4 sounds on this part are really weak, so I'd go for smaller jumps (not hyperdashes). I moved a few things (mostly 00:41:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - both those streams to the right) and it played good.
Topic Starter
JBHyperion wrote:
Has this been revived? I just found it today, cool song ^^
If you're still looking for mods, I'll happily go through the CtB diffs and try to give you some suggestions to move this along. Just let me know and I can start on this anytime (:
EDIT: mod is below ^^
General Comments:Difficulty-Specific Comments:
- Song Folder: The bitrate of your mp3 is 128kbps, which is the lowest rankable quality. Hmm, I'll consider it after applying these modsHere's a 192kbps version (I edited it so it matched up to your current mp3 offset as much as possible, but if you decide to use it, do a quick check for unsnapped notes as there might be some tiny differences.
- Song Setup: Combo colours 2 and 3 are kinda similar. It's not a huge deal in CtB, but maybe you could make 2 into a darker blue just to add some aesthetic variety? Hmm, okay
- Metadata: No issues
- Timing: No issues
- Hitsounds: You're only using the default hitsounds, which is fine, if a little plain. I feel it would be nice to get some custom hitsounds to give the mapset a more personal touch. If this interests you, try looking through the song folders of similar types of song and picking out the ones you like, or if you're struggling, LordRaika has a huge catalogue of hitsounds on their profile page that's sure to have something you like I'll consider this too.
- AImod: No issues
Salad00:11:249 (7,1) - I would reduce the spacing between these two streams a little. Because of the direction change and the 1/4 spacing, it's very easy to miss here Okay
00:17:166 (3) - This slider doesn't really seem to fit to me. I would either make this circle and a a 1/2 slider (if you're following the drums), or a 1/2 slider repeating once (if you want to follow the synth) Okay
00:34:166 - There's a drum roll here, so at the very least I'd put notes on the red ticks to match the intensity in the music here Okay
00:37:333 (1) - 00:37:333 (1) - I'd curve the tail a little more to create a tiny bit of movement here Okay
00:38:666 - Add a note here for the kick drum. it's up to you whether you want more of a jump between 00:37:333 (1) and the new note, or the new note and 00:38:833 (2) since both sounds are prominent and could justify a jump
00:40:666 - ^ and again at 00:41:666
00:42:666 (2) - Drums are more prominent here, so I'd split this into a 1/2 slider and circle, or even make all of 00:42:666 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 sliders with slowly increasing spacing and/or direction change
00:58:666 - Reduce the volume at the spinner end to something like 30-40%, the song starts to fade out a little here so 60% volume feels a bit too loud to me. If you decide to do this, make sure to do it for the other diffs
All okayKuroichi's Platter00:15:666 (6) - Head and tail are both quite prominent notes, so I would split this slider into two circles with slightly higher DS Hmm, i keep this one
00:18:333 - There's a 1/4 triplet in the music here you could map if you wanted to - I think it would be cool to have it symmetrical with 00:18:666 (1,2,3) if you decide to do this Okay, but I used reverse slider
00:21:833 - Two more 1/4 notes here could add a little bit of intensity Okay
00:25:333 - Two 1/2 notes here, but I feel this one is more prominent, and more worthy of being mapped, so I'd add a circle here Hmm nice, but I do something different.
These are just some minor suggestions based on what I think might work, I really like this map as it is, it's fun to play and flows well (:Rain00:04:833 (1,2) - Consecutive claps are overbearing for me - I'd just keep them on the tails (white ticks) Nice one
00:16:083 and 00:16:583 - consider adding some notes here to make these into 1/4 triplets for the synth pattern. You could stack them under 00:15:999 (1,3) and create a dash to the following sliders
00:21:416 and 00:21:916 - ^ Yeah, sounds okay
00:23:666 (7) - Consider making this into a short 1/4 stream for the synth sounds in the music. With the increase in pitch, you could slowly increase DS between these to create a fitting climax to the kiai section Okay
00:42:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consecutive whistles this time, but still quite irritating I'm afraid. Personally, I feel it sounds better to have whistles on just 00:42:166 (1,5) but it's up to you I just make the (3) to become claps :p
Well, this is all from me. Hopefully you found some of this useful, but if you need anything more from me, throw me a PM or forum message and I'll try my best to help.
Best of luck! (:
Thank you~ZiRoX wrote:
[Salad]
- 00:08:666 (2,3,4) - I'd use a smaller distance here, just what I'd do. Try this on x:272. Changed my own
- 00:11:249 (7,1) - I'll agree with JBH on this one. Your Salad has very little few jumps, even 1/2 ones, so making a 1/4 jump isn't very consistent with difficulty across the map, and, as he said, the direction change + 1/4 spacing makes it easy to miss. Already changed
- 00:17:833 (4) - I think this one allows for a bit more distance, I tried x:248 and I liked it. 00:18:499 (5) - can be moved to the left, that way you also won't have the antiflow on 00:18:666 (1) - , which I didn't really like. Changed my own
- 00:21:666 (1,2) - This one can also have a bit more distance, maybe by Ctrl+H and moving it a bit. Okay
- 00:23:583 (4) - This note can be skipped, IMO. It doesn't add that much to the pattern, since most of the 1/4 sounds are ignored there, and I think it looks cleaner without the 1/4. Okay
- 00:46:666 (1) - I think this note can be closer to the previous object, personal taste. Okay
- 00:49:499 (2,3,4) - I think normal flow would be better here; it would allow you to add more distance. Try the following placement for 00:49:499 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - okay :
- 00:56:499 (2,3,4,5) - I think you can increase distance a bit, just a tiny bit, to make the "need to dash" more noticeable. Okay
[Platter]
- You may want to update SB as it says "ichia7x" instead of your current nickname
- 00:07:666 (8) - Maybe move this to x:208 for a smaller jump?
- 00:13:333 (1,2,3) - I think these should have a little more spacing (as in 00:23:499 (1,2,3) - ) so the notes follow the movement of the hyperdash a bit longer, making the whole movement easier.
- 00:15:333 (5) - I think you can add one repeat to this one so it also follows the drum at 00:15:499 -
All okay
[Rain]
- 00:04:166 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ctrl+H this whole section just so 00:03:833 (4,5) - isn't stacked (which plays a bit boring and counterintuitive) without destroying any patterns Yep, nice
- 00:11:666 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think this plays better if it's oriented to the right (kinda like this). Nice :3
- 00:15:999 (1,2) - I think it wouldn't hurt to move this to x:128, to make it a bit easier to catch Hmm, okay
- 00:34:499 (5,6,1) - I think a smaller distance between these notes will play better. The sound on 00:34:666 (1) - , although it's on the downbeat, isn't that strong, so I wouldn't have hyperdashed this. Agreed, I forgot to change this one before, thanks for mentioned it.
- 00:40:999 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The 1/4 sounds on this part are really weak, so I'd go for smaller jumps (not hyperdashes). I moved a few things (mostly 00:41:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - both those streams to the right) and it played good. Done~
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