1. Easy (2.68 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 243 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 370 notes)
4. Kibiya's Extra (5 stars, 307 notes)
5. Normal (4.17 stars, 130 notes)

MakeThemSuffer wrote:

Hello!
Well, first of all, you should fix distance snapping. You have it of course, but it doesn't look clear enough, like here:
00:59:925 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are well-placed, but 3 is a little closer, which is not sharp enough.
You can fix it by real snapping (ising tool, not just your eye), but distance between the notes will be far due to slider velocity I guess, so that's your choice about composing, but I'd probably use the tool avoiding this little issues.
Fix the BPM, 155, not 155, 06.
In Insane you have some problems with sharp-looking too, like here:
00:11:701 (1,2,3) - different distance between slider endings, 2 is more close to 1.
00:25:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7, 8) - dancing stream notes with different distance between them and not smooth parts.
And, I don't know how to say that, but jumps here are not looking good, you can ignore it of course, but BAT will mention it for sure.
Hope that was useful :3

Cookiesi wrote:

Cookiesi wrote:

Hello! I can give you some modding

[Normal]
Personally I think some notes are too far! I wouldn't say much about distance in normal if you had easy difficulty.
00:28:195 (6,7) - Far

DS (Distance Snap) is recommended for Normal difficulty.
These notes are all on consistent beats, but have different spacings:


OH NO! Please snap notes back into the temp!!!! (You must've changed the tempo after mapping!)

Your maps will not be rankable if your objects aren't snapped >.<
Press Ctrl+Shift+A for AI mod.

[Hard]
00:13:204 (8,9,10) - Move all three to 00:13:301
00:47:462 (1) - Move slider to 00:47:366
00:48:624 (4) - Move slider to 00:48:720

[Insane]
00:07:301 (6,7,8,9) - This is not good... 6&7 is too far (For stream *inconsistancy*)
TO FIX THIS, Move 00:07:301 (6) - Into the stream like this:


00:26:559 (2) - Beat placed too close, put it at 00:26:656

00:16:010 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - You can make this better.
TO FIX THIS, put a space between 7 and 8. Break it apart to form two triples.


00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing inconsistency.
TO FIX THIS, you can use "Distance Snap" to make your life easier and looks cleaner (Adjust spacing by pressing "Alt")


Spacing inconsistency makes map slightly irritating to play. :/

00:41:559 (6,7,1) - Spacing inconsistency.
TO FIX THIS, move the 00:41:656 (7) - Between purple #6 and yellow #1)
TO

00:49:301 (1,2,3) - Spacing inconsistency.
TO FIX THIS, move the 00:49:398 (2) - Between #1 and #3
TO

Spacing: 00:58:591 (2,3,4) - Fix this
Spacing: 01:07:882 (8,9,1) - Fix this
Spacing: 00:38:462 (8,9,1) - Fix this
Spacing: 01:13:882 (1,2,3) - Fix this

Spacing: 00:56:463 (7,8) - Too far

01:14:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe cut it into triples. Like this: 01:14:849 (5,6,7) and 01:15:237 (8,9,10) and replace 01:14:656 (4) with circle.


01:01:397 (7) - Sounds better when deleted. (This is your choice)
01:16:591 (5,6,7,8) - I think you can do something to make it better. (This is your choice)

Very fun map For insane distance snapping is not very strict as normals or easy, but try to have it atleast clean looking!

Sorry about double post, trying to make the pictures fit in and added more stuff.

skaiys wrote:

Insane

00:07:301 (6,7,8,9) - This is not good... 6&7 is too far (For stream *inconsistancy*) - FIXED lmao I didn't even realise that 6 was part of the stream, must've been some mistake I did.

00:26:559 (2) - Beat placed too close, put it at 00:26:656 FIXED

00:16:010 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - You can make this better.
TO FIX THIS, put a space between 7 and 8. Break it apart to form two triples FIXED

00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing inconsistency. FIXED

00:41:559 (6,7,1) - Spacing inconsistency.
TO FIX THIS, move the 00:41:656 (7) - Between purple #6 and yellow #1) FIXED

00:49:301 (1,2,3) - Spacing inconsistency.
TO FIX THIS, move the 00:49:398 (2) - Between #1 and #3 FIXED

Spacing: 00:58:591 (2,3,4) - Fix this FIXED

Spacing: 01:07:882 (8,9,1) - Fix this FIXED

Spacing: 00:38:462 (8,9,1) - Fix this FIXED

Spacing: 00:56:463 (7,8) - Too far FIXED

01:01:397 (7) - Sounds better when deleted. DELETED because sounds better

01:14:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe cut it into triples. Like this: 01:14:849 (5,6,7) and 01:15:237 (8,9,10) and replace 01:14:656 (4) with circle. FIXED

01:16:591 (5,6,7,8) - I think you can do something to make it better. (This is your choice) Made it much better

Spacing: 01:13:882 (1,2,3) - Fix this FIXED

Hard:

00:13:204 (8,9,10) - Move all three to 00:13:301
00:47:462 (1) - Move slider to 00:47:366
00:48:624 (4) - Move slider to 00:48:720 - ALL FIXED


Normal:

Personally I think some notes are too far! I wouldn't say much about distance in normal if you had easy difficulty.
00:28:195 (6,7) - Far FIXED


weow. thanks for everything! extremely helpful mods.

there should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level
source : http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

it means you should make an Easy diff on this song (since the Normal is a 4 star difficulty) to be ranked

1. 00:07:146 (2) - DS here?
2. 00:09:661 - since this part is dominant.. i think put a circle here will do.. and if you do what i suggested, NC it
3. 00:09:854 (6) - if you not following my suggestion above, then NC here (change of part)
4. 00:11:404 (1) - remove NC (still a same part like above)
5. 00:21:855 (5,6) - i think is better http://puu.sh/8A48A.png (my opinion)
6. 00:26:500 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:28:242 (7) - NC here?
8. 00:32:694 (4,5) - same as point 5
9. 00:43:725 (8) - NC here?
10. 00:44:500 (1) - Remove NC
11. 00:45:274 (3,4,5) - since the cymbal is dominant on the song, put finish here are better i think\
12. 00:46:435 (6) - NC here?
13. 00:47:209 (1) - Remove NC
14. 01:09:661 (3,1,2) - make these notes far.. (can't read it with HD because of low AR)
15. 01:24:564 - i think put spinner here would be better

AR = 7 (just my opinion)

16. 00:13:919 (4) - this doesn't sounds right, so maybe enlong it to red tick is a bit better (i tried to change into reverse slider, and still bad)
17. 00:17:016 (5) - change this into 1/2 slider would better (my opinion)
18. 00:17:403 (6) - my suggestion is shorter this reverse slider into white tick, and then put a circle in red tick istead (place it on 8 of course)
19. 00:20:112 (3,4) - hard to guess.. mind to re-spacing it?
20. 00:21:274 (7,8) - ^
21. 00:38:306 (6,7) - ^
22. 00:39:080 (9) - NC here?
23. 00:42:177 (3,4) - same as point 19
24. 00:46:241 - until 00:48:951 - can't read the beat, so here's my suggestion (just an example btw) Before: http://puu.sh/8A5w3.png, After: http://puu.sh/8A5Cg.png (use DS so it won't be overmapped)
25. 01:24:370 (9) - well in my opinion, deleting this circle and replace it with spinner is better

HP = 6 or 7.. maybe 6 is better
OD = 7
26. 00:25:532 (2) - why not put this in white tick? sounds better for me
27. 00:38:306 (3,4) - 00:41:790 (4,5) - err.. the spacing should be reduce.. but maybe it'll ruined the pattern.. so it's up to you
28. 01:24:467 - spinner here?
well err, the mapset is good on this map..

Thanks for the incredibly helpful mod!

seovince wrote:

you're welcome.. glad my mod can helped you! hoho
but uuh... i accidentally check this beatmap's description.. why my name is Neovince? T.T

K i b i y a - wrote:

Done !!

here

http://puu.sh/8Aon3.osu
http://puu.sh/8AoA1.zip

Please tell me strange

HAHAHAHAAHAHAH i am so sorry, dont know what went through my head when i typed your name. fixed

• umm, did you map it on the EXACT .mp3 i used? because its not loading the audio.
  If you did, did you name the .mp3 file EXACTLY as "Black Bullet.mp3". -without quotations.