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Flower wrote:

[OblivioN's Insane]
AR8 is extremely hard to read, and that's why this diff had been recognised as too hard. So please change to AR9. :arrow:
Also, stack leniency 2 makes player not able to distinguish which notes should be hit first, which makes near notes very hard to read. Suggest change back to default (7)
01:16:161 (1) - 01:18:362 (1) - 01:20:564 (1) - these are nearly impossible to read to me. At least make them some distinction with the 1.0x sliders after. Maybe you can make them to 0.65x and make a distinct shape that looks different from the 1.0x sliders (also apply to 01:13:959 (1) - ). example: (吗的别怪我这个做的烂,只是示范一下,肯定有更好的。怎么感觉我越来越傻叉)
:arrow:思考中
00:24:968 (4) - move to right-bottom a bit to make it easier to distinguish? :arrow:kkk
00:05:986 (4) - ^ :arrow:kkk

Jemmmmy wrote:

[insane]
00:14:440 (5) - del :arrow:
00:28:271 (3) - :arrow:^
00:29:372 (2) - :arrow:
00:29:922 (1) - 弧度大点,才包的更好 (其他自己看看能不能包的更好):arrow:
00:31:711 (3) - 没放到00:32:124 (1) - 的红点上 :arrow:真的诶……改了;w;
00:45:335 (1) - 放个circle 再转圈?:arrow:
00:55:794 (2) - 略不好看 :arrow:I have no idea……orz
01:15:885 (5,6,1) - 间距保持一样吧 :arrow::arrow:
:)
然后白雪你tag还是没改.-.
tag里的gxy要去掉
另外是不是多了个osb?
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-
TitleUnicode:BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-
Artist:Tokisawa Nao
ArtistUnicode:鴇沢直
Creator:gxytcgxytc
Version:OblivioN's Insane
Source:極黒のブリュンヒルデ
Tags:岡本倫 Bless Melt gxy yf_bmp opening Gokukoku no Buryunhirude OblivioN
BeatmapID:675157
BeatmapSetID:170604

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OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:9
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posted
fixed some

updated
posted
As requested, no kd please.

OblivioN's Insane

  1. Remove these useless green points, this looks a little messy.
  2. 00:05:986 (4,5) - I suggest you to ctrl+g these circle, because the current motion is not really comfortable. And if you do ctrl+g here, you'll make something smoother and easier to read.
  3. 00:16:161 (2,3,1) - this straight flow is a little uncomfortable to play, the player needs enough aim because the song is fast. I suggest you to reduce a little the distance between 00:16:573 (3,1) -
  4. 00:45:197 (6) - I don't really think that it plays well, it is quite surprising because the flow is a little "special" , it should be better if you make something circular instead, you can move this circle 00:45:197 (6) - on 340|80

Nice diff.
posted

Cherry Blossom wrote:

As requested, no kd please.

OblivioN's Insane

  1. Remove these useless green points, this looks a little messy.
  2. 00:05:986 (4,5) - I suggest you to ctrl+g these circle, because the current motion is not really comfortable. And if you do ctrl+g here, you'll make something smoother and easier to read.
  3. 00:16:161 (2,3,1) - this straight flow is a little uncomfortable to play, the player needs enough aim because the song is fast. I suggest you to reduce a little the distance between 00:16:573 (3,1) -
  4. 00:45:197 (6) - I don't really think that it plays well, it is quite surprising because the flow is a little "special" , it should be better if you make something circular instead, you can move this circle 00:45:197 (6) - on 340|80

Nice diff.
all fixed , thank you Hentai cherry blossom ;)
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posted
修了修nazi .-.
posted
Sorry for the delay.

[ General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support. It doesn't work in this mapset.
  2. AudioLeadIn: 2000. Please try to set.

[ Easy]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:09:726 - snap to 00:09:773
    00:10:241 - snap to 00:10:243
    00:40:310 - snap to 00:40:243
    00:57:512 - snap to 00:57:445
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.

[ Bless' Normal]
  1. Change to HP3/AR5/OD4. The Difficulty setting difference between the Normal and Hard is too big. It has a risk of DQ.
  2. 00:10:931 (1) - It would be better to add a circle at 00:11:206 than this.
  3. 00:13:133 (2) - ^
  4. 00:15:335 (2) - ^
  5. 00:26:619 (1) - I feel a little too short. Please try to add the circle to the start and end points instead of the spinner.

[ Melt's Hard]
  1. HP-1. Please lower the HP because you are using AR8. Also adjust the difficulty balance.

[ OblivioN's Insane]
  1. Why OD5? Too low!! I think Insane diff need at least OD7.

[ yf's Extra]
  1. 00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would like to recommend that you change to 1/3 repeat slider because I think it is difficult for players to grasp that it is 1/3 streams. Also it has the effect of reducing the difference between the Insane and this diff.

[ Dark]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:05:219 - snap to 00:05:228
    00:05:825 - snap to 00:05:834
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
  2. 01:01:298 (1) - Rhythm suggestion. Change the slider to 3/4, and add a circle at 01:01:573. It will fit the song than now~
  3. 01:05:702 (4) - Finish is missing at the start point.

Cool mapset. Good luck!
posted

Gamu wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

[ General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support. It doesn't work in this mapset.
  2. AudioLeadIn: 2000. Please try to set.

[ Easy]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:09:726 - snap to 00:09:773
    00:10:241 - snap to 00:10:243
    00:40:310 - snap to 00:40:243
    00:57:512 - snap to 00:57:445
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
fixed
[ Bless' Normal]
  1. Change to HP3/AR5/OD4. The Difficulty setting difference between the Normal and Hard is too big. It has a risk of DQ.
  2. 00:10:931 (1) - It would be better to add a circle at 00:11:206 than this.
  3. 00:13:133 (2) - ^
  4. 00:15:335 (2) - ^ not good..
  5. 00:26:619 (1) - I feel a little too short. Please try to add the circle to the start and end points instead of the spinner.
other fixed
[ Melt's Hard]
  1. HP-1. Please lower the HP because you are using AR8. Also adjust the difficulty balance.
ok
[ OblivioN's Insane]
  1. Why OD5? Too low!! I think Insane diff need at least OD7.
ok
[ yf's Extra]
  1. 00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would like to recommend that you change to 1/3 repeat slider because I think it is difficult for players to grasp that it is 1/3 streams. Also it has the effect of reducing the difference between the Insane and this diff.

[ Dark]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:05:219 - snap to 00:05:228
    00:05:825 - snap to 00:05:834
    Not unrankable, but I would like to recommend that you fix it.
  2. 01:01:298 (1) - Rhythm suggestion. Change the slider to 3/4, and add a circle at 01:01:573. It will fit the song than now~ does it hard to read? =_=
  3. 01:05:702 (4) - Finish is missing at the start point.
fixed
Cool mapset. Good luck!
thank you :D
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[YY's Insane]
  1. 00:22:904 (3,4,5) - 我覺得這個還是不要折回來好了 (4,5)ctrl+g還是比較順的 (不然就是用別種跳法)
  2. 00:38:454 (4,1,2) - 我不太喜歡這個anti-jump, 打起來有點卡住了 (本來應該是很順暢的), 建議你把(1,2)移到別的地方去吧
  3. 00:45:335 - 這裡補個note然後spinner往後挪1/4? 不然00:45:060 (5,6) - 有點像亂跟的@.@
  4. 00:58:546 (1,2,3) - 節奏有點略亂, 試試看把(2)拆成note+slider, (3)拆成slider+note? 我覺得比較跟的上音樂
  5. 01:16:023 (6,1) - spacing怪怪


[Melt's Hard]
  1. 00:58:271 - 這finish? 咦?
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Flask wrote:

[YY's Insane]
  1. 00:22:904 (3,4,5) - 我覺得這個還是不要折回來好了 (4,5)ctrl+g還是比較順的 (不然就是用別種跳法) :arrow:好,改回来了
  2. 00:38:454 (4,1,2) - 我不太喜歡這個anti-jump, 打起來有點卡住了 (本來應該是很順暢的), 建議你把(1,2)移到別的地方去吧 :arrow: 这个antijump不太想改掉……我放antijump在这里是想有种蓄力感觉……(什么鬼)
  3. 00:45:335 - 這裡補個note然後spinner往後挪1/4? 不然00:45:060 (5,6) - 有點像亂跟的@.@ :arrow:啊,对对对,加上了
  4. 00:58:546 (1,2,3) - 節奏有點略亂, 試試看把(2)拆成note+slider, (3)拆成slider+note? 我覺得比較跟的上音樂 :arrow:我觉得我这么跟也可以诶……拆成那样排版又不知道怎么搞……用这样的节奏做弹性slider的感觉似乎不错……
  5. 01:16:023 (6,1) - spacing怪怪 :arrow:好,肉眼ds了
做这图的时候挺多地方都是考虑了蛮久才下的;w;所以有些固执,还是交给gxy取舍好了
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[Melt's Hard]
  1. 00:58:271 - 這finish? 咦?
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去掉了.


update~
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总算传上了OTL
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posted

谢F酱
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Hey, gxytcgxytc! I had to pop the bubble for some reasons I'll mention below. This was really necessary and you can call me for a rebubble when you apply the mods. Sorry for the inconvenience.


Reason for Bubble Pop
  1. A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it.

  2. Consider adding at least +1 (3) Stack Leniency on OblivioN's Insane diff. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and could be some times confusing.

  3. Again on OblivioN's Insane, this slider 00:55:243 (1) - should be 1/8 like on the others diffs. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and it's even ignoring the sound. Consider changing it.

  4. Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats

  5. A lot of issues on Dark diff that, in my opinion, should be fixed. I'll mention them below.

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Additional Modding

Easy


00:28:821 (2) - This hitsounds actually sounds like a normal-hitnormal, shouldn't it sound like a drum? Change the sampleset thing into Auto or Drum, so it would be consistent.

00:45:335 (6) - Shouldn't you add a New Combo here? Since you were adding one every 4/1 tick, it looks inconsistent without one here.

01:13:959 (6,1) - Change NCs here, since the new section starts on (6), not on (1).

01:21:665 (2) - In my opinion, would be really better to delete the repeat and add a circle here 01:22:766. Ending a slider on a strong beat is really bad since it removes all the emphasis. Well, this is just my opinion, you can either change it or not.

Bless' Normal


00:24:417 (2,3) - Not sure if your intention was to follow the beat on the red tick. But if it was, would be better to start (3) on the red tick, to emphasize that beat, not on the white tick.

Melt's Hard


00:45:334 (1) - Consider increasing the spacing here a bit, since it's a strong beat. Somewhere near x40 y84 would be fine!

01:22:766 (1) - Hmm... not sure if it's 100% readable due to the AR. In my opinion, moving to x374 y216 would be much better. But, again, this is just my opinion.

yf's Extra


00:45:335 (1) - In my opinion, Ctrl + G here would improve the flow.

00:53:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.

Awesome diff.

Dark


This one isn't Additional Modding, they must be fixed.


00:13:408 (3) - The beat here is really strong and the DS is really close. Stacking it with (4) would improve a bit.

00:14:234 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here increse instead of descrease? Since the song is more louder here would be better to increase.

00:24:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - On this section you should change the Distance Snap pattern after every 3 notes, not 4. Same about the NC. Screen (this is just an example of what I said above).

00:26:963 (1) - Shouldn't it be a 1/8 slider? The sound pattern here is the same as 00:26:963 (1,1,2) - but you didn't add a 1/8 slider. Plus, this slider is almost the same size as the 1/4 slider you added before, it's kinda confusing. Consider changing it.

00:31:573 (1) - Remember the thing I mentioned about the DS too low on a too loud beat? Same applies here. This is even an anti-jump. Doing this would improve a lot.

00:53:041 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.

01:01:573 (1,2) - Increase the DS here, the circular slider is hidding the notes. Plus, the low DS is really confusing and it isn't indicating a properly 1/2 rhythm.

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Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ?
and my diff is insane right?

ok,let gxy to make a choose .I gave up 1s ago.
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Kuron-kun wrote:

Reason for Bubble Pop

A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it.
Unsnapped greenlines are not unrankable unless they are not Kiai end/start.

Kuron-kun wrote:

Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats
Following strong beats is not Melt's first intention ? Imo it is more intuitive to follow the other intruments than the strong beat, i think that this current version of this diff is really well made. And i also trust in Melt's style.

Awh well, this bubble pop was unavoidable. Issues in Dark diff could not be considered as a valid reason for bubble pop since they are questionable and they require more or less subjectivity.
Concerning this one 00:26:963 (1) - 1/8 are same as 1/4 ? I don't really think this need to be changed.

When there are questionable things, before bubble popping, just get more opinions, mainly from the BNs who were involved in pushing this map forward ?
The wrongly snapped object is a valid reason and something that is not questionable (in a majority of cases), but "quality" is subjective and questionable, and needs more opinions.


OblivioN wrote:

Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ?
and my diff is insane right?
No, stack leniency 0 is unrankable since you have to edit manually the .osz file, and editing manually a .osz file to change something which can't be done in editor is unrankable. There are exceptions like lead-in etc.
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Kuron-kun wrote:

Hey, gxytcgxytc! I had to pop the bubble for some reasons I'll mention below. This was really necessary and you can call me for a rebubble when you apply the mods. Sorry for the inconvenience.


Reason for Bubble Pop
  1. A unsnapped green line (inherited point) on Dark diff at 00:05:825 - consider fixing it. ok

  2. Consider adding at least +1 (3) Stack Leniency on OblivioN's Insane diff. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and could be some times confusing.

  3. Again on OblivioN's Insane, this slider 00:55:243 (1) - should be 1/8 like on the others diffs. It's really inconsistent the way it's now and it's even ignoring the sound. Consider changing it.

  4. Not sure about the rhythm you were following on Melt's Hard diff. You ignored A LOT of strong beats on the beginning, and that could be really confusing for some players, since the strong beat is a lot louder than the weak one. I would really consider adding at least a circle on those beats

  5. A lot of issues on Dark diff that, in my opinion, should be fixed. I'll mention them below.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Additional Modding

Easy


00:28:821 (2) - This hitsounds actually sounds like a normal-hitnormal, shouldn't it sound like a drum? Change the sampleset thing into Auto or Drum, so it would be consistent.

00:45:335 (6) - Shouldn't you add a New Combo here? Since you were adding one every 4/1 tick, it looks inconsistent without one here.

01:13:959 (6,1) - Change NCs here, since the new section starts on (6), not on (1).

01:21:665 (2) - In my opinion, would be really better to delete the repeat and add a circle here 01:22:766. Ending a slider on a strong beat is really bad since it removes all the emphasis. Well, this is just my opinion, you can either change it or not. all fixed

Bless' Normal


00:24:417 (2,3) - Not sure if your intention was to follow the beat on the red tick. But if it was, would be better to start (3) on the red tick, to emphasize that beat, not on the white tick. here was good

Melt's Hard


00:45:334 (1) - Consider increasing the spacing here a bit, since it's a strong beat. Somewhere near x40 y84 would be fine! ok

01:22:766 (1) - Hmm... not sure if it's 100% readable due to the AR. In my opinion, moving to x374 y216 would be much better. But, again, this is just my opinion.



Dark


This one isn't Additional Modding, they must be fixed.


00:13:408 (3) - The beat here is really strong and the DS is really close. Stacking it with (4) would improve a bit.ok

00:14:234 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here increse instead of descrease? Since the song is more louder here would be better to increase.tone dec

00:24:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - On this section you should change the Distance Snap pattern after every 3 notes, not 4. Same about the NC. Screen (this is just an example of what I said above). remap partten

00:26:963 (1) - Shouldn't it be a 1/8 slider? The sound pattern here is the same as 00:26:963 (1,1,2) - but you didn't add a 1/8 slider. Plus, this slider is almost the same size as the 1/4 slider you added before, it's kinda confusing. Consider changing it. fixed

00:31:573 (1) - Remember the thing I mentioned about the DS too low on a too loud beat? Same applies here. This is even an anti-jump. Doing this would improve a lot. ok

00:53:041 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I guess the players aren't expecting this 1/3 rhythm. You can add some 1/3 sliders and then some cirles, just to warn them that this is a 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4. Incresing the DS would help too.emm

01:01:573 (1,2) - Increase the DS here, the circular slider is hidding the notes. Plus, the low DS is really confusing and it isn't indicating a properly 1/2 rhythm.ok

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thx for mod !
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No.

The minimum Stack Leniency is 2, but on your difficulty would be really break the consistency, this is why I recommended changing it.

btw, thanks for your post CB, didn't know about Melt's rhythm intention. My first intention to pop the bubble was because of DS issues on Dark diff, I even did talk to the mapper and we fixed almost everything
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Cherry Blossom wrote:

OblivioN wrote:

Stack Leniency can be 0 now right ?
and my diff is insane right?
No, stack leniency 0 is unrankable since you have to edit manually the .osz file, and editing manually a .osz file to change something which can't be done in editor is unrankable. There are exceptions like lead-in etc.
got it :)
I just on my bed and don't want get up :)I'm ok

beside these.
Melt is a pro mapper.
And I don't think everyone should make beatmap flow the down beats.
as you know ,a song is make up by many things ,such as :vocal,drum ,chord etc.
if everyone flow the down beats…
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Never give up OblivioN :3/
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