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Tokisawa Nao - BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-

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Flower
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Joined August 2011
Flower
I think the diff spread between H-I is fine, since OblivioN's diff is actually not so hard. However, Normal do need add some patterns to catch up Hard'd difficulty and make it a bit more harder than Easy.

[OblivioN's Insane]
AR8 is extremely hard to read, and that's why this diff had been recognised as too hard. So please change to AR9.
Also, stack leniency 2 makes player not able to distinguish which notes should be hit first, which makes near notes very hard to read. Suggest change back to default (7)
01:16:161 (1) - 01:18:362 (1) - 01:20:564 (1) - these are nearly impossible to read to me. At least make them some distinction with the 1.0x sliders after. Maybe you can make them to 0.65x and make a distinct shape that looks different from the 1.0x sliders (also apply to 01:13:959 (1) - ). example: (吗的别怪我这个做的烂，只是示范一下，肯定有更好的。怎么感觉我越来越傻叉)
SPOILER
00:24:968 (4) - move to right-bottom a bit to make it easier to distinguish?
00:05:986 (4) - ^

[Dark]
其实你一开始要我摸这个我是拒绝的，因为我没带板子玩不了，这样别人一看，一摸，那个论文duang~ 很短！很蠢！很烂！就会说根本没有这样的摸，就证明那个花花是假的。（ry
00:38:041 (4,5,6) - move to right-bottom a bit for a better flow (in my taste)?
00:53:317 (4) - add NC for a better distinction?
00:54:417 (2,4) - maybe move left-bottom a bit to provide better readability? also 1/4 on 00:54:968 (4) - is obvious, so maybe you can change it into 1/4 sliders or so
00:55:656 (2) - should be on 00:55:622 - ? or whatever

[Bless's Normal]
00:35:427 (1,2,3) - This is the only difficult point in this diff. I think you can add some more like this among the whole diff.

I'll do a full mod after if you like. Anyway, good luck!
OblivioN
OblivioN

Flower wrote:

[OblivioN's Insane]
AR8 is extremely hard to read, and that's why this diff had been recognised as too hard. So please change to AR9. :arrow: 好
Also, stack leniency 2 makes player not able to distinguish which notes should be hit first, which makes near notes very hard to read. Suggest change back to default (7)
01:16:161 (1) - 01:18:362 (1) - 01:20:564 (1) - these are nearly impossible to read to me. At least make them some distinction with the 1.0x sliders after. Maybe you can make them to 0.65x and make a distinct shape that looks different from the 1.0x sliders (also apply to 01:13:959 (1) - ). example: (吗的别怪我这个做的烂，只是示范一下，肯定有更好的。怎么感觉我越来越傻叉)
SPOILER
:arrow: 思考中
00:24:968 (4) - move to right-bottom a bit to make it easier to distinguish? :arrow: kkk
00:05:986 (4) - ^ :arrow: kkk

Jemmmmy wrote:

[insane]
00:14:440 (5) - del :arrow: 好
00:28:271 (3) - :arrow: ^
00:29:372 (2) - :arrow: 好
00:29:922 (1) - 弧度大点，才包的更好 （其他自己看看能不能包的更好）:arrow: 好
00:31:711 (3) - 没放到00:32:124 (1) - 的红点上 :arrow: 真的诶……改了;w;
00:45:335 (1) - 放个circle 再转圈？:arrow: 好
00:55:794 (2) - 略不好看 :arrow: I have no idea……orz
01:15:885 (5,6,1) - 间距保持一样吧 :arrow: :arrow: 好
:)
然后白雪你tag还是没改.-.
tag里的gxy要去掉
另外是不是多了个osb？
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gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
fixed some

updated
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
As requested, no kd please.

OblivioN's Insane

  1. Remove these useless green points, this looks a little messy.
  2. 00:05:986 (4,5) - I suggest you to ctrl+g these circle, because the current motion is not really comfortable. And if you do ctrl+g here, you'll make something smoother and easier to read.
  3. 00:16:161 (2,3,1) - this straight flow is a little uncomfortable to play, the player needs enough aim because the song is fast. I suggest you to reduce a little the distance between 00:16:573 (3,1) -
  4. 00:45:197 (6) - I don't really think that it plays well, it is quite surprising because the flow is a little "special" , it should be better if you make something circular instead, you can move this circle 00:45:197 (6) - on 340|80

Nice diff.
OblivioN
OblivioN

Cherry Blossom wrote:

As requested, no kd please.

OblivioN's Insane

  1. Remove these useless green points, this looks a little messy.
  2. 00:05:986 (4,5) - I suggest you to ctrl+g these circle, because the current motion is not really comfortable. And if you do ctrl+g here, you'll make something smoother and easier to read.
  3. 00:16:161 (2,3,1) - this straight flow is a little uncomfortable to play, the player needs enough aim because the song is fast. I suggest you to reduce a little the distance between 00:16:573 (3,1) -
  4. 00:45:197 (6) - I don't really think that it plays well, it is quite surprising because the flow is a little "special" , it should be better if you make something circular instead, you can move this circle 00:45:197 (6) - on 340|80

Nice diff.
all fixed , thank you Hentai cherry blossom ;)
4/12
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gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
修了修nazi .-.
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Sorry for the delay.

[ General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support. It doesn't work in this mapset.
  2. AudioLeadIn: 2000. Please try to set.

[ Easy]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:09:726 - snap to 00:09:773
    00:10:241 - snap to 00:10:243
    00:40:310 - snap to 00:40:243
    00:57:512 - snap to 00:57:445
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.

[ Bless' Normal]
  1. Change to HP3/AR5/OD4. The Difficulty setting difference between the Normal and Hard is too big. It has a risk of DQ.
  2. 00:10:931 (1) - It would be better to add a circle at 00:11:206 than this.
    image
  3. 00:13:133 (2) - ^
  4. 00:15:335 (2) - ^
  5. 00:26:619 (1) - I feel a little too short. Please try to add the circle to the start and end points instead of the spinner.
    image

[ Melt's Hard]
  1. HP-1. Please lower the HP because you are using AR8. Also adjust the difficulty balance.

[ OblivioN's Insane]
  1. Why OD5? Too low!! I think Insane diff need at least OD7.

[ yf's Extra]
  1. 00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would like to recommend that you change to 1/3 repeat slider because I think it is difficult for players to grasp that it is 1/3 streams. Also it has the effect of reducing the difference between the Insane and this diff.

[ Dark]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:05:219 - snap to 00:05:228
    00:05:825 - snap to 00:05:834
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
  2. 01:01:298 (1) - Rhythm suggestion. Change the slider to 3/4, and add a circle at 01:01:573. It will fit the song than now~
    image
  3. 01:05:702 (4) - Finish is missing at the start point.

Cool mapset. Good luck!
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

Gamu wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[ General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support. It doesn't work in this mapset.
  2. AudioLeadIn: 2000. Please try to set.

[ Easy]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:09:726 - snap to 00:09:773
    00:10:241 - snap to 00:10:243
    00:40:310 - snap to 00:40:243
    00:57:512 - snap to 00:57:445
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
fixed
[ Bless' Normal]
  1. Change to HP3/AR5/OD4. The Difficulty setting difference between the Normal and Hard is too big. It has a risk of DQ.
  2. 00:10:931 (1) - It would be better to add a circle at 00:11:206 than this.
    image
  3. 00:13:133 (2) - ^
  4. 00:15:335 (2) - ^ not good..
  5. 00:26:619 (1) - I feel a little too short. Please try to add the circle to the start and end points instead of the spinner.
    image
other fixed
[ Melt's Hard]
  1. HP-1. Please lower the HP because you are using AR8. Also adjust the difficulty balance.
ok
[ OblivioN's Insane]
  1. Why OD5? Too low!! I think Insane diff need at least OD7.
ok
[ yf's Extra]
  1. 00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would like to recommend that you change to 1/3 repeat slider because I think it is difficult for players to grasp that it is 1/3 streams. Also it has the effect of reducing the difference between the Insane and this diff.

[ Dark]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:05:219 - snap to 00:05:228
    00:05:825 - snap to 00:05:834
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
  2. 01:01:298 (1) - Rhythm suggestion. Change the slider to 3/4, and add a circle at 01:01:573. It will fit the song than now~ does it hard to read? =_=
    image
  3. 01:05:702 (4) - Finish is missing at the start point.
fixed
Cool mapset. Good luck!
thank you :D
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[YY's Insane]
  1. 00:22:904 (3,4,5) - 我覺得這個還是不要折回來好了 (4,5)ctrl+g還是比較順的 (不然就是用別種跳法)
  2. 00:38:454 (4,1,2) - 我不太喜歡這個anti-jump, 打起來有點卡住了 (本來應該是很順暢的), 建議你把(1,2)移到別的地方去吧
  3. 00:45:335 - 這裡補個note然後spinner往後挪1/4? 不然00:45:060 (5,6) - 有點像亂跟的@.@
  4. 00:58:546 (1,2,3) - 節奏有點略亂, 試試看把(2)拆成note+slider, (3)拆成slider+note? 我覺得比較跟的上音樂
  5. 01:16:023 (6,1) - spacing怪怪
[Melt's Hard]
  1. 00:58:271 - 這finish? 咦?
OblivioN
OblivioN

Flask wrote:

[YY's Insane]
  1. 00:22:904 (3,4,5) - 我覺得這個還是不要折回來好了 (4,5)ctrl+g還是比較順的 (不然就是用別種跳法) :arrow: 好，改回来了
  2. 00:38:454 (4,1,2) - 我不太喜歡這個anti-jump, 打起來有點卡住了 (本來應該是很順暢的), 建議你把(1,2)移到別的地方去吧 :arrow: 这个antijump不太想改掉……我放antijump在这里是想有种蓄力感觉……（什么鬼）
  3. 00:45:335 - 這裡補個note然後spinner往後挪1/4? 不然00:45:060 (5,6) - 有點像亂跟的@.@ :arrow: 啊，对对对，加上了
  4. 00:58:546 (1,2,3) - 節奏有點略亂, 試試看把(2)拆成note+slider, (3)拆成slider+note? 我覺得比較跟的上音樂 :arrow: 我觉得我这么跟也可以诶……拆成那样排版又不知道怎么搞……用这样的节奏做弹性slider的感觉似乎不错……
  5. 01:16:023 (6,1) - spacing怪怪 :arrow: 好，肉眼ds了
做这图的时候挺多地方都是考虑了蛮久才下的;w;所以有些固执，还是交给gxy取舍好了
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
[Melt's Hard]
  1. 00:58:271 - 這finish? 咦?
[/quote]
去掉了.


update~
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
总算传上了OTL
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

谢F酱
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Hey, gxytcgxytc! I had to pop the bubble for some reasons I'll mention below. This was really necessary and you can call me for a rebubble when you apply the mods. Sorry for the inconvenience.


Reason for Bubble Pop
  1. A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it.

  2. Consider adding at least +1 (3) Stack Leniency on OblivioN's Insane diff. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and could be some times confusing.

  3. Again on OblivioN's Insane, this slider 00:55:243 (1) - should be 1/8 like on the others diffs. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and it's even ignoring the sound. Consider changing it.

  4. Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats

  5. A lot of issues on Dark diff that, in my opinion, should be fixed. I'll mention them below.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding



Easy


00:28:821 (2) - This hitsounds actually sounds like a normal-hitnormal, shouldn't it sound like a drum? Change the sampleset thing into Auto or Drum, so it would be consistent.

00:45:335 (6) - Shouldn't you add a New Combo here? Since you were adding one every 4/1 tick, it looks inconsistent without one here.

01:13:959 (6,1) - Change NCs here, since the new section starts on (6), not on (1).

01:21:665 (2) - In my opinion, would be really better to delete the repeat and add a circle here 01:22:766. Ending a slider on a strong beat is really bad since it removes all the emphasis. Well, this is just my opinion, you can either change it or not.

Bless' Normal


00:24:417 (2,3) - Not sure if your intention was to follow the beat on the red tick. But if it was, would be better to start (3) on the red tick, to emphasize that beat, not on the white tick.

Melt's Hard


00:45:334 (1) - Consider increasing the spacing here a bit, since it's a strong beat. Somewhere near x40 y84 would be fine!

01:22:766 (1) - Hmm... not sure if it's 100% readable due to the AR. In my opinion, moving to x374 y216 would be much better. But, again, this is just my opinion.

yf's Extra


00:45:335 (1) - In my opinion, Ctrl + G here would improve the flow.

00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.

Awesome diff.

Dark


This one isn't Additional Modding, they must be fixed.


00:13:408 (3) - The beat here is really strong and the DS is really close. Stacking it with (4) would improve a bit.

00:14:234 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here increse instead of descrease? Since the song is more louder here would be better to increase.

00:24:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - On this section you should change the Distance Snap pattern after every 3 notes, not 4. Same about the NC. Screen (this is just an example of what I said above).

00:26:963 (1) - Shouldn't it be a 1/8 slider? The sound pattern here is the same as 00:26:963 (1,1,2) - but you didn't add a 1/8 slider. Plus, this slider is almost the same size as the 1/4 slider you added before, it's kinda confusing. Consider changing it.

00:31:573 (1) - Remember the thing I mentioned about the DS too low on a too loud beat? Same applies here. This is even an anti-jump. Doing this would improve a lot.

00:53:041 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.

01:01:573 (1,2) - Increase the DS here, the circular slider is hidding the notes. Plus, the low DS is really confusing and it isn't indicating a properly 1/2 rhythm.

(▰˘◡˘▰)
OblivioN
OblivioN
Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ？
and my diff is insane right？

ok，let gxy to make a choose .I gave up 1s ago.
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom

Kuron-kun wrote:

Reason for Bubble Pop
A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it.
Unsnapped greenlines are not unrankable unless they are not Kiai end/start.

Kuron-kun wrote:

Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats
Following strong beats is not Melt's first intention ? Imo it is more intuitive to follow the other intruments than the strong beat, i think that this current version of this diff is really well made. And i also trust in Melt's style.

Awh well, this bubble pop was unavoidable. Issues in Dark diff could not be considered as a valid reason for bubble pop since they are questionable and they require more or less subjectivity.
Concerning this one 00:26:963 (1) - 1/8 are same as 1/4 ? I don't really think this need to be changed.

When there are questionable things, before bubble popping, just get more opinions, mainly from the BNs who were involved in pushing this map forward ?
The wrongly snapped object is a valid reason and something that is not questionable (in a majority of cases), but "quality" is subjective and questionable, and needs more opinions.


OblivioN wrote:

Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ？
and my diff is insane right？
No, stack leniency 0 is unrankable since you have to edit manually the .osz file, and editing manually a .osz file to change something which can't be done in editor is unrankable. There are exceptions like lead-in etc.
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gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
SPOILER

Kuron-kun wrote:

Hey, gxytcgxytc! I had to pop the bubble for some reasons I'll mention below. This was really necessary and you can call me for a rebubble when you apply the mods. Sorry for the inconvenience.


Reason for Bubble Pop
  1. A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it. ok

  2. Consider adding at least +1 (3) Stack Leniency on OblivioN's Insane diff. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and could be some times confusing.

  3. Again on OblivioN's Insane, this slider 00:55:243 (1) - should be 1/8 like on the others diffs. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and it's even ignoring the sound. Consider changing it.

  4. Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats

  5. A lot of issues on Dark diff that, in my opinion, should be fixed. I'll mention them below.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding



Easy


00:28:821 (2) - This hitsounds actually sounds like a normal-hitnormal, shouldn't it sound like a drum? Change the sampleset thing into Auto or Drum, so it would be consistent.

00:45:335 (6) - Shouldn't you add a New Combo here? Since you were adding one every 4/1 tick, it looks inconsistent without one here.

01:13:959 (6,1) - Change NCs here, since the new section starts on (6), not on (1).

01:21:665 (2) - In my opinion, would be really better to delete the repeat and add a circle here 01:22:766. Ending a slider on a strong beat is really bad since it removes all the emphasis. Well, this is just my opinion, you can either change it or not. all fixed

Bless' Normal


00:24:417 (2,3) - Not sure if your intention was to follow the beat on the red tick. But if it was, would be better to start (3) on the red tick, to emphasize that beat, not on the white tick. here was good

Melt's Hard


00:45:334 (1) - Consider increasing the spacing here a bit, since it's a strong beat. Somewhere near x40 y84 would be fine! ok

01:22:766 (1) - Hmm... not sure if it's 100% readable due to the AR. In my opinion, moving to x374 y216 would be much better. But, again, this is just my opinion.



Dark


This one isn't Additional Modding, they must be fixed.


00:13:408 (3) - The beat here is really strong and the DS is really close. Stacking it with (4) would improve a bit.ok

00:14:234 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here increse instead of descrease? Since the song is more louder here would be better to increase.tone dec

00:24:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - On this section you should change the Distance Snap pattern after every 3 notes, not 4. Same about the NC. Screen (this is just an example of what I said above). remap partten

00:26:963 (1) - Shouldn't it be a 1/8 slider? The sound pattern here is the same as 00:26:963 (1,1,2) - but you didn't add a 1/8 slider. Plus, this slider is almost the same size as the 1/4 slider you added before, it's kinda confusing. Consider changing it. fixed

00:31:573 (1) - Remember the thing I mentioned about the DS too low on a too loud beat? Same applies here. This is even an anti-jump. Doing this would improve a lot. ok

00:53:041 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.emm

01:01:573 (1,2) - Increase the DS here, the circular slider is hidding the notes. Plus, the low DS is really confusing and it isn't indicating a properly 1/2 rhythm.ok

(▰˘◡˘▰)
thx for mod !
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
No.

The minimum Stack Leniency is 2, but on your difficulty would be really break the consistency, this is why I recommended changing it.

btw, thanks for your post CB, didn't know about Melt's rhythm intention. My first intention to pop the bubble was because of DS issues on Dark diff, I even did talk to the mapper and we fixed almost everything
OblivioN
OblivioN

Cherry Blossom wrote:

OblivioN wrote:

Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ？
and my diff is insane right？
No, stack leniency 0 is unrankable since you have to edit manually the .osz file, and editing manually a .osz file to change something which can't be done in editor is unrankable. There are exceptions like lead-in etc.
got it ：）
I just on my bed and don't want get up ：）I'm ok

beside these.
Melt is a pro mapper.
And I don't think everyone should make beatmap flow the down beats.
as you know ，a song is make up by many things ，such as ：vocal，drum ，chord etc.
if everyone flow the down beats…
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Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Never give up OblivioN :3/
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
oh, btw again, about the 1/8. I won't edit because no one will see it >_>

I pointed it out because Extra and Dark did use 1/8 rhythm, then 1/4 would be "inconsistent"? Plus, 1/8 would follow the song more properly. But yes, since 1/4 is the same as 1/8 I guess you can keep it
OblivioN
OblivioN

Kuron-kun wrote:

oh, btw again, about the 1/8. I won't edit because no one will see it >_>

I pointed it out because Extra and Dark did use 1/8 rhythm, then 1/4 would be "inconsistent"? Plus, 1/8 would follow the song more properly. But yes, since 1/4 is the same as 1/8 I guess you can keep it
but I didn't say any thing about that o.O
I said let gxy to do the choose.
Cause I forgot where I used 1/8 oops ，1/4Edit: (￣▽￣)

and in last post ，I edited ：I'm on my bed balabalabala
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gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

OblivioN wrote:

Kuron-kun wrote:

oh, btw again, about the 1/8. I won't edit because no one will see it >_>

I pointed it out because Extra and Dark did use 1/8 rhythm, then 1/4 would be "inconsistent"? Plus, 1/8 would follow the song more properly. But yes, since 1/4 is the same as 1/8 I guess you can keep it
but I didn't say any thing about that o.O
I said let gxy to do the choose.
Cause I forgot where I used 1/8
其实歪歌他后面说那个1/8应该不是你的diff;w; 不过该fix的我都fix了 休息啦 ~
胃好疼 疼醒了发现多了个post
OblivioN
OblivioN

gxytcgxytc wrote:

OblivioN wrote:

but I didn't say any thing about that o.O
I said let gxy to do the choose.
Cause I forgot where I used 1/8
其实歪歌他后面说那个1/8应该不是你的diff;w; 不过该fix的我都fix了 休息啦 ~
胃好疼 疼醒了发现多了个post
fix了就好，晚安，你胃疼我头疼ˊ_>ˋ
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Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
no no, I'm not saying you did say something like that xD
OblivioN
OblivioN

Kuron-kun wrote:

no no, I'm not saying you did say something like that xD
well :3
still thank you for help my friend to fix the beatmap .
goodnight ，2a.m. here ;-)
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
fixed all

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 10106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 32802
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.999999

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-
Artist:Tokisawa Nao
ArtistUnicode:鴇沢直
Creator:gxytcgxytc
Version:yf's Extra
Source:極黒のブリュンヒルデ
Tags:岡本倫 Bless Melt yf_bmp opening Gokukoku no Buryunhirude OblivioN
BeatmapID:424260
BeatmapSetID:170604

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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gxytcgxytc
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gxytcgxytc
updated~
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Looks great now! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
我憤怒的想把大家的泡都戳一遍
gxytcgxytc
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gxytcgxytc

Flask wrote:

我憤怒的想把大家的泡都戳一遍
镇定镇定...._(:з」∠)_
kuhekin
14 posts
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kuhekin
Ngon :D
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Heya~ Responding to your request in-game.

General:
  1. I already suggested, in-game, that you rather change the BG image since it looks a bit pale and, well, boring. I’ll send the link to the image that I found online again: http://bz1080p.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/bz1080p.com_2015-02-23_15-09-38.jpg
    Take note: It’s not the right resolution though. I suggest a resolution of 1366X768.
  2. Why is the slider velocity of the Insane like 1.90 and the Extra (1.40) and “Dark” diff (1.03)way lower? The SV gap between the Hard and Insane is then also very big: Hard – 0.85 and Insane – 1.90. It looks very unbalanced and I highly suggest that the Insane’s SV has to be lowered. I guess it’s not such a big issue if the SV doesn’t range from lowest to highest, but imo the SV gap between Hard and Insane is definitely an issue.
  3. Furthermore, the gap between Normal and Hard generally is also pretty big, since Normal is so easy. I highly suggest you try to lift the difficulty of the Normal (I’ll see where I can help). And if you also take a look at this mapset with the same song, you’ll see that the Normal is quite difficult: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/164075

Dark:
  1. 00:13:546 (4,5,3,4) –Perhaps try to stack these notes on top of each other? Just for neatness purposes.
  2. 00:34:601 (1,1) –You added new combos there, but didn’t do the same here: 00:17:261 (3,3) – for the same beat. Try to keep it consistent.

Nice diff. Couldn’t really find anything else.

yf’s Extra:
  1. 00:31:573 (1,2,3,4) – and 00:40:381 (1,2,3,4) - The only thing that bothered me a bit, was the fact that these notes were placed too close to each other. While playing, it seems like one has to click on them faster than you actually have to, like these: 00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – or 01:04:945 (3,4,5) – Why not place them like you placed these: 00:22:766 (1,2,3,4) - (The placement of these: 00:48:913 (1,2,3,4) – are fine though, since the rhythm is slower)

Nothing else really.

OblivioN's Insane:
  1. The stack leniency in this diff is too low. Take a look at this:
    Picture
    Picture
  2. 00:47:812 – to 00:53:867 – Not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. The reason for this is because the other two difficult diffs (Extra and “Dark” diff) doesn’t have any breaks and I feel it would be wise to map that section out so these three diffs are consistent.

Melt's Hard:
  1. Okay, personally, I strongly feel that you have to avoid the overlapping notes: 00:10:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,2,3,6,7,8) – etc. because it just feels unnecessary and imo, the diff would play better if you lift the distance spacing a bit. Perhaps not everywhere, but definitely at places like this: 00:10:107 (1,2,3) - 00:14:096 (6,7,8) - 00:17:811 (3,4,5) - 00:22:904 (7,8,9) – etc. I suggest a distance spacing of 1.3X then.
  2. 00:11:206 – 00:13:408 - 00:15:610 - 00:20:014 – etc. I don’t know if it’s such a good idea to leave these beats out and not map them, since they are so strong and very loud too, but I also understand what rhythm you are following. Just voicing my opinion.
  3. 00:45:610 – to 00:53:317 –Like I said in the Insane, I’m not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. Because this part is still mapable and the song isn’t that long so imo it shouldn’t even have breaks and also because the “Dark” diff and Extra doesn’t have any breaks.
  4. 00:40:105 (6) –I’m scared this slider might be too high. Please lower it a bit, just to be safe.
  5. 00:43:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I would rather not let them touch each other. It looks a bit untidy and spacing them will work much better.
  6. 01:09:555 (1) – Lower the tail a bit.

Bless' Normal:
  1. Raise the HP drain rate to 4, since 3 is too low imo.
  2. Like I said in the “General” tab, this diff is a bit too undermapped and thus too easy causing a big gap between the Normal and Hard.
  3. 00:00:380 (1) –For this part, I would rather follow a rhythm like this:
    Picture
    The long repeat slider just doesn’t catch all the necessary beats imo.
  4. 00:02:804 (1) -^
  5. 00:05:228 (1) -^
  6. 00:10:931 (1,1,2,1,2) –This part is way undermapped. You miss a lot of beats that can be mapped. Here’s an example of a rhythm I would follow:
    Picture
    Picture
    Something like above.
  7. 00:20:289 –to 00:20:839 – Why leave this empty? I highly suggest you place notes there. Like this:
    Picture
  8. 00:22:491 –to 00:23:041 - ^
  9. 00:25:931 (2) –How about something like this instead?
    Picture
  10. 00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –I would rather not follow this rhythm if I were you. It’s too simple and the other rhythm is more effective and more notes can be placed.
    Picture
    Something like the above example.
  11. There are a lot of other places as well where I feel it’s undermapped. I suggest going through the diff and try to change rhythms that seems a bit too easy.

Easy:
  1. 00:18:913 (1) –This slider is too high. Please lower it down a bit.
  2. 00:56:344 (1,2) –Rather follow the rhythm normally and don’t just place two random circles. Perhaps something like this:
    Picture
  3. 01:22:766 (3) –Try to stack this note on the head of 01:20:564 (1) –

Overall, there is still some things that require a lot of fixing, especially the ones that I bolded.
When you have made the necessary fixes, you can call me back.

Good Luck~!
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,911 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
Adhering to a SV Spread is, most of the time, pretty stupid as it will throw noone off if the diffs are designed to work with them and also work within the spread of the set difficulty-wise.
I havent looked at the diffs in question but it's more like something i generally observed being pointed out and find to be nonsensical.
I could make a spread where the concept of increasing SV per diff is reversed for example and it'd probably still make sense.

Im just leaving this here because you bolded it meaning you expect them to remap a diff
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
Firstly, reversed slider velocity spread is rankable, what you have to compare, is the actual difficulty spread, not the number of the SV. Here is the example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/194910

Secondly, 0.2 SL can't be counted as an unrankable issue. Everyone can use it though the Aimod warns. If it can't be used, why the range of SL is 0.2-0.9?

Thirdly, as long as it isn't out of the playfield, it's rankable even if it touches the healthbar. Please don't limit the objects in the grid field.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
A slider speed can create a gap between difficulties in a certain aspect, but it can also be used differently to generate a different mapping style.

Insane mostly use 0.7x or 0.8x multiplier and Darks uses 1.34x or 1.5x sv multiplier.
As you can see, sv gaps are not a real problem since it is nearly similar in the actual numbers, and the difficulties itself constructs a proper difficulty gap.

Still the gap of N-H is highly questionable in the current status.
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Ok, I get it, I get it. The SV is not such a big deal. (That can be ignored; although it still looked a bit awkward to me, but whatevs)
The stack leniency I pointed out because honestly, it's an easy thing to fix and my motto in this game is always: Better safe than sorry.
And I could have sworn that I read somewhere that objects may not touch the health bar (and I've always pointed this out in every mod so I'm not stopping now; imo the objects shouldn't touch anything. The grid is large enough to support all the notes, trust me.)

I may have bolded some things that's not necessarily unrankable in general, but it's still a personal problem for me and I want to discuss it with the mapper before pushing it forward.

But the gap between Normal and Hard has to be fixed, most definitely.
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
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Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc
fixing normal now ;w; maybe it will take time
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ Responding to your request in-game.
thank you :D
General:
  1. I already suggested, in-game, that you rather change the BG image since it looks a bit pale and, well, boring. I’ll send the link to the image that I found online again: http://bz1080p.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/bz1080p.com_2015-02-23_15-09-38.jpg
    Take note: It’s not the right resolution though. I suggest a resolution of 1366X768.
  2. Why is the slider velocity of the Insane like 1.90 and the Extra (1.40) and “Dark” diff (1.03)way lower? The SV gap between the Hard and Insane is then also very big: Hard – 0.85 and Insane – 1.90. It looks very unbalanced and I highly suggest that the Insane’s SV has to be lowered. I guess it’s not such a big issue if the SV doesn’t range from lowest to highest, but imo the SV gap between Hard and Insane is definitely an issue.
  3. Furthermore, the gap between Normal and Hard generally is also pretty big, since Normal is so easy. I highly suggest you try to lift the difficulty of the Normal (I’ll see where I can help). And if you also take a look at this mapset with the same song, you’ll see that the Normal is quite difficult: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/164075
i'm fixing normal :D when i finished i will call you ~~
Dark:
  1. 00:13:546 (4,5,3,4) –Perhaps try to stack these notes on top of each other? Just for neatness purposes. no that's bad , these notes' distance is gradual change
  2. 00:34:601 (1,1) –You added new combos there, but didn’t do the same here: 00:17:261 (3,3) – for the same beat. Try to keep it consistent.
00:34:601 (3) - i cancel this NC ~

Nice diff. Couldn’t really find anything else.



Nothing else really.

OblivioN's Insane:
  1. The stack leniency in this diff is too low. Take a look at this:
    Picture
    Picture

    as frey say it will not influence diff
  2. 00:47:812 – to 00:53:867 – Not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. The reason for this is because the other two difficult diffs (Extra and “Dark” diff) doesn’t have any breaks and I feel it would be wise to map that section out so these three diffs are consistent.

Melt's Hard:
  1. Okay, personally, I strongly feel that you have to avoid the overlapping notes: 00:10:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,2,3,6,7,8) – etc. because it just feels unnecessary and imo, the diff would play better if you lift the distance spacing a bit. Perhaps not everywhere, but definitely at places like this: 00:10:107 (1,2,3) - 00:14:096 (6,7,8) - 00:17:811 (3,4,5) - 00:22:904 (7,8,9) – etc. I suggest a distance spacing of 1.3X then.
    if here use 1.3x ,kiai must use higher distance .music isn't strong here .so i think lower distance is okay
  2. 00:11:206 – 00:13:408 - 00:15:610 - 00:20:014 – etc. I don’t know if it’s such a good idea to leave these beats out and not map them, since they are so strong and very loud too, but I also understand what rhythm you are following. Just voicing my opinion.
  3. 00:45:610 – to 00:53:317 –Like I said in the Insane, I’m not sure if it’s a good idea to add a break here. Because this part is still mapable and the song isn’t that long so imo it shouldn’t even have breaks and also because the “Dark” diff and Extra doesn’t have any breaks.
  4. 00:40:105 (6) –I’m scared this slider might be too high. Please lower it a bit, just to be safe. okay
  5. 00:43:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I would rather not let them touch each other. It looks a bit untidy and spacing them will work much better.
  6. 01:09:555 (1) – Lower the tail a bit.
fixed


Easy:
  1. 00:18:913 (1) –This slider is too high. Please lower it down a bit.
  2. 00:56:344 (1,2) –Rather follow the rhythm normally and don’t just place two random circles. Perhaps something like this:
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  3. 01:22:766 (3) –Try to stack this note on the head of 01:20:564 (1) –
if stack ,some beginner maybe cant see this note

Overall, there is still some things that require a lot of fixing, especially the ones that I bolded.
When you have made the necessary fixes, you can call me back.

it's not necessary to keep break time same in all diff, and i think those break is reasonable.so i will not map those break ;w;

Good Luck~!
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