1. damian's easy (1.3 stars, 173 notes)
2. Extra (4.9 stars, 647 notes)
3. Extreme (4.54 stars, 683 notes)
4. fanzhen & Kin's Hyper (3.71 stars, 645 notes)
5. Kuuhaku`s Nprmal (2.01 stars, 220 notes)
6. Twinkle's hard (3.19 stars, 470 notes)

xLoupGarou wrote:

damian's easy

00:02:097 add a note I think in the prelude to note(slider) larger time interval is better...
00:03:811 ^
00:05:525 ^
(Trance Beat)
00:47:954 End it here 00:48:881 (Main Drum Beat) ok
01:02:954 Let me suggest a Long Note Shape - - - good idea!
01:04:668 add a note ok
01:05:097 ^ ok
01:05:525 ^ ok
01:05:954 ^ ok
(Please follow the Main Drum Beat because as you see in Normal Diff it now follows the vocals , we need to even the Diffs . Thanks)

xLoupGarou wrote:

* Nprmal or Normal? Nprmal，if it is not really really necessary to change
00:02:525 add a note No,thanks
Try it like this - -
00:04:240 Same with above ^ nice idea however but sorry for no changing here...
00:07:240 ReShape and end it here 00:07:668 then add a note here 00:07:882 still no changing...cuz I think the rhythm here isn`t strong enough to fit more notes
Kinda like this . .
00:29:525 ReShape Accepted
00:30:168 add a note no,I follow the vocal here
00:30:382 ^ as above
like this . .
00:42:168(2) Collide with the first spinner No,thanks

01:09:597 add a note Umm,but I follow the vocal here
01:20:097 ^ (proper end of 2nd verse) as above
01:56:097 ^ (end of chorus) as above
02:26:954 add a note? not sure . . Accepted!
02:54:382 ReShape
Is there any thing different?

examination wrote:

wpcap看了一眼set表示瞎了


你可以去敲一些神麻婆要mod了我觉得
我觉得
觉得
得
……

不过建议你可以去试试M4M，也能提高自己水平的

Kuuhaku wrote:

NormalGD来啦
时间有点晚，真是抱歉啦

http://puu.sh/922c2

既然是2gd，那肯定是要附上摸的，稍等哈~

General
建议去掉滑条音，方法：使用custom sampleset，然后放入无声音效，并命名为soft-sliderslide和normal-sliderslide
另外推荐一个不错的音效，我昨天打宵暗花火的时候偶然弄到的，有兴趣的话，建议重新排布一下音效
http://puu.sh/9yEDS



Extreme
00:11:097 (7,1,2) - 这里背景的bgm更加重了一些，做成跳如何？ 好

00:14:525 (5) - ctrl+g，我看你前后都采用过这种梗 好，采用试试

00:30:597 (2,3,1) - 这里明显已经开始连打的节奏了，一个直滑条是不是有些偷懒？
我的建议是在00:30:918结束然后加上两个短滑条填满节奏 改了，正好可以省下几个CB数让我不用把节奏摆得那么满。。XD

00:50:954 (1,2) - 距离太近啦！建议一大段里面滑条与滑条间四分拍和二分拍之间的间隔都分别固定在一个区域内比较合适
注：不开ds的情况下通过点击一个物件，然后在右上角就能看到一个next的数值，看哪个就能大致有数 暂时没想到该怎么改。。

01:10:668 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏是不是与01:09:811 (1,2,3,4) - 一样比较好？或者反过来前者参考后者？ 我刻意用不同的节奏的，FULL VER的乐趣就在于可以在同一种旋律上使用不同的节奏啊
01:41:525 (2) - 还是觉得与01:42:382 (1) - 做成中心对称的一组形状比较好 摆不好看QAQ

01:56:311 (2,3,4,5) - 和01:58:025 (2,3) - 选择滑条和二连错开的放置是个好选择，
我的意见是先二连，然后再滑条，并且做成与后面的一个滑条形成flow的形状 这个也摆不好看。。你给个图让我看看你怎么摆的啊。。

02:22:668 (1,2,3,4) - 个人觉得顺时针合适 打着不顺手啊感觉

02:36:382 (4,1) - 这俩地方是不是nc有问题？？ 变速滑条要NC

02:43:240 (1,2,3) - 在这个难度下，这个梗过难了吧，最主要的是没flow甩起来也不舒服…… 主要是才140BPM，用这种梗压力不大
02:46:240 (4) - 移动到(372,272),这样flow能好点 这里是要跟后面的滑条构成直线的

Extra 你做了两个不同风格的同难度呢…… XD一个full ver还不够把我的梗全摆完
00:07:240 (3) - ctrl+J，然后移到原来的位置，这样排列多些，也符合后面的接续 我感觉这样flow好点，而且做了个overlap

00:14:525 (1,2,3,4) - 既然这里重音在bgm里被着重强调了，那么换成两个短滑条如何？00:14:847 (4,1) - 还是太突兀 阿星流四连+四连+单点，有人再提我再考虑改吧XD

00:20:954 (1,2,1) - 就我个人感觉这段设置的节奏并不好，太满了，后面02:32:097 (1,2,1,2) - 也是一个问题 因为这个我重点放在移动上了，节奏没怎么注意。。不知道咋改啊晕QAQ

00:27:811 (2,3) - 音效有些乱啊，建议调成2开头clap，其他都是softfinish 虽然没听出啥区别但是还是改了- -

00:39:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - 还是音效问题，用不着这么着重的强调这里的节奏，建议参考前面几个短滑条的音效 突然想起来这个音效不是我做的。。要找VOSE喵

00:44:311 (1,2,3) - 间距太短，和00:44:954 (4,5,6) - 都一样了，感觉不妥 因为是个引入，我用个NC作为提示吧

01:19:454 (2,4) - 为何不对称 对称不FLOW，而且错开一点造成人工stack的效果XD

02:07:239 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 加大间距？？ 保留意见

02:22:668 (1,2,3,4) - 还是喜欢顺时针 DT打着顺时针要倒过来手太累。。

02:25:240 (3) - 建议加长到一分拍的长度，然后后面的转盘减少一个四分拍的长度，并依然在原来的位置结束 改了试试

03:00:382 (1) - 感觉使用02:58:668 (2) - 旋转一百八十度的方向并将2放置于滑出去的轨迹上会更好 时间间隔太久跟前面的组不成pattern


GL，我最喜欢GL了

• Change CS to 2
  Hitsounds?
  You'll need to resnap your notes to account for change in CS
  00:14:097 (3) - delete this
  00:14:525 (4) - move this to here 00:14:097
  00:20:954 (2,3) - blanket these
  00:24:382 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these
  00:26:097 (5,6) - same as above
  00:27:811 (2,3) - ^
  00:28:668 (4) - instead of a curved slider, maybe you could change it up a bit and make it a more interesting slider? it's a little boring just having all curved/straight sliders and no variety.
  00:55:240 (3) - this is stacked under a slider and looks awkward, consider changing the placement of it.
  00:57:811 (1) - overlap looks ugly
  00:58:668 (2) - I wouldn't stack this under the slider
  01:08:097 (2) - same as above
  01:11:525 (3) - ^
  01:40:668 - add a circle here
  01:41:525 - same as above
  01:47:525 (4) - change to something like this?
  02:04:668 (1,2,3,4) - I would change these to two 1/1 sliders
  02:38:954 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these under the slider

• Not sure if you meant to make the typo on purpose, but okay
  Change CS to 3
  You'll need to resnap your notes to account for change in CS
  00:19:240 (4,5,6) - this does not need to be stacked, make it a 1/2 reverse slider
  00:26:097 (2,3,4) - same as above
  00:27:811 (2,3) - blanket these?
  00:42:168 (1) - this doesn't need to be a spinner, you could easily map it.
  00:53:525 (1,1) - blanket these, an example would be this
  01:09:811 (1,2) - blanket these
  01:32:097 (4) - new combo
  01:41:525 (2) - I wouldn't stack this
  01:54:382 (3,4) - blanket these
  02:02:954 (1,1,1) - having three spinners in a row for a normal difficulty is a little overkill, I suggest taking out the first two and just having the third.
  02:08:954 (1) - no need for new combo
  02:21:811 (4) - new combo
  02:37:882 (4,1) - blanket these
  02:44:097 (4,5,6) - I wouldn't stack these, just make it a 1/2 reverse slider
  02:44:954 (1,2) - blanket these
  02:50:954 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack these, just make it a 1/2 reverse slider

• I suggest adding a break towards the beginning of the song, it's a 3 minute song and the player needs time to adjust.
  00:03:811 (4) - I wouldn't stack this considering you didn't stack the others, it's just a little confusing.
  00:20:954 (4,5,6) - blanket these better
  00:23:525 (1,2) - these should be somewhat connected since the first slider ends on a blue tick and the second one begins on a white one, it's to tell the player "Hey, don't let go of this slider just yet!"
  00:26:954 (1,2) - same thing here
  00:27:597 (3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern may be a little too complex for a hard difficulty, consider taking out one of the kick sliders or one of the circles.
  00:39:811 (5) - I wouldn't stack this
  00:57:811 (1,2) - I would blanket these
  01:01:240 (1,1,1,1) - these don't really all need to be a new combo, but I can see the effect you were trying to go for. Instead, use the finish hitsound on the beginning of each slider for the same effect.
  01:14:954 (1) - I wouldn't stack this
  01:15:811 (4) - same as above
  01:25:240 (7,8) - blanket these
  01:28:240 (2,3) - same as above
  01:36:811 (9) - I would make this a 1/2 slider instead of a 1/4 reverse slider.
  01:37:240 (1,1,1,1) - these don't really all need to be a new combo, but I can see the effect you were trying to go for. Instead, use the finish hitsound on the beginning of each slider for the same effect.
  02:14:525 (7,1) - blanket these better
  02:20:097 (1,2) - I suggest making these parallel
  02:20:954 (3,4) - same as above
  02:41:525 (1,2) - these should be somewhat connected since the first slider ends on a blue tick and the second one begins on a white one, it's to tell the player "Hey, don't let go of this slider just yet!"
  02:43:240 (1,2) - same as above
  02:48:382 (1,2) - ^
  02:50:097 (1,2) - ^
  02:51:061 (5,6) - ^
  02:56:954 (1,1,1) - these don't need to be new combo

• This is mainly just going to be a hitsound Nazi mod because I like hitsounds and your map doesn't have any from what I can see.
  00:08:097 (1) - add clap to beginning of slider
  00:08:954 (3) - same as above
  00:09:811 (1) - ^
  00:10:668 (3) - add clap
  00:11:525 (1) - add clap to beginning of slider
  00:12:382 (3) - add clap
  00:13:240 (1) - add finish
  00:14:097 (1,3,1) - add finish
  00:16:668 (1) - add clap to beginning of slider
  00:17:525 (3) - clap
  00:18:382 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  00:19:240 (3) - clap
  00:20:097 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  00:20:954 (3) - clap
  do you get the pattern I'm going for?
  00:22:668 (1,3) - finish
  00:23:525 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  00:24:382 (3) - clap
  00:25:240 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  00:26:097 (3) - ^
  00:26:954 (1) - ^
  00:27:811 (1) - ^
  00:28:668 (1) - finish
  00:29:525 (1) - ^
  00:32:954 (1,2) - whistle
  00:36:382 (1) - finish at beginning of slider
  00:36:811 (3) - ^
  00:40:025 (2,3) - clap
  00:42:382 (1) - finish
  00:43:240 (1) - ^
  00:50:097 (1,3,5) - clap
  00:56:097 (1,3) - finish
  00:56:954 (1,5) - ^
  01:04:668 (1) - finish
  01:05:311 (1,2) - ^
  01:06:382 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:07:240 (3) - clap
  01:08:097 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:08:954 (3) - clap
  01:09:811 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:10:668 (3) - ^
  01:12:382 (1,3) - finish
  01:13:240 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:14:097 (3) - ^
  01:14:954 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:15:811 (3) - ^
  01:16:668 (1) - ^
  01:17:525 (1) - ^
  01:18:382 (1) - finish
  01:19:240 (1) - ^
  01:19:668 (5) - ^
  01:26:097 (1) - finish at beginning of slider
  01:26:525 (3) - finish
  01:32:097 (1,3) - ^
  01:32:954 (1,5) - ^
  01:40:668 (2) - ^
  01:41:525 (1) - ^
  01:42:382 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:43:240 (3) - ^
  01:44:097 (1) - ^
  01:44:954 (4) - ^
  01:45:811 (1) - ^
  01:46:668 (4) - ^
  01:48:382 (1,3) - finish
  01:49:240 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  01:50:097 (4) - ^
  01:50:954 (1) - ^
  01:51:811 (5) - ^
  01:52:668 (1) - ^
  01:53:525 (4) - ^
  01:54:382 (1) - finish
  01:55:240 (1,5) - ^
  02:02:097 (1,3) - whistle
  02:21:382 (6) - finish at end of slider
  02:22:240 (2) - finish
  02:22:668 (1,5) - ^
  02:27:811 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:28:668 (1) - clap
  02:29:525 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:30:382 (1) - ^
  02:31:240 (1) - ^
  02:32:097 (1) - ^
  02:33:811 (1,3) - finish
  02:34:668 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:35:525 (1) - clap
  02:36:382 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:37:240 (1) - ^
  02:38:097 (1) - ^
  02:38:954 (1) - ^
  02:39:811 (1) - finish
  02:40:668 (1,5) - ^
  02:41:525 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:42:382 (1) - clap
  02:43:240 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:44:097 (1) - ^
  02:44:954 (1) - ^
  02:45:811 (1) - ^
  02:47:525 (1,3) - finish
  02:48:382 (5) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:49:240 (1) - ^
  02:50:097 (1) - clap
  02:50:954 (1) - clap at beginning of slider
  02:51:811 (1) - clap
  02:52:668 (1) - clap
  02:53:525 (5) - finish
  02:54:382 (1,5) - finish

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue~
[Nprmal?]

• Not sure if you meant to make the typo on purpose, but okay Yes,I make this typo on purpose~
  Change CS to 3 Accepted
  You'll need to resnap your notes to account for change in CS fixed
  00:19:240 (4,5,6) - this does not need to be stacked, make it a 1/2 reverse slider No,thanks,cuz sliders all around makes me fell tired...
  00:26:097 (2,3,4) - same as above ^
  00:27:811 (2,3) - blanket these? Nope
  00:42:168 (1) - this doesn't need to be a spinner, you could easily map it. Indeed,but I prefer following the rhythm to making an easier map
  00:53:525 (1,1) - blanket these, an example would be this To be frank,I want this pattern,too,but the ranking criticia won`t allow us to add an un ds object in normal...
  01:09:811 (1,2) - blanket these Deny
  01:32:097 (4) - new combo Accepted
  01:41:525 (2) - I wouldn't stack this Nice idea!GJ
  01:54:382 (3,4) - blanket these No,thanks
  02:02:954 (1,1,1) - having three spinners in a row for a normal difficulty is a little overkill, I suggest taking out the first two and just having the third. Accepted!
  02:08:954 (1) - no need for new combo Well,I made some changes to make it more useful
  02:21:811 (4) - new combo K
  02:37:882 (4,1) - blanket these I do know this kind of skills,but I don`t think using it here is a googd choice
  02:44:097 (4,5,6) - I wouldn't stack these, just make it a 1/2 reverse slider Nope,cuz I want to use the same patterns at the first refrain part and the final refrain part
  02:44:954 (1,2) - blanket these No
  02:50:954 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack these, just make it a 1/2 reverse slider as above`s above,lol

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue~



[Easy]

• Change CS to 2 yes,cs4 in easy is mistake...
  Hitsounds? increase the volume,and trying add some clap...
  You'll need to resnap your notes to account for change in CS
  00:14:097 (3) - delete this
  00:14:525 (4) - move this to here 00:14:097
  00:20:954 (2,3) - blanket these
  00:24:382 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these
  00:26:097 (5,6) - same as above
  00:27:811 (2,3) - ^
  00:28:668 (4) - instead of a curved slider, maybe you could change it up a bit and make it a more interesting slider? it's a little boring just having all curved/straight sliders and no variety.
  00:55:240 (3) - this is stacked under a slider and looks awkward, consider changing the placement of it.
  00:57:811 (1) - overlap looks ugly
  00:58:668 (2) - I wouldn't stack this under the slider
  01:08:097 (2) - same as above
  01:11:525 (3) - ^
  01:40:668 - add a circle here
  01:41:525 - same as above
  01:47:525 (4) - change to something like this?
  02:04:668 (1,2,3,4) - I would change these to two 1/1 sliders
  02:38:954 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these under the slider

removing all blanket,and trying add some special slider...


Ahh that took forever haha. Good song, good luck on ranking!

shaoshengss wrote:

nprmal:
感觉有点脱线啊笑。
难度名难道是什么新钱语吗 不，是纪念我的一个同学，如果可能我希望不改
木有kiai 已补充
02:37:882 (4) - 看着不太好看？但是找不到更好的排列（可以忽略） 忽略，lol
02:35:525 (2,3) - 我觉得改成折返更好 好好好！
02:35:525 (2,3) - ^ 同上
02:37:882 (4) - 删掉 莫名。 为了和前面对称，所以不删

Yuthuil wrote:

Kuuhaku's normal
01:07:240 (2) - I think these have to go. They are extremely out of tune, I got them all 50s, and I did playback rate 50 to test too. Unless another circle is added before two, them I THINK it'll be okay. Maybe you are right,but at this point,I perfer to follow my style,sorry

These are the only complaints I have....except.... 00:43:004
Umm,fixed

tm1209 wrote:

Extreme:
如果难度比Extra小的话建议CS4
00:19:454 (2,3,4) - 00:38:097 (1,2,3) - 01:44:311 (2,3) - 01:46:025 (2,3) - 这里是没放好吗？ 故意的XD
02:02:954 (1) - 这个转盘好像有点太长了 因为这段的BGM节奏有点狗。。
01:11:418 (4,1) - 滑条没包好 建议把4移到（240，225） Fixed
01:13:561 (2,3) - 同上 建议把3移到（255，256） Fixed
01:26:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wpcap 这里玩几遍都被坑w HUEHUEHUE
00:12:382 (6,7,8) - 间距突然变得这么大 建议NC 看上去不大。还是不改了。。
Nprmal：
这难度名是不是打错了？
另外这整首歌都没kiai time？