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Tom Day - New Beginnings [Osu|OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Mortem
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CerealeKiller
Hello, indeed Tom Day is a great chill music producer !

First of all, what difficulty is Beginning ? Hard or insane ?


Now my mod :

About the timing, I'm not sure that you have a right offset (0000 seems suspicious) I've put it at 1643 and it seems slighly better

00:06:891 (2) - Delete that slider and remplace it with :
Or with a short slider starting at 00:07:297
Or two hitcircles at 00:07:297 and 00:07:702
00:13:783 (1) - Don't really like that shape here, I would personnaly prefer a rounded one like this
00:20:270 (1) - Maybe consider changing this slider with two hitcircles and a slider. (Like this)
00:43:783 (3,4) - Those sliders don't feet to eachother, try to reorganize them, maybe using symetry or making them completing themselves
00:48:648 (1,2,3) - I would change the order of those to fit more with the slider : http://puu.sh/8siRS.jpg
00:50:675 (5) - That shape is a bit irregular, try to smooth it
01:04:864 (1,2) - Lower it a bit, I find this make a better result and it breaks that symetry effect : http://puu.sh/8simt.jpg
01:17:837 (1,2,3) - Flip it vertically ?

The rest seems right to me.
About the HP drain, idk if it's deliberate but if you miss one hit in the 1st half of the map you can't really pass it, unless maybe if you're doing a perfect.

And finnaly, I've made an osu mania guest diff, it's the first time i'm mapping something in mania so I don't even know if it's rankable, but anyway, here you have it (+ my own modifications on your standard diff) : http://puu.sh/8sk55.osz

I hope I could help ! :)

PS : Maybe I'll map a standard guest diff one day, but I already have a mapset to finish, so idk if I'll do it and if I do, idk when.
Topic Starter
Mortem

CerealeKiller wrote:

Hello, indeed Tom Day is a great chill music producer !

First of all, what difficulty is Beginning ? Hard or insane ? - It supposed to be Insane.


Now my mod : - I changed everything in there.

The rest seems right to me.
About the HP drain, idk if it's deliberate but if you miss one hit in the 1st half of the map you can't really pass it, unless maybe if you're doing a perfect. - I will lower it

And finnaly, I've made an osu mania guest diff, it's the first time i'm mapping something in mania so I don't even know if it's rankable, but anyway, here you have it - Thanks :)

I hope I could help ! :) - Of course
yoshilove
hi~ from mania queue :3

offset : 1650 (About sorry not accurate ><)
Resnap All notes
and Resnap first note

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

7K
[Cereale's NM]
00:04:082 (4082|0) - move to 2?
00:04:487 (4487|1) - remove
00:18:271 (18271|6,18271|1) - change LN end ~ 00:19:082
00:23:947 (23947|0) - remove
00:29:420 (29420|6) - move to 6
00:29:622 (29622|5) - move to 5
00:45:028 (45028|1) - move to 1?
00:45:839 (45839|5) - move to 5?
01:14:217 - add note to 6
01:20:704 - add note to 4
01:25:568 - add note to 3
01:32:460 (92460|2,92663|0,92866|2) - remove
01:33:677 (93677|4,93677|2) - remove
01:33:677 - add note to 4
01:34:082 (94082|2,94487|4) - remove
01:53:136 - add note to 4
01:54:758 - add note to 5
01:56:379 - add note to 6
01:58:001 - add note to 3
02:04:082 (124082|0) - move to 2
_Erra_
Hey! M4m :D

[Beginning]

 ● 00:03:670 (3) - maybe whistle?

 ● 00:04:880 (7) - ^

 ● 00:08:130 (4) - ^

 ● 00:09:751 (1) -maybe in the end of slider add whistle?

 ● 00:10:562 (2) - add whistle in the arrow of the slider

 ● 00:14:616 (2) - add whistle in the begin of slider

 ● 00:16:643 (3) - ^

 ● 00:17:049 (4) - maybe add whistle in the end of slider?

 ● Just resee map and add a HS okay?

 ● 01:00:832 (4) - add whistle in the begin of slider

 ● 01:02:454 (4) - ^

 ● 01:03:670 (2) - add whistle in the arrow of slider

 ● 01:05:291 (2) - ^

 ● 01:06:508 (1) - add whistle in the begin of slider

 ● 01:08:130 (1) - ^

 ● 01:09:751 (1) - add whistle

 ● 01:10:562 (4) - add whistle in the begin of slider

 ● 01:12:184 (4) - ^

and etc i think you understand me x)

 ● You diff is so hard for Beginning. It''s more had diff than Beginner or Easy(if so conceived) but maybe it just my opinion
CerealeKiller
Thanks for your mod yoshilove, I changed almost everything !


yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from mania queue :3

offset : 1650 (About sorry not accurate ><) Changed !
Resnap All notes
and Resnap first note

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

7K
[Cereale's NM]
00:04:082 (4082|0) - move to 2? - Done
00:04:487 (4487|1) - remove - Done
00:18:271 (18271|6,18271|1) - change LN end ~ 00:19:082 -I'm sorry but I don't get what you mean there
00:23:947 (23947|0) - remove - Why ?
00:29:420 (29420|6) - move to 6 - Done
00:29:622 (29622|5) - move to 5 - Done
00:45:028 (45028|1) - move to 1? - Done
00:45:839 (45839|5) - move to 5? - Done
01:14:217 - add note to 6 - Done
01:20:704 - add note to 4 - Done
01:25:568 - add note to 3 - Done
01:32:460 (92460|2,92663|0,92866|2) - remove - Done
01:33:677 (93677|4,93677|2) - remove - Done
01:33:677 - add note to 4 - Done
01:34:082 (94082|2,94487|4) - remove - Done
01:53:136 - add note to 4 - Done
01:54:758 - add note to 5 - Done
01:56:379 - add note to 6 - Done
01:58:001 - add note to 3 - Done
02:04:082 (124082|0) - move to 2 - Done
yoshilove

CerealeKiller wrote:

Thanks for your mod yoshilove, I changed almost everything !
00:23:947 (23947|0) - remove - Why ?
because one note.
00:10:568
00:17:055
00:30:028
etc~~

00:18:271 (18271|6,18271|1) - change LN end ~ 00:19:082 -I'm sorry but I don't get what you mean there
Extend the end of the long notes


this post No Kudos
Frostings
Hi from M4M

please set offset in "Beginning" to 1650 and resnap all notes
Also the BPM is actually 148.000 which means you'll have to halve your slider velocity somehow

pm me once you fix and I will mod

no kudosu for this post please

EDIT: if you have questions about mapping or need any help, add me in-game.
if I'm not busy I'll be able to help you more thoroughly
CerealeKiller
@yoshilove :
SPOILER

yoshilove wrote:

CerealeKiller wrote:

Thanks for your mod yoshilove, I changed almost everything !
00:23:947 (23947|0) - remove - Why ?
because one note.
00:10:568
00:17:055
00:30:028
etc~~

00:18:271 (18271|6,18271|1) - change LN end ~ 00:19:082 -I'm sorry but I don't get what you mean there
Extend the end of the long notes


this post No Kudos

Oh I get what you want, but I think that I changed it before your mod, maybe check it and tell me if it's still bad. If it is, tell me clearly how to change it cause I really don't know haha.
Topic Starter
Mortem

Frostings wrote:

Hi from M4M

please set offset in "Beginning" to 1650 and resnap all notes
Also the BPM is actually 148.000 which means you'll have to halve your slider velocity somehow

pm me once you fix and I will mod

no kudosu for this post please

EDIT: if you have questions about mapping or need any help, add me in-game.
if I'm not busy I'll be able to help you more thoroughly
Hi...I fixed the offset but I didn't change the BPM, 'cause I have there some slower sliders, and If I would change the BPM, It'll make a huge mess in beatmap.
Unusual-bot
hi there.
M4M from your queue, let's start. oops, before starting, i just wanna tell you that all what i say here are only suggestion, so it's up to you to follow it or not, but please reply my mod especially when you reject my suggestion :)

Hard
  1. 00:49:082 (3,5) - stack properly?
  2. 01:14:622 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should make this pattern into something like 01:09:758 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. 01:25:974 (1,3) - stack properly
  4. 01:32:460 (1,2,3,4) - make more symmetric
  5. 01:34:082 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:47:055 (1,2,3) - how about closing the gap between 2 and 3 to make it flow better like this?
  7. 01:48:677 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 01:55:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - make 1-3 into symmetric triangle or make all into symmetric star shape?
OK, that's all from me. Really like the song, Relaxing one :)
Good luck~
Kihhou
M4M here~

[Beginning]
  1. 00:04:487 (5,6) - these 2 hitcircles take place at the same time. remove 6 :O its unrankable
  2. 00:04:893 (7,8) - lower distance? it seems like a random jump in the middle of 1 section~
  3. 00:05:298 (8,1) - i would recommend you change them into sliders! so that theyre easier to follow up on instead of having to focus so hard on the approach circles. it also plays and sounds nicer imo!~ if you make the change, i would recommend it be like this:
  4. 00:23:541 (4,5) - you should make it like you did at 00:17:055 (4,5) - ! it follows the music so much better~
  5. 01:46:244 (2,3) - change these into a slider imo. because the distance between the hitcircles is the same as the distance for these 01:47:055 (1,2,3), which can be a bit misleading
  6. 02:04:893 (1) - i would personally remove this spinner since a nice short slider would be a good end for this calm song :O its not a big deal though~
Nice and peaceful song c: and thanks for accepting my mod req. pls only mod 1 diff on my map, preferably hard~
Good luck!
Frostings
Hold up, please ignore everything inside the collapsed text while I triple check this BPM

SPOILER

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi...I fixed the offset but I didn't change the BPM, 'cause I have there some slower sliders, and If I would change the BPM, It'll make a huge mess in beatmap.
sorry but your BPM is an unrankable issue

The best possible way to fix this is to do the following:

1. change BPM to 148.000
2. change all of your green timing point BPM of 1.0x to 1.05x
3. change all of your green timing point BPM of 0.5x to either 0.52x or 0.53x
4. create a new timing point here 00:04:487 - and set its BPM to 1.05x
5. Change slider velocity from 2.10 to 1.00
6. Change Slider Tick Rate from 2 to 1
7. Make sure you are in 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor
8. Recalculate all slider lengths
9. Check every slider to make sure they fall in the right tick

Upload your most latest version before doing this
In case something goes wrong, you can revert back to your most recent version
PM me for help if you need
deejaydray
Hello, m4m here ^^

BEGINNING:

First of all, AiMod says that both KIAI times are not snapped:

Kiai isn't snapped! 01:00:000
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 01:09:751
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:25:967
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 01:38:940

00:04:487 (5,6) - this is unrankable, you must delete circle 6 because those two objects are less than 10ms apart
00:54:352 - 00:55:974 this break is too short, you should make it longer or delete it (by adding few objects during this period)
01:53:947 (2) - this slider's shape is a little awkward and it seems like it was randomly put there because it is very different than the other sliders, consider changing it

I would like to add just a few more things:

:arrow: I'm not sure if you did this on purpose, but you should pay a little more attention to distance snap because there are some objects which, for me, look like they are randomly too close to each other, for example 00:10:568 (2) is too close to the previous object. It is better to keep the same distance between most of the objects.
:arrow: Also, I think it is better to use Grid Level 4 instead of 3, it is more accurate, but it's your choice :)
:arrow: The last thing I would like to discuss about is the HP, AR and OD for this difficulty. I think that HP:7 AR:8 and OD:7 is too much for this difficulty, especially since the song has only 74 BPM. My opinion is: lower the HP, AR and OD by 1, this means to make HP:6 AR:7 and OD:6, I think it fits better.

That's all, hope I could help you! ^^ The map is not bad, but you should be more careful about some details, like distance or unsnapped objects. Also, the song is nice with a calm atmosphere :) I'm looking forward to your m4m, GL with your map!
Winek
Hey just randomly found your map.

Just came to say one thing:
The spread is bad.

Mainly, i've seen in a post that beginnings is an insane diff.

Do you think NM(Mania) + insane is appropriate spread?

You would require 2 Mania diffs ; as well as at least Normal and Hard. Good luck on your map.

You don't need to kudosu this post.
Frostings
Hi there


[General]
I'm not sure about this mp3 quality.. it seems ok until you get to 00:56:575 - and then suddenly there's a lot of background noise
maybe you could find a new mp3 file

Also, you're going to need more difficulties in order for this mapset to get ranked:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Mapsets must have at least two difficulties of the same game mode, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level.
which means you'll need one more for standard (I recommend two more), one one for osu!mania (also maybe two more)

Winek wrote:

Just came to say one thing:
The spread is bad.
lol Winek

[Cereale's NM (7K)]
Please set offset to 1643 and BPM to 148.000

[Beginning]
Make sure you are in 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor and then Recalculate Slider Lengths

Please check all of your sliders after you do this, i think there's only one problem with this slider 01:53:940 (2) -

00:06:102 (1) - intentionally shaped this way? why not use a single anchor for a smoother curve



00:57:589 (1) - start this spinner over here 00:56:778 -

01:48:670 (1,2,3) - you can copy+paste 01:47:049 (1,2,3) - and then rotate / flip it, because the distance is bothering me ;;



I'm not sure about this difficulty. The object density is really low for an Insane. You picked a really hard song to map.
As for rhythm and flow it's fairly good

good luck ~
Shiranai
Hi M4M request :)

[General]
  1. Based on ranking criteria, a mapset for ranked at least should be consist of two diffs (an Easy and Normal OR Normal and Hard) the curent one you
  2. have only one diff in which unrankable, so I sugest to make another diff that easier than the curent one, It apply on mania too
  3. You can check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), since there's so many problem on your map
  4. To make sure, you can ask someone to check the timing
  5. Delete Jumpy from Tags
  6. The green combo colours seems too dark, maybe you can lighten It a bit, or you can try this instead
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 128,152,198
    Combo2 : 0,125,125
    Combo3 : 255,184,113
  7. Try to use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisior instead of 1/8
  8. About the diff names, maybe you can change into Normal or Hard or Relaxing, well It's up to you though
  9. I think you need soft-hitfinish to make the hitsound more colourful, here: http://puu.sh/8VIL7.wav
  10. Kiai time should be begin at 01:00:021 - and endded at 01:38:940 - and It was full not seperated like the curent one
[Beginning]
  1. 00:10:562 (2) - You can change into this http://puu.sh/8VJhq.jpg, since the piano sound on that part worth to mapped
  2. 00:23:940 (5) - If you follow the piano sound then you should follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/8VJsv.jpg
  3. 00:30:832 (4) - Change into 1/1 slider
  4. 00:36:508 (4) - Same as above
  5. 00:37:319 (5) - Same as above
  6. 00:38:535 (6) - Change into this http://puu.sh/8VJMu.jpg
  7. 00:42:184 (1) - Change into this http://puu.sh/8VJVd.jpg
  8. 00:43:805 (6) - Chabge into 1/1 slider
  9. 00:57:589 (1) - Move that spinner, begin at 00:56:778 - ended at 00:59:615 -
  10. 01:06:913 (2,2) - Change into 1/1 slider with reverse or triplet circles on every white tick, like the previous one to make the rhythm consistent
  11. 01:23:130 (2,3) - Same as above
  12. 01:40:967 (3,3) - Same as above
  13. 01:44:210 (3) - Same as above
  14. 01:47:454 (3,3,3) - Same as above
  15. 01:53:940 (2,3,3,4,6) - Same as above
  16. 02:04:886 (1) - Spinner should be ended at 02:06:507 -
All I have to say is your map is need more work on rhythm, flow and patern, especialy on hitsounding. Keep in mind a bit jump is ok, but not try to overmap since the song so relaxing.

[]
That's all, if you have questions about my mod, feel free to ask me ingame
Good luck :)
Maou - sama
I'll try to do some mod hope you like it :)

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Cereale's NM

General: change offset to 1581

00:09:689 (9689|5,9891|4,10094|3) - move this notes here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631252
00:10:499 (10499|1) - move to column 3
00:11:716 (11716|3) - remove and add notes here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631258
00:18:203 (18203|6,18203|1) - this long notes should end here 00:19:013 (19013|6,19013|1) -
00:21:040 (21040|4,22662|5,22864|6,23067|5) - change this or make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631267
00:25:499 (25499|3) - remove and add note at column 3 and 6
00:34:014 (34014|4) - move to column 6
00:35:837 (35837|1) - move to column 4
00:36:041 (36041|0) - move to column 5
00:36:852 (36852|1) - move to column 3
00:42:122 (42122|5,42324|4,42526|3) - change to like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631299
00:46:986 (46986|4) - move this to column 6
00:48:608 (48608|3,48811|2,49014|1) - move it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631305
00:49:418 (49418|4) - move to column 7
00:49:825 (49825|1) - move to column 1
00:52:257 (52257|6) - this must end here 00:53:067
00:53:067 (53067|3) - move to column 1
01:06:445 (66445|3,66648|1,66852|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631319
01:07:256 (67256|2,67662|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631331
01:08:067 (68067|4,68271|1,68473|0) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631333
01:09:284 (69284|5) - overlapped note here :)
01:09:690 (69690|4,69892|6,70095|1) - change like this [url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631339[/url]
01:11:311 (71311|0) - move to column 7
01:12:527 (72527|0) - move to column 5
01:13:743 (73743|3) - move to column 1
01:14:148 (74148|3) - make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631350
01:14:554 (74554|3,74757|4,74960|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631355
01:16:176 (76176|3,76379|6,76581|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631364
01:18:202 (78202|1) - move to column 4
01:19:621 (79621|5,79825|2) - change this like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631379
01:20:635 (80635|2) - add note at column 3
01:21:244 (81244|1,81446|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631386
01:21:852 (81852|3,82257|4) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631397
01:22:865 (82865|6) - move to column 4
01:23:068 (83068|6) - move to column 1
01:23:473 (83473|4) - change to long note that ends here 01:23:878 (83878|4) -
01:25:499 (85499|2) - add note at column 3
01:25:906 (85906|3,86108|4,86311|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631406
01:26:716 (86716|4) - remove LN
01:27:121 (87121|5) - move to column 1
01:27:527 (87527|3,87730|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631411
01:28:338 (88338|1) - remove LN
01:28:337 (88337|3) - move to column 7
01:28:337 (88337|2) - add note at column 3
01:29:149 (89149|1,89352|5,89554|0) - change like this [url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631419[/url]
01:30:771 (90771|2) - move to column 2
01:32:391 (92391|2,92391|0,92594|2,92595|0,92798|0,92798|2) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631427
01:36:851 (96851|3) - remove and add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631436
01:38:878 (98878|3,99081|2,99284|4) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631443
01:39:689 (99689|6) - move to column 3
01:40:095 (100095|5) - move to column 5
01:40:500 (100500|5,100703|4,100906|3) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631456
01:41:311 (101311|4) - move to coulmn 6
01:47:392 (107392|4) - move to column 3
01:50:432 (110432|0,110635|0) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631465
01:53:067 (113067|3) - add note at column 4
01:54:689 (114689|2) - add note at column 3
01:56:310 (116310|4) - add note at column 5
01:57:932 (117932|6) - add note at column 7
01:59:554 (119554|5) - move to column 5
02:00:770 (120770|0) - move to column 4

overall was good~

good luck! =w=)b
Topic Starter
Mortem
Thank you Maou - sama, Mako Sakata, Frostings, deejaydray, K4zuya K, Kihhou, _Erra_, yoshilove & CerealeKiller for your time and modding this map.
I'll really appreciate your support.
I tried to fix everything you mentioned, but ofc, there were some things, that I don't like/want to change.
I will try to improve it and try to map another difficulty.
But sometime later.
Once again. Thanks
CerealeKiller

Maou - sama wrote:

I'll try to do some mod hope you like it :) - It was awesome, a big thanks to you !

columns: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Cereale's NM : Changed everything !

SPOILER
General: change offset to 1581

00:09:689 (9689|5,9891|4,10094|3) - move this notes here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631252
00:10:499 (10499|1) - move to column 3
00:11:716 (11716|3) - remove and add notes here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631258
00:18:203 (18203|6,18203|1) - this long notes should end here 00:19:013 (19013|6,19013|1) -
00:21:040 (21040|4,22662|5,22864|6,23067|5) - change this or make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631267
00:25:499 (25499|3) - remove and add note at column 3 and 6
00:34:014 (34014|4) - move to column 6
00:35:837 (35837|1) - move to column 4
00:36:041 (36041|0) - move to column 5
00:36:852 (36852|1) - move to column 3
00:42:122 (42122|5,42324|4,42526|3) - change to like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631299
00:46:986 (46986|4) - move this to column 6
00:48:608 (48608|3,48811|2,49014|1) - move it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631305
00:49:418 (49418|4) - move to column 7
00:49:825 (49825|1) - move to column 1
00:52:257 (52257|6) - this must end here 00:53:067
00:53:067 (53067|3) - move to column 1
01:06:445 (66445|3,66648|1,66852|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631319
01:07:256 (67256|2,67662|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631331
01:08:067 (68067|4,68271|1,68473|0) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631333
01:09:284 (69284|5) - overlapped note here :)
01:09:690 (69690|4,69892|6,70095|1) - change like this [url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631339[/url]
01:11:311 (71311|0) - move to column 7
01:12:527 (72527|0) - move to column 5
01:13:743 (73743|3) - move to column 1
01:14:148 (74148|3) - make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631350
01:14:554 (74554|3,74757|4,74960|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631355
01:16:176 (76176|3,76379|6,76581|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631364
01:18:202 (78202|1) - move to column 4
01:19:621 (79621|5,79825|2) - change this like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631379
01:20:635 (80635|2) - add note at column 3
01:21:244 (81244|1,81446|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631386
01:21:852 (81852|3,82257|4) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631397
01:22:865 (82865|6) - move to column 4
01:23:068 (83068|6) - move to column 1
01:23:473 (83473|4) - change to long note that ends here 01:23:878 (83878|4) -
01:25:499 (85499|2) - add note at column 3
01:25:906 (85906|3,86108|4,86311|5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631406
01:26:716 (86716|4) - remove LN
01:27:121 (87121|5) - move to column 1
01:27:527 (87527|3,87730|1) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631411
01:28:338 (88338|1) - remove LN
01:28:337 (88337|3) - move to column 7
01:28:337 (88337|2) - add note at column 3
01:29:149 (89149|1,89352|5,89554|0) - change like this [url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631419[/url]
01:30:771 (90771|2) - move to column 2
01:32:391 (92391|2,92391|0,92594|2,92595|0,92798|0,92798|2) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631427
01:36:851 (96851|3) - remove and add note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631436
01:38:878 (98878|3,99081|2,99284|4) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631443
01:39:689 (99689|6) - move to column 3
01:40:095 (100095|5) - move to column 5
01:40:500 (100500|5,100703|4,100906|3) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631456
01:41:311 (101311|4) - move to coulmn 6
01:47:392 (107392|4) - move to column 3
01:50:432 (110432|0,110635|0) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1631465
01:53:067 (113067|3) - add note at column 4
01:54:689 (114689|2) - add note at column 3
01:56:310 (116310|4) - add note at column 5
[/color]01:57:932 (117932|6) - add note at column 7
01:59:554 (119554|5) - move to column 5
02:00:770 (120770|0) - move to column 4

overall was good~ Thanks !

good luck! =w=)b

Winek wrote:

You would require 2 Mania diffs ; as well as at least Normal and Hard. Good luck on your map.
Yeah I know that, but can those diffs be a 7K and a 4K one, or must they have the same number of keys ?
-Nya-
Hey! Sorry for the long wait, but here's my Normal GD as you had requested.

Nya's Normal
osu file format v13

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Title:New Beginnings
TitleUnicode:New Beginnings
Artist:Tom Day
ArtistUnicode:Tom Day
Creator:Pjecoo
Version:Nya's Normal
Source:
Tags:chillstep piano beautiful crossroads EP
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