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Normal
00:27:017 (1,2) - Blanket these objects
00:29:830 (4) - Make this into repeat slider
00:34:517 (1,2,3) - Make this flow well, perhaps into a v pattern or something
00:38:033 (1,2) - Curve these sliders
00:42:252 (1,2,3) - Improve the flow of 1>2, make 3 curved to flow it better from 2>3
00:45:298 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8JWgi.png
00:52:564 (1,2,3) - This just doesn't work. It's too square. I suggest remapping this entire difficulty, using more sliders that are curved and flow well. Flow is very important!
00:54:908 (4,1) - ew straight
01:02:408 (4) - Could have been curved
01:03:345 (5,1) - Fix the flow, this flows very bad
01:08:267 (3,4) - Blanket this
01:10:845 (7,1) - Improve the flow
01:13:189 (3,4) - Improve the flow
01:17:877 (2) - Curve
01:20:220 (2) - Curved sliders look like http://puu.sh/8JWMt.jpg
01:22:564 (6,1) - Blanket
01:23:970 (2) - Make this symmetrical to 1
01:24:908 (3) - Blanket like http://puu.sh/8JWPO.png
01:26:314 (4,1) - Blanket
01:28:658 (3,4) - Fix the flow
01:30:533 (2,1) - Blanket
01:32:408 (1,2) - Curve
01:35:689 (3,1) - Blanket
01:38:033 - Repeat (1) once, add a note at this timestamp.
01:49:283 (1,1) - Make this into one big spinner
01:54:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this less square. Fix the flow please. Rest of the map applies the same thing. You know the drill by now.

Actually, hard and insane both suffer from the same problems. I could write a full mod, but that'd be redundant. I can help you map some things if you just PM me.

Don wrote:

Normal
00:27:017 (1,2) - Blanket these objects
00:29:830 (4) - Make this into repeat slider
00:34:517 (1,2,3) - Make this flow well, perhaps into a v pattern or something
00:38:033 (1,2) - Curve these sliders
00:42:252 (1,2,3) - Improve the flow of 1>2, make 3 curved to flow it better from 2>3
00:45:298 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8JWgi.png
00:52:564 (1,2,3) - This just doesn't work. It's too square. I suggest remapping this entire difficulty, using more sliders that are curved and flow well. Flow is very important!
00:54:908 (4,1) - ew straight
01:02:408 (4) - Could have been curved
01:03:345 (5,1) - Fix the flow, this flows very bad
01:08:267 (3,4) - Blanket this
01:10:845 (7,1) - Improve the flow
01:13:189 (3,4) - Improve the flow
01:17:877 (2) - Curve
01:20:220 (2) - Curved sliders look like http://puu.sh/8JWMt.jpg
01:22:564 (6,1) - Blanket
01:23:970 (2) - Make this symmetrical to 1
01:24:908 (3) - Blanket like http://puu.sh/8JWPO.png
01:26:314 (4,1) - Blanket
01:28:658 (3,4) - Fix the flow
01:30:533 (2,1) - Blanket
01:32:408 (1,2) - Curve
01:35:689 (3,1) - Blanket
01:38:033 - Repeat (1) once, add a note at this timestamp.
01:49:283 (1,1) - Make this into one big spinner
01:54:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this less square. Fix the flow please. Rest of the map applies the same thing. You know the drill by now.

Actually, hard and insane both suffer from the same problems. I could write a full mod, but that'd be redundant. I can help you map some things if you just PM me.

I fixed everything I could understand.
Thanks for mod!

hi hi ~
m4m as your request in my queue :3

looks like you are a new on mapping here, so i will throw out some general suggestion here

[General]
remove "fluffthoughts" from the tags since it's already on title
your mp3 bit rate is 320kbps. please convert it to 192kbps
your BG is kinda too small which is unrankable. try to find another BG with the dimension 1366x724 or 1024x768
disable "widescreen support" since you dont have SB
errrr 6 combo colours? that's too much. 4 is enough

[Unfluffy]
make sure you are always using "distance snap" all time. and also use very small grid size to make it easier to put note, so you can keep the distance same each note
don't use any slider multiplier on this diff pls as example in 00:45:533. just make it all same 1.00x
change the slider tick rate to 1
change this diff name to "Easy" please. a custom diff name is only permitted to the hardest diff one
increase the OD and HP+1
00:31:002 (1) - this circle is touching the previous slider body. this is called overlap and it's not allowed in easy diff which means unrankable stuff. make sure to move this note elsewhere
00:38:970 (2) - this note has different distance to the previous and the next note, this can confuse the beginner. make it 0.8x as your default distance
00:45:533 - 01:00:533 - this part should be kiai time. this apply to other diffs too
01:08:970 (2) - this slider's tail is out of playfield because you put this slider tail off from the grid

[Normal]
your difficulty setting is really wrong. make it HP 4, CS 3, AR 5, and OD 4
your Slider Velocity is same with hard diff, make it lower for better spread
same as easy about distance snap and slider velocity issues
00:46:002 (2) - an overlap like i mentioned on easy
00:59:830 (2) - too much reverse. it's too hard for normal diff. better to change this

sorry i will stop here. doesn't mean im lazy but im just not good enough at giving a properly suggestion on new mapper orz
this map needs a lot of work. try looking at other map to see how should be a diff mapped.
my friend told me that sometimes a remap can be more useful than a thousand of modding. i know you can improve D:

good luck

Vhy wrote:

hi hi ~
m4m as your request in my queue :3

looks like you are a new on mapping here, so i will throw out some general suggestion here

[General]
remove "fluffthoughts" from the tags since it's already on title
your mp3 bit rate is 320kbps. please convert it to 192kbps
your BG is kinda too small which is unrankable. try to find another BG with the dimension 1366x724 or 1024x768
disable "widescreen support" since you dont have SB
errrr 6 combo colours? that's too much. 4 is enough

[Unfluffy]
make sure you are always using "distance snap" all time. and also use very small grid size to make it easier to put note, so you can keep the distance same each note
don't use any slider multiplier on this diff pls as example in 00:45:533. just make it all same 1.00x
change the slider tick rate to 1
change this diff name to "Easy" please. a custom diff name is only permitted to the hardest diff one
increase the OD and HP+1
00:31:002 (1) - this circle is touching the previous slider body. this is called overlap and it's not allowed in easy diff which means unrankable stuff. make sure to move this note elsewhere
00:38:970 (2) - this note has different distance to the previous and the next note, this can confuse the beginner. make it 0.8x as your default distance
00:45:533 - 01:00:533 - this part should be kiai time. this apply to other diffs too
01:08:970 (2) - this slider's tail is out of playfield because you put this slider tail off from the grid

[Normal]
your difficulty setting is really wrong. make it HP 4, CS 3, AR 5, and OD 4
your Slider Velocity is same with hard diff, make it lower for better spread
same as easy about distance snap and slider velocity issues
00:46:002 (2) - an overlap like i mentioned on easy
00:59:830 (2) - too much reverse. it's too hard for normal diff. better to change this

sorry i will stop here. doesn't mean im lazy but im just not good enough at giving a properly suggestion on new mapper orz
this map needs a lot of work. try looking at other map to see how should be a diff mapped.
my friend told me that sometimes a remap can be more useful than a thousand of modding. i know you can improve D:

good luck

I'll start remapping now.
Thanks for mod.

Request for my M4M queue.
Sorry i'll be quick because there is too much to say.


It's might be hard, but you need to work a lot on your rhythm and placement (blanket, overlap, DS, etc...).
My mod is a little short, but there is too much to say what need to ba changed. So go look how some maps from your favourites mappers, and look how they are constructed to take example from it.

If you have some questions, you can ask me in-game ofc.
Good luck.

Nozhomi wrote:

Request for my M4M queue.
Sorry i'll be quick because there is too much to say.

- General :

1. Your background is...horrible. This resolution is too low. Find one like this but with a better resolution please.

- Very Fluffy

1. If this diff is like an insane, AR = 8 or 9 is better.
2. Distance spacing is too low.
3. 01:26:548 (4,5)- Blanket.
4. 01:34:752- Add hit circle here.
5. 01:45:533- ^
6. 02:31:002 (5)- Don't think need a lower SV here.
7. You need to rework your rhythm and placement.

- Hard :

1. For this diff, an AR like 7 or 8 is better.
2. OD = 6 or 7
3. Your distance spacing is too low. It's common for a hard diff to get DS between x1 and x1.3 (you can have some exeption but not all long).
4. Also your DS need to have more consistancy. Sometime it change from x0.8 to 0.7 for no reason. Take care of it.
5. You've got too much overlap. You need to fix them.
6. 00:41:783- Add hit circle here.
7. 00:47:408- Remove NC and add it at 00:49:283- and remove this just after.
8. 01:37:564 (1,1,1)- Remove these NC pls.
9. 02:04:752 (2,3)- Good example of really bad overlap.
10. 02:24:439 (1,1,1)- Remove these NC pls.

- Normal :

1. OD is too low. OD = 3 is better for a normal / HP = 4 is better / CS = 3 is better but maybe it's ok.
2. Once again, fix your overlap like at 00:45:298 (1,2)- or 00:50:220 (1,2)-

- Unfluffy :

1. Fix these overlap like other diffs.

It's might be hard, but you need to work a lot on your rhythm and placement (blanket, overlap, DS, etc...).
My mod is a little short, but there is too much to say what need to ba changed. So go look how some maps from your favourites mappers, and look how they are constructed to take example from it.

If you have some questions, you can ask me in-game ofc.
Good luck.

OK, I was remapping some of it already
Thank you!

I suggested to change quite a lot, but I honestly think this is pretty good map.
Godd luck!

Jaltzu wrote:

EASY

00:23:033 (1) - Try Tweaking the slider so that both head and tail are at the y-axis
00:29:830 (1) - No NC
00:31:002 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:36:158 (3,1,2) - Move these so that 00:36:627 (1,2) - are at the same level as 00:34:752 (1,2)
00:36:627 (1,1) - Proper blanket?
00:40:377 (1) - No NC. Try to make this stack with 00:36:627 (1) - head
00:43:658 (1) - No NC
00:47:408 (1) - ↑↑
00:48:814 (1) - ↑↑
00:49:283 (2) - NC
00:50:220 (1) - No NC
00:50:220 (1) - Move this to same level as 00:47:408 (1): http://puu.sh/aqyHD/d9b6738017.jpg
00:54:908 (1) - Move this better to the center of this pattern: 00:52:564 (1,2) => http://puu.sh/aqyNg/9c1adb781f.jpg
01:00:064 (1,1) - Fix blanket
01:02:408 (3,1) - ↑↑
01:03:814 - 01:04:048 - Slider
01:04:517 - 01:04:752 - ↑↑
01:10:377 (1) - No NC
01:11:783 (2) - NC
01:12:252 (1) - No NC
01:17:877 (1) - No NC
01:19:283 (2) - NC
01:19:752 (1) - No NC
01:22:095 (3) - Flip vertically
01:24:908 (1) - No NC
01:24:908 (1,1) - Blanket
01:24:908 (1) - Move to the center of 01:30:064 (1,2) - shape
01:51:158 (1) - End this slider at 01:53:970 and add a circle to 01:54:908. Add finish-hitsound to that circle. http://puu.sh/aqzbc/456f8b4c51.jpg
02:11:783 (1) - Move to x:344 and y:232. Remove NC

NORMAL

There's one DS error in AiMod: 01:22:095 (3,4) - Too close to each other.
00:25:377 (1) - No NC
00:26:783 (2,2) - Blanket
00:26:783 (2) - NC
00:27:252 (1) - No NC
00:30:767 - 00:31:002 - Slider
00:32:877 (1) - No NC
00:34:283 (2) - NC
00:34:752 (1) - No NC
00:39:439 (3) - Fix Blanket
00:40:377 (1) - No NC
00:40:845 (2,2) - Copy 00:42:252 (2) - > paste to 00:40:845, remove repeat and flip vertically -> mirrored pattern: http://puu.sh/aqzKD/e126a54ac9.jpg
00:44:127 (2) - Make this slider curved.
00:47:408 (1) - No NC
00:51:158 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/aqzPT/a67b088a20.jpg
01:00:064 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from all of those.
01:01:002 (1) - Flip horizontally + rotate 90° clockwise
01:04:752 (1,2) - Blanket
01:08:502 (1,2) - ↑↑
01:13:189 (3) - Move to x:232 y:296
01:13:189 (3,1) - Blanket
01:19:752 (2,1) - ↑↑
01:31:470 (2) - Move to x:208 y:192
01:36:158 (3) - Flip vertically + rotate 45 anticw
01:37:564 (1,1,1) - No NC
01:55:377 (1) - Flip vertically
01:57:252 (4) - ↑↑
02:16:002 (5,1) - Make a blanket. After that make 02:16:939 (1) - start from the same point as 02:16:002 (5) to keep that blanketed.
02:22:095 (2) - Make this slider's tail better blanketed with 02:20:689 (1)
02:23:970 (4) - NC
02:24:205 (1,1) - No NC
02:28:658 (1,2) - Small fix to blanket
02:38:970 (4) - NC

HARD

00:23:970 (3,4) - Don't stack
00:25:845 (3,4) - ↑↑
00:26:314 (5) - Curve this upwards
00:27:955 (4,5) - Fix blanket
00:37:916 (5) - Delete slider. Add a circle to 00:38:033
00:40:377 (1,2) - Don't stack
00:44:947 (4,5) - Stack
00:45:298 (1) - Flip vertically
00:48:580 (1) - ↑↑
00:50:923 (2) - ↑↑
01:00:064 (1,1,1) - No NC
01:00:767 (1) - Make this straight
01:01:470 (2,3) - Don't stack
01:17:877 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:32:408 (1) - Flip vertically
01:37:564 (1,1,1) - No NC
01:51:275 (1) - End slider at 01:53:970. Add slider 01:54:205 - 01:54:439 and repeat. Add circle to 01:54:908.
01:56:783 (1,2) - Fix blanket
02:11:548 (6,1) - Blanket
02:13:189 (1,2) - ↑↑
02:24:439 (1,1,1) - No NC

FLUFFY

CS4, AR8, OD8
DS1,0 or more
00:23:970 (3,5) - Fix blanket
00:45:298 (1) - This slider shape is annoying
01:00:181 (1,1) - No NC
01:20:220 (4) - Make this curved and blanket with 01:20:923 (1)
01:34:986 (1,2) - Move so that 01:34:752 (8,2) - will stack
01:37:681 (1,1) - No NC
02:04:752 (2) - Less repeats, plz
02:09:205 (2,3) - Don't stack
02:12:252 (2) - Move to x:496 and y:184
02:21:392 (6,2) - Stack
02:22:564 (3) - Flip vertically
02:24:439 (1,1,1) - No NC

I suggested to change quite a lot, but I honestly think this is pretty good map.
Godd luck!

I fixed most of it.
Thank you so much!

From my modding queue ~ :3
[General]

1. Add ''Vocaloid'' into the tags, because Miku is an Vocaloid ofc ~

[Easy]

1. 00:23:033 (1,2,3,1) - You missing finish on (1)'s tail (The first slider) and also, the flow kinda looks awful, I would suggest that you do something like this:

1. 00:27:252 (1) - Maybe add a whistle?
2. 00:29:830 (4,1,2) - Same thing here, weird flow, try to use something like this:

1. 00:33:814 (2) - Move to x:343 y:198 for better blanket with (1) ~
2. 00:33:814 (2,3) - Remove stack, cause its hard to read for beginners ~
3. 00:40:377 (2) - Maybe stack with (5) ?
4. 00:40:845 (3,4) - Remove stack, cause its hard to read for beginners ~
5. 00:42:720 (2,3) Make them both curve ?
6. 00:51:627 - Add note ?
7. 00:57:720 (1,2) - Have slider curve like this is unrankable, please make them less curve ~
8. 01:01:002 (1) - ^
9. 01:02:877 (1) - ^
10. 01:04:752 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
11. 01:17:877 (4) - Copy this and pasted at 01:19:752 (2) cause having a slider like (2) is kinda of weird ~
12. 02:07:095 (1,2) - Like I said before, make it less curve ~
13. 02:10:377 (2,1) - ^
14. 02:29:127 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~

[Normal]

1. 00:29:830 (1) - Remove finish at the end of the slider, its not necessary ~
2. 00:38:502 (1,2) - Weird flow, try to use something like this:

1. 00:53:970 (1) - Weird shape, please use this:

1. 01:00:064 (1,1,1) - Remove NC, cause its confusing to have NC like this ~
2. 01:06:158 (3) - Move to x:368 y:56 for a better flow ~
3. 01:37:564 (1,1,1) - Like I said before, remove NC, and also, make the notes curve ?
4. 02:07:095 (2) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
5. 02:16:939 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
6. 02:38:970 (1,2) - Remove stack, cause it looks weird like this ~

[Hard]

1. 00:23:267 (2,3) - Improve blanket
2. 00:56:314 (4) - Make it more curve ?
3. 01:00:064 (1,1,1) - Remove NC, cause its confusing to have NC like this ~
4. 01:27:252 (3) - Stack with 01:25:611 (2)'s head ?
5. 01:37:564 (1,1,1) - Like I said before, remove NC, and also, make the notes curve ?
6. 01:55:377 (2) - Make it less curve, you know why, cause I said it before ~
7. 02:05:689 (3) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
8. 02:06:861 (1,2,3,4) - Improve blanket ~
9. 02:14:595 (1,2) - Make them more curve and then improve blanket ~
10. 02:16:705 (1) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
11. 02:17:877 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
12. 02:19:283 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:23:033 (3,4) - ^
14. 02:23:940 (4,1,2,3,4) - Weird jump, try to use something like this:

[Fluffy]

1. 00:50:220 (1,2,3,4) - Remove stack, cause its unreadable ~
2. 01:28:892 (4) - Make it less curve, because I said it before the reason ~
3. 01:44:595 (2) - Make it with 1 repeat ~
4. 01:48:345 (4) - ^
5. 02:24:439 (1,1,1) - Remove NC ~
6. Well.. I dunno what should I say.. I hate to scare you but, you need to work alot on this diff, cause its unrankable ;_;

Good luck ~ !

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my modding queue ~ :3
[General]

1. Add ''Vocaloid'' into the tags, because Miku is an Vocaloid ofc ~

[Easy]

1. 00:23:033 (1,2,3,1) - You missing finish on (1)'s tail (The first slider) and also, the flow kinda looks awful, I would suggest that you do something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:27:252 (1) - Maybe add a whistle?
2. 00:29:830 (4,1,2) - Same thing here, weird flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:33:814 (2) - Move to x:343 y:198 for better blanket with (1) ~
2. 00:33:814 (2,3) - Remove stack, cause its hard to read for beginners ~
3. 00:40:377 (2) - Maybe stack with (5) ?
4. 00:40:845 (3,4) - Remove stack, cause its hard to read for beginners ~
5. 00:42:720 (2,3) Make them both curve ?
6. 00:51:627 - Add note ?
7. 00:57:720 (1,2) - Have slider curve like this is unrankable, please make them less curve ~
8. 01:01:002 (1) - ^
9. 01:02:877 (1) - ^
10. 01:04:752 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
11. 01:17:877 (4) - Copy this and pasted at 01:19:752 (2) cause having a slider like (2) is kinda of weird ~
12. 02:07:095 (1,2) - Like I said before, make it less curve ~
13. 02:10:377 (2,1) - ^
14. 02:29:127 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~

[Normal]

1. 00:29:830 (1) - Remove finish at the end of the slider, its not necessary ~
2. 00:38:502 (1,2) - Weird flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:53:970 (1) - Weird shape, please use this:

SPOILER

1. 01:00:064 (1,1,1) - Remove NC, cause its confusing to have NC like this ~
2. 01:06:158 (3) - Move to x:368 y:56 for a better flow ~
3. 01:37:564 (1,1,1) - Like I said before, remove NC, and also, make the notes curve ?
4. 02:07:095 (2) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
5. 02:16:939 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
6. 02:38:970 (1,2) - Remove stack, cause it looks weird like this ~

[Hard]

1. 00:23:267 (2,3) - Improve blanket
2. 00:56:314 (4) - Make it more curve ?
3. 01:00:064 (1,1,1) - Remove NC, cause its confusing to have NC like this ~
4. 01:27:252 (3) - Stack with 01:25:611 (2)'s head ?
5. 01:37:564 (1,1,1) - Like I said before, remove NC, and also, make the notes curve ?
6. 01:55:377 (2) - Make it less curve, you know why, cause I said it before ~
7. 02:05:689 (3) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
8. 02:06:861 (1,2,3,4) - Improve blanket ~
9. 02:14:595 (1,2) - Make them more curve and then improve blanket ~
10. 02:16:705 (1) - Make it only with 1 repeat, having 2 repeat is unrankable these days ~
11. 02:17:877 (1,2) - Improve blanket ~
12. 02:19:283 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:23:033 (3,4) - ^
14. 02:23:940 (4,1,2,3,4) - Weird jump, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

[Fluffy]

1. 00:50:220 (1,2,3,4) - Remove stack, cause its unreadable ~
2. 01:28:892 (4) - Make it less curve, because I said it before the reason ~
3. 01:44:595 (2) - Make it with 1 repeat ~
4. 01:48:345 (4) - ^
5. 02:24:439 (1,1,1) - Remove NC ~
6. Well.. I dunno what should I say.. I hate to scare you but, you need to work alot on this diff, cause its unrankable ;_;

Good luck ~ !

I fixed most of it.
Thank you for writing so much!

Hey! From queue for m4m

[General]
I think you have some timing issues.. for example in ur insane go to 01:14:830 (3,4,5,6,7) - and slow down speed to 25%, you'll hear ur notes aren't with the music. Sorry I can't fix for u cuz i suck at timing and stuffs so u may wanna ask someone else for help

The tags in ur Easy/Normal and Hard/Fluffy are different.
for E/N it's: hatsune miku vocaloid arpk alpaca arpakasso
For H/I it's: hatsune miku arpk alpaca arpakasso
ya add vocaloid to H/I too

[Easy]
00:31:002 (1,2) - blanket is off
00:32:408 (3) - 00:34:752 (1) - watch for overlaps like these
00:32:877 (1,2) - blanket as well. Use grid 4 for most precise adjustments
00:36:158 (3,5) - you're better off just stacking these 2 together.. the overlap isnt very pretty
00:45:064 (4,2,3) - overlap.. i'll shut up about overlaps from now on
00:58:658 (2) - u might wanna somehow stack the slider end onto 00:56:314 (2) - .. maybe shift 00:54:908 (1,2,3) - entirely to the right so that (1) slider is blanketed by 00:53:502 (2) - , then just make subtle adjustments with 00:57:720 (1,2) -
01:14:127 (1) - left a little bit more
01:27:720 (1,1) - as anal this may sound this doesn't flow well..
01:49:283 (1) - too short to be in an easy imo, this looks much better imo http://puu.sh/aAGHb/634a84fea9.jpg
02:01:002 (3) - 02:03:814 (3) - stack would look a lot better
02:09:439 (3) - (224, 256) 02:09:908 (1) - (224, 176) (and make the rest of the adjustments urself
02:11:783 (1) - if u could end ur slider on 02:09:439 (3) - then that'd be wonderful
02:34:283 (1,2,1) - a bit more circular would flow better i.e. http://puu.sh/aAH9i/1689be5473.jpg ( u can also blanket 02:36:158 (1,2) - while ur at it too)

[Normal]
you must must must must keep flow consistant and never break it in easy/normals!!
00:30:767 (2,3) - flow break
00:50:220 (1,2) - flow break.
00:54:673 (4,1) - Flow break
00:56:548 (3,1) - Flow break..
01:06:157 (3,4) - it's only 30 seconds into the song and I can find this many I think you need to go back and think about flow more. I stopped here cuz otherwise this'll be me ranting about flow breaks
good flow = not much turns for the cursor!!

00:29:830 (1) - match music http://puu.sh/aAIjV/0a6d36b8f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/aAIp6/b48a5e889d.jpg
00:31:470 (3) - 00:34:283 (1) - stack mebe
00:34:752 (2,3) - even tho its a weird shape u can still blanket
00:59:830 (1,2,3,4) - might be hard for normal, try this http://puu.sh/aAIyW/927c0cb572.jpg
01:07:330 (1) - same as what i said earlier
01:18:345 (2) - unbalanced
01:37:330 (1,2,3,4) - same as earlier
01:53:033 (1) - sound better if u end it on 01:54:439 - instead
01:55:377 (1) - why did u slow down in the kiai? you should be speeding up not slowing down o_o
02:10:845 (3) - 02:11:783 (1) - unbalanced
02:16:002 (2,2) - if u could somehow stack would look nicer
02:19:283 (1,2) - this looks better imo http://puu.sh/aAIWX/0dd33eb223.jpg
02:25:377 (1,2) - weird shape but still can blanket
02:29:127 (2) - ctrl + G

[Hard]
00:27:955 (4,5) - blanket better
00:58:189 (3,4) - overlap looks bad
01:02:642 (1) - this (blanket?) can look better
01:25:611 (2) - 01:27:252 (5) - stack
01:51:275 (1) - u wanna give room for players to react to the next note, even tho its hard this is too much
02:10:611 (3,4,5,6) - messy

I think your rhythms need work.. go to single player and put on auto and just listen, right now your notes are placed oddly \:

[Fluff]
cs4 cuz cs5 is cancer
od7?
I didn't look at this as much cuz well you only looked at my N/H so o_o
I'll give u some insight on what i saw
u can definitely beautify this map more, i.e. 00:30:767 (2) - 00:32:642 (1) - stacking these 2
places like 00:47:408 (1,2,3) - just has random rhythm and is difficult to play, not suitable for a slow song u have right now
when changing SV try to move by 0.25x each time, when u went from 1x to 1.5x it's sudden and can easily lead to sliderbreaking

yeah so for this diff also just put on auto and listen to your rhythms cuz i think it needs work there.

Good luck!~

Gaia wrote:

Hey! From queue for m4m

[General]
I think you have some timing issues.. for example in ur insane go to 01:14:830 (3,4,5,6,7) - and slow down speed to 25%, you'll hear ur notes aren't with the music. Sorry I can't fix for u cuz i suck at timing and stuffs so u may wanna ask someone else for help

The tags in ur Easy/Normal and Hard/Fluffy are different.
for E/N it's: hatsune miku vocaloid arpk alpaca arpakasso
For H/I it's: hatsune miku arpk alpaca arpakasso
ya add vocaloid to H/I too

[Easy]
00:31:002 (1,2) - blanket is off
00:32:408 (3) - 00:34:752 (1) - watch for overlaps like these
00:32:877 (1,2) - blanket as well. Use grid 4 for most precise adjustments
00:36:158 (3,5) - you're better off just stacking these 2 together.. the overlap isnt very pretty
00:45:064 (4,2,3) - overlap.. i'll shut up about overlaps from now on
00:58:658 (2) - u might wanna somehow stack the slider end onto 00:56:314 (2) - .. maybe shift 00:54:908 (1,2,3) - entirely to the right so that (1) slider is blanketed by 00:53:502 (2) - , then just make subtle adjustments with 00:57:720 (1,2) -
01:14:127 (1) - left a little bit more
01:27:720 (1,1) - as anal this may sound this doesn't flow well..
01:49:283 (1) - too short to be in an easy imo, this looks much better imo http://puu.sh/aAGHb/634a84fea9.jpg
02:01:002 (3) - 02:03:814 (3) - stack would look a lot better
02:09:439 (3) - (224, 256) 02:09:908 (1) - (224, 176) (and make the rest of the adjustments urself
02:11:783 (1) - if u could end ur slider on 02:09:439 (3) - then that'd be wonderful
02:34:283 (1,2,1) - a bit more circular would flow better i.e. http://puu.sh/aAH9i/1689be5473.jpg ( u can also blanket 02:36:158 (1,2) - while ur at it too)

[Normal]
you must must must must keep flow consistant and never break it in easy/normals!!
00:30:767 (2,3) - flow break
00:50:220 (1,2) - flow break.
00:54:673 (4,1) - Flow break
00:56:548 (3,1) - Flow break..
01:06:157 (3,4) - it's only 30 seconds into the song and I can find this many I think you need to go back and think about flow more. I stopped here cuz otherwise this'll be me ranting about flow breaks
good flow = not much turns for the cursor!!

00:29:830 (1) - match music http://puu.sh/aAIjV/0a6d36b8f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/aAIp6/b48a5e889d.jpg
00:31:470 (3) - 00:34:283 (1) - stack mebe
00:34:752 (2,3) - even tho its a weird shape u can still blanket
00:59:830 (1,2,3,4) - might be hard for normal, try this http://puu.sh/aAIyW/927c0cb572.jpg
01:07:330 (1) - same as what i said earlier
01:18:345 (2) - unbalanced
01:37:330 (1,2,3,4) - same as earlier
01:53:033 (1) - sound better if u end it on 01:54:439 - instead
01:55:377 (1) - why did u slow down in the kiai? you should be speeding up not slowing down o_o
02:10:845 (3) - 02:11:783 (1) - unbalanced
02:16:002 (2,2) - if u could somehow stack would look nicer
02:19:283 (1,2) - this looks better imo http://puu.sh/aAIWX/0dd33eb223.jpg
02:25:377 (1,2) - weird shape but still can blanket
02:29:127 (2) - ctrl + G

[Hard]
00:27:955 (4,5) - blanket better
00:58:189 (3,4) - overlap looks bad
01:02:642 (1) - this (blanket?) can look better
01:25:611 (2) - 01:27:252 (5) - stack
01:51:275 (1) - u wanna give room for players to react to the next note, even tho its hard this is too much
02:10:611 (3,4,5,6) - messy

I think your rhythms need work.. go to single player and put on auto and just listen, right now your notes are placed oddly \:

[Fluff]
cs4 cuz cs5 is cancer
od7?
I didn't look at this as much cuz well you only looked at my N/H so o_o
I'll give u some insight on what i saw
u can definitely beautify this map more, i.e. 00:30:767 (2) - 00:32:642 (1) - stacking these 2
places like 00:47:408 (1,2,3) - just has random rhythm and is difficult to play, not suitable for a slow song u have right now
when changing SV try to move by 0.25x each time, when u went from 1x to 1.5x it's sudden and can easily lead to sliderbreaking

yeah so for this diff also just put on auto and listen to your rhythms cuz i think it needs work there.

Good luck!~

Thank you! Really helpful mod!

Hi, I'm from t/233414/

First of all you should add a Source, I think "VOCALOID" is good enough there.





Nice map!

A i k a wrote:

Hi, I'm from t/233414/

First of all you should add a Source, I think "VOCALOID" is good enough there. I think vocaloid is better as a tag

Easy

Looks okay so far, although a note directly after spinner(02:25:377 (1,1)) will most likely panic and/or confuse the newbie player. Try to move it closer to centre, or delete spinner. Ok, I moved it closer to center

Normal

01:55:377 (1,2,3) - This part sounds a bit wierd, timeline like this might be better.
Although it's okay to have not same speed on Slider Velocity and Distance Snap, I still recommend you to use same values. fixed~

Hard

I think AR 7-8 is better here, 6 is a bit too low and might cause confusion on when to click. fixed~
Not much else wrong here.

Fluffy

01:03:463 (3,4,5) - Feels a little overmapped here. fixed~
01:10:494 (2) - Overmap in this slider, remake for a longer for less repeats. Atm it repeats too often when there's not much instruments playing here. fixed~

Nice map! Thank you!

I'm gonna start replying to the mods more now.
Thanks for mod!

jonawaga wrote:

A i k a wrote:

Hi, I'm from t/233414/

First of all you should add a Source, I think "VOCALOID" is good enough there. I think vocaloid is better as a tag

Easy

Looks okay so far, although a note directly after spinner(02:25:377 (1,1)) will most likely panic and/or confuse the newbie player. Try to move it closer to centre, or delete spinner. Ok, I moved it closer to center

Normal

01:55:377 (1,2,3) - This part sounds a bit wierd, timeline like this might be better.
Although it's okay to have not same speed on Slider Velocity and Distance Snap, I still recommend you to use same values. fixed~

Hard

I think AR 7-8 is better here, 6 is a bit too low and might cause confusion on when to click. fixed~
Not much else wrong here.

Fluffy

01:03:463 (3,4,5) - Feels a little overmapped here. fixed~
01:10:494 (2) - Overmap in this slider, remake for a longer for less repeats. Atm it repeats too often when there's not much instruments playing here. fixed~

Nice map! Thank you!

I'm gonna start replying to the mods more now.
Thanks for mod!

You're welcome, but I still recommend you to put something as Source, and I do believe its source is from the Vocaloid so I don't think it should just be a tag.
Vocaloid is a source

A i k a wrote:

You're welcome, but I still recommend you to put something as Source, and I do believe its source is from the Vocaloid so I don't think it should just be a tag. Vocaloid is a source

fixed~

Hello.

1. VOCALOiD musn't be used as a source. Put it back in the tags. (Sometimes, a song needs no source, because it doesn't appear in a TV show or game. Albums aren't allowed as sources either).
   
2. Title is incorrect: Leave In Summer, Yet You're In My Fluffoughts. It would be more convenient to put the kanji japanese title in the appropriate section (which is 夏に去りし君を想フ), then fill the romanized section (Natsu ni Sarishi Kimi o Omofu). Then, you would put the english title in the tags.
   
3. No video?
   
4. The difficulty difference seems quite low between Hard and Fluffy, compared to other difficulties.
   
5. In general, especially on harder difficulties, never a 1/3 or 1/6 pattern is spotted, when you clearly hear the song is quite swingy and you can take quite a bit of liberties with it, especially on insanes.

Hope it helped. Sorry for no "real" mod. I just thought it would be good to point out the major issues rather than the minor ones for now, because I think this map needs quite a bit of work.

Overwrite wrote:

Hello.

1. VOCALOiD musn't be used as a source. Put it back in the tags. (Sometimes, a song needs no source, because it doesn't appear in a TV show or game. Albums aren't allowed as sources either). fixed~
   
2. Title is incorrect: Leave In Summer, Yet You're In My Fluffoughts. It would be more convenient to put the kanji japanese title in the appropriate section (which is 夏に去りし君を想フ), then fill the romanized section (Natsu ni Sarishi Kimi o Omofu). Then, you would put the english title in the tags. fixed~
   
3. No video? Do I have to? fixed anyways~
   
4. The difficulty difference seems quite low between Hard and Fluffy, compared to other difficulties. I'll work on this
   
5. In general, especially on harder difficulties, never a 1/3 or 1/6 pattern is spotted, when you clearly hear the song is quite swingy and you can take quite a bit of liberties with it, especially on insanes. what? sorry idk what you mean by 1/3 and 1/6 patterns

Hope it helped. Sorry for no "real" mod. I just thought it would be good to point out the major issues rather than the minor ones for now, because I think this map needs quite a bit of work.

Thanks, it did help.

hi~ m4m :3

General

Please get a better quality BG
- here is a blank slider slide, please use it if you like since i think the default slider sound is very annoying http://puu.sh/bg97P/3e4daaf259.wav


Easy

- i suggest having a hitsound on every beat for kiai time, since the volume is always 100% so kiai time isnt emphasized enough
- 00:26:314 (2) - move to x 248 and y304 for better flow, make adjustments to the next few notes if you do this, i also suggest starting a note (circle or slider, whatever you want) on 00:26:783 since it is a strong beat
- 00:27:252 (1,2,3,4) - the beat consistency throughout these notes are very uneven; i suggest mapping the beat for this part since it is easy so no need to complicate things
- 00:38:033 (1) - have this slider like this so it blankets a bit , make adjustments to the next few notes if you do this as well
- 00:41:783 - another important beat left unmapped; if you put a circle there i recommend making 00:40:377 (2,3,4) - into a slider; its fine to map vocals but you have to try to not miss important beats :0
- 00:45:064 (4) - remove finish; add clap instead (add whistles to 00:43:658 (3) - as well? the vocals seem emphasized)
- 00:45:064 (4) - move this to x368 y272 for better flow, adjust next slider
- 00:47:408 (1,1,2) - improve flow here
- 00:48:814 (1) - remove NC, 00:49:283 (2) - add NC 00:50:220 (1) - remove NC
- 00:51:627 why leave this part unmapped?
- 01:01:939 (2,3) - try to avoid stacking in easy?? (personal opinion)
- 01:04:283 - important beat left unmapped; for this part i suggest a rhythm like this maybe? - 01:21:158 (1,2) - slightly overlaps with slider, also unstack them
- 01:29:127 please map this part too xD
- 01:58:189 (1,1) - remove NC, 02:00:533 (2) - add NC
- 02:01:470 (4) - add note
- 02:05:689 (1) - 02:07:095 (1) - remove NC 02:08:033 (2) - add NC
- 02:07:095 (1,2) - bad flow,
-02:11:783 (1,1,1) - remove NC 02:15:533 (2) - add nc 02:16:939 (1) - remove nc
- 02:25:377 (1) - i suggest shortening this spinner so theres more time to get to the next note; which i found especially hard when first playing osu
- 02:32:877 (1) - remove nc
- 02:38:970 (1,2) - i suggest making this into 1 repeat slider like this
Normal

Please change to cs 3.5
(SV is quite fast for normal)
Remember to not skip over mapping important beats as ive stated in my mod of easy so i wont be mentioning these anymore, same with NC; i suggest having an NC every downbeat (long white tick) for now
- 00:27:720 (3,4) - curve these less; it kind of breaks the flow
- 00:34:752 (2) - slightly overlaps, please move down a bit
- 00:39:439 (3,4,5) - these can be blanketed better; if you need help blanketing just wrap the slider around the notes approach circle
- 00:52:564 (1,2) - create a better flow
- 01:55:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is quite overmapping of a normal diff xD
- 02:06:861 (1,2,3) - i suggest arranging these nicer to prevent overlap
- 02:12:955 (1,2,3) - a bit hard for normal
- 02:22:095 (1,2) - create better flow
- 02:39:439 (2) - remove finish and add whistle instead? or add finish to both 02:38:970 (1,2) - since it seems a bit out of place

Hard

Lower OD and HP drain by 1 or 2
This diff needs quite a bit of working regarding appearance, if you want you can lower the spacing (press alt and use mousewheel to adjust) other than that you can read this guide by inverness on shaping sliders to look neat t/208596 so i will be mostly mapping the rhythm in this diff
and again please remember to map the instrumentals as well or else it leaves awkward pauses in the music which is not as fun to play
- 00:36:627 (1,2,3) - doesnt match instrumentals well; try a different rhythm
- 00:43:423 (1,2,3) - since you ended these on emphasized vocals please add a hitsound at the end
- 01:14:830 (3,4) - again doesnt match instrumentals; the instrumentals actually start on the blue tick; see if that helps
- 01:20:923 (1,2,3) - same as my second suggestion
the SV is a bit uneven thoughout the song.. first half is mainly x1.00 then it suddenly goes to x1.50 ??
- 02:36:627 (4) - should actually start at 02:36:509
- 02:38:970 (1,2,3) - i suggest doing the same thing you did with normal; the circle in between isnt really needed

Fluffy

honestly theres not much point in modding this since it shares same problems as other diffs (arrangements and uneven rhythm) if you decide to fix this diff please call me back for an actual mod :3 ( if you need help just pm me )

good luck ! and im sorry i wasn't able to give a mod for Fluffly diff ><

jonawaga wrote:

Overwrite wrote:

Hello.

1. VOCALOiD musn't be used as a source. Put it back in the tags. (Sometimes, a song needs no source, because it doesn't appear in a TV show or game. Albums aren't allowed as sources either). fixed~
   
2. Title is incorrect: Leave In Summer, Yet You're In My Fluffoughts. It would be more convenient to put the kanji japanese title in the appropriate section (which is 夏に去りし君を想フ), then fill the romanized section (Natsu ni Sarishi Kimi o Omofu). Then, you would put the english title in the tags. fixed~
   
3. No video? Do I have to? fixed anyways~
   
4. The difficulty difference seems quite low between Hard and Fluffy, compared to other difficulties. I'll work on this
   
5. In general, especially on harder difficulties, never a 1/3 or 1/6 pattern is spotted, when you clearly hear the song is quite swingy and you can take quite a bit of liberties with it, especially on insanes. what? sorry idk what you mean by 1/3 and 1/6 patterns

Hope it helped. Sorry for no "real" mod. I just thought it would be good to point out the major issues rather than the minor ones for now, because I think this map needs quite a bit of work.

Thanks, it did help.

On the 1/3 and 1/6 patterns, you see the beat snap divisor? You can set it to 1/3 and 1/6 (A.K.A compound timing). If you listen closely, you can hear there are some swingy beats that fit this compound timing, and I'm sure that if you exploit it enough, you'll be able to make some neat stuff.

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