1. Hard (3.24 stars, 473 notes)
2. Insane (4.06 stars, 658 notes)
3. Normal (1.95 stars, 218 notes)

Rallashas wrote:

Hi asaink,
I've played normal and hard difficulties and they seem to be mapped nice, yet there were some things that didn't suit me.

Hard:
Timing is OK in my opinion. Everything follows the rhythm. I noticed that you tend to place objects on edge of the grid, but since other beatmappers do it too I don't think it's a big problem.

00:08:199 (1) - You went out of the screen with that sliderhold　It seems like out of screen at editor mode, but it is not when playing.---(1)
00:23:627 (1,2,3) - I think those 3 circles are too close to each otherfixed
00:34:599 (2,3,4) - I don't get this combo but it may be me hold　I don't think this pattern is too hard at Hard diff.
02:15:742 (1) - Same as the firsthold　The reason is same as (1).

Normal:
00:48:313 (3) - Like in hard, a little part of that slider is outta screenhold　The reason is same as (1).
01:16:256 (4) - That one toohold　^
01:33:227 (1) - And that onehold　^
01:44:199 (1) - About a half of circle with arrow is out of screen, that one is seriousfixed

And that's all I found. I hope you will help me with my beatmap too

handsome wrote:

i am noob modde. hard to mod normal/ez. from #modreq.

insane
i really love this map, first time testplay very nice. Thanks!
00:37:856 (2) - NC + more spacing. can change reverse before if needed.fixed　moved 00:36:999 (1) far, and NC isn't needed.
00:38:370 (1) - then remove NC herehold　^
00:41:627 (2,3,4) - maybe change direction/DSfixed
01:00:313 (1,2,3) - don't think pattern is good, awkward to play < minorhold　I think these follow vocal well.
01:05:799 (1) - centre this a bit moresorry?　I can't find problem.
01:07:856 (2,3,4) - spacing, maybe make triangle/squarehold　I think now pattern is good.
01:33:742 (2,3) - up spacinghold　^
02:28:084 (1,2,3) - don't think pattern is good, awkward to play < minorhold　same as above
02:33:570 (1) - centre this a bit moresorry?　I can't find problem.

hard
00:24:313 (3,1) - spacingfixed

• ■ In my opinion, move to 01:52:427 the start break time.

Artavia wrote:

#modreqs! (Random mod & M4M)

[General]

• ■ In my opinion, move to 01:52:427 the start break time.fixed

[Normal]

00:11:627 - Add Circlehold　I don't think it is needed. also, if I add it, the rhythm is a bit harder for Normal diff.

00:12:999 - ^hold　^

00:21:913 (1) - Remove NChold　This is constant NC pattern.

00:41:113 (1) - ^hold　^

01:24:656 (1) - ^fixed　02:52:428 (4) - also fixed

01:37:684 (5) - Move to x172 y100 and 01:38:027 (6) - Move to x240 y176hold　hmm...I can't find the reason I change now pattern.

02:58:256 (1) - Remove NChold　This is constant NC pattern.


[Hard]

00:11:627 - Add Circlehold　yes, your rhythm is good, but I like now pattern. sorry.---(1)

00:12:999 - ^hold　^

00:47:198 (3) - Remove Circlehold　Compare with a part of 00:24:656　～　00:45:227,　here is bustling. so I express it for using triple beat.---(2)

00:50:799 (2) - ^hold　^

01:39:399 - Add Circlehold　The reason is same as (1).

02:19:942 (2) - Remove Circlehold　The reason is same as (2).

02:30:827 (1) - Remove NCfixed　reconsidered NC pattern around here

03:01:342 (2) - Ctrl+Hhold　It's big jump.

03:02:027 (4) - ^hold　^

03:06:484 (1) - Remove Finish (Only return the slider part)hold　I emphasize lyrics of "point".

03:12:313 (2) - Remove Finishhold　^

03:12:999 (4) - ^hold　^

03:18:827 (1) - Remove NCfixed　reconsidered NC pattern around here


[Insane]

00:14:199 (2) - Ctrl+H,Ghold　now pattern is better, I think.

01:00:827 (2) - Ctrl+<hold　^

01:03:742 (1,1,1) - Remove NChold　because of changing SV

02:16:427 (3) - Ctrl+Jhold　now pattern is better, I think.

02:31:513 (1,1,1) - Remove NChold　because of changing SV

03:17:456 (1,2) - Remove finish (only the latter part)hold　I emphasize lyrics of "point".


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with a nice song... good luck, asaink!thanks!