Cherry Blossom wrote:

From my modding queue.
Meramipop ♥ and Dear You o.o

Dear You

1. I liked how you hitsounded this map, glad to see someone else using a hitsound per note o/ but... song folder looks heavy try to make it lighter. I see this problem. but I want keep this hitsounds. if piano hitsounds is long, I will cut length.
2. 00:19:465 (3,4) - wrong rhythm imo because the clap should be clicked here, try to swap these objects like this fixed
   
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3. 00:52:209 (3) - i dont really agree with you here, you can make this 00:52:392 - played and you don't. try to make something like this as you did here : 00:54:953 (2,1) fixed
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4. 01:12:331 (2,3) - this breaks a bit the flow, make this instead ? fixed
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5. 01:25:502 (2,3) - try to avoid the overlap here, looks a bit odd. fixed
6. 02:17:453 (1,2) - looks a bit surprising because of the distance you used here, before and after, try to reduce a bit the distance. fixed
7. 03:02:682 (1) - to emphasize the guitar, i suggest you to make a kind of wub slider like this fixed
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8. 03:20:609 (7,8,1) - i dont recommend this kind of movement, it's kinda breaking it a bit fixed
9. 03:26:096 (5,6) - I prefer to make this instead but it's up to you
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10. 04:05:791 (4,5) - i prefer th star pattern, why don't to swap these objects (ctrl+g) ? fixed
11. 04:07:804 (1,1) - i'd see these both notes stacked, it looks better and neater, but it's up to you. fixed
12. 05:17:499 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it's not really a good idea, this part is realllllly calm, and i have feelings that this looks a bit overkill, make it more calm... fixed

Nice map but needs more mods.
Good Luck ~

1. Source is supposed to be ひぐらしのなく頃に解. Artist himself is reffering the album to ひぐらしのなく頃に解, because it is based on album Thanks/You.
2. Regarding the previous issue, after this we also should fix tags. Firstly the game name, it is supposed to be Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai, as I exlpained above. Secondly the album name. It is not "You Thanks". It is supposed to be exactly that: "Thanks/You". You cannot alter album name as you just wish.
3. Difficulty name is unrankable. Maps for approval must have their difficulty name "Marathon" if they contain only one difficulty. Additionally, dear you is not the right name of the song, why do people keep altering it. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset
4. Add "you" to tags after you deleted wrong album name, since it is name of original song. No, original is not "dear you", that is just another version of the song, not the one this is based on.
5. Tags definitely deserve to contain 07th Expansion, since the game was released only thanks to them.
6. Try to find 1024x768 or 1366x768 background as it is recommended and should be compatible with all resolutions.
7. Just mentioning this because a lot of people don't use it. Ask BAT to change title color so it fits better with your background. Just saying it would be nice, but nothing important anyway. But why not, they don't mind changing it, so you might try. But that's just design detail.

1. The map is way too easy to SS on first try I think. OD+1 might be fine. This song is supposed to be hard, so I think this change will make it a bit more challenging.
2. 00:11:513 (1,2,3) - You had an awesome idea before on 00:09:899 (1,2,3). The BPM went down so you increased spacing so it plays more naturally. Anyway I think you might apply it also to these 3 notes. So it might look like this. http://puu.sh/8XEzi.jpg
3. 00:45:258 (1,1) - Mute the wav file of the tick on this place. This sounds really off and insensible. Muting wav file completely would be unrankable, because you cannot have muted both tick and slide, so at least do this so it doesn't make sound on place where is no sound. But I think it is much easier to use lower tick rate. I might get that hitsound if you ask me in-game or by PM. But maybe even here, I might check it.
4. 01:20:380 (1,1,1,2) - Use regular spacing between these (1,0x), it feels really boring for such a map. Waiting till slider appears just right under it for years might have disappointing expression.
5. 01:24:770 (1) - Giving a shape to this slider might be a cool gradient between piano part and the lively part. http://puu.sh/8XFvc.jpg
6. 01:24:770 (1) - Hitsounds of this whole map are just... so cool. So I wanted to remind one thing. 01:24:770 (1) - 01:24:770 (1) contains sound similar to sliderslide. What about adding that noisy sliderslide to this part? It's not bad hitsound, definitely not, but is less used, because it just makes noise where we don't want it, but this part is just made for that. Maybe consider this just for this part.
7. 01:53:307 (2,1) - Avoid the overlap by moving it a bit left. You didn't use overlaps before, and this is not even intelligent, so I think it should be just avoided.
8. 02:16:172 - Oh.. yeah, that's it. In previous piano part, you used another slidertick sound. This one is hard to hear, so use this even in previous one, which I mentioned before.
9. 00:11:996 (2) - You made red line for this note, but placed it out. It is supposed to be on 00:11:998, where the timing point is.
10. 00:15:990 - 2 timing points on same place are unrakable. I know you wanted just to activate kiai for a blink, but it is enough to remove green point on 00:15:990 and add kiai on the red point. It is unrankable to use two timing points on one place. Only rankable situation is when you place green and red line to change slider velocity, but you just used it for kiai. Just remove green, put kiai on red. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing
11. 02:28:292 - Same applies to this. Remove the green line, set 85% volume to red one and put kiai on that.

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Source is supposed to be ひぐらしのなく頃に解. Artist himself is reffering the album to ひぐらしのなく頃に解, because it is based on album Thanks/You. fixed
2. Regarding the previous issue, after this we also should fix tags. Firstly the game name, it is supposed to be Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai, as I exlpained above. Secondly the album name. It is not "You Thanks". It is supposed to be exactly that: "Thanks/You". You cannot alter album name as you just wish. fixed
3. Difficulty name is unrankable. Maps for approval must have their difficulty name "Marathon" if they contain only one difficulty. Additionally, dear you is not the right name of the song, why do people keep altering it. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset Not unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/187555&start=0
4. Add "you" to tags after you deleted wrong album name, since it is name of original song. No, original is not "dear you", that is just another version of the song, not the one this is based on. fixed
5. Tags definitely deserve to contain 07th Expansion, since the game was released only thanks to them. fixed
6. Try to find 1024x768 or 1366x768 background as it is recommended and should be compatible with all resolutions. I already looked for BG. but I couldn't find.
7. Just mentioning this because a lot of people don't use it. Ask BAT to change title color so it fits better with your background. Just saying it would be nice, but nothing important anyway. But why not, they don't mind changing it, so you might try. But that's just design detail. I didn't know it until now. ok I'll ask BAT after get Ranked

Dear you

1. The map is way too easy to SS on first try I think. OD+1 might be fine. This song is supposed to be hard, so I think this change will make it a bit more challenging.
2. 00:11:513 (1,2,3) - You had an awesome idea before on 00:09:899 (1,2,3). The BPM went down so you increased spacing so it plays more naturally. Anyway I think you might apply it also to these 3 notes. So it might look like this. http://puu.sh/8XEzi.jpg fixed
3. 00:45:258 (1,1) - Mute the wav file of the tick on this place. This sounds really off and insensible. Muting wav file completely would be unrankable, because you cannot have muted both tick and slide, so at least do this so it doesn't make sound on place where is no sound. But I think it is much easier to use lower tick rate. I might get that hitsound if you ask me in-game or by PM. But maybe even here, I might check it. I know. cuz I put green lins to vol.5%.
4. 01:20:380 (1,1,1,2) - Use regular spacing between these (1,0x), it feels really boring for such a map. Waiting till slider appears just right under it for years might have disappointing expression. I want stack these. 01:14:526 (1,1,1,1) -
5. 01:24:770 (1) - Giving a shape to this slider might be a cool gradient between piano part and the lively part. http://puu.sh/8XFvc.jpg fixed
6. 01:24:770 (1) - Hitsounds of this whole map are just... so cool. So I wanted to remind one thing. 01:24:770 (1) - 01:24:770 (1) contains sound similar to sliderslide. What about adding that noisy sliderslide to this part? It's not bad hitsound, definitely not, but is less used, because it just makes noise where we don't want it, but this part is just made for that. Maybe consider this just for this part.
7. 01:53:307 (2,1) - Avoid the overlap by moving it a bit left. You didn't use overlaps before, and this is not even intelligent, so I think it should be just avoided. fixed
8. 02:16:172 - Oh.. yeah, that's it. In previous piano part, you used another slidertick sound. This one is hard to hear, so use this even in previous one, which I mentioned before. I don't use tick sound here. Maybe I have misunderstood.
9. 00:11:996 (2) - You made red line for this note, but placed it out. It is supposed to be on 00:11:998, where the timing point is. fixed
10. 00:15:990 - 2 timing points on same place are unrakable. I know you wanted just to activate kiai for a blink, but it is enough to remove green point on 00:15:990 and add kiai on the red point. It is unrankable to use two timing points on one place. Only rankable situation is when you place green and red line to change slider velocity, but you just used it for kiai. Just remove green, put kiai on red. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing Not unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634732　(sorry in Japanese.)
11. 02:28:292 - Same applies to this. Remove the green line, set 85% volume to red one and put kiai on that. Same above.

Seems like a promising map. I mentioned just the important things. I won't throw detailism on you, it is rankable even without polishing every single thing, honestly it wouldn't need much of it. Good luck, I'll give a star after I have kd.

1. 00:40:868 (1) - tick音が入ってるのはミス？前半同様消したほうがいいかも？
2. 00:45:258 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:721 (1) - ^ 以後指摘なし。
4. 00:53:672 (2) - リバース地点が見づらくなってるのでできればスタックしないほうが好ましいです
5. 01:01:355 (1) - こんな感じでgrid使うと綺麗に作れてblanket等も意識しやすく、見やすくなりますが、どうでしょうか？
   
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6. 01:31:721 (4) - 3からの微妙な距離と次の1へのFlowがあんまり綺麗には見えませんでした、こんな感じはどうですか？
   
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7. 01:39:404 (1,2) - ここは配置するためにDSが大幅に崩れてるような気がしました。01:43:611 (6,1,2) - ここと似たようなDSで配置したほうがユーザーも迷い泣くプレイすることができると思います。
8. 02:00:258 (3,4) - 02:00:989 (3,4) - 3と4だけCtrl+Gしてみませんか？今のままでも十分ですが。
9. 02:32:133 (4) - こういうところのDSの崩れは意図的でしょうか？私はこういった箇所はきっちりDSで配置するべきだと思いました。
10. 02:35:792 (2,3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが曲調的にも流れ的にも綺麗だと思います、試してみてください。
11. 03:57:926 (3,4,5) - 現状ではあまり綺麗な流れにはおもえませんでした、このようなパターンはどうでしょうか？
    
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12. 04:21:340 (3,4) - 叩きづらいと思います。急に縮こまったような配置に感じました。

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Satellite wrote:

Hi

[Dear You]

1. 00:40:868 (1) - tick音が入ってるのはミス？前半同様消したほうがいいかも？ 最初はBPM82だからtick入らなかったんですが、この指摘はBPM164で0.5×のスライダーを使用しているので入ってしまいます。vol5%でも聞こえるのでできるかぎり最小にしてます。
2. 00:45:258 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:721 (1) - ^ 以後指摘なし。
4. 00:53:672 (2) - リバース地点が見づらくなってるのでできればスタックしないほうが好ましいです fixed
5. 01:01:355 (1) - こんな感じでgrid使うと綺麗に作れてblanket等も意識しやすく、見やすくなりますが、どうでしょうか？ fixed
   
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6. 01:31:721 (4) - 3からの微妙な距離と次の1へのFlowがあんまり綺麗には見えませんでした、こんな感じはどうですか？ fixed
   
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7. 01:39:404 (1,2) - ここは配置するためにDSが大幅に崩れてるような気がしました。01:43:611 (6,1,2) - ここと似たようなDSで配置したほうがユーザーも迷い泣くプレイすることができると思います。 fixed
8. 02:00:258 (3,4) - 02:00:989 (3,4) - 3と4だけCtrl+Gしてみませんか？今のままでも十分ですが。 fixed
9. 02:32:133 (4) - こういうところのDSの崩れは意図的でしょうか？私はこういった箇所はきっちりDSで配置するべきだと思いました。 fixed 02:31:950 (3) - を後から配置しなおした時にズレてしまいました
10. 02:35:792 (2,3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが曲調的にも流れ的にも綺麗だと思います、試してみてください。 fixed
11. 03:57:926 (3,4,5) - 現状ではあまり綺麗な流れにはおもえませんでした、このようなパターンはどうでしょうか？ fixed
    
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12. 04:21:340 (3,4) - 叩きづらいと思います。急に縮こまったような配置に感じました。fixed

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wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
fine

[Dear you]
00:45:441 - 00:47:270 - the ticks sound really odd to me in this part, they don't fit the song at all. I suggest to turn the volume to 5% for them I already turn vol.5%
01:20:563 - ^ same above.
02:00:989 (3,4) - ctrl+g on them? use the similar pattern as 02:00:258 (3,4) - is better imo
02:29:755 (1) - this slider's reverse arrow is totally hidden but the hitburst of 02:29:389 (5) - , it's really hard to read and play.. you need to fix this
02:39:359 (4,5,6) - this 3 drum hitsounds sound really too loud to me.. they don't fit the song imo. why not turn the volume down a bit here?
02:50:974 (3) - this slider shape can be more smoothly imo, make it more like "S"?
03:34:328 - same as 00:45:441 - same above.
04:41:462 (1) - this slider is nearly out of the screen.. hope you can put it up a bit
05:18:048 - 05:20:974 - 50% for hitnormal in this part is too huge imo. they sound really loud cuz there's the only vocal track playing in this part. consider to turn the volume down a bit?
05:25:107 - I really hope we can use 0% volume for the end, but well, rules are rules

great hitsounding thanks!
feel free to call me back

1. 00:22:026 - IMO, this is not separate here. You can try this.
   
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2. 01:03:368 - add note? ^
3. 01:49:282 (1) - remove NC
4. 04:01:584 (1) - remove this slider? because you are space at 04:00:852 - but you did not space at 04:01:584 - . it is strange. It can outstanding 04:01:950 (1) - if you change this.
5. 04:38:535 (1,2) - IMO, they should be near. (You can no change for this)
   
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tellertheworld wrote:

NO KDS~ (I had gotten it after my timing check)

Hey~ keko-san

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Gerenal]

1. You should add one more break time after half as well.

No need imo.

[Dear you]

1. 00:22:026 - IMO, this is not separate here. You can try this. No change. I can't hear clear sound at 00:22:026 - .
   
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2. 01:03:368 - add note? ^ No change. same above.
3. 01:49:282 (1) - remove NC No change. changed SV here.
4. 04:01:584 (1) - remove this slider? because you are space at 04:00:852 - but you did not space at 04:01:584 - . it is strange. It can outstanding 04:01:950 (1) - if you change this. 04:00:852 - is no sound here. 04:01:584 (1) - is lyrics follow.
5. 04:38:535 (1,2) - IMO, they should be near. (You can no change for this) No change. lyrics follow.
   
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Not bad~

Good luck

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.

[Dear you]

1. 00:35:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you are trying to do, but the flow here doesn't look good, in my opinion. I would suggest changing the pattern with another flow like silder - note -slider or note - note -slider etc.
2. 00:45:258 (1,1) - well, I think the slidetick was already 5% volumn, but it is still quite obvious to listen. I would suggest changing this to notes, but this depends on you.
3. 01:25:868 (3) - How about curving this slider to a certain extent? Some like this: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699026
4. 03:26:096 (5,6) - hum, I would think that a 1/4 jump here wouldn't be a nice choice, as this is the only one 1/4 jump in this map. How about changing it to triplet notes or slider for consistency? Or at least make the slider like this for the sake of aesthetic? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699100 . But if you listen to it carefully, this should be 1/3, but 1/4 triplet is still acceptable here. Your choice.
5. 05:04:877 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169912 Consider this?
6. 05:07:072 (2) - How about making it parallel with 05:06:340 (1) - ?

ISLANDERS wrote:

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TKS wrote:

omedetou gozaimasu!