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Nakamura Meiko - Across the Destiny [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
richardfeder

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I Love this song >w<
I wish I can join with you ><
Thanks for you star >///<
Bruce
天国的STD(
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Simple_Star wrote:

天国的STD(
不急啊 反正mania BAT也都飞升了hhhhhh mod都不知道找不找的齐
Edit: 要不要再来一首啊ww
Bruce

richardfeder wrote:

Simple_Star wrote:

天国的STD(
不急啊 反正mania BAT也都飞升了hhhhhh mod都不知道找不找的齐
Edit: 要不要再来一首啊ww
来 都来 反正BAT美丽了 多屯点以后有用√
dosyeru
these are just suggestions.

column SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
richardfeder
  1. 00:00:513 (513|0) - remove?
  2. 00:15:036 (15036|0) - move to 00:15:274. I understand what's the purpose, but SP note at 00:15:274 is more understandable in playing.
  3. 00:15:989 - remove a note from these 3 notes? or add a note 00:16:465 ?
  4. 00:30:274 (30274|4,30512|6,30989|4,31227|6,31703|4,31941|6,32417|4,32655|6) - move these to the right by one column?
    these sounds are the same as 00:29:560 (29560|5,29798|7) -
  5. 00:37:536 (37536|2) - remove?
  6. 00:37:655 (37655|6) - move to the left by one?
  7. 01:20:274 (80274|4,80393|4) - move to 1
  8. 01:15:036 (75036|6,75274|6) - move to the left by one?
  9. 01:32:179 (92179|4) - move to 1?
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2) - move to 3, and add a note at 6?
  11. 01:32:893 (92893|3) - move to 1
  12. 01:33:608 - add a note at 1?
  13. 01:37:893 - add a note at 1?
  14. 01:38:132 - ^
  15. 02:00:632 (120632|5) - move to 3?
  16. 02:01:346 (121346|4) - move to 3?
  17. 02:08:370 - add notes? I actually hear piano sounds here,
  18. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?


Simple_star
  1. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?
  2. 02:25:751 (145751|0) - move to 02:25:989 ?
  3. 02:26:227 (146227|0) - remove?
  4. 02:28:489 (148489|2) - move this to 1? I think there's no strong sound to map jack here
  5. 02:29:798 (149798|5) - move to 3 to follow piano pitch?
  6. 02:33:608 (153608|7) - move to 6? ^
  7. 02:41:465 (161465|5,161465|7) - move one of them to 1 or 3 to make a jack to follow bass drum?
  8. 02:42:417 (162417|0) - from here, move notes following snare drums at SP lane to 1 to 7 column, so that you can make contrast.
    first section (02:27:179 to 02:42:417) is low density of notes with scratch notes, but next section, from 02:42:417 to 02:57:655, is higher density of notes without SP notes. this is my preference tho.
  9. 02:56:822 - add a note at 2?
  10. 03:00:036 - add a note if you like to follow piano?
  11. 03:00:512 - add a note at SP to represent synth?
  12. 03:13:727 (193727|1) - move to 2?
  13. 03:13:727 (193727|3) - move to 5?
  14. 03:13:727 (193727|6) - move to 7?
  15. 03:26:346 - add a note at 4?
  16. 03:26:584 - ^?
  17. 03:29:560 - add a note at SP?
  18. 03:37:655 (217655|0) - remove?
  19. 03:44:917 - add a note at 5?
  20. 05:56:703 - add a note at SP
  21. 05:58:608 (358608|0) - move to 1?
  22. 06:00:512 (360512|0) - ^?
  23. 06:02:417 (362417|0) - move to 2?
  24. 06:04:322 (364322|0) - move to 1?
  25. 06:08:132 (368132|0) - move to 1?
    if these notes at SP follow piano sounds.
  26. 06:14:045 (374045|0) - remove?


some feedbacks from my BMS friends.
first half of this map follows music well, and some parts in next half of this map has challenging patterns that are really fun to play.
those differences make this map fun! they enjoyed playing <3
but some of them worried about its difficulty gap between first half and next half.
they suggested adding a little jacks if it's possible in 1st chorus, from 01:39:560 to 02:11:941.
so that the gap may be decrease.

all of my friends I asked test-play said this was well-designed. it is myself included <3
Topic Starter
richardfeder

dosyeru wrote:

these are just suggestions.

column SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
richardfeder
  1. 00:00:513 (513|0) - remove?OK
  2. 00:15:036 (15036|0) - move to 00:15:274. I understand what's the purpose, but SP note at 00:15:274 is more understandable in playing.yeah I understand your point but I still prefer current placement. I will make the change if more people point this out.
  3. 00:15:989 - remove a note from these 3 notes? or add a note 00:16:465 ?yes my fault! added
  4. 00:30:274 (30274|4,30512|6,30989|4,31227|6,31703|4,31941|6,32417|4,32655|6) - move these to the right by one column?
    these sounds are the same as 00:29:560 (29560|5,29798|7) -sure
  5. 00:37:536 (37536|2) - remove?nope. guitar+piano >,<
  6. 00:37:655 (37655|6) - move to the left by one?oh yes
  7. 01:20:274 (80274|4,80393|4) - move to 1x that's how we get rating 1 lol
  8. 01:15:036 (75036|6,75274|6) - move to the left by one?I move 01:15:036 (75036|5) -
  9. 01:32:179 (92179|4) - move to 1?piano goes like this:01:31:941 (91941|5,92179|4,92417|6,92655|2) - so no for pitch
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2) - move to 3, and add a note at 6?^
  11. 01:32:893 (92893|3) - move to 1x
  12. 01:33:608 - add a note at 1?x actually only planning on mapping piano+crash here
  13. 01:37:893 - add a note at 1?
  14. 01:38:132 - ^yes both two is acceptable and looks fun \:D/
  15. 02:00:632 (120632|5) - move to 3?x
  16. 02:01:346 (121346|4) - move to 3?yes legit mini jack \:D/
  17. 02:08:370 - add notes? I actually hear piano sounds here, I don't think so I actually map this with accompaniment and I don't think there is piano sound :p
  18. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?yes!


some feedbacks from my BMS friends.
first half of this map follows music well, and some parts in next half of this map has challenging patterns that are really fun to play.
those differences make this map fun! they enjoyed playing <3
but some of them worried about its difficulty gap between first half and next half.
they suggested adding a little jacks if it's possible in 1st chorus, from 01:39:560 to 02:11:941.
so that the gap may be decrease.yeah sure. i rearrange some pattern in order to make the gap smaller. Thanks!

all of my friends I asked test-play said this was well-designed. it is myself included <3Thank you! <3
Thanks for your help! I really appreciate it >,<
imariL
Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Dream World]

02:08:608 (128608|0) - delete or add note 0 at 02:09:560
02:27:060 (147060|0) - I don't think this note is necessary at here, delete this
03:09:798 - add at 0, you already added notes at 03:09:084 , 03:10:274 , and 03:10:751
04:41:822 (281822|3) - move to 1
05:41:465 - add at 0

[Across the Destiny]

Offset is wrong, Try to use 513, same offset with o!m. I used offset 513 when I modded this map, so please fix offset first.

00:03:370 (5) - Try to delete this note. If you delete this note, you should rearrange pattern this part
00:41:822 (7,8,9,10) - Not bad, but try to reduce each notes' distance

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Chocoliti wrote:

Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Dream World]

02:08:608 (128608|0) - delete or add note 0 at 02:09:560yes added
04:41:822 (281822|3) - move to 1x that's how we get rating 1 /me run
Thank you!
Bruce
Thanks Chocoliti and dosyeru~

Chocoliti:All Fixed

dosyeru:
06:00:512 (360512|0) - ^?
06:02:417 (362417|0) - move to 2?
06:04:322 (364322|0) - move to 1?
06:08:132 (368132|0) - move to 1?
if these notes at SP follow piano sounds.
06:14:045 (374045|0) - remove?
These are not fixed

Diff: http://puu.sh/9xz7b/d0330ccbfa.osu
Topic Starter
richardfeder
Update~
yoshilove
Draining time: 6:13 single diff plz don't bite me

meowwwwwwwww!!

(2min*6diff = 12min)
(6min*1diff = 6min) yey!!

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
ok IIDX style

7+1
[Dream World]
00:00:513 (513|0) - remove ???? (~ I don't know this SPnote)
00:22:179 (22179|4) - move to 1 ~ 1bass 1bass!?!? 4?? do~suru?!?!?
00:53:608 - add note to 1
01:07:179 - ^
01:16:465 - ^

01:37:536 (97536|3,97655|5,97774|4) - remove? (It's sound is very small)
01:43:132 - add note to 1
01:58:370 - ^

03:14:679 (194679|3,194679|6,194798|2,194798|5) - remove? (It's sound is very small)

03:20:274 - add note to 1
03:35:512 - ^
03:43:132 - ^

04:59:798 - ^
05:12:655 - ^
05:29:798 - ^
05:42:655 (342655|1) - remove

wakaranai----- ><

EDIT :
Can't put all bass on 1 /.\ if I do so -> star rating 1 (run

aaaawww ok I see. ~~
Topic Starter
richardfeder

yoshilove wrote:

Draining time: 6:13 single diff plz don't bite me

meowwwwwwwww!!

(2min*6diff = 12min)
(6min*1diff = 6min) yey!!

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
ok IIDX style

7+1
[Dream World]
00:00:513 (513|0) - remove ???? (~ I don't know this SPnote) yes btw why is it here /.\ already fixed by mod above I think
00:22:179 (22179|4) - move to 1 ~ 1bass 1bass!?!? 4?? do~suru?!?!?actually missing a bass here added on 1 www
00:53:608 - add note to 1x intentionally put it on 3
01:07:179 - ^
01:16:465 - ^

01:37:536 (97536|3,97655|5,97774|4) - remove? (It's sound is very small)sure
01:43:132 - add note to 1
01:58:370 - ^x ^

03:14:679 (194679|3,194679|6,194798|2,194798|5) - remove? (It's sound is very small)sure

03:20:274 - add note to 1
03:35:512 - ^
03:43:132 - ^x ^

04:59:798 - ^
05:12:655 - ^
05:29:798 - ^x ^
Can't put all bass on 1 /.\ if I do so -> star rating 1 (run

wakaranai----- >< ><
Thank you!

Edit:And Thank you guys for stars \:D/
shionelove
Hi~from queue
column S1234567

[Dream World]
00:07:893 (7893|3) - move to 2?
00:44:322 (44322|0,45036|0) - hmm this splash cymbal shouldn't S?
01:05:989 (65989|1) - move to 2
01:07:179 - add 1
01:07:893 (67893|0,68608|0) - delete
01:19:620 (79620|1) - delete
01:19:322 (79322|0) - delete?
01:23:846 (83846|1) - move to 2
01:29:798 (89798|0) - delete
01:38:846 (98846|0) - move to 01:39:084
01:52:774 - add 1
01:53:608 (113608|0) - delete or move to 01:53:846
02:01:941 (121941|1) - add S
02:10:632 (130632|3,130751|5,130870|4,130989|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046449
02:23:608 - add 1
02:48:132 (168132|0,168846|0,169322|0,169798|0) - delete?
02:56:941 (176941|3) - conflict 01:19:679 (79679|2,79739|3) -
03:06:108 (186108|1) - move to 6?
03:15:989 (195989|0) - move to 03:16:227
03:29:441 (209441|5,209798|6) - move to 6 7?
03:46:227 (226227|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046528(Insane Techniques style)
03:48:608 (228608|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046597 ?

Good Luck meow
Topic Starter
richardfeder

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from queue
column S1234567

[Dream World]
00:07:893 (7893|3) - move to 2?x 3 is better imo
00:44:322 (44322|0,45036|0) - hmm this splash cymbal shouldn't S?I think it's OK tho
01:05:989 (65989|1) - move to 2sure
01:07:179 - add 1sure
01:07:893 (67893|0,68608|0) - deletex guitar
01:19:620 (79620|1) - deleteoh yea
01:19:322 (79322|0) - delete?nope cymbal tho sound a little bit small
01:23:846 (83846|1) - move to 2x
01:29:798 (89798|0) - delete^^
01:38:846 (98846|0) - move to 01:39:084 intro actually starts here but it comes to more audible at 01:39
01:52:774 - add 1x how we get rating one lol add at 2
01:53:608 (113608|0) - delete or move to 01:53:846 still cymbal
02:01:941 (121941|1) - add Sk
02:10:632 (130632|3,130751|5,130870|4,130989|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046449x 02:10:512 - no sound on the lame we are following actually
02:23:608 - add 1sure
02:48:132 (168132|0,168846|0,169322|0,169798|0) - delete?

Good Luck meow
Thank you!
pocket-Gao
哈咯PC哥0 0 std不会只能mod mania
Dream World
00:15:036 (15036|0) - 不明意图,这里我仔细听,把声音调超大都没听出什么东西....,移到00:15:751 这里吧
00:20:036 刚开始不要太难,况且你加了clap和whistle
00:24:917 加一note,摆成楼梯吧
00:35:393 听了好几遍,还是加一note连贯
00:43:489 (43489|5) - 没听出连贯的音(我耳朵不好吗> >?)
00:44:322 与 00:44:798 音想对应,感觉00:44:798 (44798|6,44798|1,44798|4,44798|7) - 这几个有点胡摆了
00:45:592 (45592|3,45671|2) - 这里6分拍改成从左到右的顺手随手楼梯吧,毕竟变拍了
00:49:917 加一到两个note,用不用连点随你的作图风格

01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3) - 感觉不适合楼梯,叉开摆放
01:19:858 加一note,推荐依然放在3道
01:21:465 (81465|2) - 与 01:21:584 很明显该摆成楼梯嘛...还是说我耳朵又坏了> >? :cry:
01:27:417 (87417|1) - 这里抓了前面为啥不抓....?
01:34:560 这一段该觉要调整下,比如6分拍啥的...?
01:36:822 到 01:37:298 不用楼梯吧....交替摆放感觉比较好些
01:41:584 和 01:41:822 加note连贯感觉打起来才爽
01:43:132 (103132|2,103132|4,103251|6) - 这里以往前的风格适当连点吧 相应01:42:893 (102893|5) - 移到第五道

02:06:227 到 02:07:060(02:08:132)把楼梯换成左右交替或对拍吧,全曲一个风格的楼梯摆放会有些疲劳感的
02:18:846 (138846|5,138846|1,138846|3,138965|4,138965|2,139084|1,139084|3) - 偏难了
02:39:084 这前后也感觉偏难了一丁点,把02:38:965 (158965|7,159084|5,159084|6) - 都向←移一个位置好读些吧
02:46:584 (166584|5) - 配合BG,移动到第四道,相应后面改一下
03:18:132 (198132|1,198370|1,198608|1,198846|1,199084|1,199322|1,199560|1,199798|1,200036|1) - 无名指好累啊 :cry: :cry:
02:50:036 到 02:50:512 难度是不是有点夸张了 :cry:
02:54:084 (174084|5) - 换到第四道吧,因为和后面没连贯desu

03:02:655 故意3个note吗?
03:05:989 (185989|1,186108|1,186227|1) - 移到4,6道如何?相应

04:26:941 (266941|7,267060|5,267060|6,267179|7) - 我想说这样摆会不会很卡手 :o
04:51:346 (291346|2) - & 05:23:727 (323727|2) - :大家好,我们是价值200分值的note哟 :) 想提升我的价值把排列改一下吧 8-)
05:31:346 加一note
05:38:965 和 05:39:203 请加note连贯
05:40:989 加音效
05:50:393 加一note
05:55:155 和 05:54:917 加note连贯.感觉乃后面漏了好多呢 :(

整个mod感觉混入很多个人的想法吧...基础也不行...总的来说我太渣了
没意义的就可以无视哈 :D
Topic Starter
richardfeder

pocket-Gao wrote:

哈咯PC哥0 0 std不会只能mod mania
[box=Dream World]00:15:036 (15036|0) - 不明意图,这里我仔细听,把声音调超大都没听出什么东西....,移到00:15:751 这里吧这个事intro
00:20:036 刚开始不要太难,况且你加了clap和whistle啊这里其实还好 音比较明显所以还是写了
00:24:917 加一note,摆成楼梯吧没音啦
00:35:393 听了好几遍,还是加一note连贯
00:43:489 (43489|5) - 没听出连贯的音(我耳朵不好吗> >?)00:42:417 (42417|4,42536|5,42655|6,42774|4,43132|4,43251|5,43370|3,43489|5) - 这些哦 你可以再听听看
00:44:322 与 00:44:798 音想对应,感觉00:44:798 (44798|6,44798|1,44798|4,44798|7) - 这几个有点胡摆了不一样的 明显的多了clap而且贝斯在往上走
00:45:592 (45592|3,45671|2) - 这里6分拍改成从左到右的顺手随手楼梯吧,毕竟变拍了x 一个是音高 还有一个是铺开了空间不够
00:49:917 加一到两个note,用不用连点随你的作图风格no 这个是绝对不加的

01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3) - 感觉不适合楼梯,叉开摆放01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3,77060|5,77179|4,77298|3,77417|5,77536|4,77655|3) - 这几个明显的3连必须是楼梯啊
01:19:858 加一note,推荐依然放在3道没音
01:21:465 (81465|2) - 与 01:21:584 很明显该摆成楼梯嘛...还是说我耳朵又坏了> >? :cry:
01:27:417 (87417|1) - 这里抓了前面为啥不抓....?如果说的是hithat的话有哦
01:34:560 这一段该觉要调整下,比如6分拍啥的...?...?哪里来的6分拍...?
01:36:822 到 01:37:298 不用楼梯吧....交替摆放感觉比较好些01:36:703 (96703|6,96703|4,97060|5,97060|7) - piano 这两个是fix的所以不可能调 而且现在这个颇顺手了
01:41:584 和 01:41:822 加note连贯感觉打起来才爽好吧非好说也是有音的 加了
01:43:132 (103132|2,103132|4,103251|6) - 这里以往前的风格适当连点吧 相应01:42:893 (102893|5) - 移到第五道这如何连点 之前连点都是吉他连点这里听不出来啦

02:06:227 到 02:07:060(02:08:132)把楼梯换成左右交替或对拍吧,全曲一个风格的楼梯摆放会有些疲劳感的x
02:18:846 (138846|5,138846|1,138846|3,138965|4,138965|2,139084|1,139084|3) - 偏难了低bpm小裤衩啦

04:26:941 (266941|7,267060|5,267060|6,267179|7) - 我想说这样摆会不会很卡手 :o 啊 放心 这个bpm不会的
04:51:346 (291346|2) - & 05:23:727 (323727|2) - :大家好,我们是价值200分值的note哟 :) 想提升我的价值把排列改一下吧 8-) 唔 我个人不是很想动这个

整个mod感觉混入很多个人的想法吧...基础也不行...总的来说我太渣了lol 不要虚
感谢!
Kawawa
Hello~

mania mod think about,

00:21:465 - S-key note move -> Leftshift
00:21:703 - ^
00:22:179 - ^
00:33:608 - Long note change (~00:34:322)
01:11:822 - Leftshift note move -> D
01:55:751 - S-key note move -> Leftshift
02:05:036 - Leftshift note move -> D
04:23:370 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:24:322 - ^
04:25:274 - ^
04:28:132 - ^
04:37:655 - ^
04:38:132 - Leftshift note move -> F
04:40:989 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:41:465 - ^
04:41:941 - ^
04:42:417 - ^
04:42:893 - ^
04:43:370 - ^
05:10:512 - ^

Finally, 02:35:751 - note_snap error
and, Source, tag check plz
ctrl+shift+A check it

Good luck XD
Topic Starter
richardfeder

KawaEE wrote:

Hello~Hi~

mania mod think about,

00:21:465 - S-key note move -> Leftshiftsure
00:21:703 - ^
00:22:179 - ^x I think these are unnecessary
00:33:608 - Long note change (~00:34:322)x prefer a sp key >.<
01:11:822 - Leftshift note move -> Dx since it's sp note so can't move it around
01:55:751 - S-key note move -> Leftshiftx
02:05:036 - Leftshift note move -> Dx same as above
04:23:370 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:24:322 - ^
04:25:274 - ^
04:28:132 - ^
04:37:655 - ^nope. The reason why I didn't add them is because I think normal column instead of sp is more suitable
04:38:132 - Leftshift note move -> Fthat's a crash T.T
04:40:989 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:41:465 - ^
04:41:941 - ^
04:42:417 - ^
04:42:893 - ^
04:43:370 - ^same as above
05:10:512 - ^?what sound

Finally, 02:35:751 - note_snap erroroh yeah fixed!
and, Source, tag check plzsure!
ctrl+shift+A check it

Good luck XD
Thank you very much!
Kinomi
Ar3 aji去了变成了aji3
so i'll fninish the whole std by myself
准备remap

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[Emiria]
Topic Starter
richardfeder
I love Emiria
Akasha-
Placeholder
zwc7086
这张图该何去何从 不知不觉连7K那个难度都没了
Topic Starter
richardfeder

zwc7086 wrote:

这张图该何去何从 不知不觉连7K那个难度都没了
懒B就是这样的啊 我觉得该处理掉了 垃圾好歹也得回收对不对
Critical_Star
irc check
23:54 Critical_Star:  alright lets do irc now if u are free?
23:54 richardfeder: sure
23:54 richardfeder: one sec
23:54 richardfeder: all right
23:54 Critical_Star: just a little stuff :3
23:55 richardfeder: sure
23:55 richardfeder: wait
23:55 Critical_Star: ok first
23:55 richardfeder: let me dl it first
23:55 Critical_Star: lol
23:55 richardfeder: Idk if my version
23:55 richardfeder: is the lastest one
23:56 richardfeder: nice
23:56 richardfeder: lets go
23:56 Critical_Star: i use your latest ver in web so i not sure if u changed anything lol
23:56 Critical_Star: ok as u see ahbfadf.png unused, better delete it
23:57 richardfeder: I am looking at the lastest ver I just dled right now so
23:57 richardfeder: ok
23:57 Critical_Star: dieee
23:57 Critical_Star: xd
23:57 richardfeder: lol
23:57 Critical_Star: 00:15:036 (15036|5,15036|0) - why double note? isn't it just the same like other piano sound too>
23:57 richardfeder: that's the sycn
23:58 richardfeder: the shrinnnn~ sound
23:58 richardfeder: just like this 00:33:608 (33608|0) -
23:59 Critical_Star: 00:15:274 - didnt it started here? shrriiin
23:59 richardfeder: I think it starts where it is right now
23:59 richardfeder: hmm
23:59 Critical_Star: yea i can heard from the red line too
23:59 Critical_Star: i guess is okay
00:00 richardfeder: yeah 273 is a little bit too late
00:00 richardfeder: since it is already quite clear at around195
00:00 Critical_Star: yep
00:00 richardfeder: I guess I will keep this one for now
00:00 Critical_Star: 00:49:917 - could use double here too like u did at 02:27:060 (147060|1,147060|3) -
00:00 richardfeder: if more people point this out I will definitely reconsider about it
00:01 richardfeder: oh yeah wait let me see
00:01 Critical_Star: sure
00:01 richardfeder: sstar clearly double that one
00:01 richardfeder: I used since
00:01 richardfeder: single*
00:01 richardfeder: let's see..
00:01 richardfeder: ok ill delete his note lol
00:01 Critical_Star: wait is this a collab lol
00:01 Critical_Star: i didnt realize it
00:01 richardfeder: yes this is!
00:02 Critical_Star: kill me aaa
00:02 Critical_Star: didnt saw it
00:02 Critical_Star: ok lets continue
00:02 Critical_Star: 00:46:227 - add one more note here for cymbal?
00:03 richardfeder: legit
00:03 richardfeder: btw I am goona move a few notes around00:46:465 (46465|3,46703|4,46941|5) -
00:03 richardfeder: those look stupid(((
00:03 Critical_Star: i just about to say that :p
00:04 richardfeder: hahahaha
00:05 richardfeder: oh btw I missed a guitar at 01:12:417 (72417|0) -
00:05 richardfeder: I added it up
00:05 Critical_Star: 01:07:536 - 01:08:251 - how about add one more note here to catch the guitar sound?
00:06 richardfeder: oh I think I did skip all of them
00:06 Critical_Star: i see
00:06 richardfeder: If I add one I ll add all, which I don't really want to do
00:06 richardfeder: do you think that's a big issue?
00:06 richardfeder: if it is I will definitely think about it
00:06 Critical_Star: no not really
00:06 Critical_Star: if it was intended sure
00:07 richardfeder: OK
00:07 Critical_Star: 01:38:846 (98846|0) - there isn't any sound here , feel kinda odd to layer a note here
00:07 Critical_Star: eh no u mean shirrnn
00:07 Critical_Star: ?
00:07 richardfeder: yeah
00:08 richardfeder: you got the trick!
00:08 Critical_Star: hmm does it feel odd while playing? basically is hard to feel that sound tbh
00:09 richardfeder: this is quite common in bms tho
00:09 richardfeder: I think it's OK but yeah...
00:09 Critical_Star: please forgive me due to my lack of exp in bms stuff
00:09 richardfeder: oh no definitely not
00:09 richardfeder: it really depends
00:10 Critical_Star: since i rarely touch 8K welp
00:10 Critical_Star: yes as long u have a reason to do so sure
00:10 richardfeder: if you feel like it's improperly placed
00:10 richardfeder: then I should rethink about it
00:10 richardfeder: I will definitely keep that in mind
00:10 Critical_Star: hmm for me is kinda odd, but u can use it as shirnnn sound i guess
00:11 Critical_Star: since u intend not use LN for that sound
00:11 richardfeder: btw me and sstar did that quite a few times
00:11 richardfeder: like
00:11 Critical_Star: single note should work
00:11 richardfeder: 03:15:989 (195989|0) -
00:11 richardfeder: yay it's a subsitution of ln
00:11 richardfeder: that's why it is on the sp
00:11 richardfeder: not any other column
00:11 Critical_Star: ok nice , i got it now
00:14 Critical_Star: 02:56:822 - intend to break 1/4 sound here?
00:14 Critical_Star: actually is 1/8 beat but kinda ugly to layer i think
00:14 richardfeder: "only simple star knows"
00:14 richardfeder: I will add one
00:15 richardfeder: that looks unnatural
00:16 Critical_Star: 03:39:322 - double here? like 03:24:084 (204084|1,204084|5) -
00:16 richardfeder: yes
00:17 richardfeder: added at 1
00:17 Critical_Star: 3:44:679 - maybe give a little more note here for vocal + cymbal, something like 03:45:036 (225036|1,225036|3) -
00:17 Critical_Star: 03:44:679 - maybe give a little more note here for vocal + cymbal, something like 03:45:036 (225036|1,225036|3) -
00:18 richardfeder: he must forget a note at 1
00:18 richardfeder: or I delete it by accident
00:18 richardfeder: lol added
00:19 Critical_Star: sure haha
00:19 Critical_Star: 04:18:965 (258965|5,258965|2,259084|3,259084|6,259084|7,259203|1,259203|4,259322|2,259322|5,259441|6,259441|3) - how about > http://puu.sh/v4zWF/ecfc6325bd.png seems good to variate the pattern here instead ascending stair
00:20 richardfeder: sure
00:21 richardfeder: btw 03:55:870 -
00:21 richardfeder: if you can't hear it I will skip it
00:21 richardfeder: do you think it is necessary for me to add 1/8 drums
00:21 richardfeder: I don't remember why I ignore them
00:22 Critical_Star: hmm i prefer when u catch the louder kick and main sync here instead of 1/8 drum
00:22 Critical_Star: also this part is pretty calm too
00:22 richardfeder: kk
00:22 richardfeder: I will leave it as it is now
00:23 Critical_Star: let see the next bn think about it then
00:23 Critical_Star: 05:54:203 - 05:55:155 - add double here? the sound are pretty noticeable here
00:24 Critical_Star: or single
00:24 richardfeder: hum
00:25 richardfeder: I am trying to understand his logic of not putting anything there
00:26 richardfeder: actually I kinda agree. looks like he wanted to focus on piano and beat/hithat 1/2 combo
00:27 richardfeder: and comparing to 05:50:989 (350989|3,351108|2,351227|1,351346|2,351465|1,352179|1,352259|3,352338|2,352417|1) -
00:27 richardfeder: I do think the point you pointed out are apperantly weaker
00:27 Critical_Star: i see
00:27 richardfeder: waht do you think
00:27 Critical_Star: i guess he intend to do 1/2 there and ignore the sound'
00:27 richardfeder: yeah maybe
00:28 richardfeder: btw this one 05:54:917 -
00:29 richardfeder: do you think he intended to ignore
00:29 richardfeder: or he just forgot
00:29 richardfeder: lolololol idk
00:29 Critical_Star: instead of there i prefer if he can add at 05:55:155 - '
00:30 Critical_Star: hmm
00:30 Critical_Star: but i can see his intention
00:30 richardfeder: oh I suggested there because
00:30 Critical_Star: maybe giving a play momentum for 05:55:393 (355393|2,355393|4,355512|5,355512|1,355632|2,355632|6,355751|7,355751|1,355870|2,355870|6,355989|3,355989|5,356108|2,356108|6) -
00:30 richardfeder: 05:55:393 (355393|2,355512|1,355632|2,355751|1,355870|2,355989|3,356108|2) - those are the same as
00:30 richardfeder: 05:54:917 -
00:30 richardfeder: so I was wondering
00:31 richardfeder: he definitely does not want any guitar
00:31 Critical_Star: 05:54:917 - maybe add double here?
00:31 Critical_Star: it seem legit too
00:32 richardfeder: OK I added 2 notes
00:36 Critical_Star: alright seems okay now
00:37 richardfeder: let me update
00:37 richardfeder: maybe revive first looooool
00:37 Critical_Star: yea lol
00:37 richardfeder: done!
00:41 Critical_Star: did u remove unused picture yet?
00:42 richardfeder: I did
00:42 richardfeder: it is still there?
00:43 Critical_Star: ops sorry
00:43 Critical_Star: i didnt redl yet
00:43 richardfeder: np
00:44 Critical_Star: alright clear!
00:44 richardfeder: !
00:44 richardfeder: nice!

and bubble #1
good luck! :)
ArcherLove

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zwc7086

richardfeder wrote:

zwc7086 wrote:

这张图该何去何从 不知不觉连7K那个难度都没了
懒B就是这样的啊 我觉得该处理掉了 垃圾好歹也得回收对不对
垃圾 PC你好过分 有什么不好的我可以改嘛5555
Maxus
Finally i'm coming, sorry for the delay xd

[Dream World]

Col= 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Hmm, may i ask your metadata reference?

00:10:036 (10036|1,10274|2,10512|3) - I notice that you use the same pattern as the one at 00:06:227 (6227|1,6465|2,6703|3) - , This is minor, but it seems you follow Pitch Relevancy by quite strict and huge margin here, so I thought maybe you can make this into 4-2-3 for PR here, kinda similar in how you differentiate 00:05:751 (5751|3,9560|2) -

00:27:179 - should be double note here?

00:38:132 - Although i know you want to follow main piano sound for the triple and quad (with kick), i still think the crash felt underemphasized here, maybe you can add note at col 8? similar with 00:48:370 - 00:48:608 - where they have crash but no piano.

00:47:536 - If following how you layer at 00:47:893 - , i think this should be triple for the main melody sound here, unless if you tried to make it symmetrical with the double at the left hand column.

01:00:036 - Should be quad note i think? for crash+Melody, if following the consistency at 00:56:227 -

01:11:108 - I think there's the 1/4 synth sound left here? i think you can add one here.

01:19:858 - I do think there's still 1/8 sound you mapped here, the continuous burst sound you mapped at 01:19:739 -

01:20:870 - Should be triple if following your layering at 01:24:679 - ?

01:35:512 (95512|3,95632|3) - maybe you can make the jack at col 8 to alternate it between scratch at the left hand, to the jack at the right hand? since it will let finger get the preparation to face 01:36:465 - .

01:55:393 - not too sure why double here xd , i think in this continuous stream, you usually makes the blue line with single note.

01:58:251 - missing 1/4 here? quite audible to be added note i think.

02:02:060 - I think you can make this double similar to the layering you brought at 01:46:822 -

02:17:893 (137893|2) - Try move this to col 2? there's this same pitch of flute sound between 02:17:655 - and 02:17:893 - , probably having more notes being at the same column can emphasize it better.

02:35:632 - personally kinda find the right hand note a bit "too stacking" with 02:35:512 (155512|6,155632|5,155632|7,155751|6,155751|5) - kinda a bit too heavy considering that you actually spread the one at 02:43:251 (163251|3,163251|6,163370|6,163370|4) - , how about move 02:35:632 (155632|7) - to col 5? it will be easier to alternate between the jack notes towards the transition to the next pattern.

02:54:084 - I think this should be double considering how you make chord note every 1/2 interval beat here.

02:56:822 - missing 1/8 burst pattern here? since you make one at 01:19:679 - , unless it's intentional, but imo still a bit awkward since i thought you want to make the pattern progressively difficult as the time goes on.

03:00:632 - quite sure the 1/4 already started since here.

Somehow i think kiai 2 is the hardest and most tricky pattern to played well compared with third and first kiai xd..

03:36:703 - 03:38:608 - I do think you can bring quad for the bg star sound there.

04:28:489 - Quite awkward you bring single note here but the rest of chord note with kick sound from 04:28:608 - to 04:28:846 - use double.

04:59:798 (299798|2,299798|5) - I do think you need to stack the note chord with the one at 04:59:560 (299560|1,299560|6,299560|7) - because the same kick sound here, maybe move to col 2 and col 7?

05:01:346 - This is quite faint sound we got compared to the kick stream before, and i don't really think there's other sound to support the double, makes this single?

Just a bit consistency issues, overall the pattern structure here is fantastic ><
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Topic Starter
richardfeder
out of town right now; I will respond asap.Back!
Thank you for coming!

Maxus wrote:

Finally i'm coming, sorry for the delay xd

[Dream World]

Col= 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Hmm, may i ask your metadata reference? Sorry I have no reference to provide. I just played the game.

00:10:036 (10036|1,10274|2,10512|3) - I notice that you use the same pattern as the one at 00:06:227 (6227|1,6465|2,6703|3) - , This is minor, but it seems you follow Pitch Relevancy by quite strict and huge margin here, so I thought maybe you can make this into 4-2-3 for PR here, kinda similar in how you differentiate 00:05:751 (5751|3,9560|2) -ofc

00:27:179 - should be double note here?y

00:38:132 - Although i know you want to follow main piano sound for the triple and quad (with kick), i still think the crash felt underemphasized here, maybe you can add note at col 8? similar with 00:48:370 - 00:48:608 - where they have crash but no piano. 00:38:132 (38132|3) - this is the crash note. There's no guitar here I believe so it goes like one base + one crash. Piano is not involved.

00:47:536 - If following how you layer at 00:47:893 - , i think this should be triple for the main melody sound here, unless if you tried to make it symmetrical with the double at the left hand column.yep you are right

01:00:036 - Should be quad note i think? for crash+Melody, if following the consistency at 00:56:227 - yeap!

01:11:108 - I think there's the 1/4 synth sound left here? i think you can add one here. I did not hear it..;w;

01:19:858 - I do think there's still 1/8 sound you mapped here, the continuous burst sound you mapped at 01:19:739 - ! my mistake. added

01:20:870 - Should be triple if following your layering at 01:24:679 - ?yes

01:35:512 (95512|3,95632|3) - maybe you can make the jack at col 8 to alternate it between scratch at the left hand, to the jack at the right hand? since it will let finger get the preparation to face 01:36:465 - .well 2p player can say exactly the opposite so I think I will keep it as it is right now..

01:55:393 - not too sure why double here xd , i think in this continuous stream, you usually makes the blue line with single note. it's the same as 01:56:108 (116108|4) - with 01:54:798 (114798|6,114917|5,115036|4,115155|7,115274|6,115393|5,115512|4) - . Just like 01:58:608 (118608|6,118727|5,118846|4,118965|6,119084|5,119203|4,119322|3) - with 01:59:203 (119203|2) -

01:58:251 - missing 1/4 here? quite audible to be added note i think.added

02:02:060 - I think you can make this double similar to the layering you brought at 01:46:822 - I do not really want to change this one. sorry

02:17:893 (137893|2) - Try move this to col 2? there's this same pitch of flute sound between 02:17:655 - and 02:17:893 - , probably having more notes being at the same column can emphasize it better.yes and rearranged the pattern here a little bit

02:35:632 - personally kinda find the right hand note a bit "too stacking" with 02:35:512 (155512|6,155632|5,155632|7,155751|6,155751|5) - kinda a bit too heavy considering that you actually spread the one at 02:43:251 (163251|3,163251|6,163370|6,163370|4) - , how about move 02:35:632 (155632|7) - to col 5? it will be easier to alternate between the jack notes towards the transition to the next pattern.I think this is actually intended...this indeed looks a little bit awkward but I think at this bpm, it should not be a super terrifying pattern. I would like to keep it as it is as now.

02:54:084 - I think this should be double considering how you make chord note every 1/2 interval beat here.yes

02:56:822 - missing 1/8 burst pattern here? since you make one at 01:19:679 - , unless it's intentional, but imo still a bit awkward since i thought you want to make the pattern progressively difficult as the time goes on. It's not intended haha since this was a collaration and we did not think about making the chart as consistent as possible beforehand, minor disagreement like this occured sometimes. Clearly he did not want to put this 1/8 part into the chart and I think I should respect his choice here.

03:00:632 - quite sure the 1/4 already started since here.yes

Somehow i think kiai 2 is the hardest and most tricky pattern to played well compared with third and first kiai xd.. RIGHT

03:36:703 - 03:38:608 - I do think you can bring quad for the bg star sound there.me too, but no

04:28:489 - Quite awkward you bring single note here but the rest of chord note with kick sound from 04:28:608 - to 04:28:846 - use double.because they have extra kicks...what about 04:28:965 (268965|4) - ?

04:59:798 (299798|2,299798|5) - I do think you need to stack the note chord with the one at 04:59:560 (299560|1,299560|6,299560|7) - because the same kick sound here, maybe move to col 2 and col 7?to 2 but 7 looks a little bit weird so no

05:01:346 - This is quite faint sound we got compared to the kick stream before, and i don't really think there's other sound to support the double, makes this single? yes

Just a bit consistency issues, overall the pattern structure here is fantastic ><
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Thank you!
Maxus
For source, do you have any official that state BALDR SKY Dive X "DREAM WORLD"?
Because, i find at http://www.web-giga.com/baldrsky_divex/ , it's supposed to be BALDRSKY DiveX "DREAM WORLD" (look at the name of the tab) http://puu.sh/w5tP2/24a2f72603.jpg (welp, feerum do find the more convincing one at http://www.web-giga.com/baldrsky_divex/ ... index.html)
Sorry, bcoz metadata is really strict have to be from official x.x..
also disable widescreen support xd
after you fix that, i shall #2 this :3
Topic Starter
richardfeder
Yeah that's much more reliable than my poor memory. Updated the meta!
Maxus
#2 for ya, good luck!

this map was created 1 week after my acc creation orz
Akasha-
marked
Topic Starter
richardfeder
delete duplicated background
Critical_Star
rebubbled , fixed duplicated background issue
Maxus
Qualified, grats!
[Emiria]
。pc神震撼飞图
Topic Starter
richardfeder

[Emiria] wrote:

。pc神震撼飞图
嘿嘿
pocket-Gao
嘿嘿 我刚从致远星回来
zwc7086
一段时间没看PC已经飞掉了,恭喜
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