mingmichael wrote:

first mod \o/ for m4m too lol


Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Kantan]

General

☞ remove 01:25:058 - 's timing section since it's not useful

Notes Structure

☞ nice~!

Notes

• a missing note (kat) on 01:41:904 - ? because i saw that you use 1note 5notes 1note 5notes patterns from 01:27:442 - until 01:47:135 - . so to keep it a bit consistent, how about to add a note on 01:41:904 - to follow that pattern (actually it should be 5 notes right? ww)
btw start from 01:47:135 - , i saw the patterns are already 1note 5note 1note 3notes patterns, maybe because the instrument's pitch sounds already increase there - honestly, i dont prefer this pattern. anyway i kept it. :3

====================


[ Futsuu]

General

☞ remove 01:25:058 - 's timing section since it's not useful

Notes Structure

☞ okay~

Notes

• no problem on here =w=)b

====================


[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ remove 01:25:058 - 's timing section since it's not useful

Notes Structure

☞ perfect patterns =w= seriously

Notes

• no problem here

====================


[ Oni]

General

☞ remove 01:25:058 - 's timing section since it's not useful

Notes Structure

☞ okay~!

Notes

• change 00:47:596 - to be don. after i hear it again, this don will emphasize the kat on 00:47:750 - much better. same like 00:45:750 (211,212) - that kat emphasizes well on there. and also a don on 00:47:596 - will follow the drum hit (it sounds like drum..? or bass sound?) on there which needs a don - sounds good.

• move 00:52:904 - to 00:52:596 - and change 00:52:519 - ; 00:52:596 - and 00:52:981 - to be dons. basically i changed and moved those notes to follow the patterns like above. o o o o o
btw, that ooo-triplet follows the drum hits well from the song - fixed. also 00:52:827 (258) - change to don instead of 00:52:981 -

• don too on 00:57:442 - - fixed.

• and on 00:57:904 - , how about it's don...? - i want to keep it as a kat.

====================


huegh that's all from me.
your diffs make me speechless like this >> o.o lol they are really good. i worried while i was modding them because they are already good hahaha
i hope those mods are useful and goodluck

Senritsu wrote:

Hi
Coming for m4m >u<
my map~
/cries/

[General]

SPOILER

try 0,0,"bg.png",0,30 instead of 0,0,"bg.png",0,00. the head of her won't be cut by the bar - its imbalance on the whole imo.

[Kantan]

SPOILER

00:33:289 (21) - add a finish here? the music feels kinda strong there, like the melody (or what is that) sounds at the peek, so it needs some power there - honestly i dont think so x_x
01:08:365 (12) - change to k here, because it has higher pitch than 01:07:750 (11) - ?
well, my idea is making it k, then make this 01:08:981 (13,14,15) - as kkd, mirroring the 01:06:519 (8,9,10) - it's just a suggestion though, but sounds neater that way. same goes with 01:18:212 (32,33,34,35) - - i prefer more simpler pattern for Kantan.

[Futsuu]

SPOILER

00:14:827 - add a d here? 2plet there seems out of place, because the other are following the drum, yet that 2plet itself is following the music alone. or add it 00:14:981 - there's a very faint drum that can be heard. and as well following the music - priority of main-melody is higher than the drum.
00:52:981 (41) - add finish here? because the drum sounds pretty loud, and there's a support for it too? - i didnt want to follow the cymbal sound.
01:38:981 (134) - change this to k? because following the melody, sounds pretty much like from high to low. i don't actually like dd here, sounds out of place, and sudden. but changing it to kkd too.. it would be boring lol - fixed.
01:46:673 (165,166) - are you sure with d K? imo it's too hard to play, especially for beginner. well idk, i just pointing this out. - youre right.

[Muzukashii]

SPOILER

00:33:289 (106) - add a finish here? same as kantan - it would lose the sense of unity with 00:23:442 (55) -
ok nothing to say here. eue

[Oni]

SPOILER

00:49:212, 00:54:135, and 00:59:058 try adding d there? the music sounds like it suits to be ddk there, if you hear it closely eue - thats unnecessary for the diff-spread.

nice mapset as always @-@
good luck with rank!

Priti wrote:

m4m me irl noscope

General

1. This background is really nice but it doesn't really fit the song, Consider changing it to a background of the character this song is related to? - already character's bg.
2. Add ZUN to tags - sure.

Futsuu

1. 00:20:365 - I find a d to fit here better because of the way you had it organized to every other white tick previously, Also, this will emphasise the K afterwards better. - that point has high pitch cymbal sound. d doesnt fit imo.
2. 00:40:058 - I personally don't like what you did here, Maybe do this? It makes sense with the music and with the pitch more than just 2 k's - followed the snare drum sound. so kat sounds better.
   
3. 01:08:365 - The pitch here sounds a bit higher than the previous note, maybe use a k to emphasise it? - i prefer a simple pattern for Futsuu. so i have intentionally ignored pitch.
4. 01:08:981 (22,24) - In my opinion, doing Ctrl + G to these two fits the pitch of the song much better. - ddk k fits better for mainmelody.
5. 01:13:289 - Use a k here? Pitch is a bit higher
6. 01:23:135 - Same as above.
7. 01:38:519 - The rhythm gap here feels really strange, Maybe add a k at 01:38:750 - Or a d at 01:38:827 - ? - i have deleted some notes instead of that.
8. 01:48:365 - Same as above.

Kantan

1. I'd suggest you to use OD3~3.5 Due to the extensive usage of spinners in this diff. - nope, there is no relationship with OD4.
2. 00:14:519 - Maybe add a k here to emphasise the piano better? It won't do much to the difficulty level, But it will work better with the song - i didnt feel need of special.
3. 00:35:750 - Compared to the previous two notes, this pitch is much higher, maybe change this into a k to emphasise that better? - its unnecessary pattern.
4. 01:06:519 - I find the rhythm you used here a bit unfitting, maybe use something like this? - its unnecessary rhythm for Kantan.
   
5. 01:09:596 - Maybe move this note to 01:09:904 - to emphasise the melody better? - it ignores mainmelody.
6. 01:11:442 - Same as in 01:06:519
7. 01:58:827 - 02:03:750 - 02:08:673 - 02:13:596 - Maybe move all these four 1/2 back? At the moment they are a bit off beat and feel forced into the map with no relation to the song, this change will fit the music better without making the patterns too complex. - as i said, 1/2 rhythm is really unnecessary for Kantan basically.

Muzukashii and Oni are pretty much fine except for the fact that the gap between Muzu and Futsuu is pretty big, But changing any of these diffs will just cause a different gap in the spread, Maybe get a new diff between Futsuu and Muzu that features more strict melody with 1/2 but doesn't use 1/4 inside of 1/2 patterns. - i didnt feel a gap between Muzukashii and Futsuu. it seems really fine.

TKS wrote:

that m4m req is too intrusive for me. first of all, you must send PM me about m4m before modpost. is there no veto for me?

1. 01:14:212 - Perhaps add a note here for consistency with 01:08:981 (13,14,15) - ? It's just a nitpick and might play a bit complex for beginners but I think a 5-plet on 1/1 is fine, just for consistency's sake (you have quite a few of them in the Kiai so...)
2. 01:26:519 (48,49,50,51) - Maybe make this KKKd for consistency with the other diffs? No other reason why, just consistency lol
3. 01:31:135 (59,60,61,62,63) - Make this pattern kdkdk instead? It allows you to start with k at the end of the pattern because this is a slightly different structure from the similar-sounding ones throughout. also sounds a bit better imo.
4. help me map Kantans the way you do ;w;

1. 01:08:981 (22) - How about making this a kat because it sounds like 01:13:904 (40) - ? no other reason why, just sounds similar to me~
2. 01:18:827 (59) - ^
3. again really nice Futsuu ;w;

1. 01:12:981 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - I believe this pattern is a bit too long for a Muzukashii so that makes the triplet quite hard to hit especially considering the BPM; perhaps break the pattern up at one point?
2. 02:02:058 - Maybe add a don here for consistency with the pattern at 02:11:442 (364,365,366,367,368) - ? no other reason really ;w;
3. help me I can't mod with people's styles in mind

1. 00:26:519 (89) - Maybe make this a don to keep the consistency between this pattern and 00:23:442 (67,68,69,70,71,72) - ? They both sound the same, so they should be mapped the same~
2. 00:31:442 (122) - ^
3. 01:16:212 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - Why is there suddenly two triplets here when there was only one triplet at 01:06:673 (28,29,30) - and both patterns sound really similar? I'd recommend having the first triplet be changed so that the patterns are consistent.
4. 01:21:135 (130,131,132,133,134,135) - ^
5. TKS stop being so pro I can't mod your maps in your style D:

Dainesl wrote:

hiya TKS o/

mod req from Nwolf's queue ww

Black = Suggestion/small recommendation
Orange = Strong recommendation, normally more in-depth but sometimes short and simple
Red = Unrankable issue

Tags conflict in the Muzukashii diff, please fix them! Currently they are "東方音弾遊戯6 touhou ondan yuugi 竹取飛翔 Lunatic Princess taketori hishou artcore ZUN" in the other diffs, but in the Muzu they're 東方音弾遊戯6 touhou ondan yuugi 竹取飛翔 Lunatic Princess taketori hishou artcore" (please add "ZUN" to the Muzukashii's tags, also perhaps add "Project" to all diffs because the game is sometimes referred to as "Touhou Project"?)

Also maybe place preview point at 01:27:365 - for all diffs instead?

Kantan

1. 01:14:212 - Perhaps add a note here for consistency with 01:08:981 (13,14,15) - ? It's just a nitpick and might play a bit complex for beginners but I think a 5-plet on 1/1 is fine, just for consistency's sake (you have quite a few of them in the Kiai so...) - umm but i really dont place 5plets on this part.
2. 01:26:519 (48,49,50,51) - Maybe make this KKKd for consistency with the other diffs? No other reason why, just consistency lol - its an intentional. kkkD fits better for Kantan.
3. 01:31:135 (59,60,61,62,63) - Make this pattern kdkdk instead? It allows you to start with k at the end of the pattern because this is a slightly different structure from the similar-sounding ones throughout. also sounds a bit better imo. - well dkdkd is working well for the drumsound. kdkdk sounds kinda weird fro me. :3
4. help me map Kantans the way you do ;w;

Futsuu

1. 01:08:981 (22) - How about making this a kat because it sounds like 01:13:904 (40) - ? no other reason why, just sounds similar to me~
2. 01:18:827 (59) - ^ - got them, also i have removed a d.
3. again really nice Futsuu ;w;

Muzukashii

1. 01:12:981 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - I believe this pattern is a bit too long for a Muzukashii so that makes the triplet quite hard to hit especially considering the BPM; perhaps break the pattern up at one point? - sure. nerfed some pattern.
2. 02:02:058 - Maybe add a don here for consistency with the pattern at 02:11:442 (364,365,366,367,368) - ? no other reason really ;w; - hmm, the flow has changed a bit from 02:11:750 - . so i wanna keep this one.
3. help me I can't mod with people's styles in mind

Oni

1. 00:26:519 (89) - Maybe make this a don to keep the consistency between this pattern and 00:23:442 (67,68,69,70,71,72) - ? They both sound the same, so they should be mapped the same~
2. 00:31:442 (122) - ^ - fixed.
3. 01:16:212 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - Why is there suddenly two triplets here when there was only one triplet at 01:06:673 (28,29,30) - and both patterns sound really similar? I'd recommend having the first triplet be changed so that the patterns are consistent.
4. 01:21:135 (130,131,132,133,134,135) - ^ - dunno why, fixed ;w;
5. TKS stop being so pro I can't mod your maps in your style D:

anyways, good luck I guess

sorry for the mod, I just can't mod in peoples' styles ;_;

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, mod as your request.

[Oni]

00:15:750 (24) - d here if you compare the pitch of the piano sound with 00:15:442 (23) - here. The (24) is slightly low pitch so d may be fit here. - sounds good! also fixed on Muzukashii, too.
00:23:442 (67) - D because of cymbal? - nope. K D is a bit noisy for me. and 00:23:135 (66) - already works to changing the flow. also, i want to make a break after finisher except such as 02:01:289 (413) -
00:33:289 (135) - ^
00:43:135 (195) - ^
00:52:981 (259) - ^
01:13:135 (73) - This should be k because it sound pitch higher than 01:12:981 (72) - this. If you agree then I'll suggest you make 01:12:365 - => 01:13:289 - this part to k k d kkd k k for better rhythm. - nope. because i should follow the snaredrum sound on 01:12:981 (72) - for the flow. in that case, i must focus on those 01:13:135 (73,74) - pitches. so, 01:13:135 (73) - has lower pitch than 01:13:289 (74) - . it should be fine.
01:27:442 (160) - D because of cymbal.
01:37:289 (233) - ^
01:47:135 (309) - ^
01:56:981 (387) - ^
02:06:827 (449) - ^
Please apply big note suggestion to all diff if you accept!

I guess just these, other diff sound good.
Call me back.

1. Consider adjusting the BG's position?

1. 00:54:212 (28,29,30,31,32) - consider trying this pattern to make good consistency with 00:48:673 (15,16,17,18,19,20) -
2. 00:59:135 (38,39) - ^

1. 00:25:135 (45) - move to 00:25:442 - to follow 00:23:135 (38,39,40) - this pattern
2. 00:30:058 (62) - ^
3. 00:34:981 (79) - ^

Low wrote:

maybe source should be Touhou? this song isn't an original song from BMS. it was made as a mix of Kaguya's theme

_Gezo_ wrote:

Woop, this page should be full of red ok?