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-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ Responding to your request in-game.
thank you :D
General:
  1. I already suggested, in-game, that you rather change the BG image since it looks a bit pale and, well, boring. I’ll send the link to the image that I found online again: http://bz1080p.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/bz1080p.com_2015-02-23_15-09-38.jpg
    Take note: It’s not the right resolution though. I suggest a resolution of 1366X768.
  2. Why is the slider velocity of the Insane like 1.90 and the Extra (1.40) and “Dark” diff (1.03)way lower? The SV gap between the Hard and Insane is then also very big: Hard – 0.85 and Insane – 1.90. It looks very unbalanced and I highly suggest that the Insane’s SV has to be lowered. I guess it’s not such a big issue if the SV doesn’t range from lowest to highest, but imo the SV gap between Hard and Insane is definitely an issue.
  3. Furthermore, the gap between Normal and Hard generally is also pretty big, since Normal is so easy. I highly suggest you try to lift the difficulty of the Normal (I’ll see where I can help). And if you also take a look at this mapset with the same song, you’ll see that the Normal is quite difficult: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/164075
i'm fixing normal :D when i finished i will call you ~~
Dark:
  1. 00:13:546 (4,5,3,4) –Perhaps try to stack these notes on top of each other? Just for neatness purposes. no that's bad , these notes' distance is gradual change
  2. 00:34:601 (1,1) –You added new combos there, but didn’t do the same here: 00:17:261 (3,3) – for the same beat. Try to keep it consistent.

00:34:601 (3) - i cancel this NC ~

Nice diff. Couldn’t really find anything else.



Nothing else really.

OblivioN's Insane:
  1. The stack leniency in this diff is too low. Take a look at this:

    as frey say it will not influence diff
  2. 00:47:812 – to 00:53:867 – Not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. The reason for this is because the other two difficult diffs (Extra and “Dark” diff) doesn’t have any breaks and I feel it would be wise to map that section out so these three diffs are consistent.
Melt's Hard:
  1. Okay, personally, I strongly feel that you have to avoid the overlapping notes: 00:10:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,2,3,6,7,8) – etc. because it just feels unnecessary and imo, the diff would play better if you lift the distance spacing a bit. Perhaps not everywhere, but definitely at places like this: 00:10:107 (1,2,3) - 00:14:096 (6,7,8) - 00:17:811 (3,4,5) - 00:22:904 (7,8,9) – etc. I suggest a distance spacing of 1.3X then.
    if here use 1.3x ,kiai must use higher distance .music isn't strong here .so i think lower distance is okay
  2. 00:11:206 – 00:13:408 - 00:15:610 - 00:20:014 – etc. I don’t know if it’s such a good idea to leave these beats out and not map them, since they are so strong and very loud too, but I also understand what rhythm you are following. Just voicing my opinion.
  3. 00:45:610 – to 00:53:317 –Like I said in the Insane, I’m not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. Because this part is still mapable and the song isn’t that long so imo it shouldn’t even have breaks and also because the “Dark” diff and Extra doesn’t have any breaks.
  4. 00:40:105 (6) –I’m scared this slider might be too high. Please lower it a bit, just to be safe. okay
  5. 00:43:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I would rather not let them touch each other. It looks a bit untidy and spacing them will work much better.
  6. 01:09:555 (1) – Lower the tail a bit.
fixed


Easy:
  1. 00:18:913 (1) –This slider is too high. Please lower it down a bit.
  2. 00:56:344 (1,2) –Rather follow the rhythm normally and don’t just place two random circles. Perhaps something like this:
  3. 01:22:766 (3) –Try to stack this note on the head of 01:20:564 (1) –
if stack ,some beginner maybe cant see this note

Overall, there is still some things that require a lot of fixing, especially the ones that I bolded.
When you have made the necessary fixes, you can call me back.

it's not necessary to keep break time same in all diff, and i think those break is reasonable.so i will not map those break ;w;

Good Luck~!
posted
so sad i cant make a Guest diff for this map RIP.

well the timing on 218 bpm still unsure i think
looks the BPM is 109bpm, it can be more confident following kick and snare
posted
fixed those four cricles.

osu file format v14

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Source:極黒のブリュンヒルデ
Tags:岡本倫 Bless Melt yf_bmp opening Gokukoku no Buryunhirude OblivioN
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484,88,82628,2,0,L|440:80,1,45.4999979171754,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,82766,1,2,1:3:0:0:
256,192,82835,12,0,87170,0:0:0:0:
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这图怎么还没Rabk,我记得我开始做图的时候这个就几十个SP了
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Recheck~

  1. Still sad that you didn't change BG :'( (But it's okay)
  2. The stack leniency really isn't a hard thing to fix, but I guess it's fine, apparently.
  3. In Hard, you have to understand that no-one really uses overlaps in any part of the song and it isn't really that slow either. (But it remains my opinion, so you can keep it like that.)
  4. In Normal, raise the HP to 4 please. (3 is too low for Normal)
  5. In Normal, this is still undermapped: 00:10:931 (1,1,2,1,2) – Please look at the suggestion that I left, cause it doesn't look to me like you changed a lot of things in this diff. Hmmm, did you even take a look at the mod that I left for the Normal, cuz you almost didn't follow any of the suggestions that I left.
  6. The Normal diff is almost ready, but not quite yet.

Call me back once that Normal is ready.
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-Nya- wrote:

Recheck~

  1. Still sad that you didn't change BG :'( (But it's okay) yes i like this
  2. The stack leniency really isn't a hard thing to fix, but I guess it's fine, apparently. insane 2 is safe
  3. In Hard, you have to understand that no-one really uses overlaps in any part of the song and it isn't really that slow either. (But it remains my opinion, so you can keep it like that.) kiai is 1.5x but 0-27s is 1.3x
  4. In Normal, raise the HP to 4 please. (3 is too low for Normal) hp4 ok
  5. In Normal, this is still undermapped: 00:10:931 (1,1,2,1,2) – Please look at the suggestion that I left, cause it doesn't look to me like you changed a lot of things in this diff. Hmmm, did you even take a look at the mod that I left for the Normal, cuz you almost didn't follow any of the suggestions that I left.

    it's my miss , i map 2 version normal and one hp4 another hp no change , and 00:10:931 (1,1,2,1,2) i think it's okay because it is NORMAL and there is following drum , not stringed instrument. imo your example is a bit hard(i really want hold this pattern though i change it to another form)

  6. The Normal diff is almost ready, but not quite yet.

Call me back once that Normal is ready.
thank you for your advice. :D
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Recheck again~

  1. There's one distance spacing error in Normal: 00:45:197 (3) - (Check AiMod too)
  2. 00:13:133 (1,1) - Check the spacing of these notes too please. As far as I know, distance spacing has to be consistent throughout the entire Normal diff and that's not 1.3X. (In cases like this: 00:21:115 (1) - it's fine if the distance isn't 1.3X because it's impossible to fit the object into the grid then)
  3. I see now there's inconsistency in combo colours. Not unrankable, but I'm just pointing it out before I push this forward.

Call me back~
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Ok, everything looks nice now~

Rebubbled~
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thank you~ :)
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only bubble( ;´Д`)
so……who can rank this beatmap
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Hi, checking random old bubbles.
bpm不是218,为什么不用wcx/BeatofIke的timing和mp3?
如果你还需要BN, 你也可以叫我..
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appleeaterx wrote:

Hi, checking random old bubbles.
bpm不是218,为什么不用wcx/BeatofIke的timing和mp3?
如果你还需要BN, 你也可以叫我..
要啊;w;
我正在换mp3修线 修完可以叫你吗 :?
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我刚想看这图来着... 那就交给apple吧
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no kd

oblivion:
00:07:565 (1) - stop at red tick to avoid wrong snap
00:08:769 (1) - start spinner at 00:08:694 -

yf:
00:26:799 (3) - reverse arrow not visible
01:02:316 (1) - 01:03:968 (1) - 01:19:249 (5) - unsnapped

dark:
01:04:244 (1) - 01:18:285 (1) - unsnapped
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Methyl wrote:

no kd

oblivion:
00:07:565 (1) - stop at red tick to avoid wrong snap
00:08:769 (1) - start spinner at 00:08:694 -

yf:
00:26:799 (3) - reverse arrow not visible
01:02:316 (1) - 01:03:968 (1) - 01:19:249 (5) - unsnapped

dark:
01:04:244 (1) - 01:18:285 (1) - unsnapped
all fixed :)
thanks~~~
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rebubbled.
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  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
  1. 00:14:409 (1,3) - nazi but stack?


Melt's Hard
  1. 00:59:425 (6,8) - stack?


OblivioN's Insane
  1. 00:05:141 (1,2) - unsnap
  2. 00:06:353 (1) - unsnap
  3. 00:07:565 (1) - 不建议这种凑combo数的折返滑条,不如一个spin带过去
  4. 00:19:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 排版没排好吗,5怎么没stack在1的尾巴上,整个diff大多都是stack梗的话这里一处就显得有点突兀
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Minakami Yuki wrote:

OblivioN's Insane
  1. 00:05:141 (1,2) - unsnap :arrow:um,换mp3了啊原来,改了
  2. 00:06:353 (1) - unsnap :arrow:
  3. 00:07:565 (1) - 不建议这种凑combo数的折返滑条,不如一个spin带过去 :arrow:折返slide跟的是bgm里的“啊~~~~”后面的spin跟的摩擦音【啥
  4. 00:19:915 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 排版没排好吗,5怎么没stack在1的尾巴上,整个diff大多都是stack梗的话这里一处就显得有点突兀 :arrow:原来没注意到,难道是更新以后功能加强了?【,】osu什么时候这么机智了
:oops: 谢谢m酱
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[quote="Minakami Yuki"]


Easy
  1. 00:14:409 (1,3) - nazi but stack?


Melt's Hard
  1. 00:59:425 (6,8) - stack?

all fixed
thanks :)
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