Everything is fixed now.

All timings are correct, All notes play fine. Checked Autoplay. All SV's are good and 1Mio score is possible.

Well, that was it. Few Month ago when i Mod this i would never thought i would come back to do that..

Approved!

Congratulation

thank you Feerum ~ ! >ヮ<)/

Congrats!!! DDD

Prepare Your Stamina Boiz xDD

Well, my 18 minutes.
Gratz rube

Lol finally! gratz!~
btw i not play mania

PP Farming 18 minutes
Congratz Rube ❤️

oh god my fingers...

Congratz

Yay finally~
Congrats ruber ><)/

The longest mania marathon? o.o

dude, this is the longest qualified osu!mania map ever
prepare your stamina hhh

congratulations Rube ~

Gratzz , great you can qualified both part. And this is fun with FL :3

Gratz~
>w<)b

As first i want to congratulate you, but i have to sorry as well for giving bad news D:

hmm ... seems to be some BPM timings are wrong, i will give you the correct one:
You can get it here: http://puu.sh/mMNzb/e0edd3d38d.osu
(Please take note that green timings, which is SV changes and kiai time are not set)
It's more accurate in my opitions

Furthermore, i found out some issues, which are unrankable:
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)

aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)

And on 16:18:030 - there are two timings on here

It's unrankable issues and won't work perfectly if you kept 2 timings with differents volume

Few last things:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
00:13:120 - on here have 1/8 too, you may want to add it
00:27:370 (27370|2,27449|2) - appearancely they're different pitch
00:53:422 (53422|3,53580|2) - make a jack on here, for the pitch and sound exactly same from both of them (move 00:53:580 (53580|2) - to 4th column)
02:35:580 (155580|1) - i suggest to remove this, for focus on main 1/2 jack above
03:16:316 (196316|1,196474|0,196632|0) - may hard to catch on here, hmm, i recomended you to move 03:16:474 (196474|0) - to 3 for more comfortable
04:56:132 (296132|3,296234|2,296337|1,296440|0,296440|3,296440|2,297055|0,297055|1) - Ctrl + H this, pitch is going up, not going down
05:03:517 - and 05:03:670 - you may want to add a note for them on 4th column, for guitar's sound, make it more insteresting for rhythm
05:08:593 (308593|0) - move this to 3, those jack looks hard to catch well
05:10:901 - to 05:11:209 - don't miss this rhythm, fill it with some notes

okay, i checked lightly the rest of the map, seems only few of these issues
and this is a good map, i really love it
Good luck then, tell me if you need rebubbles

Aww and i checked everything so carefull
Call me back when need me too x:

05:40:054 (340054|0,340093|2,340131|3) - 1/6 05:40:029 - 05:40:080 -


14:05:699 - from here i think the pitch relevancy should be more accurate ,it felt really weird pressing the LNs here

Greetings.

I am here as Kuo Kyoka's post lists rather important issues that have to be addressed. While I don't know much about mania, I believe that the concurrent volume levels have to be fixed as well as the SB elements which are of unreasonable size. As those things are valid for all modes.

Here are a few things you should do.

1. sb\3rd\aya-hatate.jpg - doesn't do any scrolling, hence it has to be reduced in size/cut.
2. sb\12th\alice-x.jpg - from what I see this one doesn't scroll either. Could also use a cut/resize fix.
3. sb\16th\Flandle.jpg - aspect ratio is broken here. Care to fix that, please.
   
   There might be a few more, so, please have a look at the SB once again.

hmm…

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

As first i want to congratulate you, but i have to sorry as well for giving bad news D:

hmm ... seems to be some BPM timings are wrong, i will give you the correct one:
You can get it here: http://puu.sh/mMNzb/e0edd3d38d.osu
(Please take note that green timings, which is SV changes and kiai time are not set)
It's more accurate in my opitions
fixed

Furthermore, i found out some issues, which are unrankable:
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)

aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)

And on 16:18:030 - there are two timings on here

It's unrankable issues and won't work perfectly if you kept 2 timings with differents volume
fixed

Few last things:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
00:13:120 - on here have 1/8 too, you may want to add it no change
00:27:370 (27370|2,27449|2) - appearancely they're different pitch fixed
00:53:422 (53422|3,53580|2) - make a jack on here, for the pitch and sound exactly same from both of them (move 00:53:580 (53580|2) - to 4th column) fixed
02:35:580 (155580|1) - i suggest to remove this, for focus on main 1/2 jack above fixed
03:16:316 (196316|1,196474|0,196632|0) - may hard to catch on here, hmm, i recomended you to move 03:16:474 (196474|0) - to 3 for more comfortable fixed
04:56:132 (296132|3,296234|2,296337|1,296440|0,296440|3,296440|2,297055|0,297055|1) - Ctrl + H this, pitch is going up, not going down fixed
05:03:517 - and 05:03:670 - you may want to add a note for them on 4th column, for guitar's sound, make it more insteresting for rhythm fixed
05:08:593 (308593|0) - move this to 3, those jack looks hard to catch well fixed
05:10:901 - to 05:11:209 - don't miss this rhythm, fill it with some notes 05:10:901 - added

okay, i checked lightly the rest of the map, seems only few of these issues
and this is a good map, i really love it
Good luck then, tell me if you need rebubbles

Harbyter wrote:

05:40:054 (340054|0,340093|2,340131|3) - 1/6 05:40:029 - 05:40:080 -
fixed. and 05:42:016 (342016|3,342785|0) - move to 1/6

14:05:699 - from here i think the pitch relevancy should be more accurate ,it felt really weird pressing the LNs here no change

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

I am here as Kuo Kyoka's post lists rather important issues that have to be addressed. While I don't know much about mania, I believe that the concurrent volume levels have to be fixed as well as the SB elements which are of unreasonable size. As those things are valid for all modes.

Here are a few things you should do.

1. sb\3rd\aya-hatate.jpg - doesn't do any scrolling, hence it has to be reduced in size/cut.
2. sb\12th\alice-x.jpg - from what I see this one doesn't scroll either. Could also use a cut/resize fix.
3. sb\16th\Flandle.jpg - aspect ratio is broken here. Care to fix that, please.
   
   There might be a few more, so, please have a look at the SB once again.

thank you for check

i changed the following contents
04:17:674 - SV change 1.03 1.00
04:21:673 - ^
04:24:750 - ^
04:27:827 - ^
04:30:904 - ^
00:25:873 (25873|1) - add note (kick sound)

about SB : fixed (100%)

1. 3rd\aya-hatate.jpg resize fix. 1366*853 → 1366*768
2. 4th\momiji-a.jpg new image. http://puu.sh/mOblV/66d4c40499.jpg
3. 4th\momiji-c.jpg resize fix. 853*639 → 640*480
4. 5th\momiji-nitori.jpg resize fix. 679x960 → 640*906
5. 6th\mitori-a.jpg resize fix. (905x1280 → 640*905
6. 6th\mitori-b.jpg resize fix. 850x966 → 640*727
7. 7th\mitori-nitori-a.jpeg resize fix. 1280x960 → 640*480
8. 8th\marisa-c.jpg resize fix. 853*532 → 769*480
9. 12th\alice-a.jpg resize fix. 660x860 → 640*833
10. 12th\alice-x.jpg resize fix. 660x860 → 640*833
11. 12th\alice-c.jpg resize fix. 853x639 → 640*480
12. 14th\mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg resize fix. 905x1280 → 640*905
13. 14th\mugetsu-gengetsu-c.jpg resize fix. 672x672 → 640*640
14. 15th\rika-c.jpeg resize fix. 700x1059 →640*968
15. 15th\rika-d.jpeg resize fix. 853x639 →640*480
16. 16th\yukari-a.jpeg new image. http://puu.sh/mOM5v/818b3b1545.jpg
17. 16th\momiji.jpeg new image http://puu.sh/mON6b/96eba8ae24.jpg
18. 16th\Flandle.jpeg new image http://puu.sh/mON7K/32de5943c3.jpg
19. 16th\ran.jpeg resize fix. 853x639 →640*480
20. 16th\yukari-b.jpeg resize fix. 853x568 →720*480

about BPM : fixed

please wait…

updated

Okay, no kudosu
i will give you another mod as #2 rebubble BN
but for now i will drop some other unrankable issues:

+ Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)

Here i my suggestion: make the resolution of alice-x.jpg become exactly same as alice-a.jpg which is 640 x 833

And: 13:50:272 - on here, red and green timing are having difficulties volume hitsound
make red timing have 60% volume or make green timing have 100% volume, by your decision

06:52:435 - on here, green timing is unsnapped, move it back to 06:52:433 -


Also, same as 08:31:817 - move this to 08:31:814 -



BPM: 09:46:480 - probably you don't have to add a BPM timing for 6/4 Time Signature on here, the rhythm ends on 09:47:813 - , the starts of 09:48:480 - just got delay from 09:47:813 - so remove this BPM still be the best way imo

Storyboard: 12:53:602 -
Don't make SB\16th\momiji.jpg have a blank like this on the top


or even the end of this

It looks bad somehow
I would suggest you to scale it up to 1.3x

And on 12:58:525 - here, SB\16th\mitori.jpg already going down
Why not make SB\16th\alice.jpg on 13:03:448 - going up, it would be nice

Also, 10:55:931 (655931|2) - is unsnapped, probably it should be on 10:56:146 -

And preview time is unsnapped too:


Move it to 03:07:319 -

That's all for now, but please help me check overall unsnapped thingy, thank you so much
Good luck

all fixed.
thank you kyoka ~

Fun fact: some of those sprites were scrolling, therefore there was no issue with them.

～～～

Talk to Blocko about this, I can push it forward but I'd love someone who is familiar with the mode do it.

Ahh don't worry. We will be here soon. Its all planned already. Please be a little bit more patient c:

hmm…

行けえええ！！！！

がんばってくださいScarletさん！

Okay time to move on.

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These are the new Timings i got with the Help of my good friend Bonsai. Huge thanks to him!
NOTICE!: All these Timings are without! the Green Lines!

These should be now more accurate.
Overall we moved 2/3 of the Song -6ms. Also we changed a BPM in the Slow Part in the Middle to be more accurate. Try it out, fix things and call me please back so i can make a full recheck.
Then i call Kuo to make 2nd check and we got Kamikaze to Qualify it then

thanks Feerum and Bonsai ~


BPM : fixed
SV snap : fixed
note snap : fixed

i changed the following contents
08:59:308 - to 09:00:141 - changed pattern
08:11:265 - to 08:15:771 - ^

updated

okay lets continue.
I will not use my overlay since its just a recheck xdd

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
01:27:525 (87525|3,87525|1) - According how you mapped the LN Sounds, like 01:24:051 (84051|2,84130|3) - as example, 01:27:525 (87525|3) - this LN should beginn 1/4 later, means 01:27:604 - .

02:22:156 (142156|1) - Uhh shouldn't this Ln end 02:22:630 - and to follow the 1/4 sounds you could add a note then on the Blue line here 02:22:709 -
04:39:898 - (Optional) Could add a note for drum.

04:59:206 (299206|0) - Bit confused here because maybe this LN is wrong or i just don't hear what you follow. When i'm right this LN should end 04:59:667 - and there should be another LN from 04:59:821 - to 05:00:129 - . I am right or wrong? xd

05:06:283 (306283|2) - Same like here? This LN Should end 05:06:590 - and another from here to next LN? x:

05:35:821 - For this LN Part. Uhm. Some of your LN's end 1/4 beat earlier. But i think you should keep Consistency with this. I tried it and it plays kinda fine so i think following LN's should end 1/4 Beat earlier:
05:36:051 (336051|1) - end 05:36:205 -
05:36:667 (336667|2) - end 05:36:821 -
05:37:282 (337282|2) - end 05:37:436 -
05:38:513 (338513|2) - end 05:38:667 -
05:43:436 (343436|2) - end 05:43:590 -
05:44:051 (344051|1) - end 05:44:205 -
At some LN's its clearly that they end earlier, but at some i'm not sure, but it would be just logical looking at all other,
i will leave a notice for the next BN to recheck this just to be sure.

13:29:126 - // Okay you know what. I have mod this now so many times and this is bugging me. PLEASE Tell me who is this guy xD

AYY Thats all i have to say. Let the hype slowly beginn

Feerum wrote:

okay lets continue.
I will not use my overlay since its just a recheck xdd

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
01:27:525 (87525|3,87525|1) - According how you mapped the LN Sounds, like 01:24:051 (84051|2,84130|3) - as example, 01:27:525 (87525|3) - this LN should beginn 1/4 later, means 01:27:604 - .
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633830

02:22:156 (142156|1) - Uhh shouldn't this Ln end 02:22:630 - and to follow the 1/4 sounds you could add a note then on the Blue line here 02:22:709 -
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633801

04:39:898 - (Optional) Could add a note for drum.
added 1

04:59:206 (299206|0) - Bit confused here because maybe this LN is wrong or i just don't hear what you follow. When i'm right this LN should end 04:59:667 - and there should be another LN from 04:59:821 - to 05:00:129 - . I am right or wrong? xd
that is right xD fixed

05:06:283 (306283|2) - Same like here? This LN Should end 05:06:590 - and another from here to next LN? x:
fixed and changed pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633894

05:35:821 - For this LN Part. Uhm. Some of your LN's end 1/4 beat earlier. But i think you should keep Consistency with this. I tried it and it plays kinda fine so i think following LN's should end 1/4 Beat earlier:
05:36:051 (336051|1) - end 05:36:205 -
05:36:667 (336667|2) - end 05:36:821 -
05:37:282 (337282|2) - end 05:37:436 -
05:38:513 (338513|2) - end 05:38:667 -
05:43:436 (343436|2) - end 05:43:590 -
05:44:051 (344051|1) - end 05:44:205 -
At some LN's its clearly that they end earlier, but at some i'm not sure, but it would be just logical looking at all other,
i will leave a notice for the next BN to recheck this just to be sure.
all fixed

13:29:126 - // Okay you know what. I have mod this now so many times and this is bugging me. PLEASE Tell me who is this guy xD
ZUN!! xD

AYY Thats all i have to say. Let the hype slowly beginn

07:03:100 - green line move to 07:03:094 -

updated

Yeah nice.

Again sorry that it took so long but i'm sure we can move this now.
Bubbled

I let Kuo know that i'm done here.

Notice for next BN:
Please recheck the LN changings from here 05:35:821 - i mention in my Mod.
Some sounds wasn't clear and i want to have confirmed that it's right, thanks!

rip my fingers… ;_;

awwwwww i'm totally so sorry
almost forgot this, after checking pending forum and i saw this ;x;
i will check this soon asap, maybe after exams
once again, i'm so sorry for delay D:

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

awwwwww i'm totally so sorry
almost forgot this, after checking pending forum and i saw this ;x;
i will check this soon asap, maybe after exams
once again, i'm so sorry for delay D:

lol
no problem. i forgot this too ><)
okey, i'm always waiting for you.

#このまま眠り続けて死ぬ

I'm really sorry, I've almost forget to check it, will take a look soon as possible.

okey (>_<

私日本語下手なので、何か知らな部分があったら教えてください！ｗ

１２３４

*05:35:821 - As Feerum said, this LN part seems fine to me too. I think it won't be a problem.

00:04:472 (4472|1,4551|0) - 00:04:630 (4630|1,4709|2,4788|1,4867|2) - この二つはなんか違う音が聞こえるから変化があればいいだとおもいます。ノートの数どかパタンの変化とか。。

00:20:735 - これがもっといいだと思いますけどどうですか？

00:25:788 - 同じ理由です。でも上のパタンと同じですから何か変化があればいいですね

00:30:604 - synth sound に二つのノートを使っています、一つ追加するのが正しいと思います。例えば 00:35:656 - これみたいにｗ

00:48:525 - 一つ追加するほうはどうですか？melodyの強調をために、

02:07:946 - 今二つのノート使用するパートと同じように一つ追加するのをおすすめします。

02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - 正直によくないpatternだと思います。02:27:209 (147209|3) - これが one handを作るので02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - これを１や２で移動するほうがいいです。

03:07:945 - ＜３＜３＜３

03:23:576 (203576|2) - １で移動してくればもっといいと思います for hand balance.　03:23:576 (203576|2,203655|3,203734|3) - これが全部右手にあるのてよくないと思います。

07:01:094 - 一つ追加はどうですか？06:57:094 - これと同じだと思いますけど。。。

09:47:724 (587724|2) - これは削除するほうがいいですよ、プレイするときも全然感じなかったし。。

13:27:672 - ここかれ出るこのおっさんは誰ですか？ㅇㅅㅇ

15:40:730 (940730|3,940837|3) - このjackはいらないと思います。15:45:337 - こんなものとは違うようにはっきり感じなっかたです。

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返事が日本語なら嬉しいと思います！日本語の勉強もできるしｗ
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*05:35:821 - As Feerum said, this LN part seems fine to me too. I think it won't be a problem.

00:04:472 (4472|1,4551|0) - 00:04:630 (4630|1,4709|2,4788|1,4867|2) - この二つはなんか違う音が聞こえるから変化があればいいだとおもいます。ノートの数どかパタンの変化とか。。
パターンのみ変更しました。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5566277

00:20:735 - これがもっといいだと思いますけどどうですか？
fixed

これ

00:25:788 - 同じ理由です。でも上のパタンと同じですから何か変化があればいいですね
fixed.ここは反転＋パターンを少し変更しました

00:30:604 - synth sound に二つのノートを使っています、一つ追加するのが正しいと思います。例えば 00:35:656 - これみたいにｗ
うーん…no changeで。ここはViolinが主体でピアノの音が小さいです（ 00:35:656 - ははっきりピアノが聞こえます）
逆に00:35:656 - 00:36:288 - 00:36:525 - の2notesを活かすために00:35:735 (35735|3,36367|1,36604|2) - を削除しました。

00:48:525 - 一つ追加するほうはどうですか？melodyの強調をために、
fixed

02:07:946 - 今二つのノート使用するパートと同じように一つ追加するのをおすすめします。
fixed

02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - 正直によくないpatternだと思います。02:27:209 (147209|3) - これが one handを作るので02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - これを１や２で移動するほうがいいです。
jackを削除し、パターンを変更しました。

03:07:945 - ＜３＜３＜３

03:23:576 (203576|2) - １で移動してくればもっといいと思います for hand balance.　03:23:576 (203576|2,203655|3,203734|3) - これが全部右手にあるのてよくないと思います。
fixed

07:01:094 - 一つ追加はどうですか？06:57:094 - これと同じだと思いますけど。。。
no change. 06:57:094 - はdramに加えてmain soundがあるため2notesにしています。

09:47:724 (587724|2) - これは削除するほうがいいですよ、プレイするときも全然感じなかったし。。
fixed

13:27:672 - ここかれ出るこのおっさんは誰ですか？ㅇㅅㅇ
ZUNさんです。東方Projectを作った人です(>_<

15:40:730 (940730|3,940837|3) - このjackはいらないと思います。15:45:337 - こんなものとは違うようにはっきり感じなっかたです。15:40:730 (940730|3) - を3に移動させました。

この曲想像以上に長かった；；
返事が日本語なら嬉しいと思います！日本語の勉強もできるしｗ
修正が終わったらTwitterとかPMで教えてください！あとなんか変わった部分があれば（このmod以外）それも教えてください！

thank you for check!

Seems good. here's #2 bubble.

I always feel happy when I helped polite people.

Good luck!

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