1. Shiki Revive (4.7 stars, 1366 notes)

sjoy wrote:

[Shiki Revive]
00:05:757 (1,2,3,4) - 其实 123算1组 4算1组你这样摆感觉挺奇怪的 說的也是 這四個改了一下位置
00:16:469 (1) - 叠起来感觉很奇怪 建议跳 忘了這邊擺一個跳了
00:30:610 (1) - 红线上有音别漏 好
00:31:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 真心感觉蠢 或許以后會改一下吧(個人也覺得跳太大)，先不動這裡了。
00:51:821 (2) - ctrl+g 好
01:07:783 add a note 感觉更饱满 是可以調，但位置還要大改，先不動這裡了。
01:11:747 (1) - 改成NOTE 發現改note還不錯，fixed.
01:19:246 (2) - 改成2个NOTE 这里有2个音 好
01:46:028 (1) - 同00:30:610 (1) 也改
01:54:812 (1,2,3) - FLOW不好 恩，移動了一點
02:16:371 加个NOTE 是可以調，但位置還要大改，先不動這裡了。
02:20:335 (1) - 改成NOTE 改了
02:27:834 (2) - 改成2个NOTE 这里有2个音 好
02:30:084 加个NOTE 是可以調，但位置還要大改，先不動這裡了。
03:10:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议这样节奏 你这太不爽了 http://puu.sh/8CMRM.jpg 好 勉強接受
03:25:473 (1) - 同00:30:610 (1) 好
03:33:187我 建议你这段用3分音做超有感觉的。4分音完全破坏了 什麼? 這有3分音我怎聽不出來..改了 我只聽到1/8的
剩下都差不多
我太懒 懶JB

sjoy謝了

ZZHBOY wrote:

好

[Shiki Revive]
建议hp6或者更低 hp7有点几把 如果不JB點就不叫APP了
00:02:329 (6) - 试试224丨84 不改，5和6想做對稱。
00:25:789 - 漏音 好
00:46:037 (1) - 可以试试去掉 会更有节奏感 不刪，刪了之後感覺莫名，最後刪了00:46:358 (4) 這note.
00:54:178 (2) - ctrl+g试试 換了，然後這邊幾個objects換動了位置
00:55:357 - 加个圈? 是有聽到一點的音但不是很明顯，所以不加
01:58:883 - 这里感觉可以和01:31:459 用一种节奏感觉好一点 你试试看 好
02:12:622 (1,2,3,4) - 可以跳啊 好吧還是改大間距了
03:05:226 (2,3,1) - 这个距离感觉大了 移近点吧 是不覺得怎樣，但移到了一點位置
03:28:473 (2,3) - 试试再各自前1/4拍的地方加个圈变成二连 感觉还不错 不改，前面sjoy說這邊是1/3，所以不適用這個型式。
04:34:892 (1) - 减少一次折返吧 没必要节奏压那么紧 勉強接受，改了
04:35:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 卧槽 尾杀?太几把 建议ds弄小点 的確超級尾殺梗，先不動這裡，要泡還早，我在想想要怎改這梗才適合音樂。
04:50:975 - 从这里开始漏了不少音 把后面的滑条拆开吧 不了就這樣吧
04:52:689 - 就算是结束了也不能这样漏音wa 再想看看吧

摸的时候一直在看bg video所以摸到现在 美丽惡俗ZZH

axschiming wrote:

IRC0 0
来骗发KD XD

SPOILER

20:13 smallboat: 嗨嗨ax   求摸個app
20:13 axschiming: 哟
20:13 axschiming: np下吧
20:14 *smallboat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/416492 kanonxkanon - Calendula Requiem]
20:15 axschiming: 大概摸不出什么东西;w;
20:15 axschiming: 哇
20:15 axschiming: shiki
20:17 smallboat: lol
20:17 smallboat: 你知道喔.-.
20:18 smallboat: 還有+mv
20:18 axschiming: 见到了
20:18 axschiming: 怪不得那么大
20:18 smallboat: 剛好25m
20:18 smallboat: 跟音效加起來
20:18 smallboat: =.=
20:18 smallboat: 我還把音效剪了
20:18 axschiming: 233
20:19 smallboat: 現在下載是24.7  但是實際容量是25
20:19 axschiming: 我IRC提点意见那样行吗0.0
20:19 smallboat: 好
20:20 axschiming: 我先看看吧
20:20 smallboat: 好
20:20 smallboat: 你錢面不是飛球嗎 先看他的吧
20:21 axschiming: 没有啊
20:21 smallboat: 剛好像看到你摸菲求
20:21 smallboat: 的圖
20:21 axschiming: 我只是看看图
20:21 axschiming: 我没接任何mod
20:21 smallboat: 哦哦
20:21 axschiming: 0 0
20:21 smallboat: Guy斷2個
20:22 axschiming: 连小船也会用短滑条那么丧失的梗
20:22 smallboat: 诶  我也是會用阿...lol
20:22 axschiming: 23
20:22 axschiming: 3
20:22 axschiming: 我还以为你是善良麻婆
20:23 smallboat: 我放的夠近了
20:23 axschiming: 01:17:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3) - 
20:24 axschiming: 这一段啊我觉得能用4个一组摆摆花样的感觉0 0
20:24 axschiming: 那个蓝色的
20:24 smallboat: 藍線?
20:24 axschiming: 不是
20:24 axschiming: 蓝色的note
20:25 axschiming: 1234和5678有点分段感的感觉会更棒的样子0 0
20:26 smallboat: 哦前面的note嗎
20:26 axschiming: 嗯那个蓝色的连打
20:27 smallboat: 如果這樣的話也許要改成滑條.
20:27 smallboat: 或者4到5的note跳一下
20:27 axschiming: 0 0
20:27 axschiming: 等等
20:28 smallboat: 那我再看看這裡吧LOL
20:30 axschiming: 能上Q吗
20:30 smallboat: ?
20:30 smallboat: 我Q都在線
20:30 axschiming: 好
20:30 axschiming: 我发发图你看看大概那个样子好不好
20:30 smallboat: 好
20:45 axschiming: 01:26:317 (1) - 
20:46 axschiming: 0.0
20:46 axschiming: 这里强调一下?
20:47 smallboat: 所謂強調 =大聲點?
20:47 axschiming: 大声也好变速也好0 0
20:47 smallboat: 好
20:48 smallboat: 那麼..或許會做一下
20:48 axschiming: ?
20:48 smallboat: 會修個大聲
20:48 axschiming: 嗯
20:48 axschiming: 突出一下那里就行了
20:48 smallboat: 好
20:48 axschiming: 02:12:622 (1,2,3,4) - 
20:49 axschiming: 这里要不要做个ANTIJUMP梗0 0
20:49 smallboat: 好阿
20:50 axschiming: 02:32:762 (3) -  288,132的位置试试看,其实我只是单纯无聊..无视也可..
20:52 smallboat: ok再看看  因為想壓滑條尾
20:52 axschiming: 嗯
20:52 smallboat: 不過我這樣放又覺得有點近
20:52 smallboat: ol
20:52 smallboat: 我再看看能不能放遠點
20:52 axschiming: 我只是觉得放那里flow好点
20:53 axschiming: 顺便压了那个转角处
20:53 axschiming: lol
20:53 smallboat: 哦  那麼我再想一下 :)
20:54 axschiming: 好
20:54 axschiming: 02:37:368 (3,4,5,6) -
20:54 axschiming: 有点乱哦
20:54 smallboat: 有嗎
20:55 axschiming: 0 0
20:55 axschiming: 个人感觉吧,可能真不乱
20:55 smallboat: 或許我這邊放太多note
20:55 smallboat: 0.0/
20:56 axschiming: 那个串有点歪的样子
20:56 smallboat: 好
20:56 axschiming: 嗯
20:58 axschiming: 02:40:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
20:58 axschiming: 这附近也是和最初说的一样0 0
20:58 smallboat: 0.0
20:58 smallboat: 好
20:59 axschiming: 后四声间距大点试试?
20:59 smallboat: ok可
21:02 axschiming: 03:09:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
21:02 axschiming: 这里有点违和的感觉
21:02 smallboat: ?
21:03 axschiming: 我是不跟主旋律会死斯基
21:03 axschiming: 233
21:03 smallboat: 0.0
21:06 axschiming: 0 0
21:06 axschiming: 我发图给你
21:06 smallboat: 好
21:06 axschiming: 啊你在手机上?
21:06 smallboat: 沒有  在電腦
21:07 axschiming: 啊好
21:13 axschiming: 后面也没啥啦
21:14 axschiming: 就是跟之前差不多的建议0 0
21:14 smallboat: 好0 0
21:14 axschiming: 就酱紫w
21:14 smallboat: 有些劍意好
21:14 axschiming: 咱不会音效
21:14 smallboat: 建議
21:14 smallboat: 好w
21:14 smallboat: 沒關係
21:14 axschiming: 嗯w
21:15 smallboat: 你先過濾一下post吧
21:15 smallboat: w
21:15 smallboat: thx ax
21:15 axschiming: 不客气:D

Kyubey wrote:

Hello, mod due request.
In first, i want to say something about whole map. I've played this map, and i got feel that i played a bunch of innecessary jumps that doesn't fit this map, because it's more calmly. This map was played well, but if jumps weren't here, map would be much better and pleasant for playing with calmly flow. This is your decide, and i understand it, but i want to say that this map doesn't fit the song, because jumps like 01:09:605 (2,3) - this and 01:22:031 (3,4,5,6) - this and other big jumps are too fast for this song and breaks the flow, making player twitch the cursor, when it's not necessary.
This is just my point and you shouldn't get mad because i told it. Now, the mod.
[%diff_name%]
00:01:900 (4,5,6) - these jumps doesn't fit, this is calmly part of song, make something calmer Move a bit.
00:19:469 (1) - how about making it round? Change a curve slider and move a bit.
00:20:326 (3) - and this too, flow will be better ^
00:24:611 (1) - make it smoother a little Change a bit curve in the slider
00:25:897 (6,2) - blanket with these objects will look better fixed
00:55:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i just don't like how it looks and plays, if you don't mind, make (1)s and (2)s spaced a little like here 02:04:052 (1,2) - fixed
01:04:677 (3,4) - try to stack them, because this pattern is confusing a little and even spacing doesn't help, player wants to press (4) later I think it is fine,no hard to read problem.
01:09:605 (2,3) - they're doesn't makes sense, there is 5 notes 1/4 in music starting at 01:09:390 - Sure,then I "ll consider it here,but I think it is fine now.
01:20:103 - there's 5 1/4 notes too ^
02:11:658 (5) - why did you add this beat when 02:11:015 - there's no beat? i think these patterns should be same Have a bit sound in blue line ,so I place a stream here.
02:13:907 (1,2) - looks just bad for me, remind about patterns in 2009, unstack them if you don't mind Sure,no stack and move a bit
02:18:407 - and there's too 5 1/4 notes in rhythm. (don't forget that BATs are very picky about rhythm in approval maps) As the same with 01:09:605
02:32:119 - ^ ^
03:01:477 (2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about such spacing in calm part? Sure,I think it is fine,many people say okay here.
03:04:048 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
03:06:619 (6) - repeat sliders with 2 and more repeats pretty boring to play, try to change it Perhaps I "ll consider it.
03:35:758 (8) - add NC fixed
03:36:615 (1) - remove NC fixed
03:40:900 (7) - add NC fixed
03:41:757 (1) - remove NC fixed
and in following parts too, because these NCs aren't fitting, you should attach them to vocal Okay
04:11:538 - yeah you know As the same with 01:09:605
04:25:251 - and again ^
05:05:545 (2) - add NC fixed

In whole point map is good even with unfitting jumps, good luck with ranking! Thanks!
sad thats you don't use normal-whistles Because the MB is full,so I don"t add this.

Thanks Kyubey ~ !

1. I thought the artist (romanised) is kanon x kanon, well chech the artist and if you still want to keep it the way it is now, add kanon to the tags. So the search will work for those who look for "kanon x kanon" (with spaces).
2. The name of the anime is 屍鬼 and Shiki goes to the tags as a romanised name of the anime. Adding Corpse Demons to the tags is also a good idea, since it's an english-translated title of the anime.

1. Set the tickrate to 1, the current one sounds REALLY confusing during the 1/3 part!
2. 01:10:890 (1,2) - the way how you suddenly switch from jumps to antijumps is bugging me. I see what you're trying to do, but the rhythm of the song does not change here and I'd go on with consistent spacing there to make i more readable.
   Note: 04:46:904 (1,2,3) - same here. Well, you can emphasize the vocals here in a different way! example
3. 03:06:619 (6) - you don't use such sliders a lot and this one confuses me a lot. The second repeat may be a bit unreadable, so I'd replace it with a circle just to make the diff a bit more consistent and intuitively understandable!
4. 03:17:760 (1) - minor - shape of the slider seems a bit messy comparing to the shape of the previous 03:16:903 (1) - not a big deal, but you may want to fix it.
5. 03:58:040 - I would simply finish the spinner here since it sounds quite good with the song and helps to point out the end of the piano-part. Also, it gives some time to recove to the players, which is also awesome for this kind of maps!
   
   As I've told you in game, the spacing in the diff feels really confusing and choppy to me. Even for the Extra/Marathon diff it feels too complicated and not reasonable sometimes, so I recommend you to consider fixing it!

1. 00:23:326 (10,11,12) - Humm.. Try an arrange like this.
   
   
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2. 01:18:068 (4,1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please follow slider?
   
3. 01:19:032 (1) - removeNc? I think no need.
4. 01:44:957 (1) - ^
5. 02:41:760 (3) - too near please use large spacing.
   
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6. 03:10:476 (1) - un snapped.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. I thought the artist (romanised) is kanon x kanon, well chech the artist and if you still want to keep it the way it is now, add kanon to the tags. So the search will work for those who look for "kanon x kanon" (with spaces).Perhaps your suggestion is true,so I change this.
2. The name of the anime is 屍鬼 and Shiki goes to the tags as a romanised name of the anime. Adding Corpse Demons to the tags is also a good idea, since it's an english-translated title of the anime. Okay,add "Corpse Demons" tag.

[Shiki]

1. Set the tickrate to 1, the current one sounds REALLY confusing during the 1/3 part! Okay,fixed.
2. 01:10:890 (1,2) - the way how you suddenly switch from jumps to antijumps is bugging me. I see what you're trying to do, but the rhythm of the song does not change here and I'd go on with consistent spacing there to make i more readable.Move a bit.
   Note: 04:46:904 (1,2,3) - same here. Well, you can emphasize the vocals here in a different way! Sure,change rhythm here.example
3. 03:06:619 (6) - you don't use such sliders a lot and this one confuses me a lot. The second repeat may be a bit unreadable, so I'd replace it with a circle just to make the diff a bit more consistent and intuitively understandable! I consider it.
4. 03:17:760 (1) - minor - shape of the slider seems a bit messy comparing to the shape of the previous 03:16:903 (1) - not a big deal, but you may want to fix it. Sure,change 03:16:903 slider here.
5. 03:58:040 - I would simply finish the spinner here since it sounds quite good with the song and helps to point out the end of the piano-part. Also, it gives some time to recove to the players, which is also awesome for this kind of maps! Perhaps I"ll consider this.
   
   As I've told you in game, the spacing in the diff feels really confusing and choppy to me. Even for the Extra/Marathon diff it feels too complicated and not reasonable sometimes, so I recommend you to consider fixing it! Sure,almost fixed,very thanks !

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks -Bakari- ~ !

Satellite wrote:

Hi

[Shiki Revive]

1. 00:23:326 (10,11,12) - Humm.. Try an arrange like this. fixed.
   
   
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2. 01:18:068 (4,1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please follow slider? fixed,and I"ll fix 1/4 note jump in another part.
   
3. 01:19:032 (1) - removeNc? I think no need. Okay,fixed.
4. 01:44:957 (1) - ^ ^
5. 02:41:760 (3) - too near please use large spacing. Nice!
   
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6. 03:10:476 (1) - un snapped.Forgot notice it,fixed

Fight~~ fighto ~ ! ww

Thanks Satellite ~ !

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

1. I'm quite sure your timing is wrong, try this timing: BPM: 140.000, Offset: 613 (Actually I'm not so sure about this timing, you need a BAT recheck before it goes approved.)
2. Hmm, just a suggesion here, I heard your S:C1 is some kind of Normal sample, maybe you can change this to N:C1, and change S:C2 to S:C1, so you can use soft-whistle in N:C1 to enrich your hitsounds, also it will affect taiko hitsounds too

1. 03:33:829 (3) - 1/3snap please, 移到03:33:901 - 原因不说了，必须得改的。。。
2. 03:44:114 (3) - ^（这个改不改说法不大反正也没啥音，不过在一段1/3的par突然来1/2你自己看吧=。=）
3. 03:11:976 (5,6,1) - 这种是个什么玩意。。。作图带点常识行不
4. 03:57:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里timing不对，这种纯钢琴的part而且一听音就不在线上，建议你好好的仔细测下bpm和offset
5. 04:36:835 - 傻baka？这根红线时间点完全莫名奇妙！本来downbeat位置是对的，这样被你一弄反而不对了。那里是局部强音不等于重音的节奏，别乱改timing。。。。。
6. 03:04:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 串轨节奏差评！
7. 整体节奏太烂，没亮点，而且一会3/4一会1/2听起来十分难听，我指的是KIAI，第一小节3/4+1/2,3/4+1/2可以，但是和第二小节的纯1/2听起来就觉得怪，而且第三小节3个3/4更奇怪，又忽略人声又不对着鼓点，作为自创轨更不合理。建议重新组合下。。。

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

其實我挑不出什麼...

05:05:746 (2,3,4) - 也加大間距 這裡已加
05:09:710 (1) - 在05:13:674 - 完結 OK

謝柚子 ~ !

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

no kd

[Shiki Revive]
00:34:895 (3) - nc 好
03:34:472 (5,6,7) - 像这种地方以及后面一大段我觉得只用这种节奏稍微有点单调的说，我觉得你在这种地方可以多花点心思变点花样，那样更有趣些
整体来说我觉得那种花式的扭曲滑条用的太多，那种滑条感觉用好了不太简单，推荐再多加点简单的滑条摆些简单的排列可以让整张图看上去跟那个自然些
只是我的意见 蠻有用的建議，或許我會把一些部分的滑條形狀改改

gl

謝謝HW ~ !

OniJAM wrote:

From your PM request

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[General]

1. I'm quite sure your timing is wrong, try this timing: BPM: 140.000, Offset: 613 (Actually I'm not so sure about this timing, you need a BAT recheck before it goes approved.)恩我會找445看看測個timing
2. Hmm, just a suggesion here, I heard your S:C1 is some kind of Normal sample, maybe you can change this to N:C1, and change S:C2 to S:C1, so you can use soft-whistle in N:C1 to enrich your hitsounds, also it will affect taiko hitsounds too change hitsound name.

After you fixed these, I'll continue the pattern checkSure

謝謝歐尼醬 ~ !

Fycho wrote:

路过，稍微说几点(非mod，实在有点看不下去了。。。謝謝!
[Shiki Revive]

1. 03:33:829 (3) - 1/3snap please, 移到03:33:901 - 原因不说了，必须得改的。。。說的堆,fix
2. 03:44:114 (3) - ^（这个改不改说法不大反正也没啥音，不过在一段1/3的par突然来1/2你自己看吧=。=）^
3. 03:11:976 (5,6,1) - 这种是个什么玩意。。。作图带点常识行不忘了這是1/4了，remove it.
4. 03:57:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里timing不对，这种纯钢琴的part而且一听音就不在线上，建议你好好的仔细测下bpm和offset 的確有一點錯,有叫445來測但美麗
5. 04:36:835 - 傻baka？这根红线时间点完全莫名奇妙！本来downbeat位置是对的，这样被你一弄反而不对了。那里是局部强音不等于重音的节奏，别乱改timing。。。。。好,remove 這條紅線。
6. 03:04:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 串轨节奏差评！改了一點
7. 整体节奏太烂，没亮点，而且一会3/4一会1/2听起来十分难听，我指的是KIAI，第一小节3/4+1/2,3/4+1/2可以，但是和第二小节的纯1/2听起来就觉得怪，而且第三小节3个3/4更奇怪，又忽略人声又不对着鼓点，作为自创轨更不合理。建议重新组合下。。。這個也懶得大改了,先保留,或許以后我會慢慢改一點節奏

謝了飛球。

Charles445 wrote:

I think add +14, would be better

Sorry,I forget to notice this map,forget give to ur KD

I'll check it soon ! Thanks Chewin suggestion ~ !

(Perhaps I'll replace some parts)

Chewin wrote:

Hello! Sorry for being late with this m4m I'm so late mod reply to this ,too.

General Stuff

1. The video offset is placed too early. if you notice you'll see that the singer starts singing still when there is only melody without vocal LOL. Try to place it at offset: 1057. It looks perfect. Fixed.

Shiki Revive

1. 00:02:343 (6) - What about adding new combo here? New melody is starting just on this downbeat, it'd be cool Fixed.
2. 00:05:342 (4) - This slider flows so bad after the 00:04:057 (1,2,3) ones. I would keep the same logic on this pattern copy-pastying the 00:04:485 (2) like you did for 00:04:057 (1,3) placing it some grid left than 00:04:485 (2). You should fix the 00:05:771 (1) as well if you apply this Consider it.
3. 00:07:056 (4) - What about adding normal sampleset on this slider's tail to fill the drum of the melody? I would set normal sampleset on this finish as well: Fixed.
   
4. 00:07:485 (1). Same for 00:08:342 (3)'s head and so on, like 00:09:199 (1) with all those drum sounds. I won't mention it anymore, I guess you got it Added finish in slider head at 00:08:342 (3) & 00:09:199 (1),fixed.
5. 00:19:269 (6,7,1) - Stack it better Fixed.
6. 00:22:697 (7) - New combo Fixed.
7. 00:35:552 (4) - NC here as well. The melody is different Fixed.
8. 00:54:514 (3,4,5,6,7) - To get a better flow I'd change the position of some elements from 00:54:835 (5). What about making something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789445 ? Flows much better! Feel looks fine now.
   
   SPOILER

   60,156,54835,2,0,L|68:236,1,50
   76,324,55049,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   195,102,55264,1,0,0:0:0:0:

9. 00:58:692 (4) - Move to x:348 y:80 to keep the pattern consistent Fixed.
10. 01:00:941 (2) - This looked kinda unexpected to me, honestly. Move it closer to the previous (1) pls Fixed.
11. 01:38:115 (7) - New combo Fixed.
12. 02:09:529 (2,3) - Make the spacing bigger? So much spacing unconsistency <_< Okay,fixed.
13. 02:31:490 (8,1) - switch ncs Fixed.
14. 03:05:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't understand this overbig and overhuge spacing, honestly... Sounds like this music seems can make jump,so no change this.
15. 03:29:558 Silence this slider's tick, it's confusing, same for 03:30:201 (6), 03:31:915 (4,6) - same and so on Fixed.
16. 03:44:770 (5) - new combo? Fixed.
17. 03:57:126 Add a red line here and set those circles in this way: http://puu.sh/9Z4FD/2ca92867b8.jpg they are actually really off. Moreover, re-add a red line on 03:58:268 (5) Perhaps don't add this,look fine now.
18. 04:55:274 (7) - NC Fixed.
19. 04:57:203 (5,1) - Switch NCs Fixed.

This diff needs more and more work. There are so much inconsistent spacings <_< well, i hope it helped at least, good luck with it!Sure,help a lot ~ ! Thanks Chewin !

1. 第二根红线大丈夫？很多音都off了：02:01:066 - 02:01:495 - 02:01:602 - 02:01:923 - etc.(尤其是clap处特别明显)
2. 建议把HP稍微降一点。app图嘛，何况你这Kiai节奏还难读，还没有break >.<。6~6.5 will be fine.
3. 00:00:629 -> 00:03:200 - 这一段remap一下。这里没有什么节奏，图跟的是很舒缓的乐器，因此距离没必要一开始就那么大，和后面没啥区别。这3秒弄成一个light Insane就好了。
4. 00:55:478 (1,2) - 跟着音乐来讲的话，我这里会弄jump。00:56:335 (1,2) - same 00:57:192 (1,2) - same
5. 01:13:904 (6,1) - Minor. 这两个可以blanket
6. 01:14:761 (2) - 换成1/2slider
7. 01:27:616 (6,1,2) - Minor. Fix the blanket?
8. 01:33:615 (3,4,5) - 节奏为什么不填满？如果说是kiai后的缓和段倒是可以理解，可是01:48:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一段明明节奏不密也不强你又把节奏下这么满。
9. 02:35:347 (2) - Ctrl+G吧，这样距离实在是有点大。
10. 03:57:197 (1,2,3) - 不建议下note。我试了一下，要到1/16才能压得准后面两声钢琴，何必呢，别人根本读不出来。
11. No need to say much about nazi, because it is less important.
12. 关于inconsistent spacing

    1. 00:49:479 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这里的跳跃有点不懂.
    2. 03:01:491 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里的距离不大好理解。光听节奏其实2345只有2有节奏，但是你节奏填满了不说，距离拉那么大可是音乐氛围跟不上。然后就是71这里距离是可以加大的。
    3. 01:05:762 (1,2) - 要我说，你kiai 3/4滑条的距离一直是一个谜>.< 比起把那些大的跳改小，我更支持你把这里的DS改大，让1和2的尾相blanket.
    4. 01:06:619 (3,4) - ^
    5. 全部重新看了一遍之后，发现你3/4slider距离还是比较短的。01:10:047 (3) - 那这个地方应该不止我一个人提吧。
    6. 02:50:350 (1,2,3) - A little bit confusing about distance.
    7. 其实在我的理解当中，consistent spacing的目的就是为了让所有能读的了这个AR的人都能无视Approaching Circle而轻松读图。而不是说需要什么DS作图之类的。其实楼上所说的把AR增高是一个道理。AR高了Approaching Circle自然就更明显一些。
    8. 我还想指出一点：并不是所有player见到散乱的1/4滑条就知道是1/4滑条跳的。不过似乎就目前player community来说，1/4滑条跳距离似乎问题不是很大。