[BREK]
00:08:123 - A finish would fit nicely with the beginning of new stanza
00:23:123 - ^
00:16:326 - Add a note here?
00:26:404 (3,1) - Space them at higher DS for a better blanket?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161898100:36:717 (2,3,4,5) - This clap spam doesn't sound good imo, how about putting claps only on red ticks and use normal hitnormal for the rest (white ticks)?
00:41:404 (3) - Normal finish is kinda loud and soft one fits better imo.
00:45:154 - Feels empty so i'd like you to add a note here.
00:48:904 (4) - Maybe soft finish here?
00:58:045 (2) - Drum clap?
01:01:795 (6,7) - Spacing is kinda inconsistent.
01:05:545 - Drum finish.
01:07:654 (5) - This straight slider is kinda unfitting considering all the sliders around here are curved ones. i'd suggest something like this;
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161977001:09:998 - Add a finish here?
01:28:279 - ^
01:45:623 - Change the sampleset to normal one? That way it sounds better and is consistent with 00:54:998 -
01:32:029 - Finish.
01:35:779 - ^
02:22:654 - I don't think this whistle sounds that great.
[Normal]
01:23:123 - Spinner here like what you did at 00:36:248 (1) - .
01:11:873 (4) - Halve the length of this slider since such a long slider doesn't fit with the music.
01:24:998 - Add a finish here.
01:31:561 (6) - this straight slider doesn't look good imo considering the previous slider is curved, i suggest something like this;
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161990401:35:311 (5,6) - (6) is way too inclined imo.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161990702:00:623 (1) - Normal sampleset fits better with the heavy beat imo, soft addition is okay as it is.
[Easy]
01:08:123 (1) - Add a finish here.
02:15:623 (1) - ^
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