1. close my eyes, dress finds another truth (4.99 stars, 1041 notes)

Sellenite wrote:

刚好5分钟11111

waxman wrote:

Coming

1. 中二diff
2. 00:01:274 - 第一根绿线这里
3. 00:04:809 - 漏音，有必要的话该折返
4. 00:13:167 - 00:14:024 - 建议接个泡
5. 00:15:524 - 两根蓝线有必要的话填上
6. 00:20:345 - 建议分开，节奏紧密些
7. 00:21:738 - 00:23:238 - 加个泡试试
8. 00:31:702 (4) - clap？
9. 00:30:095 - 有漏
10. 00:31:702 (4) - 同漏，建议短条接个泡
11. 00:40:488 - 短促音在红蓝线上，有必要的话填上，另外00:40:917 - 重音放中间也不太合适
12. 00:44:238 - 两根蓝线放个泡好听些
13. 00:57:845 (2,3,4) - 试下
    
14. 01:02:559 - 加个泡
15. 01:03:524 (7) - 7占的蓝线没音，建议空点停顿感，类似这里01:06:845 (7,1,2,3) -
16. 01:05:024 - 01:32:452 - 01:39:309 - 03:37:702 (6) - 04:51:524 - 音在蓝线，需要调整
    
17. 01:09:738 - 漏，有必要的话填上
18. 01:16:488 (2) - 01:18:202 (2) - 建议分开，泡加条
19. 01:33:845 - 音比较重，建议分开
20. 02:38:559 - 03:26:881 - 加泡
21. 03:15:524 (7) - 容易误读，调DS
22. 03:37:702 (6) - 复读4,5

ids wrote:

骗分

[close my eyes, dress finds another truth]

1. 中二diff
2. 00:01:274 - 第一根绿线这里
3. 00:04:809 - 漏音，有必要的话该折返
4. 00:13:167 - 00:14:024 - 建议接个泡 前面我是故意漏的, 不这样复读太多..
5. 00:15:524 - 两根蓝线有必要的话填上
6. 00:20:345 - 建议分开，节奏紧密些
7. 00:21:738 - 00:23:238 - 加个泡试试 试了下还是改回去了, 觉得逐渐加快比较好玩
8. 00:31:702 (4) - clap？ clap好
9. 00:30:095 - 有漏
10. 00:31:702 (4) - 同漏，建议短条接个泡
11. 00:40:488 - 短促音在红蓝线上，有必要的话填上，另外00:40:917 - 重音放中间也不太合适
12. 00:44:238 - 两根蓝线放个泡好听些
13. 00:57:845 (2,3,4) - 试下 我觉得这样和后面三连衔接不好
14. 01:02:559 - 加个泡
15. 01:03:524 (7) - 7占的蓝线没音，建议空点停顿感，类似这里01:06:845 (7,1,2,3) - 好
16. 01:05:024 - 01:32:452 - 01:39:309 - 03:37:702 (6) - 04:51:524 - 音在蓝线，需要调整 暂时跟一下鼓..
17. 01:09:738 - 漏，有必要的话填上
18. 01:16:488 (2) - 01:18:202 (2) - 建议分开，泡加条 没改
19. 01:33:845 - 音比较重，建议分开 不是vocal没关系吧 反正这么随意
20. 02:38:559 - 03:26:881 - 加泡
21. 03:15:524 (7) - 容易误读，调DS 改了
22. 03:37:702 (6) - 复读4,5 不好

好，点赞 111111

Sellenite wrote:

音效是不是WIP啊，感觉能下很多whistle

[我闭上了眼睛，发现了真由理]
00:04:488 (4) - NC 好
00:12:309 (1) - 删 好
00:53:452 (1) - 移到00:53:345，或00:53:345加个circle 不好
00:56:774 (5) - 换成1/2滑条？ 不好
02:13:917 (6) - 这个删了吧，停顿一下 好
02:54:417 (6,7) - 换成1/2滑条折返 不好
03:01:059 (5) - 这个挺反flow的，ctrl+g 好

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M from my queue

[general]

这难度名屌炸天有木有

[close my eyes, dress finds another truth]

00:05:131 要不要滑条 空着多好

00:12:845 (3,4) - 试试 那就少送了一分, 不好

00:13:702 (6,7) - ^

00:15:524 note 故意空着的

00:19:488 ^

00:26:131 (1) - 这转盘放的233

00:27:952 (4,5) - 试试 加了三连

00:29:774 note(376,328) 然后1叠这 不好

00:38:345 note(184,332)

00:40:488 note 叠00:40:702 (3)

00:51:417 (4,1) - 折返删1 反flow多好

01:04:702 (2,3) - 感觉ctrl+g好 不好玩

01:19:059 (4) - ^

01:28:488 (4,5) - 和前面类似做法？

01:32:559 (3) - ctrl+g

01:34:702 (1) - ....好吧，这种节奏都是转盘,不列举

02:19:274 (1,2) - 试试 11111不好

02:38:774 (2) - 试试 这个号

03:26:345 试试？

03:38:131 (1,1) - 卧槽好近，03:39:开始连打？ 这就是要制造出中间断开了一段的效果啊

04:32:345 (8,9) - 全选拖到(286,174) 不好

good luck on App（有连打和短链，会fail 打不了分系列 233

gxytcgxytc wrote:

wa app

Samah wrote:

From queue:

I doubt you want to change your hitsounds, but just give this a try and tell me what you think:
http://puu.sh/8uDXC.wav (drum-hitclap.wav)
00:11:559 (6) - Drum hitclap at the start.
00:12:952 (4) - Soft whistle at the end.
And repeat where necessary. added some wwww

Other:
01:40:488 (2,3,4,5) - It'd be nice if you could keep the spacing consistent within this combo. that would overlap the slider, so i only made the consistency two by two.
02:56:131 (4,5) - This jump is evil! I'd consider bringing (4) and (5) slightly closer together. ok
03:53:345 (1,2,3) - These have the same spacing, but (1,2) are 1/4 beat gap and (2,3) are 1/2 beat gap. Maybe move one of the sliders? this is some intentional jump, since the first is 1/4 slider, it would make for a difference
04:32:131 (7,8) - Another scary jump, especially with AR9. I'd bring (6) and (7) down a bit so that (7) isn't hanging out the top of the editor. moved off the top

Fun map. <3

sjoy wrote:

[闭眼真知]
00:02:131 (1,2) - 滑条身体+s-whis 如何 思考 加了2
00:38:131 (1) - FIN fin基本上都加了, 有一个觉得莫名就没加
00:44:988 (3) - ^
00:51:845 (1) - ^
01:12:417 (1) - ^ 改成转盘了
01:19:274 (1) - ^
01:26:131 (3) - ^
01:32:988 (5) - ^
01:46:702 (1) - 哇居然有FIN
02:12:417 (1) - ^
02:34:702 (1) - ^
03:22:702 (8) - ^
04:01:488 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 好梗 左声道和右声道111 11111我用过好几次了
04:10:702 (1) - fin
04:38:131 (1) - fin
04:43:274 (2) - ^
03:38:131 (1,1) - 太近了吧。。 不怕 能转 大不了转不满
02:28:020 - ctrl+g 后面太远了啊
02:17:559 (1) - 我觉得这个转圈莫名 stay with me
00:55:274 (2) - ctrl+g 不好111111
00:38:345 不加个NOTE? 放空点, 故意的
下次再添 WHIS 1111 1111111111

waxman wrote:

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[General]
Those Claps vol. is too low. maybe change them to 90~100%.

About 02:14:131 - 02:20:774 (1), there are Claps. but in 02:38:131 (1) - 02:41:345 Sometimes there is no Clap. It's strange for me.
In addition to, vol. is lower than 02:20:988 (2), 02:41:559 (1,2,3,4).


[Map]

00:04:488 (1,2,3) - add 2 circle more? I guess it's unnecessary against the song. i don't think so, following the music there is not the 2 notes
00:56:774 (5,1) - far a bit? I think. According to 00:57:845 (2,3,4). i think that one is short slider, thus is different, so i didn't make the same distance
00:58:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this? changed the direction.. that place is too close
01:03:631 (7,1) - too far? According to 00:15:845 (1,2,3,4) 00:27:524 (3,4,5) etc. There is NC tho.
02:01:488 (4,5) - I want to change spacing to like 00:15:845 (1,2,3,4) 00:27:524 (3,4,5). this section wouldn't be hard. ?
02:54:631 (7) - This circle is strange against the song. get slider that is slow SV and long. no wwww
03:22:702 - 03:29:452 vocal is off. change to lower vol. I don't know why you placed Green line here LOL. I think you should have tried to do this lol. This is why there is Clap from 03:30:631 (1). ok changed vol

03:50:131 (1) - 04:03:417 (6) - lower vol. because main sound is off. Also, Add Green line on 03:56:988 (1) to change vol. . done~ good
04:01:488 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That vol. is stronger and stronger.
04:44:988 - same as 03:50:131 (1) - 04:03:417 (6).
04:56:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 04:01:488 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6).



00:11:559 (6) - delete Clap? miss? it's fun www
00:50:131 (1) - delete Clap or keep? It's different from 00:55:274 (2) and 00:56:988 (1).
00:53:131 (7) - add Clap don't want to emphasize a note before an empty tick, so deleted the clap
01:02:559 (3) - ^
01:13:488 (1) - ^ (Clap position that you placed at 01:11:131, 01:11:988.)
02:15:417 (5) - ^
02:16:274 (3) - ^

02:26:131 (1) - same as 00:50:131 (1)
02:41:131 (3) - delete Clap? main sound is still off. ok
02:26:131 (1) - same as 00:50:131 (1)

04:26:559 (2) - add Clap ok
04:26:774 (3) - delete Clap no
04:26:988 (4) - ^

GOOD LUCK!

Mintong wrote:

Hey

[吾瞑真相见于君]

00:08:131 (4) - 换个比较特别的slider怎么样?
00:13:809 (6) - 头加个whistle吧...后面几乎好像都没音效 没加
00:14:667 (3) - 这里也可以加whistle, 然后 00:14:988 (4) - 加clap (都是slider头) 好
00:15:845 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这样的摆放有点扭曲...不如这样?
00:17:881 (2) - 我觉得slider尾不要太靠近 00:17:238 (4) - 的尾比较好, 试试放远点?
00:27:952 (4,5) - 比如都叠在slider尾部? 好像不错 不好啊, 这样前面的位置就不好了
00:33:417 (4,5) - 弄给他相等? 看不明白
01:30:845 (1) - 几乎忘了NC? 好
01:32:988 (1) - ^
01:51:845 (3,7) - 不如用同样的slider吧? 好
01:56:559 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉可以做个完美的三角形 数学上只有等边三角形, 没有完美的三角形, 就美观上来说我觉得是差不多的, 没必要追求这种完美
02:30:417 (5) - 稍微移上点? 好
02:34:274 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这星星还是可以摆好的... 摆这个的时候就没按星星摆, fixed
03:14:988 (6,7,8) - blanket好 一开始我也是blanket好的可是想到是1/4觉得不弄好可能更明显..
05:00:417 (1) - add clap? 233这个号

神图, 真心不错
hppd lcuk tp ranl!

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

[闭目寻其实]
00:00:417 (1,2,3,4) +00:07:702 (2,4) - 来点音效
00:17:238 (4) - 将whistle换成finish
00:20:988 (6,1,3) + 00:34:702 (1,5) +00:36:417 (1) + - +finish
00:36:845 (3,4) + 00:41:559 (1,2) - 白线处+finish
00:48:417 (1) - +finish
01:02:131 (1,5,1) - 白线finish
01:17:559 (1) - ^
01:19:274 (1) - 哇居然有finish
01:22:702 (1,3) - +finish
01:24:417 (1,2) - +clap
01:25:274 (2) - 白线+clap
01:29:559 (1) - +finish
01:43:274 (1,2) - 白线+finish
01:56:988 (3) - +finish
02:10:702 (1,5,1,2,4) - 白线+finish
02:14:131 (1) - 哇有finish
02:19:274 (1,2,3) - 这三个建议都用音效
02:38:131 (1,4,1,2,3) - 白线+finish
02:58:702 (1,3) - +finish
03:05:559 (3) - finish
03:06:417 (7) - 白线+clap
03:19:274 (1,6) - 白线+finish
03:20:988 (1,3,4,6) - 后面三条白线都有音效，前面一个也加一个吧
03:32:667 (5) - +finish
03:34:702 (2) - 白线+clap
03:35:238 (4) - ^
03:38:131 (1,1) -
03:46:702 (1) - +finish
03:47:559 (1) - 白线+finish
03:48:417 (1) - +finish
04:27:845 (1) - +finish
04:54:952 (6,2,1,3,5) - 白线+finish

好顶赞，加油

1. Is countdown really necessary?
2. Sounds like there's no hitsounds at all 0.0 either they're too low or you add less of them. U know, hitsound is good for err, feedback, yes feedback.
3. Maybe use some normal-hitsounds?

1. HP4 is too low imo, what about HP5 or HP6? Both is ok for such long maps
2. 00:09:417 (1) - I think you can remove this, doesn't fit that much
3. 00:26:131 (1) - Same here, in fact you can map normally here
4. 00:43:274 (1) - Ctrl+G? Flows better o.0
5. 01:12:417 - 0.o another unfitting spinner
6. 01:58:917 (5,6) - 0.0 for real? This spacing?
7. 02:17:559 (1) - Eh why spinner?
8. 03:22:702 - 03:30:417 - Imo a very good place for a short break. Care to add a break here?
9. 04:11:559 (4) - Maybe it's better if replaced into 2 circles.
10. 04:30:202 (4,5) - For real?
11. 04:59:131 (1) - Extend to 05:00:417 - and remove circle?

inverness wrote:

General

1. Is countdown really necessary? removed
2. Sounds like there's no hitsounds at all 0.0 either they're too low or you add less of them. U know, hitsound is good for err, feedback, yes feedback. hmm.. i can hear them in most places..
3. Maybe use some normal-hitsounds?

0.0

1. HP4 is too low imo, what about HP5 or HP6? Both is ok for such long maps ok, hp+1
2. 00:09:417 (1) - I think you can remove this, doesn't fit that much no (spinners in this map refer to "stay with me", that's why it looks out of place)
3. 00:26:131 (1) - Same here, in fact you can map normally here
4. 00:43:274 (1) - Ctrl+G? Flows better o.0
5. 01:12:417 - 0.o another unfitting spinner
6. 01:58:917 (5,6) - 0.0 for real? This spacing? changed a little, but it's intentionally hard
7. 02:17:559 (1) - Eh why spinner?
8. 03:22:702 - 03:30:417 - Imo a very good place for a short break. Care to add a break here?
9. 04:11:559 (4) - Maybe it's better if replaced into 2 circles. hmm.. then spacing will have to change, i don't change this for now
10. 04:30:202 (4,5) - For real? no change o.o
11. 04:59:131 (1) - Extend to 05:00:417 - and remove circle?

Map is already good although I'm expecting a lot about the hitsounds, which is why I can't mod a lot.
0.0
Good luck!

ZZHBOY wrote:

偶像早 送mod

[关上我的眼睛，发现另一个真理的衣服]
00:04:917 - 这里感觉起一个半拍滑条比作为滑条尾好 像这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1575217
00:08:131 (4) - 这种过一拍的滑条中间弄两个红描点感觉能把节奏表现出来wa awa
00:47:131 (2) - 建议红线停然后加个1/4滑条因为红线好像vocal有音
00:53:345 - 可以加个圈a
01:07:595 - ^
00:55:274 (2) - 可以弧度大一点blanket下a 不好111
01:25:917 (1,2,3) - 可以和前面距离远点放远点啊感觉可以让3的重音突出点.-.
02:02:345 (2) - 428丨348感觉好看点啊 加了
02:13:917 - 感觉这里可以加1-2个圈啊空着不舒服啊 请摆脱你的强迫症
02:51:845 - 加个finish?
03:15:845 - ^
04:12:417 (1) - 弧度大点blanket2呗
04:58:381 (6) - 提前1/4拍停然后加个圈试试?长白线好像有个呜的音.-. 呜

美丽

Yoshino-Sakura wrote:

Hi,from my modding queue

[General]
Uncheck letterbox during breaks
Combo color around red might be better.Yellow,blue are really improper.

[Marathon]
00:02:131 (1) - blanket(the distance in the middle is smaller)
00:15:524 note stack on 00:15:417 (5) -
00:38:345 maybe you miss the vocal here
00:40:702 (3) - I think the slider should start at 00:40:488 .The present one is quite confusing. intentionally making some empty ticks for 233
00:41:131 then a note here or patterns like 00:45:631 (5,6) -
00:43:274 (1) - ctrl+g this to get a better flow ok www
00:47:131 (2) - imo you should reduce the slider to 1/2 and then place a note at 00:47:452.The vocal is at 00:47:345 not good to play
00:53:131 (7,1) - increase the distance here
01:02:345 a note here to make it a triplet.It sounds a lot better
01:19:059 (4) - i would like to ctrl+g this i think backwards flow fits better
01:19:488 (2,3) - exchange their place to get a smoother jump.But the current one is ok
01:28:059 (2) - why not make a stack
01:46:702 (1,2) - maybe increase the distance to 1.9
02:17:559 (1) - i think this spinner is quite unfit
02:20:774 (1,2) - exchange the NC ok
02:54:417 (6,7) - what a big distance uccu
04:11:559 (4) - i prefer 2 circles here
04:28:059 (2) - kanbudong

For the guitar solo part,I think you should follow the guitar but not the drum.It should have some changes.But it's quite difficult to follow >.<
And you can use more whistle to emphasize some rhythm.

Suggestion of a little part

00:38:559 (2)
00:38:559 (2) - head
00:39:417 (5) -
00:39:845 (1) - head
00:40:702 (3) - tail(your present slider)
00:41:559 (1) - head
00:42:309 (4) - head
00:42:845 (5) -
00:43:274 (1) - whole

wee

Good luck

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我发明了新的钱语 wee=233

Pururut wrote:

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