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Duca - marry me ?

posted 2014-05-04T18:15:30+00:00

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wmtokok

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2014-05-24T17:55:40+00:00

Wafu wrote:
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Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

Source is supposed to be ゴールデンマリッジ. Golden marriage belongs to tags. Source should be the original one. The artist of this visual novel keeps ゴールデンマリッジ everywhere. For example their website is called like that.
Please use this as background. .png should be used only in storyboard, if you need transparency support. The image size is too big without a reason. Quality changes, but it is not recognizable by an eye, so please, take this on mind. http://puu.sh/8YYbR.jpg
Put kiai time on 01:35:259 on every difficulty. It is only in easy difficulty and it is much better than in other difficulties. It ends on downbeat, so if you listen to music, you might hear that lively part ended on downbeat and it starts to get to normal just from this place. In other diffs, it looks just randomly placed and doesn't fit the music. FIX
Don't be afraid of turning hitsound volume up. Some parts are really barely audiable. Try to keep it sound same as you can hear the music, so it doesn't fade in it.
wmtokok's Hard
00:20:634 (3,4) - Minor thing, but this pattern should be like puzzle. It should fit together wery well, their shape should be made each for other. Basically you can recognize it by different gap between these sliders, the gap should be consistent like this http://puu.sh/8Z2J0.jpg Fix to more good
If tellertheworld used my hitsound suggestion, you might change your hitsounds to Custom 2 so you replace the original clap and to be consistent. For the GD diff...i think not need to change Custom 2 to consistent
Use the NCs consistently as it was in insane diff. You sometimes use NC each downbeat and sometimes each 2 downbeats. Choose one please. It feels really non-polished and insensible. If you don't know what I mean or where to put the NCs, please, call me for that, but I think you should understand. I fix some NC
Opposite problem of insane hitsounds. You use enough of claps, as I said they're missing in insane, but you use only few of whistles, you should increase it to emphasize most piano parts or downbeats, it sounds really empty. OK...add
01:36:384 (4) - Missing clap, you put the clap on all of these places, so you should put it also here. Whistles were not that critical, but this is really empty. FIX
01:37:134 (1) - ^ add
I'll recheck this map after some time. I want you to improve this and go for a rank, so after I'll think it is really fine, I'll also shoot a star.

thank your mod

---- Wafu

update ---------------1:55

osu file format v12

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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:tellertheworld
Version:wmtokok's Hard
Source:Golden marriage
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 ゴールデンマリッジ
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ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-05-24T18:59:58+00:00

Wafu wrote:
ffstar's Normal

AR -1, approach circle goes too fast for newbies, they need to see what comes longer than we do. Always remember it is for unskilled players and they cannot read that fast. ///Please check your song list using the search engine and enter "normal bpm=160 ar=5" and you will see a lot of normal diff used the same AR as i did, so i don't think this is a problem anyway... (ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/105244 )
Passing through this map, I see you made very hard normal. You should make it at least a bit easier. 00:21:009 (4,5,1) - Is incredibly bad idea. Players barely read one of these sliders, you shouldn't spam that many object on them. Just remove 00:21:384 (5), put one repeat on 00:21:009 (4) and that's everything. We don't want newbies to fail so hard. http://puu.sh/8Z482.jpg ///wait, in this low sv and average bpm song, i don't think this pattern will make those newbies easy to fail, similar pattern can be found on that link i posted above
00:36:009 (2,3) - ^ Same here, they're really unable to play that well early. http://puu.sh/8Z4ca.jpg ///^same as above
00:44:259 (1,2,3,4) - Firstly, the shape is weird, probably too much repetitive. But the problem actually is that most of newbies will really make a misstake here. I think this is both simple to map and really fine to play, so try this http://puu.sh/8Z4sm.jpg ///orz, I really like this pattern T_T, and the reason similar as above^
00:48:759 (5,6) - You should really stop making these patterns, especially in normal diff. It is really hard to play for them. Tend to map only 1/1 and 2/1 notes for this song. Mapping 1/2 is insensible here, it will just and only confuse. (Mainly don't do maps for people who will play this with all mods, make it especially for newbies. http://puu.sh/8Z4Jc.jpg ///no, I didn't map this for people who can fc easily using 4 mods, tbh a lot of maps using the similar pattern but why no people complaint about it
01:02:259 (1,2) - Similar issue to previous. You just spammed a lot of notes again. I'd suggest to remove 01:02:821 (2) and put 1/1 slider on 01:03:009 instead. http://puu.sh/8Z4Uu.jpg ///^
01:12:759 (3,4) - I think I don't need to say what you should do with this, this issue was there million times. ///^
01:15:009 (2,3) - Similar as issues above, too fast for newbies. Remove the slider and put a note on 01:15:009 instead. ///^
01:20:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is really unappropriate. I would put such a pattern to insane, maybe to some hard diffs, but definitely not into normal diff. A lot of notes end on red ticks, which are usually hard to hit, especially for newbies. You might try this http://puu.sh/8Z5hs.jpg ///i will keep this first, actually this isn't that hard if you listen to the vocal, i will really keep this in mind but i want to keep this first ><
01:23:259 (1,2,3,4,5) - The wrongs in your map are always similar, try this pattern to avoid using so many red ticks and that fast 1/2 note spam. http://puu.sh/8Z5md.jpg ///same reason
01:27:009 (2,3) - Again. Make 1/1 slider from 01:27:009 (2), then remove 01:27:571 (3) and put 1/1 slider on 01:27:759. http://puu.sh/8Z5AC.jpg ///no
01:32:259 (4,5,6) - Honestly, this rhythm would confuse even me. There is a lot of 1/2 notes again, also player needs to click on red tick, what is always less accurate for newbies. This might be fine solution. http://puu.sh/8Z5Si.jpg ///same as the previous one, listen to the vocal should be no problem i think, but i will keep this in mind
01:34:509 (1,2) - Difficult rhythm for newbies again. Just remove 01:35:071 (2) and put circle on 01:35:259. It plays and even sounds better. As I repeat over and over, you map it for newbies. ///same reason
01:39:009 (1,2) - Same as I said before, remove 01:39:009 (1) and put circles on 01:39:009, 01:39:384, then remove 01:39:571 (2) and but 1/1 slider on 01:39:759. ///^
01:42:571 (3) - Replace it for 1/1 slider on 01:42:759. Even such a simple doubleclick doesn't really fit normal difficulty. It's too hard to hit accurately. ///^
01:44:821 (2) - Since this is near a stream, you should remove this note. As I said before, you cannot just hit it accurately. ///ok i will fix this
01:48:946 (1,2) - Stack and doubleclick together is also really confusing. Just put it to 1/2 slider as is 01:48:384 (4) ///orz, the whole map i didn't use any stack pattern and the one and only stack pattern you actually mentioned about it, please go look for other normal diff, their stack are more MORE than mine T_T
01:53:259 - I might suggest to put volume to 30% like on hard diff. The music doesn't fade too low, so it should be still audiable. ///ok
This difficulty really bothers me. I'd like to see this mapset ranked, but this needs to be easier than it is. Some parts were even harder than Hard difficulty. I don't want to offend you or tell you your map is bad. It is not that bad. It just needs to be easier. It is polished, but much harder than it is supposed to be. I want you to improve your map, why would I bother to mod it if I didn't want to improve it, to make you feel bad? I'm not such person.
If you want me to explain you something about things I said here, please, don't hestitate to call me in-game. :3

I'll recheck this map after some time. I want you to improve this and go for a rank, so after I'll think it is really fine, I'll also shoot a star.

First of all I want to say thank you for giving me such long mod

and I want to say sorry for declining all of the similar problem you have mentioned
but please do see other normal diff, their diff have the similar pattern i used and i dont think it is hard (even most of the modders here didn't think so)
give you some other similar example: http://osu.ppy.sh/b/235502 this map has even more which you said is hard pattern and the SV is even higher than mine.
So i hope you understand and sorry if i say anything bad make you feeling bad >< i really didn't mean it

updated

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Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2014-05-25T08:23:25+00:00

You difficulty is not bad. It is good, but you make it too hard for newbies. But I see where is a problem, you just check other maps if someone didn't make the same thing, so it means you just copy mistakes of others. You are just using too much variable notes. You should make consistent beat, even if everything doesn't follow the music, after it is consistent, player might learn and improve playing consistent rhythm, so he gets accurate, then he can enter Hard difficulties, where he meets more variability and he will learn it better, because his accuracy will improve, so he will keep playing on beats, so basically, he gets less confused of things you did there, because he already might pretend the rhythm.

Also, you said it followed vocal at most things. That's exactly what you shouldn't do in E/N diff. Follow the hard beats of music (basically white ticks, if you have good offset). That's much more simple to play, because this is mostly consistent in songs. Anyway, I won't force you to do anything, I just wanted you to understand, what you.. apparently didn't, so that's why I said you should ask me in-game.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-05-25T09:51:15+00:00

Wafu wrote:
You difficulty is not bad. It is good, but you make it too hard for newbies.

thank you. Also, there is actually an Easy diff, which newbies can actually try the Easy diff first, if they pass the Easy diff they can move to my Normal diff, so if Easy diff and the Normal diff looks quite similar but the notes are just slightly more than Easy diff, i don't think it will be fun for those newbies.

Wafu wrote:
But I see where is a problem, you just check other maps if someone didn't make the same thing, so it means you just copy mistakes of others.

No, i didn't. I won't check or copy other people's pattern when i am mapping, those examples are what i actually check AFTER you mod this map and i just want to show you most of the normal diff have the similar pattern as i did.

Wafu wrote:
You are just using too much variable notes. You should make consistent beat, even if everything doesn't follow the music, after it is consistent, player might learn and improve playing consistent rhythm, so he gets accurate, then he can enter Hard difficulties, where he meets more variability and he will learn it better, because his accuracy will improve, so he will keep playing on beats, so basically, he gets less confused of things you did there, because he already might pretend the rhythm.

I understand this, and i also tried a lot of afford to make sure those notes won't be clicked suddenly. I use DS which will make it look neater and also basically those notes are just one or two tick after the next note. You say about consistent rhythm, but you know if you just follow the white tick to map, it's like hit x hit x hit x hit x ..... and over over again, that's kinda boring you know.

Wafu wrote:
Also, you said it followed vocal at most things. That's exactly what you shouldn't do in E/N diff. Follow the hard beats of music (basically white ticks, if you have good offset). That's much more simple to play, because this is mostly consistent in songs. Anyway, I won't force you to do anything, I just wanted you to understand, what you.. apparently didn't, so that's why I said you should ask me in-game.

As i said above, following the white tick isn't that fun, following the vocal doesn't seem to be so hard for players. If the map are following hard beats and ignore the vocal, then player (ok at least me) will feel strange and ask "why this note start here but not there?" and basically vocal is usually louder than those beats.

I apologize if i say anything wrong, and yes I really understand what you are trying to tell me.
For me, I think Normal diff should be a bit challenging but not that hard as Hard diff. Different people will have different idea and thought so I understand why you actually mentioned about it.
If the player couldn't play my Normal diff, then they should try their best until they can pass it and fc it, after that they can reach the higher level (which is Hard diff).
Thanks again

Eni

1,437 posts

Joined May 2013

Eni 2014-05-30T13:49:37+00:00

Hello ffstar0716,

I believe following the music (vocal, emphasis points, etc.) is more important than following simply the beats. For Gens' philosophy, see this.

I personally dislike patterns like 01:15:009 (2,3,4) - and 01:18:384 (3,4) - that have a non-stacked 1/2 circle->slider pattern, but we should not change what the mapper intends to keep.

For a song such as this one, I personally feel that more 1/1 notes would make more sense than trying to force a rhythm with 1/2s. For example, 00:21:009 (4,5,1) - can be replaced with a 1/1 slider at 00:21:009 -. It follows the beats exactly the same and does not feature a "dead sound" with no musical reference at 00:21:571 -. Parts like this 00:48:759 (5,6,7) - make sense because the musical beats are at emphasis. Do not do this for parts where the beats are not emphasized as this will not flow as well.

I personally hate the slider on 01:28:509 (4) - because it does not follow any previous musical reference and has no flow whatsoever. I strongly suggest that you delete this slider and re-map. An object end should be at 01:29:259, not a repeat slider as this makes no connection to the music.

Parts like 01:12:759 (3,4,5) - are over-complicated. This is a Normal, triple 1/2 sliders aren't very fun to the novice. Follow the same pattern as your previous 01:11:259 (1,2) - and change this to a 3/2 slider.

01:32:259 (4,5) - I really don't like how these straight sliders look, colliding into one another. Why not make this look nicer? Going up then back down with sliders is also extremely hard to play. Consider making slider 4 curved like in i.e: 01:11:259 (1) - and move other objects if needed.

Also teller: You have 3 repeat sliders in a row (see 01:12:759 (4,5,1,2,3) - ). Consider changing 01:15:759 (3) - to a 2/1 slider (no repeat) to match the song.

No kudosu.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-05-30T14:41:54+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hello ffstar0716,

I believe following the music (vocal, emphasis points, etc.) is more important than following simply the beats. For Gens' philosophy, see this.

I personally dislike patterns like 01:15:009 (2,3,4) - and 01:18:384 (3,4) - that have a non-stacked 1/2 circle->slider pattern, but we should not change what the mapper intends to keep. ///I don't have much comment about this, actually i don't think stacked pattern is good for normal diff so i didn't put much stack for this diff. btw, i found out stacking 01:15:384 (3,4) - isn't that bad so changed this.

For a song such as this one, I personally feel that more 1/1 notes would make more sense than trying to force a rhythm with 1/2s. For example, 00:21:009 (4,5,1) - can be replaced with a 1/1 slider at 00:21:009 -. It follows the beats exactly the same and does not feature a "dead sound" with no musical reference at 00:21:571 -. Parts like this 00:48:759 (5,6,7) - make sense because the musical beats are at emphasis. Do not do this for parts where the beats are not emphasized as this will not flow as well. ///nope, listen carefully to the piano, it actually do have sound at 00:21:196 - and 00:21:571 - , it's quite obvious too

I personally hate the slider on 01:28:509 (4) - because it does not follow any previous musical reference and has no flow whatsoever. I strongly suggest that you delete this slider and re-map. An object end should be at 01:29:259, not a repeat slider as this makes no connection to the music. ///i actually don't really feel like changing it because it isn't that necessary. you see 01:30:009 - actually has a drum which is a heavy beat here, connecting them using a repeat slider doesn't mean no connection to the music, still the same word, different people has different thought and idea, but nvm i will change this

Parts like 01:12:759 (3,4,5) - are over-complicated. This is a Normal, triple 1/2 sliders aren't very fun to the novice. Follow the same pattern as your previous 01:11:259 (1,2) - and change this to a 3/2 slider. ///hmm, i really don't understand why only my diff will let you guys mentioned about this kind of pattern, seriously i am getting annoyed now. i randomly download a map from the qualified map, and they have the exactly same pattern, but why no people mention about it...

01:32:259 (4,5) - I really don't like how these straight sliders look, colliding into one another. Why not make this look nicer? Going up then back down with sliders is also extremely hard to play. Consider making slider 4 curved like in i.e: 01:11:259 (1) - and move other objects if needed. ///ok then i will change this since both of you mentioned about this

Also teller: You have 3 repeat sliders in a row (see 01:12:759 (4,5,1,2,3) - ). Consider changing 01:15:759 (3) - to a 2/1 slider (no repeat) to match the song.

No kudosu.

let me say something here. Actually i don't want to say something like "eh why this map can but why my can't?" because it's something like copying or following the same pattern as other mapper did, but as i said, i DID NOT open any other mapper's map when i am mapping and placing those patterns have my reason. for 01:12:759 (3,4,5) - and other similar pattern, i already gave the reason in my previous post, i am following the vocal, and also slow bpm + slow sv don't too hard for the beginner. but please, if all normal diff are very easy then how are they gonna improve?
i will say it again, i personally think normal diff should be a bit challenging but not that hard as Hard diff. also, my map is like each part is getting slightly harder than the previous part. So yea...
thanks for the mod and i apologize if i offended you

edit: tellertheworld gave me a IRC mod too, update again

updated

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2014-06-02T10:18:04+00:00

Normal

00:11:089 (3) - it ends on nothing, end it at 00:11:652
00:12:214 (4) - split this to 2 sliders, one from 00:12:027 - 00:12:214 and another from 00:12:402 - 00:12:589
00:41:259 (5) - NC instead
01:15:384 (3,4) - it's better if they do not stack, better movement
01:18:384 (3,4) - this one could stack though
01:20:259 (1,2) - I rather you try this rhythm to make it easier to predict and hit:

SPOILER

01:33:571 (6,7) - the sound at 01:33:759 to 01:34:134 should be held instead of having the gap between 2 objects

SPOILER

01:42:384 (2,3) - stack?

Hard

00:16:339 (2) - reduce the curve to make less squashed up
00:21:008 (4) - object end not snapped
00:37:321 (4,1) - could blanket better
01:02:071 - I think adding a note here would make it better

Insane

00:06:495 (1) - it's off, place it at 00:06:402
00:29:259 (1,2) - make them the same distance away from 00:28:884 (4) - 00:30:009 (2) is currently closer and if you make it further it might possibly not touch 00:29:071 (5) also too
00:32:071 - important beat here, should add a note
01:10:884 (6) - NC for the sv
01:48:290 - add a note

歌曲好听哦，加油！

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-06-02T10:34:53+00:00

neonat wrote:
Normal

00:11:089 (3) - it ends on nothing, end it at 00:11:652
00:12:214 (4) - split this to 2 sliders, one from 00:12:027 - 00:12:214 and another from 00:12:402 - 00:12:589
00:41:259 (5) - NC instead
01:15:384 (3,4) - it's better if they do not stack, better movement
01:18:384 (3,4) - this one could stack though
01:20:259 (1,2) - I rather you try this rhythm to make it easier to predict and hit:
SPOILER
01:33:571 (6,7) - the sound at 01:33:759 to 01:34:134 should be held instead of having the gap between 2 objects
SPOILER
01:42:384 (2,3) - stack?

Hard

00:16:339 (2) - reduce the curve to make less squashed up
00:21:008 (4) - object end not snapped
00:37:321 (4,1) - could blanket better
01:02:071 - I think adding a note here would make it better

Insane

00:06:495 (1) - it's off, place it at 00:06:402 Fixed
00:29:259 (1,2) - make them the same distance away from 00:28:884 (4) - 00:30:009 (2) is currently closer and if you make it further it might possibly not touch 00:29:071 (5) also too Changed
00:32:071 - important beat here, should add a note I want to make 00:32:259 (2) - outsdanding so do not map here.
01:10:884 (6) - NC for the sv Fixed
01:48:290 - add a note This part is look like slowly so I do not add note here.

歌曲好听哦，加油！

Thanks~ 多謝

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-06-02T10:55:34+00:00

neonat wrote:
Normal

00:11:089 (3) - it ends on nothing, end it at 00:11:652 hmm? i thought the vocal "bi" sound is there lol
00:12:214 (4) - split this to 2 sliders, one from 00:12:027 - 00:12:214 and another from 00:12:402 - 00:12:589 yea, but i purposely make that, so sorry no change
00:41:259 (5) - NC instead ~~hmm, that make sense... let me think how to fix it... because if only NC this not that nice...~~ ok fixed
01:15:384 (3,4) - it's better if they do not stack, better movement ~~conflict with the previous mod.... let me think about it ><~~ i changed a lot of pattern just now, and decided to change back to my previous version one, which no stack there
01:18:384 (3,4) - this one could stack though ~~LOLOL, again, let me think first, will reply asap~~ same as above, changed back to my previous version, i really don't like stack in Normal diff though
01:20:259 (1,2) - I rather you try this rhythm to make it easier to predict and hit: following the vocal won't be that hard, also prevent other people complaining about this kind of pattern again....
SPOILER
01:33:571 (6,7) - the sound at 01:33:759 to 01:34:134 should be held instead of having the gap between 2 objects yea this is a nice idea, but i really scare people complain about this pattern again, if you want to know why i scared you can just look at the previous mod
SPOILER
01:42:384 (2,3) - stack? not that necessary though

歌曲好听哦，加油！

thanks for the mod

~~will reply if i fix the green color comment~~
edit: done

updated

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wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2014-06-02T11:50:54+00:00

neonat wrote:

[b]Hard

00:16:339 (2) - reduce the curve to make less squashed up OK
00:21:008 (4) - object end not snapped sorry...i don't know how to do it
00:37:321 (4,1) - could blanket better fix
01:02:071 - I think adding a note here would make it better add

歌曲好听哦，加油！

thank your mod

update------------19:48

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-06-11T12:00:43+00:00

m4m :3

[Insane]

00:01:527 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - add whistle every white tick?
00:03:402 (5) - mute the body slider.
00:04:152 (1) - I think it's not fit with spinner.. try with other rhythm?
00:25:884 (4,5) - make a triangle like this? and to make a jump to 00:26:259 (1), I think it's fit well.
00:29:352 (1) - should be on the white tick imo.
00:35:259 (7) - jump should be on this instead of (6) imo.
00:39:571 (6,1) - make balance spacing?
00:43:321 (4) - stack with 4?
01:09:384 (2,3) - jump should on 2 imo not 3.
01:15:571 - hmm I think this rhythm a bit weird.. try this?
01:22:696 (1) - mute(5%) on slider's head is unrankable if I'm right, increase it and remove finish on body also. player won't know that they hit it or not if it muted.
01:48:290 - this is the hardest diff so add note here?

[wmtokok]

the sound of slider on the beginning is annoying but it's up to you to fix it or not because it's not that big problem.
00:04:902 - why don't add note here, this is hard diff :X, if you follow this, remove NC on 00:05:277 (1,1) and add NC on 00:06:777 (2)
00:30:571 (1) - start on 00:30:759 sounds better.
01:25:696 - I think you should add note here, it's a strong note like 01:25:884 (6)
01:48:946 (1,2) - soft-finish is more fit imo.
look like Insane with cs4 XD

[ffstar]

00:36:009 (2) - remove clap add add whistle, add clap on 00:35:634 (1) instead.
00:43:884 (1) - hm.. remove NC is better since this diff is just normal.
00:56:259 (1) - hope this overlapped will fine.
01:13:134 (4) - remove whistle on tail.
01:17:259 (1) - curve this for blanket? that would be more flow too.
01:25:134 (4) - remove whistle on reverse. that kind of whistle need to be continue on the next two notes imo but you didn't add it so I suggest to remove them.

[Easy]

00:26:259 (2) - hmm almost out of screen, I hope it's fine.
I think this diff has so many hitsound on slider's body, remove them. ex: 00:38:259 (1,2) It annoying imo.
01:07:509 (3) - can't hear the sound on head.
01:10:884 (1,2) - swap NC
01:48:384 - add 1/2 slider instead of reverse? more fit imo.

good luck :3

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-06-11T12:33:13+00:00

P A N wrote:
m4m :3

[ffstar]

00:36:009 (2) - remove clap add add whistle, add clap on 00:35:634 (1) instead. ~~changed it to whistle~~ i changed my mind, still adding it but not removing clap because a bit quiet there.... but still not adding clap on 00:35:634 (1)
00:43:884 (1) - hm.. remove NC is better since this diff is just normal. heavy beat here, so i want to NC it, probably wont distract the player because distance is consistent
00:56:259 (1) - hope this overlapped will fine. it just appear after that slider has gone, so i think no problem
01:13:134 (4) - remove whistle on tail. ok sound nice
01:17:259 (1) - curve this for blanket? that would be more flow too. oo, never thought that before, changed
01:25:134 (4) - remove whistle on reverse. that kind of whistle need to be continue on the next two notes imo but you didn't add it so I suggest to remove them. ok

good luck :3

thanks for the mod!

Edit: updated again at 8:39pm UTC+8

updated

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
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Creator:tellertheworld
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Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
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wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2014-06-11T15:41:30+00:00

P A N wrote:
m4m :3

[wmtokok]

the sound of slider on the beginning is annoying but it's up to you to fix it or not because it's not that big problem. remove some whistle
00:04:902 - why don't add note here, this is hard diff :X, if you follow this, remove NC on 00:05:277 (1,1) and add NC on 00:06:777 (2) add
00:30:571 (1) - start on 00:30:759 sounds better. fix
01:25:696 - I think you should add note here, it's a strong note like 01:25:884 (6) change
01:48:946 (1,2) - soft-finish is more fit imo. OK
look like Insane with cs4 XD ._."

good luck :3

thanks P A N :3

update-------23:41

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-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-06-11T18:56:14+00:00

P A N wrote:
m4m :3

[Insane]

00:01:527 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - add whistle every white tick? okay~
00:03:402 (5) - mute the body slider. fixed
00:04:152 (1) - I think it's not fit with spinner.. try with other rhythm? nope, becasue 00:06:402 - part is faster than 00:00:730 - part. In rhythm 00:06:402 - is slower than 00:00:730 - . So I use a spinner to separate it.
00:25:884 (4,5) - make a triangle like this? and to make a jump to 00:26:259 (1), I think it's fit well. IMO, 00:25:884 (4,5,1) - is connection.
00:29:352 (1) - should be on the white tick imo. yea. I get a mistake here.
00:35:259 (7) - jump should be on this instead of (6) imo. no change
00:39:571 (6,1) - make balance spacing? okay
00:43:321 (4) - stack with 4? fixed
01:09:384 (2,3) - jump should on 2 imo not 3. no change
01:15:571 - hmm I think this rhythm a bit weird.. try this? some chagge~
01:22:696 (1) - mute(5%) on slider's head is unrankable if I'm right, increase it and remove finish on body also. player won't know that they hit it or not if it muted. okay~
01:48:290 - this is the hardest diff so add note here? nope

[Easy]

00:26:259 (2) - hmm almost out of screen, I hope it's fine. nope

I think this diff has so many hitsound on slider's body, remove them. ex: 00:38:259 (1,2) It annoying imo. yea some change
01:07:509 (3) - can't hear the sound on head. fixed
01:10:884 (1,2) - swap NC I think it is okay now.
01:48:384 - add 1/2 slider instead of reverse? more fit imo. some change~

good luck :3

thank~

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-10-02T01:47:11+00:00

4 months ago...well here is the mod that was supposed to come 2 month ago xD

[General]
the mp3 quality is a little bad...see if you can ask Xinely for the mp3 and timing on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200169, its got a much better quality

you are lacking a proper clap sound that follows the drums in the music, put http://puu.sh/bVTkY.wav in your song folder and add claps to locations like 00:33:384, 00:34:884, 00:36:384 etc.

Hitsounds are generally too quiet. 10% sections are unrankable especially given the song's high volume. I would recommend you raise all your volume sections (for all difficulties including guest ones) by 30% to make it safe for ranking

[Easy]
00:13:152 (1) - this may be a bit too close to the next slider, try ending it at 00:17:089 to capture the last piano sound instead
00:18:777 (1) - slider is not snapped
00:32:259 (1,2) - i would try to construct a blanket here
00:44:259 (1) - the finish on the end doesnt really fit well imo
00:50:259 (4) - same here, also NC should start here instead of 00:51:759 (1)
00:53:259 (3) - NC here and remove 00:55:509 (1); then add one at 00:56:259 (2)
01:09:009 (2,3) - try a rhythm like this:

SPOILER

01:16:884 (1) - remove NC and place it on 01:17:259 (2)
01:19:509 (1) - ^ place NC on 01:20:259 (2)
01:22:884 (1) - ...and so on. The trick here is to set NC only on every other long white tick, which is the ideal position for this song
01:23:259 (2) - finish on end doesnt go well with the song
01:34:509 (1) - this fits the music better if you shorten it to 01:34:884
01:48:009 (2) - this extra repeat mught throw some people off. I would revise the rhythm here:

SPOILER

[ffstar's Normal]
Consider CS3.5 for better spread between the Easy and Hard
00:24:759 - think the finish fits better here compared to 00:27:759 (1)
00:43:884 (1) - not really necessary NC here, it adds more confusion
00:51:571 - you could add a note here to follow the vocals better
01:05:259 (1,1) - i really dont recommend using spinners here, especially because there are some strict standards going on right now with objects too soon after spinner. Consider mapping this section normally (follow instrumentals or use longer sliders to represent vocals)
01:17:259 (1,2,3) - i think this will play better if you arrange it like this:

SPOILER

01:30:009 (5) - NC should start here instead of 01:30:384 (1)
01:44:821 - add a circle? there is a pitch transition here
overall the Normal is pretty solid, but for the sake of spread perhaps you can make it slightly harder by using more 1/2 rhythms

[wmtokok's Hard]
AR7.5 fits the pacing of this diff better
00:19:321 (4,5) - i find this jump a bit sudden, how about like this:

SPOILER

00:47:071 (4) - try x:220 y:292, flows better imo
00:56:071 (1,2) - i dont feel like the anti jump fits well here, because the music is emphasizing a transition and this one is toning it down too much. Consider regular spacing or even a jump
01:22:134 (2,3) - the finish sound has a slight echo which makes it sound bad when used consecutively, so maybe swap one for whistles
01:44:821 (1) - blanket this properly?
Hard maybe a bit too difficult for the spread of this set, mainly because of the use of jumps. You might want to reduce some of them and target for a star rating around 3.2

[Insane]
The mapping style doesnt work well when used with CS5 imo, i would advise you to use CS4.5 since that balances out the set more
00:16:902 (2) - sounds like this should end at 00:17:089 to capture the piano
00:44:821 (2,5) - try not to overlap these two
00:56:259 (1) - this sv change feels way too extreme, 0.7x or 0.8x would be much more natural
01:10:884 (1,1) - try moving these two more apart, creates a bigger impact when entering the kiai
01:12:759 (6) - due to the vocals here it would play better if you used a circle jump pattern instead of the repeat slider
01:15:571 (7,8,9) - this triplet pattern doesnt play very well compared to other improvised ones, its better if you mapped to the vocals instead:

SPOILER

01:28:884 (2,3,4) - another one thats a bit awkward to play, especially considering the flow onto 01:29:259 (5). Try swapping it for a 1/2 slider
01:38:259 (6) - NC here instead of 01:39:009 (1)
01:40:321 (3) - try x:240 y:212
01:48:196 (3,1) - you could swap this for a 1/6 repeat slider to better represent the music

Overall the maps are not bad, but more work needs to be done especially for hitsounds. Get a few more mods focusing on hitsounding and consistency, and when you think its ready you can call me back for a recheck.

Last edited by jonathanlfj 2014-10-02T08:23:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ffstar

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ffstar 2014-10-02T04:49:26+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
4 months ago...well here is the mod that was supposed to come 2 month ago xD

[General]
the mp3 quality is a little bad...see if you can ask Xinely for the mp3 and timing on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/417468, its got a much better quality

you are lacking a proper clap sound that follows the drums in the music, put http://puu.sh/bVTkY.wav in your song folder and add claps to locations like 00:33:384, 00:34:884, 00:36:384 etc.

Hitsounds are generally too quiet. 10% sections are unrankable especially given the song's high volume. I would recommend you raise all your volume sections (for all difficulties including guest ones) by 30% to make it safe for ranking i did increase the volume but not by 30% because i think it's too loud for a soft song like this

[ffstar's Normal]
Consider CS3.5 for better spread between the Easy and Hard ok, i increased the AR and OD by 0.5 too
00:24:759 - think the finish fits better here compared to 00:27:759 (1) it did have finish there but it's a drum finish, i would like to keep that and changed 00:27:759 (1) to normal finish make the finish softer
00:43:884 (1) - not really necessary NC here, it adds more confusion since everyone is mentioning this, ok changed
00:51:571 - you could add a note here to follow the vocals better ok, and i hope no one will complain about this. (you can look the previous mod for more detail)
01:05:259 (1,1) - i really dont recommend using spinners here, especially because there are some strict standards going on right now with objects too soon after spinner. Consider mapping this section normally (follow instrumentals or use longer sliders to represent vocals) ok, remove spinner and map follow instrumentals
01:17:259 (1,2,3) - i think this will play better if you arrange it like this:
SPOILER
~~puush is down, i cant see the image, will update it when the puush is up again~~ changed
01:30:009 (5) - NC should start here instead of 01:30:384 (1) fixed
01:44:821 - add a circle? there is a pitch transition here i did add a circle here before, but many people complaint about it, readded
overall the Normal is pretty solid, but for the sake of spread perhaps you can make it slightly harder by using more 1/2 rhythms

Overall the maps are not bad, but more work needs to be done especially for hitsounds. Get a few more mods focusing on hitsounding and consistency, and when you think its ready you can call me back for a recheck.

thanks for the mod!

edit: I also edited some part to increase the difficulty (not much).

updated

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 70509
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:tellertheworld
Version:ffstar's Normal
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
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wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2014-10-10T11:26:22+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
4 months ago...well here is the mod that was supposed to come 2 month ago xD

[wmtokok's Hard]
AR7.5 fits the pacing of this diff better change
00:19:321 (4,5) - i find this jump a bit sudden, how about like this:
SPOILER
NICE
00:47:071 (4) - try x:220 y:292, flows better imo OK
00:56:071 (1,2) - i dont feel like the anti jump fits well here, because the music is emphasizing a transition and this one is toning it down too much. Consider regular spacing or even a jump OK,i will try jump
01:22:134 (2,3) - the finish sound has a slight echo which makes it sound bad when used consecutively, so maybe swap one for whistles OK.i will change (2) to whistles of the tail.
01:44:821 (1) - blanket this properly? fix
Hard maybe a bit too difficult for the spread of this set, mainly because of the use of jumps. You might want to reduce some of them and target for a star rating around 3.2 i try it

thanks jonathanlfj

update

osu file format v13

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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:tellertheworld
Version:wmtokok's Hard
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
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-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-10-12T15:18:15+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
4 months ago...well here is the mod that was supposed to come 2 month ago xD

[General]
the mp3 quality is a little bad...see if you can ask Xinely for the mp3 and timing on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200169, its got a much better quality I will change it

you are lacking a proper clap sound that follows the drums in the music, put http://puu.sh/bVTkY.wav in your song folder and add claps to locations like 00:33:384, 00:34:884, 00:36:384 etc.

Hitsounds are generally too quiet. 10% sections are unrankable especially given the song's high volume. I would recommend you raise all your volume sections (for all difficulties including guest ones) by 30% to make it safe for ranking changed~

[Easy]
00:13:152 (1) - this may be a bit too close to the next slider, try ending it at 00:17:089 to capture the last piano sound instead fixed~
00:18:777 (1) - slider is not snapped fixed~
00:32:259 (1,2) - i would try to construct a blanket here fixed~
00:44:259 (1) - the finish on the end doesnt really fit well imo I thank it is okay, but I will find some people to see that.
00:50:259 (4) - same here ^ , also NC should start here instead of 00:51:759 (1) fixed~
00:53:259 (3) - NC here and remove 00:55:509 (1); then add one at 00:56:259 (2) fixed~
01:09:009 (2,3) - try a rhythm like this:some changed here
SPOILER
01:16:884 (1) - remove NC and place it on 01:17:259 (2) fixed~
01:19:509 (1) - ^ place NC on 01:20:259 (2) fixed~
01:22:884 (1) - ...and so on. The trick here is to set NC only on every other long white tick, which is the ideal position for this song okay~
01:23:259 (2) - finish on end doesnt go well with the song I thank it is okay ._.
01:34:509 (1) - this fits the music better if you shorten it to 01:34:884 I thank it is okay ._.
01:48:009 (2) - this extra repeat mught throw some people off. I would revise the rhythm here:
SPOILER
well, fixed~

[ffstar's Normal]
Consider CS3.5 for better spread between the Easy and Hard
00:24:759 - think the finish fits better here compared to 00:27:759 (1)
00:43:884 (1) - not really necessary NC here, it adds more confusion
00:51:571 - you could add a note here to follow the vocals better
01:05:259 (1,1) - i really dont recommend using spinners here, especially because there are some strict standards going on right now with objects too soon after spinner. Consider mapping this section normally (follow instrumentals or use longer sliders to represent vocals)
01:17:259 (1,2,3) - i think this will play better if you arrange it like this:
SPOILER
01:30:009 (5) - NC should start here instead of 01:30:384 (1)
01:44:821 - add a circle? there is a pitch transition here
overall the Normal is pretty solid, but for the sake of spread perhaps you can make it slightly harder by using more 1/2 rhythms

[wmtokok's Hard]
AR7.5 fits the pacing of this diff better
00:19:321 (4,5) - i find this jump a bit sudden, how about like this:
SPOILER
00:47:071 (4) - try x:220 y:292, flows better imo
00:56:071 (1,2) - i dont feel like the anti jump fits well here, because the music is emphasizing a transition and this one is toning it down too much. Consider regular spacing or even a jump
01:22:134 (2,3) - the finish sound has a slight echo which makes it sound bad when used consecutively, so maybe swap one for whistles
01:44:821 (1) - blanket this properly?
Hard maybe a bit too difficult for the spread of this set, mainly because of the use of jumps. You might want to reduce some of them and target for a star rating around 3.2

[Insane]
The mapping style doesnt work well when used with CS5 imo, i would advise you to use CS4.5 since that balances out the set more changed to CS4.7
00:16:902 (2) - sounds like this should end at 00:17:089 to capture the piano I am not focus the piano ._.
00:44:821 (2,5) - try not to overlap these two I am not overlap here.
00:56:259 (1) - this sv change feels way too extreme, 0.7x or 0.8x would be much more natural change to 0.6X
01:10:884 (1,1) - try moving these two more apart, creates a bigger impact when entering the kiai fixed~
01:12:759 (6) - due to the vocals here it would play better if you used a circle jump pattern instead of the repeat slider yea, fixed~
01:15:571 (7,8,9) - this triplet pattern doesnt play very well compared to other improvised ones, its better if you mapped to the vocals instead: changed~
SPOILER

01:28:884 (2,3,4) - another one thats a bit awkward to play, especially considering the flow onto 01:29:259 (5). Try swapping it for a 1/2 slider changed~
01:38:259 (6) - NC here instead of 01:39:009 (1) fixed~
01:40:321 (3) - try x:240 y:212 fixed~
01:48:196 (3,1) - you could swap this for a 1/6 repeat slider to better represent the music fixed~

Overall the maps are not bad, but more work needs to be done especially for hitsounds. Get a few more mods focusing on hitsounding and consistency, and when you think its ready you can call me back for a recheck.

I will find more modder to mod my map, thank a lot

thank 小星 wntokok 已經UPDATE了

FujimotoSoujiro

12 posts

Joined November 2012

FujimotoSoujiro 2014-10-17T13:45:15+00:00

[Easy]

00:34:884 (4) - 加一個circle
00:35:259 (1) - 這個樣子的slider在整個diff衹有一條，感覺怪怪的

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-10-17T13:46:29+00:00

FujimotoSoujiro wrote:
[Easy]

00:34:884 (4) - 加一個circle
00:35:259 (1) - 這個樣子的slider在整個diff衹有一條，感覺怪怪的

唔該~

wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2015-06-06T09:20:03+00:00

Update a new Hard diff

2015/6/6 update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: marry me.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 70509
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6402,12027,18759,24759,25884,26259,27384,32259,37509,43884,56259,61884,71259,77259,83259,86259,95259,101259,107259
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:-Teina-
Version:wmtokok's Hard
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
BeatmapID:417112
BeatmapSetID:172334

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"marry me.avi"
0,0,"marryme.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 255,60,206
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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-06-06T23:31:08+00:00

first note i think should be more like here or something 00:00:761 - your's is early
from 00:01:152 - to 00:06:402 - try offset -10

insane

00:02:277 (3,1) - swap nc downbeat is here 00:02:277 -
00:05:277 (3,1) - ^
nc on this too 00:06:777 (2) -
00:20:259 (1,2) - antijump doesn't fit too well here because the song doesn't really 'pause'
00:28:134 - why skip this beat :C
00:49:321 (2,3) - these soft default claps really don't sound good..
00:53:352 (1,2) - ^ same, ESPECIALLY since you have one on a random blue tick
01:20:259 (6) - why cant u just use a normal curve? (3 sliderpoints) just remake the slider and ull see
01:26:071 (7,1) - this jump should be bigger imo cuz 1 is an emphasized note

hard

00:46:884 (3,4,1) - this is a bit harsh for a hard diff
01:18:759 - skipping this downbeat felt really weird
01:48:196 (4) - this should be 1/6
hmm slightly too hard for the spread i would go easier on the circle jumps

normal

00:00:730 - the spacing ratio compared to the SV is a bit large.. you have really slow sliders with relatively normal spacing.. also too low sv makes rhythms hard to differentiate
00:44:259 (1,2,3,4,1) - add some 1/1 gaps here please, it's abnormally hard in comparison to the rest of the difficulty
01:08:634 (1,1) - spinner recovery is too short, i would recommend at least 2 beats
01:35:259 - pLEASEE dont skip this finish sound
01:40:509 (3,1) - this type of overlap is rather weird..

easy

00:53:259 (1) - try this rhythm instead. http://puu.sh/if8wl/dc3a584fea.jpg
01:21:384 (2,3) - lets not use 1/2 gapss in easy.
01:34:509 (1,2) - ^
01:48:009 (2,3) - ok you didn't even use 1/2s here in NORMAL

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-06-07T14:50:36+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
normal
00:00:730 - the spacing ratio compared to the SV is a bit large.. you have really slow sliders with relatively normal spacing.. also too low sv makes rhythms hard to differentiate the bpm in that part is different to the others, so i make a slider velocity changes and make the spacing slightly similar to the spacing after that
00:44:259 (1,2,3,4,1) - add some 1/1 gaps here please, it's abnormally hard in comparison to the rest of the difficulty would like to keep this.
01:08:634 (1,1) - spinner recovery is too short, i would recommend at least 2 beats remapped
01:35:259 - pLEASEE dont skip this finish sound i have no idea how to change it, so i would like to keep this
01:40:509 (3,1) - this type of overlap is rather weird.. sorry i hope i can keep this too, it's not hard to read

thanks for the mod!

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wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2015-06-08T13:41:54+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
first note i think should be more like here or something 00:00:761 - your's is early
from 00:01:152 - to 00:06:402 - try offset -10

hard
00:46:884 (3,4,1) - this is a bit harsh for a hard diff fix a DS
01:18:759 - skipping this downbeat felt really weird OK
01:48:196 (4) - this should be 1/6 fix
hmm slightly too hard for the spread i would go easier on the circle jumps I try it

thanks for mod

update

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-Teina-

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Topic Starter

-Teina- 2015-06-09T04:55:25+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
first note i think should be more like here or something 00:00:761 - your's is early
from 00:01:152 - to 00:06:402 - try offset -10

insane
00:02:277 (3,1) - swap nc downbeat is here 00:02:277 -
00:05:277 (3,1) - ^
nc on this too 00:06:777 (2) -
00:20:259 (1,2) - antijump doesn't fit too well here because the song doesn't really 'pause'
00:28:134 - why skip this beat :C
00:49:321 (2,3) - these soft default claps really don't sound good..
00:53:352 (1,2) - ^ same, ESPECIALLY since you have one on a random blue tick
01:20:259 (6) - why cant u just use a normal curve? (3 sliderpoints) just remake the slider and ull see
01:26:071 (7,1) - this jump should be bigger imo cuz 1 is an emphasized note
easy
00:53:259 (1) - try this rhythm instead. http://puu.sh/if8wl/dc3a584fea.jpg
01:21:384 (2,3) - lets not use 1/2 gapss in easy.
01:34:509 (1,2) - ^
01:48:009 (2,3) - ok you didn't even use 1/2s here in NORMAL

Thank your mod~
I had changed something.

Mio_chan

172 posts

Joined July 2010

Mio_chan 2015-06-11T12:06:55+00:00

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[general]
00:06:402 – 紅線應該放喺0:06:777, 咁個重拍先放岩位

[easy]
00:33:759 (3) – 我覺得可以放左多少少，依家同 (1)痴得太埋
01:20:259 (1,2) – 我建議個pattern係咁，對新手黎講易玩D

01:32:259 – 呢度你一係將01:31:884 (3) – 變成一個repeated 1/2 滑條，一係諗辦法加D野喺度，因為vocal呢度好出

[ffstar’s Normal]
00:59:071 – add a note? To fit the vocal
01:07:509 (2,3) – make this two slider curve? Cuz they looks strange with (3)
01:12:009 (2) – extend it to 01:12:571 -? Or add a note there
01:15:571 (4) – ends it at 01:15:946 -, add note at 01:16:134 –
01:27:571 (3,4) – I would map like this

01:41:259 (1,2,3,4,5) – I would map like this

[wmtokok's Hard]
一開始個intro連埋好靜果part vocal果度，我覺得你要諗清楚自己跟緊D咩黎map，我玩左幾次都唔係好知道你follow緊邊樣樂器個節奏，咁樣玩落去會好唔知想點咁。
00:21:759 (1,2,3,4) - 好似咁樣MAP? (我無好小心咁放，純粹比多個idea你諗下)

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00:36:571 – add note, 跟番個琴
01:17:259 (1) –轉做1個1/1 slider好D，跟番主音
01:21:384 (4) –呢個sliders 轉左2個circles，因為主音幾重下，加上後面有跳，有cirlces會比較反映到首歌
01:25:134 (3) - 01:25:321 –呢個位應該至少有個repeated arrows，因為主音
01:18:571 (4,1) – 01:18:759 (1) –放去01:18:571 01:18:571 (4) –放去01:19:134 –
01:32:821 (2,3) – 好似01:18:571 (4,1)咁做
01:38:259 (1) – 轉做1/2 repeated sliders, 跟番bell D聲
01:41:259 (1) – 同上

[Insane]
00:24:759 (1) –個 overlap好核突…
00:25:696 (3,4) – ctrl + G?
00:27:009 (3,4) – 應該同00:25:509 (2,3,4,5) – 一樣咁MAP法會好d
01:35:259 (7) – NC應該放喺度
01:36:009 (2,4) – 呢兩個slider delete左佢，你試下跟keyboard D聲MAP，會好好多
01:38:446 -,01:38:821 – 呢兩個位其實有音，但係你都無放野，其他相同既位記住放番
01:45:571 (1) –轉circles玩落順d
01:48:196 (3) – 呢度係1/6snap，你可以參考番Hard呢度點map

比多少少comment，可能你mapping同玩圖既經驗唔係咁多，我建議你可以試下玩多D唔同既圖，見識下 (新圖舊圖都要玩，唔好玩死一個時段)
因為我覺得呢個map可以整得更加好玩，你下次再MAP其他歌之前可以細心D諗下你每一PART會跟咩樂器，D spacing要有咩變化，諗清楚先MAP，咁個MAP會嚴謹同埋好玩好多，加油

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-06-12T01:53:56+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[ffstar’s Normal]
00:59:071 – add a note? To fit the vocal not sure what you mean but i think there is a slider already
01:07:509 (2,3) – make this two slider curve? Cuz they looks strange with (3) ok
01:12:009 (2) – extend it to 01:12:571 -? Or add a note there too hard, i think follow vocal is enough
01:15:571 (4) – ends it at 01:15:946 -, add note at 01:16:134 – ^
01:27:571 (3,4) – I would map like this ^

01:41:259 (1,2,3,4,5) – I would map like this ^

比多少少comment，可能你mapping同玩圖既經驗唔係咁多，我建議你可以試下玩多D唔同既圖，見識下 (新圖舊圖都要玩，唔好玩死一個時段)
因為我覺得呢個map可以整得更加好玩，你下次再MAP其他歌之前可以細心D諗下你每一PART會跟咩樂器，D spacing要有咩變化，諗清楚先MAP，咁個MAP會嚴謹同埋好玩好多，加油

thanks for the mod.
those suggestion will be nice if this is a Normal+ or Hard diff, so sorry i rejected

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osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 70509
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:-Teina-
Version:ffstar's Normal
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
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wmtokok

490 posts

Joined January 2012

wmtokok 2015-06-12T02:10:38+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[general]
00:06:402 – 紅線應該放喺0:06:777, 咁個重拍先放岩位 fix by -Teina-

[wmtokok's Hard]
一開始個intro連埋好靜果part vocal果度，我覺得你要諗清楚自己跟緊D咩黎map，我玩左幾次都唔係好知道你follow緊邊樣樂器個節奏，咁樣玩落去會好唔知想點咁。
00:21:759 (1,2,3,4) - 好似咁樣MAP? (我無好小心咁放，純粹比多個idea你諗下) 不打算改這個。
SPOILER
00:36:571 – add note, 跟番個琴我想做一點停頓位置，但唔影響完全節奏的，不然一直單點沒意思吧。你看看這個00:42:571　-
01:17:259 (1) –轉做1個1/1 slider好D，跟番主音　這段我打算是做全部跟人聲的。
01:21:384 (4) –呢個sliders 轉左2個circles，因為主音幾重下，加上後面有跳，有cirlces會比較反映到首歌　OK
01:25:134 (3) - 01:25:321 –呢個位應該至少有個repeated arrows，因為主音改了其他方式表示
01:18:571 (4,1) – 01:18:759 (1) –放去01:18:571 01:18:571 (4) –放去01:19:134 –
01:32:821 (2,3) – 好似01:18:571 (4,1)咁做我覺得現在沒有問題
01:38:259 (1) – 轉做1/2 repeated sliders, 跟番bell D聲後面sliders改做圈圈
01:41:259 (1) – 同上這個應該沒問題

比多少少comment，可能你mapping同玩圖既經驗唔係咁多，我建議你可以試下玩多D唔同既圖，見識下 (新圖舊圖都要玩，唔好玩死一個時段)
因為我覺得呢個map可以整得更加好玩，你下次再MAP其他歌之前可以細心D諗下你每一PART會跟咩樂器，D spacing要有咩變化，諗清楚先MAP，咁個MAP會嚴謹同埋好玩好多，加油

我不認同作圖經驗方面。我認為MAP圖主要看個人感覺，風格，個人的節奏方向，所以好難說那一PART跟什麼樂器就是最好。

thanks for mod
@-Teina-:紅線改的話幫我改埋

6/12 update

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 70509
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:-Teina-
Version:wmtokok's Hard
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:ANZIE ensemble wmtokok ffstar0716 Golden marriage
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-Teina-

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-Teina- 2015-06-12T11:30:31+00:00

Mio_chan wrote:
Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢，或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[general]
00:06:402 – 紅線應該放喺0:06:777, 咁個重拍先放岩位

[easy]
00:33:759 (3) – 我覺得可以放左多少少，依家同 (1)痴得太埋 fixed~
01:20:259 (1,2) – 我建議個pattern係咁，對新手黎講易玩D

01:32:259 – 呢度你一係將01:31:884 (3) – 變成一個repeated 1/2 滑條，一係諗辦法加D野喺度，因為vocal呢度好出 fixed~

[Insane]
00:24:759 (1) –個 overlap好核突… 小改動~
00:25:696 (3,4) – ctrl + G?
00:27:009 (3,4) – 應該同00:25:509 (2,3,4,5) – 一樣咁MAP法會好d
01:35:259 (7) – NC應該放喺度 **** my mistake~
01:36:009 (2,4) – 呢兩個slider delete左佢，你試下跟keyboard D聲MAP，會好好多
01:38:446 -,01:38:821 – 呢兩個位其實有音，但係你都無放野，其他相同既位記住放番
01:45:571 (1) –轉circles玩落順d
01:48:196 (3) – 呢度係1/6snap，你可以參考番Hard呢度點map 改左同normal一樣

比多少少comment，可能你mapping同玩圖既經驗唔係咁多，我建議你可以試下玩多D唔同既圖，見識下 (新圖舊圖都要玩，唔好玩死一個時段)
因為我覺得呢個map可以整得更加好玩，你下次再MAP其他歌之前可以細心D諗下你每一PART會跟咩樂器，D spacing要有咩變化，諗清楚先MAP，咁個MAP會嚴謹同埋好玩好多，加油

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