Yo, as requested.
[General]
Best of luck!
[General]
- Add Collab and Collaboration to the tags. Those who like playing maps with mixed styles would thank you for yousing these tags.
- Try to remove the green combo colour. There're no green lines on the BG, so this green colour looks a bit out of place, I think.
Andrea
- 00:17:526 (1,2,3,1) - minor - that'd be awesome to use some blankets here. It will fit with your style + it will also look pretty neat.Looks cute, huh?
- 00:58:291 (6) - what a cute piano sound, try to replace 00:58:291 (6) - with a circle, so it will follow the sound of the piano closer.
- 05:18:585 - start the spinner here, and hremove the circle from this beat. Why? Because this diff is meant to be playable in all game modes, including o!m and taiko, while the beginning of this 1/4 spinner is totally offbeat
- 00:34:644 - starting such sliders on the blue ticks feels weird to me. I'd go with something like this, somehow this sounds better to me. Anyway, get more opinions before appliying/rejecting the suggestion!
Note: it's quite clear, that the same applies for all similar sliders in your part. So, it may take some time to change it. - 03:17:173 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - try changing the shape, so the pattern woulld look a bit neater? Example
Note: the stack is invisible in game, so hurting your VISIBLE attern to keep something invisible seems pointless to me.
- 01:18:232 (2) - replacing this one with a slider would work better with the vocals. It wn't change your rhythm that much, but the slider will represent vocals better, while circle here gives an unpleasant feeling of incompliteness.
- 04:31:291 (1,2,3) - it looks like your style has changed in some aspects, so I'm not sure if you want to apply this or not.. well, anyway. This might give you some smoother flow, which is awesome for a relaxing song, please try it!
- 02:03:761 (1,2) - I do like your style, but this pattern appears to be a bit unusual and unexpected here. It feels totally out of place there because nobody else i the collab uses similar patterns. Oh well, talk to Andrea about this pattern.
- 03:32:349 (4,5) - the transition here feels a bit unnatural and forced. Try making it a bit smoother, so, the flow will be more enjoyable. example!
- 02:39:761 (6) - the DS difference make this pattern confusing and the second repeat is way too hard to notice. It makes this relaxing diff confusing and unreadabl, so I strongly recommend you to get rid of this 2x-repeated slider asap!
Best of luck!