1. Easy (1,79 stars, 79 notes)
2. Hard (4,78 stars, 179 notes)
3. Normal (4,19 stars, 145 notes)

1. 00:13:921 (3) - I highly recommend lowering volume here, it sounds too sharp currently.
2. 00:16:989 (1) - How about adding a soft whistle to prevent this from sounding empty and make it less dull?
3. 00:24:148 - I really think here should be a note, even if you are following the vocals mainly, it's like the main beat of the part was ignored and this feels odd. Delete 1 and start an 1/2 Slider here?
4. 00:34:375 (1,2) - This one flows really weird because the directions are somewhat cramped, also the jump is too huge for a Hard in my opinion. How about just redesigning this one?
5. 00:35:739 (3) - Also this one, spacing went kinda crazy here.
6. 00:42:330 (5) - Such hard jump again ;_; I think those big jumps don't work well to spread them with ENH, if this was Insane I was totally fine with it.
7. 00:49:602 (2) - Pull the angle more up? Will increase the transition with 3 and make it look less unstructured.
   
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8. 00:52:330 (6,7,8) - This looks kinda weird to me, would be more cool if they looked correctly spaced like below shown.
   
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9. 00:56:421 (11) - Change the tail's sample to soft? The harsh sound doesn't fit with the instruments here.
10. 01:04:148 (1) - Add a finish to the head? Emphasizes the strong background.
11. 01:06:421 (6) - Such huge jumps for a Hard ;_; I would like it more if you spaced this less out.
12. 01:13:239 (4) - This one again, and so on and so on.
13. 01:18:693 (1) - Same as for 01:04:148 (1) - .
14. 01:25:852 (1) - Add a whistle to catch the high end tone?
15. Actually a pretty cool difficulty, but as said I think the jumps are far too huge and hard to catch considering this is only a Hard. You could make this one an Insane and map a new, easier Hard. Just consider it.

1. 00:13:921 (4) - Same comment as on Hard.
2. 00:24:148 - And again.
3. 00:42:330 (4) - You could try ctrl + J here to make it flow smoother, I think it works well.
4. 01:03:012 (1,2,3,4) - I find this pattern rather harsh, 4 circles in a row can be very exhausting to newbies, how about replacing them by 2 1/2 Sliders?
5. 01:04:148 (1) - Add a finish on the start just as on Hard?
6. 01:17:557 (1,2,3,4) - Same as for the previous pattern. ~
7. 01:18:693 (1) - Add a finish to the head as on Hard.
8. 01:21:421 (5) - I think this circle is better placed directly at 4's end, the pattern flows a bit smoother and the transition to the next note increases.
9. 01:23:921 (4) - Uh, looks a bit random placed on the playfield, maybe create a blanket with 3?

1. 00:13:239 (1) - Same comment agaaaain, but I guess you can keep it consistent yourself when you apply something. ~
2. 00:15:966 (1,2,3) - Create a triangle with them? They don't look too special right now.
3. 00:16:989 (1) - Again, add a whistle?
4. 00:50:284 (3) - Would look more pleasant if this was placed with the grid.
   
   
5. 01:14:148 (1) - Make this more curved for the sake of flow? I feel as if you took the curve more up the cursor will feel moved more smoothly.
   
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6. 01:25:512 (4) - Pull the angle to the right? Down like this looks odd since the curve isn't the same with 3.

1. 00:02:330 (2) - Since you followed lyrics at this part imo would be better to made this slider as 3/4 slider + note to made it more intuitive to follow - like this:
   
   
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2. 00:03:125 (3,4) - I think replacing this 2 notes with short 1/4 slider would be more intuitive to follow since there are kinda hard to predict how rhythm would go at this part.
3. 00:06:875 (6) - I think it would be better to add whistle here to slider tail instead, and remove it from start of 00:07:557 (7) - that would work better with vocals
4. 00:08:466 (1) - Whistle to head follow vocals perhaps?
5. 00:12:330 (8) - Try to follow instruments at this section instead of vocals: you can make more interesting rhythm-pattern at this section - remove this 1/1 slider and replace with 3 1/2 notes, and leave normal sampleset at (10) & (1) - that would fit better with your choosen rhythm imo
   
   
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6. 00:15:171 (1) - Perhaps you can delete this note? As i said above, streams what are starting at slidertails are usually very hard to catch, and leaving kind of "triplet" here would made whole section easier to play.
7. 01:25:852 (1) - Lower volume of spinner end to 5%? It's not like it snapped to the beat at music anyway, and having it audible feels a bit weird here.

1. 00:08:466 (1) - Whistle to head follow vocals perhaps?
2. 00:12:784 - Add note with normal-sampleset here to have your rhythm-pattern consistent
3. 00:15:057 - Adding note here would work better and next 3 notes would be easier to catch
4. 00:16:875 - Also it would be good here too, since you have strong beat with finish covered by spinner, which is feels kinda unnatural while playing - try to add note here and start spinner 1/4 later.
5. 00:32:102 (1,2) - I think replacement this with short 1/2 slider would be easier to catch for beginners
6. 01:04:148 (1,2) - This section seems not intuitive to play - try to follow lyrics here directly, something like this:
   
   
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7. 01:25:852 (1) - Same as Hard

1. 01:25:852 (1) - Same as Hard

Pokie wrote:

01:23:921 (4) - I'll recommend to sightly adjust the angle on this slider (around +23 degrees). Getting a better flow on gameplay might not be a bad idea!

Kloyd wrote:

01:24:375 (5) - I've listened to your rhythm and vocal of this song, and thought that a note should be here.