This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 13, 2015 at 2:32:16 PM

Artist: MY FIRST STORY
Title: The Story is My Life
BPM: 210
Filesize: 4981kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:

1. EXTREME (5.89 stars, 847 notes)
2. HARD (3.78 stars, 626 notes)
3. INSANE (4.6 stars, 762 notes)

Download: MY FIRST STORY - The Story is My Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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lel hope this map is somewhat fun

Hey, you asked for a mod the other day...

Timing:
The first thing that jumps out at me is this kiai time with no notes at 58:437
If there is a Kiai time at the last Chorus, then you should probably have a kiai time on the other Chorus, such as the one at 1:16:723

Compose:
This slider begins on the same tick that the spinner ends: 00:15:152 (1) - (This is not allowed)
This part feels really awkward: 02:09:437 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
I would replace these spinners, they don't really fit here (imo) 02:48:295 (1) - 02:50:580 (1) - maybe replace them with some sliders to fit the music better?

That's all I can think of right now, sorry it's so short, I'll think about it more later.....

sanguisinvia wrote:

Hey, you asked for a mod the other day...

Timing:
The first thing that jumps out at me is this kiai time with no notes at 58:437
If there is a Kiai time at the last Chorus, then you should probably have a kiai time on the other Chorus, such as the one at 1:16:723

Compose:
This slider begins on the same tick that the spinner ends: 00:15:152 (1) - (This is not allowed)
This part feels really awkward: 02:09:437 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -
I would replace these spinners, they don't really fit here (imo) 02:48:295 (1) - 02:50:580 (1) - maybe replace them with some sliders to fit the music better?

That's all I can think of right now, sorry it's so short, I'll think about it more later.....

thanks , i'll try to fix these sections. Still planning on gding something btw?

hurdar then 1st one

00:58:437 (11,1,1) - kill the silenceeeeeeee.
01:43:723 (6,7,8,9) - an even numbered stream. i think it would be better off just removing the sliders out of that stream.
01:52:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add a circle in that gap to make it an odd numbered stream, also it will fix the rhythm.
01:52:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe stack these circles on top the beginning of that slider? makes the flow feel weird coming from a previous stream.
02:02:009 (6,1) - 02:06:866 (9,1) - kill silence again.
02:38:009 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - change color on these circles so it easier to read.
03:25:009 (1,2,3) - these circles need to be moved to a different location. its awkward when it comes out from a held slider like that.
03:29:295 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - idk what to say about this part. it doesnt fit in with the difficulty. maybe add one or two sliders within the consecutive notes.

overall, id add more jumps, sharp corners. flows too hard, like im waving my cursor around the screen.

thanks for the mod friendo.

Shroom wrote:

hurdar then 1st one

00:58:437 (11,1,1) - kill the silenceeeeeeee. okey
01:43:723 (6,7,8,9) - an even numbered stream. i think it would be better off just removing the sliders out of that stream. done
01:52:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add a circle in that gap to make it an odd numbered stream, also it will fix the rhythm. ye
01:52:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe stack these circles on top the beginning of that slider? makes the flow feel weird coming from a previous stream.didn't want to stack but changed it to be less wierd.
02:02:009 (6,1) - 02:06:866 (9,1) - kill silence again.k
02:38:009 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - change color on these circles so it easier to read.hope what i did was what you meant
03:25:009 (1,2,3) - these circles need to be moved to a different location. its awkward when it comes out from a held slider like that.changed bit ill see if it can still be improved
03:29:295 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - idk what to say about this part. it doesnt fit in with the difficulty. maybe add one or two sliders within the consecutive notes.changed

overall, id add more jumps, sharp corners. flows too hard, like im waving my cursor around the screen. yeah i made this entirely sith snap just to constast the 5.8 star diff and see what really fits better. I'll keep listening to more people before i change too much

Mod from request

Just a note, you might want to cut the scilence from the beginning of the map
[hard]
00:20:437 (4,5,6,7) - little awkward and hard for a hard difficulty.
00:26:152 (3) - nc with the weird slider buissiness you have going on.
00:32:580 (6,7,8) - Figure out something better to do with this. its weird atm. maybe a reverse slider
00:37:152 (6) - nc with sv change
00:48:152 (5,6,7) - these sliders are good. add your style to the diff.
00:53:723 (8) - unsnapped
00:58:009 (1,1) - reposition these to flow beter
00:59:580 (4) - dont need that tweak at the end of the slider
01:21:009 (9) - move closer to 8 and 10
01:42:580 (3) - move this slider.
02:18:580 (1,2) - could be repositioned
02:36:723 (4,5) - just stack
02:55:152 (1,2,3) - love this
03:10:295 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - not sure if this fits the map
03:22:437 (3) - space out
03:41:723 (4) - nc this so people realise the spacing
03:52:009 (1,1,1,1) - wow, i really like this
04:00:009 (11,1) - snap ?
04:06:580 (6,7,8) - stack a little less
04:07:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,1) - lolol why this combo so long?
make spinner at end consistant across diffs?

[insane]
00:15:152 (1,2,3) - feelin the crtl+g
00:21:295 (4,5,6) - reverse slider this so it fits difficulty better
00:31:009 (1,2) - awkward to be touching like this
00:39:437 (1,1,1,1,1) - dont have to spam nc this
01:04:009 (1) - why is there a spinner during this, probably some mistake.
01:04:009 - put something here
01:29:437 (4,5) - reshape
01:32:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remap
02:18:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - really good here.
03:09:866 (3) - make reverse 1 less time
04:03:009 - makybe make this a double
04:06:937 (22) - bit of a large combo

[extreme]
Timing section the same on all diffs?
00:21:437 (2,3,4) - less spacing
like the whole spacing changing thing during the verse
01:24:009 (2,3,4) - sliders are a bit awkward
01:39:295 (5,6) - make this flow a little beter
02:29:866 (1) - really weird shaped slider; highly recomend redoing it
02:55:152 (4,5,6) - once again this slider pattern is very nice
ending is very hard compared to he rest of the map. although it fits the strenght of he song towards the end, not sure players would respond possitively towards it.

Thank you so much for the mod.

Katarai wrote:

Mod from request

Just a note, you might want to cut the scilence from the beginning of the map naw i think its fine but ill change it if more people brin ig up
[hard]
00:20:437 (4,5,6,7) - little awkward and hard for a hard difficulty. disagree
00:26:152 (3) - nc with the weird slider buissiness you have going on. ill try it our for a while
00:32:580 (6,7,8) - Figure out something better to do with this. its weird atm. maybe a reverse slider changed but kept as circles
00:37:152 (6) - nc with sv changeok
00:48:152 (5,6,7) - these sliders are good. add your style to the diff. why tahnk you
00:53:723 (8) - unsnapped :P
00:58:009 (1,1) - reposition these to flow beter ok
00:59:580 (4) - dont need that tweak at the end of the slider lol fine
01:21:009 (9) - move closer to 8 and 10 did a little
01:42:580 (3) - move this slider. remapped this section a little
02:18:580 (1,2) - could be repositionedredirected them
02:36:723 (4,5) - just stackdone
02:55:152 (1,2,3) - love this aww thank you
03:10:295 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - not sure if this fits the map maybe now?
03:22:437 (3) - space out alright
03:41:723 (4) - nc this so people realise the spacing you got it
03:52:009 (1,1,1,1) - wow, i really like this its really nice to hear what you both like and dislike. really appreciate seeing both sides or someones perspective
04:00:009 (11,1) - snap? lol no
04:06:580 (6,7,8) - stack a little less did a littlebit
04:07:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,1) - lolol why this combo so long? i'm a fucking retard
make spinner at end consistant across diffs?alright

[insane]
00:15:152 (1,2,3) - feelin the crtl+g alright, lets try it out for a while
00:21:295 (4,5,6) - reverse slider this so it fits difficulty betternot sure i like this but ill change it
00:31:009 (1,2) - awkward to be touching like this inddeed it does
00:39:437 (1,1,1,1,1) - dont have to spam nc this tru
01:04:009 (1) - why is there a spinner during this, probably some mistake. once again, i'm autistic
01:04:009 - put something here alright
01:29:437 (4,5) - reshape did a little bit
01:32:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remap naw
02:18:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - really good here. basically the defining feature of this map
03:09:866 (3) - make reverse 1 less timealright
04:03:009 - makybe make this a double alright
04:06:937 (22) - bit of a large combochanged

[extreme]
Timing section the same on all diffs? pretty sure it is
00:21:437 (2,3,4) - less spacing changed but not sure if better
like the whole spacing changing thing during the verse
01:24:009 (2,3,4) - sliders are a bit awkward ctrl+g but open to better suggestions
01:39:295 (5,6) - make this flow a little beter okey
02:29:866 (1) - really weird shaped slider; highly recomend redoing it sure
02:55:152 (4,5,6) - once again this slider pattern is very nice tenks
ending is very hard compared to he rest of the map. although it fits the strenght of he song towards the end, not sure players would respond possitively towards it.guess we'll have to wait and see

insane

00:07:009 - the intro part/skip is too long - it's just waiting for 12 secs, so better start there
00:21:580 (5), 01:14:580 (9) - break? or continue map
01:00:866 (1) - not really suiting to the song atm
01:05:437 (1) - ^
02:03:580 (6) - fells odd with the reverse slider, either change that corner or do something else
02:52:866 (1) - a little bit too fast, compared to the rest, isn't it?
03:50:009 (1) - break
change od to 8 and redo the background, not really fitting to MFS

Hey_its_Neji wrote:

insane

00:07:009 - the intro part/skip is too long - it's just waiting for 12 secs, so better start there
00:21:580 (5), 01:14:580 (9) - break? or continue map
01:00:866 (1) - not really suiting to the song atm
01:05:437 (1) - ^
02:03:580 (6) - fells odd with the reverse slider, either change that corner or do something else
02:52:866 (1) - a little bit too fast, compared to the rest, isn't it?
03:50:009 (1) - break
change od to 8 and redo the background, not really fitting to MFS

Changed all But i'm honestly considering throwing away this insane difficulty if anyone wants to guest difficulty a 4.5-5 star diff.

Like a few people said, cut out the silence in the beginning (and change the bgs, cute animals don't really fit the song). Also add THE STORY IS MY LIFE as the source (even though the song name is the same rofl)



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